【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 i4 ]* p8 ?  X( U0 KThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# k: n6 S& J, i5 }I already loved you with all my heart
; ~* O/ v* S" C# L2 ?' S. ?) {We meet and talk everyday,
1 o! H! E8 c. ]) NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 q8 P7 i! z6 L- ?If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 d4 Q* ~8 i2 w/ J9 }Love… just the word love
2 i8 n( n" }# ?2 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 f; m5 n' j7 e% A' jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: \" H; Z8 `- z" E6 X3 L* S6 COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 v1 ]  D- k+ }8 _' q  ]! eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ ^  h) N# @# U* x. OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ M8 K, X, @, C0 T; q9 `/ ?. ~: fLove… just the word love
7 [. c9 @; i% w. r( jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ |! y* e8 I3 L& \. {) EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ q+ s. d8 A" q0 c/ h# lEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 a; W& s9 k  u4 h& JEntrust my love within your heart

& R/ W3 P1 Q8 ^9 U$ H% e[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% C" s/ ?6 C# _; ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( l+ `" ^- J6 ?' J: z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 t7 T4 A6 a. r& V0 g<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# g  S& W/ I! z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 R, m9 S0 c) ~' B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; z4 J: ?- N7 K, A+ v0 H. }<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, x) N$ M8 `: R% D<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 R1 i  G% H8 x5 P* J* \3 {' j: x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; G4 I( C* }9 j/ e- R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 ?0 a( R! T2 V/ u<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 h, k/ Y3 D% J% c# j2 H4 P* j9 l" W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) L/ E/ d, W; U4 x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 Q3 v$ U1 k; X8 {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 `7 s* E  o6 w  u8 |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: G" n1 q) m  Y- [+ R* X4 Q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 Z, m* r& N5 w' O: g9 L  H. ^, d<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 {, p: B! h+ }3 g<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& l7 @- c' Y, U' v- G$ K6 I5 B* Q5 h0 E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' `- X3 {6 I# `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  `. z, Z, G8 |( F, |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# Z! S" B: ~1 U& {' U. _% v* l9 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ M  a  q$ t4 s7 D0 u+ Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" d! S; s) a, {/ I4 T( f' B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ k; c2 f8 L8 C7 _/ [8 z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 P$ O0 p5 \9 T' B这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 k. Z( {) G/ s! R; ~( m( j( _. Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 j  Y- v+ y7 e% f" t/ Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>