【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. \5 R3 P, y' |1 A2 k: B( z我另将歌词附在此。
) w' F% N/ Z$ T; R8 ~# N' sThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 W3 b; M% m$ @" sWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% h2 G* k4 ]; YWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ @! W$ G; G: VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 k3 Z. U8 F, e1 r9 aIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, G' R" g/ [: j8 y: g4 }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* ?9 D/ g  j, _  W0 b% R7 aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) |% o* h4 Q# [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
, |) t1 Q* q. p' AEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 M7 b$ G, R( x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 R% M/ A5 Z: m7 U  J, K- g$ K; n<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' i6 {$ q1 X& w3 Z5 {3 o9 i+ m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 H' z" r1 M% ]# o# Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, t' B6 W! e' J- m$ K4 ~<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. D/ C  ^, ]% Y# W8 a<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 Z$ u- ^/ _! q% `+ M/ ^# e  ~0 Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 e+ Z, a- f+ A9 X9 v4 W7 ~& z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% ^1 P$ y7 d0 |4 V+ z. ?<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! \& j1 B  P# i! o7 Q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ g2 ~" e  H# w+ a, }" o& O6 r( J<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 i$ r6 G$ R* c5 t8 e<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 l, P8 |* f, R7 t<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ S3 y. D) X& j) u4 J9 N<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# Q4 W/ ?7 W6 h/ H: }, e, g  N<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 f1 J& |& a+ a" D" x" F<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 I) T: Q  e; W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 x- W2 G3 o4 m& N7 R2 Y- A, g! ]) E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) B6 \# X+ @# B0 B& P/ Z' t) T6 i7 q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 L- j6 s" M5 l2 Z  j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! H3 j! Z: y! w! s  r% m# {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: B* j7 q( r! n/ t5 `& F* g( k5 M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( u- \/ O/ v7 [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# e! O; b3 T8 g( L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. D0 Y, r7 W$ l. {$ v" d' z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ N( T9 d- ?& D$ F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) @9 z# ?1 Z4 P! v7 Q5 y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ B+ X( U7 M# c6 B8 T7 D, o' s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ f, d3 h5 ]* _: t% C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: L% V2 ^# L9 W' u& X0 P3 p: [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 K* l! E- ?% F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 V: a. W' j8 {! A6 v! g% C+ m6 p0 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 E% b8 C7 S7 e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 T; Z& C: [) z1 k1 O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! h' Q9 m. w( v! M1 q$ h, B- O- l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: w  c/ x) G! h9 q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- d7 X* V  x9 F. k! Z% ]; N<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 d) \, J7 D  l; v6 S7 G这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; I/ m8 f$ O+ G) M' X6 F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; V5 u" \/ R, M5 P3 X<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) S$ j# N# A/ ?/ ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>