【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* R* |8 P4 X1 b7 O& @9 ?! ?  eFrom the first moment we met,
- g* a  r* u9 d0 FI already loved you with all my heart
( I+ X- |" Z2 h* h# jWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 H# h. h% j4 M: q, b. Q. G3 [If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ M+ n" b1 q. }4 P& cI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  K! b+ v( _6 {% Z) j2 ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" c+ ?2 v- J! OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
3 z# V* {4 k* o, {  h( V/ _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 C/ w4 ]; P# [' f* V' XBut I never did
4 w3 R, p# k% c" j3 U2 t3 IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" C6 _1 N5 o) M) J' \; [8 ]. EIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ `- S+ O$ a) q. V5 |  [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  z( f: H7 K2 H* L$ X9 J, a+ CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

; g; S$ g% `* \" P[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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0 o  T' T6 D. b6 u9 b5 m<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% t! f7 Y* ~: d2 y* {<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& F  R; W5 [0 t  O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 I. M" z9 U; a1 j. _4 f- U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' ?. ^) ]3 N7 P4 v<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 P* r9 F; `8 c" w5 s% F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' q( E6 [6 K$ {: Q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* b. H6 _* l0 i9 J# M1 l) }: d% B! d" G<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ F7 w+ {  Y4 J: }( p<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 `  U  i2 {, ~: R<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( O1 C4 B/ a, }+ r. y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ f# V% {( |0 Z# \; @- n$ q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 T$ B% E- L8 D& U: s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. H1 h0 V7 a8 A; q1 e: H5 Y, `<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- }9 C3 f  ~7 A$ A, r7 x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. E1 q5 T  K  A+ F* d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ T" |0 K; Y6 A7 N# b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' ~- u/ C. J1 U! ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: b! C; J) k% D, E3 X' l- E6 |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! W7 t- }7 ^; d- Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. }3 z) ?8 E- `; c0 {+ W<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 t6 p$ N+ x* v8 w* ]<P>But I never did </P>
/ j+ R% U# u% e  G<P>但我不会 </P>
% b, i- [; q0 d8 S' Q( |* A& V+ }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 Y& ^# U% n- H& @$ Q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  A+ _$ h& M5 g, ]<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 P0 ?& d  ?% R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 l" ^3 p9 J% P) I/ d, g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 o7 ~6 [; y  h  {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# f+ G0 J4 y1 p5 b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" l  h' R' I  W/ I( D) j4 R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 n' B1 V; y" u9 n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 n& M) T# v5 |2 `( G, a<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 c0 r/ A8 F8 i4 ?9 S<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* Y, O' B5 d+ E/ {0 k- w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>