【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
& X% f" C6 l/ G' P: b: CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* l% Z6 }: \7 k' v$ K- gThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- ?: p" ]1 g. hFrom the first moment we met,
6 B4 Z! k+ f. c' r9 [* UI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ j- I" t5 B; B1 OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. |7 J6 P9 |# ^, s% tI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
( z$ g2 ]6 W( uWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 g' s, X* ?+ B6 V6 ?# ABut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- d, T+ d0 D$ A0 X. K  J  `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% @+ G. G* n. a; fEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
9 W9 W6 ?1 n6 d8 t) G6 y- t0 vWhy is it so difficult to express?
& |/ a: P0 o9 p4 l/ H3 UI want to confess that I love you,
( `+ m; H1 c; I1 _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- J7 C+ [& `; [If today isn’t too late,
: u+ @# M4 M. [0 L; M  h6 b5 uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. z) V% X% R0 C- p1 e) NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 t% s8 o; n% ~$ \& BCan I entrust it to you?
! D! L  ~# c7 j& w2 L7 eEntrust my love within your heart
% M- M* K) h( t# R. }' O) xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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, f4 f0 B& g& m; o( L6 L0 p: I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 B6 ^  p0 J6 q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 {/ }( `. F. g* E( `# j" e, f4 m<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& `2 @  @6 ]5 v3 O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) d* T: B, k1 V/ r: k% k<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 x+ C0 ~  _. _9 |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) A- ^% i, |7 y1 }/ `. w<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 {& D: Y3 f3 n' X( {! E% y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: W/ \* P4 |$ ^& Y* `0 t4 v<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- m, h$ F$ M+ m! w<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 ^" S( R7 b9 O; }$ k<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ X# P  C; u# d2 }- n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! H" ]4 q% [. D  A" J* f2 u  v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ A. c5 q0 c& J/ w& X7 H<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( k* Y5 }4 G! {+ @' F  P# z- F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 Q: p" t# j0 `1 k' }. _<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: k+ F' A' }& e$ \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
) c: n3 V  v4 Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) d2 _& k. K: y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% {) U) |2 c( q% O0 e<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& i' U9 L2 Y5 L& V# H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' \" f. b1 o3 Y- f' D# G. F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, A) G- u3 _% ?2 i: V- d3 `  X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 ^/ \( R! ]# [% G5 C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ p0 \* W+ l! t3 U0 _; g<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 u+ }/ U5 W' W  R8 r& a<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 g1 ^* b) S9 ]) J: X# I<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: `! N8 m. d! }( z+ i! l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& F+ ]) }( ^; \$ L3 j. n) \) O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 f  h# t/ R" d# u$ T% T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ U4 b% |# }( ]( V7 E! \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 w/ v& l; ]/ X+ R* h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 ?( `6 [) u% N$ b- l: j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  c( a9 r/ G3 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) n6 i: y) g4 A0 ^! \: K<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>