【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! K9 `0 y$ Z) Q我另将歌词附在此。
5 s$ S% E) B. e9 }/ n* |0 bThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 E. e' w. ]) G0 f" x" KFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 R8 k' {+ ^+ ?8 VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ ?* E( L% t3 F4 P1 v( m9 ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 \9 X- H& k  w$ v* \- Q9 RCan I entrust it to you?
' k' s0 {* Y4 P9 N' J1 W: REntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 o& M) N6 D/ d$ _  a2 P+ hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, o  O7 ?, E# ^) W) v+ J/ P4 VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
, u! N* t* L# f, n9 EEntrust my love within your heart

' p6 B2 `7 k6 A+ V& c1 A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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" J5 e8 t1 R' o  [<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 B  \# p6 I' A6 `, G1 Q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ C6 |* Z  I: \4 j+ i# Q7 d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 I6 q6 r" i, Y1 z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 J# c! X, g- b<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' h6 ]) {5 z6 |& x* E2 k0 ~<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& I+ _  [3 O- K+ f. g+ F6 O  P<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( _  c& s( }+ j* Q$ I# W) p8 \<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 U' J9 R, [: D6 u! W4 S<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) [7 J: @) |7 y( y9 d<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( l* Y! N7 X% o) Q+ p4 w$ W2 c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 R4 \) s, B$ z" B! g/ F) w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 t4 u+ ~4 m9 Y3 }, X5 j% p% u<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! g4 K( f9 r. ~7 d# `. A* \; c' x<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( r! a, _2 d8 a$ P3 g: @<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ b# w0 c) @9 |! i) b" p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& B1 z$ n4 c' A, r; \: i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 l4 N3 W& _- {! {% p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 A7 v! J( B5 O2 z+ ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ H3 l' O4 V- ]& ]. n( Q5 W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 I5 N5 N9 ~6 [  y2 G6 H<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 u! ~. e  r* }& O3 P4 v  \) P<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( ^0 a8 P* Q" h2 h+ O% {<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
7 o6 F& R/ v, k" y4 m, X  S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 e& N7 F# W: L' T" L<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' ^/ w3 h6 s1 R) B0 ~: U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ J$ K6 q7 G8 W& l) X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: D& O& Q3 N2 i9 c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 |5 r* t5 C& f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% X! S! N* m  y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, Z( S  M; `, E* y% l. i6 t) x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  |! V1 P6 N$ d' e0 l- K( q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  _" G2 o+ m& m4 }/ V3 t<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ S; h+ H  K8 L2 o" T7 b& v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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