【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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) ?" R9 i, f1 O" X% W( F我另将歌词附在此。
  S& z% `) r) z2 D4 J" J9 G. s( X7 BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, l. J# x. g: mThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# F3 E$ Z- R- I4 @. t& hI already loved you with all my heart
, L2 L5 a4 }/ G! TWe meet and talk everyday,
" T% w: T' Y5 C$ n& L3 |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( K3 m% O! k8 i* C8 j8 fIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ R! B: A1 O& w2 OI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 E/ ^9 K' a8 T/ R; v- e+ g# zI want to confess that I love you,
# q8 ^3 P& t6 s- zBut I never did
6 f) u$ S  j" aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* j" V. _& N) y8 I1 D  X  o+ n# C  @! |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 x1 [4 _# L7 nWhy is it so difficult to express?
" O3 M" h; v5 i* l8 ~# sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- ~% _- X! S( O  i8 g9 h. GIf today isn’t too late,
6 Q. ?) b* t% J. J3 x8 jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( ?6 \  C4 l) N( \3 b! t/ ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( y  Q5 `0 \0 K% |Can I entrust it to you?
+ M" o0 A( A" `( h5 ^+ G# VEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
2 j4 {/ W0 p8 q9 P: o( F, JEntrust my love within your heart

" w1 I+ c  [4 R) _8 G* N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% R* m& @' t9 x! e9 j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 d; o  Y* g9 `8 j4 a7 ~<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 s, g( T4 y3 r& d5 j$ \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  U( s6 `% x, a<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ @+ b, N5 j/ @<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ f, l" [. J; {/ Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) ?! _0 R! T: i2 `) ^; M# J! e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ W* X/ g- Q8 N; D+ o8 T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. |' ]" {, B. I5 S<P>但我不会</P>
: ]9 q) {$ C8 j  x<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 q$ s4 Z9 q; T2 m% \  r4 @<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 y, S" c' J/ V2 e4 Q1 B0 B& V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ b9 Y# O. J1 Y1 i- E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ [! \& f# h& Q8 ^/ s7 i1 w+ R' J7 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, A1 O+ ~& T7 {' c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& x+ h/ {! l5 q( v) g, m6 _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 D; V2 C1 j# i/ C" _( Y5 g1 O<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 m1 K$ |) }  \' R- a& ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 L9 C" w. e0 f& x8 g) M4 S5 E<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& m! I  l7 L9 I: R<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 X. I% c1 ~  n9 X- T* T( \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: P- Q$ c# b7 R# i3 o7 k4 s$ z0 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 @. u* Y' x: a' G4 M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 r1 P+ k$ g- a) N9 b8 ?' e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
% P; F2 E4 V9 ]  i<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, F9 k- K5 G7 o  e这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 z9 O& O. @1 D) w: b. K; U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>