【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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1 x% v: V& J; ]8 P& T" e& g我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& V0 p$ T& M6 k: x2 pFrom the first moment we met,
9 `4 E( g/ ]8 j# g- nI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 U/ }4 n! T+ ]3 E/ c! V0 bIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ W+ Q2 z( K) VI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# l0 Y( A( [2 {+ [# K* x! }6 L! F* ~I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& i8 K3 J( D$ V& e0 i. oIf today isn’t too late,
; w4 E6 H" g, a) j2 {9 h0 B4 c3 ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' M& J! h# t% U0 G+ J: T2 UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# O3 n6 j) R, Y! V5 F4 WLove… just the word love
9 U4 g- k; N9 @6 VWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 R. g$ ]1 R  s9 g2 H3 xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% y8 U5 ]5 W% Y* J8 DIf today isn’t too late,
# s* y+ m6 s: A( w. WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: s) _. x* W- {- S  gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 T4 Y; L# ^0 N: K. REntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' Y- R1 r) m/ Q# c# r* e" |<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* P1 |1 u  J4 p4 G" [7 u<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 s, |) P1 @, F5 j8 G! R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ w9 _1 p8 \$ r7 S4 _2 `& E<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" w& g+ K3 J9 V2 ?6 @<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' i$ B1 A) v5 \3 E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 m2 t+ \1 X& C' I6 v. Y7 p! Y/ A. G1 K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 w+ g, k) s+ x" F5 d4 S) Y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* ?% L5 o  w" k# \<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
; B9 e; J( \& L3 a& d<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* |. T* C6 Q( C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! [, z: E: ?; u# x3 H9 ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) B- Y1 O! J" S0 D# h: f/ p3 K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( {6 I* I; O# a2 K, w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 S& Z# Z- n2 |' [3 T3 P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 K' {' F8 D+ c8 K& e<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 c' s  s, ^# {<P>But I never did </P>
8 R) W5 H0 ^" P: C/ X: l<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 v" O1 c4 \: q" o$ V9 y5 n4 {8 ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ a$ U5 ~) j* _( i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* G* p' R6 @6 K! c; H: y: I. U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( I$ s8 a, V8 N! @& U# P& K! Y7 m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, b' N$ H2 b" \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. c- s' Y' B. i4 u" i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) I( x# H1 K; u# F0 ?' |( h<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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+ o  r+ j: P& M% Q& D+ d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; H, J, e2 ?& a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>