【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
; j) h# y. b7 b' L; g/ z2 nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  e0 Y  A% d$ o! y) XThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- a; `7 r) T6 g- EI would probably know how you feel
0 {1 ^2 A2 @( }) FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' }9 a" ]1 M" Z9 u& Q0 b5 [8 [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: \( ~9 x1 p9 c; D, W" ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% p- l1 }" v% o' z  i. {Entrust my love within your heart
/ L, O! g' b$ P* z- R$ B6 W/ pLove… just the word love
) t- F4 P3 O+ ]" iWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 |( z8 k4 l" W  G7 W( `3 PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* d& p3 Q; v5 U! C( _1 P, q+ sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, c+ A( N) t4 Q$ M4 P6 C+ e# Q2 n0 ~# |- @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ u" Y- Z" p" t/ hCan I entrust it to you?
( S% w5 `5 k' `3 F6 u( e6 vEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 h! M9 P9 h6 X1 B* `- B. |Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, V: Y) c: j9 Q# w# }: T1 C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 z6 [# _/ r3 \+ a5 ]$ ?<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 V# l! l/ s" r4 J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) l3 S, B" ~5 D% J# v- z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( P7 K6 d8 q3 N/ W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ B2 A: D0 y6 O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ R; H: W5 O: \<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 D) O: `' d! D& v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) y. j9 q* a$ E* |- _' W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 y7 W5 G3 L- K+ k* [, ~<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 r6 a/ W/ a& y4 |8 M, K<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; |/ x/ ]8 b+ h% m/ f4 Y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! c( p$ A4 g" \6 _, v, [' {<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* P; P  R! b* ?<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( U2 F- E# @$ k, L* l6 N4 D3 W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 [& E* n. g7 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# M* Z% `, B" M$ {6 i0 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, A( K- n  h  E: e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 J9 [+ x( a0 E9 b1 E9 `<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  j1 H" h4 S. h2 Z. c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 K# {2 x1 P9 j) r<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  w; V1 z  H; e) e  D8 G8 @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 n/ B& k! [. v$ c% u$ ~3 n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 K  k5 N* J/ j$ q& J9 k6 u) W<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 }' |- w( ?" y0 d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>