【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# T) l. l5 v0 V" W$ j: B1 a7 Z我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% K! L0 Z) D  R1 p; CFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
' k# G, @0 x( @; @. HWe meet and talk everyday,
  s+ O8 O) p) }" G, f8 SBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ d2 }$ B2 Q5 c6 RI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: H1 y3 L; @6 L9 U. eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 q9 N) @* d3 d8 lIf today isn’t too late,
1 [1 t+ F5 m( {1 j  |, FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ T" {# y! v; yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 [* ?3 Z( h" s( xLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 Z* \# L  L: Y9 K7 nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, D9 m. C  I$ m& N. D3 s, X. SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ i1 e. _1 u4 {+ o- A8 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

, p6 d/ v: B% M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 w) Q: M8 {( ^6 ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% S; U; c, I3 A; O4 `: d: Q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' ?$ A7 W1 I2 l8 n/ C* ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 @; u7 }5 N* n/ t0 }<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 G3 P7 N( O- C* P* O6 R4 r<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! m" V2 u' _7 L4 {  G, N<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 Y- s8 C) p' T<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, Y7 E1 R/ e4 E+ O<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 A% @; ?8 N0 ?( Y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 ^' D6 V" q3 e<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, C6 ^3 g: e$ Y- `0 S<P>但我不会</P>
2 |) ]& S$ s+ t5 {! C/ c  j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 s4 [; ^. b! w<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& v* k( m. g* [3 n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- I0 e; l5 p5 ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ y5 s/ t. ^3 b" W" V  v! [4 Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 c( j' }0 X0 h4 w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! z0 L2 ?) P# L1 H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 f: \9 I! `+ H' y6 \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 w( s. Z! `5 i# w# o0 m. r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 L! x2 Z! T$ b2 m, N9 f<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 i+ t' Q& X  T; Q1 ~5 h<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
6 h+ P- W( p/ z( p* m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- g& p! C2 r; x* m* M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 q" F* Y5 {) }8 a- F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( K& e! E- }% g7 V3 L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" c) r1 o$ h& o0 ]6 @9 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 g# u- f; M" e- ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 B: r& f* w/ A8 [" p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; c* S. {4 U( @2 b9 X' `% k  i6 R5 E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 D/ _, ?0 m, T- ?<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 S6 `/ l# T+ C这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 S" J8 ]' e2 D. t这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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6 I! `1 k2 ^3 d8 m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 C# }( @3 U/ ?* y/ s1 f7 t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>