【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
6 J4 ~, s5 K$ ~- s9 ]The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ z% F4 p) x" o- [9 EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 }' ~5 ^! C0 J. L' D% S' K. NWe meet and talk everyday,
4 ?* b5 e, Y3 d# G" D8 IBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 x9 P' _' J2 PI would probably know how you feel
5 x; }! T$ }1 s% M7 DLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 a2 R0 O- g6 w- LI want to confess that I love you,
+ M$ {) v5 [1 k9 q( gBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. i4 o9 W& U* n1 X. e& {$ kIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 _1 u5 {! o% |! h0 E. c) lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 k6 T( z4 N" x3 f8 `: iEntrust my love within your heart
2 h( x3 u  N) l3 `  i3 WLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  B/ ^7 [. ~1 s8 RI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ E" [; a4 [8 d8 a5 k0 N2 g* iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 X7 {0 N/ r/ ]! O6 j! i' M" ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" f, D3 u  c4 t0 M- WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- s% |# c% d3 s0 ^5 MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! i1 L* v$ p8 a- a5 gCan I entrust it to you?
2 d9 I. b. h4 z% jEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: n/ N; E( i+ q6 H) o0 l<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- L" D3 D. I% p0 F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 b7 X6 z, D3 T/ Z9 J<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 V% ^$ s, l/ H4 K1 i# V<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; P: c- k! u& T; h, F) G$ K' P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 B7 n; F9 ~5 c/ I; S/ u7 x5 F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 v, Z0 a- \1 o* e; m<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# d9 d! l" L! {" y) z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' e) W4 ?0 o+ }/ G; ]<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; @9 B- f" q  N% P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  N0 ]7 q  e& j% H* K3 u<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& H8 E- h% n5 a- y9 r( u% g8 e  `<P>但我不会</P>
3 D! E1 N3 s7 I) x<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" n: e6 J! j( Z9 t7 {<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 _9 m3 N3 l+ l8 u8 N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; ^0 q+ e. K' }. `/ b7 s& p) `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, ~2 L9 c) p" s3 E) [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! E  C& Z9 H( U* e) J3 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 R, P4 e' k7 x  j2 V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 O" F" C6 n( K2 V<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 w2 e) ?8 W7 I8 b5 h/ A: a& ^<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 t/ ?2 n" K- P0 C0 q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) m( @3 x5 W+ E( W+ j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, q+ v% G4 f- x: e- T8 J1 Z+ K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 q# v" W5 J2 Q1 z  K* p' O. k  p<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) R0 F, i+ N8 P9 ?' o- ^3 ?: V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" i5 l6 j9 g- r4 u+ C0 |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- _* O  K: U/ x) v, Q; l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* W& D0 j- T+ {8 C- f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 }+ G* e1 {" g& ~& H9 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# u- V6 v5 f( f5 i( U; _  h6 ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 L% d" g- ]- Y, o0 l+ L, O+ W<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 q: c  X2 A( o. S/ i% }/ }1 h0 `这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>