【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 p5 m3 A; l( _! d8 Z0 qI already loved you with all my heart
; F# z) f; z. q# x- wWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 E) h' o# y1 W. S+ v7 L. W3 G; X8 zLove… just the word love
' y3 Z# d1 \0 K1 V6 m& c+ L# {Why is it so difficult to express?
8 u. r) z8 \, }- j( YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ G% e2 N$ S* r( e( c: d8 N1 U+ vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* u4 u6 `. X! W. X! |+ YIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 Z; U2 b8 D% ?* h+ V, ]Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 X) d6 r- m( G2 E7 L+ WI want to confess that I love you,
8 Y+ o( L% d# |$ nBut I never did
6 K' l  [' |' tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# p! e/ r/ e" P! R) ^7 JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ t+ a8 q1 m0 z) K# WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 s  f6 y; |7 n! T3 ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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" m6 Q) N' l4 K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 f/ I3 F3 U, `8 E9 }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 ], r# m& R7 W9 j; p<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: p( a" u7 u- K0 L# I<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. I. O1 s, M2 l" I% T8 q& {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ Q3 P9 @9 t; F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  M5 l0 w% N6 F, m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  I) ~( o) A# q* l- X<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 A, D) l! G, E7 ?# T" `3 m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 P9 n6 u- }) q* O  H( u<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 v/ D0 ^. y) C; ^2 @! s6 N<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. G3 W0 j4 N6 A, a. V<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 b8 P% z' t% R7 F" V<P>但我不会</P>
5 ^! ^( ?9 t' o' H, Z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" k& ^3 P9 ]2 X9 J' b/ [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ x  K1 L4 l0 h$ G  t<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 \% M$ |2 M' h/ I& v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 G' M6 o, c; |( _6 z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  r8 t9 y* u8 l& V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 V: a4 Z- k( Y/ X4 u- R, h/ d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 E+ U* r; L: P, f3 m<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" K3 a/ A6 N# P4 ^. o( @<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 Z# @" M3 R8 ~9 ?<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
6 M' H/ E  j) G% D! _* R; o<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. O/ ~/ o% `6 a! f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" Z4 O% [: B+ _1 E/ X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 V4 N. P* x, R  ^- e5 I* B  W<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 y1 J8 N' N% z* r9 b1 @- _% G0 q- s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( _# z) z; r! a9 b# A5 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 V$ x3 c+ e' a# Q6 o* Y: p5 i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  S& D/ v4 o/ \& i这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 P4 [7 l1 z/ ]/ f8 ~5 K<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>