【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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# `2 ^3 D% @: ~  m* v- e. h/ _我另将歌词附在此。
. x0 g5 Z0 d, |9 U2 hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ O3 t/ W7 R0 A% c) P; FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
- L# V- f0 d6 q2 q" YI already loved you with all my heart
3 }# c/ T& i8 Z2 ?* ~/ r  `$ i- e" B6 iWe meet and talk everyday,
9 b9 i2 B. E" w: p9 S+ QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  {( I, F4 F) s% ?2 IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 A! x& o; d& H! eWhy is it so difficult to express?
) R& @: T* Z2 W% E9 II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 P# P: M1 o. Q+ bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 b1 D! G: D3 u9 xBut I never did
2 u( W, g: q1 u1 HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 Q* c2 Q) }, S) SIf today isn’t too late,
. `' Z. y* {7 g1 r, kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: Q5 U# F$ y( ?% PCan I entrust it to you?
5 U/ t( l& k2 b1 x6 X# p- JEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! }- r' r! y; P' H5 L- q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' W6 P7 Q/ ~; N% ]7 K2 c<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 v1 M8 E$ K0 ?+ s" G& w$ i: i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  t3 O- k' B  U* e* ~<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  `) X. P5 c) U6 ^7 ?<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 Y7 z1 y6 G0 ^5 r# Y- F<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 g  b( E3 x* b3 [: P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: c1 X, r) H8 @, J8 C<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 h! [& x7 X8 v$ x7 g# B) \<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! X5 D1 O5 W, R+ n6 A<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' c8 W5 d3 M0 _5 O+ B. Y& O, s+ R<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* m: g1 q9 c) r' Y' ^0 |# W<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 T# t( Q4 G! o; e7 V& a  \<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) P8 o( a! g7 {, }" J* `" S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 E  E- I3 Q' S$ t' c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 }1 W& c# K" A; h9 O" v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 A) F' W' `1 ~4 {- l) S# j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 F. @6 h1 v  @. t0 N" `: t0 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 S; X  J2 ?& a- ^! l& W* g  e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 o. G0 \( ]9 L3 ?* P; E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; T) l$ E  }2 w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
& b* X$ B/ T/ N6 F/ W. |# b<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" e' A+ h$ R& M" {. S2 n5 h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 _5 D  u$ k* U6 ~* W- y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ x. }2 C0 @: q, {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, b" s+ N1 H5 f" @7 S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  e% h* R" Y* k: t% r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ [/ \/ A( J- G, h5 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' o+ k- b" d: z, P9 e, n7 ^/ A- T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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* H$ c- k+ R9 g7 k2 F+ Q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 t7 D# J: m! }; T<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>