【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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8 Q  H$ k+ ]4 s1 ?( p3 Y我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% c3 L, z+ I4 w- G# Z( |$ s8 BFrom the first moment we met,
" \4 c$ q% p9 Q5 T/ T9 nI already loved you with all my heart
- Q* `' Q$ v$ L: |$ b% p# I0 t) oWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% X7 u' M: s+ b+ s' E' @+ o9 B' k) WIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
: z  ~/ M; \' E, w4 b; BLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  V9 s" @8 `1 cI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% N: n+ k7 _, V$ tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 C: Y5 k3 y" \% |Can I entrust it to you?
2 q" M0 n6 N: V1 @# fEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 T( ~) T- D1 b) r$ a" fI want to confess that I love you,
. w( ]: L' K" f. t" uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, A8 |) L7 n( wIf today isn’t too late,
6 R+ a. J. P- H! A) C' UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 E- E9 \$ u. v: J  b8 PEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
, w! R; C' [9 E% d$ XEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ ?( u# S: Y+ q) k<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( {- o. e0 |/ G% x2 C<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# n2 P8 M+ G4 ~& p( n: h<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 Q% A, u  K' W' A, i% M; A8 ^9 s! S<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% Y4 v5 P* j# y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 T; Z# C* J6 y% B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. V/ V# f, U3 {. W. P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# I: ]* n0 }/ |9 y, {: k5 n<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 k5 q2 J3 A- C# T3 i4 |7 s<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 m1 {) i% O' i2 ^# P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! g; r* x! ~9 |9 C* |! Q  F+ A<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  b9 v3 L+ }: B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) e3 I- l: R& h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
1 d2 B5 H$ @/ Z3 h5 V, l: W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; f. c( K& h- E<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 o# i# F5 N; p4 |4 d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 j, g( `3 d6 i/ P$ u* r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 d4 M5 E$ V/ Z: Z) [" b8 l4 j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 X6 I7 @! D0 p' ?; y. S7 j5 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 Q" p5 ^7 g, B. B# _1 C1 q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 J& o9 U  V# i7 S4 P, I  M9 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) D/ {6 Z4 \# J3 L5 L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: t  G3 Q( D9 U  D- S$ h<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ H( [2 `& ?, A5 V2 c1 f1 m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ [: I4 V7 s+ w6 z3 V2 ]0 R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ P* ^! J8 h# a. Y$ Q& q7 ?<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" A/ R0 i' M% H+ c5 u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: y' V# x& D8 R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 d% P) T8 m  Y3 S( {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( `, B. }. f; V7 B8 X  Z) Y& E9 [# Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 A3 |/ D( T$ b3 M1 i0 {# H1 d: x. Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, Q7 u0 i( d- h% n& B. ?6 O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 y) N3 g/ R. a0 ?3 K" o. M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 w0 K9 w/ W5 ~+ x5 i6 ~0 Y3 {0 Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% u2 r& f6 R& Y3 E3 i+ @6 K<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 r! o& c# S  g3 Y' M, ]9 @<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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/ ^& j, n/ w# o. Y7 A; Z# a# E/ v这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: `8 v6 S, Q+ I5 n1 m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>