【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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8 \( i# r" @# D; Q  ~我另将歌词附在此。
4 m6 E  x1 ?2 ]5 D+ T+ _) hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& w; x1 q! T1 e2 V  S7 @If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 u- F* p$ D$ v3 aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, n- g6 M5 }" J/ M6 I5 Z0 Q4 u& `/ R  ]Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 D: m2 ^7 Z* W' e" D7 `0 k  GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# ^' S  B* @# Z9 e/ v+ {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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5 g0 p8 T/ \0 r5 I/ B( d! p/ [[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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7 [( T, i  h# ~' L, w<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' n8 q4 a2 t7 I4 @: I& z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 U4 }7 b0 u& [# [' Z9 h<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 q2 p: J8 r/ h<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' e8 s) n; U; e- Y. _5 P# }( C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# k) G& |5 B! `' W) Q# b<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* e# k1 X  Q  C$ |# q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 x2 `. K( V% Z/ ^" U! j( u5 F4 R- k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' U8 ^4 O1 p- r( w1 O% M; N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 p3 r7 ~" }! d<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- Y0 I& s" I2 D9 h. c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- U- J- @7 P: n! ?6 M9 p; F4 `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 X" h, y9 I4 _+ j- }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& [) }( X( v8 \* B8 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: u1 D+ v* g. _0 c& o  v6 H( j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& X! E- @) ?6 V9 [; r& d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 v) w5 [7 [1 @/ E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" u: Z9 [" n  H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! K2 B+ P; d* W<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 C! x7 _0 E# u8 L# c! l5 c( g<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 [; v! N$ C  t<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* M- T" O7 q7 _7 l3 M- n<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' ]& m9 Q' ~( K' B, _! j<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# h. o) u9 X2 t4 I9 O<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ q) t* Z9 e' z" `3 \5 b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& Q! K' `! r5 W- R; y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" T5 N: f8 V2 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ M3 x4 H6 A8 { 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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' v5 ^( ^5 p$ g7 V) y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 d- h& w6 Z  j这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 [; L# F- k& ?% B' z& O8 F! g0 k& ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>