【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
% O$ ^  t; V) c6 [, p2 ^; WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 ?9 g6 A: d" {' L3 j$ g+ rI already loved you with all my heart
" S' u; Q0 c3 P/ R/ CWe meet and talk everyday,
3 M/ K- ?  k$ j+ f- T3 IBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 p7 _% k$ e$ |0 LI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ Y" w, b/ V: w  |) M0 lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 I' Z, }, R; }. fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& o7 T& b+ G3 ^! M+ L1 QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 I' u. _/ v, F- T/ P# C3 oCan I entrust it to you?
0 h* A# _' K/ B% X! W8 C5 yEntrust my love within your heart
) p! H/ f0 [) c8 pLove… just the word love
: I+ w$ ^1 E' n9 e) FWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ {; z# e4 m4 V# eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- M( Q% R- P$ Q$ G$ {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" n2 ~0 _( d# B3 C; D3 o" k: NIf today isn’t too late,
# [, v+ T  @8 j; _" YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 K5 x+ I# |. U& _$ k5 a8 wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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5 l! o7 O5 O( o. m[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

6 K1 J. ~" k5 C  P# L  C# L- p<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 w8 {- E+ }3 g" z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. c& O/ v8 y, D9 B4 n5 {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 c6 R- x  t2 s- K) i  H7 P" S5 ^<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ T5 B3 V% t( S0 x% j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! I1 C' d0 G! {! v5 S* `<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 [: n+ l2 v/ K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) ~- P( u: i6 F. l& j( ]. }<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 k+ }+ d7 m& W# ], C% h" d1 u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ j0 H+ y2 Y! G0 Y5 U  Y/ g<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 i- s3 J6 h& ]. W, e& J<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 _, j+ |/ l% R) a, C, x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) z8 b: J3 s4 c0 }1 e+ @& E7 M4 {<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! [7 \7 t3 x! F/ @<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% X) h: f) O0 E<P>但我不会</P>
5 h9 ?' A: j4 v* R* \9 x<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  A+ h3 o; o* p% i5 R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: w6 c: A) N% y5 U. _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; o0 r% T2 N- }/ ]( u8 _4 @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 z) b) u% B5 A& D2 J0 ?) G" @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 G! _3 S& M$ I' @/ l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( u$ ^& ~1 e1 ^# H1 M  B<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! r! y; e' y, s! w7 j( {3 T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ D. o' p! f: a& Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- F- a! W9 `3 D: O<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" T& ]" v; y! N5 P+ I1 f, t+ z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 `, \( Y; X9 M" `* p  G1 c) O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 X! k( d4 Y0 w* j- P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% T2 z" b6 x  A# J- ]: x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) t; I$ U' z1 I! f) W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- T5 F: X3 e9 F' w9 u8 G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; B2 X& x9 m0 B6 k6 p2 W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 v' Z7 v% o- {! J% z9 M0 z8 |1 g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) N- ]) v5 M/ C9 {/ h) i; ?. g<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 }. S1 B4 g+ M1 y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

# v6 k1 M  Z' m/ g这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 Y9 `* W8 Z' I5 i这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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3 n) T" s) ~. J3 E8 P- b) ^, w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 r: u% l8 p4 a% N& C, k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>