【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
9 z5 g# ?) B6 x* F9 [/ E# I5 wThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 \5 z, y% O/ {& P& U, f: p9 _I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) Q5 i. s) x+ Z1 F* eI would probably know how you feel
+ L, z0 ~  N: C4 i4 B5 [) B$ HLove… just the word love
2 s; v3 ~) H4 f$ n. iWhy is it so difficult to express?
' o3 |# H: Z, M2 {3 R  O0 `2 I$ l& i- G, Q0 _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( `- W! h' j. g+ h& b8 T+ oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: w! }* o3 M$ H3 }4 I! SEntrust my love within your heart
. B' m) `9 U" j4 @% C6 gLove… just the word love
. C% Y% X3 T3 U9 ?- M* UWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ }( w+ ]- G3 D' nI want to confess that I love you,
% l, f4 e7 z- ~7 oBut I never did
4 S( O$ z5 _, q% g. }' TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! o+ b0 b. G1 D+ \' u) [! vCan I entrust it to you?
; A8 X" T- a1 v- J/ OEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 L9 D& E6 o. `; N! [3 N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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& Y& u# B1 }( o1 }6 s% u. n( T; T<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ v! V' M& T3 M6 T<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, Z# i; S4 N: H# b+ L" X/ u- f, E<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( X( X0 @' p/ h8 [6 H7 r7 F3 o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 C) g5 {# Q/ i5 H" l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ H, h# _! d5 x0 s( Z% x! A8 Y3 [' s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 {# a$ \8 \0 l! Q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- P8 h5 T2 c. P9 B+ X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, ?$ b7 p0 B# A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% o9 A, [, v$ j( `) Z/ Q, v  ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# D% P& q! C* i' S3 B! e6 r! O<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 V" j5 B: z; D) u1 }<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! \% l) V- Z: {; r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" w# H2 B$ V+ t4 _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" Q( L& h' z9 p  E2 @$ n( c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 r, V" A) M" y% `' R: e2 K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# N% R9 |' a  \6 r6 d5 Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) E* Q5 o+ ?  j! w/ N6 b2 A" p<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 y; [* M- S- X0 ~; k& W% w  u9 n9 v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! n& D, F2 U: A' _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 T0 W  s6 e, E# H: ]: ]0 e- r/ \<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ |3 l3 u& F  P) j( b3 L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 ?7 b3 `5 H4 s2 K5 j/ q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ ~/ [: q1 ~9 T& W- V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. m1 p5 [& p$ I, g$ a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 n/ e. ?# k4 N1 e: G; b9 e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# M0 ^+ x; l! b/ W4 W7 q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 F, t( W" B2 g& o' X5 G+ x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% S) ^" Q6 h) F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* i9 a3 B& g$ {4 ^' n1 @ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ W! E' Y4 ?! L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>