【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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  P9 a# y( i6 B7 g5 T7 TThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
5 F( W0 b; m/ ?0 lI already loved you with all my heart
. p: Q( `5 w% v7 g1 z( D# t6 hWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& y8 ]9 x# S( T! o& Q, KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ {: v2 P( o1 B9 vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 F# }9 l" C$ Z+ Q) K9 r% sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 y4 m5 M! V6 Y7 S* z* J. OEntrust my love within your heart
; h' O, d0 K3 y- B" ALove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! A/ C% a! O9 S7 E5 m0 _  DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 {7 o& m5 j- p' H" fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 }2 s# Q+ r6 j0 ~, @: p# pEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. B) h4 r7 _& D: [. r; q1 R<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: x1 C7 A" T: K' o7 `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 ?0 X$ V2 `& `$ E; A" f4 W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# @$ A5 c( K# g2 c2 R# B% _<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; s; {  o  p" R1 N! v& q) [- R" G; n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; m4 E6 j& d; g; Q; ?; c2 R* O<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 t. p. s3 ^; n& k+ ^9 R# _' |<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 n7 V6 k, w0 N# K7 y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. p3 S* N1 _. x7 G5 y; i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& `' _' m9 ^, B6 t3 M, @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ X& i6 r4 D3 q4 b: d<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: b1 o$ x% Q& A5 T% b5 V% F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 U& k, f) L; s" R% F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 n. o: Z: I, S- |<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  T4 w5 m! ^) F( p1 b9 q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 t/ {$ `+ s$ w' K. S<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 ~0 i3 d2 K3 D, p; H) O: R0 E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 O3 D" h  m7 ~  b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, O2 y- H/ Y/ M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; p; [  B# M' q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: S( S* e' x& b, d) N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 \% E! d$ k: g" f2 {: {<P>但我不会 </P>
8 a$ g+ q- ]6 y; q+ s7 ~# k0 s" B<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ P9 J! q4 a3 G/ G1 q1 P8 R<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" ~0 ?/ m$ {4 m" W& _) l  ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 m" @9 {) y' M7 [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* c5 d7 x5 m# @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! N& {: k9 c* {6 H( _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" J( B4 q8 p2 Y2 I: E  l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 z& I8 Y( i  o/ L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 k3 \8 ~$ t: L* C6 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 _* c  j2 {8 R; e<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! C* J& B% a2 R, ]# t 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 R2 }; q8 i# G4 k4 i" q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 z  ]) z& Z8 }$ B<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ o+ Z& p5 s2 u<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>