【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* C, ?0 `; C3 Z, ?6 d  |The moonlight is shining brightly,
" W, w( W: ?* T. P. x9 P- S6 K+ Q2 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: A% e2 ~0 N' y: jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ H4 `' R7 J, t# [. p9 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% @7 K( e/ n0 q6 O  J) LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 d! S' J. m( W5 f1 YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! Z0 @! U/ Q  W# NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' l5 N- t. w9 `4 G8 NI really want to know just how much you love me
4 {: ~+ J2 U/ a5 h& mI love you I love you with all my heart
$ m7 ^6 n0 r% H  WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 N1 a: ]: `0 V4 Z  _; a0 \( L9 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 o3 A+ d! k# T8 ~: \$ q7 jI regret not dying
: h( h$ V6 N8 CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 U, q& {: P6 q% K  IWith such a tongue as yours,
/ X9 t9 S% p. ^3 zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 u5 z. M, |' y- SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 u; U6 I- O6 ?5 p" N" }; Z5 Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" t6 L8 ]! ^4 w+ O, ?" P: I" O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- a  y4 F8 K+ X$ n, O% C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 C) n' y/ E! ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  U# ^2 K" g( B5 p% L# j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. _9 `8 B/ j) M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! b' E5 Q; V& }+ {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; s6 Y9 G5 s8 E0 @. v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 M* Y. ]: V; H( `/ Y3 W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* i; f( c* R, n& k: ?) c4 E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 @5 y; ?- c( M' ~; c0 R1 J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% i, R- e  U& v/ s) z; `; \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 U* O2 [. u" n* V: ?! ?8 R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 h& {. t( g, U0 e; ]- q6 r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& Z, L$ ~3 S! A+ _2 @' b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. M- a& q; [: @1 j/ C& }  w7 G) C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( D" @/ E9 i, O2 |" I! U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 _' k' J- [" N  ^6 ^/ V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 Z3 L/ J/ p  K7 s) p- g7 `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: n) z/ \) ?+ T4 B' r7 h# B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 q$ V# p6 _" v  {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 t6 ]) R+ P- Z4 |2 ^4 u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 ]6 C/ h' L+ h/ o& s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 }% {; U' ~2 T2 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 o4 ?3 W2 ?7 C' b* D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 w, I4 |) \' N+ \+ n+ m" i7 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 S) q8 m6 m: B. \$ I) a& w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 q  {9 H- t2 A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& o' O; _# m+ Q+ b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( g1 K2 L8 y7 ]- q: o6 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ t3 m, [, Y# ?) `4 t: H7 m! l1 E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! ?; ^. d7 b5 Y: j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 p8 O+ p: n: E) g5 ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>