【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 q) o7 j& E" H, A% D: ^. e歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: W" r* W* N8 R" O6 {# z/ jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! s( ^3 s8 e( t" ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. Y( \$ c$ W- }! pSeeing the sky content with its love
, T# v7 {2 _% G# uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; b2 J6 l8 ^1 M7 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 @  X6 j& H3 S2 `0 Y9 d! RI really want to know just how much you love me
" @1 b, Q: |' L( a  K5 fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. M: k6 H' s/ K% i2 bI want so much to see inside your heart
& A7 k! s  Q+ e- J# D1 V6 eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) Q9 Z& [; y& E8 z# e5 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 Y& b  t0 L2 _4 a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- p, @0 p# S% Q4 ]# Y  N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 ]: I& v& Y) b! i1 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ N5 y1 ?8 V3 v( o5 z# C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  @2 r) g% A) d: m" y* O: r: R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 t# u7 z: R" _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 @& u$ c+ X8 O0 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 o3 x9 w' b9 g& \+ x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ Z- b$ i' e+ b( P. l% w" l<P>你无需担心</P>
5 ?. m5 U, g" B- L/ b* M. \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ }4 V7 I6 {  \+ K1 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' w+ g/ X7 B5 A) P+ s7 v0 ]" P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 `3 y4 r/ o9 G, j0 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& N& t& z8 V1 W( j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" L$ l' r, G) z  u4 D5 c+ M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: i- _0 p& F/ b- q8 r3 t5 v5 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: Q" C2 }1 L: S& x* r9 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  k* x8 r6 Q8 T# C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 C5 S) v+ D- ?; R3 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 W( D' L1 P& J9 t, z$ t5 y' O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& }, ]( G! k7 w- c3 P<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 [$ }7 h5 w$ m8 Y0 K6 u5 h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! \: [0 l% m5 E( E0 R( b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; W4 g- x2 Z* w  ^: F  W, q' U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  D2 Z  h& [- `& W0 \! J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 O" \/ q; c+ J1 {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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, @. D( v- i8 o- H  i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# f$ z$ A7 m% `# w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>