【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 F, L% i: Q& C* l! @( d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- o, ~) A4 b- W( E5 |1 IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 V# x3 @8 _3 w/ YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, O0 p1 ?& v6 |  U/ c9 E- K" _& MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% D9 F) `8 E. n9 F4 w2 F6 KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- `: ^* F/ }& M3 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 R! O9 k# i/ E: h) N! ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ l# I% A; U- V9 UI regret not dying
- O. G1 x3 G1 {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 @# p5 G* t3 o. `# Z; _9 U; K, ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 Q; ^4 Y# }% ^! Q6 k2 i5 x5 F- ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 ]6 X3 A% S6 u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ y( s- S9 E$ Z+ y& b' {7 X: w" H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) ?4 d5 c9 a1 E2 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 K/ d! E2 l$ l6 k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 z' E1 m' g7 ]: f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 k6 e% g+ Q( X$ C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ ?7 K/ t0 o# V! m) k0 O/ p; r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 t" X  r, l3 N* M7 [  K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ M, [6 }4 g: T% d; Q, P<P>你无需担心</P>
1 U) Y4 H: r) y2 v' I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, j; R& [9 ^% u4 P3 W& t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 N' Q! u' r. a/ O8 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 q/ b  I2 y4 f* y0 g- _3 c' @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ K; x1 U  g0 H- p7 Y) V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 k+ M2 b5 C/ A4 g2 e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' @. z/ ~  G1 j' K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% J; S' [% f- ?" B' z5 m, k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 o  {1 T& c3 N* \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 Z2 ^& i9 I+ N9 m& Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) X* G: C3 J& M( W) @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 V+ W) h4 U( C0 S5 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! ^7 R. p9 X/ g7 {8 w8 O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 [1 M) v' F) c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 f" ?: ?" M0 \9 C, u) n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 ]/ x$ Y7 `2 s6 p) L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% J! \( ^2 ]5 P/ a/ N5 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& h9 p; O# w- u3 }* |# ?9 n& ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% a. l- }1 T4 x& n! N  V9 _. B; o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ y" K, t0 N3 {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: h% T2 i1 \! ^% ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ O; U  T4 U# a9 a; V$ W" X9 S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>