【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( M7 z+ ~& I8 ^- I9 {5 L7 q, Q# o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 }" B* _! G+ `. K& M& L  P% F0 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; {- H. [. q2 A* \The sky is happy down to its soul
& f; q+ \1 u' e' _! K4 a) [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 [% j% H: [9 R: a  uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 Z8 U: \& j* z9 m- V0 `  aYou needn’t fear anything
7 B$ ~( G! k; L. L7 F4 R  x- R( BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 d2 i9 `! s% F8 O4 \I really want to know just how much you love me
1 C$ ~* S. Y7 V6 ~- `I love you I love you with all my heart
+ S. {4 j* S! {: t) fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' w5 B9 M6 F( }! dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; {3 `# p/ {( FI’m still filled with fear
  {& A4 E1 \/ B3 M7 X1 n6 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 u# _2 ?+ G4 s$ cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& _# ]3 K( [; l+ C% t" P, wWith such a tongue as yours,
0 |, Q/ a* _* Q) oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 w5 m0 M3 k  b* F  a/ kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# F- R0 D) U3 ?+ c$ D" ]- |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; e7 B- w, y  `0 d0 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* S2 O- w# ~. M0 n5 f$ P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  |/ a. M/ [# C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ t7 w* Q# b# ^0 o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  T9 N+ h0 J: p# u5 z2 o( l& Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& p) g2 l' X, V  i! m0 @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 \0 y# E* N" j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 I0 S% [0 g5 B1 P<P>你无需担心</P>
6 ]! z9 ]4 T9 `2 ^" V* G9 D* A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* k1 t+ T5 L4 I+ B5 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 B* ?2 R0 m0 o. F+ |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 X: @4 V( R6 F9 t0 g5 |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. O1 ~' X% b7 v! M2 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( y' S" Y) E" N' ]9 ]- ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' s' |  P5 O+ n% s9 C+ K, f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& {& j0 S+ h' y) j( S$ X% J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. b8 z/ w- {* I1 k. m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 ~7 Z, V: k% h: O. o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; \% B4 s, u. i: a  l$ W+ J. F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! j9 h" e8 P1 |* g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 o0 y# h( t, J% s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; y! e) l9 P' a0 W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. r9 r6 G7 {6 K* s2 I& z2 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 U3 T" V6 r. ]+ v0 `- _. V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 B) `: K$ ~4 c# N& p. ?5 s  B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) {$ R( c. c2 O% n8 B8 b  v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( Y- s2 o) b0 L" D8 E" {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" v9 h8 u; g3 o6 _+ p. Q( X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 v- N% h4 ^/ C2 h5 [" F8 e+ _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% u2 T* N- W( B2 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: r# W" ~) S: z6 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) `( Z' C# s  Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' o+ {2 y1 A- n' K+ C6 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

( H! [3 H1 y* M3 L( R, \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( H1 e6 T) \# o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>