【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 u. d& y' K$ ^* E9 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 X7 X* Y3 x* a* e, zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 B, m  Q) j. HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' _7 _+ a. x( q, n* U% eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* n0 y5 L# C6 @) q! v$ @: w. {0 a; aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) E9 f. m- V  ~& O( mYou needn’t fear anything
" V* q- Q4 f* o9 J, H, t6 EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; a9 K( a4 x3 R" g! K, eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 i! e# i& {- L% g5 i/ t! sI love you I love you with all my heart
% E# \, K3 A* }9 f0 _Nothing can compare to my love
7 d/ F: J& F  Y& ]3 W7 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: N$ i1 B) {( sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 n3 u; b+ ]+ R- s) |) F$ VI want so much to see inside your heart
& C5 C) ]3 [' r. ]) C7 u9 q3 J; @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 O& J  E% y9 E. pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, w$ O: l1 w0 m$ M* T: {4 i$ w: aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 x% u2 z/ |1 t+ DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 s5 a9 N" Z( y7 x" V- Y/ s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 V9 J: z& a) s/ H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 r% E, l6 w; [. P$ |5 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; e$ s$ _. a( O* v0 x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ k. `* z% v+ W7 Z8 X7 `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 l' y9 i/ _) h' C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: [8 }( g( W9 {: i0 c% M8 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 t* ~" X/ L2 E2 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, h6 f3 ~9 _3 `1 n1 u( A( P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 \0 _7 D$ _! s4 D7 J% N' Y4 b# D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 i) D8 i) @, I* w) |8 r0 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 t  Q$ I- k, v! a2 b7 U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 C# V$ j+ m& Q& o. o/ s# {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' z; I8 V! T2 s/ V* N, q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; ~6 n  g) k- i5 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; A4 I9 v3 E* v4 w  l( r3 F4 r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& e7 Y$ B1 {1 A8 n, ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) @7 ?/ Q" Z( `" I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 y1 g. M( f4 S, q; a3 @% P# _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 C( |( L5 T8 a. Y6 \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: e9 W0 N+ V7 o/ W8 v0 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- ~2 b3 y' d( {  s0 A  i( S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" h, h; V% P! C( {2 z9 _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  {) S! z7 N- K& ^, @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  ?. M! _: Q$ Q2 X# k& {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 z% g( }) X6 Y/ y5 k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' u/ {6 p3 q, k* Z7 V我请你剖开它
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' ]6 l' S2 ?3 [' I) K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>