【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* Z" I3 x- I. aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) @# M, r; W2 R* r2 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& J# _( y$ [+ \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. r7 {; x, c1 |+ {6 b1 t) \; uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( P/ G7 j0 \" C6 vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& V  p1 q; C5 b( V) S1 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
: W7 j' q. G: H1 E6 f" d* YNothing can compare to my love
. b  A4 @. B" pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ N0 p2 _' l: T. F5 S7 BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 ^4 X) S/ D2 pI want so much to see inside your heart
" d" Z* S3 M1 W$ ~0 `  J$ ], ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 z6 z8 h, ?/ b. [0 ~I’m still filled with fear
+ y$ d1 [- V* H$ n- {! `. l/ nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- s: q6 h* D8 |2 C' BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# K) B; O- X& ?0 }4 t( AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ A, `* l7 n4 X, f" M( l* ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  a/ m8 B9 u, g8 D( J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! h8 v" ?$ K# w, w7 E0 b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% T' K- L, D# U: q- o+ o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; M! q1 R5 _6 g: y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 t- b8 E( x* o: A/ K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" r+ y; m, S, V. |: }! p4 ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% D# ]  t/ F% S8 ^4 [- I  b+ l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 M. K! M3 z+ C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' g9 U. A- i5 K1 x1 J" w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ v+ c. |" ?9 \0 T" Y' {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ j1 w+ f0 _, x; S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' n1 n6 ?5 D; H) w9 K1 U/ J& d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 M: l& m( h" o8 u- f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' V" n! T( C1 W' _9 h. f  I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- M9 Q) ]- k7 M8 a9 L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% x4 g: i5 m# |) x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 w' `: P, R" x) A* T7 c& }/ g" h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 D/ c% G0 D8 n& J0 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. b" @8 o! |/ ~+ L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& a2 E' X5 i% ]; W/ H- Z7 u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; n, P% E  X' F2 h) |2 ~% T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, b8 P2 ?$ W  l- D% d# a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- [( @3 l! T7 o; j$ ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' Q. ~- l+ m6 S& l; B9 W4 A<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 Q$ b9 J" f+ b7 e1 h# k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' T  m% p6 Q* k- ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ y- F& m' o0 t% }: K0 P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  |# V% V# E" X/ ^4 ]! g7 s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) R: s/ s# \1 s# K) k/ V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& M8 ~, n0 r8 U; }; @: G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* N$ H, H- n# a  U/ P5 |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) j/ N* x: n! U, L1 S& i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 h9 M0 T: a( S, ~9 L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; v. p# R. ]: n' I. i. y我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 M% s9 q2 M0 ^5 f4 x" D2 I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>