【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 O5 }, a5 N/ W) X' eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 _" ?. T- v) o; I1 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 D- e% G- M2 B4 _$ j9 ]* ~With the moon kissing it every night
+ s( N# R3 F' l9 B- G1 dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 W9 r# A5 q5 m! fYou needn’t fear anything
' a* \$ @8 E$ d* ]- T- J: aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: d2 l7 e8 X+ E/ }2 B: BI really want to know just how much you love me
' J1 I2 @# |9 T2 e# ?% AI love you I love you with all my heart
- o4 o& ~5 ~; I0 y6 ANothing can compare to my love
. k& v7 ~( _3 u7 r' WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% A" ~- k% U0 b* {! `$ F! ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# J% y: B5 g+ @6 O7 Y# i# ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 u$ V' k# S$ \0 aWith such a tongue as yours,
' S* L( M: [1 _+ d5 YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 E# y) O: [* D+ i+ P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ g* i7 Z+ d5 T- z5 o( p' N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 y6 q* N+ C& a( T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& C( Y- E) H" E. i" w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; Y( N, X8 O. u2 N) D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# g& [4 Q, O# A+ H2 _7 p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 r! z- R1 o/ |- j; S! P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 T( X3 B2 Y6 i/ r- P4 w$ ?. i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 x% n, P- k1 {  h9 {1 K4 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. I4 \' k3 b* S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 }( ~9 r( n' ?: m& t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) R! _$ u* ]4 N4 p) Q1 k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! P/ F3 _2 }/ M( S0 r! B; f3 D9 H# \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# ^! ?0 F, \! K/ m+ l0 |" j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' M; j; f, W* V; o8 {8 O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ H$ I4 _) E) A) Z- e+ ?5 b7 Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% W& \3 T" y3 Z8 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% m- y/ g+ I& n6 P0 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ d8 `6 ?: G! E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 N7 J) A9 q: p) w. @; q' X7 E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* g4 ]$ P$ W" H0 m) S8 J<P>I regret not dying</P>
# A$ m. R9 z+ M* y! t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 c# O) r4 \: N6 @7 t7 V2 i7 q% a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! M: C( k7 T  N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! U0 F/ {* L: C+ t) F7 c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# d. D; W4 l8 m  `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% ?% s2 z; J+ S+ l# `3 h2 i7 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 I# t7 M( D/ G1 C+ u" \9 e! c; }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! f7 \9 E) ^5 `% \( ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ G* h2 x# b0 c# Q: R3 Q) A" I我请你剖开它
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9 {2 }! R# X) D3 O2 a& a* |4 I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 }. g+ y  Z% s- d5 N2 s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>