【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  {. q$ N# u, {9 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, T: D- x9 T& S& T) O# B% T1 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 n- F0 K  A' c$ v7 O$ `4 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
: N' q/ }1 J% p) }$ gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ G- B# v& I  _; N+ m  E! IEvery other word you utter is love
( m7 r4 R9 X3 }) n- W' _5 QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ y4 m& n0 R8 t( U% w  sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  K; Q" x9 ^$ y+ ~8 BI want so much to see inside your heart
; p$ d# c- W9 m  Z! gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" O! A: h/ t, _$ BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; e8 a9 m3 c# M6 O7 zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, L6 L3 X* I0 y) D9 x# H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! U+ g. \" A" J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( k" {1 S' q1 Y- p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! V$ y/ @, v9 a1 V; d6 [6 H( a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 _# f1 H1 @/ u0 x3 p' r- U: b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) N8 u) M3 A+ {: c+ d. r# m5 F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. |1 c2 w! `% N& E* r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 y8 M8 M1 e, B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* m# ?8 d# O( L/ j6 R1 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 v/ n+ V- e- t# C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 J' C, b2 Y% Z6 z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 e. V, r) z% \( }0 n) q; M5 t" `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* E- _( K) O2 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ u& J3 j8 A2 \8 q) o/ H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* x6 f7 s% _8 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" L; B* b' g7 l2 n6 t7 Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* ?& {$ k3 F/ n2 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! ~* z% c/ f7 n: d. T6 Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 d/ b$ H7 A: W& k2 L4 s, p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 P( Z1 N6 _" ]& I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ E, I' P0 L, c& h: K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 U( j7 s# P+ v/ [$ t% j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; [7 P% E: r1 [4 `5 Q$ b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% N7 n  ]$ f- ^& y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ [" w1 F% D  }# q  n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 t1 e/ P- \, q2 W/ x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' w8 `9 h) Y$ R" |; W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 T% Z) n' b+ l- }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" _, F+ t( b; y6 }! |我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>