【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. V) R: R( \) c- xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 Z  U; a3 \; c3 v+ {4 X+ LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 C# D$ p, ^' G" n6 \4 {5 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 V, S- j5 T6 OWith the moon kissing it every night
* ?5 @$ d7 v- v* |7 ASeeing the sky content with its love
" ^5 \2 s  [- lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ N8 k5 w" `) F/ @0 h- \6 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 L5 |5 n" F% S9 h" j, ]Nothing can compare to my love
# O, `, W) j6 o: Z, U  {: h9 KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- I3 J# k! g8 S0 v8 ]8 GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 G; y% T/ H9 H, nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 o/ m% Y- Z. d/ t9 E+ z! ?; }- F1 uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ S; L0 n+ B8 J7 }With such a tongue as yours,
  L, s8 o+ u& f! E; L% d/ DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* E1 N* }# P0 ^% h9 O, XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" m$ W5 K, R) g' z3 s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 k2 P5 a" y8 M' r8 r, ]/ ~. Z* H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 `# g* s8 s7 a. W+ s, A6 S  G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 k. }( j* x* a4 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 O+ k# A9 _  V( b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* e6 F# y+ Y9 X3 K  Q# j& U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 a7 _8 P& m* f" Z0 e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: A! a3 v) ~' p* F9 F& ~0 v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# s: N# p) C$ |9 i/ @3 a& s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: U2 Z7 A7 H1 l- {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ n" I. |+ d) U0 X! _; }8 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ O0 x8 a+ D# Z5 j0 B. @# }$ E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* ]  C/ \% j' Q  K, _2 N: W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ x2 P" ^# @; o  S9 h) ]1 |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ J- I3 e8 Z, u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. n6 `; z2 M' \; R8 T$ C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! `+ a6 E4 f2 ~" m. H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; w+ x( e+ v7 z  o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 k1 X7 C+ i3 m. V$ |6 w+ j  h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 h- O' ^' F4 Q; K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 H7 M2 i" }$ R5 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) b/ }/ V$ J( I3 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 L. L9 k0 x9 P- t; L$ B<P>I regret not dying</P>
; n; N& |3 R" O& D, `) s* B  ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 \& O1 R; f; o- [4 A& B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 |7 l! k3 E' Z( b" {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' Y7 n- B: I5 L' A* H6 |0 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" t5 g% Q/ M+ W' b6 w) d3 [) i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 y( m6 k3 j# ], O5 H" {, U" U8 t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 ]# @1 E  X7 u; q: [7 [7 r我请你剖开它
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; n( o$ }# i7 P( b/ Z3 i) x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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