【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 b, a8 @" O! l1 B9 B# a0 T% e  r; eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; [! d; ?+ Z* yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- B( g$ i. B0 W. qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 B) n. u& t# b( c" Y3 {& k0 L+ K( _With the moon kissing it every night
) E! @$ G" h% ?6 |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 k& R/ a* a% J; j2 I9 aYou needn’t fear anything
' Z) u3 {- \$ j* S, PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: b. d6 j8 y' h9 w6 Q2 fI really want to know just how much you love me
% E6 }  {, T; `$ L8 i. UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 V* ~, a' p0 c4 V5 U, b8 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) [7 j7 ^( N1 ]! @4 ~3 l. v7 lI want so much to see inside your heart
' C& c2 B2 f# qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 s: h+ ?% j+ ~& k' ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# o- p% H0 B/ Z$ a( C5 {2 f5 ]I regret not dying
) x6 b: P9 i' ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ d! a1 v$ o- ^/ q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 G( i/ |0 @" Z* Z1 A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 H& ]' {! N8 @/ g! k( p5 r: ?- M5 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ l; k- K+ V2 {$ v% |, ~6 E) S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. n: |4 _5 z' h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 J- ]( f3 \4 R4 z' \2 u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 E4 v3 p5 \. X1 t% I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 h8 w, C  o; j; B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 R2 G! f  k( J5 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# x1 y( U3 [3 @; f+ e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 Y; f8 J. B+ N- Z7 p. i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) p* S" c7 f$ b* J/ \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: a5 Y* [$ d5 ]/ Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 c0 O! S# `  {2 E. D( s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 W2 z' ~8 I4 f8 I: N$ D5 k) U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  w# E$ C, O+ ^( i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. s; V) t4 t% L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ e: ~/ `: {3 {" P& v% X: v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& C. V) [2 ~2 K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 ~6 t5 J0 F& ^) _% ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 T1 s3 T$ W- U# U. x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. Q$ p# G. ~& T+ @" i' [- \- M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 }* w) |1 B; g( _9 n2 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( p% o7 g) I5 l# Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 F1 \! i! @4 t4 I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, v3 c7 {! r9 K: r8 `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

% r+ j* O3 y( v& l/ p9 d' \. W& ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# s/ p+ X: P# G! b) V3 c' F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>