【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) p8 \; b0 P6 _( y' `( g/ A4 tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  p& W/ D! s6 k- ]4 dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ X4 _) k4 f7 {  B0 k9 y& o* iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ c9 g" \, w2 PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; D. c9 I6 z5 f1 ^% F- kNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: ]0 A5 H9 J" U! eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 S/ J* [& K) h2 S) `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, |4 P: t6 E$ {# k4 HI regret not dying
- D0 H% T5 g5 T+ R$ zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 u/ W1 P! R! y* k+ t7 t* u1 {& UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  m3 L" A; C# {* lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ B* O& [& ?. ~3 X' e7 F! y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ D8 `9 a  f' o; A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" q/ R, {& ?$ l4 ~; q  R& d% [8 j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' ~' j: [/ p- J2 [9 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: F: v% y; Q* B4 b' X3 |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 p1 K6 B1 V$ `7 p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( W7 ^! b% z' O* A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, M$ p8 y' q3 {  o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, @, N4 W- u# f& j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% s1 A6 C" L! f) N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: O' K  M& W! F9 R* \2 l( [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- z8 f$ R( _* `; E  ~4 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; p/ a' t" O$ M* T# n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 A9 [% K  I" K1 t* B6 b7 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 G5 {8 Q# K, C1 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  A, d8 x: q( k" t- `0 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 }+ j' O  N7 H* P' ~" t$ T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 s8 \/ F; r4 i! z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# u" p1 Q4 |2 r4 X2 U) U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; M. f* d. b6 t3 d/ k# E+ u  f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& Z* q4 j) z) f! g0 ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: C9 r) }/ P, E. q2 y3 U<P>I regret not dying</P>
. u: T7 p1 Y% o3 g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 Z8 o9 L1 f/ j2 ?5 `- ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( ~) B5 |- h8 C5 {- K- J) c1 F. ?# f- b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ O3 a* V$ d8 z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& D1 \. A( h5 m; r3 f; |4 m% m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! O) |! W$ M* m5 N; B5 d/ i% J3 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! S8 ?; J) i9 O2 i; [9 O1 j; a8 T4 G7 ~' @我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: Y4 u$ U' |' v$ g$ h/ H! N, @  G; F; v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>