【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 f# ~# B/ Q5 `! }The moonlight is shining brightly,
; c7 H. s$ p4 T6 W: |6 j' s5 q9 z5 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# |' q. C+ H! H% \; H: e- BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ ~( Q6 [: p* h3 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% g! p9 x1 r9 ^' e& G& T, F2 K$ p" bSeeing the sky content with its love
( A: w4 E# H/ ~& }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* H8 X: F: J' P6 o; J1 uYou needn’t fear anything
  r+ @& `9 g: `. l; IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% T/ o9 k$ M. o0 YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 E; O, K- O1 Q8 XWith such a tongue as yours,
* z+ B% u# g) tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 `- ^! B; H! `+ x. h/ F2 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 f* s% x/ i! T7 c8 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 f% s5 M) U' ]8 {$ d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! @' g% ?4 u$ ~1 K* a  l8 F9 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) f! \3 `# x6 S: U5 [! Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 _0 O  X5 j/ A2 T4 X6 u0 E$ _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; ?& q$ u* t. ?0 g$ Q" F6 h7 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- z0 M0 H: y3 C7 Y, l4 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) S4 l! |$ g; j/ H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 n/ K  v" ?$ d  ?& J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  b3 ~+ g3 W0 T  p$ y+ d  {. f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: b% c" y9 s! Z3 z: X/ |5 l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ x& C3 I! ^4 p2 |3 N" G2 ~! s6 p; {" N' ^% v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& {  O% S) x. u# I/ u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 ]( x! c% m& h3 K/ @9 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% i% `' Y1 `9 D- ~0 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ ^0 M9 B" x2 l# g0 s0 J9 T* |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 f% N. R& ]7 |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 @" e6 I& ]- ~/ E# e) L9 A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) s6 z" J1 ?; e: g  G7 _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: x) i+ w  l* h$ K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 K$ A) `) V6 m3 ~1 B5 A' y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 F9 _2 _- t- z1 T1 N9 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 Z8 y5 `8 c& I- E" U- I& Z  D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 r& J$ y& n( d% x5 r* g+ }- M5 v我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>