【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
; a& r0 c. i+ L( @9 B$ ]5 e( BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 C, }2 |+ N2 v! z, pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. B3 F" |) S+ \5 H) A4 G' tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 T) _( c" h. K: AI love you I love you with all my heart
( a0 i& y5 ~0 sNothing can compare to my love
, i: e0 N3 n* G$ KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 T5 j9 u# I' |" CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) c; J" t) [. a- M. Y7 B/ i- FI want so much to see inside your heart
8 ~* t+ k, T$ [# j. DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 v2 p# W! a3 _9 r7 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 F* c% j- L1 D; YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 U% [8 f4 u, {$ f4 Y8 nWith such a tongue as yours,
' z+ t1 e: u. m" ^% HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( D# G* T) P* E% F: C7 m0 D4 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% V- a- y- X* O' [9 |; Z+ H7 @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, M4 \. T% o9 N; T$ J) v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, m8 }" n3 \0 A/ f; z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) ]) V  d7 ~, j. i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 A; [; d, x7 E" p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  {( @3 |2 m6 I7 r0 I" ?' ?1 T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ q! ~0 [* t- B( W; }, `" x2 J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 H7 K. S  K. i% H# |$ ]. K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 _' {6 \) X% o- r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 S; W2 T' y9 E6 m, `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 n$ H; I' @, o2 B" v0 w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 a5 X0 m; l/ Q+ o' U- i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 i3 e0 k; C) l' b9 B0 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, M! a4 ~$ t/ f9 a6 @" z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) V: C+ V( k% U% S' U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ |. ~& o- V3 `! @7 f1 L# y1 D, g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. r" v3 h" w7 V8 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 E1 S$ U! A2 p% J& ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# g$ l  ~( `) V" H" U$ N% A<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 |6 f, ~5 n9 u; l' C9 J4 R+ c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! [8 B, P6 {+ i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 b7 ^7 ]1 C; Y! S* o' O/ Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 `) B1 b4 s' ^  w/ @' N/ x) T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# W; E! Q+ f9 b7 V6 E2 s) e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) V  o  d9 @' `' c0 k$ d' i0 Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ P; o' k  E' H4 ~1 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>