【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- f# h" L+ O' m) G歌词我附在后面。
  t) w4 i& D3 p9 C1 G$ UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- ~! P- p! `9 C' }) ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; G5 p4 {) h% n, M2 q1 J8 f6 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 d$ t5 t6 Y: s8 h! LThe sky is happy down to its soul
% u! h3 g4 Q3 v6 BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& L/ F$ B& _- i  IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" `/ ?, u$ e/ B/ h: HYou needn’t fear anything
5 g8 u8 O( t% w1 H' Q, YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 Z  r& Z' A% F' {, B9 zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( ?0 M. ^! e+ @+ j$ ^5 wI want so much to see inside your heart
" D3 O9 R6 Q2 y: y2 tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' `$ Y; q( g( IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 h; ?! s9 _6 C+ T# Y$ PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! b4 u* y  u& a0 u. D% H. [9 J/ sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 Z& G/ f: M7 y; W9 Z+ P2 c9 Y: h; @  W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; S5 a, a! b/ v9 O7 `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) B4 t( g& Y5 i$ Y) |0 `) g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# |& Z# Q! B5 b' q! b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  T. k( d, z1 n) }% ?  ?. _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* Q) [; i2 U5 N3 i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ x8 f& }% y7 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, G7 u7 T$ Q" f* K* `: [5 U0 }( k( R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 _. O1 s$ q* S7 U+ x- I. a* \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) C. d8 d/ V) i$ Q2 }% e8 G+ ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 u, L( \9 D8 Q; |% `+ f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( \1 L+ \( m& Y( ?& [9 h. e2 f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# I3 M9 M* `5 Y7 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& F# L! x$ P: D9 p" I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! ~" c9 ?& g' o( S2 e7 l( ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 e; X2 {! S" A2 ^( I! `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ s! A& V0 z) Y0 i' m& x; _$ i% c% z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' Q5 M9 T3 p' T  {8 j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 g; ^. R& C* l, K. x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  q+ w9 z  x0 w& K, ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 P0 T9 _+ T' w" q& ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* d/ P+ V/ n/ ?. Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 l) O' W" G( i4 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% ~: m! r4 \: ?2 s8 u* Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* [( k( F9 V1 g9 D( d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 E  `9 q: ~7 J9 Z* t4 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 v' P$ O! C7 ]) m8 q  ?0 Y7 F0 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# B: T: l; o" F* h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 i1 Q" d, L' a/ T% J! ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 y$ B1 H6 \$ V! E4 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 O! R2 D' ^. R  I) K! q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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8 r0 f/ O5 b: p4 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>