【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' S7 |3 v7 Z: m* ^3 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# _' d: i! [" PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 X0 ]$ i* f# p* q$ D( iThe sky is happy down to its soul
) v$ K7 o3 Z. j) C' q* S7 }* RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 k; i8 [2 m# c2 h6 ^. RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 `* s+ {! D- ]: |8 g% GYou needn’t fear anything
' r: g+ z' E. y3 u5 l' CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  Z* ^+ E! C7 v5 G/ k& e& CI really want to know just how much you love me
* l! e( X% `: n, F9 w1 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( O' z: ^( T8 P5 s+ YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; j4 g9 V" k! X/ u/ OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ i+ g, b# n0 ]) |With such a tongue as yours,
; e9 P+ Q8 H) m& K" a* q" DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 ~# t0 ~; q& D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ F' v4 m) c0 _- R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  l, q* Z; s/ a) x9 }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- t' m' A4 n0 b* i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 t6 S/ A* F/ l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* [& `' c' I9 L$ k; N0 N& V% R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 R! E- N6 W! L+ b5 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 }, w4 [  V3 k. C; J7 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 c8 b5 I- {& n1 ~! d: T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) Z) v6 q: w4 A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! g, g- p  b7 I) G/ I0 m! P1 U4 O0 t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 _% p7 F. |3 y  w5 Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* Y  `/ I0 x" [1 Q  o8 O- j2 }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! L$ {, I" W' S7 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 x: W* h, i5 R! x! b: s& J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ w: x. e/ C& E9 M, Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' d6 c* j- X$ t4 U1 u6 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 d, m$ D3 @- F- f  }* ~1 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! V' T* g% A" t4 _! A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- X5 t8 O' u+ \' e5 ]3 e/ v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ s/ I8 {2 X8 ^& R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& d! s8 r& v" _8 ~6 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. ^( G- l8 A5 D1 k* H: n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 x6 P+ J4 s) p0 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* e) s# C' V' p0 v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 ]+ H! R% n2 W1 u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 I% G4 f  ^6 ]8 m& y  {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: A  i5 k+ q6 J2 H1 F) Q1 t6 \; k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' I6 K! N4 ^* k, u* K8 W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% Y3 B4 D( O' g+ B* A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# \3 q' n3 ]0 \3 h6 ]. R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# [+ M$ I. d# L3 s: k3 r) } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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