【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
( j3 F: O# g( v1 s2 O. {Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 r+ Y% ^; P, L( {' @( O0 P9 U) rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 M+ U7 h7 K3 ~& t2 ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ D  d( _9 e5 e- r0 L( KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 ~4 A- k6 P( M# r( s, }5 S* Z& a1 tYou needn’t fear anything
" y# P6 ~6 V5 p4 D! KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* o2 j% d" y) y% I8 v4 T7 aI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% x) e+ N- L& `$ D- C6 r. {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& S, U  ~. `% VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# d* G& O7 r" ]# q1 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 @% d, c- _) z- `  H% BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! Y/ Y# ^. B! R( m' f6 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* o6 ]) a6 E& ?  a! z! U2 m: j( D& D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; a% R1 S- N! e# C7 K: }+ \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, ]2 @! }0 P) F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. h! Q6 G( {8 X" s3 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ o* T; x* l: `, I! S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, P, E3 P, D0 S, V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' I6 E5 c  p: O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& k* j1 y+ m# f4 [( |: D2 q6 Y% u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 C! x+ T/ t$ h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; G8 I9 \& b  f- N& Z' Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 T7 T6 n+ F. ^; M3 a0 Q! I1 N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; h6 Q$ V9 o. I4 E$ t3 a7 m& P9 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" U/ q# Z" T; w1 R* N. G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 l9 ~+ _, C) K' ^0 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 S: w% T0 J# Y0 y0 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ S. ~' m" U/ K) d! F5 E, m- f8 ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. I# z/ I; e9 @0 Y" |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( `1 y9 S) ]; T& N/ I) E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" A, }3 K5 U  [: w1 U# ^/ ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ l5 R- X, n+ Z6 Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 P. g! E5 P: y# s. p/ t: @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 S' ~8 t: L8 S+ T. H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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' Q1 Y& B# {. `* m2 y4 W* e6 {! g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' g9 O$ H& E& i2 u# x+ C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>