【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  c! E7 i: A9 T  g7 l歌词我附在后面。
9 I& g; m$ q- ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ ~2 y: m2 W2 ?6 ^: EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- D6 f+ j: `  a: B& ?- ?7 eThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ l0 F: ], `$ [: i2 |' tWith the moon kissing it every night
, F& c  I- ^: T* s, f0 Q' [Seeing the sky content with its love
5 R5 b  |# g" cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. N* d# w4 N$ O  o) I5 d  j* `You needn’t fear anything
- h1 }. C/ ]8 i* v1 dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 g2 A9 w+ F; f9 D. D, iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' [7 b+ E1 }: h* ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 a0 i$ z/ h0 W" m0 j$ |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' B6 s/ W/ B$ h3 O+ [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# X- m; [5 Z* wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 E2 t& ]& n. r& H+ IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 e2 e: f; U/ b9 s3 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 F" P# k2 B; ~+ W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 S) K) _" {) P1 f, [% w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" j& ~( g8 P' R, F3 A5 e, b- ?  Z" g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# G, ~( @6 ], J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 n; P6 H9 z5 y& h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" t. @6 p- U9 f# f* j! H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 Z& S3 B6 R" R; s% a6 H% ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& o" I- y' E- R& s9 @( N# _1 z<P>你无需担心</P>
: N, n7 \* ~* F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 j( h- X. x/ ~4 }+ ]! L; ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 [. n! O: W8 s8 w3 p; n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 C5 a* J& U" R% D3 H7 n+ y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 E3 A! e- a0 g* c- Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; M: a8 \3 ]: J4 p* A$ {2 _# g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# w# n! f/ ~7 B2 |0 l' X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( F0 |6 ?% I3 @7 |2 X. A% c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 C$ T& b) b( C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 `0 {1 t0 ^  U/ h3 X  h, V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( E3 a( t: ?* l0 t2 l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" L5 K8 D3 {2 Y6 S6 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ r) n, H, |4 {1 U: W3 b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' ]8 q; Q! j/ o9 T4 C* b6 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ K8 F* T: u+ h  w: G& s+ y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( A2 K! x( J* K' r! u# N5 ]我请你剖开它

2 I6 f$ v0 `+ t' ]* r# t% p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>