【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: i' O4 B, i0 c# d7 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 h$ A  G! r, sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& H) O" t8 B4 @' }8 P  L% @# LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ q) P: m1 J$ _) A  X; U" YThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 h$ c4 k: D7 P9 q% `/ uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 S: @  }' l! BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 M1 A- c3 o0 i! ?Every other word you utter is love
4 w, I% H3 W( O7 pI really want to know just how much you love me
9 p1 V) _' [' ?: J8 b, OI love you I love you with all my heart
6 E! m+ @9 q: F# X3 [' L# ZNothing can compare to my love
7 i7 w: R. ^: u! R2 n, ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 x9 m, O% N* _% lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ }# `9 C+ _' L* x8 {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  F! Y: m+ e2 I6 M7 p: Y  wI’m still filled with fear
2 [* ^9 H8 e, c2 s% z7 B4 K  xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! ~% m9 X' F' k" ?) r* T0 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- `8 |1 Y7 r* {4 @With such a tongue as yours,
9 K: l( N  @; R: q2 u: o) N% qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' p! ~; @$ W  G/ g( d6 ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; N! P3 f8 R/ t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, {; m3 r0 w- [" M& o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 N! x& N/ R9 C  L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 r" u5 c5 d) q0 ]( s# T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  z  C0 n& {  [+ x% A& g2 d, B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" _$ E/ f$ B+ j4 \9 X4 d+ c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& H0 S$ k# }0 c. r4 I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 q+ f% K* j9 _# ?- h3 _( ?$ \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ C0 m6 B' D/ j: G$ d5 K# k$ P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  V3 `# l2 R9 I# P! v9 K3 d4 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ {3 U- U2 D* y/ \5 \- @3 N! i9 x2 u9 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% N" i; w" b2 v1 C<P>你无需担心</P>
# \# q3 D- ]; d  h* P7 o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# E0 y1 o& a! v) o2 b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 v" G2 j1 X% y" P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 Z- K, x7 l( e5 v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ `0 `3 F0 L8 b$ K# V. s5 e/ w; M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! r% I% d4 O& w; r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; E; v% I# s! H4 q( i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" @8 ]; t, c( F* h) D& X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 j- h$ _% G6 P" w9 v- Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: ]7 \, {- R4 ~& i) P$ a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; E! F: T, O- ?) k& z- T; V% ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 T+ L% ^! C. J& w6 q# r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; c3 m- Q7 i, y9 {0 C8 O; N" W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 C5 ]* b5 }6 Z( |5 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! K! T" C/ s' {9 p1 I, Z3 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  I" H0 @& I' |1 z& {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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0 L- `% \8 ]; @) J2 B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  h( Z) B# h' ^, t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>