【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ Q3 t& v; a. R0 Q1 G歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" Q) F. z& ~+ Y2 K  n7 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ \, {5 _: e' {. U6 F9 z3 ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 W6 N! i2 R- A+ \  e" S6 R9 JSeeing the sky content with its love
- f/ [$ l. V% b+ l2 e3 P: {0 vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ ~/ K- Y" e: y0 b- D# c) J1 NYou needn’t fear anything
5 |/ e0 j9 k: N0 F. iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' C" ^8 }9 w" }8 X" a' O* h0 l. eEvery other word you utter is love
, h0 |3 [- r$ s  @  WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. t8 Y7 h3 t" i& J% hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 l/ _1 M' ~/ @$ WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& U3 C" k5 v0 l, F0 VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) N+ l6 ?7 H, K7 h" {I regret not dying
* l* e& z' ~9 M, ~  }6 L2 q3 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. v6 C8 e- Y) V2 m' UWith such a tongue as yours,
% }1 [+ B% i0 B. p9 e4 s1 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  p. }+ t* j. b( Q* c1 lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- ?) E8 x# f7 |* k& _/ L" w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( A/ c' s+ u/ C; K" f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- M0 n( d( y2 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: v  D9 {. C5 G3 m! N# c; X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; n+ V0 |3 l  i% D7 X  i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 Y# t$ e3 V) F5 W; z9 Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! K  o! J; t* C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, v/ q7 Q' o8 o3 l1 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) O' F0 E0 |/ g' K<P>你无需担心</P>
  S, C' w7 }2 E9 Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 K  n& A6 d' t+ j; `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 E$ ?# P$ U" x! m/ w3 P' W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 d: y3 l+ W. W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, H# D3 }; I. I; d% l6 f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 {% U1 ]" w2 x$ [2 V. |. n# X6 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. W, K0 W; r# |3 `" u# ^% {) d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( L! W5 G% m2 ^: N! }% ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. T9 n/ O$ C1 p' x% r" ]7 d) i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  [: w% P, a  |" s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 ^5 s# k9 |5 W0 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) G- O" \' g# R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 ~) _* h- D( _* H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) |0 A! i3 i% _" [+ K" f: ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 x9 _4 M2 z  G+ `, e% n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* J6 ]+ T+ M1 Y! l7 |0 u7 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 q8 |/ O6 d. Y' \% \. |, N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: z. f+ d, Q( j4 W* {0 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 l9 c# q( t+ ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: g! X: E! e& Y7 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 }" L. Q9 F9 H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>