【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' _" o( u1 E- \" I1 z歌词我附在后面。
" F% a; {% v; I8 S) uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 l8 V% u. U0 j% T% s% F! ]8 ~3 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 K9 j' T; i. n- x; y% ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" P6 B$ P5 K4 |( m  v& x4 l# tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 d+ F+ V$ w9 j# {$ TEvery other word you utter is love
- \& O( w: m% ~* qI really want to know just how much you love me
7 t! O) q6 m0 D$ @, PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 }. A) [* ^8 ^. ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 k- `+ R& {' z7 J; \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! l. W& W$ q! K9 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 C8 p3 W; G1 d' U- y7 {: P$ i3 bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 n/ z9 G3 O% o; x  rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- g$ a; m# b6 X- g; ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ ^7 x1 H! e2 \  R) B8 bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 r. o8 w; P% a3 W+ z% N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& @' n: G- _! S  \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; w+ @1 j$ y4 Q  J# p2 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! l! Z8 a* T7 C9 K" I8 y/ N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, \+ Y$ c) f; j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! u' w: p0 }3 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; H1 u* P3 Z1 W1 R5 B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( N6 G/ f* @7 S- l0 n! _<P>你无需担心</P>
9 O5 m" a2 x0 [$ o5 Z% }3 c/ Q1 J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ @+ n% P: d4 k! M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ _4 Z* _+ C! O2 f1 G  Y2 }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( l) z/ k2 c# \+ m, `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( v0 n0 Q2 J; t0 [8 m: N# V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  y) ~8 Y  w7 r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ E) m8 @! a4 i$ t# ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: F6 ?$ M2 K4 q/ b, c5 t5 I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) ^5 _5 `$ f  y* @! h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ X8 Q- i. ~) J: q2 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 n; C5 z0 B- t* n: |/ ~9 h' M. H+ J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 f- L6 C) q: K" o: I! T. W7 i3 g. r9 ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 @, R% j- f# L2 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 R2 `8 I# g7 W* p" Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
* k/ W  k. L/ Y/ K3 u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ D9 a# X" j$ }0 z5 G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( ?: U* |' A  S  B2 O. H: V6 P) Z, i$ \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! ?! b, ?9 V# b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* O  A# }6 ^8 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* L7 t  u" p4 [2 \/ u7 |3 x& w- i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>