【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ [& Q6 a: @5 a! H& pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" @' j/ @( h4 T  m1 \* D7 s  U9 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% r6 b+ I$ t2 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 L& p4 [; a4 h/ `' N& UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" s# S' ?! P) cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# C9 P9 g- w/ o+ M& Y; D, Q6 pEvery other word you utter is love
! e1 }8 }2 ]" i# Y% u: `8 mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( e8 e9 `( B3 Z' ]" a: Q: B2 G& oNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, `3 K, X0 V6 H' A9 f1 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; E7 |) [6 {$ mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) @8 \) h( @- e- M9 i8 w( fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" Q% r% ~2 r4 S  i6 w. xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& W' t, L: \* j) {7 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 o" ]% e! @8 tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! I# G- H( l0 E& H  Q% B3 s8 T5 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; h7 `+ K0 t0 L9 L# W9 E8 H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 }* W. u- o$ b9 |7 ]" t/ Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) k+ l+ E; m, Y6 l3 @$ V0 n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 G4 p8 {7 ]) p' R( K. O5 \+ y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 F. @5 O+ v$ H3 t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 H4 m) V* K* J: T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ J, k* m  {' p# H2 D) t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; m: ]! J5 @0 Z. z" J/ U% w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' K( q! }3 }' U* U* T+ A3 a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; j( a5 d& w3 E/ V/ Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( z) F: C  F0 o: C8 G5 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 Y# a: A) f! I9 W5 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 @5 [" U8 J  f7 C1 |2 a; {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- L/ z  y3 h! T8 s% l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! h6 W% d' U0 P  Y% I5 b- w  j  T0 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% t5 i5 V! a: H% Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& @; D. U6 R4 J8 R8 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  X+ w- }& q, C; C7 Z9 Z  ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ f4 q9 X: K7 t2 h0 n- ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 h* {9 g' Q2 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 k8 u& q/ p! p- y1 p1 h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 s# u7 Z4 \( U  u1 [9 @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 ]7 V$ k, q0 g3 v" e" F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 ^& N  y, N- [$ x! K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; ^/ L2 ]; P' B5 J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 B' b4 {; y7 }8 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: o$ M# B4 H, [9 m+ @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 L- D7 o* V# c, e6 Z! I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 {+ a& i- ?' r$ r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 M9 I& B5 K* ?! X1 C$ y2 _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
# X1 k7 h" b* A: q  o
, f: S3 _, k- G; d* D9 q3 S5 c我请你剖开它
! U* @0 g; ?# S; e$ r$ H
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ @% _; Y2 Q, K' |: |8 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>