【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 ^7 T, a, y/ tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 R4 V$ Z. U: s5 z5 D7 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% T) z, A: `( X; BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- R4 o6 b! h1 w* N4 ]( s' Z: xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 g5 z& b" g) A8 y. }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  D9 h/ p" q7 l$ e0 g# ]( YYou needn’t fear anything
* e. ~3 K+ |6 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 A6 Y* ?' C" o! sI really want to know just how much you love me
. ?/ N7 S$ u1 b0 p# t' CI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 Q1 D! S, b$ |+ l$ ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; N: w( ^8 ~3 tI want so much to see inside your heart
# X; _- J% p" M4 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& h  s8 D$ j' r5 p  sI’m still filled with fear
4 m$ ?4 [9 Z6 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 ]! h5 ^3 k+ v. C3 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: T% R! d$ n+ Q& XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, c  E  U3 u, P9 P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( A% j# A& v% v& \) I1 p3 d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ t% z) L6 O* D3 l' o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: ^- \; {* {1 Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# ~+ K3 e$ l8 E: e$ r! n  V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( T- f/ H- n' y& a3 B, r. k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* c3 f! `  [" N7 h3 b7 x5 K4 y# E) z! U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 P+ P2 Q. d- u; T# Z7 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 Q$ s& h# p9 H2 _4 f* a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 h6 K5 v  x, [1 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& z; S. y  z  O4 w; ?$ }" v: S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ H* \6 M! P& ?, D$ X/ k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# {- v, y6 Z8 X- @* S9 D$ B/ w# v; Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 v, a. B0 M( g7 B% I2 ^' ]$ e/ `7 X$ ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 R  B+ R5 W2 c# a) {2 e5 t( S* B7 I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! [, [0 h6 m! g3 j; w0 ?( j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* @; S) f% |4 O- d8 m* y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# [6 {5 G, z% p- {% h4 p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ w7 i( q  n, J9 d( @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 @) ~5 q9 H( A8 v8 d* \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  D: S, H1 s( R6 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 d8 J: l: t8 b& O: U. D9 c6 l, w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 b7 a$ A' j+ B3 h3 b! H1 i( P  _# @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. O% H) j( _0 g! ?0 }' u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>