【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( b; B3 \6 F/ A$ |' S! cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 ]2 B* [) A+ a; a# LThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ o0 W; o- @5 j2 n6 i" }With the moon kissing it every night
$ M0 \) r/ Q& n* e2 rSeeing the sky content with its love
- o* n  ?6 ], M& E( ~- r, A9 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 N; s4 O, Z1 ?/ Q  `You needn’t fear anything
; a/ [3 i6 q* |" S. W& QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& M: {; b: N! g9 b5 [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ O. ~, ?) M. G" `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 B5 o( ^# }7 h) Z6 w& @0 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! v& U: K' e9 I5 ~! q. w% LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 T+ \& ~. g" _0 N* ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) U7 C2 f$ q3 i* D- q- G  H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 j& @% d' S& a" {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- y; L9 y% h6 J6 g- x& q- n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 w4 b' Z, ?- P) z- q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 J; P0 Y) D/ E( c0 I$ Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 j8 P5 g* Q0 X3 E- Z" R, ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. R7 s; B! m* ~7 V9 s7 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ?4 e2 ]: y1 s7 M! E' R1 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 D4 o1 B: _( X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 X7 c0 P- C4 F. X% D7 b4 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  Q! E" W) K1 V. j5 O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 d7 F+ g) H0 h* ~& m% }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 k/ X$ |$ J6 Z. R) o( y( X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 y- [0 _- c& n$ S. W0 f! M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 j4 _: E+ K0 ~% S7 v1 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 d  l+ |9 K$ S2 Y5 f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) m' v5 d, J4 |1 M5 x  K' s9 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, p1 a, B" ?7 j3 H- _! ]/ Y7 @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( ?- ~4 a: Q: F. e% U6 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. N6 Q* r# Z/ [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 z, k7 w6 a7 c" e) O( _" V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) N, N, B0 H8 j' z' H# a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& V/ F( i3 L* |' e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 `7 U4 E6 `& q2 L- t! C4 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 C! s% ^9 {0 ]: E7 D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! Y& J* ~6 g' g. k8 k: M5 w3 T1 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* S$ b' v) h. i' J  w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 P. Y4 z3 G+ U3 w* \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; J3 [0 ?* ]; N, P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>