【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- H' g1 x! ]* d3 N! RThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 E& H5 {6 {- nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 l* A% Q/ ]% i3 a4 z5 S0 qYou needn’t fear anything
$ G- L6 z! a* d3 N! @; pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' G' V( M- a1 w# T; I- T1 DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* I2 G9 M  S9 d7 i% H& G: zI love you I love you with all my heart
4 y* o8 D0 l; R; G4 g1 M" F: oNothing can compare to my love
; I! N1 K8 M0 |- h, ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 m4 _  v" N1 U- Y8 x7 MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" }' `: w3 V+ l3 R6 _8 YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  T4 Z, T( O5 B5 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 N9 h  ]3 j8 Q# {) M( i" \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 N# t1 R5 Z: h2 c, d6 R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( e+ y3 A( M3 G* r  P8 N& W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 p3 Z+ S  ]$ Q6 C8 _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; ]5 q0 A% D4 h7 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" z. c' Y' I# U7 S# h% X2 B& @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 P, o2 X2 @7 \9 I1 B3 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: |+ j9 t' J# N( c& o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! m2 [3 ]& p! q& k  R3 g, \, O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ k# M* ^, a. o/ X+ ?  G) `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( j  `& j7 z0 Z6 N% n. j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 t5 {2 g5 S) `( M: [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 t5 ]6 P' H: N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 N1 L! b. z" u' m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) \/ L, Y; E( O' F3 f% [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 U+ ^& F  a2 A3 p  [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; [% F0 P* @. A) o7 G1 S+ d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 M0 |" X+ e+ b& q* g; s: g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# L$ k& L& J+ V0 i  ?: _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 X  |! N; t- p. T) W$ p- Z" ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! G; p3 j3 M2 n5 ?" Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 @4 k+ E0 H" w$ L3 e' s6 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! z, _4 U* v6 |4 B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ X& P$ \! a: Q7 T4 j8 Y7 j1 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; X' ]* W' j; }  Y+ B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>