【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) r+ O7 c7 t! i8 T  O9 t, j9 @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# H1 `& R+ b( v% F  K! K. M, QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, B8 w! m3 p# O' H. v: i& }The sky is happy down to its soul
  b+ d0 P: T$ N1 X/ ], `: fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  Y$ Y  I& ]- r: k7 c. W  k" C  MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, {1 V- Q8 B3 |& rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" r$ N' \! V. H1 z: cI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ H9 j% g- S/ W8 a2 II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ F4 _2 t7 T. y7 UI regret not dying
( y: l. ]2 V% @+ sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, k+ k' I0 {% O3 }& SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 j& K4 S* t* q( m, y" N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; S  d$ [  O" S6 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 }7 T- ~8 k+ q- R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& ]) P1 K* I9 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 |& y# v0 M+ t* }& H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. L) {& c0 h' {* |8 k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& g, a: V2 H& P" i$ g$ L- c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 `4 r. ~5 z1 B7 e: {! V) o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 l( i. p" F* T6 m8 s  M& C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 b7 I5 u, p. ~3 f- S$ d4 l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( L0 k* G7 h7 l" X7 u0 U: X9 H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% d  Y1 A/ S. `8 F& }0 r9 z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. `4 I3 y1 I  N0 G' ]/ V" }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ e' T5 l/ O$ c9 j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 F3 I  l' A" ]# j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" P) E6 W, Q) e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- U, u, \/ a+ U' S- D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, s2 p) f! s( U+ O2 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, p0 M& b3 R* G: h4 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% u4 D# x, o2 O! f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 A3 \: U0 c9 j/ ~+ |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  z0 h% \" v5 S2 q7 Z# n2 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  ?4 |# w1 C& o0 |! I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" Y9 B3 x6 z1 f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 {# q) `' i! M! Q% q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; P1 a. x" D; o8 U$ t( q8 o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>