【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 Z2 H) N+ B7 K7 O( k+ ^! P, CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" O+ \  h; T9 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: F' |/ s4 v# c, ^9 k; \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; }; ^& }. }$ L- ^9 _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 \. C" ~4 o; B1 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 I$ h- c5 n1 T& ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- C4 j* G. o& x( K+ nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 I# C  F) D- ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ X3 @  p+ D$ H# _: B# VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 F, ]- l- h% aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 k/ z( I5 H. t) aI’m still filled with fear
0 m! G) p& u/ b7 e; E, mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% L4 d5 T3 j& ?2 Y( V# EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 D( K) h" F2 T' Z# aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& \0 ?0 p! m2 ]% YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, [- m  S" S6 S  P+ Z- d, t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" m$ h, p, Q+ _& J) e  Z: n0 v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' P) Z3 _! p) f0 C; k/ L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 |1 m. n1 R2 A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 R% Y  {$ D, F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 |/ i$ I# B- ?4 c0 O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) \* `& F' r1 Z/ O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 s) W) p7 E  W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; N& Q/ J$ P% p( N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 s' ~0 z+ ^) O5 n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  `8 A* P3 w3 u- B, b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ n$ d  q* q$ T4 F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* J4 y  d7 r9 y6 L4 \7 P. l/ q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 n9 Q: \5 C: M7 I" L2 D4 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; x+ S+ v7 q  |5 ~% Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: l6 v  A9 L% E8 y  d4 W5 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& K1 M, {7 u6 L6 ?( J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- A8 `; N! ]- V: m3 n- a" w. j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 X5 ?3 L  C5 X" D" _. y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 K( R& ^5 `2 p% S: k3 J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" H* s  I5 [2 a' x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. }! h+ q$ u$ x, }0 j9 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 [/ K+ u: Q% g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- B6 l- b5 L7 d' c6 e; D+ U- r' y  p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 O' A! b0 M+ l! d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 Z# S( @% g; @: ?* G3 Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: u, Z6 }# J5 t- S3 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 O4 j  u/ t9 {, n, B1 S8 N+ M$ g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
3 g6 W! C* t; w; ^! e3 @  S
我请你剖开它
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5 e1 L' b% k2 K  P3 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>