【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* g2 g; n7 q% y3 {. b+ _歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) N4 y) U, _6 R1 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' ~2 o# ~7 m3 ~; z" eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. J8 i" Y8 U! r) a  n9 AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( K+ l8 }" }* b& LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 s# S+ {$ c$ l$ K) n1 X! ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 V: U! A' M$ [! O) T+ }! P6 _* UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! `' A6 t( W5 c& o9 c- C4 lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 m  \9 I; f6 a* |( vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 J9 p7 V$ [& m; G! EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) `) u% X& Q  T" oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 A1 W- H; }! h& m5 ?4 m- ZWith such a tongue as yours,
9 K' W! o5 e/ cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ e" h4 o1 P- S# j; sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' n9 n; L( G. A" V# U& y( U6 pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% K8 {3 J6 ~! i) d( A5 m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) i) f& l4 h( y/ ?' G7 Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ E! d) q5 A2 H1 N7 N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 r' V" E* z" b- A; _& Q) b2 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' V" ]. |* u, l, M! R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 c$ S$ f3 d. `. J5 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 y9 c) I0 @8 h% Q( u8 B3 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ r/ T0 K* @1 _! h( w6 c; Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 t4 M/ J4 [9 Z; p6 M/ o3 K* q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 e3 V; r3 x4 L# s- b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 }0 N" o1 p+ d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. h. v/ }& E, ?" l- _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 l- k( B/ {4 c" G& _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ C, Z$ t# e8 J- k- ~( G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 c& {. |& J3 Z8 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  X* n/ a8 S( t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ x5 w% l, f# t7 @+ |, X! t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# y  Q* p! [/ f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ o3 K( W4 {' o) t2 `4 I$ U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 Y- E+ ^* Z2 |  E7 ^6 t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ E# w7 a9 d$ C" s# h4 @" p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 c9 d6 b% {7 V: `( x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- C* w6 |& Q1 x3 N: @( X9 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 k1 O. K7 v. l# B+ [1 h9 V, E) ^( N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* d3 q$ Z( ~3 N: ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 U4 ~1 [7 Z2 W4 z) a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 ]4 F: E7 g* Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

! m  L* e* A" Z( `# F( C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- W/ p0 b7 v, |  r4 X! x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>