【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  U1 ^5 O( q$ z6 y" R歌词我附在后面。
$ v! F! k' }1 H) N! F9 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
* Q: g( y  X  a- A& FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" d3 H- @0 y$ j' p; n7 nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& P5 X* }% O7 k- Y( H. m/ K# D9 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 L& [6 y2 s$ J% D, e; c( eThe sky is happy down to its soul
( d9 G2 }+ I, f4 qWith the moon kissing it every night
( w- _  I6 K; w  z' ?1 Z! a! VSeeing the sky content with its love
! T5 X2 M9 C  z8 t% zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( @2 e! m  o# U; P+ cI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 Z3 f1 N4 c; ~) ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; R. R% [9 N8 [: z. [0 WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 B, s" ^. Q2 R# q; HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- A- j- h0 |8 X, yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, p, ~0 V: I' mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 M& l- ~$ u8 ~# ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 I6 M6 `' n  z% x# U9 R( v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ N* ]+ M2 ~8 `6 `5 r) b1 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# P0 ]: J1 Q- g3 G2 |+ s3 l6 \3 p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ B, J3 d  P% y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 ?$ B  x4 F$ K( E: h: s<P>你无需担心</P>
: s. K, h; u; B3 z' M* D$ L# N5 l0 D' n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 j6 ]3 Z* X# K  C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ `' N+ O2 X) W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  _1 ?3 L& u6 S; @% j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 O5 L0 q8 R5 K1 z, J2 n2 s5 K& N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* U, N/ n- [; z5 b& [( L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& H1 u% P5 `. [) D* b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, Z& M3 c1 L% z% l: I! q3 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- w, y% {5 n. n* b. i3 l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 u& t: v& \& f2 c! n1 P* G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! M2 ^& v- v# |3 p4 [/ e/ C$ i; U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" @: W- P7 b0 q! F( v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 s$ w; S: o: E/ r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 W8 n& v& i5 f+ l+ ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 ]6 P: O4 x# I3 @$ H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  W# c5 j7 o# i2 h/ y$ W6 I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- q7 b! ?/ q. ^- f# b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 d& @! N3 q# @1 a; I3 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 q0 [2 ]/ `4 F, _' p% s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 E  ^9 H2 M6 o) e* R2 g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 e2 M" A" b: _; D+ a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>