【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ `& R. V9 l! t3 G# L( l4 B8 |  H歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: J* H( ^- l# nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; `+ c1 Z) K4 w* dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" c! q, }7 L0 R  m5 n6 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
) L8 Q) I3 Y! v8 IWith the moon kissing it every night
& t* Y7 T& B& i/ SSeeing the sky content with its love
0 `2 c9 w+ k2 _) x: A; TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ P. V3 H- V8 l. t7 J5 pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: @* L- L# T; CI really want to know just how much you love me
* D$ f$ T* w; q4 GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 ~5 O' [" r: `8 }3 R% d$ vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- @( e! b; n: Z1 N3 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 G5 F% V3 c) T' f1 r0 a4 t! q+ LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& e9 S* s- w7 s6 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  A' k; M- g. H" w& y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ S; z5 S1 p8 g( h1 @% b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( ~0 I, }" b" b6 \* |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) C0 r; z) @0 _% n4 {+ }3 M+ o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 M" n4 V, x0 ]2 p$ r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, |! s) e/ b7 C+ {: r. e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% L3 ~% o7 v; |8 _4 O3 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' X& r7 ]) x4 p8 }  N' F" A1 `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  D: ^% }2 L$ G# }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# W$ J0 \9 x6 t/ B6 W1 X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 i* |% N3 K  M2 s! o% H9 W0 k<P>你无需担心</P>
0 s; e) Q$ E2 o: {& m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 D2 V, j1 X8 A5 B- w- e. R0 v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 c# n7 [" K! e8 n! l& B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 n  C3 S( F1 I5 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 ]7 V1 T- ?7 X7 n% y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% }5 |! B1 X1 Q& U+ S( s4 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! d  l$ o" C; z4 a0 v+ l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% X0 J2 }/ E- `( Q/ s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* _3 O" A# n' D& |% F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- [! n' W: h) _( J6 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 i/ h6 V+ m6 R" d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ \5 o8 f7 |2 Y' \5 h; X* |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 D; p) r2 w3 C: M( W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 Z8 u6 h+ e3 K& b  G( Y& K: g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ p) ]* L5 P: A  ^! Y$ F  w  q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 q3 R2 Z% `7 B4 l# F& |6 D; |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 ^8 @, N- K1 s6 \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& r' L( ?$ K1 }8 M( r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( j+ h+ x5 z& ?! x1 j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

6 k0 m- E8 E* P' x  `) b# c! x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>