【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% g( X6 l3 k, V+ OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' R1 [  f: I; N6 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% A9 o# C4 L4 f" g5 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 C# J  m$ d7 x& ^3 f+ dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 ~# d7 \- T% }+ bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! u; y1 J2 W- d# A/ r- m! NYou needn’t fear anything
2 S1 }, L4 F+ {. ?$ oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- u8 T( |% ?: {& J0 S& s- pEvery other word you utter is love
8 i! H% I4 A# f$ E) AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ M1 K. C  m# X" f! K" {+ ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 X- t' y( v) SI regret not dying
9 @0 j( b# o. U% I, Y' xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  Z5 p8 f5 ]* ~0 k- }7 }- _; h) U; qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ K" i( {6 N, L5 U1 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 o% @+ S8 }# T# u! I( D' R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 F0 x% C  m, w) R6 y5 x' O( n7 U3 o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. F1 @# V( p3 k1 j# d6 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# a. |& J* ]3 r6 b& ?; V' W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 n& h& S$ G# Q# n; V2 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- v6 b3 G6 `- L, y$ G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# y3 v# m: }9 g" a! i3 M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, R7 t" d% z" k9 W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# @/ y9 F. ^2 D) b) Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, a3 T/ z- a6 U$ M! ]& U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- p& z2 c# |4 K7 u; C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 ~* R/ H' c" ~* E8 d1 Y& L1 F: w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& N* @; J4 J" z1 Z8 k# h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% [1 v4 G4 ~, X& p* u. }<P>你无需担心</P>
0 X! K. E- C; t1 ^" s7 r# l/ s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& I. q7 D- z# l2 k- [) t% d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 }; F$ m/ w, ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 [0 R/ ~3 n: {: m& u$ }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ n$ H9 J! N+ h2 P/ g% v8 c4 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* |8 R) V; ~# i- s1 `# b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& H# F0 r4 t, w" B" V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 J% [/ l7 Y9 D. x1 e( }/ T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 }6 M! m+ ]. k1 q" \: O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ O2 [7 M. @" ]: U+ b3 x5 X% J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# ^6 P/ b) ?! r7 Q$ h. q# i( M6 E$ e9 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 @! p% Y# m+ q9 [# ]  N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 \+ l/ ?' f! T+ D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: a5 h( n  a  u, S; l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 K3 k! O) [" G# `2 {* e# |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 q; A8 A! N. `  t/ ^& F7 Z; T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 i( w' A8 f9 D. m我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>