【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 j- L7 N0 D2 y  \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, M8 i7 I  y! w- P/ P# {0 ?7 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 [% L7 F  u) f% Y7 r) O- nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- S% \! I" s# |3 J; a: r( pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 t( l( k: A" l. e$ QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- C- g3 F6 ^& C, RI really want to know just how much you love me
, n$ o4 p" Q* E1 C- E1 qI love you I love you with all my heart
7 k# R# k5 |5 t+ ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 V9 [/ o0 N& }. r# Q, e; cI want so much to see inside your heart
; W" s3 B' z) R& r5 E7 K( PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 j7 ]0 ~8 r* F7 b6 [: N( pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  F1 i; k" ~# u) A7 [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. ~( b4 z% @$ G" k/ E) d1 TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 C3 {; H- R$ T- A* E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 ]& G: C- h! n) |% E" C  r$ K3 K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 Y! B0 c, H  v# S3 N0 g3 S. Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, k, \- _% D& r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 y& y4 `0 N6 m) h' U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 C  w2 J5 G4 n, }: d, U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ z) K& j+ B& C" [2 M  }' @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ ~: K8 b' m. H6 ^( _: D5 w/ G9 ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 h) l! |# E( H/ {1 v' r* r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" E( N/ d# o  `; N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% }2 {  n" Y& q2 }: b- r/ j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 j% y7 I) \. t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! p; F/ i; w! C& x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% a; A# X& O& b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. R3 {) C$ s" |) h1 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, G$ G$ i3 l; e( m8 k) ~7 B2 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 e% l4 H* D- c: S9 n; f2 t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  f/ P+ @9 Q. ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' }4 {  p7 X+ [8 \7 W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) r. G/ d9 X) n; k. ?# P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 ~. }. q: ~6 e3 \1 l- m  a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# F1 k+ a9 f3 G) U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# A" r/ T) ^1 {( [: Q% z3 L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 G! j4 ~; c0 l  U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 u" \4 [( Y5 X! Q" D  K: |1 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. a  I# E: q$ J* {$ |! X, d9 Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# O. P6 E# ]+ x+ E+ J" u& K( e$ k1 }3 _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. a7 M4 M. M5 W: x& k  S- @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- k0 K3 w8 c* W; }& l+ F7 }' m: C+ w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ L# l: y2 H  O: c5 [1 Y* m) Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
3 e& O) I% r2 O
我请你剖开它
8 _, s2 P  {/ d
" [2 B" x8 ~8 z* u' l  n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ K' V8 ^7 Y: j9 P: K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>