【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 U& U7 P/ J5 Q) {The sky is happy down to its soul
9 ]- c4 P2 T5 D# I$ m9 ~) rWith the moon kissing it every night
& q# ]" q, ^1 U1 v2 R$ u8 SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- D# ~' z2 Z2 z' n4 Y9 QYou needn’t fear anything
; Z/ g: x) ~" p" t7 m; j$ ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 Y) f4 l% C" J8 ~3 f, WI love you I love you with all my heart
/ A  r' |) w5 H7 x. n6 T" INothing can compare to my love
% ]. V. \6 o0 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 }! a* b9 _. |) @3 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' m' i0 U$ O3 ]0 S# WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; j' \2 W, @! l. T! }( k7 p) a5 JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 Z. `( F+ c/ Z! Z! UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ ^' _7 c" z% `1 ^4 }) W. |/ x. h+ hWith such a tongue as yours,
& Z4 q8 c+ }. _  W# M8 a% b6 J, [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% g! p8 h* N/ {) f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; q2 U5 Q9 F( r" G( y9 m% E$ q( p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 u8 ]7 \& m: z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' {% f* c5 C/ n8 n  O6 T- _4 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# o) B, u9 s# Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! S$ e' q5 l/ c0 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 i7 H* o- j- j0 I9 ?& ], s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 A- t6 X$ x6 y8 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, b* e! w+ z2 _; I( _1 c" p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( ?# D% i! b7 K1 c) B) m7 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- G: |3 W6 x' k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ s9 v# F3 [0 ~8 x( ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 l. L7 ]8 k$ }/ Z; e( N5 z! h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 S7 Y* i0 l3 U, m1 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ [  d5 ^- r8 @* R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! s7 p; I* a+ z7 L+ v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ ]" \- H. J' E6 F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* p- S  T. H0 C2 H& D$ Y! o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& g! e! K5 V1 L* U) H  T4 i5 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 c5 e+ N3 M5 ^/ Y$ o" i: G& k2 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 q: z3 n& }. l1 _4 i$ I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; l( t8 j" B0 O" g1 ^8 s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: v* K& I2 N. X8 |3 a) L. }<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ ]# X- S" M' W9 j; y5 Q% q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ ^8 z; M3 }4 f$ @1 F; M+ o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# J6 S- l8 `- j; P1 b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! o: f" e1 H8 a" g  W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; U+ L/ g8 [" P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 j- q# i4 b9 r# |/ ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

" Y7 T7 N8 R$ n3 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>