【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: h& d2 m) T0 F/ h5 @8 g7 y# n& kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 Q4 e. L6 z8 z! H9 c+ LThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 h8 m' s' e- G8 a( a7 NWith the moon kissing it every night
- z* Y  J! r; ]. o9 ^% Y3 ?Seeing the sky content with its love
1 [" M+ |: ?0 C$ CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 w' N7 F" k: _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ n' z3 G) {, \. X" s& _8 b- FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ Z$ V3 w  m2 _$ f7 \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) [# w) _! F  e5 l/ A# r6 w  aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! I1 z% x$ V1 {0 r; jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 P% L9 F: G, P8 v0 J" G4 H& tI regret not dying
1 x4 F/ U% {( a0 C; Y4 W8 Y* R" eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 L+ e2 B! O- T- _  z5 N5 ^With such a tongue as yours,
" [6 c! Q' S- }( kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' ~* X8 _4 H/ o* k1 K9 xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# L2 d. n' V. A+ O* v4 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, I9 }- h2 V' Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ c/ V1 P/ D: t# B9 @& [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( S" p" O$ |# G/ k2 ]7 A& j0 k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 [9 O1 `. k; g4 S7 o9 @1 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 d% E! K4 D! P9 t9 V' u! `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* u5 o% X5 Y6 Q4 s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% r& R7 A& A6 e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# m- c- T3 r+ p( V- T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ `0 U  m" _4 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# j5 \/ ~, G7 p$ [% d  ^! ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: E) b% k$ w6 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  L: h# W3 D7 W, C1 r' j9 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ D! u& {/ F" }) h; ~0 c7 _5 D1 \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, V, V. D( N  @/ P( [# _- h. p0 T; U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 ~' N! u8 T! {  V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: b2 q. E$ g% ]: u! Z1 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! q0 ~( S8 v1 P( t4 g* R+ h* P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 y* ?% ^0 y) X4 @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# H5 Z/ t4 t* h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. o& b' A% X+ l/ M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' l( Y( Q! q; l* H3 u! c% H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 m4 J6 v: X" R% p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: P% w" M( n9 t. C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! P! D( b' ^6 u+ K0 i  k( m% o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- J/ j! t( l* O9 a& {<P>I regret not dying</P>
  O+ m& J- l3 H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 ?! r4 V4 Y: t: t6 S2 R3 S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( o9 ^) Z! s. _) G6 |3 K- [  `& u7 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 y7 y" W# k: {3 n2 X) J8 m8 s1 H, V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- @% n0 _6 m* u2 S% `+ V) \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 b5 W1 i* h7 P& _: J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  z, s4 H8 c5 T! q% W& N* i3 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ V. e" o0 c  _+ \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ v* [; G, h0 v5 N! n: @5 E( }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& J+ ^, d1 V- X6 ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# a# Z$ z  U/ t7 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>