【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: B9 }1 m: ?0 v/ GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* o1 f! Q" C: O) A0 q& E7 g3 UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 K9 G3 G4 I$ A. ?5 k/ QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 Q+ X3 r3 N, s" h* @' P% Q* I. N- ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 r  g9 k& B* AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: Y* l  T3 q+ U& xI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. R, F! ]- Y! S& y: D. C  ANothing can compare to my love
, n, n2 L# t; \: v2 n7 Q$ c' gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, p5 F  U" d9 U* G8 C; e/ L( RI want so much to see inside your heart
2 d# a, I, X1 V2 ?+ T4 v. FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 G" n; S' s7 }, J; T& E1 X& {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 b3 a+ C4 `3 l0 _5 m& y4 PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" d% U; z  ]. m$ N1 U! p" r4 OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 {: `7 j! \- a8 V8 b2 h) N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! ]4 G: J9 W& L" x0 k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; Q5 \# {% S' u& E* w9 b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) E( g; ~0 j& {7 r: q% [- Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: B' ~. k: [9 v) a5 d' [; X( u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 x% E" D7 K4 r! D3 h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; U( a1 ~# J8 R- V) m8 r6 W; X8 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ X! W' X- y5 V3 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" x* w6 G5 z- q8 `% D& _$ U+ J1 j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* M# f: |- o6 K4 r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 ?" |6 p+ \7 w5 ], [" d! Z# B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 _* z0 R5 g: |7 x; \8 f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( ^) l  z0 Y; j3 x3 ]3 r$ f  G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 j$ q+ B1 x$ Q) c9 H" i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 G  \) j: _. t. T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' v& ]7 k7 i$ r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- t. e4 D1 E/ c: \( Z) F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# |5 g: a- W+ B! }% o7 p$ P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 t+ R7 Q1 o% y& v: P& ^* A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ W5 G! x9 ~+ ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 T" E* K# T5 E! s! u- u9 q2 Q; L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ g1 h+ m* W7 y) W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, s. u7 i! G  w) F+ k) C/ H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 q" W2 j) W: Z5 s; e$ @" A& L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 `2 |/ N6 e5 a' \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( h' M, u( H) N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 S: t9 T. S" |- v$ W4 O* I<P>I regret not dying</P>
% @2 X9 b* {# W2 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: }& k- b- _# i9 t% l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% p1 d1 j" e: q  \! C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ [2 u. ?6 V2 t8 _& J6 [7 f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>