【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 s- v  w9 o- q0 u; PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ a( l/ q) F( z" J. I8 F1 ]& O# A) gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! `  D  e1 u2 U# N/ YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) u: t, s  Y# ^1 X/ ?$ Z- PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- G6 |8 _$ J& S# u* \% {9 YYou needn’t fear anything
% a8 Y/ Y$ O9 M2 [: jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 T0 |8 @$ h+ ?I really want to know just how much you love me
' p0 w  e( M3 R- l+ @I love you I love you with all my heart
5 c/ o* E! v, d1 m' K3 hNothing can compare to my love
1 I; u+ R; Y0 S: sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 D( A0 G5 C9 m' l+ |I want so much to see inside your heart
* ]* s( M/ j9 @) g$ ~" i2 S: ?; I/ VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 T+ X& W. i! y; |& QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- ?# ]+ R4 J, k# w$ @4 KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% ]) D2 G2 i+ E6 ]4 k5 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 q+ k/ W; w- d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" L1 d- F" W9 Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" R% o4 ^' o1 s! Q  y" E; R# r* H+ Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( q; D1 s, I0 x& J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. c5 g  N) w$ {( }0 D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 R$ J/ H& l* H8 c, h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& i5 e6 ?; m/ }: _' S9 H* [$ d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ }0 T3 ~8 Q5 I/ q2 q; N1 }% ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ g) p2 P( {2 h# w& S8 w) g' N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 l# {: W# O& e, ~: V- y  u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) x- a/ l: A+ s( Q! o+ T2 [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 `, w6 b+ ?5 [3 y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* Q) L* d: d0 C7 O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 |# d; J5 M. ?& D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! B2 t1 X9 _; S6 e+ F6 O# Q' `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' q: e- D5 n9 ]. u' Z1 [7 b( K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% `- y% o  u2 B0 w$ M, v( `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; w) B" ?2 A8 V/ U. `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  u$ W% g7 L: \* y9 S( \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 H: C4 P4 _8 f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 U) b( U5 y; z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 H6 Q) ]3 y: |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- H7 F$ J  Y+ B/ `- \1 t8 t; r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>