【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 F  Q3 E4 Q' _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. k2 V* y" U6 I9 a" }0 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! K2 \1 g$ `$ \8 s( ]: PSeeing the sky content with its love
& w' Z2 W2 c/ J& l- PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" E- ]6 P" p1 RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; ~: w$ @0 T6 A. w+ `I really want to know just how much you love me
1 k7 @; \8 @8 ~$ II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 o) w+ j% A+ J* k# VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 `1 c7 A* m% U/ w$ a6 p/ J+ ]I want so much to see inside your heart
4 H% R/ ]7 p( p; Y, e) h1 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 R% @$ J0 M* E  v. J5 v) v: R' cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: g# z" A' v! W3 T8 y! Y) ]3 _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( J7 l8 r) I5 NWith such a tongue as yours,
! Y, {; g- `8 R. R' K, VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 b& `% @3 Q6 ?6 o0 p4 [+ s) y2 LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 T4 r7 T* |1 ^1 i& o& t8 _/ U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 ~7 n; w' ^# k% k5 g4 Q3 @* e9 d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 S% o6 s- i  q$ Z  D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) K5 u+ o9 |! R6 A. N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" o8 Y  |& Z; V$ a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. R4 h+ p3 s3 T' Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 Y7 t  y( W$ v# }5 |7 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 B" ^6 f. Z: p' W7 g/ |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, _; C# j( l: N6 |# `: V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; q3 U- O/ |( `3 W3 t% G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- v" K  v& S  c! l<P>你无需担心</P>
5 Q7 N1 H" v9 z$ D9 R) ?, R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  O- C( {* F1 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ I- M; n& c) \. _: d- C- T( V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. C, t/ r9 v) s- [% ]0 L. G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ g$ @! u( E0 s2 p7 i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 H7 z! n5 l1 M' p9 \5 h) [" ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& j0 h, {9 D2 k& J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; y0 G" ]4 }; _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ B8 E+ j: M5 x( c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  [1 h2 A/ K7 m% u: F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, v$ f' V% o& j$ e' j5 [4 {* h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 ]  V4 D7 [% ?' F" ?( B+ q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  K# d+ g6 }5 m) x& I# e9 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 T$ Y0 Y% O8 }% U) }5 ?3 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 U/ N9 y! L4 {7 U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! s8 X  O* N8 A1 ]+ M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" u: z6 |- P- Z6 h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( F8 w# }4 Z! S2 e+ h! P5 P9 a" E' Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% [7 y& n3 k; i/ z% i& B! n5 p- O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# U3 v0 G9 z, \9 n! s) Y: ], ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" k+ C; Z; I8 l* w7 N& _我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>