【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 d) G  l1 w4 Z8 q; U' C/ rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 v+ ?& T6 B& ^" k+ O# XWith the moon kissing it every night
9 F& D+ O. J, U. X8 [Seeing the sky content with its love
" H) @% M2 `) a! k4 l$ ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( Z/ F) \" h& I) ^6 k9 A( V# uYou needn’t fear anything
, [  T( i% Z- W; q3 i" v+ UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 I' \6 K* ^1 C/ t7 s$ w  |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) V; Q# _" I4 l& x4 [! z7 HNothing can compare to my love
% ?# V! ~) Y4 I$ b3 a0 [+ P8 ~7 ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ n5 W9 Q* H+ f9 @8 ]With such a tongue as yours,
0 E4 i( _& X1 m& LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 I  ]" y/ G" H! K9 L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 P* Y% ?( B2 B7 }- u/ ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- g# v) H6 Q( P% ^' B- `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* G+ d* H+ s: w; `& G3 j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" ]( b2 {' O7 a& b7 }9 b& V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 p, U9 I- J! m* s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ p! r( |/ ]% a1 g# ~* Y# O3 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 n! |2 t: s0 x# k2 T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 |( Q9 p- k$ H: \3 k9 S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 W- o" P0 m$ ?  V7 x<P>你无需担心</P>
" r) V) S  e! {4 [: D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 p$ H( }* L# l9 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& F- L- [$ {; Q: {8 T0 b) u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; Q6 D  K; |) B; @& G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 E% e% V8 G$ J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 w4 t8 Q, t; k' i* v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  n5 W0 B( M! h/ z6 c% j% F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) ^: @2 Q+ r' r9 y, p: K, y+ X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; x6 b& M" Q/ P3 h' H/ b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% i  o, E: p: Y2 ~" G' z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 ]  Y" y+ j# a' ^; E3 l6 W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 a" m+ f* n8 C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: Y1 g9 p' A6 s7 b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( g# J5 l* h- r+ w% t; P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
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8 X0 s+ R7 `2 H1 K2 `/ X1 A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ l- A3 t5 ~7 b- h3 P5 W4 B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( o5 Y0 ~( {' G) Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 z- v0 S4 E5 \8 I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 q' W: T; L  h) L( o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

: L, p* w- i% O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 [* P, h' L+ D$ y* J7 O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>