【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( E5 M" S! [+ C8 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 b0 X: i! Z- \/ |6 E! jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 {5 y: Q$ O+ E+ Z" f9 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, T( H, X1 p6 A" @) MThe sky is happy down to its soul
, y& ^) F4 N, j. A$ n+ i' GWith the moon kissing it every night
- B8 v2 B- K9 Y% |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 r  ]( [7 P2 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 h& F- V2 f9 f# K" PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ C+ Q2 ?" j6 I( Y! NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 Q$ q; }7 k/ b$ F! U* r9 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* z8 ^4 O/ }! E* s5 `7 \! ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 ^# k3 {* t: ^' J* R( X2 e$ x% V4 gWith such a tongue as yours,
) q1 r. ?2 p% \* P: J2 Z3 f! RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  b' P8 I3 H# e! m4 G7 f* yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% K' y+ [, O$ o& X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! ?( T; U3 o$ r$ B! q/ W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: G) O) o9 z# D/ {1 ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  t* D$ f$ C" q: l' b! B4 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* U7 i. k& v3 C5 t: b7 w$ T+ K9 `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 i2 m' ~& y' v% ]3 R3 s, l8 U4 _" E! M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 {$ N( r' p. Z  W( x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" x; f2 _( V$ x: A" K! I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 b- e' X1 ^& M0 E$ a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 T( H/ |" _7 b, I4 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 ~  u' e6 m6 r0 J: _, V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# n7 x- c: m% ?9 M* b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  T% Z8 B2 o0 A, k- e& K0 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ @" `1 \" \! ~8 v( N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  l( M5 @" c0 K5 b% m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 Y# `  ?' J* Y6 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 v) Y* @, d# ~" C$ _- @' |! a$ K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 Q# ^" g9 Z+ T( U$ @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( E* R" t, l. N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 J  g" h  O" @  L, \% O1 ?# U: S- d<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 I! o0 |) F6 m1 v' h4 O0 u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  q( s1 m" e, Y% e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) A" Y; N& r/ r2 d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  j$ `5 \; l2 R6 M- \8 q; r1 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 D6 e. _( j/ m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* m$ N& N: [" Z. i4 D$ P我请你剖开它
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# O8 F8 _7 O' h5 X9 `) M+ e! _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>