【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- h+ B3 O* y) wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ L7 o, ^( a! V/ P8 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ R9 i* k  W0 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 \( I& T# `; b9 V! UWith the moon kissing it every night
9 k2 O- V* H" N6 `( J5 L" BSeeing the sky content with its love
- r/ A9 ?' h: L+ w$ K5 P3 xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- Y- ^2 z) U$ M! F* AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 _4 }$ \; @% _: XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, ~5 l( l% u- X$ H2 O" yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 z$ A+ N2 _1 R9 p" C0 h) f: z' q  nI want so much to see inside your heart
, i- n* V0 @" d2 }% H* o# p+ |3 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 v! M( J; E! iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; z6 m% r* l/ u7 t1 B5 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" a; W( Z) x/ z6 R/ \) d' |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 l& J3 W  F' xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 `2 Z6 \- c9 C* {5 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 i3 U4 s$ q9 ?( o5 B* r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, v2 m. q- A9 W+ ^2 J. a; z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; a. u$ c4 U- ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* K4 h$ N+ X* O" ^8 j' P  N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 v- s6 P7 a5 k6 \7 S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! M  A2 |) J+ {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# W# [- R+ R- z9 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 g. O, Y3 Z; q<P>你无需担心</P>
; F. S/ T* v% ^6 g' d- }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- b- {+ O5 F9 E& u' S+ P: E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) V$ O. V. t" S$ {7 X) _% Q1 V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  F( I: L: n0 c/ {& U& }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( ^7 X% A% l7 i0 Y: o0 p, `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 v" Z9 C/ M& q( v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% E1 B  L9 `1 `! a& u$ j* s9 d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) q& ^5 y* o4 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 Q/ V0 W# P, t1 n% A) \  x6 h' X& {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 y0 j+ d- B& N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 _% i$ K+ n, x8 p8 f/ p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* ~, y( y6 W- T/ U8 q2 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, Q/ Q9 Y, @* r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% m5 C/ E7 C2 K) N: s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 A) c5 ~/ e6 J: W) a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 g4 I' A2 S) m+ Y9 r+ s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- V2 u4 K2 S+ E5 i. z! i5 M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 G* l0 o2 @3 X9 |) k) k' K  N% q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 I2 d; [# s8 I% H; P& z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ v$ B* l7 V8 J! o: q6 g0 D5 W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) v/ M2 T9 `# G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>