【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; q' e- {0 E; Q3 }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 _! `( A2 [& h# @7 X  o1 T0 j8 a7 nWith the moon kissing it every night
% z4 F+ y) p( z( ]+ dSeeing the sky content with its love
. H0 J. C( `) p3 F1 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 p/ K9 |' @. k- yYou needn’t fear anything
! q; k: O; }# R' T( m/ j. E) Q1 X3 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 M9 j: u. r, n( {Nothing can compare to my love
: V, P; x$ ?; X. bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& V3 x7 _* q5 U2 Y) m, oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 h4 _7 S2 v$ s( ]8 A2 ]# ?I’m still filled with fear
- c4 M5 B9 h4 k: O2 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: Q5 [8 `: h% Q  f1 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  g* W) ?, B; H; [: P/ \( W) bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 o3 Y5 @( A3 x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 f$ [. t* U  P2 _5 V$ t/ |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# g, I2 }4 c+ P1 e  F: Y& p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( D. A) v. [6 b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 Z) [" n  C$ y4 g4 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 F% {1 y- m0 }! O6 N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- i/ ?( t5 v, @3 t* J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! B! t* x. ~! T' H6 A5 p: v<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# U0 F; g" v# `2 o( h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 d" z9 q: ]/ }9 l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; m0 s6 d" O  |: S$ I# {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, F% _8 z" `/ y- A. C: i% q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: [' N# W/ A0 U% z! S, w+ `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ x( W- V( V6 H) {: T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. J! }$ ?  J+ a9 n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& [" \( M9 ?" y' W. R, U% H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! W# {4 W1 n9 z% H$ j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) f4 s. A' I; w/ }/ e/ `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ Q: V# c. a% C- k- z1 d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! J$ }. }0 E) Y) ^) t3 Y. O$ Y7 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. \5 Z! o4 o& l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 M& A; b7 F: e- r$ O8 U) p7 {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 ?# X3 p7 [( c4 `$ Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, B, p4 a# x" U/ R9 h# b& P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. n5 @2 c0 i$ i( O/ T% _) q% X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 ]( r, y' V. M; o. H& _. M6 H2 c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( _4 I$ K5 A1 o; ^+ D我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ ?: T) _0 n; T- g, c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>