【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 \; L* v8 ^9 T$ C- u+ V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) C- O7 g; d' w  SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( _- d, E; @: t3 L8 b; B; J  KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 Z& h% C" k2 Z. GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 z# _* ~2 G' ]" d2 u0 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 ]$ c% O7 p. c% fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* G+ h4 ]$ a0 g  HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 n6 W6 F! b! FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 m( q- p1 c2 X2 i4 E/ B6 q& }I want so much to see inside your heart
! j: x' m$ T3 l& c* Q$ H) M- rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: a" q7 J0 F2 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 [+ E- u$ |. O/ I' VI regret not dying
- z( C$ W0 G1 {  r: v. AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ _6 T) j5 w! U% hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 Q! O( F& n% ]% M0 I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 h) x1 P; m, w" ]8 m+ P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, z5 s9 Q4 q3 s( z1 p+ B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 q& R# u$ Y8 O9 L9 i2 s* z" }* y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: a% o) |- U/ g5 t! P8 L/ C# R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 g. o( z+ z2 p% v' A* l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 y; s+ w. c: E! O' }+ _. K# m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% i# O4 A4 d  h% T8 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 \; O! `+ M7 \: S# z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  \4 B+ W, l. ?& I2 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: x9 E7 `) t0 W, r* y8 N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, `3 \7 R1 [% @; V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; a* t9 d7 C+ u6 _' A( T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% Y4 z! K5 m0 b* L# |$ l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. ]* p6 X8 n9 R, K2 u. W7 f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" @: }  Y- j( ]8 I2 S7 m) R$ u* e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 t2 c/ y1 ?* n& D/ c( I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  |8 y' D/ W/ m$ o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 o) G7 `% ]2 D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: g  u; F% ^/ S8 O& A1 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 r  A! H9 v0 Y) L; H+ P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% X( D! D2 J+ B! M4 }6 ?' r% J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- q! G; y$ V: ]: D7 B# {4 q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 @) H! f5 D5 n5 o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- |0 V( v7 ^$ K7 U, d0 g<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 D; m0 y0 j8 M% W( |) s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ b1 B6 C2 g" t1 d0 ^2 w  y4 r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 C) S; O9 k# R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 X! t& R8 i7 Z2 B3 Y3 Q) j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  {( E# |0 T& B3 g! Z( ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 J; O; _6 g2 f. t' w" d+ N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: e$ z) t8 k8 b. M# R$ z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 y1 C6 j4 V0 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. F# T% r5 _7 k- |( j! j; g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>