【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ j% c7 W6 n1 K3 m- [% k7 |歌词我附在后面。
% ]  Q7 O# g* `* f  s% J2 v8 A9 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 P6 a, Z% M( g# I: ]! yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( I( {) o$ y/ I2 A- T5 B3 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* q6 O9 J5 H  j( XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& \0 W  A8 [) m5 h) w2 @Seeing the sky content with its love
# p2 V) J' [* j3 a6 NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 P1 E- p4 U* B( A1 I/ }8 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& D( }8 S' j- YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* |% {. `) O% pI love you I love you with all my heart
" ^  K! e% C: Q: ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 h4 F5 }( y6 f2 ?% j+ |1 \0 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 j9 J! Y  H( g. D3 x0 RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 k4 l0 c: S+ l9 J: }I’m still filled with fear
1 C8 Y# M; _4 @# D4 I& H8 j' {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; b. T$ {8 k% W. hI regret not dying
, I& N* ?* b9 _! \' ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* F1 a$ |& Y- G' }  f  xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- k2 s3 T# M1 ], h9 `* d7 m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 v+ a$ ?8 c/ q4 y+ k: H' Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 Z# t% O9 `+ x1 ]4 ]& N0 W: B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ z) T* p% P3 o# [5 ], \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 j( n2 G' W. d# C3 `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 Y! k+ A# R9 t9 j7 m6 q) v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ U& F; N2 `* x4 i9 o: r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* t, T) V* `# K0 w4 q  X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 m4 D0 u. P- H6 U' W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ R) ^/ Z4 p, _" m, `<P>你无需担心</P>
3 J/ e. x8 E/ R  U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: P4 ?5 `0 E. y3 u- O" @. C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ T! n7 ?3 _. S: A& @/ L6 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  m- j3 f: e. I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 w0 B8 \- J% Z! r% I5 U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 @9 f. o3 B- f3 |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 B/ q) w0 v9 K8 e8 I2 N# I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; Q: N0 s9 p( ]. v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* z1 }6 s1 ]1 |: i5 w9 G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- F  z9 A, @3 T1 ?9 ~" S7 |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- U# F. L7 T# Q. D8 q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% N( H+ ^) Q. u2 t! {5 {4 E8 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ W# U' G" k4 L8 r5 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& K( T3 Q9 ^4 p3 x' x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 }. Q" y- I/ k1 X. T. t2 u0 ^( j  `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ k% V. u6 X; j4 ?( w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 _7 _5 k1 O8 l7 Z+ q3 l- a1 M$ t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 Y6 o( a9 J% I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& V- q$ b4 @1 ]; K3 A: I1 z* q, u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' u, i$ I0 G% S% ~) C6 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" h' h& c8 _6 v+ l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 l. E7 Z9 ?' q- M* z1 G) H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 G$ |! h0 o1 ]0 i" o. E) H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( @  ~$ g: ?' W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ d. g" e! I7 w5 T0 y; L2 b, V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 R& P$ n% r( K" R  A我请你剖开它
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7 x$ T( ^: [/ y0 `% w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' u! o+ _$ V% d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>