【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: O5 M, G/ p/ p5 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 e3 z; P) i( U' rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 m: K0 [+ D( J. {% ~" @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ N6 G" K; ?0 I; ^1 S6 nThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 r' G4 u* s2 _- z6 e. ?* A7 O6 aWith the moon kissing it every night
" N! I2 \& G; g' O0 H7 c2 |Seeing the sky content with its love
- f! j: V6 p2 F& i3 d+ }/ j  }  FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 X7 S  g! B. b( D! K0 Q( TYou needn’t fear anything
4 ?0 W& C* p" g+ ?7 H; b, dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, v, r) D, Z  S. W- b/ bEvery other word you utter is love
' O5 b% ~) |- ]I really want to know just how much you love me
$ B. O3 x6 G, l9 R- M8 g( Y8 ~I love you I love you with all my heart
' `- Y- k; p" X% n/ gNothing can compare to my love
9 B4 U: W8 ~( l2 N0 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* d3 M1 i2 H9 l4 V, ^# bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, g" \, z8 k  v8 O& W; `+ gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ H+ m, Y7 Z/ yI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- a5 L* a. ^8 _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 P# c8 }" p' NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) K4 w* D9 S0 g1 nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 C5 i/ o. r& C3 D2 e7 O; [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* z5 K! ?, X3 X9 x, z5 O" t- a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; n( s9 N# P$ Q& D" C# |/ l. h$ ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ [# w- M5 B* M' o/ T9 s# P, L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 _' E9 x$ ]" Y) ^0 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 H, X5 {/ t# P8 ^- H% B. S% M# n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' {& a# n' W8 |  \1 S& |- }  I5 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% t8 P2 p3 w; @3 J6 l' d; p5 f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' ^  I6 E8 W0 f, ?+ I: ?7 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# G3 F4 X+ F% u$ p. |& [$ {+ ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, r9 O: j6 ~' d: ^; y/ W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' g. x0 k. P1 }6 V) r' t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% M% z6 t! G- f1 @: ^/ o. e2 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 X& x% L$ C) v# Q& g; F9 I7 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, N7 I( z) ]. U  z" B! N2 Q" o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 G; j$ Q8 A4 A<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 N  |2 |0 B% @0 ^; u# x& N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* Z! N' O5 ?5 J! X' H! J9 P3 h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* U6 J& m7 c- g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 F* O# [4 D! m% t! Z; D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" B8 ]5 t/ w( _0 T' J4 X6 M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 t; F* `; i1 l# j( S% V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 P/ U6 Y. ]% D4 {$ p. v6 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ t4 ^9 O4 `- M3 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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+ q3 d& n  h& u6 q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 D6 r, }0 _9 N( k0 E# ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>