【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# q+ x* a# I8 w; r歌词我附在后面。
# I. G  Z. C* D& S7 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- c1 t) y8 p6 r2 J' C+ ]7 vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* g" k' Y+ |4 }( C' sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' M; J7 Z- F$ Y$ r/ X0 Q: X: rThe sky is happy down to its soul
; I, c0 }7 [* o% x1 i2 ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ a& p4 s. V7 @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) m# y2 R2 k" N. ]+ u8 g, h- [4 lYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) r, A: [8 w, F; u, E! |I really want to know just how much you love me
& U" J4 P+ K# C( F* @0 bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 C0 Y; n/ v. x& ]I want so much to see inside your heart
$ H. D$ N3 }0 ?: EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# |& b  V& G1 [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 }- m; Z, A( f9 x( B, EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 i5 j3 _; v) T  K# {6 M1 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ z9 U# E) l) |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- Y( ?$ `7 ?4 z1 {9 g6 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) p7 N+ s1 P9 ^$ b$ u# L1 x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' Y: L7 g8 g5 i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 W3 |. E2 L. k6 P: u- L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 K3 v0 S7 D9 G' H- h! O6 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ r6 I/ R- s2 r3 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 c  T6 ^1 \1 E9 I1 l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. m; B0 V" ]) F, c8 d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) t6 n# Q0 I: |7 k  W7 ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% Y  L+ [( |5 |" }& |/ v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! E' E7 P  E3 Z2 ~, |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ w9 p: Q1 \* W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 T2 f- {& V7 q/ _- \6 q5 c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 h5 I. S) O" \5 O0 P2 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 A6 ~$ i4 Y9 k' R$ n# O+ j8 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 v- Y% m8 u( `$ O* G7 J. F) j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* v: z" G2 @* l3 f. G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% T, f) j+ h4 b! d) C3 }  x. e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) w2 b5 A# Y( H' I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ _' G" ^3 i, X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 x8 q9 M) U- f" R* m5 s* y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 I2 {. K/ R, D8 H/ ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( j+ r9 y- E' N+ Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! l$ J! H& a; o& s; O. Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 C: I5 t, y; M+ j9 `% E3 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 a( n& }/ z( \/ d" e- I我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 _: h! [6 [7 t& H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>