【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ Z7 C6 \2 n0 d2 P9 R# u2 xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" i. U+ N) z/ |$ aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- E/ K4 p3 P& j4 r+ YThe sky is happy down to its soul
" D7 d( [8 M6 E* p9 E# GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, W5 o  o0 {& t$ u% L0 PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 B* M9 K6 C2 m8 U/ `# F- b+ WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 ]9 {4 ]. b# E! g( oNothing can compare to my love
: y) E+ K0 w5 G' Y5 Z* R8 f" @, UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 x8 @( [. @9 n$ k1 I% JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ _. p" I7 u* P6 wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' B7 |1 N# \6 O0 f6 N! {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ W$ ^) A; q! o7 U# hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  y6 s0 T1 v- n4 g3 D6 {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: P: f, ~2 {- ?  ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% c5 D9 _; }- ~) LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; {+ Q8 ?+ h$ H2 L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 T; q8 ?! K$ W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 F9 X; j. E9 E3 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: j3 ^! ^7 p6 \9 b! _# K" [' u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* a" F; Y6 N& b- |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 b7 q3 ^& g! l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 t/ f# L$ x5 R" S1 g4 q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 J& {0 B6 n' Q) E! r8 }6 U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" x5 ?) i+ Z5 M4 X0 i. v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ W" T4 U6 c9 R! j+ L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 z3 M5 l- q( a4 n  k+ q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ ?/ F( h1 X5 q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. Z7 q+ A& B6 P7 c/ m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' N  j0 h" N+ k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: ?- V6 e$ w0 r; ]: @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 x8 S9 t7 g0 K3 \  A1 G2 a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 ^$ B$ u8 V, Z, N# {5 Z2 n2 ]: R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# F0 r5 l& P6 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  N  G8 S" @3 B2 r2 @) i+ C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 {4 M8 {( e2 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 }. G+ x4 z, U- b* b6 S- z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; ^* f) y' B" l# a, L+ \9 a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! [9 F; p) p, L! F/ @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ d- t% s4 d( ?! ^  _  r: H9 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" b2 u+ Y2 d4 ^( j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) S/ C* r, u0 u, ^2 z8 E) T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ }( ~9 c, b! Z( `$ C+ F! i! z( V<P>I regret not dying</P>
- E+ t( D$ g* ~1 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% `6 T; `6 L4 y7 ~9 n6 K+ S* X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 W. o4 ~" {" R( d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- F* K' I/ c9 S0 b9 h( k" \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( }  h5 {# E% r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" Z5 f9 Y2 f9 s8 x/ D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. o$ {. f! _3 N- @( q. q* Z( ^% T我请你剖开它

% p+ y; {2 p) ]4 Q( K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ D9 j; }; x# V% c) W- \; f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>