【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 l% m+ n& w9 m, a' e8 N9 y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, H! i& Z! ~- LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) C7 O; [/ |, Z9 X. ~# PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. g- C/ ]+ m/ K9 h, `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 V! \( {* P" UI really want to know just how much you love me
# q. u0 p5 S, M6 l: V2 m* ?' vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, o( _. G) M' w0 b6 P; \: FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ r& y! e7 G: Q; u9 C; B0 kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ j! {# i4 a5 ~3 Z# hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 E4 i: j. \( W1 a! B, U' O1 aI regret not dying
  h  M' B' j3 `3 [1 @. B: mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; A5 R6 M, p6 p9 T4 X( b# tWith such a tongue as yours,
0 L4 m1 W8 s/ C. S% D) FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 r, l3 @. u! @" l8 u1 ~/ F( \+ LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 I. e3 v4 F9 O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 \# |. g( t2 d: V$ {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- f0 ^' Q2 o* g% c- a1 W, `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% W. V) m+ X8 L1 `( r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ d- X1 G" _+ L8 z5 a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, Q2 r: G: y/ W* u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 X) m0 h4 B8 T" M% Z( j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: Q7 k9 l6 q6 M0 A7 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& U! `& [( ?) A9 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ V) I: K! N- V" ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 g7 D, V8 B* C" |; C+ W! r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  `7 p4 i+ ]5 N6 y! F, t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 H0 i' C& [: l! K' k  I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  s2 j' H8 |! K3 C. k6 g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. f9 R, }* q$ C+ e9 P$ N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- V7 F: @1 i& @% O+ t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& E+ u! @2 O/ V# b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' y+ @3 h5 P& \: d+ d/ S* Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% a0 N& _. Z# q5 O+ L! b$ o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# Z" z2 F7 t. M- w; q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 O% L* q8 O/ ?" U; W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: i2 ?2 `3 J2 R/ _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 w3 Q! I) I8 l, S# X6 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, x& L2 g: l# k8 U2 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 ]/ Z- z% ]' K' W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  |0 r- r6 C9 I; C) G' y+ `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 a, y& Q1 o/ E2 ^我请你剖开它
0 b3 s( r7 z3 z
, Z  n3 f# O; A9 p% n2 _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( O& b7 ?- R* ?8 k: w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>