【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
' S- _; s% X* q) m8 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 E9 S! |4 [) G- eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 Z7 [, C& t% cThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 c  g7 y  D0 J0 E; QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& }5 `5 v% {; @* JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% n7 \( }$ \" s  n4 gYou needn’t fear anything
" O0 S5 g8 r9 j/ }) K3 |+ x' lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 F+ `0 R) n2 N3 _  _- M' L4 sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& B( \& k5 D* FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 o% |0 n$ \: ~% U$ qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- K, F7 l* S7 b; }) ^5 w# y; YI’m still filled with fear
, Z6 ?- s' D( U: S' CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; F4 X6 N  P6 t) i% E) m" w# nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 Y" Z) ?; J# x) @3 J' g( e3 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% q: D; R- R: n7 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& n. y0 Y; T: I( m, ]$ t, _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  s% O- r2 b1 N  {5 U* f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# b5 |( d3 o- r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' ]/ V5 i3 ~1 c" ~6 s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 [7 S) w' w8 d( q, e5 [* S5 W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% S' X7 A* ]+ f/ a; Y3 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 F/ Y0 k% T1 P( R3 D, ?<P>你无需担心</P>
5 P, m. {& `+ j) H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ F0 j$ i  }) Z, z: U0 |7 u: `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ t: g8 k" c0 U* V1 N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% Y8 J2 v; |6 A; D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' H/ r  L& |5 x! |3 A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- N* _! w! }) [  I# B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# @( P5 V7 N  \7 T6 H; }/ A5 [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 j/ e( Z9 ]7 a7 H$ ?& z2 i# u5 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' y" k3 k2 g$ s! t<P>I regret not dying</P>
- d/ C1 q; C/ L* J0 b) ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( t1 R) B/ A  M8 w4 T& T# L( M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 B5 w/ ^! C0 ~& R. f  U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 s) E: ?, l! m$ \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ D* }# M/ O  S% Z8 [0 F. m& a7 H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ j* I+ _2 K7 T, Q" p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; M/ T$ _. v) L; o/ O- ^: c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 A8 l7 |; |+ @/ @" g我请你剖开它

9 }8 f" Q; m: a# w/ y& S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ R" z% |( D0 ]& C1 f! K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>