【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- e/ D. H4 C" F; zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ J$ f0 k! A: f& J- @, @% c8 }% k  g  \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 [0 Z9 E8 ^" z8 m7 A+ K! DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 b1 d0 i- a5 b) k& PYou needn’t fear anything
  m$ `4 _. C" I0 Y5 y' rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 C9 P4 G9 j& l/ z6 z2 ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 _: w& j4 k( C5 ?3 kNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& ~' M& w/ d3 l1 F3 i* j: w1 jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) l( D( x2 t0 q0 tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ m! W  x2 F3 n# OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; d% r0 d' B) ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 \! d3 ~. x# s4 g. W, p  N/ [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; E2 ?) @5 i- M3 R% Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; `* S0 M3 p+ i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- t- W! r5 F; F! O( ^$ n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 Q& N2 o0 W& @4 d% j* h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 z# Y- J1 c4 U1 V: N: E: K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. `: [; _/ A% ^4 y9 t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: G( R# \. w. g. n0 l' ^4 V2 ]& q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ ^, Q* {# ^2 W) c<P>你无需担心</P>
  J& t5 H2 m; ?4 [8 g% u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: h8 T1 w" T2 `+ r. j$ B1 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ g$ M& o2 v$ G! b* S2 |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 s4 i2 L7 C% \- C" q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: N% q$ j4 S! N( B9 J- z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" T) G& `, H4 w, d' C; k: g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: l3 x/ T# i0 _, G; N# |6 g+ w6 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 S) B2 K3 y5 F: D0 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" D8 D6 U  t8 M( a1 [. F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( Z/ f/ s3 o& d6 n- `$ ^. I, }- Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ s, L8 R. m" a0 Z  T: r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( b8 \: n1 e$ k; D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, D2 ~' I$ P$ b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 r# ?( m) O3 k! h( R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 a3 |5 m+ H4 E' ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; O4 }$ l! j7 ?! [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% @  T( E% r! ]  Y! Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 z! H: \8 V4 y# ^! K我请你剖开它

* L7 W/ r$ H+ ]( y/ a$ x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: l7 w# T. ?1 w& u& Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>