【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( ^; Y. H4 y& ~1 D1 {& |歌词我附在后面。
! M, K* J0 }: Z9 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. K3 C1 g2 m9 Y9 ?  @* mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 Q$ r6 I+ F" o+ R; Z9 S9 b4 t# [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ T: b: E% a" Z  OSeeing the sky content with its love
' q* f( r! E& n' VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ ]4 f- g/ `3 B) F. yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. L: A  @" s, ^" m2 \$ a8 dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; ~% y+ U+ R1 }8 B$ ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# a. H4 u0 N6 f; o+ T: B* [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 d$ [/ |% A9 E9 x8 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& J& r" B; t, eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" A* m9 r. |; P8 i( T- ?* w- dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ K. ]) }5 C2 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. f* g. ?/ i; o2 T/ oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 _, B' t: }$ W. y8 Z% N' r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 v- I" x; X3 X+ d6 b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* s. H9 m6 d6 S* ^" ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 ^- e$ T5 {" g$ z( m* `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ N3 V7 [1 j# @' I, r: [8 x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 }. `( L3 ~8 ^9 `* \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ D* r: s+ r3 t& B; E* W2 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 J- b! H9 t( X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% K5 d! \- Z) ^9 e/ C<P>你无需担心</P>
  c1 O6 G; N' J( r7 Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- f; G: z& B7 j2 n/ `" ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 X" K4 [5 l0 |3 Z# D) X# O3 O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- n, o9 R3 D1 W5 J% E! F# |2 j# _* e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  {0 p4 I/ J; g: B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  k5 h$ Q- E' h: }" }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. B5 i2 o. m1 ?5 l- A( B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 G2 A0 b$ r4 L$ z& {- t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ S& G( m1 t6 q5 ]& B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; L$ Y+ \6 y" ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. A4 l3 N, G" G- P- Q" @+ Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( N. K; _3 H- X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 Z+ l2 j, c0 q% {0 F" B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: ^6 e4 \1 y/ z1 O/ @+ G5 h% B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 K8 T, T0 Z& a7 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 d0 t' p, z8 E* |: b<P>I regret not dying</P>
" ]3 D0 A" j' A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  ]. R. k& i( @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 \; k# x' k8 e- d7 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" |0 I8 H6 I5 r5 U$ N( w' [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 o  g* @- A' O! f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! b0 h% `  P- `! ?( U+ n我请你剖开它
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% J7 `0 J* e9 @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>