【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 U9 D2 `% }1 u( T3 f- m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) g" ]- @, }6 L# |) C  B$ PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' O0 a4 O7 Z& Q* s* C) VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' W7 b5 a4 T% x7 \0 o6 }- l5 m8 E6 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; @% q9 `$ W8 J) XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. W( p  T/ j9 r/ e- M8 }  ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* a: g  N5 W: v5 P5 m: K+ q" nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  T0 [, n6 a' ?3 c! A* B& D, ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 M% L/ ^. B& [# B2 O& Z( x3 `2 O& CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ \: q1 z2 K+ [9 s$ e; V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! W6 G4 h6 Y- d5 L6 j5 X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 s3 [9 I" W; u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" `; U5 s8 ]; Z0 b. B5 ^. X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( T* L6 O1 W! o& M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  e6 L: s7 b9 m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 T, @" A1 J3 _( [$ c. E" w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% {3 s8 m* J" e6 ?: T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 R! M% s& t3 L+ _. j: g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 h" ?* u* ?' E6 l# G1 d: |! {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- D" m9 X/ z, S) N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& h, A3 r! Q4 o3 f$ e- d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 e, }: Y& z% d2 i  t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- K# H; l2 \; h& t; [4 y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 s+ o3 N4 [( v9 `1 c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 v. G9 i1 ^* n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; D, G4 |& O; [4 _" P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& A# U& {$ [) i3 Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: V; _0 R5 A9 K. K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( G; Q: o6 N' D1 E( o& p; r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; _: X& S* l: R  l5 W: m1 |+ F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 o; {3 C7 j% G9 G( F/ `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  p. `' z3 F* a+ R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" S! @( L9 f, Y. }. n) r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 f3 U5 }. B( X$ O& a, ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 b! W8 M  ?- w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ W& \2 O  }1 h+ Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 T# m- B! B7 S: Q( N<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* K1 t( [! {5 B/ H, ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 y7 T6 S& Q+ E' c- S1 q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 ?. ^5 G& T7 D' D& N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  m& C, D& h% N% s5 W; c2 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' I- @8 G  ?: n" |* e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ U4 s5 }' ~6 X5 g, k; ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>