【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' e" _, x, c% w; d7 o7 W3 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- Z3 e7 q. w5 o  FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& O6 ^7 n% p0 KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 D4 i5 m: ?% j& r3 @) s# OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  n1 w7 y: V! kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* b! f( G- _# ^3 x' o/ o8 ?9 V# ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 g; u9 b. ]& h- V/ ]! ]; r+ W) S- EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ ]1 R# W' M4 \7 K7 B/ uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 [  L* G4 _) x* l- R! K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; z3 X7 X! W+ [/ L5 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# X$ M9 T. V0 A5 ~0 H9 n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; h* b* I& f  p( T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 b+ f7 C. e  r7 O; x$ M7 q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) A" I  |2 A% H/ |& z) {; u3 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) A3 d% ~& ?* k9 X; e" d8 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- T% {) K3 P' `- O' a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 B6 p: n3 k8 K7 H- p% F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" D4 d: N3 \* P3 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) N/ p) e$ X! N! A' L. h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' ~( }( h& A6 H1 V. z3 v8 B: H! C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* l7 ]0 l( @  S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 Q) W5 s8 n! b$ \/ D( Z, u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: s+ D" D) O6 q6 O4 j; X& P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: R" W9 B( _4 @# \6 x, @5 G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* Y; B0 K8 \* w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 e6 R$ P: M& g: n, ?2 M) v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 K! b) N" C: F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" m. w1 a2 P% A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 o) U/ K% b" D) f6 f2 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 G) b! _5 B/ B. u, O1 O& J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 u. `0 t. A1 _' w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( R( r& P6 J: f4 R: }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* e+ l% R% h  m; ^! f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 T) h# T6 v( D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 A0 G  v; X6 A2 Y1 p2 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 H3 K& O. k4 b; m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 Z( Q6 J+ ~8 Y9 o* g0 \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: h: ]$ P  y! J% G* G0 P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 Y% S- k0 A( P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 R' V/ n9 q6 P4 Z  e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# Q3 y- H3 y( r1 Z/ J& }2 J+ C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ H( J, k2 H3 u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" J& u( O8 J. Y7 o) i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>