【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 B* u2 ]4 q+ O: J歌词我附在后面。
% x- l& p- _4 E5 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; P# [( r1 ]7 Q* h* V0 W( G) |4 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  E3 j) |& Y5 p9 P! {$ AThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ Q) b) L1 ]; HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 l# e6 q' e1 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 y, E& U6 O: |. NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; G. p2 `( S3 a* W  `I really want to know just how much you love me
5 R% D3 M& j5 cI love you I love you with all my heart
- w; F, F0 N1 ONothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 d0 {' g/ D" b, JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% e) c+ `7 q' t3 V% C1 k7 q3 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, i- i" S, W- T/ T2 WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; u/ X9 ?) Y% bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 p" O6 R* P5 MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% O" ]7 z4 X$ H$ O$ G8 }0 gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; I1 ]/ x. U8 J6 T6 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 [& P; q1 h$ X( b" o! M( H+ w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& M. R. N) |: F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  Q- N/ i; V+ ?% ^  f4 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. N" u* Z! u" U! {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* p" r* k1 Q3 Y3 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% F$ n2 l: R/ @+ v7 K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* A/ Q; s& @4 L! V" U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ H5 I, a9 p% x5 n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 I+ S4 o0 U! v; l3 _: I' y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( `7 `  x4 Z- G! R  n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 e9 c, M7 R! J5 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" i( Z+ ]& I% j4 d' ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 Y6 D8 ?. b  I" l. m% o& v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 D/ L5 l4 |. f, c4 q. Y" `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 I* |- F+ T* g+ L6 e. v; M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 M! Z) M( a0 q$ h! S) T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 @$ W) \5 g  L- |1 A: @* N$ n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) |) c; v8 w0 Q  c! @4 V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 |4 I0 G: I2 @4 d# h. e0 {5 \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* ~% t4 o) M; r7 K, d4 V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- }* l/ j2 U5 A! U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! E  f2 H  W! l8 z% K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- X3 `2 Y2 T, X# E9 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 R0 }9 j/ ]7 j3 Z* z) c2 ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 O! G. \" |+ [& }9 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ \6 ~  }1 h$ \+ X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) z5 ^7 d; }. N5 T$ B1 Y. n8 r: @5 u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 f# ^2 o1 o0 ?. p& P. S我请你剖开它

, R" u8 ?  O( B3 I  | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. d; F) d% ^& G3 e% X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>