【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  K. B$ O! @% q3 g& zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% }( a3 D% L: HThe sky is happy down to its soul
( @6 W8 Y7 {( z  f3 H5 z  uWith the moon kissing it every night
; ^& h, V5 }9 ^5 Y3 h7 ^Seeing the sky content with its love
& R$ }0 S3 J3 B+ F6 @: j& AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: M; D# M4 t. Y/ i, X3 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( r' A3 R, L' j( pEvery other word you utter is love
" p: q% k- L2 A2 |! KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 a; u8 [" _6 ^) d; a: o- _Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ [& t& r. e* Y" e4 y$ W* [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 j- B( ?; B' |7 \% k6 f# |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 \6 |; S( m$ z9 }* XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 r  z" K( l* d" {% X" H2 RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 ^  M) h6 j0 ?: R) Y9 a- R) D. eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: g' ~6 r2 G% M9 ^4 g$ e0 |& n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. R1 y% K8 r$ N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 K) j6 ^* Z9 A; b& Q! n$ o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! F8 u' k7 I  \  q" e. x7 `# ]7 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! W5 f+ P: W) b# b( N1 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 X6 G+ T4 J* m* n/ ~% K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* x( C& W; w6 s: F8 ^) T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. l. O5 H( M0 X( g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ l$ Y) T; g2 T6 e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, f9 `4 l! R, m. r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" l7 S2 ]+ Q4 v, F* j' r<P>你无需担心</P>
; r$ w, q; b. y  d, c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 l2 Y+ C8 ?+ O$ K8 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 i" O3 W6 |) I* x4 x1 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ g+ i+ c8 T' n) r$ o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" G, [9 a# t& [- m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ \. M/ h1 u4 [' @) P- ]! ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ z. D9 t. E6 Q" o- R- B* g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" i) z1 `/ A3 T1 Y& z6 g! M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 f5 X$ E* p9 {4 n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" q: \3 A4 t# f, h! b- q+ U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* E: k4 }* Z6 e. z: _0 ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: P- G, D! _" h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& p* O4 p) L; z. c! k" C" H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 a/ _( l' ~+ C( n. y: ~1 M; N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 n# W8 {8 s8 M. K5 _  O6 A8 j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: w7 i6 G4 J6 q0 X: i, o8 a* U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

0 o0 v" s; c1 {0 I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 H! K9 V% T$ m4 _5 g( Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>