【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% b  ~& p& Y; X7 k+ z1 ^4 ]歌词我附在后面。
9 w( Z1 ~# i4 ~' wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 ~" w1 y; v% l% e  rWith the moon kissing it every night
" k, _8 k2 N% ?. w7 @0 ^5 wSeeing the sky content with its love
# i) Z7 U6 Q6 ?; aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 m- ?. J+ G: g/ KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. k& W) F% \3 E7 I  |3 T; CEvery other word you utter is love
. g' j) K; k+ R. f6 Z5 [. PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  U! e  N/ _  S6 i0 TI’m still filled with fear
" X, J0 L6 c( w& u% gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. p1 N$ A7 Q0 R7 R5 r8 M# lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. @8 }% u5 O1 e9 WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# X. l2 F& T! V% i2 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ s9 x3 L( [* g+ {5 B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: ~* _1 ~. g+ e5 s: C( B& i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; s$ n6 s- H3 q0 x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 c) B" i3 Y: w$ I1 F# V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* k$ p: H, `7 o: ~" P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- g$ z! O2 p9 ~& c  A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! g% s, p( G0 k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# p1 V( s5 @1 k$ d8 J3 C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 ~3 ^/ c& \# a& s+ ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 ]6 @7 p2 n2 ?: I: M& V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. t, G2 V, d9 n! n: H+ I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: Y, v9 j4 v" N% X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& x6 g* V9 x4 r$ _" ?' s; ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% A1 o# `* d  a, e( t2 r/ P# n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 c1 `5 F5 G% n& p$ I( q4 a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" e8 O+ o6 X4 H" \3 J6 @5 L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. ^7 @7 l4 s) s7 m3 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 Q( @2 V1 j- V9 U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ R( e: u! G( J' N/ G+ v  j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, A2 R% s0 S$ K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* c2 a' [( Q9 _* e0 d1 L+ |) {# V5 ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( l! H5 v: b$ }) C$ Z) |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& I% _% n- k5 R" r/ _( ~, e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 G: ^' u7 p4 r# N" \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  X7 t( M/ Y, T8 r/ c9 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 E! V& [; T: Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 B- D1 O+ l( o6 q2 G8 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 V, N0 u/ ]+ {, ]' h! a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  u, P6 v' t" }( \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ Y; M% }/ l: t4 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: g7 O/ e: I; T, i' y6 ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>