【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ ^- l8 ?, r8 ^- s" T% BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* d3 s9 |+ ~4 J. n: B2 IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! D! }6 ^$ v+ t$ I5 N1 W, y* OWith the moon kissing it every night
, f+ ]& E( f% r9 GSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" l, [2 Z6 ~2 C5 g$ f2 XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  }9 Q2 s) _2 }7 g& e( TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 ^  A: f* T$ y6 T/ \9 |. Q& Z0 HI want so much to see inside your heart
  h1 H& }* B  {4 q/ RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ l" }( U$ |, J/ |; ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# v+ F4 A' ?$ `" m: A$ gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% f; L8 s$ f0 n( |! XWith such a tongue as yours,
2 e# ~: l) ]+ X2 Q( ^' k5 s8 pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( j3 f0 B. K8 {; IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: H5 C6 ?, j+ v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 K( z4 p% p( u) o+ e& N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 B$ q6 G% H$ F  z  e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ S, S# A$ V: ?/ F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ q7 y8 d6 f+ E6 I+ O* f, U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 A4 Q0 l+ C2 Y5 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ D4 X1 s6 M4 O- `/ s8 S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 f& N8 `& h0 ]  U" @+ ]) V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- `( X: o) ~! }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 i$ f( v0 z2 v0 _- p0 ?0 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, W7 j/ H9 e; K) ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  a( A  t7 z. N" y9 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 T3 i8 R1 F  X' _& \6 s! H# ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 ]$ _5 U5 f6 M/ H1 [  x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# q1 |0 V( U! q; k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ A1 ]% q* o6 j; J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ _' u6 S  o& d0 A0 J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 Y3 F& ~* k" ?  |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 L* h0 @& x% ~7 {9 k- Q! D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' \" M" v' F& T8 c. _. k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& D/ z; t7 Y( D) e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 _  E- _7 }4 t/ a- k& t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 V& Y$ n! }/ y$ G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  ?+ Z* M7 k. D7 B, ]; h. L5 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& Q2 Z# ^) ]% R$ P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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5 ]/ Q6 Y; f* }0 U2 f1 X3 Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* i$ J% r' m8 `! ?7 A6 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>