【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 W: G, l- j. K: S6 E: G# ?; V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 l, R0 d0 O9 |: HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. i+ r* L  P) N" d8 m2 _" R( b% }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( ^( k! L6 H6 }9 c1 WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  w* |/ s  e2 t: M0 D0 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
# f9 ~+ G. |, L, d& k1 OWith the moon kissing it every night
2 A) o# f" C2 u8 o% B  r* [: KSeeing the sky content with its love
, D3 T. F) A+ p, ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% K2 Z+ b4 @% U) \. RYou needn’t fear anything
7 N+ T) d) _: ]0 e* N/ M2 l9 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 h0 H+ t3 E) d# k! TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ k5 M" L* k; X& y  y& P3 hI love you I love you with all my heart
3 f0 K* K1 e# c0 INothing can compare to my love
+ |5 z+ _+ P6 N; p' x7 A% k1 i0 i1 R7 |9 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 b4 F3 I) u+ O$ P; T* l0 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 _- \5 `' t0 p  D; KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' Z' L  e$ {: @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- [, t/ i  C& S0 u# a  MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ C) t. K8 L7 \# D, M; q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* i  I& J5 y" t- f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# s: T+ Q5 K3 x, ?/ [; H7 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% t8 s: N4 y' Q5 W4 p0 l' u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# h6 }! Z: T" }4 n- d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 e$ C4 o: |* ~( b" N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 c* T1 @- }( h* _  ?' ^5 i; E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& Q! _0 N' x8 [" P4 m& J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) ]4 c# t7 m3 R: ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  C" F/ ?: }4 l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 r8 s& D5 Q0 f6 ]' A" W/ @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ r6 s; V8 ]4 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 ^3 h, o, C4 O2 A" m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& S6 J0 f5 e( Z' X0 _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( O* v4 A2 o7 E6 o1 z7 g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 V7 I2 W( g2 {+ a' R' \7 ]2 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 d) P7 h4 @& W: \% c% e5 O* V. i! l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ ?4 O9 @! ?+ W) P; _" D& Q2 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# Y& Q$ p, M1 f/ o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 I" [) c, l% f# K4 q" ?, _<P>I regret not dying</P>
% N: g# K4 q& o- H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 U' h+ Y1 q* A4 ?0 E7 ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 k  k* w( y# S1 B% P8 T) H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 G3 h( i! C7 H- ]2 T- X8 Y, B* m3 ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 P0 k1 x/ `5 J8 n2 A, r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. l4 f' o. g, i" i+ V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! ?/ C  |7 Q# \# f. i2 n4 H我请你剖开它

' Q. J8 Q+ h, T& N9 [! E" Q5 P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 y& w5 T# u9 M# V+ e% b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>