【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ w' t% q% G3 Z! g) D# q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& x/ G$ h, [, cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 B& L; T! m5 p$ {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ o( M8 H2 v/ y$ w7 J0 v  EThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 x3 u! g# b- N. \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% E" I+ n3 u! @9 ^+ ^% NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& d% U$ S1 m" @1 k( E: h# u4 O/ v+ II love you I love you with all my heart
' o! o' E8 _1 S, R( pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# s! t! v$ Q7 u# U& v( }5 ?, F* dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) V5 u6 Z) }3 \/ ?( h) R- hI’m still filled with fear
6 j$ w9 e1 p- j+ c( C  _# N2 lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  d8 @7 F7 ^+ {! hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. U/ n' ~1 ]4 I8 l- x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: d( ^" I! }  J0 U4 c3 N# G. a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 Z6 e/ {$ B5 A2 V: M! I5 u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( W" \' e9 ^6 f9 r+ N. z, ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" H( x+ [* A+ B) W1 B: n7 D) u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# H. G- {9 a2 K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% Z+ n7 R2 K$ B: V+ _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& x" T8 u7 o# V% T) `' p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 T" ]  [2 ~6 U, Q1 \2 {# P<P>你无需担心</P>
0 U* J$ ^  }& ~% S0 h1 n# _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, \8 m( C' Y. g3 [. D7 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 ^& k8 R% ]6 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- d: y$ h* U) h4 M" q1 a- ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ R9 o6 W! s- |% Z' A  @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ r! l# t- m0 O( D5 w% j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' u0 @; [6 v* j7 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  p4 L7 k" R6 d, u4 x, F* |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' I/ ~, b9 ~+ k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' v; B# S! J' Y- l. g0 [7 ~2 L, q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 f; \. D; i: J5 M. r( k1 r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 I5 R9 F/ E) O  `% ^9 u3 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 v* T  y& z( q+ _: }) v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 y7 i' T$ q; m0 V$ D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( \6 X" b5 J, C! \( O, S. \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 N+ N  R, g7 S- r( v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 m: M' p, x: g! [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: u& g  j0 a2 R6 @/ J我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 R) q& p; w! ?+ `6 [* A, z0 a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>