【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 ~/ {# N) W& w歌词我附在后面。
, z0 h2 f1 G- G& N4 J9 z& z/ k0 E0 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 q* X* C6 S, x# CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 @6 @5 u/ @$ Z9 y% qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ [4 o: a+ Z8 R  JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. O# M+ d) {3 i4 D: EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" B2 Q' n% ]! Z9 LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 }& o) t" X! II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 l0 c8 F1 a$ R! CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) U/ r5 i, V" Q/ F+ L7 }2 II’m still filled with fear
/ T+ ^2 @0 V. oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 y: r  D) `( B& s9 AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. @( b) X- F& P" J+ w1 j5 {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; i  I( @; h* h; a5 P" e) g: I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' R, g' C4 {7 ]' s& R5 _; b6 {4 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: ~+ q8 X) x0 K' s( t2 ]- J0 J+ s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ b7 A- ?$ T+ T4 {$ d" x* y7 M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. q  U. O, g4 g4 y; V3 ]4 E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ a- U/ f3 Y( R. ]/ @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; K% e1 j4 ]1 w+ `( v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 M8 ?# `# t* G" l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% ^. k- N5 v" I' L) z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 x$ @4 F7 D% [/ L; }5 w# u6 _, U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( v3 M3 H% b" b! U<P>你无需担心</P>
4 Y# n" a% l- G5 M/ I/ \7 L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 B6 `$ K0 Z! ^0 ]2 j! J; c5 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 Y2 z/ c( \3 e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! e/ a* Y, ~0 |5 U. ^* {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ ]! A( B/ K$ ]# M" I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; p# D) f; N; d6 ?) k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" x$ Z8 f, M: d* @# t" U9 S- ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 g3 y: S8 A2 l) y3 m; q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- z% t7 Q& v, Q5 G/ M4 H! y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 m1 {; |1 _+ Z& M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) {) N: f! ?1 T; R1 A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( h1 I7 I4 r* c3 I% I, o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 r& W; j' v/ B9 c. K( [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 c4 V* C# {+ @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. [4 @  i# i1 }9 q5 q1 R4 p  h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>