【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" @4 F" E& D8 \' jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! L6 Y$ q1 h4 l# {3 J3 m) O( \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 V+ U" R/ I7 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" K) z: p  n) M( EThe sky is happy down to its soul
- v1 l0 a0 w7 x6 ^" QWith the moon kissing it every night
: H9 d; s& D3 G1 [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 |. Y4 V( G3 `% l# X4 N9 gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ {: p8 u# U9 _/ ^. {) w6 L/ zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 y  ]! Z/ ~' k! {; ~Nothing can compare to my love
4 `2 O* R5 e$ }! I7 I7 f3 ?  N3 w! FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ ?) t% j! }/ W. ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ U% j- O* c. }/ k7 R4 OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! `+ ]+ I1 t3 M, o7 cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ \1 N$ n; d$ r5 XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 p& h; C, b7 n. u& |1 sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 I' a3 r3 g; @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 J" u9 ]9 y: ^' e7 z# F. E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 u) Z8 D$ U. ~3 I3 u  _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 K+ W# n  a- c6 X! p5 Q) ~% l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. E5 ?# g- [4 y8 S5 N" g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 @+ I; M: H1 y: E2 J, @; `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 K: i+ r; {) x; ~( n: C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% D/ v; g6 u, A$ `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ K5 ]1 k: F) ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 J$ t6 J/ T( _$ ]3 m4 X* F- ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 ^6 o0 N7 H- b8 v" i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" L2 Y4 G" @# \0 w6 N; ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' _8 H6 E0 x9 d4 F: ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 L; d! s6 \1 D" l9 ^' U# j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: _% t" x, K* T5 {2 K  H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. \, H+ x1 d. O" c7 y2 e3 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 @0 ]# n- Z$ f$ u: h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. M% _: V+ P3 @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ ^$ `9 X( m  |) C8 t1 I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 r5 I% d* ^# ^+ R% y: d<P>I regret not dying</P>
# {0 [/ u: q8 K- [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ T# n8 y* @# V. [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 z: a: ]! U- h. H7 p) b& A, S  W3 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ ]0 @* ~  f3 h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 X8 G/ [1 j5 @6 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- a  o8 x, z0 t5 B) o8 D5 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& J8 N6 |: w  X4 G7 v. B" P/ j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% N- X# |. t4 r: J- ?2 l% S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 E# f5 d" C7 U  J% l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>