【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 Z6 Y7 U8 R! P# IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 N/ y" ~8 Q% j! g0 lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: z3 P, l7 _# ?) eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  L. l5 x* O* t; PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 Y4 T9 @8 P/ r: P1 N  n! sEvery other word you utter is love
- k2 ~+ E+ ?0 e" D0 j* C, u. UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 \- G8 H2 d5 u: X: F% c2 nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ I( Q8 t1 W3 W8 NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 N$ X# E- v; p% \/ B2 M+ EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ a* y$ r9 S0 G, y, ~% QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# @) w3 X! k2 Z+ ~. s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 c; H* _5 L; q' n, m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# h( J! i7 H0 Y2 d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 H9 t+ C6 J; H" O8 K# R, }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 h9 L9 x3 H; ]5 u) p% K" B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 `5 j' I, t6 L" T/ f- j, u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 T* J1 J% `& l8 X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* k7 Y) E5 p! }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( R5 ?$ K, R  e( c! D# u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" I9 Z! I8 o  x' w) |: L* {! h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 }& d; @9 u6 Z; e* ~( Q) ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' j. f5 M+ j) s2 H0 ?/ d1 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' F, G$ ~$ a4 Z9 Z/ e+ o2 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! S/ k! f8 M9 b4 }! n: F' S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 w. x6 ]+ Q6 ^$ i7 G0 m( V% H1 q& l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) x, g) K& w8 W" A: m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 ?! m$ C0 J( D# u! j: B- o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* g" \% Y/ @4 v. c" Z6 N( }( Q- \8 J0 E0 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 w7 |8 c: Z5 b# u" Y4 A; x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; T1 S' z! C; C: Q. A8 Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 @# y8 i6 r: B1 y! Y8 |6 y- C- v( X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, g% o2 V' d' F2 R, V7 Q! }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% I/ O7 M* T3 z9 g  _% S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 B/ |$ R" a! e+ ?) t* t4 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ C5 l7 H* [0 d/ Y9 N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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