【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( E  W; u6 A3 h  N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  U. S6 u% U6 w7 s8 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) }6 d; N; I* X0 @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" q$ l* {  t, `# iSeeing the sky content with its love
) p5 Y) F. W! b, ]9 a9 Q' |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" Q3 Y0 U/ m6 q4 `) qYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( q1 L) J7 M  H0 II love you I love you with all my heart
  i" M& b1 v8 ~9 ^+ A& K4 ]2 eNothing can compare to my love
" |# j/ x0 e' j- c8 G8 z; {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 C- P) n: t% wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% D, q* j# Q/ O5 T7 c5 g% d' SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ O1 e  s/ f% ?3 ^! T5 R0 x6 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  a$ h" K( E# p% KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ A% x. m4 L1 D3 Z" w5 F5 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( y, S. m2 `% j& ^' B! b& O8 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 I1 v$ ^7 a) z& \6 c! x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  }$ k1 m) M5 E9 W3 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 j8 W' K* F  R1 a  w, C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* o; [$ e* {( [, H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ h2 @( m8 u& }9 z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" Z4 Q4 Y( t& E( {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# {' E% K3 O8 {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' P9 l4 H& d* I# B6 {# c$ O- }* T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) F* h. j7 q# m( j' l  T6 i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ Q2 A' u+ _( O" ]- x/ U& E% ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ v; ~# c- g( D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 L, e3 R7 B% \. R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 M2 E+ [% y2 ]8 u$ y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 P5 Z. E+ c- i% }: C! g' {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" v# P( F6 n! K* d/ F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 z7 q. S  a) `2 z! b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 g- {4 x1 A. o2 K9 l& Z. f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  l( l. u* F; B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ d! \& L( G! W, l7 e" h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( N7 x; ~' b2 R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& ~( Y% A3 j0 `" G& ]$ R: v- ~$ r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. f. P4 d; U" y0 O+ a/ C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) N; @& j. b+ L6 ~6 H2 V/ _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ c$ P: s0 C# M  B& n1 e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ V$ J; r& L. ]5 s  F8 Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>