【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- p/ J  N0 y! U) ?0 F/ D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ Q1 x' L' w% \3 {% B9 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 C' @, M* Q! J, \2 u/ u5 X' x) X2 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ W& R4 j! M! R2 @/ ]+ ?# M0 bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 a; h% ^2 v1 K  v7 T; xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" l3 X5 q3 g2 rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 M) Y0 U* U  h0 O3 R6 V# q! @) }I love you I love you with all my heart
4 m3 u7 ~% W) I& W5 j, l# X: _Nothing can compare to my love
# `  E1 H6 R) r8 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 h  E+ M6 G. X: k" o; C4 OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  @1 C% [6 H% |' K! sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 m4 E* \' ?; kI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 x) u' c: y% o3 T) @0 C2 E7 PI regret not dying
4 d' l& n% j9 h9 q; V7 ~* n2 Q+ |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' |3 j+ A# \( K! N+ f" iWith such a tongue as yours,
0 u; y! ~" B* `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( j. T5 O7 Q2 b, y# X: U2 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 p# ^! s5 C( _- L1 w% n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 i7 `" l) S3 q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 @" y0 {; |8 x8 C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! Y0 r3 |/ N/ X- m* L4 ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- Z- A( g/ x3 T% \4 k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. y, g: s7 `- J/ V0 ~- R9 g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) j+ Z$ T# X- b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  w5 }9 V0 @0 b/ M3 L1 p  _1 S* E8 W+ h( o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ N' }. m: @6 Z$ J: O% s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 e( K6 B/ R6 Z2 Y! S  X, Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 t& |+ n( E! I$ y* T; R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" N* Z- o# j! e$ d( ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 `( j# j5 k" H( b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# T5 C4 R1 Y9 f( U* Q% u2 J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, b% S7 K9 G6 Q2 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 `0 M' _2 n& d3 s' k, F# l$ ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, V% G/ {+ G5 n! B( O' z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ o: L+ w/ V3 T# y8 _. c* z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; [. f3 ~5 a. S% m3 E: h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  H* ^7 e( h) V$ A" o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 j2 h8 u( G8 m7 n+ x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* ], W7 l% S" W1 I8 ^0 s5 ^8 z: N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' P% W  a/ K% I4 F7 j0 L) g4 z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- a4 V; F. n5 o7 d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

. z- Y, E6 ~, z4 R* M3 Z6 | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>