【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
- a7 ?' f' Q6 t/ J; J' t
<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>


歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' C0 z* E  ]' T' F" d, YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, }( `- H3 v8 [# B) G7 `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( F/ g% v* `9 Y9 g6 O" AYou needn’t fear anything
* U$ W; f2 H! f) {' t, ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 n; W4 R/ ]; ^% k( x4 c3 J& M9 bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" q0 @. E$ p6 }7 zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: m2 U% s$ q/ mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! w( r& ?+ Z! C2 {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ b  G' R% \$ P3 B: gI regret not dying
; q) O3 S8 i- |5 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 K7 H; B6 @; t7 Q3 u9 b3 B
. x  g' o, [0 ^  E) L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  t$ M& H6 @7 n; v4 F+ s& ?2 [: C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! K* Z- }! e, l" p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" ]; T% T, s- s" _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 W* z3 z. @- |. K8 r  U7 o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 G6 s. h$ o; P1 R; v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, S0 r, |9 T; T/ d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 {: l( S! w3 a/ {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, H1 f" u3 e9 v- f" K6 Q; K8 Z  Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: C9 ]3 @4 J0 P& k3 c, Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  v/ A9 [. b& i0 i7 z) |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 }1 a2 O' G  W1 ]# _  k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- r& l: H  B0 X* \4 F) @7 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ q7 t" j' w2 M8 l# z8 J5 t( |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 T* e1 R/ I" J7 T& v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; q, [3 a0 g; z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 Q' B7 n! G4 O3 t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 P9 R: Q* X) @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  A! a+ Q) W# c9 S2 o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- e- B1 a0 h- [% p2 O9 F( B$ C* W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 Q, Y' P/ G/ k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 j5 O1 E. W0 h3 t7 c2 z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 E$ U! @' C5 U3 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' q' o! w& Y% K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& B4 f) m% R, m" @" U* w" A; \8 K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* B3 Y  ?" D6 Y6 G) O' S1 p) c0 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; @( [; Y$ i+ t- t$ m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! a1 G! P4 v! z2 o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- i; ?1 j9 I. s/ @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! A& a. M2 j0 L0 I: i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 l9 k) q$ ~% o0 P8 e' f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 i( l" ~. I- o6 _我请你剖开它

0 v" q5 l7 W6 x+ k) c& ^/ |- Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
& _1 ]9 c5 t/ F7 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>