【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ ]% x4 E( n6 g1 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ e7 T# z7 @; W# t) [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 Q! l6 ?* _! n8 F" @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: B4 s% W- b3 d) z3 dEvery other word you utter is love
/ [2 O5 x! x/ m1 c1 G( [3 U* e0 KI really want to know just how much you love me
. ]% z; ~/ n* b8 E. S, xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ V4 y) x4 |& z/ X# a$ ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( r1 i7 ~3 U+ r; Y3 j% k, yI want so much to see inside your heart
- }& A' ]5 C6 _+ y* x1 kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 G2 W# _  q* q6 XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, m9 A5 w, e4 m  Z  g, |- KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 X- _* {  |' y! _8 Q: mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- i7 C0 K4 i6 ~+ j: xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- I* S1 u8 A4 p8 m& _  w" L5 p; B6 bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 H, x. l, O2 w: ]: q( w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 |! ^6 Z5 S+ b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  e- a' N6 B! q# S  B: t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) z, h& O1 \' z# v4 m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- F' v8 g) G7 k4 X4 r5 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* U3 B7 s0 G: y4 M/ R1 ]2 K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% K" D2 G/ |5 y+ N! o4 B* W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- x' w( u/ e) q4 w) {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' t  V' z. V$ w/ m# ^# E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: V% r- B$ a  y, W& ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ [; F: h3 _0 D2 j, s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 {+ R3 u& j8 [8 t) z$ I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) r$ `* S  P) _3 S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: S7 F5 I+ c( W0 @$ d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 F7 t) }% f' N8 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 k% Y& y- U. L3 t) |! E. R  q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( B1 e% m  K+ l& C, X; k) ^! {) H& X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 ?* U+ H9 O+ E6 l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ g6 E7 ^: R5 X9 E1 @% g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- A: ?" \4 b0 m+ B0 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! w/ e. a2 d3 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 l; Q: g: z. E# T5 I, P; O$ E" m5 _7 \# y  F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 }# n3 W4 w- I) c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 b' J! H$ k) N% ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' W0 X2 X  U3 h3 O$ q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' c' `* T0 I) w& }6 t& K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>