【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 l7 K$ e, \; w5 ]! C7 Q歌词我附在后面。
7 q( N3 a) w: qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ @( ^; k# V1 {/ _0 m9 b: wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 ?, e- m! |6 h& k) nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" {# g+ a; i! f5 E! V3 Z6 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
0 `, }6 W8 G% {3 k9 B6 }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& N: M, A% G1 |* i; qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ F" v4 e- X9 ^: U5 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* ^, R* e$ J( d2 J) fI want so much to see inside your heart
' ?! r9 ?9 O2 J; Q! w3 B+ eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- p- D3 O4 W$ H- HI’m still filled with fear
2 G: |6 u3 P& ^1 AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ I- r  N- d* j+ M! qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! b8 p* K# A1 r" k; _+ z: |- S1 G7 iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# N6 r4 Y. f/ _! r" ]* r  x& ]( i# M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 a0 C  ^) Q4 h4 w  D' a, m  z+ j8 o+ c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 c7 U/ e  z" c! i$ {4 m2 ~8 R/ c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* P0 o/ i, g0 M0 Z% D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 c& m7 B8 ~& Q. x+ R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* K1 u7 R) |3 {2 [+ a8 O8 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 H6 S5 {5 v9 s2 V7 w/ W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% c& z7 G$ p. x6 Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" E$ M* H4 G9 G& A8 a- h0 a/ c. t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 o1 c  ~- I  t4 S2 r' i' z. ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 [" }6 g5 Y& s- ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" R! g/ |+ W$ f+ z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 C6 n7 _. r! N$ a; X3 `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, Y6 g/ \- a( y$ n! i2 `+ f$ \9 ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  }( F" }+ p" l6 J% O! z/ C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 F0 H: @* d/ p- v4 K! b, }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 ]" q# b/ }5 }0 T0 x, c6 J' M* F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# ~5 ^9 M  J  M- [& R1 {0 u1 Y9 \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 z$ g% F- p% E9 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 a/ p% w* K; y9 c  z& f5 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- I6 t1 v' j4 x1 U- U4 `  Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 D. K# I+ S2 ?. K% i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( F5 q9 @6 `/ B- k1 G1 e6 L9 A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 }. L$ j- j; b; n1 D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: ^9 m: C) R" a5 N8 O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 B; _% V- [; g( ~3 I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' p8 G% a' l: L0 }3 Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

. Y% S7 H! `- i, n! N; Q! D6 l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>