【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 z4 o7 @# c" Z6 P( g, l3 z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: x& [! n4 W1 [+ [+ sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ [7 g# \& O' h/ hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, r& L( H. ~6 @; J- b6 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: u* u0 X. |$ J, p' p; zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 N" Z7 ]. c7 QNothing can compare to my love
6 O' W' j4 ]4 |. V) p0 m' v' WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 @7 [; ^% J, V6 X5 X$ d9 WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 D% S8 U4 b! F1 ~3 q  y& i8 EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 U* t, R/ P/ K+ ?- r/ }: k8 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ r; ?6 C' y% p1 s  e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ G$ |7 j1 g2 W$ w+ h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' u$ @" @7 I9 X$ k% N% X% v, |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, {% V, s7 a: \7 ^9 V) E; ^7 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- F6 N9 w- b4 p# z, d- |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! k6 q, C: W# d) q& D& E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% L  a* o! G/ F% t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ T# r$ L1 q7 r* s$ W( G0 @) [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 H" I$ K. m  W: P3 t' {" X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 g6 @4 P2 m* U  s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' r) q2 l2 U9 d  }& E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" k/ W5 g6 j' Y% b0 d! H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 \1 V1 t( _8 U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 g& t; k9 |, R4 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. f6 Z  |, r! c. x4 [2 C  {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 @8 v6 K% S, B1 I1 g: g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 i& g5 z! a& e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% i: {0 Y3 L7 E' {" ?/ A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 P- T) u4 G2 D& O* e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& Q( o6 l1 \9 ~/ e! v. w! O+ a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" J/ F) w( v+ F: Z% P; T- j$ W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, }: s8 X6 \9 B  [; e  a/ g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" v% g. W. Z; K+ {8 B" e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ F+ B8 H' j( R# V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' y6 g* K4 @+ f# q5 }) D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 m( h% R- J' w& m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 S- W; M: z0 I( r" j% d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 N- c  z0 z' y2 {* ~" H: F, \8 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% ^# |- p+ I) g5 `& g2 K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  |# J* C& T5 `$ g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  d" y- y: s& S( D, o: h; T6 l! w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>