【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! b1 {& Y! k) a% e3 WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: u9 \1 y$ y; c( q) ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; W9 N1 k9 |& S+ I3 m) n0 BSeeing the sky content with its love
& U3 b) v1 H6 o' IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 w. e  P2 e* L+ s0 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 b  H& }2 n7 }! x/ v2 WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: y1 }# s5 b) f% ?4 z4 F! ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. w# J' U  b( z, z6 e4 v- J$ rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: S# V5 `8 y; H/ ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ C& w2 ?' h( `$ Z4 T7 TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( r/ \, l7 u( N) B2 J3 kWith such a tongue as yours,
7 q* x- G0 x7 J/ Z6 E4 W3 G8 a1 v+ lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 e8 Z: K1 U$ U8 O( s2 p) ^5 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 q# n( e- L( X8 H% X( p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; f6 K& l- b3 I; I* {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, ]) T" i' |& r7 R- M; f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 d$ \* z" c0 X7 Q  Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) \1 d+ D5 ~8 H" ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; C7 o* A$ [& [3 u7 q: G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. C) X( a& J: T# I( u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( i& b; y6 U! i! f  q6 t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: f' _0 N9 U8 P: M  s+ }) a) a5 {# \<P>你无需担心</P>
" R9 @. ?; M8 {. l2 f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. z0 C5 q& Q1 L* S, T6 J' F9 @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% X3 x* x: J6 l0 |, q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; w* l4 b$ P5 O  v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, N% a" J. @4 c; o/ J. S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 J2 w8 f. H& Y0 n9 i; D$ p* U$ O; f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; O7 G& b' Z! w$ v* F9 y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 g0 f/ `; s0 Z" z$ v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, F+ P+ q4 V+ o. b, q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, C( ~' @! u, c; i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) f7 i* r/ }' `+ T  v2 K) {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' N2 \8 J6 f3 o2 v, M8 A( Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# R& j2 `! `2 e. c% k) D4 O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: c5 w7 M% F3 L) e/ v7 ^8 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! i6 k( @5 d( W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' T" L! d4 L8 P) d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 y  U3 ~+ _+ Q9 \- {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: C$ R/ l5 P; D; R( \  D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' o! c5 Z6 Y& g! z9 P9 ~8 L* l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>