【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* S4 q% Y% _8 K, Q$ VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 O$ t( e5 X% M: X* N6 p" R& yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- l. H) A) n. S' gThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 q8 D  \1 e$ [/ g8 d. Z& x# @1 {With the moon kissing it every night
" v6 u0 u% @, qSeeing the sky content with its love
  k: A' h; }9 _. tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 E, K# `; p9 N) tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* A  a% Q5 U' \0 o& _* }& Z, o/ S- KI love you I love you with all my heart
2 I" W4 I5 B9 g% N1 W: }Nothing can compare to my love
- C. I) `( I5 }6 A+ h) k) A/ S, @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 T" a) ?, O! fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" Z# B5 ^3 i; d2 G" y% y$ q3 q; dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! o* R5 X; j. p1 ^" m3 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 A$ u/ p3 F0 R5 uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 W1 f9 l' v" O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" `" x, k9 o6 L7 M! j, C3 _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 d/ H4 ?9 w  @* s& ]( u  b( d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' c6 F/ i' \7 Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  N$ `% _; K; W1 N: \4 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! s7 Y- F6 m& V* E% I2 d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ U8 y3 }/ S( |$ c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( u# g! O; X7 Z- G/ }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 _. h# B' K1 ~/ N7 z* P7 Q! B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 x- \4 a; o0 t" i5 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  T5 b$ F" I. P1 K& d& Q( l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 D) e: \5 ~+ [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  ^2 O! E" T, `9 q% i# t& A( v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 m, x1 z! E% A' f2 M" v: _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ o4 \. N# _7 o( [# ^( M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 ?' G2 y3 ^+ v* t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& N4 ~+ f  F( z6 q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 h: H, _$ R' R+ ]6 z- ~% r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* L9 z& G5 g1 t, c: W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* X, _0 j8 ~7 i$ p+ n* l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ k; w8 _+ r6 x: k5 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
# Y* Y4 c- `3 a2 L& O$ M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. e5 y$ L# P# D0 D; R, O8 R. e, d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 _1 k1 [: f6 C* S$ V$ P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 H0 I# h+ R; ^$ \) k4 _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 G/ O( h/ D4 [2 `* m" z$ a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, \5 ]' t+ I, H% W  E/ Y# R9 o! |* k我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>