【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 R; P9 p, P+ p: m& r# k: A歌词我附在后面。
8 g( \$ ?% _5 {/ q$ ^8 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& O, R# c7 q, {: XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' h) `$ @3 b( f3 h& Y5 ^1 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! Q% e$ |) t0 i6 l0 cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 c# x8 O4 v# R/ e0 eYou needn’t fear anything
9 T* K: l% v) N- XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 l3 K1 @7 O6 q9 F& oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" H; k9 [7 y1 O0 i+ C' c) z/ tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, W- T2 k2 O& q& ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ F! H) X  x) X8 d. K# bWith such a tongue as yours,
. u4 y7 ~3 d" d" @" p+ P" BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ r' V' V% P. m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& C* M/ U2 w9 p% }6 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* |& b. p$ z5 N. b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 Q! Z7 N* C* A2 i4 B1 {, |" i) B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 E1 {4 A# f) P( s- J- W$ R* u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 n2 C7 n) E. i# g* p( @$ \  ?; H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 N. U# {  g% Q4 L3 c, m8 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 u% y( O8 _% F) `3 L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' V+ {0 S7 L# C9 Z+ ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 l! U2 f! g: Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# I1 f  U' [- l7 E) c9 `: P5 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( u! D, Z! q; C# K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& n5 g/ Y' C2 n" C! Y' x# p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 d, F* `; v/ k/ }- p4 P( k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; d  b5 w' E+ K* U" F2 u0 _% W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& d, s2 C9 p" w$ X8 e0 V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" k. d  G2 }/ M# l: Z4 t  q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: m/ X8 Q9 w$ X# f4 H4 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 p6 ]0 V" P3 e. B; n$ [: ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% j/ S9 I) p$ @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 _% Q1 L& K+ H0 ^! {( G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: z! X$ X) B" p- T1 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; {3 y0 D- j3 l- V: t2 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 G5 t+ B- I4 y& B5 ?# z7 K7 {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  U9 m7 N% b" Z7 w' O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) ?! u/ n  R' P! s  Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ `7 R* s( L  ?/ `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; {8 S0 I+ |1 ~- _2 y* T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# [* }1 o. |8 P6 K4 P- G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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8 Q# R6 ~4 F& Y; Z! Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ ]& ?$ G$ A, E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. @1 A( G! t$ {5 B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" Z: Z' J3 U" ^% p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 X6 C' U8 H0 p7 U) W7 V( P+ Z$ ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 G2 a; ?: z, q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 p- A3 l, ]* ]1 V8 ~6 P  o4 P% C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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. |/ q7 C2 i; d' y" _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>