【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) [* s1 |2 K& L/ DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- Y7 D& Q$ Q: `0 [; _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 \! Z0 z0 q' c0 s1 [  Q  U% j# t  `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 v: `+ Y( J/ f' T8 b  EWith the moon kissing it every night
& R2 o5 t8 t4 L' W; [2 }Seeing the sky content with its love
; [" k  l) X7 ?8 }; U" oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% t4 X, o1 C% _1 l2 _  [' HYou needn’t fear anything
; A- P1 A0 F& f% k6 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 J5 \& i$ z8 n) f* d+ `( \. u0 MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! o' u3 j0 K; B6 k% W2 ZI love you I love you with all my heart
" a- q/ \1 l9 {. h" xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, `2 ]7 r! H0 |- E' yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# q$ m4 y2 s. Z6 W1 E/ N5 pI want so much to see inside your heart
2 i6 Q4 |7 `; O3 rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 i% z; D( Y& _. HI’m still filled with fear
3 h- R3 m( Y2 [' m7 R% S3 z0 Q1 `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* Y9 E+ [3 b3 m% @8 p: Q4 BWith such a tongue as yours,
' ?. P* L# b5 cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ V/ D! z$ K' T; y, O/ ^, @3 W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ U8 x9 e  S* c2 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: r) v) k, ]+ V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 I* {6 e; w8 N- t% x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- U5 B5 N3 ^6 E, a( f) m) u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 J5 I2 u! ]8 Y" {2 z3 f, ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# w, }4 ~) u# I- J! S2 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 Y, K1 G! o6 O, d2 H; Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( z7 O- R! f# Q. G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' g; G, U2 u4 b0 M( f! C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! d; V2 B" P" X! n6 g' }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, v* Z4 d- f% Z! @) N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: |5 ~; o, W9 P) |! Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 Y8 K* [; J! K$ q* X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; d. g( d( u. ~# M* r! A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ O5 c7 N/ z7 t; g8 j. P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% P% d+ y. ]# g' w; t3 ~2 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 s- _1 _& d7 k8 I" F, j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; f3 p9 ~; t/ O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* R; ^+ p& g" r! [; q0 J- p9 v) o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. l; c! p0 P& D; y+ x9 W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) f4 F7 a; F! M1 E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 A" [, I3 F# R2 U  C/ C( S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- F/ h0 P2 V( K* [2 F6 {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: o# M1 _* p9 n! S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>