【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
; T  \8 S$ P& d0 B  fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! q/ z! M$ U% ~2 U; xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 O: {& X; b6 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& `0 W- n1 \, _9 \& A8 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- Q2 n/ Y& e' Q6 Q. g+ x: N1 lYou needn’t fear anything
0 C, v1 F# B" Z! NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' V+ J: J7 W/ I# `' e' e. S0 kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- [- {" x9 J  p) n% p/ a  GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( w" G9 L: O4 LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; h" a/ i3 V# E' g$ H2 r' eI’m still filled with fear
- Z  m+ h4 }" z: KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 {# X  L! d9 f7 H0 oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- ^& U( j$ m# }4 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) v6 l- r1 B% p8 F' |2 x% \6 o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' o/ \' J  ]- B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ j- V: n3 K8 K) G, P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 @" a, X$ f# ~( p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% |& c; B. p1 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" d7 Z) [$ \1 w$ `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 r4 ^* H/ w" F- D$ L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 l9 S' }" [/ m9 {6 f4 u* t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 C5 e6 N9 h! `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, i) R5 W1 R9 a0 {( z8 w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ Z# x4 ^6 d: u  \6 i' A) [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 r4 G0 |  m; B9 r: o, v0 Q' x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. p& e" H/ U! R0 ^  [0 K( @# i) c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' j9 Q# \9 J3 W7 k1 c) t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# k- x" h' }& J# i7 M/ V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 f. G$ {; ?# D5 l- Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 _- D$ O# ?6 t* K" R) I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- f) q6 f* P: c6 H$ h) \# h1 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ r* t9 Z* Y' c# h8 o$ X0 Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 z* K5 E$ L5 E+ F& v! w% ~. C& q* A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( m# m9 a8 m) s( u0 d- l, \1 H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ Q) d" I; g$ K  b( i- {0 v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ O/ R5 I7 y, ]+ @  b. J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- i$ m: Z0 L/ B" h9 d5 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ i4 f2 @5 I. Q0 o# B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ C# P4 {. R9 F/ j+ Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, o9 l$ O( H- A. ]! A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( [9 J+ s9 C% y+ ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ f* l# x) }5 d0 ]$ ^/ f3 j" ~( P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# R3 h& ^* y- P8 x我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 ]8 a& A4 U( J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>