【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' Y2 N. S/ O3 K9 D) [5 qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% }4 [8 D& J$ YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 I+ b: X2 D2 Q% ^& m# TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 f. |; j0 a( y( B2 B0 K) [& _Seeing the sky content with its love
$ |: U8 P' ]; ]) j3 _! B  X( TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: E; h& u" G' Y% u8 o( U/ w; bI love you I love you with all my heart
1 [; ~9 \* s, N8 l6 _/ v  i% xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 e3 d+ y+ L  n( r( o) a; f6 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 ~' k1 x! G  b! g1 R/ H' DI want so much to see inside your heart
3 D7 b! }# `7 T) UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( ^6 ?% b8 g0 v. ^I’m still filled with fear
4 n3 r/ {  @# t' e) R6 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ v' t. X. r& |) ^2 fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' n+ R& g; y2 k1 c+ H% ]; EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ L5 W% p4 E. k9 z* z- p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 E: Q$ }" }& }4 d0 g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# r. G& K" p" v# x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  ~  G. K5 P! g0 p; j, d9 |' P# g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& w9 g7 d1 B  ^2 P2 G) Y" K% v2 A" p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% B9 v3 }8 u* i" e* a1 u0 G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 f* K' X; V9 P5 H# G( o% q. Y3 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 W5 l, C! g! U4 j+ x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' t1 i: e2 E5 t& `* y  ^- U. J: U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* O& ^' ~# S6 D( W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 h; R; S) f$ j- q4 J4 t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. |# I/ e. M( e* {; I7 O! l8 O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 b0 @; E; R* n" Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, o7 R8 |1 V$ R& c# |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  n8 Z: t+ B9 ?0 [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  h+ Q3 j) `3 D1 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ K  x- z- B- J: b; ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) n$ R5 }/ a3 f  `3 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, d( q& Z' q7 p/ v) C. b2 l8 }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% A5 i* Y  m3 Q- J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ `2 c& E/ c; g3 I  G% g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- k2 E( J9 r  ^( T% p& }/ o5 [' q, F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& g  Y+ x. X2 z5 J  Y8 K+ i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 T5 T3 o0 a5 O: Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! P& P! G/ Z- I0 t( }" ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>