【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ A( \4 A+ l5 t  {6 J2 C歌词我附在后面。
5 E% \3 n1 y* h, u$ x4 Q( ~: Z  hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: S, o6 `1 I  ]2 Z9 JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- D$ \. l3 X1 m% q) \3 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 ?; b% Z/ ]! K) O- y* pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ i# m" B; b% k0 ]  h+ ^Seeing the sky content with its love
+ A# O3 c1 r  E% nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, r# J! s/ ?3 z% `3 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 `7 [: H- P3 ]6 zI really want to know just how much you love me
' F6 @/ ^" l0 V- ~: ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* D5 L( [6 J  m: GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' @9 D1 ?; G9 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, G+ V9 V. `( rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( {' r7 n# L( M3 z& N2 O6 kI’m still filled with fear
" j8 H# W5 z4 R# AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" A$ t) H! ^, f- d: A* eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 d) [* N- |: Q' P0 G& O) D* c# SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 A2 w5 }' x- UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 b$ {, X0 `9 I6 [5 u' O- BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% C( F8 C! {  C, H" d- H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  z1 M0 J) R* q7 O# I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 S+ V; C* y) u7 C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* e8 l% l- f/ ?, o) a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ o( `; a  W8 k' m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: i8 g' U2 e8 |! Z4 X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# d: \6 F- ^4 [+ y  }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# r* T: k* J+ D<P>你无需担心</P>
/ E1 f0 v9 B* v; K( q& V8 F2 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 o% Y3 s9 E& j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 ]( R* i9 y- }6 t+ {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* ~" A. g# L/ Z/ c, ^( ~. |& N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 Y  }5 b4 b7 t7 ~# p: W  ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 W, |+ r+ x8 I) d9 N+ K& d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( Q, l: i' i" e' ~6 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  ]( x% U( v& r8 D. V, k9 }: l2 K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* i* o. D# ?" B8 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( w3 a% J2 @* P. L" O$ @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' ?8 T3 f) b3 T2 {; n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 p  p/ W9 N- y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 h) w3 C* w3 Y& A4 B6 y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# Y) L9 P0 B; l" e( I我请你剖开它

5 X' D( T2 b+ k$ J9 F9 _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) q+ b" N$ ~* k; I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>