【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# b* K3 E1 ^# }& O, Z5 P' {# k歌词我附在后面。
/ y2 x* ^, D! L& C8 U  xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 Z! ]# t1 Y7 u4 V! ]: w7 j, ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ p* b* d5 P$ D7 o- R8 W4 v- V8 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 Z3 h2 E% u4 x1 H" W. zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) L. v8 {* m& Z$ n% _0 J0 YYou needn’t fear anything
! J! N: u' s" z" K5 b9 ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( g( u. I2 B6 N. D  zI really want to know just how much you love me
4 b7 p! q- J1 u% u0 f. EI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 x8 E/ h: T) \$ t3 L7 b1 V5 O1 o, o4 ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# e% j3 u+ l  a: m3 c. ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( Z2 \$ t/ f! F( z0 K+ gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' u& ]# Q' L  e4 x8 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  A# L) q  F$ i9 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- z! I/ v- `: B9 M0 T+ F$ x6 _9 m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" W& }# \5 T0 e  }4 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% l1 N1 k9 |( o' |4 d% O4 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 l1 s) i/ q$ X2 ~; v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- H2 L& g# X1 L  H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  {$ I" S; w/ j' f( c9 O$ ]% x<P>你无需担心</P>
3 i9 N) Z7 ~( l" l, c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. x/ `- ^3 X& T" v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( D/ R) [0 @/ Q1 R4 d& r7 ~& Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- H7 {3 Q% V' L0 ]% J- z- o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ t+ }8 m% J' s& f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' @5 J8 ^- i; ]9 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ \; R1 o4 E8 t0 M0 g3 V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' E  a, w/ C; \& Z) O, S1 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ a) v% z8 N( b% ]# ^& f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( Q* D. a; t+ J  x# h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& }8 y" f2 ?& U5 b. X2 U+ ^: F  x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& F/ m3 o( Z9 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) Z. L2 W, Y/ ?* C. ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# y& X7 \$ C0 J& B; K, B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 H2 I( _  ?$ W4 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% |! t8 X! C+ B/ n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! S- {+ R; \6 _, Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 P( t7 z# O3 `: G+ u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 [2 s/ z- F* n' t4 V2 J* q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 S* P: E' |) k我请你剖开它

5 v% \9 K4 ^( `9 L* Y6 l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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