【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& C3 O, V( W# F歌词我附在后面。
" G3 I# d5 w( uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 ]9 v' G0 G8 ]' J6 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' l6 a, M% e% K" a+ @7 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
) {6 [. g$ \, H+ U# l; }' DWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 z; c4 P, m6 [8 b! |) ^, V5 A1 OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 h' |; ?) t; @$ C( W+ _. Q* UYou needn’t fear anything
, q+ C3 U9 h* b/ p, xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. ]9 S7 W+ ?2 s) ]/ cI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ V, a6 T( ^2 w( C+ g) }! V9 U# xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- q: d; ~8 [- x% A1 p$ D* QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: Y+ `' C- e! I' P; zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 s9 g3 a* P: iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% c% N' W; s. s/ ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, m# u6 H$ Y$ [$ l! G9 V4 C9 f7 K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 }2 w. r& s. E& D% \$ x' E1 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 ?5 Z& X0 B4 _8 m$ [. Y) A3 H# M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* ?  g) }1 Z: s; @9 m5 a$ u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 N0 c" P9 I7 i# X2 Z: u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 p( h1 ^2 h- o3 P, \4 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 D. h$ D% Y( f1 i7 F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 c' O1 x+ n# B5 m( E) d7 c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) \" |( R$ E. L4 q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 k5 M, |0 A+ _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 b/ T$ b, U, R' W4 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) H) p: E1 D2 r  _6 v, ~/ W, X  w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  G% x5 q- c  M, S5 m. {! c% X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ Q# P1 j5 u& C3 G9 q- Q2 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 \* V' w. K" E  U& e' N) n4 ^9 w' l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 Y! k; t, X8 c0 H+ Z+ [+ S7 P, y' }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' O$ y5 ~$ e0 c<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 f8 W% T* h' G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* q: k, a3 a( V4 d; Q* T' T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 l4 U( L9 ~) R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; ?2 o; _0 N" S9 P4 `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; C! f  C" ?0 z& b5 \+ `8 i7 l5 K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* {$ q  \0 A8 Y) W% L$ a+ I4 y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* ]* ]1 I& Q. O8 w- V: a' G我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>