【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( \) f9 A; t) \7 Y1 ^: W  w歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# k8 X5 [; v3 F2 t1 `9 `Making the sky glitter like gold,
. l9 l. m  l) y* ]0 g6 f5 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 S" S0 G0 F+ r$ oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 ?( i& Q( ^( G1 sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) _. c, P1 E& bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# c& z5 ]( P; |$ c3 K1 mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 s/ ~: U8 @' J/ q6 Z9 Y3 [Every other word you utter is love
7 }% d# Y; Z$ D; `- iI really want to know just how much you love me
6 |$ u/ I0 G0 SI love you I love you with all my heart
, {. k. w2 s+ s! ]+ |0 i# T! `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* [* T5 e( v. z3 e/ w7 q2 B& b" U0 vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 V$ x! Q+ o' j3 d" C  nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 W' z8 C* ?; Q& x8 ?. WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 L( l. W* y+ y, f9 R2 [  G( X+ dI regret not dying
# E) f' E6 _4 m/ ?/ s  `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 l1 T4 _' z$ [3 ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ ~7 {( k: U- z* wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 D9 S9 n- d) T/ P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% Z6 _1 \) q  m9 R' {- _/ M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, {8 S, B! q) a, Z% w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 Z+ {' t+ x: ?$ p3 L/ S! y8 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' o% u, Z' T% V2 B* f6 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# `/ R0 X: t. W0 T  u& J0 F* P( x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  a/ V  p; z6 h. D0 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 U* d  M/ l$ n' M8 P1 g' B<P>你无需担心</P>
  d, ?( Q3 P+ D/ D5 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  k, ]3 K: s% c; M8 s3 b( W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! |# x+ E' r. T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( `, d( `& V1 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) ~3 b" {: q, H5 x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 o3 F' s3 n. N3 X! L; ~+ J% _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 D; c; U+ S5 w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 k7 W2 S" ?' Q. M. y. L: I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 `/ l1 s- [" w4 \% ^4 v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 S( {, i2 u8 E0 ^' ?' ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  ]0 B+ d3 c: e- E% S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( \9 B  l4 d  k6 o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 \- ]( v7 I/ }  [$ K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 Z7 W# r1 ~; e/ S: V% s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 M4 M1 \+ q1 W6 e6 M, x$ s7 Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& V9 L7 H% n0 ~- {1 l- L我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 ~/ ^; I7 O9 k4 d8 \" J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>