【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 n, R% c" i; G# U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 D9 ~, x+ j% b$ s5 \0 ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* E6 G9 ~( J( FThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 \% C& B- `4 x$ p4 N2 P/ K8 s/ XWith the moon kissing it every night
" ^. Z3 q( a. p7 m, J* ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; X/ D# x7 }' C, _* PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 M. U* G' j3 o) {* X0 F( P* ^I really want to know just how much you love me
; ~' D& R" o& a0 aI love you I love you with all my heart
4 M8 ~$ ?$ ~8 S% d; |4 i) sNothing can compare to my love
2 }7 x/ X5 z6 j8 [, u7 B) ]4 I$ OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: q( c. g3 ?: h! D( GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  y+ I; N6 g2 C0 wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, |- r# ?" f; ]  T2 |, BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( `! d& I. o, B6 g, v" u" ~With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, ~- T3 q& S( a  z4 FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 C3 h! f7 {9 u$ U2 s4 _% k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! v7 W( A5 w# [: a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 d1 {# m3 u) M% J% {$ j. |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' @8 L0 y9 I$ f8 l" @: Z1 `' H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ e& }2 }! X3 h; K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 Z+ `: X$ a2 X6 H7 S& ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* w- @) P# P$ h! l6 ~/ C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 _$ Q  {8 A8 c; Z  A; R. A, p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. Q% ~# c3 U$ s5 B8 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( r# D8 L% a% d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, t: z- U: z# W; {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; \7 Y, C6 Z  t; Y# x3 o) C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 Q- q) s( x5 f# Y, z' o1 b% Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 }* X( R; L7 Z% b  \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* n7 y$ F; o" _# v+ l) w  [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" j8 R6 X' ?1 u+ f# s( c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' }& t8 L7 L% i2 t" s# Y; P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( D. w- J' T, c3 L) g$ X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( A) T8 n' ^- Q% I! F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, w+ _, v& |3 u& S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ z5 T7 k5 }* P0 H) u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 G$ Z; w' A  Y. d<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. n! V* ?+ @) k& d* a0 N; R1 [* T( b' r* ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 V. F& h) z+ L4 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ @$ O9 t+ F9 [; b9 ?  l7 T  }8 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 O  i4 x2 ?+ s; r8 h! ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 G" n9 B( x/ h4 O  l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>