【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 {! o4 @8 u% A; ~$ e! K  u' ~4 @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 h' L3 W2 o" M* K) \3 p; \The sky is happy down to its soul
) v* ?' }3 n0 J: j2 P. kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ O3 @  }  g& L) DYou needn’t fear anything
, d, h8 c0 w2 \9 I3 ~, KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 O: x2 o3 Q! Y! d; N) NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 _! `6 Q" }: ]3 c- {" @I love you I love you with all my heart
" m' c! f: y7 x% z' ?6 T* iNothing can compare to my love
" ^# y% F. e9 y, NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# b  R' ?8 w1 }6 [6 _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 Y( `+ r# D: N0 ]6 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! _& X. Y& U4 n$ P0 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ e, O! p" r# R3 ~1 f' N, ]! p5 x7 YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 ]' I$ |; f# N6 u0 h' @5 x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; y6 i( T7 }+ n* }- o( \0 |2 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( o7 M" o: u$ C$ y% q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 X7 T: E' P0 z4 k( P4 F( q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- z  ~- U+ M9 C  p; v6 j1 p5 d" a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 |/ d- B% K/ j' e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 S9 P% `2 H  J7 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 h1 V1 _' M0 {: t* V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& M: i# D0 F" Q. {, q9 V; z  a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 T! C  m! [! G  V: |<P>你无需担心</P>
# {+ X8 z1 ?& Q) H9 o: N' t' j; C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: Y5 N, }. u# M/ S# z% G7 J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* f9 u; P6 W8 w9 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ N" @/ @+ Y4 U/ @; W, P# E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ _  t1 q; N" e# |" S& Z9 H# _0 ^( j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 J3 X# B* V- \) `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 E' F9 ]' Q' w, |; L. B2 R/ C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 M" C/ R& O  W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* V- d+ ^+ F' X0 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 d- z  s" t# Q) c3 b- W7 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 e( Z. n7 E* b% J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; \: _! P; W8 B, {, ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 s' U1 g, Z0 o3 f2 m  y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ Z8 x# |8 K9 }9 `% B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 H7 F+ v# b  g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  B; S& i( ?4 J) @" V1 W" A" ^1 r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( k, ~0 x! y; b( m3 l3 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 S3 _* a* U2 G, V' l. g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 C3 F( `& {, b/ B$ e. U# A1 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ ]" K$ l9 @2 G# z+ z6 Z6 i我请你剖开它

2 }5 D1 x$ R9 r( y; f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>