【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  C  g4 @- J$ \% _歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& D. }* ]0 \4 s8 MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- U3 N3 {% V; _' ~( o; k" RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 e2 C1 j( z+ m3 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- s( c9 c2 U4 \1 _) ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& S, x! Q$ g7 W; L. D* II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 e$ p& H" F' k: t& K4 sNothing can compare to my love
) D$ t3 B* X, @; n1 r! DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 k& ]2 j' z. S( q9 \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 @4 c! X0 [( ?! x' UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% L" \0 {7 A4 gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ p/ b+ j' J( P/ s( Q7 [) xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 ]! ~- @- F) M* i* U" O% V9 d8 gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 F1 n; G, s% U% Q5 U8 }* [+ f$ pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& c& ~: t$ [& Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& L0 m0 v4 O4 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" H. D' V% g7 J1 n  Z* N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ w$ u3 c6 b' b" N* Y' B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 \* d5 m3 a! f$ `2 O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 [) ~5 b$ ?0 H0 T0 e0 I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 Y- r( }# N' s8 G9 B* A& _3 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 y5 z* s4 S! f. i6 C' i7 V/ U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 Q7 k! w( ?. G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, Q% L. D6 a# B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 p( X% |" e3 I4 d+ z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 [. t4 J0 ]2 O0 [' ~! n! E/ y2 o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# e  z3 U; o1 r/ ^/ |8 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 q: g3 Q" p2 k) q. P7 J) V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* N1 I8 u2 x0 }; I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' ?. X0 M3 O6 T5 s+ C- H9 Z9 y. m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% M8 l$ N( y4 i& t# z2 ?% t* M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 n, Q  c: }+ q/ o! P6 H8 s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# _* r* }8 V6 n3 `+ G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 b; m( O4 [  |# u9 i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( }$ }3 S$ ~7 o2 _7 s; m6 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ T* Z. r3 I$ g, e2 R" x$ E7 x6 y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* u) P9 P3 |6 E. P' q0 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>