【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 x5 {& b# [6 A: W" p. PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 g! _. S* q' Z2 @- _3 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- g6 q9 d' m/ E( Q# EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 g* b# f: K) Z; V3 tWith the moon kissing it every night
  ^( N1 W3 t: }4 C1 [. dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ q$ f+ A* n- U1 TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! Q/ o# ~, \) M0 YNothing can compare to my love
( t/ x7 L" a* X) `' }' ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* U  Q6 g8 b& x5 oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ o& f" N, d/ ]# X8 U1 K2 _- g( x6 f$ kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 Y6 _/ O& f! L' F: |5 l: HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 W" W0 u3 V: U% N; {  IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 D! m  p- Q- h0 v5 K4 d; R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; [8 D! ?* _" M$ q7 A  J0 J# Q( T& ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" _+ t9 A, [" L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: H7 M+ c1 F. D4 V" f" q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" K7 e0 D3 C7 j  u! |3 {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 l4 g/ u5 E/ i4 E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- m5 W" I$ k$ p- E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 P- i6 Q& j# b  j% Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- j, e! p) m6 N% z8 v/ R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 w7 l  b3 a3 h- A& _& S+ N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 h1 v& s; V0 l1 L0 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 S* m- ~! D1 v' _. h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( N( ~; O+ o0 [& ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ Z" T3 [7 H& x  g: M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 l" X! t1 s' ?. S5 w8 @$ U+ X3 ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 X& Q) D# I/ d3 C$ z2 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 F  `+ _, N5 Y$ w( {8 E  \) E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" ^  E/ P/ e6 T* ]" S  g9 p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* p9 `# b/ D5 Z. L; S9 y3 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ _& q% k" @# {- d) ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 Q; Y- S- n. A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 L7 j1 |. f1 b1 b9 A$ m" `4 R; I' p) ?我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>