【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, e" t# H! r; fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ }  l# x0 @1 P. r9 F3 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% D9 f# v3 ?0 o5 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) u+ m3 B( S& Q' l$ nYou needn’t fear anything
+ v: N5 t4 x0 T0 k/ {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! a5 o1 M  B/ u8 C/ qEvery other word you utter is love
9 l1 ~1 q$ u# EI really want to know just how much you love me
* J# T* a# M9 s. uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- y% j/ M3 t8 F9 u7 {, RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! T! J- z. E: k" i6 WWith such a tongue as yours,
. [: k9 u$ o. [# sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! O. S. I( P  z  p0 I7 Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: i7 @- i; \+ S' b: u# \* h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; W" i' p/ s# J. p! l. M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( h  Z: b& b6 D& F( |5 K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& g" K+ ?& F2 E  z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ H1 W+ m2 \3 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 k4 W$ S6 S$ @6 y' t" F! U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ K/ w  l( z  `9 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& V! Y0 n' t1 ?7 {3 o( U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 _8 M% {' w, u6 A5 @7 H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& v3 B% S# |% B5 E, T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 k9 k3 C# g- R. y2 ^- F- C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  q7 V- X/ ^% S' x/ P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  A5 `: @; w$ A! n$ ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 y/ ~" h; l6 x4 n7 L# v) r' Y  }3 J6 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 C) ^5 O* h- R9 R2 O3 q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! M4 A* r  ?+ S# A: g. X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ h' h6 X2 p9 }7 f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( ]# ^( x2 {' |; _" s3 s4 s4 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: H0 y* N. ^, a& Q$ k2 l$ ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ N! _- a: ^4 v8 U* J5 I我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 A2 h+ H+ k2 w$ y5 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>