【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, F1 m  a3 g+ J) FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, [8 P. s# J6 {5 Z2 H) e' HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 k1 c: M2 {6 G1 z, tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: w' ^/ L' L+ A- i( m8 D$ c4 ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# N$ d* V1 K+ l3 L. `' YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" S* z7 U- _& p' k0 pI want so much to see inside your heart
$ D% W: [+ j1 f% j0 P' fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 Y3 ^& A, L! KI’m still filled with fear
7 p: x! z1 x6 w! c* i$ rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ E% R2 ]5 a5 L9 {9 ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' D* p* S+ i7 M; H3 z  p1 b5 RWith such a tongue as yours,
4 N1 ^, o9 Y3 Q, A0 S: \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 d4 _( [2 X' I+ @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ E; C: e- m& g& u: i9 d9 o6 @" j/ T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ z& Q: R& E0 x0 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 B/ n- R: L" v" M. [- J) u+ S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 v8 e* `" y) u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! P' j4 T' Q! Y' O1 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 t& `& N  }0 G4 I6 W0 A$ {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; p: s7 \9 k0 U' Z9 w# h0 \1 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 g) x; Y( t# k/ n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% P6 s! X- s* m( H1 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 E% r4 ]. w$ w# {3 W1 o/ [1 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ d' k- @5 b" A0 b# X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! f: Z9 z/ \2 _4 [2 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% |. @3 p! _- O- Z# S, s, v: x  t) O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: x* q2 X7 y  b6 R/ Q8 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 J5 ?: o8 F4 ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! B2 d. _  O& B/ z# S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 Y7 @0 o/ C; @- t" ^! q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, ?* `- i2 L2 q2 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: k+ J- p5 Q' {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 F' _+ s* B2 s5 ~  U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. F$ j) `* b' ?  \  |' l% c0 C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 i; ]/ G, P; O! P- m' T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; o$ h' C! s: f' ~1 w) y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( @+ f5 ~* Q& Z/ n8 g我请你剖开它
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9 |& _3 K5 _) R/ P. O) [* [" U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 c+ @- d# Q) m0 K1 ^) F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>