【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 D) {* h" z  V: p# m# R- JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) u0 E) \" r  I: j; OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& F# t: M$ l& M' G3 WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: L9 r( U1 E; [& B5 ]" B# k6 R  x2 uSeeing the sky content with its love
  K7 b- y2 z- k2 p2 Y) ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, w+ a$ q5 S$ X% ]& p' TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 N% r$ t0 h# B  SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. Y0 W7 _. J; G" eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 n) O2 [* W5 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  R1 h6 d) j  l/ j& I4 E" m3 AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; u5 \% Q- X  t5 G# ^9 ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ q( S' o: W& cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 M; [2 G8 x/ ^# D2 C& ~0 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# x  H8 p, F# X; ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" C) Z( d$ D5 {0 h/ i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 p% I1 m1 d) I8 a- e: ?0 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% V& e+ _" g5 A' E# n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 y- E. ?( s+ f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: q! ^, f3 f  }9 w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 I" q" M# T, r; X4 Q! L! w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 @# G8 H* x, B: A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ L$ ?  m( L; w+ w- j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) v$ ?# ?3 k, V2 A( w. t1 Z" `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 ]& M# X; \+ A: @0 @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# G) K  |% i, H8 d5 }, J% ?) l) k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 s* S1 P# g+ v# s; L( \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  c* `: S  \; }6 ^% x( u7 J) z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ _9 j  ?8 I/ z& V9 u/ i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* S" y+ k( i  Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 K9 w- w0 e: ]* Y: e3 }$ K* ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 `' y6 j( [6 u5 S5 C& g7 F- g, E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# a3 @( M5 K' v2 B, @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# I1 {" d# s/ r; t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 M/ B9 p  b6 l1 u* L* y, B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: X! l$ s- A3 q' U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. n0 g8 i2 T+ p  [0 Y4 J<P>I regret not dying</P>
' o) g  Q9 {, P5 D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% j1 q% D* Q* y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" _; M& y4 A( K% m  N0 m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 Z/ z% X, N, B2 n2 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' c1 _4 @: B6 Q. \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. v: I3 g3 ^  o: @7 h4 h) \& U+ O$ a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% B/ C$ D9 L) R& V0 e- L4 y* _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 P2 o& k# T" h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 y7 e: e5 e; V0 R0 \  g我请你剖开它

# y2 N1 K/ D& |3 w  M  G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* a- W! z, {3 z1 H! }9 A$ ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>