【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 j! {* X5 E, |) |8 L5 z. MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) _# Z/ w; R- e' \0 c2 M* KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; J7 E; }/ `, D* }( l  ^1 g) BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  t4 Q+ R" B, K5 P7 H: g. C; DYou needn’t fear anything
. o( X$ ^7 d. Y# L# p/ O0 zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 a3 a: |" }' g+ D% Y7 Q8 [I really want to know just how much you love me
; i9 a( D# Y, r- \, }I love you I love you with all my heart
6 Q6 a" L" M6 Y: I& f) L: wNothing can compare to my love
+ d/ h& U  P  O- R8 {, c. D7 o9 }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. E+ l+ C/ p  b5 [8 r5 A  u  @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- |+ w2 e0 J& s/ O7 hI regret not dying
7 ]8 d4 G$ ]2 L, \0 v( J: S: n, JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 S! D5 \  P7 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 [( b2 d' `2 P% l% {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* u6 D7 V- z# {  u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 J0 f2 T8 `. p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& \9 }" A5 b2 w; g1 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" F1 F% ?- Z* l# Y6 w1 w6 h! B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 p, q/ y1 \9 I! o4 ~: p/ e# S( n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ ^1 G) o1 [6 c# L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 O( x* H( N2 ~. C8 x( m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 f& I7 R. ?: }4 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 l5 i' R0 R# r$ P* B) d$ p' i7 z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" v2 [: Z' m* Y- }1 ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( f) ~, R: x0 f6 ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 S8 e5 P4 a6 D7 q" w+ A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 d; H7 i0 q4 Y6 P* Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 `) U2 {; ~- m" V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 M' J1 N5 S: S; P5 b+ O% d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 C' l- g7 N: O" r0 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' j; @# p- G3 A8 v, p8 @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) h4 b  e$ q4 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' k( B3 }$ I! O7 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* `: {2 s, i/ {8 B: Y# a! ~4 ]+ e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! O( u/ D2 T) L- d- z; q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  g" D! U" i  T<P>I regret not dying</P>
' X, \" k9 q- e3 D9 B4 I( H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. ?/ T$ l; k3 E# k  y4 [% Y1 F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" {$ e* f8 q. P+ }9 W( z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' E) d' z$ S1 Q2 R# A$ }5 D- U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. y/ s3 E# A8 b* R4 G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% c: H/ z2 m7 q- q1 ]; x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 c5 ~5 u# ]8 x& o4 C3 g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# Z2 U% Z( H  O1 k2 U6 I4 ~+ x我请你剖开它

) s7 i1 o' y7 q% l" u2 k8 ?4 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>