【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* B) p) ^* ~4 g* A- FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 e$ C' z0 O5 ~1 n# Y* IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; r  K. I1 W3 c# h" kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 ~: c" L8 p6 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- U6 }1 w% h$ m! EI’m still filled with fear
9 ~6 t1 P/ m6 O( yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& Y9 V5 L$ b  f$ U3 cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- w( W8 k% B" e3 [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# B. B/ e( L2 E5 M+ h: ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  ?, r' p3 w7 _$ fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. x: u' u; O7 o9 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ C5 j3 {8 f, _6 r/ S/ I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ a% \2 l' x) y- ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ f7 W- S+ s, e; o9 W, A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* O/ p' Y* Y* a6 e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" ]2 b9 Z- C+ d0 x  f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' n' i: ]8 g( I# u4 S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 v; R+ O; z6 \/ T, Y7 ?' Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 @1 X: `: B% ^: W  k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 I+ y( Z+ v2 V5 ~  v* i+ D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 ^( `$ a- M% \9 I9 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 ]8 i% u- O7 t5 K. Q6 \0 D: l2 z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# K4 K& m2 y$ T0 j2 B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; b0 q; Q6 `& P1 S% H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 R) k( p; v4 j; y7 l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- P) E5 |0 Y& O1 J+ ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 T, d* J5 x$ b/ P3 Q; G3 H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 y* G, A0 f* K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& g% X$ y4 u5 _- N- u/ F) d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) E" r5 F3 `( V6 y' J3 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* N9 b2 B# I( k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" w2 \% t# Z8 @! q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, m9 C) q, R7 B: E- V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& U3 ~' A  a, c- f8 o7 e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# p! @: w1 j5 v+ P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ F( _- ]3 `  e9 e7 p6 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 ?- p* l' O- W9 X0 l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; w/ }. \" I" K3 S. F: R7 r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% T: ~7 j/ ~: ]# j: D7 ^. g6 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% t. L: {& O2 [& {) U9 ]: w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

2 n% q& Q3 ?0 n: R9 }- H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ h- \; S& K& G0 o5 G: H( Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>