【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 Z+ B, j  P- _7 B歌词我附在后面。
8 Z5 P% Q# `: u# hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 K: f! y9 f# ^8 eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 L! i* u) X3 |+ J# C# b7 gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& a/ W7 d5 c  p4 F/ j- l" b2 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 k1 u( ~; K0 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, S7 p) m' ]5 {% \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 Z- w& ^' O! JEvery other word you utter is love
# r# G. o  K  u, ]- i9 }* x: D$ v: pI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& o4 e) Y1 U: FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( L+ e! b( ?, S! N) qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. n- j! t% }1 q% {! A# iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 |0 G6 U3 w7 e. G0 @' B1 B5 uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  I2 d& @+ S1 GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  C* M' {6 \, L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* ~& I5 V( N- Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% |0 }* X. n- g: I1 k( q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ j6 `3 L& F- Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# H1 x' ~- p7 c8 [% z6 v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 h! @) a5 w6 P1 d2 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. L$ a8 W5 c" [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ k4 X& O. w. U0 O1 ]- K0 `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* v: p2 `2 j; F# |0 Q3 a! M) d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ F4 L* S5 u  Q0 I; ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ G$ o7 _+ {7 A- @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: r0 A! s+ {& {/ a) `5 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 U% C/ ?/ b( G, b: u9 H7 X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 O) A$ ?  f, @" p) I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 D- P4 r  S9 Q& @( U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 S' ~+ e* O' Y' g% ?9 b+ k1 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; d$ |& O: N3 l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 K4 k- Q& c  t2 I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  |3 N1 }8 |- C% Q' }, i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 t8 Y# ~; a0 e6 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 s5 G$ c4 {4 i) Q2 a" T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, ~2 h2 u6 w5 j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 q. H% W! A0 l( `" V! U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ x2 z. f! n8 U/ S, a7 O! X3 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( E7 L6 P/ ]. ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, f  s. {: P0 n  {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ @4 r' y! ^. {: ~# R; J$ M" g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 y; y$ [* ]' H, y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: ^- g5 O+ u1 k. A+ K我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>