【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% t/ |" D5 l" j$ a歌词我附在后面。
- Y) S( J( c. c1 X; \" qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 s  v+ j$ n4 Y! IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. {+ F9 p8 W. G/ A+ W. I" Y* o' uSeeing the sky content with its love
. W' ]4 ~' \9 J/ n) S2 iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 E# t* T0 [6 _6 ~0 ?+ Z% {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 R: G( A+ c& R' b: D$ n* fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) \  h/ N1 h: e  G' SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 w+ X' p9 K  Z% \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 b. \( p8 r- ^. e! i5 e6 a, EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ j  t: z3 h+ Y8 E& ]I want so much to see inside your heart
6 i1 f, T0 E1 r2 GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ d. s+ q5 a! G, L0 h- ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ y; L9 ^8 i5 o; L4 H' q2 |3 ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* a: q+ Z7 S# W) b6 w8 i( ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; [, E4 t( K  q; t# Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# {8 ?3 O, U; ]% ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 l" n( ]& a2 }& t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: f1 T; h) N2 I& f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 I( J8 C' h& c7 ?9 f9 S( U: l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- v1 q+ _% A& T1 `' A0 {, Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 S6 k+ v# _$ Y+ T3 ^( Q" K( G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 M) q0 ]0 C% P; o/ Q4 j9 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% b# v$ O% H6 m# Y% ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, X' T& e0 q7 s, D/ {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# E: {, A! ?* R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" K1 b8 ]5 T, ]/ \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ i! r: ]# S/ M# {9 L. S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 M3 D& z4 x; ~  z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- P% h6 g2 z6 h' Q% {& u# D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. n$ p! h& N" j: h: e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# P3 Q9 P& U' `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& P/ `" x6 Q( C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>