【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  t% K0 N! N- s5 B5 t$ sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' D; _; R+ E( TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 w, k1 ~7 S8 k& A* [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# F) E/ R. `/ B9 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% s# n1 C1 z, U4 p0 Q' C$ JI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 V/ O; W1 X2 q% xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 ], R. {2 |% m6 k( iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; l' K' c5 o; ]% w6 e" a& x1 u% K% L: LI want so much to see inside your heart
* ?1 t& z; V. _4 e. W: QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( Y8 z% A$ K1 _# q) ?4 mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, H: u! T" v2 YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 O! n: y  C" c  S* P; |/ ^! h. EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' o. ?2 m1 i# p" g0 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 M7 C9 |! b, l! \: q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 B7 @$ [( W0 y. s4 Z% j- n  X* f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 d" P( K; S% Z' Z( V7 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 c; O/ r7 r1 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 \. D  H3 C. T8 ?, A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) h2 p: t) _% _. M( q' T( E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' s" m/ M- Q9 Y, \1 W2 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: `. }# K  f. ~7 h! R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 @( h9 h; n! U) b8 V) X& S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. e6 h& v& C  Z$ c% g) X4 ^1 F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! x9 s/ K# h/ ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 S1 c2 ], ^8 ?; }( q, K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! U& u& |7 Z/ r7 o! b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& }0 {6 k" {3 U- }% u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 z6 q' M' Q' s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ D! H- _5 o4 A; g' E. @1 r; f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, H* O" o, @+ N6 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 v% D& e5 ^" |) T% H% f3 N8 j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 X# R/ y" g( D. Q4 j, M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 [) t# s1 l2 k7 i/ W0 [4 I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 y$ w/ G: @6 Z$ c' |. q  X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! {$ m; M( [  J9 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* y8 a$ U. w$ B$ C; M7 V/ S$ w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' s. q; t1 [& ^/ U" ^/ s; B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ @3 Y/ q+ E$ h, {* M" t我请你剖开它
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+ j0 @  \9 g" Q, Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>