【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

" K' D9 d& a  U9 Q<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
. I; n+ u- P9 i
% M6 L+ }9 X8 f& K9 a
歌词我附在后面。
) X8 x* T5 t# j( q6 [; Y) qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# s( A1 ]# o! J% KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# t7 J* a+ }$ l  }( e9 Q* WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( K4 M% `# F2 f4 iSeeing the sky content with its love
* o3 c7 d) N) K+ U( _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 `! |( o1 ?1 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( m' u8 v4 w( d# ^) L) _" e6 kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& C% p' f& C% [+ j- ?2 a5 pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' L1 c& ?& ?( Z# c+ y5 ]: ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' J) f. @9 k6 _8 m) O7 v9 }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 g5 q) S9 r: d. M5 {With such a tongue as yours,
- h7 e' Y- e& I. X! P; kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ @; F  M+ a& e4 P+ L' O+ E- V, kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 H( z7 l  M8 I- j
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* S* c# s$ E1 c0 `& Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: A! z2 X7 K. X7 ^( n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& \* N, w$ U" h3 ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% q' r2 b) g4 r: ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 p% X/ l: h" Z7 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 c* c% k0 u; R4 y6 u% t* f  x* U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 _" t: D+ l* p0 `<P>你无需担心</P>
: h  u3 P' M2 k6 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ H& K7 w$ P' L+ P: O* r4 W% e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' v- \! v3 `+ ?1 S) D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% ?+ B! v0 [2 e3 c/ a8 u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 l/ z$ h; Y( B  {$ B; Z7 y6 [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 u! }; Y: m5 J0 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( t# m; }' r3 h& N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 e" Z; t% \/ ~( m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& X. K3 m9 g  P5 o1 w/ V) U( Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 O( Y7 ~% d9 u# O. K) y; X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# \1 s, J4 k& U% Q4 g6 L4 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( `. ^' j/ p( [  g+ {<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' h1 d/ g7 k! H8 T$ \6 t- C9 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ O8 `$ [- p  }9 g# D' t/ o' G( F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* W  R) x0 a" a6 X2 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 w8 s. G0 i) l6 I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' [$ m+ w; ^- d: m* d6 h- e$ M" s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 z+ m1 P# D- A: @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 D/ E0 {4 y) a$ X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' |9 E* k2 P0 N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 W+ G% C) R9 x: w9 f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 i: M7 Q& S% m# t& b, t! k我请你剖开它
4 i3 n5 z' N$ F! ?. x  r
) @6 `- H# n: f& L5 ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>