【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 N( W3 L; i; V2 x# @. vThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 X8 R5 R. a' o4 XWith the moon kissing it every night
) M6 J; O, W2 Q: C8 A. i& USeeing the sky content with its love
. z, X- `. R+ n' Z  r+ fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ K& N7 Q+ v3 R6 H& L2 H; ?7 w' HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# ~+ U$ a: q% d. Y/ E6 m: {% aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; u  N# y) g2 B) ]I love you I love you with all my heart
0 l3 ^, y- k6 f! p  S7 E# iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, |+ t3 O9 ]7 v5 @# |  ?: lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 R' V3 r! f$ zI regret not dying
" b" M1 ]& U* g9 I1 MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: Y5 t! }6 Q: ]$ eWith such a tongue as yours,
( S# N6 E2 N  o' a0 N3 T5 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# u; k/ |/ p4 U3 K' cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 A6 s3 L0 V  q: I% I- R* v% CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ X* Q8 Q# j/ [6 L* M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ e  D, V, I6 ^0 |4 a/ d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; v3 {+ ^& r1 c3 P4 o& ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( s  H0 r; m" c/ w- p0 b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 {  `1 A; y% G+ x3 O0 A: m" ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ {( `0 z2 m0 x1 u" V6 Y! v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ r  ^( X) o. |7 G7 d1 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% M0 a; D- z0 u2 X7 R) {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' W' y& @4 s# a9 g<P>你无需担心</P>
8 Q2 u/ u, z! L- O9 H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 ]# X+ R5 O) |4 q! i( p& r! @  [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 E0 R' ]4 _7 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 o. @% A+ S0 }/ J; b8 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: y/ V3 j3 Q* C9 ~  f2 b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% [! R# L) Y  u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& v! F0 g; p  X& R5 l8 ^5 u2 s6 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 D9 @* _% P% Z. d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( W. E! F% }* Q7 Z$ u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- T# r+ L& E. \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  I9 z+ Z: n9 x& n7 [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- h% j* B6 a" B. ~! |6 b; K) r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* X/ X; Q) d8 j7 m. L8 l" k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 ~, k" o0 P0 o) u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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+ B) f7 [7 R0 s- B. Y+ w& e/ L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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