【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 j+ ?2 c% d9 Y3 P8 c歌词我附在后面。
; Z$ d9 ?. B% e, L& @1 W1 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" g/ ?/ T2 v2 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
" A& O. y3 }2 X' E3 N4 L: Z5 @9 Y7 aWith the moon kissing it every night
. o" D8 {' }, N4 v% i8 JSeeing the sky content with its love
; Y' t0 F. j) e: z6 e1 F! vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- D* c( x4 V* J% xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! m& U# d2 A& [! t7 CNothing can compare to my love
5 @9 Y* p, h% `2 n6 nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ D8 z3 Q& t9 m8 G) S. r7 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; e! E) t2 L3 L& J; wI want so much to see inside your heart
1 q! e- m8 h" e) nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ ?# q, D8 ?7 n' i) ~' F9 \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 l* e6 R0 n$ qWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 P+ w. [  a/ Z- p" h, f# ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. p7 G8 Y3 n7 `1 C/ e1 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  M. `0 Q* U. U  @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; S& q" [7 r9 n$ A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; n( v! [- }; C  w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ {3 c( b! d$ C2 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 Z" M  h# M5 h. m2 l  t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; v' E( Y" L: `* ^  o: E" z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 l* h- v# \" R6 X# m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 q- `5 t4 h1 E: ~( k( \<P>你无需担心</P>
+ G( j9 S" u7 G9 B1 u' s6 q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ U7 c# o) F" T/ B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ Q* p, _; K0 v$ r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ H, k. x  A5 t, M5 B" n6 S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) Y  L: g/ y% N* |: k+ _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ W! y. [7 Y' k& N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, J% v6 K+ `: J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ V3 E: \4 D, A6 W+ p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# s4 e* u3 s- Q; G; J- V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 y5 b6 V: l& \* A7 d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 [( e3 ^" `1 a, \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 |5 Q$ R4 Q0 ~( Z/ S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" {2 J8 T3 r& O! T& p# S- p<P>I regret not dying</P>
! \9 l% G0 Z. Z4 M: F( C0 L! H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& Y2 y+ i3 {+ X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ s4 g; C3 M- I/ V4 Y4 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ i- b( F) Y( s  ?3 C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& m" M  z/ F* L' R) G$ K0 U. H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 `2 @& b' S5 U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ Y; D3 j1 d+ ?$ i/ k我请你剖开它
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. M* b% _0 }* j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 B; L& V9 Q$ B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>