【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 K/ P0 W2 H* Q" J6 e$ g7 C歌词我附在后面。
4 F( {/ m: ]: f/ f7 P$ g+ PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 N5 ^7 M0 U9 |; }Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 [  I& p; l; q4 o# AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- ]7 j, L" _, {+ P# V. T* w; TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" E% B. u! O# R* ]With the moon kissing it every night
% t, R. w7 {5 q5 g8 MSeeing the sky content with its love
' k. X! Y- [" T4 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( _& f; {# {/ iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# W. _$ ^4 S+ P1 t6 QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  J5 f* B. h2 U# I8 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 Y  V+ T3 k- p+ T1 II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( |5 m2 F+ o+ }4 n9 a& I0 A, t) z" P# ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# p6 U7 U2 N* m+ BI regret not dying
& p% H  G# u0 \) I: J1 V4 f! ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 R* w" u& A- A8 X6 A* Q5 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( g  t: D$ ]3 F. C/ |0 a' q/ bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 O/ O! V0 o, v1 t8 K- r; m2 \% Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 ~, [; `/ W' _8 j' _* e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- ^* y; A& N/ v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! u4 R, ~1 k+ t7 J- O7 g+ W2 ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' \$ m4 K7 Q$ g1 P. v: V  `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. k  F2 h7 p+ u, W0 t7 O  S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 w+ H/ k% t) U; B: ^( g! z8 v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 G& {0 l4 Q2 @6 [; @, R; E2 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
% N0 v2 W2 _* Q2 i5 @2 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 R+ ?4 l3 d% Y) x( {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 \& Y/ q$ d: M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 p: ?* ~+ ~6 D, `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* H- F1 O4 H, e) \& c8 ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ f4 g5 u7 ]/ z7 H5 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 c8 F# ]- Q! L" M; ~3 ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" Z) [2 c% t+ l2 ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 @2 w; v; l, U+ _* z. C& `  T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 U+ H% A# S: f% c) m2 e& G, x6 [5 Q* P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ ?* D, E( C8 p7 z( @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- C: P2 Z, i, j) O+ ]) i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ l- ^4 l& y( E, ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! z- l0 w7 i0 `9 r' V5 @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* Q. A5 O  h: W! m" a9 J4 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) I2 A* P/ l3 W6 x( m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ r( }8 Q- c4 ]* b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! Q0 {7 i1 x, U* |* e5 p4 s0 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>