【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' X1 @$ l3 p2 C) ]" l& a* X3 m0 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
! J2 p+ {1 x8 x. P3 X4 ?! bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 t" s9 s# q7 _4 a  q$ K( d8 _2 oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; b: U  T" z" J+ EI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( a. [' e9 e) x" e$ OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 O0 ^$ U- n) c/ g! W+ k, OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 ?- N9 E  `# g2 p, K, o% SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% z* w2 g/ W; q- g- e# sI regret not dying
0 U& S$ T4 r  O' }. V7 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: _/ U# K& y2 z% A# |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 ]0 w9 P. y* D9 b& W; D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% i' j5 {& m: F; h: d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 N, {6 p; S' V' ?1 ]1 p% N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ A. m3 G  y0 g) w9 O+ U: Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, V- j* I+ g/ ]' X" D8 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  Y+ S4 L6 f3 |0 Z: {+ K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) g: n, L( Q( {4 Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 k1 |7 N2 d. @! b) o6 Q" {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ W% X0 R8 a) {2 v7 J4 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# n0 y3 z" E$ C6 y( Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( [% Q/ I6 H8 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 x$ E3 y' V, h1 {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 y. e$ z7 t) m# ]* p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# M- `' W8 a/ r) g" V: K& E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" t0 {3 h0 D, _) _  O( `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 U$ }  U# m( r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: \# i0 A4 A8 X5 U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! C. H+ [2 F7 x6 s$ o- Q, u* H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ q' v) g4 t# g* l' w. u9 p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& e+ h+ J, j; g" C6 Q8 P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ Q4 z' F% U& F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ l, b$ U: ]3 {, Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- P1 t/ w3 q  e" `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( r- r. v8 l# v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 e& `, \' g! S7 X2 d  Z' u5 V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ J8 c4 q' y* h5 q4 w  P7 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 {% E! _" a; h0 [8 [/ F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' s1 P6 U/ @$ e) R! C7 n4 }& S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# G! P1 Y5 h) O: r9 D, O  J3 k0 i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; z4 D$ W  t6 H' T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ S& G# X3 ~& g7 L' a& V8 U$ H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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