【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ J2 h( ]/ P8 k; }( E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& e' X: N6 a8 H; v0 l" _) ], YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 v  N% ?1 |! f% t" r5 {5 y  |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) K$ k. Z: Y3 \) _Every other word you utter is love
- K0 {0 M% d4 [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 ~# L# Q8 n# E' m, @  d0 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) t% Y" h+ u6 ~# K3 V! CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& H) @( v& v( `, q, `" R, W- G* Q) eI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( s1 d" F+ o# ?0 B! E* TI regret not dying
8 O+ [( _( K& n' N( \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ j  |" O" d" tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  \3 X+ N* t/ |% p$ _; Q) `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" f" M6 W. T' p/ G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& z7 o! M( ]/ q! q! i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* x0 Y6 e% Z) ~9 u8 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; b; O3 \! R" z% p( R: f& I' o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ t- C$ `/ l) s5 q7 e8 v) `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& n8 E4 N4 |1 b0 h& r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# {' |& w5 p! [% Z2 j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! R6 o! O; n) A( s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, Z) e6 z  `9 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" @& g1 x! ]& \# l- L' D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 g. g5 ?5 q& B" D' v* n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' ?# O$ T. b' c  ]" F; r5 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; e, u2 v2 l! i8 e; {. u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 C/ Z- a: t7 Y' u' u9 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# d7 L' C9 ?6 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 r9 l* ~2 S* F. N& i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 D8 _( I$ T! ]! C. V% ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, e$ t5 Q5 g  B- u1 s; {3 P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: p- G+ d0 z; Q6 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: y- G9 }! s# b1 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 S5 o: k7 {$ I) M( C, u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# o+ p, {+ X2 Y& y3 [1 L8 |% B4 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' }. o$ ~/ i! B8 n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 P" M+ |1 p8 X$ ], {/ r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# G' E, t7 }( @0 Q5 ]- f& O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 B( ~8 }2 M# J* [6 ~7 q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" N! x7 \1 ^: r0 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 k. p: r; z/ i, d8 D# B* C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ h6 V' M/ y0 i& M- V1 F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>