【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 z, W4 [) z* g( s( u! c歌词我附在后面。
* r- A' t, T: a- ]5 N9 F$ ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 w+ J7 L' v, T, T7 ~% FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: @* `  E( G; ]. DThe sky is happy down to its soul
) y7 J8 D9 a9 u$ ]With the moon kissing it every night
& z0 Q/ [, A9 w% W# I0 z# v$ ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, _; q5 R* }6 l2 F( Z: }" MYou needn’t fear anything
, ?  w2 l# o; d7 Y% t+ Y1 O9 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% W, {! a5 S4 C# R+ v' {8 k- O4 {Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, W# E- f1 K" `  A; kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 A; N# m1 e' U/ U+ V6 _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% ]0 Y2 T3 Z: J9 c/ J- `I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: t- v& y, I" {( n8 _5 F1 zI’m still filled with fear
, U; r5 {  e) z; V$ J* wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 f, K" S( r' D+ u  I7 aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& w  z' w) s0 D7 F/ N1 L* T/ S  Q0 A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* G5 C9 R: I1 D( A+ ]  _, w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& q) I4 C/ F9 c6 k; l: ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ [. K. H1 O: K: j( E6 G2 s# \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 @4 U; g: c) `" j# Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 A+ {* ]8 I" Q8 f7 _9 v9 Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ C) S" h# K8 y& a# p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 K8 Q1 @- d- \  C% i7 A9 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% r& H# T; F$ `. M  }$ p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( K; |$ L. q9 F: o* i. r  [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ h4 j# T8 K" i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  i* _' ^4 C! L2 w- w( V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* [5 s1 a6 l- ?" g' [1 F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; s9 o; H9 O0 V& V' n3 {$ w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 M+ O/ R& U+ A- j! _# ?, O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ F4 N# y9 B* j6 S* x2 x' V0 G: K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" F2 v5 N8 D; ~6 p) ^5 M, P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( e8 T/ O; C$ j: S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, B4 D% {5 z# X, t0 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 {2 |9 A. z+ e" J& P8 g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. z) {/ C: i2 L3 s6 A" j; n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* u! D" b! O- w/ u+ E- [/ t3 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# W3 n4 e9 E/ o$ e. h7 Q& p. ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! t4 h  d" I- j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; K' l+ V, _/ A' x6 h, R6 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' n- B3 B, A6 g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* @: n; Q: H& u% T4 c  ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 k" C7 [  o! Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 ]2 ~( O: N6 m; l& R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ }+ v2 s: T1 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 f0 Y  C, z, {* h# h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ T5 ~! ^0 Y7 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- b# `! z- A- P% B# S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' ?/ L1 Q$ I* g8 p: `& O4 u( J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  o, V+ G8 E1 G: Y# B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 A; d* y$ s4 e1 W+ C9 S0 O我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  T* B( o  ~" ~1 k: P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>