【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ F5 d1 k4 r: h1 i6 t4 P. fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) y. @: E1 y. |Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 @% T9 u  @1 ^' P7 M. L" C4 j; ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 Z- T) D6 w8 S7 [. N4 k9 X1 f8 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 t  \# w$ x1 O+ [5 G3 y8 xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" Y+ y4 f' Z0 S: A% hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# B4 P: t' _* _. ^; t1 zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 C$ V  V! m" ^0 \! O5 qEvery other word you utter is love
2 G5 k: a7 ?, T8 zI really want to know just how much you love me
' n5 s; g& g$ w( R1 II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' r6 P3 ^2 m6 N1 `: E' G( X; I6 `% ^I’m still filled with fear
1 G  j4 O6 T' `7 \- ~; _' X6 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- u. z; u0 z8 {, o9 k6 u! X& M7 u: g. BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ T$ @# H& C3 Q. @+ i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ k8 d3 |" l$ s1 o  G2 I- }* B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 c# C' U& D* x# s- g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 e# k3 Y" S$ m/ A( G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; `( G3 U- D' Z) O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" G4 l/ |0 A4 P; u3 Z* K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% c& ~* e0 Q7 J; Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  o& s1 x  C0 W0 N# I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( N1 k1 U+ u, b% g  r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ V/ U! T4 v. q! r( L& s$ |8 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ A; E( I* c! y<P>你无需担心</P>
' p9 V  p; g6 r  h6 u' L* I) J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  C: _2 H  [4 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" G$ y7 r4 \0 B: n* x# S* B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% }( p0 o4 ?" v6 P' H0 l$ G: _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ j8 L/ I/ z1 r. p9 d1 R5 `; R9 y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 H& W# P7 ^8 n  t9 t4 `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ D" r0 x. B. I* z& a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: N! S( D' L( R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% j5 |9 U# F. C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; S7 C# D, B2 l. v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, C" ]3 Q3 e7 e4 t: d7 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# o9 W" Y7 w, K" A8 x, H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: X5 H+ ~, U1 z- c- n0 w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, [9 ~, {, q" b- T$ S! X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% ^0 k; H( O, f  @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! E% o( `2 M9 G0 ?9 ?! e& o& v<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 X' X/ O  u! n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' Z( K8 ]3 o9 b3 I6 b! ?0 J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. P; q- z" L# b% {5 w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) \, D. L1 t9 J4 Z4 M; u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: q$ p+ Z0 t* V! `6 I. f5 b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 M. j3 g+ |# G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) e3 K" s( J, N/ ?* }  e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  y. p1 h# g# s3 ]3 Q8 [3 ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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. I5 e. Y1 u9 _, E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>