【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 _9 U; [* r6 ^2 v( i8 N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) p, q8 m+ a# Z1 ]7 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 i7 s9 n# t4 e/ M- N# F9 DThe sky is happy down to its soul
& e  }' o( ]; ~6 h9 g. cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 g+ F3 I' i5 H, C: z9 YYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( m* `/ ~2 j  M: ~6 s1 _# i1 MI really want to know just how much you love me
2 U5 F3 Q8 E1 gI love you I love you with all my heart
( {1 }; Z2 E; v" h$ X( c4 QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 f/ ~/ l1 A; B3 b, A3 n5 \I want so much to see inside your heart
+ C8 H2 |( W9 b' D- |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 ~+ M% m# A7 ]/ T; Y# xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( g  a4 y) ^# X2 I3 eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" y- c8 I/ h  `) JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* x$ M7 B8 _7 FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: Q8 d4 n) J- _2 c2 H+ jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" P9 H1 Z; j) t* O$ E3 |! k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! G# G8 _. L* a9 |: q5 r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! M* D- u* H/ G3 Z% Q9 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% w! d$ h4 U8 W* K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# l/ J% n* X+ Q0 J6 Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: ], [/ _" o. t7 j* p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( x7 U- O+ n0 M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) `9 i+ P& ^  S% r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ q" }4 H3 W6 n( F, k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' `) Z2 A) }! b. r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' l; P4 W- A2 P/ K7 t% d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& I  Y: A* l7 \1 t( T4 ?4 w& z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" M( s9 k' Z; p! p, e$ D7 K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) l3 ]7 `/ S5 G, C! K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 R9 w: s. h! h' z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 t5 R; D0 v! ], r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 s+ i( @- i' k# E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 J/ c0 l) y7 i: v4 M  n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& N+ i7 ]$ g0 m& R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ z( Y+ \; Q4 J/ x& ~( w- ]. A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& e) m  Z( h0 l9 `# m: _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 u$ h3 S% f7 G* K- O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 m2 S5 Y! Q# a1 s; T' R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 v/ n  D) Y* o- \  V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* F6 g1 K" \+ E- d; M7 G7 z, X! V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) W" r; D: v0 n( W+ T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' L2 z6 J/ ?  V. R( s; c/ b. r8 K! O* j( f) L<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 a) R( r) X% U# M0 V9 S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 w: ^) {! ?, l8 e: L7 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ h9 W' A2 W- ?/ Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% h8 e9 ?4 y4 o% S; k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" B0 X; {+ [& P4 W! g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, _2 S) t+ w& z& C. R2 _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. }# ~  j& p+ C4 b9 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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" ]6 m$ X, x& Y1 B, \/ B8 X7 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 W. i; w1 d$ o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>