【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 v% l9 h+ m  A) u3 O+ G9 ?$ n歌词我附在后面。
' j# ]+ U$ y  I* q8 AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 ]9 i3 Z& J2 I2 L" W: A+ }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 {( s+ Q4 M. Y1 P# p8 F  EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, l/ n4 {5 \" R7 b$ P, T* pSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: z; K& ]1 T+ q/ qYou needn’t fear anything
. d4 k2 y' Q: z% f6 w+ W$ E" b0 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* B0 j$ S+ _  J$ \$ Y9 rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% J- K8 L" P& H$ M% f6 L" \) y) ?' j" A+ F- [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ B6 I0 m8 M1 n$ KI want so much to see inside your heart
9 L% c( y7 y5 x; q7 Z- A8 K- NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 U& n0 n6 l+ EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  x4 ~3 x! k+ e; w% QI regret not dying
. {$ I' L# v+ X; XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" W2 E& ]0 V8 Y: D$ vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 Q8 Y7 |% g) S, hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# [/ {! T3 S4 x* ^/ N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% N0 }7 [% {% V( y% Y) v6 \8 ?1 V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 Q; I- h2 k! K2 N; I( R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 a, ^/ A2 m' d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% L- J% x, q) S# L, q7 g" z0 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: A6 {# b: o1 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ z4 b" D; `7 w' _% a, f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ t0 D9 y5 A6 `  j8 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 _+ b) x, S" n5 W3 I( o! P9 T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( F. q/ z7 v& W, Z* t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 }8 W6 E, |% T3 K9 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. Z) K% X! g/ @" Q4 B# r9 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- m9 @' H2 M8 Y6 N) l) }4 Z! y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 R' b: s! P2 z/ x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 U8 b# [8 \% N1 F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 u, q6 u$ }8 F# t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 k, Y3 b0 X) d# E8 t7 S+ g, i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# d0 j4 p8 Z# a# k; ^9 g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# @2 \+ T- ^. o6 m# Y  j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 ]$ s. [) O5 d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' Z2 Y, D4 R( D7 {5 Z$ E7 B/ Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 h8 R: F- V' h) r  i0 u+ a9 A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 y8 e) {) u- T  g3 {) e! j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 x5 v' u7 C( V% i0 b8 O) X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 u" s& g( F5 y3 @3 @8 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( I0 o2 W: d# b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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