【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ l/ e& _9 L, j- iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( l7 `/ e+ }* E* Z& J- Y, AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- v# o' F- H/ q* rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: _8 N- I9 u& t& ^+ y/ N2 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 L- M! U8 Q5 g! K$ M3 W, w! uI really want to know just how much you love me
. i' Y* j& I% F1 x1 D1 @! a. _+ ^I love you I love you with all my heart
3 M- o6 f0 f* X$ C$ e8 CNothing can compare to my love
" V! o% M6 }- PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, D6 r  @* u& S( p- ]$ A5 ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# K1 }2 V6 ?/ v+ ]I’m still filled with fear
9 g1 T% z+ C. UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 B4 U  E6 Q3 [5 y8 s; X4 ]7 |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 K: b( C! V+ o  z, p$ u* ~0 J6 ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) F2 [4 R! K. _9 V4 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" _. W# J6 g$ O5 @3 z2 ?3 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 @3 w6 F2 j' G6 l/ h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) G$ U  i; i3 y1 t- U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ _  d/ P* ]: U1 ?' O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, S1 o5 z, g, ]: O6 T- d2 W( \/ ^: H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 [* z3 b5 `7 z4 ]* o6 Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' v" {2 [- A$ u& Q7 t: i* a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 a  i9 }- Y5 ~) g3 ?1 E; S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( I( b( N. u$ T  A8 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  b0 K" n" J0 e3 i; }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 y, K* x; Z3 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ l2 _8 T0 G  U6 i! D- t8 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" _: ?/ g: c8 l  Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" @: u1 n) G- R" H% c9 ]6 k' O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& g4 [! Y% j* I) p* `- k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; |' \  {. `8 c" H& ^! f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- G; B7 l: \" E) E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 ^; Y( a0 g; x7 Y; p) B" ^8 q! W/ u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 F: o  Q3 z7 B. _! z2 y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 Z9 D+ A0 c9 K/ Z$ a7 N. U3 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; ~2 f' H% t+ Z; W, j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 O6 T- m; h' s# X8 c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 ]2 O$ f  J! T8 t8 w) j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. K, i+ M% D1 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 f- q$ U0 u) l* _* C: E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 F0 X0 P# I/ k' B0 j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# z) y4 h/ k9 K5 S, b! c我请你剖开它

# b" e. Q; m# x; C2 ~+ { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 W( C. a  D+ T- ^+ G3 X: g# I8 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>