【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 ^5 [8 ~- [' Q! V. \: j3 ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 [2 A+ ~  u7 t, u- U6 O! q* UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 X, L$ e3 G: g; \) g1 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
- K3 l4 b4 W* U3 W+ M8 `With the moon kissing it every night
) T% x1 w6 ?, l$ W  ?: C' N0 P! Z6 `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' h, A) v6 D" X- R1 e: h* I/ lI really want to know just how much you love me
0 d: o' E) e+ c; xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  n8 W# T; E! l8 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 G0 ^% F7 d3 L/ M5 b/ |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 w6 v) H* d! v1 _2 q& _I want so much to see inside your heart
' @4 @. C3 b3 F) _9 tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) M, C6 r+ z- |- \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ M# |, ^$ h- F/ l! ]  iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* Z2 X5 D% I/ Z* S) VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# J/ U  h( J; _. `+ b/ Y$ M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 R, _' V6 P" O4 K( ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 @; u6 }- J; d* A0 p6 h& r0 o; M8 v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 x/ B6 U, o8 [+ C3 k# o' d. }+ ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, ]0 c) d  Z& u  q( L0 ?: w, g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ H6 Z, ^% c) F0 ?; @( T. X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 b. }8 s9 x  n" j; p5 H<P>你无需担心</P>
% O2 Q$ ~& X# p/ s' o8 u' [4 @6 y# q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' x3 J( t: }* m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 g# M7 L& p% I: l) Y6 i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; g, ?7 @8 i$ N3 j; Y0 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 m2 h6 F) _& [% w4 W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" Z: \9 a6 W& ?: R' c: c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. y% G) T: o# N! r% Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: R5 e: Y# R0 l: Z0 K4 L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( [  O5 O& p6 e" q- z( D" U- G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 S5 }' Z5 X" b4 T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" I1 |# \$ I1 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ w1 Q$ T5 B& {) t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ s" }2 a5 {* }/ g3 H0 A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 R6 F' l" `7 u! I/ [4 l: J' L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& }" g' z' ?+ ~  I$ d2 E+ u. H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 k" |! l4 H4 r( G$ L0 m1 z( ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" P' F- s5 o8 R* e" @: M6 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 J6 {* K1 e# M: O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: e1 ~2 w9 v2 b: K" I& R9 C$ @9 h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 |" `" \6 a, j$ h8 h' m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- U* N2 c( q( R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- ?2 _. i, \+ u% m8 @* I8 w$ H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 e) D9 m3 `8 J( A# R  T2 | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, f3 j, t7 w4 e' f9 W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>