【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. E) _9 P& V" R8 i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- r+ g% L$ N/ ~, b8 hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# F/ b- B' C5 x9 {6 ?: XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; A- ]9 p: u: d2 p$ L; fSeeing the sky content with its love
& I) J. Q( i8 yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 S! S2 k( J2 q" e" G  DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* ^, J6 S% W+ X/ TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) d3 _4 l4 t# B; J: o" O6 N1 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 `: B2 r( ^1 P# B7 W9 D/ xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" g/ @' ^, L- f3 A  H* ~! BI’m still filled with fear
5 o* B, T. i* OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 I9 d* s5 `+ U. I3 J" k$ M9 UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 w0 d; ^) g1 x; D1 v& H" z' VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 F2 ?1 L, _0 T$ [  qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 F/ z! r% }5 p; i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 b# g/ I8 ]0 A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 s# o5 \0 ~0 f4 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: x0 F9 @- F" r' O0 X( q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" J% H# ~# R7 C1 ^) ~8 }2 e  b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 f/ J2 \2 m+ ^- r6 D1 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ V# C/ d6 x& O4 h% u; S& P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* d* d8 S5 f7 U8 B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. k6 A, b, f+ i* H9 C  z: a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 Z; y2 U. y' L8 q3 C3 p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 j' \3 \; f! d2 T, |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 a' ?% Q  Q: w* R1 z: T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 ~1 W" e7 b' e6 B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% f1 j  h/ d, @" Q% M, N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 F  u. i2 @" D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 M3 s$ K; {1 m6 ]4 K2 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ v% y4 E- `' Z4 z4 G* o0 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 {3 k% c5 v5 O5 l1 L, i5 p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& i  M8 j& u& o4 ?1 i2 P& |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 r, u7 Q+ S$ x8 D: @& t2 a) I( \3 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% N" t. z3 h; {5 g! ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
( h( T" }% ^8 v# n# p, O) d2 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 M0 n* V9 e4 g6 ?% U( D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. {$ ~: j6 J' [0 o1 y2 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& Z. C+ v  K+ z- A. g9 y6 B. e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ {$ Z. h& m( @/ C+ k; v  h2 J1 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: f1 Z& p5 h6 S* y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 q# Z0 l  y; q; q, v6 J我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- r/ E+ ]' t, I" e$ ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>