【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 O6 ?' {! ]0 U5 Q& ?( l! B; f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ c: K4 ?+ D8 g9 a* E6 W) pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 L: }9 M! x; N$ ~7 x  UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 n) ], @5 i! Q% `+ iWith the moon kissing it every night
0 a4 V% v0 ]4 u0 t  {" n( B" I& v: ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& C3 J1 v; q. O  Y4 GYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 n1 K: |2 h4 W: m6 ~' Y  V( TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) w% r  y/ o% c0 X# d$ MNothing can compare to my love
( [( q, I2 [& Q( K9 a7 cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) g9 r% L) W: K$ I8 Y4 ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 ]) N) j( a* L8 I! p/ p+ CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- h. j3 ?" d; a% v9 H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: N  M- T$ L; Z) E& [- `+ Q% j9 o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 c! M5 `& `8 O( h- P8 f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' L/ t3 R' P6 \. t! {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# }% z1 k' J! m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, X/ V. B$ i0 u$ l7 w" l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) T4 |% [& d2 `7 h& w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& O% C7 i* V- d% j<P>你无需担心</P>
) M* |8 v" A% `5 x. p4 c" j( G; ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  @: \  c1 j/ O% ^& k% T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 S& L' {) h$ u% K! c: O& \. w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ T0 ]5 V$ Z) w6 H( ]  v; ]/ o6 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# A9 I; N6 q: L. n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& n8 h5 _; P, E! \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: a9 R4 X8 D6 j2 o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* V( ]/ k; Y: W5 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 j0 g# q$ n5 q! E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 U7 s! m6 k, M4 ^9 D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 @8 v9 Q! S& U; i0 v* A( g# [* V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' K/ L4 U/ k% x: ~& {" f, ~( \& B# q* `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 w' p" A( ~; X, s1 ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 F  y* y6 y! |, z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: w3 R0 [$ s2 l& b% l2 R% F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 M1 L- U+ T% y* |) q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! K/ ^/ n4 T3 [  n1 ^. j. z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, F9 a& b/ f5 s5 D4 }9 i9 b7 i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 f+ p& d/ Z# O* R3 g. I7 j2 K5 O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ ~# \- R  z7 w3 H1 s; R5 @( l; L% W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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7 S: ]$ j, a* q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>