【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 k6 f3 k0 S, w& q3 x! hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 N0 h7 Q, v6 e) P1 UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% D0 l( {7 [- {) K, sSeeing the sky content with its love
6 T6 O% g( H$ h5 f5 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 ~6 A. J9 H* |6 Q4 [You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. t4 |% w3 I) t6 Q. WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 p% h* _9 F" gI love you I love you with all my heart
$ Q7 y2 z( ?  T) B, i6 l* }. q# _Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 B' e4 w; Z' X; ~7 Q2 p) L+ rI regret not dying
+ r( \4 Y- G. r% t. P8 EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 i$ ]. n+ H' i& _9 H. G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 o9 l7 u5 t1 a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* U) ]* m7 t* t. Z/ V( M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 s# g- q% c) g& Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 O* {, E& [) G/ X# D% ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! F# p3 G" u' V: x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. Z5 j. y; K9 ?. R0 c1 R) U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& T' s0 A; \0 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' l, c2 f+ R" x- P7 T: a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 G0 O* g( i. L7 A6 u2 I5 B- o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 A0 C0 U  J% ~* X5 _, `# V% e$ r1 n<P>你无需担心</P>
' e9 F! j7 Y' L, `9 t3 @; Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  x' u" t& r+ ^# p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. z6 x: W9 F) K/ o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 L) p8 z$ l' }  _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" y( _( C" J/ P2 }/ N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ L; m; B2 J, J- ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  q& }9 q& Z6 s7 u+ Y' }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& B  N0 T- G, y$ l9 [) u! J2 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- |! L- F' j! R: g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& f7 i9 I2 j6 H, a8 C7 m4 o+ T: i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ T/ A  C& G: s' m" _9 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 V& x: P- H5 g' E7 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ ^% ]$ [; U+ }" d0 ?  ?! p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. l2 `+ K, W: U& e5 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( i) z, I* S. I: l, L+ M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. n, n) G+ g% U4 \7 {' l5 y/ R$ t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% H. h" S* @( g" ?2 E/ \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: n; o* i5 c/ d$ R7 k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' \2 |; n! C* T- v, y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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3 T7 ~2 F3 I  c: o* c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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