【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 f) G: i$ G- X; N! uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) U, _6 R% p; |- R( x" Y9 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 }8 G. k& ]$ _) Z- D, wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 I; [# a0 B) _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 u7 I' V% g( D& YYou needn’t fear anything
4 u4 b0 p' P9 Z4 f, |. }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ x  Y' y0 _5 |! Y* P/ M( SEvery other word you utter is love
. b& R% ~- ], TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 i0 [% h' u$ W, INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 d7 X/ X2 L7 @8 i4 }- HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. g8 U# Q; j; B: }7 T3 b7 _. c  {I regret not dying
9 S" ]0 U- [! W) `; i/ u" BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! {" y+ b& C2 X  e/ EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* g9 k* j& l$ N, U7 H& V8 g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. B& t" W; D; t0 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ B* r3 P1 T) v& y' k, z9 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 E& i1 c- c0 ]" e" i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( u( j2 P& j1 h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# `( t" |7 Y% u: P' [% I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' N# B0 }0 ^8 u. j, P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 y2 z6 |6 O7 T1 ^! k3 ^8 d2 J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 {+ {1 h5 N- c<P>你无需担心</P>
; w6 H2 ]& {/ O  c7 q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, ~2 Y  Y4 D* n* v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 q! l1 t9 H5 R4 z3 X1 I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. c7 o  V" _- `) `% m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: h# g7 I% e3 l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 R* R, r  H$ f2 c7 R% C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 c7 h; B, a4 ~7 c! w" @- K& E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 \. N5 E* |, X" q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 m7 v+ Z5 J  K  x+ b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% X; X( X7 A& X  g% F# _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; Q$ Y5 \; O( L0 F! G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  K# v9 x7 y) U7 U. V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  z' i* h4 a% Q+ }2 ^1 K( u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& L6 F! q: z: v6 y: s; p<P>I regret not dying</P>
: y5 C- W( U: o' \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 F# c$ Q8 x3 j: D, J$ L8 Q$ a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- F2 S1 p( b" X- F0 t8 K3 i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- ~; \3 A9 N2 Q; e5 q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- e  Y( ?1 b- C" X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 h# \' r( g1 i* Y1 E; {+ q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ |  T# n6 R4 O  j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 g5 n' z  {* f+ P我请你剖开它
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# t3 m8 |  M- K: t7 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>