【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 z! W8 C  e/ D& V) z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 q  n7 d! J4 @5 \' U7 H1 R! F( BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# z" n  n* i5 n* tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 O/ [3 ]' B7 U$ V4 DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! x1 O  \+ Q, W- [; H! M+ UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) g9 p& f  S/ N, A4 U8 B+ N4 N5 g4 IEvery other word you utter is love
/ y' C7 J8 {% b: Y2 WI really want to know just how much you love me
9 X/ h. w; \8 ~& `% v+ o1 Y( C$ tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) r& X( M# X$ r7 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 f' N" X7 \* z7 C- Y% CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, x0 p* P  K& KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! X. v& Y( V& ^! IWith such a tongue as yours,
0 ~3 g3 D8 U* WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 N# Z+ e2 f# F9 Q0 O% N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& K1 U; n) v: _' N' E  D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 `' D; r+ v* B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 d$ t4 O& d. ^% m- ^& X3 U) _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 J/ Z) h; V# y( y$ d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- N  o, `! k% h% \0 Z% t' h9 Y: S* g9 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# W% I; D6 ^" R7 _: l7 W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) F4 g& o7 S  r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* O/ H1 H/ A$ \5 x$ ~4 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 y8 v/ `. u. _6 e3 F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; ]/ R2 h  `) q* B$ ?) Z8 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 w# F7 S8 \6 ?' f$ g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* G$ T# v  h5 `$ C1 m: Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' {5 ^! p4 I' Y$ ^2 j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: n0 @0 C* }, M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 ?& U2 G) L4 Q6 [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) s, U* o1 Z; b& S9 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 t  c9 l# R+ v4 L; J  _% `4 r# o5 M6 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ e' `' ~+ {1 E1 M# t$ f: f. i<P>I regret not dying</P>
: G( V: Z9 W( Q# |& a6 ?1 l9 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( f8 I1 {% r& G, Z/ J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ s' O  _, @. n3 C( m1 n, g6 }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ O7 J3 \' C2 i: e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 G5 P$ m- b4 j1 w% x3 @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, ]" c" H2 H6 ~1 ]! w. K2 b我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# K; x" I9 o/ z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>