【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 V, o$ @0 D  z- kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: Q& g5 _. e  v" F3 V& jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ U9 f3 Q/ u" M8 u* v2 x& Z2 F2 CNothing can compare to my love
. Q9 Q0 B7 C( ~- Z5 @6 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: q+ [3 ^! ^4 D0 T& x! d4 ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# @( Y4 N6 c% z7 G" k  cWith such a tongue as yours,
+ ^0 x8 K6 z% v) \& L6 `$ cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' n: V7 P1 L" K% M  P- CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( H+ M. i% D- {: E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; s/ y& K- l$ ^9 d5 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& D- h& _! i. \. n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, j# ^3 ]0 y0 _/ ~& {; n1 f4 X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% `. F, L1 [# N) _' e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& V! l/ A  s$ y$ L- w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( o' p6 i3 A5 I" h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% {# A( P% L* v6 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 u" i5 ~/ r1 {8 j/ T: g# R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, \% S# m2 ~0 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 g) o+ m" u% b+ X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ I. U  d" y* `$ F" e<P>你无需担心</P>
9 k1 C3 j* H* R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 G; R* i" ~/ Z. r" `2 p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! `: k% `- M8 B. Q! d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 F3 T1 k0 X6 {7 i  s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: o+ @! f* v. I& G2 `8 l7 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ D% w5 F1 Q$ z. z; Z4 h' s! o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 [# P, y- a- W4 q5 b! {  b; D+ V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 o, O5 g' f" {+ J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% V7 `7 D* M" u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 n/ ~3 m9 w* q; A+ R  }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 J* Y8 f: m3 P/ N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 H2 Q; `4 s+ ^" m4 o; h& D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ Y+ `7 E/ @/ C3 D0 T<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 }- \( j, S: U" K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 ?/ k8 W, Q# d2 \3 Y6 G" p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 x  s2 @$ v2 y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: T2 `  `. C; l( ~8 L. }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 X- n: V' m1 x) n! \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ |  F6 L* m$ n1 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 k3 }, H: O/ \2 o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ U4 X! X9 G& a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>