【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 x* R( ~2 r9 L5 V% L6 q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% d$ e+ F! y$ p1 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# f; z8 a: i! F. D& _6 a6 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. b& ]7 U! g- b9 e! ^! c7 m) jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 C$ K) T0 \: `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  ?7 ?1 G4 l- XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! d) b% Q$ m; X5 ~7 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. n( ?# \# P8 w  JI’m still filled with fear
# I4 S4 d# t* _6 n5 z3 H( V; ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ n% O: E8 q( f( g" g/ Q9 f, ~I regret not dying
4 w* o. U; ?6 h3 T- ]1 |: rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( w4 L8 t$ e+ o- j- \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* j4 G- i7 d0 G. h* Z( \" OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% W; s* d0 q) S! U6 ^# z8 X& X+ f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! B( O: \" |& ~& Z- W1 F( J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 c$ d; B" t& Z+ @% s! l0 b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) j1 A: {# ]5 g" b  P; N- T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( K! K  Y( a$ e) K4 W+ f1 `! s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" m9 D( Y0 d/ U3 W% f5 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ C0 F9 Y2 C2 x, J3 ~3 y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ @* Z3 J0 I# t# b7 ?% ~& N# O1 I7 E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; t; K2 G6 Q. K" U4 l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ Z8 ?" O! o  Y$ @0 k: E) d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ B, F5 w, @2 z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, E& I6 [2 i% N/ U' G; n# z* @% ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) ?, Y7 v5 h# C! ~* V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* N7 t% `) x! n, V$ q6 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: p- L# A5 e) \& `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) L9 H' Z+ ]* b& x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 s, k0 e  _# \! F( L# k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ ~4 E5 P+ K3 a& a9 y; @<P>I regret not dying</P>
, ~( w8 E$ g; Q0 C* M# Y+ s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 w; j  F8 E; @2 [) `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, n# G/ `2 I. L( T+ o% H& w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: {7 E5 r1 }. Z7 R$ X5 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  f# t' G) g8 _7 [' P! B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 r9 X; p: X1 V& E8 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 {( l4 A3 [+ a5 k3 b! }5 ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 m0 b, L2 ^2 V$ F& q! L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>