【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ P: [, V1 a3 I/ K: R歌词我附在后面。
5 H5 `' U, a- RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( z3 L) X& h6 {6 g: kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 m* |5 v4 G1 [" bSeeing the sky content with its love
2 i# O+ U- C+ n* v$ C; N* n" H0 xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 i5 t, p4 n2 o+ L/ K3 EEvery other word you utter is love
9 A% `- L" o1 MI really want to know just how much you love me
/ S4 y+ h; C7 o$ z) ^, d+ vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  K7 Z4 ^5 u8 d( y) bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. |9 }5 {) a# MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' h" V2 A4 [- X7 o# x; G. lI’m still filled with fear
7 p0 m( n& u, C" XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  y& l1 q4 Z& @( w- }  W! E$ E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, m3 e  e# K) X; Q$ w% D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& _/ V7 A# ?0 U3 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 J9 `, F3 w0 z; S5 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 a5 i1 w" l0 G/ k* @1 u6 k8 q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& X0 L- A. P, ^# x5 b8 C) c+ k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ Z+ l2 A6 B6 f( n; j<P>你无需担心</P>
: V4 A: t5 F' B6 E" b: }1 I  [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ }+ p% e& z. p. {1 C7 O( R2 _( ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 U2 ]& }0 S; l* w% j+ Z4 R: E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 h+ ?) V9 F6 b9 l  `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 A# I( @$ E+ O$ w, r. p4 F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( H* D* w, d' W8 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 ^5 z) c0 G' F- v, a: M8 y* }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ S7 b9 j  Y5 q5 X1 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 a2 t; |' K$ P# r! e8 f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# v9 D* t2 D: l1 `+ w7 k5 `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 g# z" ]# G1 B! X, P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ X$ r% E0 o. K2 ?- y8 z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 T7 P  G* P* H  n. m<P>I regret not dying</P>
, Q) S9 U! ~3 x" e5 j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ M4 x- S( J7 J9 T, S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) e; u% n$ C/ C% D( r. w6 M1 o+ v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 X: O+ f* ~7 Y0 K3 W; k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' X1 p1 K9 @% C" n  H" G  n& |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  j8 W7 M' l8 Q( A  O! j( H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: ^0 U0 M) x$ v我请你剖开它

. D8 N* C, ^8 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# w3 U# ~) M0 D  T! U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>