【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ H! `5 f* N1 _3 T' U8 dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 d9 [" |7 f# x6 |  f. gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 t9 n# Z# E( ?& Y, l# j+ SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" b* y3 J- v! v9 \8 HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! \% A% t6 {+ ?" TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( X( s/ s0 o( N. v; o# w9 B( n, nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- O: a! P/ f5 l( JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 u1 @3 F( Y, F7 M! e& c1 wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  B% F0 m$ O% VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 X1 P" ~/ H' mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 E  q( O: d8 P! VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# Y3 `7 I) H, {7 z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 ^5 T2 y7 k7 d7 [; G+ ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 E0 ^- \5 [5 I; A& {4 [4 b1 n0 C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 u' ^& e8 ~$ _' s: h5 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 q! Y$ P0 T4 g) b4 F3 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- s& {: r) G  O  s' T- Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# ?. S1 }0 h$ Q8 S5 X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* x" r& f& B! u5 ^) Y0 l% |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 D' z) v' U! Q% }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ I4 `7 ~! u. q$ _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 Q! [5 z; X. i4 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- J) R/ g3 o) c' O3 O( F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 l' {7 t. m) ^( D6 G2 Z1 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- A0 g! L( n: S7 ]/ T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. G% `. D) _% K" Y; u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" V) F/ {2 m# t" A: Z" B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 Z2 f0 |) s) t6 ~7 M( v5 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 \' G& h  j/ a6 ?( h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ r# v- K$ F7 i; s. \  y4 {% G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% `, H3 `+ Z) I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 s% s$ C( I' u0 u( g; y3 b, {+ A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% X0 G  V' k+ N9 b& K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* k" o5 J+ d" J/ q) Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ o% ^8 e5 T" w$ o! E/ j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* p9 G& r& A) J: {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 n" l: _  L/ \" c# K% q<P>I regret not dying</P>
& u( M" f+ b6 X3 _5 J1 }$ a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 X; u( f  g. t' L) S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 o6 u' \$ h7 J: I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: g2 f9 F4 {9 l2 n- M5 ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( |4 X2 c; w# U- I, Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ B/ Q8 T% I+ [' q2 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 V7 C9 K8 g5 x4 ~3 j# B. V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>