【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! Y, w- B8 |* X! T" Y4 u1 P* NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 p$ Q( l8 {2 f" a% f+ O( a0 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ B  v- s8 c; Q9 K. m  ?With the moon kissing it every night
+ a- B- J# l, v4 ASeeing the sky content with its love
; L; z6 ]: F3 o1 P$ p* ~  y6 J% ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ G6 X% T$ G7 T: g5 j9 bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: z" U: @/ D" D# h3 KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 s+ X+ T. J9 I9 U9 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( _1 d* N, q' A$ ^3 W# \: kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% ~+ S' B+ {+ cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( Z2 ^, P1 y% w, ]) ]: W: kI regret not dying
: x' U  T1 |: hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* B5 R4 H. D5 s' ~: n: R$ F  ?4 ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 G% w- |' H3 M. y& x, L) A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 g: S! j: }% k/ f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 a( b' x: I$ ?+ v  t$ x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: {) K5 {2 i7 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! j% ]4 ^" `( n) ]  F# k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% M  b" p' ?4 {  p" M) s* |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 x' C! U+ D) B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  D* b' G0 u! O( C6 z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' A0 b$ Z: K. d6 U* W. i/ F5 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( k# G: H) S7 P& N  R% a6 N<P>你无需担心</P>
7 A- {" v& L% l& E) n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' S* N( r! [# ^1 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! C9 j  N6 N' Z' w0 b3 G0 q! S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 c' C2 ^" Q: O7 h' ~6 K" P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- [) M5 E* J% v- \, I1 s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  F8 c2 A: ]* x2 o& @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ }( [# m% G' t0 @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 q/ |3 i* x( o' _7 ^/ p/ l, S7 F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 Y, i: Q) O6 N" D0 E( Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. O- f, d0 D7 m  ]- D/ H% i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 V# W0 z2 h9 L' E  t6 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* v: H$ Q* x6 y) E& e2 S/ ~( O# y" ]8 r6 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
# @+ y/ a$ Z) o) K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- D/ Z3 n' D: s( D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, E1 H6 K- r1 A; c: H  i% `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: ?$ M! E0 r0 s* H$ N* D5 p8 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 d0 _3 j& {5 k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, y- q8 Q* ]# J. m  d& n/ E$ `: w+ F我请你剖开它
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% ]" C- v- `. S  O) F2 E1 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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