【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 F; y  b! N6 @2 }4 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" y: z7 g  q. r. i% h6 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 k  W: b2 Y. X6 e( s- L% r4 USeeing the sky content with its love
  t. d. j- q% s9 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 Q% r7 O- T* h  G2 \' \) uYou needn’t fear anything
% R2 y( }* _7 P9 Q6 [9 @% I/ T2 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 ^! A6 r4 ^9 f* y" l0 l/ Y- |- V. cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# w6 ^7 b+ S9 x. N  j4 O. q# OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* S' C# L- v8 X* bI want so much to see inside your heart
/ ^; `% o! ?7 p- }$ q: lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' A. C! Y" A, PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' F' L) g& L, ^& I# UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% o, T6 O, L# }8 z* MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 j7 x- s9 n+ V7 s3 y, r5 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ f! ?, T+ {+ L  H, L. \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* C: ^0 @; t8 V* \5 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 `- {$ V. r" ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' `. p0 C0 O' x. n) {7 |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! P6 [. d; U" a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; w3 y. r- l9 g( E* |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* q# s5 w0 @, G8 a" c. Q5 a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! l, `% j, x# o* m0 V  _+ a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) I9 \) a4 C; e- _4 G5 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* s% t2 Q6 O; \' W4 I1 p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; y! v) b% I; U; h* x  u" j2 H3 P  u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- l' v) V) b. I! F6 t% H# O% B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: K( F% P+ X1 [& Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. l* `3 Y/ ^3 ]/ F/ Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 ?. F7 Q4 [: R/ d9 \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 O: b" M0 C1 b! k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 V% Q& i5 O9 T# w9 G' h- [9 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 T& A# Q2 W% O0 K* N; H+ u5 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 i5 P+ u& d, N: l( V4 b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 `3 @$ y2 V0 I) n$ [) q( O' O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

: o& ~9 b/ b9 h7 i5 P& e: t6 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# T3 n# [& [' S1 {( M% i3 @1 v$ U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>