【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; N& V" y" A# j" K$ }* {4 R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, m: I- c5 i2 |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% D/ I  L$ H7 [- m# NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 ^" W4 Z3 s$ n/ h: e. SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 R/ N. s. N/ [+ d$ J( lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! G$ s( j4 x$ }- ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 f1 x/ M# W9 K$ m& Z- zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 {/ ]/ v! T1 e2 v! W7 `" }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 s* q) l( l8 l# QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, l* S" y, K9 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 P% _. C  i( P& ~9 }" [1 M! P( E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: `& n- J5 w  s; V1 W1 X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" p- C+ K% H# m6 a" W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- w- w( k& I3 [6 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- z3 z3 o1 Q3 v' L8 R5 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 H" O- L$ W/ C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  w+ f& [) U+ l9 Z' A  w9 C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; p, @; m4 W" z+ M$ U6 u9 G. r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' Y1 `- x& _+ B3 ]8 q  s1 ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, L% q" I# N* M3 W<P>你无需担心</P>
/ q% M  _' d, @; w; J# V( V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 |. ]1 r' c- J( G! T/ P6 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 \% t. ~- I, Y* g, Z& ~& r3 ?5 X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 n. B1 h3 K' U* ?- a  k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  t% f0 G' M) K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 N, _" N/ o" T9 {( y$ M! g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' i$ ]2 P5 `) d+ }* W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* Q  i7 N5 k$ n- N' C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 X8 e- n' o) t1 i! x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- A3 n1 p' a, \) v( g/ T# n0 T) _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% s. P" @; |' g  T/ \# J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% s) F& x$ l1 L4 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 c: p0 b0 H. `" c+ \: M. B/ \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) `3 E, n3 [* q6 X) Y. u! ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ @" Y8 [5 R% q; ?0 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* J& ?$ V" _* k1 g  O+ J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, j% ~! W/ ]9 v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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. Z  P- S6 P4 p# f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 j$ c  z3 r. e! A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>