【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: P1 b$ {. q. w/ _- z+ \' u8 f歌词我附在后面。
5 C: a9 C) s2 s( J' ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
; N3 q- x! X/ ]: J- F# X  s8 K7 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! W( y1 E- \' p+ m# A9 F( BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- B+ u7 K! R' r# o( OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 j2 }( q" G, w& ~/ D, Z  Y' JThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 U/ Y( s  M9 {1 fWith the moon kissing it every night
0 J4 s- w" }" i3 ]7 F# ^0 YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 w& y, @( q" v/ u6 g- T5 `! lYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 J4 r# ^- i& ]0 \5 e/ gEvery other word you utter is love
. S$ F9 T( J; _' vI really want to know just how much you love me
( m5 J$ g: t3 k6 H* N$ nI love you I love you with all my heart
3 e: ~" \$ z  _3 m. ~7 q+ dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% M* ?( [( t+ z* e( f, v! ^I want so much to see inside your heart
/ x& Q4 W( k" [4 q% p6 |, x; p' O, UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 p8 w! v" ]" qI’m still filled with fear
9 K$ h9 f8 s, i  N$ O/ ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ D, e7 a% V3 ?0 lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  L1 p' z0 c# C; r" B( J' xWith such a tongue as yours,
- p; F7 {+ d4 s' `! zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( |: f( L- j2 K9 HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ V  I/ K: \) l. f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 Y6 x( `& A7 }) |& E$ O: t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 N" a0 W. F; a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ f# P% H+ F9 p# K* R( ^% k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 W- j9 u& h* t0 n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; u2 b' ^) T# u6 M+ ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 u9 O" n7 h6 Q7 X9 X9 U( O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' v# u! w/ W4 b5 D  H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; a6 E! |% C8 M! p* o; J6 X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% y$ N! U( v4 d* j, o" d/ f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ O7 C2 k6 J* j$ Q$ _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% K. |- F/ i8 O( G6 {) l, K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# g' f) X* x7 P1 z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  Y" x$ Y: T+ g9 R3 r$ y& E: D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 u9 E! _6 V' E0 g( ]" r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- z6 N. Z7 I- I/ V" ~0 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# t! P5 n0 C' ~9 j) a* e9 v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% l; O4 c6 X) k4 Y4 j+ `, B/ k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ c4 p( C) I( i  N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& V- i& k0 B6 N! U" j* h' v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  `9 m) O0 w" l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; y* m" k/ ^2 d% V" L. ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 d" n9 a& T  d, N" m- M+ V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( ?0 e$ ]4 L% g4 i- P0 u' S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' U/ s' b" s+ G$ u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ y$ x! x2 p+ ~+ [. n: |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' x& G9 |0 @3 U" W5 J' P1 C5 S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- O# d8 [' i, k3 W% e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' M6 J3 Y2 T5 ]2 X  T4 v我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 a$ M0 C1 H  d0 g" `/ }8 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>