【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 I1 S: ]5 a  gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" [8 ~+ ~. e5 {6 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. V% a* j( `- aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( d7 ]* U* ^' M3 R2 D- [, wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 }: ]( b% U* f8 w0 X! B# ASeeing the sky content with its love
' U8 q9 ?) |) G0 S/ A: DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& |5 h7 j+ c/ X4 aYou needn’t fear anything
6 z7 |6 \9 N- G7 z& ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" `% S  d1 W: {8 D* s; q$ b. @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ N) z  K. k% G. P/ C  _' ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 g+ d$ U! M  t1 g' |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 F, d# r0 L5 Q2 ^. UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# s: D% J  O# o3 uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* \6 x: c$ L+ |, S* Q- P6 ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 U# y/ `: v# H) O( pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! e# a% J8 [' @8 n6 Z& o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" W: E: A/ X, K% T6 v/ Y( k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 _- T( f, Y0 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: I/ w! n. v1 _2 l0 W7 J/ @( l1 I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! s3 p. \7 ?$ ]; |. P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ l6 `, s6 _# u; Y  }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 B# G5 p! [' ~" J3 Y% I" x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# p7 m0 Q* b$ v3 [1 P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 o6 X$ a8 W! g8 v% {% W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 N2 ^9 P6 T& V4 f0 ]) n( Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# C* u* S& R# M, f  @, Z2 R- d! U1 A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! `; p( M# x( m; y. e& ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: ]" L3 N. m0 G0 S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; {3 d8 q1 e2 S0 j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 t9 ]6 Q( o. o6 @4 |# O; y& ~& d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 ^* e6 ^0 m1 x& ]5 H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ X; g* s2 g* i1 P5 `* ~9 @5 n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 F) P5 C, S- q8 `) |* I6 ]& ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 T$ _. B& J8 v! G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 l) d% J& P; j) b- {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ ^$ ]" K/ C1 C1 @& `7 Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! N/ R0 f" j4 I0 L' V# z5 B- L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, I( x! `) m4 g7 `" G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! G9 E. Y- i/ X! _8 ~9 @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: \* C$ m! t: w. t' L! {) Q+ z+ k6 l, P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 M7 L0 ~" O% Q( Q2 W' |我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 z& L) c/ q6 H7 r6 h/ I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>