【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 Q+ ?0 @: q  f- S0 [歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 F% J- B. r6 N/ _2 V5 W1 a. V6 y" a' BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 i. f# T1 }# K' L8 L$ w. @. j7 `. |$ H7 ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 C0 _% a6 J- T( \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. @0 V; f" |* M7 [4 E! {; rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. z# u% V' t+ L" O. Q" t( W4 oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" E1 G0 b4 k2 L0 E. X" }4 H4 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ x$ n1 D9 R: J8 ~# _8 d! q. w- wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; S) z4 c# Z2 d7 |* SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 D. w, ]% |( x( ?8 v% tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 m' q  ~7 w; ]1 I$ X$ ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% [6 w) @" R( ^/ V( b$ x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 `  g+ M3 q& Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  x+ V9 s# p. F3 ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' N$ _& U0 ~( m$ p# K, y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# b* P; _0 I* d0 u0 a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 z+ J- Z. ^. k5 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 J1 o; H. m, e: ~7 T& x; M1 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ G+ U3 m$ G# d8 c& @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 U8 e. D7 B, }1 I5 {' V$ Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' A) u2 ~' `  _9 K# Q! T1 @) t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" b1 C# M3 S: [$ _; Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" v1 }: Y0 Y$ f3 [! N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 Z4 U$ R! V! P" b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 U9 v9 B: p& R: h9 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& G2 t( k" x$ }& B0 j, s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 p$ B4 ?  g5 i- x1 g3 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& \# P( ~$ p/ B4 l8 `: ]# s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- {: ^! B" i# _  I2 G) z. e1 P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  G: _2 |2 r7 h* |7 D5 ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 h6 j& k8 G- [* H$ H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ \/ W; \( e' l+ p+ D, O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% P2 k9 x$ j7 x) F) o5 Q$ y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( c9 q3 Y& b+ s' w6 l( W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 Z* t3 ^2 g: R1 `7 G我请你剖开它
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2 I/ f: L/ ~( M/ v: ]0 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; e0 j0 i! x: y& k3 `9 S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>