【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* Q! r* Y, X, P$ HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 A5 b. g) w; t0 X, PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 H- o, |) |4 _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 Z! l% Z& h; U  d$ x+ s2 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& n3 ], @5 d" a/ @4 \  lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" r% @; h+ x! U4 f0 NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  z3 p6 L, N8 G$ X  r( aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# F: H. ~3 A. x! `# k, v9 X& ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- W: U# _  T" s6 Y/ A1 N2 Y/ F, lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, e" d" O2 l3 }, Q% oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! r' q8 ^5 I/ ]1 T8 E6 |% OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- f; `+ l( @8 M1 l: oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ [8 d% R* e) v  v) R7 E3 A) W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 r: V1 K7 L) ~$ J( x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( E) g1 U: R4 }$ }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' d; A7 r+ j$ Y/ H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ }. r( z+ u" u) D, u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 [6 }7 i7 I3 n$ ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 [' f$ e# E; W; N# N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ Q  j/ Q# U( Q, x* w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& i& B3 F2 o0 R, f: Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ @1 }% R/ I: x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* }0 I1 k6 v" }- F5 y% v8 D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 n6 G/ C' q6 x) l, F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ i' S" e  p4 n. A1 u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 [& e. |! k6 P2 j/ d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ o0 ?' n( w$ @( V& k6 I- b/ g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 r" V: S/ q; g4 R5 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: ?  n$ ~: v2 ~. u* o- {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ E  l! \- c' h2 y5 J9 x& q+ l3 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' s' N, }2 ~" `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( K& ^  \5 d  G- e( a8 U- \1 Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 V4 }% m2 _3 I% B$ e# m4 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 l" w% h6 b- h9 i$ \8 t0 @5 a& Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 U' b5 I. M0 F3 d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! L  L1 \/ d+ d8 W) T<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 P. T( [9 L: S2 P  G, m  q$ q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 v$ r5 L- x$ p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 d% W- \* T$ f* C+ J- c6 x; I! w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  o, ?2 n# Z! {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: v. _, w  o; t/ x/ W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 u0 j7 u( K3 x8 a7 |6 }9 Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 V" h$ p! S) D8 k% {7 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>