【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 e9 j* `+ V# j7 K) P歌词我附在后面。
4 E# T8 W5 s1 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& c* _0 `1 K+ ]2 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 u9 c! u4 A$ e+ y' V  R2 nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 S: X) H7 P+ \# I" @! ^7 bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% l; k) e$ K  D& ^! ~/ IThe sky is happy down to its soul
' {: w8 s0 K4 X# x5 R% nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" R0 a9 U7 K2 O* [( C! VEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 v. w% D8 @. d' j* ^" [5 r% XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 q' ?5 V  m) y5 F* F4 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* q$ y" S: F" bI regret not dying
) r$ A' @$ a0 |4 T+ x  m3 a8 B4 sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- ^" w$ R# n- \3 @  C1 P! _- QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( [# r7 k; f0 p$ R- k3 H  A; S7 C$ [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 r. ]; Z' t9 g1 ?1 d2 N! Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 g! j9 t  }4 _8 m$ n$ a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" |0 N4 F' t6 K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 q3 B3 s2 {! N* o9 [8 Y8 F$ F% G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: Y. l* y! a5 N8 V+ z1 c! U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& ^3 S6 g4 K: j5 q) p0 c- ~  \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 F+ \9 s* B) t6 {; B+ L- i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 d2 Q" {) ]( k/ b! R; [! G3 z<P>你无需担心</P>
4 }/ Z9 \( x. C# b! K! `; r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 R9 O. k6 a. D: f8 ?. Y/ Y' F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 P1 L- E: u3 a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& k. N6 X0 C5 I8 }2 y. O) ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 E/ x1 u7 N! S) a( Q, u" K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, I$ R4 V3 g2 B* w$ g# v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, G* b  e  N8 V; x# k4 o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: G& {; C2 @  S. g* @- G* E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 }2 Q! k. V% o; [& K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 ]2 j3 w  r9 w# |- D2 S: W0 D: t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) v: Q- t$ [: o: ]: k3 W( k3 h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) q% v; l, f, p8 m2 y% R0 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( l' z% `, a1 T- p. G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. S/ e2 g$ ?' H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. E; Y) w3 ]: k; o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ U* I  k6 c# R5 h! O# S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. ]5 C" |! {/ x' n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' `; q0 q( c0 r( j  [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" P$ [# x8 h! {/ N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* q, {+ ?+ @' G% E4 v6 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* v5 t. C) W2 O* ^" Z" S5 ?% j* C( K2 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) \' [- u/ v* J7 o' Q, T5 Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>