【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 P" e6 H. ?6 R: [; B; W$ f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 H; t- R; K/ h* J( D- eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ L- K; S# {  ?4 B2 ^6 K4 }The sky is happy down to its soul
0 K: Z6 G# e0 o! ^* v0 g$ W2 l/ M- OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' d, b( E, o, D  X: j3 z( TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 b0 C% t" w  Q! pI want so much to see inside your heart
+ O0 q5 h& ]8 T! s& |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# X1 e/ v$ ]/ Y9 T0 `1 z( Z) OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, a, k. l  l; AWith such a tongue as yours,
% @" R% y# [/ A7 ^5 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 V1 ]- v2 o6 a5 r; }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ p4 q+ w. Z4 ]/ b- Q* DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 C+ T* ?" ^8 B. M5 X8 m% }, I% H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ Y: `* U) H8 e* E7 _" [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, T7 N& A" j4 v7 {- c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ d1 V! a: d! W4 n( O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( }) x: E. T% L% _. \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  n' v" i2 b; K0 A' g2 i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- @: g2 J- E0 T- n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' b6 D6 T8 y, h  `6 N. }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ O* D, W5 K$ H( t3 Y" {3 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 _" a$ k- {4 s  v! Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 {4 N: v2 f) q1 d9 W! r- U. n4 B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 \5 `2 {8 Y' F' _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# X5 U& \) |) Y2 N! g( v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ K* E  B! z5 H5 I5 I! s& l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" ^1 S4 H2 k! J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 V8 x" V+ _- |7 f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" K3 @9 ^% {) K- z' k; N) `% D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 a% I; |& m2 U+ \+ s4 c: W0 Z9 }8 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( h; Z8 Y5 x( Y3 H; J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  Q' d( m( Z, E7 l# _' d# _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ V( V& T$ N  p6 g/ v$ r; f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 W4 I# y; \/ t- x7 B5 |8 {8 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( o! O  v  P/ a1 ?- F3 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 j6 g& ~: e2 Y- p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 o5 `2 h( [7 ?1 n6 N& W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- }# ^7 q' [$ c: B  j! I9 X5 b/ R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' |! ?, p0 `/ O* @' F+ F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ n. l) G- W1 w  `$ e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" C4 v3 D$ L2 }+ z( |1 N- t' Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: |/ E, w! ~. n3 @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* W5 ?; j4 E& h+ {# R2 m, L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 \7 v. r5 l9 p& _5 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 x2 P( K' i3 ^; H4 E6 c& c我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. {3 E* U. C, I2 @/ e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>