【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 U* ?3 y+ L) b6 S3 k/ S; q: ]0 E4 [歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ x; t5 D' ]; P8 r# d+ h& lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" O4 a# a3 {/ `' e! X! q) X7 P/ aWith the moon kissing it every night
; l- J/ Z6 U1 o3 j3 d" OSeeing the sky content with its love
! ?, ~- `4 j# d" hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& K, _9 X- w3 m1 ]2 O: c7 z" D" BYou needn’t fear anything
2 l. B) h) X/ v2 }6 uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 h4 L6 s, s4 K; G9 _* fEvery other word you utter is love
7 Z: T+ O- e  @  a$ JI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* |* ?# b8 \5 g; S# z0 a2 F' V- iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ ?+ r" `* |9 E8 w+ `7 BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' A/ B7 v/ m& ZI want so much to see inside your heart
1 E9 S, Y! f* T0 r. I( MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ x; f6 P) E5 I1 r- tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ u8 D8 d$ e1 w$ V7 lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 L+ l% Z' |) K  d6 ?* H1 kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" C0 _/ {  ^- W( a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ P- ^1 F4 f$ |; p' k. ~% e8 ]! ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) ?7 ]1 X4 ^! j" k4 L, d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. b/ p( s4 s% e5 |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ Q$ W7 d/ @& u( F, [- g" D4 Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 a9 U5 P) ^( a3 \/ i, f+ G9 X4 u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 P6 V, _( G5 J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% M* q2 I2 ?  z) F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" @) M# G, z1 J: @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 {* _% \) `* c; Y% ]' _7 ]9 m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  w, O8 b: T$ f- O6 r. b. H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 ?$ H6 Y+ k1 S' \: a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! j( P- K* K- e$ B9 f/ A" m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ S' w; ]. x3 a  ^3 O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 O' m7 N2 a, o! N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! R1 z( V& f1 R: k7 h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 X) r, ~7 h( W) d  k. q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ ]$ D8 |, p; M6 s; B0 g4 v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, |3 q2 y/ ]" _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 M' q: O: z3 z5 o: m% `1 q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- f, b+ [- P) i& Z# P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 S$ A/ {( i! X7 R1 N" I' O% b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 V6 ~2 j" X, a2 z0 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: i4 q. r8 h6 e2 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' {* L2 |8 `4 R- O1 G我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>