【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& ^9 \2 D( \( N: T0 j7 ~- H- FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 f' @+ `! j5 k( BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ X$ `% n. w+ gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- s( B  `$ D0 D/ |, B- KI want so much to see inside your heart
5 c8 |8 v: e# [& _- K, N8 WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 J; B: |5 V( q9 F0 b1 O$ dI’m still filled with fear
' A- f9 ^$ m% b6 _$ R, R0 kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 Z/ o; B9 V5 L- K$ K. {# t+ F/ [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) s7 B& q6 i2 k- X* G' N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 J& s8 U+ Y" c" [7 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& f+ [2 S! p& ]1 H  i1 y' |* b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! y1 [/ S7 U. q# H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) l0 c, [- ?, W- U2 N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 q, j. f' @# a- \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  j& K; W# p/ H/ ~( `6 Z) A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; ]: i/ [; O( k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; \1 t7 q) O$ B- \. `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, c, g# S1 z8 O: I7 ^8 i' R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 t) r) {' m9 A7 q# c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# }# X# s( H6 f  r0 g8 g- D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& C  Q" X( j* N# D& x4 c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ S. n5 b8 q- N9 X+ d& l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ e3 G1 D0 u8 r5 L' Y: u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- z( o6 c# v& a4 J4 I9 c. v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& S8 }. O: u* v4 z; w1 q3 P7 E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- D# N: a( r: b' q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; I" H. H  _+ s4 H1 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 e$ r; H( w2 P4 H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. {; t: G6 l, l( S! w. g6 Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  d) f9 o: W( T8 X3 [# O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ V" U- Z8 i# `* ]; B( v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" n* w) P( I6 O# T; e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 W5 T8 n5 H1 F* O) _6 q! {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 M+ U2 o: {4 C$ u4 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 n5 t6 g$ q# H: o6 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 ?1 |5 o4 _! V4 a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. I* e! [/ Q. o$ d! a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 H6 R9 j1 S9 L% e2 ?7 L: w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( y# q2 L  @/ P/ C, Z7 U/ U( u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>