【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 K5 ^( g1 d! k+ Q- k) {% O) t, Z% PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& k% o, I5 D6 w1 {The sky is happy down to its soul
* [9 S# K; M9 i7 M( `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! y, @& ~& c. B! E3 O% K9 O. sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) j6 y% ?& I5 ]7 z0 rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 e* r* |' l# c/ x" bNothing can compare to my love
: y& w( ]; K& x1 t% fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% i  R1 x2 n2 Z- CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" W& S/ ~* V' l7 A1 O: v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" O4 \* H& X  m5 X6 c- ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 \0 c8 l, w2 D  I) T0 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- Q/ C: i' n0 ]8 j6 b( a' j' F0 }. o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. `" J2 |, \# N+ h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ p# j4 \5 U! o; d; o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% [* x+ q% z3 u/ C  F, u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 b( w3 ]4 |  {3 A$ ~$ h3 _+ ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' s% h& l" [4 a' N+ ^" e8 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ O1 X) s$ P1 c9 z. E/ r# `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 X- o0 q* _* |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( g9 m0 b! U) d# n- O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  ?9 T2 w; V9 `: N$ B5 r& t' V( l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  a. u* k; p$ F0 c8 B* `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 ^+ A" s! E% ^! }2 m7 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' z3 E+ E0 C( g' ]) n, U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ y- Y: D! O2 O- X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" A; _9 p* d( \- P, |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 F( z8 ]. e8 \' W2 t; {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' q5 F+ Z/ [3 K! r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  ?1 w( R# ?7 {0 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 \% F! l: M. M; k- r, h( i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: ]7 Q% R- d1 i4 o/ }$ u7 g$ ^& }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# U, ^0 z1 N" K' L3 C- I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# L8 r3 G5 c1 t7 @: E0 `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( R0 w) c2 Z2 `' m: E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ c6 K8 J+ t& _1 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ D- @; B2 @5 F" p! o: S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: g; i* j- z0 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 K" R+ W& Q5 r( S+ X8 W1 }, i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& `7 t' P( G: k' _# H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& ~3 A4 p  t0 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>