【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 b1 \9 E( v: t9 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ q8 E$ o8 d/ N/ U" m5 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( v# D2 G# E6 u( v" p6 W( X* UThe sky is happy down to its soul
( v8 w0 C6 ]& M; YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 D- H( o. F+ b1 O% N7 K' Y' dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 k7 `  J$ G& O% R# x7 k$ vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; y( T) g/ j6 F, d# N8 L% ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 N# j! t) o  [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: H  J9 s& t$ p6 Y0 b$ ^# }: }) }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 B( Q7 s( _2 uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" C. Y+ \$ }+ l& _; G: w" oWith such a tongue as yours,
* U+ p: `* d6 w5 `- ?+ TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' a" C7 p7 |$ R: p# h, |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 V, }  l4 h: f- g  L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 _! M( S2 Q. H2 o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  ?/ m/ z1 p/ ~9 H7 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  A* l! s( L4 d! ]% O7 _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 |9 N3 t7 b9 R6 l% ^5 L: o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ e8 R+ z' e. G. V1 P# n' S4 D/ M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. N' U9 D' V! {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, |& ], i+ J0 J; U: V* w( T3 Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ L" C3 ^1 Z$ a5 U( `' Z4 g* E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 e: R: c% ?& [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) p. B4 n- R% ?. e; d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 Q  [: j) `2 G; {  N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 e; d8 r3 A$ ?/ }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 G9 c  P9 W# I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ s( A. i7 Z4 M8 o+ M; [: t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# F8 J) `8 l, R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! e  k; ^2 j( w* f( b, u! k4 h8 c9 l4 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- H* f* {; V6 B# X8 y4 @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 r1 W! x+ E) d: T/ u+ f- H& Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ Y, X7 Y, M+ ]3 S- G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# s' u6 O: V* R. m+ w, C- x* Z& R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 W# q% e7 x7 J5 B, v2 r8 t0 b7 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- M. d' D* g' w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& m' I+ M- R. ?- B. \( r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& D/ L; l! V7 L8 U, c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! p* q- m+ k2 A# M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 q+ @. h  l2 Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ [$ d, U) ?" a% G/ W) `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>