【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 Q; U9 u* n. Q# `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 o* q0 h, X0 i- X5 ^! aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 s' s, V( M/ J/ T; f9 W. DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 n( ~% Y5 f5 x! o  |3 o: BWith the moon kissing it every night
0 d1 L5 H) A! ~. {) z3 c/ ]Seeing the sky content with its love
! ~' V; I4 @) x  N2 I( G+ YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 h( _# Y) o5 U8 d2 w0 V7 }! p- CYou needn’t fear anything
( _8 ?( q( v1 e" TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 k, A! _0 n8 V6 `5 g' F! b$ wEvery other word you utter is love
, ~- s) n- `5 Q) W  yI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# U- [9 l2 m5 M. {6 R( x: k- ^! u- KNothing can compare to my love
2 h2 A' ?6 a& e4 v7 }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 p! v0 y$ ?6 G, OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' {/ z5 j0 Z9 lI want so much to see inside your heart
% i! y% c" `2 T0 _; hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) m" T0 c) v( T* O; p) X5 O0 B; VI’m still filled with fear
% n, g& h' m1 k" Z2 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 o2 Q8 b' B3 ?* eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 ?' P4 G' v9 f: V2 {1 qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' v5 t4 ?9 o& l% `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# D8 k* U0 q( j, p$ f3 b% B4 |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& E$ d1 ?. p) d# u- c4 z% A% o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ V% I$ @; s7 z8 ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 Y/ e4 h, E0 x9 w& \9 g7 y) m& v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- Y: |* h2 I5 N7 a& ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: ~  W+ P2 B0 u) w" a1 r9 T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 Y; l' n5 K- ^6 O4 Q/ s# A: G<P>你无需担心</P>
) S0 X6 V$ N/ u: X  h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; k5 c" B# ]# R: x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: Z  ~3 [' @' g! w; |& g* a$ W) W0 S) i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 F- o/ _& q; K! P- a8 h$ n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& `% z  E; g$ I: f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) @# M0 z+ p# g" s/ Q5 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! a& i6 r3 U% l% L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% f1 h" n6 b0 c( w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ m, @* y' _2 I+ t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ u) W( g2 A* K5 S- q: f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 q0 D* j/ C7 F7 E# R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( B8 M- ^$ I  T- @% C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* i' x; R* z! ?0 e2 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ \; y8 r2 e1 C/ \6 `- g2 @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& _" s- q  j8 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 l4 S5 J$ l* V/ ~: {. Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' O, j* Z4 f0 G) D$ ]3 r& \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 J$ M; C( v2 e我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" l* _6 I3 x) I  T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>