【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 ~9 x: q% R% m/ x5 [) N( y. ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 e; l& V+ t, p" c# zWith the moon kissing it every night
5 w6 w3 j8 U2 U/ QSeeing the sky content with its love
- P0 S5 e# b" ~5 r, O" h& y. cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% N# y0 G2 u- n  k3 @0 r( A, }4 Z8 @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' [8 u6 z& [( p: qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 I: a9 F+ ~- bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% [4 r5 e: g& u. b8 c4 [$ Q2 ]# qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 s0 s7 y( M- HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  [$ J: r" S3 p, r! J. MWith such a tongue as yours,
! {: j* ~/ k. {# R$ }& X4 lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 s* L# z: e' h6 n3 YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ s' h1 B4 u3 l! w5 M' f  RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 e& r) P8 O0 z, W! D+ G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 D; j, n: f/ z& o6 N. p* A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; I! R( V, Q! U' a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 F  P2 A! K7 w8 R; e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 S( `# K  ^$ V, t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 Z$ g. ?0 O- ?; R/ M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* m2 \# Y1 }0 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" `6 C( }! ~" i: V" G4 J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  }. \1 I7 v8 p0 [! N0 m/ e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. U: G1 P0 b0 w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' |  n% T, N4 ?9 M! m4 [<P>你无需担心</P>
$ A& w# `  Z  m5 K! B3 w4 ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% |; W7 J) A  v) k6 l, U" w! M+ M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& ~0 j" k) ?: q  \( ?- H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ o( F/ g/ P6 a" F* V. b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 P$ U/ D4 `1 b+ i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 [+ v7 w; f: x3 E$ E. }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 V# m2 p. T" {. w. n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 |2 R8 D2 C4 a) y! a4 Q# C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 K/ F' B1 t# b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 C+ I$ T" ]4 c* s' T* d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. W7 m9 Z4 N% M$ E  P9 v$ N  B8 ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 U* C( f9 Z. k" q9 I* E4 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ d3 k+ X# _% ]1 X* z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 t5 Q% q/ w8 x* R" ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# O# B5 j  d* o( k7 ~7 ?# k7 {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" |. G2 j- b+ U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 b: M9 {& Z8 D: M. }; d- a9 T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' ^6 |" H( ~. i% G; n0 X4 C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 |3 c) ]) u0 R5 s4 i/ ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

6 V  ]( e3 A; ^( E' _8 n  F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 ?$ z, P  H! T8 A1 y+ v- u! T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>