【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 P. u% W% S; s- U& J( eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" \4 ~8 P+ c" A5 ~" F5 }. }3 h' CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# b2 s9 r% ]' z% ]; _# SSeeing the sky content with its love
- H* P" N2 M8 M7 K  Z3 K- _4 u# ^* i: fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# m: F+ M: |( K3 o) g; oEvery other word you utter is love
- K1 T! ]5 R2 z' g) eI really want to know just how much you love me
5 `  p" i: q8 g7 R: HI love you I love you with all my heart
- v( `7 U% i4 Q; v% k- WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 Q2 Q% ~3 v# K2 @$ ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 a7 u9 `6 F4 Z) H) ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! Y3 N6 B; p+ P8 hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) ~% g/ l$ y6 oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) i, M2 |% j. A& ]! y* z& d. ^; o3 EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, \  V& M  p9 L3 W* U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 X% u" u, K" T* X- Z5 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 k) B% F* f* i! k7 |1 @4 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 Z. F7 g3 z! e7 G# \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( R6 s: G6 a& X! U" t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. B) _. J/ ~9 B2 s6 T5 y  Q# f- \) ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# V; F1 N$ Q5 Q5 B/ O/ C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 X& V1 b; a  A0 k6 o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. g/ C2 T3 t$ m$ A1 x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& F& W  D( z2 f% W1 }* ^& I. L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# T) ~8 G: h' F6 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 B! _. }" x& m1 }" n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 h! N" h9 s( ]9 e$ [+ d0 J<P>你无需担心</P>
6 k( F0 G, P& ~* p/ i9 T* S% O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: d6 Q! c) g; Y: O0 q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
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" R. m( m0 @& T0 m' o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- u, |0 m% E' I  H; X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- F* S/ r- t0 N/ i* C* e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' O8 Y4 b7 H1 W& Y6 S% ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% p6 J/ ~. r6 D  n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 R( W+ q9 N8 p0 U1 |4 N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! y5 E- }9 [/ V: L1 E- c2 q/ X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' `1 z* I) Q$ W6 e( h) s# t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 I$ x1 i5 o; X& q5 U: Z4 a5 y  B& m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  c3 F2 n, d, g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- z# G. c* _$ J: W4 t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, V! I$ P9 q/ S. @% d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 \& P, Z/ M. c  ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, a) d  u9 L, Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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