【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% C8 J8 D9 E; T" \5 j3 H; xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& q( B- c4 R; i- ]  O$ yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 P: {4 @/ T3 C8 mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; [5 b8 M6 x0 a& ~* u( S" hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* _& [4 G- u; _! g* l! S! KSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& D& c4 U$ X$ {8 @+ l, x! a: CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 w% |/ K5 E& `! t% nEvery other word you utter is love
- l+ Y- z! m6 K/ H7 y4 w5 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
/ J0 J2 I, e  W' F  t' N. oI love you I love you with all my heart
( P' E1 Z# a$ d# S- [7 x. lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 \( ~" u! [7 }1 D# }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) y% S5 _$ _6 o9 J3 `0 i7 I- XI want so much to see inside your heart
1 c) |9 f& `7 ?5 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' O5 Z! @0 T- I2 V0 K3 y/ MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 Y+ e9 o" @: U7 U) L  FI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# m1 X3 I# }: sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 {2 X- T( ~9 q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 i& @: i% c7 ]0 U0 E- k" P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( B9 I; T7 r/ L( h7 g2 u/ |* u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 J; ]/ O) A1 W$ I- K0 |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 |6 U' y& r( [/ ~; W' X. t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& M. ^# P& Y4 J# e9 `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 K0 z- z" U& k9 Q+ h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% p# n( p8 N4 t1 {( o; S# X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" k/ c; Q4 R9 {* f% ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 {7 j2 F/ t% g/ C9 H+ {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! `* Y2 E9 i4 x$ ^1 M7 j<P>你无需担心</P>
. {* ~' w% c. R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 i3 r. M, D, t- @7 Q1 J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 {6 A/ B! U+ z3 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) U; S2 m- p$ ?: H; x2 ?2 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& v1 _, Z" _! F7 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 y8 B: V) v. S8 ~$ O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& O9 m% M9 q( R5 F& U3 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& Y) @  w& A% N, m( E0 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" e/ c8 Z7 D( |4 _9 j2 x. H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 v; \0 i3 J5 u' \5 d0 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 Q: S% B& Y7 V9 D6 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* a- s# W+ f0 e9 P8 F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: h! e0 m% X, H# `0 z; t# m8 q/ h' _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) Q& u: i2 Y( A$ n, E<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 v3 J$ T/ r' K) {6 x* _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& z: t: R! H; y% V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) L4 `* Q% J" @, \: h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ T0 ]1 O3 T8 ]) [( F9 y& w# p5 f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 d1 L4 J7 J* Y. S) Q4 a, v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% ]; J9 q* [# b& W2 q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% v: j9 i2 B1 X& T" L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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% }- U% Z7 k: V) Y. O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>