【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 V! a& N; B* T6 h% xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& t  T$ F- d$ Z. YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 \7 _/ T' P. ^* M* jThe sky is happy down to its soul
( o; I3 O8 A3 vWith the moon kissing it every night
' s; \% H  d/ Q6 f5 q. M4 d1 ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% C8 w, Y* B2 T# L( PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. Z8 W( {- S4 L. U' ~5 r' e8 G$ N9 II really want to know just how much you love me
/ N! `4 t3 [+ h9 D, TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ x% q  {2 ^7 J/ HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( P' J9 r8 v' O" pI’m still filled with fear
  t( j1 t0 |" ]* z8 |* _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" j  l& F4 D. K8 QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ {& o' ?  s9 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, O5 T# ?! ^0 g8 H6 b' L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ a; d1 {8 Q. T! c1 q$ e$ l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 d+ }5 a0 v& f! D% t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. S. W0 T: m" B, w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 i+ E4 ~1 b- `8 ~# k8 S$ k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) O4 T. y+ P/ ?! z* p3 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 P4 W7 X- }6 l5 G0 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, O% ~) ~. C9 h; o, j. U0 d8 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  t8 F6 K, l( E, M0 f6 K: x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 o6 Z; L2 P5 i* I1 z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* u' b( B4 [! W& `6 J$ @  N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ |/ N! `( L. ]; \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" S- S- @- D6 b2 T! y9 E  L" Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( x& H# i0 a0 d$ K# N! n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ F4 X! b: u) v2 Y* i1 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, s3 f2 P9 q- {, g1 m, i. B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! F2 G' _8 B/ U( C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 O, N( B: }; V! c, ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 [/ }& I* z- `% [9 ?6 O$ ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* Q+ y( Z  o9 Y. f% c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* a& [/ {9 i# Q: a  E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  e3 i; l4 C# W- d. g( c. j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ G/ R; o3 w2 Q! H7 W, C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 {' K) r0 F4 m7 V4 ~9 N% c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, P# J( C. e2 f; Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- O( V" q+ w/ z. \" ^" _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, M2 j! \- ?0 A( V7 ~% z, v6 L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>