【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 V' J0 }; u" x/ n' QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' ~( K& t9 U2 A& bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. Y) H+ o" ~6 q( [5 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 y7 H% m; D6 J! E8 R7 q/ HEvery other word you utter is love
  N( T/ ^7 n4 A" {2 h, TI really want to know just how much you love me
  ]! P; y- l( U; WI love you I love you with all my heart
* k5 H- Q" y$ T& b' q1 [7 SNothing can compare to my love
" k) s$ v  y: fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& q; y2 J' |' O! p% _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ z: ?* w! a; j$ Z. E7 f- zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 n: H$ k+ v* W( d7 |# _4 YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 J2 a' L3 k5 J7 b3 [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ |; p4 {4 D7 e9 i; L/ P! M4 a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 p9 _% d9 {) k$ T7 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  {( X  V" @' Y9 ?) [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. f# C8 O$ I5 J) x( G4 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ d7 M$ Z& W6 t( _' M' I- n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; \1 X- X% \2 i& W- k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 d% i8 e, r3 T% ?: j1 F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; F! Z1 g, J3 ~& ]' k- ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 l" n. N6 Z4 O, @+ t$ v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 ^$ ^4 W, I# D4 m& f7 n1 u$ s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ r6 }. ^1 l- f! X+ R1 P& A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 h  n/ N- z* Q- D- @4 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' Z5 s/ F( b9 E' b2 |. m, K& Q- j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ J2 t/ o9 O8 M( F# o6 |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) h  m: ~8 E( o6 t" [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 G, |, `6 F: y5 i! N7 T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ f; i' M1 ~; a& b, S7 X, e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# G6 ?! N' v1 n6 h: C9 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! [3 x# F$ \$ ]6 p% o. P<P>I regret not dying</P>
, k. d! w3 ], I7 z9 \  Y+ E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ }+ V" g" [% ?% Q4 M- {! B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 f. H' ^9 a6 h3 G# \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& p3 q5 _* v+ t. V  `7 L! Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 i# i; ]1 G3 d% E7 X& \! x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 [" k6 G/ y+ s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* |1 p! x7 q7 }( F- K% c- X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 _. R$ v6 p+ |; D6 q6 r0 _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 G$ ]$ @6 h" H/ c$ p& _! T5 p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

% m% i9 d- y0 A  X4 ^( T, o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 N! J( j# F1 e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>