【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
. o/ m$ C/ Q. [3 W& ~* aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 d6 Z1 J" K% ^* i% d, R( ?9 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' K* D! a- B  U. o+ `5 b9 m) _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 Y  B9 q$ j- W- y8 H1 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* X! g# b6 p% m$ m) ?Seeing the sky content with its love
3 g$ M8 Y0 D+ j2 Y1 A  ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 L& G% u6 ~( X+ n  O7 BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 G  ]/ s" f" h; d$ I0 e% II really want to know just how much you love me
% ^: l- t3 T0 M9 _$ @I love you I love you with all my heart
- [# f- A3 z6 X) I$ B$ n: J6 k* K' UNothing can compare to my love
- H6 t7 S4 f* WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. \% h, v4 N# c+ ^; R& N: N3 `I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) }- X7 w) v$ y2 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 A! w) e  x( O8 Y+ l& WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% t+ }7 j' D  b/ l( `2 ]) ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ }& |! A3 E! h  o8 [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. r5 c* ]5 N; q/ T; G6 r4 S6 P/ L6 v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 @7 {, i3 ]* d' V4 M$ O7 a2 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 j' c8 m; l3 d- i, Y6 S3 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 ^5 Q# a6 k9 R0 F2 N8 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 n& o/ s% f( Z( C5 [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) M- [4 C7 H. T+ G( \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* d3 z' b1 b0 ?& d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# }+ {# x0 X! d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ c0 b# d2 b+ `2 Q+ X0 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 z1 H& Z; k1 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 P1 |8 Y* \3 W% X' h0 t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- K6 e+ F: C+ a" Q2 ]& ?- g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! e( }1 s2 _" a. k- I8 _/ N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! R7 o9 `& K' r2 v& C  c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 U+ q+ u" Q; w; i5 G. v2 W, z* u<P>I regret not dying</P>
: N' Q' M( r. [7 p8 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 ]3 U% W2 u$ ]9 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 @; Z, t3 f0 n& e4 Z+ E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 c7 v  I: y% |0 s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ ^9 T4 Q3 ]; w0 S8 ~4 w, ^$ t% o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 x9 p! U; a$ y7 s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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