【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ F$ F0 a( {/ o3 h- a3 q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; p& Y6 G$ t& EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 ?. Q6 |$ u- N0 B" }The sky is happy down to its soul
1 d% m, d2 x) M& \% R2 o! O" @With the moon kissing it every night
$ u/ K3 S" l) r) F/ Q; N8 wSeeing the sky content with its love
- R, y/ I* X  i( i2 _, g, `& {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' a( n: l' Y% fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. U8 Q' P9 s4 S" G$ q! `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% I2 E3 x/ R3 G  K" P4 QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 ]# P2 q8 B! ]( ~% l; GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) g  H) A, C" OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. t+ X9 e1 Z3 }3 F$ K; k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. v7 v# ~" x- X+ t0 X- L" k! [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 G$ {9 J( h' @0 U# L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  A7 Q1 s5 ]! b- S2 ]0 ^9 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) \0 r; L2 K5 O  D7 i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ W; _2 [7 j5 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; M" g+ X' _* Z6 O/ U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 B5 U1 f2 @1 o; _) o2 r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' Y/ D: I. f$ [* l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- b, ]- X3 ^, h$ g4 ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 _% r( m: K6 F6 l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 d3 b5 ]! {' E: ?9 p& k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! o5 ]/ J+ b9 \) ^$ {) \1 e2 q  [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 H0 j5 }% M: o" }  O! h8 c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" z4 e$ M& I2 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 _( {+ k- }; ]% i1 S0 N; x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; {: z8 |! P3 R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ B) V# J, G7 O& Q8 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ ?: H: v* h& ]2 ], B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* A6 p  @+ U6 k( ^4 {# w6 O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ Q( h0 y9 x. }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ n0 X! @- Z# \" ]9 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; S  t( w  p3 C' d! V  \& w6 ]3 T5 w& a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( R9 O# U1 r5 m! b8 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; \. x  T" J2 G3 A; |! u$ L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! O3 V! Z! _& U5 S  @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& O) v3 s4 B  I! }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; B6 `2 w. W5 j8 l/ D7 Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ z  O& Y* @: L( _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ C9 K7 ~9 ^3 \/ B2 t  ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; {* ?6 l7 h4 `; H6 r" {9 V8 \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 C1 o9 v% P, T  t( W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 x5 E3 c8 p- M% ^/ W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 R2 z% K% P- L! n" Z, }1 m我请你剖开它

, s, g% r  w8 j* I4 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>