【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 K& T5 Y& ~5 m0 |$ s3 [The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 |5 X. c/ e- y& n0 L. R5 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  Q' v3 j) E2 q  Y) x- B/ R- PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ y6 K7 v$ g0 R, UWith the moon kissing it every night
& @- v, I2 o/ J9 q5 [Seeing the sky content with its love
8 q: Y  [& m' `+ sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* h8 I: }. X! j' b# H' SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( I' K% W! o; \- `( nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) P: [" Q0 E/ O# ]+ QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; H: W: e$ L# j9 MI want so much to see inside your heart
7 ]2 U% u5 u6 c7 GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* C) A8 x* K" S9 }  E; P) E" WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ F  \( @% ?# oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" A6 F6 x/ ^4 l5 b, U% m/ xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ D' v/ o9 u4 y: v5 t. \! R* ]% h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# y, R9 E6 p5 |( F2 g# L# z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  x7 o% F5 J0 }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: F! v  t! T0 d4 c% x) q8 j: C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( I8 K# T  [2 V3 E; }  y+ \1 s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% |( x8 g/ f0 E5 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ N& v; }: ]0 p6 _- b4 F/ i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& X% O5 R6 V1 I- }; U, t' b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 w% J* P8 k2 I% T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# i0 N8 Z5 B, I8 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" U3 q. o! u2 I. L/ E+ L/ _. ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 N, W$ G: q& _& l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 ~" u- U. E$ }0 L& T7 m( P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ q2 v7 I9 O+ o  P: u5 N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 T& \! |- R" F9 G: D  W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ ^0 o: S; E0 H0 x% Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& [% R7 q# J+ o: u5 V4 C  c& q  N( ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% z/ d1 i4 X) t$ q2 m9 C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 g/ j' Q  V. K& ^. e- _. @<P>I regret not dying</P>
  D' _1 p$ V1 v$ Y$ K9 g# O& e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 J" u1 k1 y7 O: V$ Q! b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 E! k3 o( Z0 X. E6 G# U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ U$ B6 I5 i' \2 Q& K9 P% N( R' R5 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 o7 T* u- L9 q5 {# I" o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ z0 p' U& P& O5 N. k5 n8 h$ |% H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 A. r8 q- }. j# G  F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 m( j5 w) Y) o7 o4 j% f% h: ?" o0 g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 Q5 E4 h* Z9 u; y0 @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; J% J/ X7 J# t我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, G! o, m8 T; k1 [) s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>