【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; U9 H2 \# S, |% U7 Q: G# A3 Q# T, v5 B歌词我附在后面。
; G0 T6 E" Z0 K% A- XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 y8 s2 {, F, B% |/ V( {7 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 `0 V% M  h4 E0 }1 ^; tWith the moon kissing it every night
% T' B4 O" y) p, B) ~Seeing the sky content with its love
- a" V! `7 Z, DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; G* m# W, d( ~5 T1 G1 O* mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 v3 H5 i  A: ?) [  B5 [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 h8 T/ |! y' _0 Y4 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% S8 y: _  F6 n, g0 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, C  |4 ]5 m& xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ J7 n/ H# @2 H: f: RI regret not dying
" s0 p& k+ r7 q; A/ n& j$ s" o& ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; X6 S, ]8 Z1 s0 EWith such a tongue as yours,
! z3 S, k* [" C  C; TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. P0 P+ E, Z. f0 {3 i; M6 C% B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. d$ C4 ]- r# A0 ^" Z2 Q& z& a& z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 _) d; L& [& u  F5 }5 H  h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 z" t2 M; L2 [1 u8 k' e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  I: f1 a' o/ I, z& C' |5 R0 q6 I, D9 C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 k4 o( {$ R7 F, i' |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- O( [2 F: q( y5 ^- a5 r8 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 p/ B. F# F, b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 j& i: ]4 p1 ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& p, Z- D; Z& A8 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 w# f6 c+ q+ b5 i; ]1 g9 L( G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 ?9 |; p  d6 [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) {" c) m& z& z' C  {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 ]. t# k. r; ^7 W& }; o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* v, j" F" P1 o# g4 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ {9 t' y& u6 `( V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* [7 h9 Q  X: C' \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- |( q3 P7 l# |- Z& I! k( o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ A1 M+ P- u8 @3 l9 |, y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 s. h, k- t* A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 y. M3 B+ H, J. ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& M4 h# F, F+ a3 u- @% w: U1 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ |0 F' h: x5 G$ i" X& ], Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 _& {7 U0 T4 N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# Z5 Y" \, s0 Y) f0 \: P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: ?9 h' H/ O! K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% c3 z4 k( j2 x  K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( x, Y2 r* O  g; C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 p  c! c1 R0 H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 a# m0 Q5 Y7 j2 y5 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& ?5 [, `. N3 t, T8 V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' a8 D1 w4 Y2 A4 Q3 S, ^$ M# e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' |8 {" b% d( a4 \- z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 X( R$ I, B/ k% N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; }) t; ?; o6 m% r) Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>