【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 ]3 Z0 k4 H" c: b( gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( y( X% V, Y' D; XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% W; I, C+ V1 F6 s1 J, e. aSeeing the sky content with its love
! c. k" H4 `& l( oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ C$ c1 o6 E2 VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 V$ n3 q2 n* y2 vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  {; _: D8 X1 w/ @, {- ]I love you I love you with all my heart
! E  c$ ?$ F5 i: s( {& u5 kNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 {9 q5 z% D8 D* \1 G: ^4 _+ gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& X6 j" w- o% a( B( I/ cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- b) S/ o9 v, F1 \- d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ K/ }  z" b" ?  e6 ~& Q6 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. ]+ A# ]7 b$ G9 {" f9 J, S% n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 j. }, r8 v* V# P+ G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; ?* d8 c( ~( ~2 O/ ~/ [+ Y. m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 i8 D: B* ?9 G( ]9 ^9 j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 r5 S  N+ b( C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 B/ \( t- C; o$ ~3 f( W9 V! J, I9 ?) `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  p9 z$ t; U6 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! G3 Q7 \( D3 j! L" O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  T% ?* {) F& G; t% p. ]) d2 a$ h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ O1 J. v: M$ L$ c) Z; |6 I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ `7 @- j7 b. G3 l% p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. f/ s9 A  Y2 W4 l7 g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. M1 W" C& J" W2 o; Q* }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" I0 J0 d# }0 g% _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 T: c* F9 u4 @/ L" O7 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% V5 I3 {' ~6 B; o( C! ?" `, y% x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 H8 a/ S2 p% t1 L+ U4 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 R7 r/ z0 V* ^& C. y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ T! x' v: J, T" N1 ^, c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 m! k- e- R7 [3 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- f3 G, O( a' @0 V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 o/ p$ f# f, v9 o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 i; Q8 G4 I/ X/ @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 n6 v' i1 N; J4 s& y我请你剖开它
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/ H; V( Q5 e; {0 W" d( D3 `% Y) M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- F/ H: G- a  |( w, l; W' q; g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>