【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 @3 a# @/ Q9 b1 C, W' a! CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; i! K0 V' G% }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- f, h. S. C5 G& a/ n* QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' I$ ]) i' e! T/ g% @; R/ aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( z/ L9 b; C- R2 T# LYou needn’t fear anything
4 T% `2 A( d% b% e7 G9 S- MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 u% R- a+ [* yEvery other word you utter is love
8 ?: Q5 z- K3 G' L1 b/ b4 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- x9 @: h6 a. y/ f! {+ A: lNothing can compare to my love
+ y7 _/ q  `" L% L/ fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 I  s; Q- a8 ^" x& Z' F4 U- `I regret not dying
! s4 _8 k' p$ K5 y9 M" eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 c" s5 d( Z/ ~1 k$ VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 K. J  _3 @" k( u/ DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; d$ O/ u8 Z( x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# A5 R" d5 Z$ y6 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- W7 ]( i0 o( A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ H' Q( m4 f7 O2 V+ b/ ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 J( h7 K0 z$ s1 y% P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 t; y6 |5 j/ L0 R1 p( [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  b4 u( R5 w( O4 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* A2 Q% _) |: h( o  o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ }, M( r1 k1 P, ?" Q* z9 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 _) y# S& S/ h; e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- h0 o2 ^" J7 F* ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( }% G6 V, o* e3 V! k' Q  i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- d; J: `4 }8 S) X1 t2 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ v! u! [2 V, b; B5 C+ m* t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: u  _2 J1 `+ n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ v. T# f( P! e" E" }/ U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 r! k" N, a% b6 O0 H4 S, c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ }- s3 u7 `1 L& c2 }2 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* c% _) k2 ^) C( @% o& Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: R  s% s) ^! T) e& s0 I3 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. J+ n; T1 x3 [8 Y; p5 z/ T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; [% ]( J: U: _5 ?: p6 \% w% @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 I; ?1 A2 w1 V4 j; `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 W2 c- r! Z- C: l9 K8 g, i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 b' S# q6 p. w2 L6 ?& a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>