【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 C) }; B  Z2 s6 B2 E% U* `9 `+ dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ e4 e( m1 Q/ Y3 C! {: Q/ FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 O! ?* P5 Y& O' ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 l( O! @$ n: S$ O( m) T$ L4 `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" ^3 c- J5 T8 K7 O% g: |5 QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 l8 t! P* O! s+ ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) p$ `# J# Q) O4 WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 Y- O1 O8 `+ f* i' h5 s$ J/ b" ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 ]8 M0 A! e3 u7 N* U/ lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) P! N" H. b/ \- K3 dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, z4 [* \) T5 E* a& H/ wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 _, n! }8 B/ q4 K, Y, s. fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 x0 Q) |. {! ?1 W1 T# a- [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, c5 J8 v- B8 t0 h0 X' I2 h: H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) \9 r- h' w( M! v& V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 M6 _, U( o$ V0 R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 H2 [& r# q: x2 Q7 p* p( i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" e) p5 \: c% j3 |% C, U* w. t; _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( q8 y( t% W" g5 T/ \( C/ B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: B5 F1 C2 u! r6 F1 s8 W8 y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- y* P# K* v5 g7 [) n% _$ P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 o" M% U$ u* p  b+ X. Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 @+ Y6 n& Z8 f1 ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 U* Q& K# b' S& b* G! }! \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 _& w+ ]5 v7 f- ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ v9 o0 v- @, n6 O0 |: _' \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ z0 w# [% z2 C' y1 F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 F8 u& O/ b2 F( A# S. j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 a8 t" U' J  B4 z" u" D6 D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* d, v$ [6 r3 i: T- V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 c% {/ t) L. ~7 b+ |+ i) O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 D2 {+ i4 r) b+ O0 ^7 Y4 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! x2 L0 B, Q  _" }( s/ P2 p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) C( N- G7 h6 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- T: ]$ a! r" N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  Y5 Z; O0 l2 d3 q* g7 o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 h  N" [- J$ i( }& b( Q1 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 v6 f6 F! z3 h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  s* ^8 |# X" x, W" y0 y7 b4 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 ?. o# q0 Q- Z, Y; t" W( s6 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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