【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 s" X2 L) {3 l% q7 y2 S( uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 `) _+ ]0 f" g2 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 S, u: a1 o( b: Y4 r$ pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, z% t  V0 b- RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, ~4 F5 S, o7 hYou needn’t fear anything
% B6 b) P: T/ @8 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) L4 m! L4 P/ h2 o* @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& o+ W: @% K% ]/ b" Q) l3 J: Y: gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& J8 Y& [0 F9 D7 w+ J- Q7 BI want so much to see inside your heart
, C" S; ~% X, T5 |% U4 Y2 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 N2 s2 Q, G2 }! K% z4 O! LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; f4 m( Y0 o* S2 Z" I; ]4 W4 |I regret not dying
6 P9 U  T1 V, oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! N& s, y/ d" z# B: LWith such a tongue as yours,
# Z, w* w/ C  q+ |) Z5 i/ c# zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: @. Q- V% ?/ z+ eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! E# l. U+ U+ P& w4 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, i4 _* l3 r1 O9 l3 E! w; r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 J" m; Z4 ?. e+ B0 f) m+ N# r; F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 X% R: X! c8 u/ T5 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 I2 ?& f3 R( H# r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# {) g+ |" B- m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% ]7 D! I7 |: c; n( b; \6 h+ p7 N0 r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 {, }5 g7 l2 @' F& b9 O& q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. G3 l. i* W) G  a2 B: {! t- w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 Y! l( i! r0 O$ g0 Y7 W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 G6 {& F' i/ J) j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ a8 g2 A9 ]4 _, K: C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 o. U$ T4 P: A& f# T0 J4 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 P7 E0 J! a$ x0 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 S* d, M, t8 |8 B6 F8 E# e$ j) ~6 n$ x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# O( ~& \6 {) D6 a' |0 |1 |% G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 F9 J6 Z9 V& s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 i0 o: D4 `, O  W) A7 u/ S* {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" _) X7 Q' Z& p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  F% _6 M% f7 ]. K2 P  l9 I3 B" R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, ^5 W3 h7 s8 X" R6 ~7 [; B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. \' b4 A' V  e* t0 h9 K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) V+ \8 c  U# A% p2 V- J6 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) [8 s" \3 u; q1 d8 r; b4 C% [7 K" _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: S* o$ C" N# b* P3 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 h7 ~. w8 m, Z, o5 p* f, k& F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, F4 k) c, X  \0 h  H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  D7 a' }4 W; F6 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ v) ]. ~3 ^, [% N( p) B+ u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) [/ O9 i9 x* S6 I6 f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 |4 F' [; y* S- X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

8 L- J6 P0 B0 J" J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>