【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 C& p6 D( ~4 W* xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 A5 I. ^) Q7 S) o2 `0 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 g( }, ^% S+ c: A: y3 K0 x7 BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) e7 N/ q! R: }; `: ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# |5 M3 `# Z/ U* u$ FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* N, M: ?9 _1 W3 ^, v, jNothing can compare to my love
5 F+ d4 K& J- B6 z: ^- @- s# rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* i9 N* P; ~" ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* Z. Q5 c3 D' X8 e, e7 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) ^- q3 K9 i- L" Z0 e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  C2 [" _- M  s% R" A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" O  t; X6 g" }* j( {3 o9 a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 r1 h1 o! j0 K/ m! p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, V8 q- z: ^) E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 j: \4 F$ ~5 C+ p2 Z: {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, b: V5 l1 R: z: i/ E) a! ]2 A+ R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& |, r& H2 k  \1 y$ c; v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ Q2 l1 [* U' H; O8 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: ~( G% x. N. ~  J8 b' i1 F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) b% I: d. f1 h- B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 ]& n- P; ]- @" z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 w5 K+ j2 D4 s4 y- O: e3 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 O# u2 i8 ^; M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' o7 E4 `$ u8 k0 ?- h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- m/ S8 }  V" G1 `( B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! m  A# Q4 `, Q; G8 ^. }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ B: ?: E: a8 p. O" w5 n1 {! [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 k/ v- u6 u- A$ q0 E. s8 t/ F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 w6 k- z2 d. I% |- T5 O( H% Y# P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# B4 e$ o  i  @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* \2 {) ^5 N( l1 L* _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ s$ U- ]- V  |0 p! C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) ?3 }4 h/ y! e. Y& b' _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 Q) h6 j  g* D  m; I& l5 g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>