【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 o) ^" m, B, @+ a1 Z: dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) J9 U# f" }$ Y2 N$ C9 P" k: kThe sky is happy down to its soul
& t  S$ p6 G6 ?1 i; h) E  QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 {9 z0 s' N! s  ?# j# s7 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ f# C; M8 m' i/ IYou needn’t fear anything
3 L1 p8 n2 r6 X& y3 ]* P. bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ k% w3 h& G4 M* s9 A0 F% y9 TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# L/ E( ~  b4 C0 L& CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# _; s0 h  [" f& s% o# MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; {0 j* G# a5 V& A& ~. e  c( o, n8 gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 z, |. c2 d  d9 ^6 E/ JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) p( @5 T1 W! t) r+ g0 C6 FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 P1 j+ B, E9 d7 a) e+ D0 R- n5 oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% v" T5 @6 }$ K( T0 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* p  y+ k, i1 d& f# w: S8 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 p# K! x! e' H" s) b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 l  i; i+ k. t2 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& Y4 @5 B9 j4 |1 b- s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ S! o  n+ f5 @9 o, P5 A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 r+ C' m: I! x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" B& [8 \* S6 R2 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, ?# E$ e/ o- D2 w' m  a7 I. [! h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ A$ X, V' Z0 ?  w0 d$ h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 M; T9 I1 s0 L, u3 ?( X3 I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( [# [7 M# m' J& i/ V7 w4 K8 k+ c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 H2 e; s6 s5 s" H0 k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ F3 c! k, |- L/ n5 D0 W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' Z1 R# W4 L/ T; |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 J' n1 |3 D8 L* g* x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, D7 I+ _4 c$ k9 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 m; G9 l8 L+ A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! u# _  Y/ ]; {, U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! a* l/ T" C. n* U<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 K! ]1 N( R  c, w0 f' i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ K( T, n1 x+ h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 U1 X. v8 Q* V( J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 K$ i- h1 J2 a0 ^6 s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ E8 J% j- \. J3 D' z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>