【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 W  {- u3 B3 o+ A/ S* ]% n0 {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ E6 `7 k+ j0 v' _* A/ M2 `) iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( x2 \1 {1 J6 O& rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- M7 R- a' y# ~$ \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, x0 b. M& f3 a- y, z8 \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- b$ m+ j$ ~" e) P! C5 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! s6 t6 x2 Z1 V7 p/ AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 p  j) p6 x" j3 F3 KI want so much to see inside your heart
( S$ q/ A- k3 yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 C$ T  r3 r: b, JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" k3 ^- b1 H7 O& c, R3 H: dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, i% u3 Q: |/ R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" L0 B; Q  w; T" y# {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 d9 k8 _% p$ {. g3 |* E# A  o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# p+ j! ]% d6 ^! ?& t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' J3 `2 I7 C3 W  ~<P>你无需担心</P>
. j: W2 i9 u! D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. o4 s4 X8 p7 l9 ~) J* L$ V% @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- p7 F7 Q: G! O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 C) _% e( y# v/ m: j" A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: f3 E3 Q; L4 c7 I# j& f5 B- N  m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- t! o  r" h/ O/ M" t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 O* n* a! u7 i9 s5 h' o1 F' D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 j* G/ U' l6 D1 B9 u: e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& T$ ^$ S2 x7 t9 `- b  F& s8 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) h5 U. B  p) h5 b( h: j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% G1 C$ `* [/ K7 h+ e- S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! Y: M! K  O6 q$ k) l! P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. d6 y  ~2 k8 Y7 G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 e+ m9 q, L# I4 r- r+ L* Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
, l* [1 Z! K7 K1 Z* x4 p" r! V4 R& h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, N2 |6 k8 l- [2 D7 P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* ~1 [3 j) q; d  }" E  q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' v1 R8 h+ y  L$ s/ E9 K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( H) Q  v* }, |6 s3 w1 i7 D- u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 e% t* ^( y7 W# `8 D8 ^4 i我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" _3 d9 C( t; A% P0 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>