【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 a0 M( Q! s. \( XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 u* ^5 A. U1 }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  `4 j# `2 @; Y0 I% C; y8 `The sky is happy down to its soul
5 [# B  z/ P! T  @! f- ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ l: {; l0 e) j9 Q! k/ \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ a! K! B3 q/ TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( J+ s" N; B. g% o( |3 C: Z) D6 }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' }0 d6 K, e3 tI want so much to see inside your heart
0 g# k+ w- ^* z; k, C! Q! M) a- hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 Z  F6 t5 a/ Y; N9 FI’m still filled with fear
* l6 {& U- ~2 S5 @0 m: yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 y" A; @! v- I8 Y) W6 II regret not dying
2 y& E2 `5 @2 b- R1 H' j+ r$ M- fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  r$ N! S" C0 m3 k4 ]With such a tongue as yours,
% y3 R2 y3 w) r: UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 E$ w' }- M! T$ V. V& e1 GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 \( \2 ]5 h9 S* l1 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 [# P6 N8 r4 v% }2 K' z, e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. M! {& V. x' ^' T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" U; c8 \: {7 p9 z2 a, ]/ x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) m9 a6 k1 {1 W/ D4 W5 u0 D+ x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  Q- t4 P" u2 u7 V$ n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# [) B1 Q( @) H2 K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 @5 }) U4 T" k8 m) N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 }. ?/ j/ |  u" T5 I% ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' N1 [: B- R# W; F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' d# Q# N, l; m: t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' Q$ a. {8 b! _. e. V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 j, J  o, W) p# {6 }  D& E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; T* D7 V- ]3 z" P- ?& [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; W3 P$ G4 _6 u8 O9 ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. ~" R/ @" k" t' E3 h) [& O& E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' W% ~+ M. m; [' _) B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 M. `  r/ |1 \" r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 g2 V1 k6 ^6 O% r) x) e. w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 \  l) j8 e% K<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 u6 P* w' d, h! b; f% Z/ y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ f: O8 h' \! O3 \  A9 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 S3 q% l7 c6 X, D7 d, D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 L3 e& H2 E4 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% J$ `$ G5 G, S7 G6 j8 M+ \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 `3 R# q* G$ Z4 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: _) \5 ^! o$ j# `, {/ ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 `) M% t9 c& R. b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>