【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 v7 Z' A7 `% u/ h' S0 a: }3 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) E( Z+ @0 z* b8 |+ lSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 u: o; W" E6 WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# m% J2 J! G& h3 C, \. t8 xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 T; ?; `: y% ~& @" GI love you I love you with all my heart
6 P9 x' J" C4 i0 h  pNothing can compare to my love
: `. b3 |% I* z, s$ G4 ]  \* `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, m6 Z# R) P9 F0 _1 W6 V: GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ v0 Q& [$ x9 K) e! i+ KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; u: X0 ~7 ?" u. t1 FI regret not dying
- m# |5 g/ h8 WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 [, f) h4 ^: ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 a, s3 u- D( w; n+ q9 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 S% I- s' `- o- B' D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, n# D/ D  V. |' u# ^1 P! i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: Y1 l- K: K7 T6 o- w* H. f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 {( }3 I1 V# C# ?- K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  O; p) |1 ?" ^( h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! B$ D! A/ W" c  Y# O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# I7 U, g6 o' P7 n1 z  l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( v! x# A" s7 c7 [1 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, Y) v( @& |  t( |. [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 E5 W8 S; M& c+ ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. C% O  v' W9 R; b1 ^+ Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 d) I, q/ ^4 |4 Y6 o' s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 F- y2 J3 ?: \' [; K% P' \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. W' O) E8 L5 y: T2 A0 q( X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 K4 Y) Z* g3 E7 M/ K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 ]8 D1 k: C6 d( V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>