【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# d& ?2 X" _3 m' x/ ^% V" r: Z' [3 Q歌词我附在后面。
! p6 ~* D$ l; f9 R3 E3 _: B4 zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ N/ L: u( P6 [5 [% ~9 a& G/ I4 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 |, Y( q- u9 ^! @6 J. e" V3 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ N: [% A* S1 o2 v; zI really want to know just how much you love me
2 `* ]7 c4 ~: II love you I love you with all my heart
8 {$ t) ?7 T  }! E2 D- mNothing can compare to my love
# U& b- Z# U/ Q. LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 ^7 F7 z4 `: v4 O$ EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% e& \- p; I* X& _; sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- ~9 r, e2 @  d" q+ x, HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 z9 P+ m0 ^$ l$ u8 w. nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& _$ A9 }7 x- C9 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# u& p9 c) R" E$ z  w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; q7 _7 v6 a( z+ L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: d! X2 z5 }9 E+ K2 l  n% A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- i6 b& q5 S8 d1 {9 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* G& _* `' |. N4 V( w. s0 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 m5 V! l; h" t! ~) y- w4 l" o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' Z: R, ?; N8 O" A# B5 b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ i/ g- ]! ?  M. ~, U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* k% Z( q' i$ R8 h1 B+ w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; |; z# f1 ~5 g; t. H) O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* P2 L9 L) m/ l2 l* J/ n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 E% z; H' g+ T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' P1 Z% d; b" S% |  [5 [8 `1 c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- v5 [9 |1 O$ C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( t: j$ f8 l- R8 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ x4 m  \8 W5 `- O" t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ A- x1 G5 ^* k6 \) c4 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: ]' i# a, g1 T' D9 W( N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 T! P/ G% Q( G9 Z5 N, N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ t' B( F  @( {/ _3 d5 H5 c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 x  o! u- P1 L+ O$ i- X7 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 o% Z$ O+ D5 f' |! Y( W  v9 ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! d! T$ ~: q' W; f5 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 [% w2 h$ ^& h* `& \0 s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: q: e4 W' l! Q! }6 M7 E7 g4 C1 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* X4 z1 L8 {& G8 @9 U3 ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ u! d# `+ `4 F3 O8 D8 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" [3 x3 p2 _; L3 Q5 n9 x  E- @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' Q6 ?. T6 b4 x- ~) Q% f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% C4 p6 }5 ^. @4 x3 m, d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' ?2 g  G, ^$ A/ ^3 j9 w$ i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" \% Q' \3 Q- y& w2 J; `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; f' _+ k, d9 J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ Z' q2 c8 |& B0 @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 C  |7 |; O) a* [) K: Q5 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>