【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 `4 S+ r3 C+ ^1 I9 J$ R* N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 M# Z+ A3 ]" J9 K  h' h* c) pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" m3 Z( q9 @3 y# G4 UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# B( C4 q6 F& p3 H6 L1 K' K0 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ q7 f0 m* w! i) ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 c" o# e* X6 W. _8 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 f! v. h& D3 DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* n! D7 z% a% ?' s+ cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. D1 ]% q" d6 S  F7 ]I want so much to see inside your heart
! L7 q& z7 x/ b& X/ }5 bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& n2 f* B" `6 B$ e. x6 ~I’m still filled with fear
1 F0 ~5 |- w0 d, s; NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- e4 q& c8 B2 g+ kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& |/ |" k8 i& b: D1 q5 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ g3 u. G1 r: A! s( u; ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* I2 w" b0 }2 B) D, X" j$ w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# h! K1 ?0 b' M7 J# N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. N8 D& x) F, H4 g) r1 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 W! k! ?$ _+ ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& s3 G1 `; l2 W2 i1 @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 ]2 H6 _$ F+ d3 Z2 v  L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 r/ c  W! @5 H/ g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 N% ?% s; Q& n: Z! G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ h' e& D" ~' w! ]* c! |- j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: S, y. k2 z9 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ C# ?' j( x, T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 E- @4 d0 i9 m# ]* x% H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. w. s9 D) ?2 w& E2 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( Y% U" p8 s! r4 c( Y1 ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 r1 I, ^% Q: ^: V+ Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# B0 R2 ^% h% J9 s2 M$ l$ V, }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 X% o$ V" t6 g! |7 b! }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( M4 l! T# e$ W: Q& S& ^- B) G1 T& x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 _6 y  Q9 K: D9 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 P" i: S0 s* L6 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" U1 X% L8 M6 g8 A& s+ S; U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 T: o. O% P; l+ c, Z7 s! ~3 j0 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 U9 e- p7 F6 ?0 m& J, q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" W1 K4 m- T6 i2 u% k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( s) `; G7 J; S) F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ N: ^) X/ d1 ?6 a/ ?2 [- V7 x: w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ f* i$ b& \2 y) W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 _; I$ w0 U, m' Z$ G! }- x4 `4 e+ Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 g" ~! T7 B. R' i0 @2 l+ q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ K) y, J0 \8 s- `+ ?  d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>