【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% E( w: ~/ U" |$ ^: iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 d' v& E" I; ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) L: b% b; |& C9 s1 b- jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) Z/ C% T0 V5 z" K$ Z' sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( L/ \* C0 s% g: u! |1 Q7 q. k* LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ t: |( w9 U; i: j5 ?. {: eYou needn’t fear anything
+ @3 ]: Y9 c% S4 w1 C7 }! f& ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 o, }* R' R+ F) r* [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 P9 g2 o8 R, ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 i: H! C6 a4 K- l# G9 H1 HI want so much to see inside your heart
; c9 ~: t/ o6 X( O; PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 B" @1 T  W0 U2 C$ R6 eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 p$ L( ^0 z* o. F4 Y+ ~+ w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 V2 U, ^8 f0 h$ [  Z6 H, U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- Q9 k3 d( _; q6 _3 |( I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ K0 z9 R' Y( S6 K& w- ~$ U+ j8 J4 F; D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" a& ]" A: r9 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 d0 o( h+ n9 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. l' d/ f5 y, I1 I! t5 ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 j8 N) g+ U5 Z7 Q2 q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 |( `2 X3 p. |$ L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# X! L; K- F/ M3 J& |# O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" F% Y# Y$ c* w* z- |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' W$ D$ c8 t4 ]8 R  B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 g* q) b" r# U3 N0 s7 l  ]( H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' B+ l8 v9 q% w' E' e* K) y. s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; u0 l, l( n' I8 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  s# y4 ?0 }# |7 f# A5 Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: E+ a& f6 H/ _+ X8 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) ~1 `: ^4 K" f. U2 |" \$ J3 w- \6 @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  h( U  {) p6 f2 ]5 [) W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, ?$ q! E7 T, R* N) e4 L# e) E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 V- M1 Q6 r0 N7 V8 X7 g) K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 M6 b# V4 b: z/ I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ h- ^  F; w1 K) k5 w+ M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! _" r6 S4 H) r. r2 v* E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% J1 B' B- e" }, U- `3 V8 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 D1 h2 y4 x9 R2 P2 w' j7 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

# L6 K4 k+ |- ~/ \0 o, ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>