【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 O2 G% G; B/ g7 x歌词我附在后面。
& G4 s4 u/ N: T$ p' G. N1 R- yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; h" V/ X* |# q+ d$ P9 {. t) sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 O( ]: X% ]9 |9 m0 ]2 ?) w% p0 ^4 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- b1 Q6 S: P; H) e6 |/ ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& ?1 Z8 E/ j  L0 l& G+ `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 ^% d7 D# o1 X* C$ u6 ?Every other word you utter is love
8 G3 r# H! e3 c5 U4 M0 AI really want to know just how much you love me
& G6 Q: `2 |3 G4 @I love you I love you with all my heart
- N- ~' m5 V; O, f7 F) ^8 X, gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* j% [6 H9 g# [- v0 I/ sI want so much to see inside your heart
, \! j% A0 m3 @' TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& n" a1 {5 E* ]3 ]0 A3 HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- N6 ~8 C' F! B& {, y* ]5 r. hI regret not dying
9 C' G) }# W) x) J# f6 y& _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  j8 _! K+ Z; _6 W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 _0 c4 R6 Y% c6 V' k  A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ Q2 n; D, u, P2 }: M% l/ _8 O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 F, ~8 D% u0 }+ F! y, N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! R6 |8 z! a+ [1 j+ p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, W! s: G6 }% t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 J4 A* W* b2 l7 ]8 @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 F0 _7 q5 n6 X! k+ D' J, p( }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- Z# O5 {: P' c+ s7 b/ M% A" N7 K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" W3 j+ x$ j7 r( q# M5 p" U! R$ S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ P' H5 j  t5 A8 G- v2 ~4 |6 n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) ^3 X$ I! d: w; V3 U$ c3 M, U1 \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) a+ a% ?, X' f1 M: B7 Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ D6 @7 H: V6 K9 j7 @1 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 U6 Q0 I/ K4 [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 J, e5 K0 Q0 i& Q, ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ `4 R' K* o9 ~: }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 q" r7 U) e7 x* b, T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 W6 \4 N2 v/ B$ N" R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! r3 C5 d( Y" @' l  F# j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- w! |4 R5 [0 C. u6 j5 l1 N* B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# ~! \/ D/ a, V: p" U% _" P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! Y. h# s: a- V9 {* _. I6 e. d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, G- o* r6 P* d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 d+ U3 K9 o  l我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- d& B' ?6 _, d+ f- ^+ F- b3 u  W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>