【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 t2 O" m; `0 d3 Y! NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( i9 c& \: o! s1 W4 E5 X: ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% L2 j% N: P7 ^$ t* ~) ^The sky is happy down to its soul
, x) |3 l- [  B* E" _  d0 u* n; ^With the moon kissing it every night
' x# K4 s; {/ b% TSeeing the sky content with its love
- w) [; }7 P% i: E8 K& yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 r4 l; B/ V5 G4 nYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 m/ V1 f  r' Z: x8 l& gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. s. X" @5 w& q6 V% i7 K! MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' [5 H' T, l4 l$ C+ GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 v. h7 G) f8 v+ t2 r( Y, kI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ F/ {9 L& R$ ~; j! b% _! {7 w; SI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ o! I- t: \* C3 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ R9 \" @+ D( r$ MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 C; \  a8 B- Y3 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ A$ ]$ X* R4 A. w/ [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, P% m# R; O& Q  _: {: O2 H7 p+ v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 u1 N- N( v1 z% F7 o6 B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ n# Y. _, X/ _) k. a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 H# L( f! _& q5 g: t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ [. s3 M, t3 r( V" I# w8 H7 L2 G& p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 x2 b% \! ~7 ~6 m# R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  T' u7 W$ X* C1 ~9 N1 M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' }$ D( r! p  i$ n" Z+ s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ B' i5 h/ r3 ]& l' ]! N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 Y5 n+ a! B( v' M) _6 m: _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 ?5 Y& d' U9 u8 @) X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 G" g1 r$ ^) f6 A. _$ p6 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 G, x% n) k& D- O. i4 i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 \% X7 M+ U% G, o, h- J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% H8 ^% o( w9 J5 g1 _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  H; X# z" r7 `8 d. p4 t* [( ]( N. }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- s2 {" P# r& o) X9 @9 \$ M0 z1 z- p+ Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" }3 Y6 a( q6 h% s/ p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ }; ~3 U  \! f$ H9 a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! [8 ]3 X  E$ `/ H$ z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  K4 W2 r2 @6 K3 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ M, H8 ^( {! K& N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( |9 J1 }7 W% ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 s6 ~3 f; \" z7 \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  z, g- [# e' ^8 \% e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>