【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! b. t4 I- X+ E& K7 @8 w歌词我附在后面。
2 P" C1 h+ l9 r2 q  X( Q" x/ nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. r; m2 a- Q" R. H, R6 x$ L" IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 i: ~4 }6 c$ _1 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- g1 S: B5 A7 v  p# e8 R! TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ s% c* P& E) yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: n! y/ a$ n# E7 |( t0 bYou needn’t fear anything
9 |$ j2 C; y% U" v8 @% WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 B4 S% O3 Z3 Q1 X6 A/ ^8 L! X. L% NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 @( G! m; C8 E# LNothing can compare to my love
+ ^3 y- B' g) m) E( |$ BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 M$ Z7 t) Q% Q8 V" ], G0 IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- I+ N" g; z9 w$ n9 Z1 AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ l/ C4 k' T8 K2 F! L2 }- V% lI’m still filled with fear
& l- R! d4 f2 F5 c7 t- q$ p4 I. aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 i, M5 B2 ?9 d9 R7 h0 xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( g0 `0 w5 q! QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 E& m5 |2 w8 M6 q% Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 Y+ Q% R7 b/ p! n, Z+ v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' p( q! U6 ]% ?  J4 q5 _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; j! z: o' R/ e4 ^5 d: R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 G( C' Q) c! Z+ i% c: T! e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) m( W- V1 m/ f, m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 C2 @( w" h: a; K; |+ Q! y& T+ w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. `# B4 |$ `  B8 k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( c! V& x, ?6 c* G# b# [' ]. q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 A- ^6 R) \5 ?1 [+ [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! Z/ S: i* F- m& L, i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 `0 b3 d+ S- S* u5 X6 B% i/ m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, @7 W2 L! p  v+ Z" o& M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 P' n; H+ O& P; S1 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 L0 ^9 s) T; B- I2 w1 X, W! ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 S( _( z4 n2 b1 s4 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ i* X" o- Y1 {/ Q* o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& a! A2 A& }% }  x/ o+ D2 R3 w' _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& l* a$ _9 u0 U8 v  O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ q% M: ?0 C. q/ ~2 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  S' B  p, t/ [7 |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% q$ ]% h* [6 ~7 K7 P; `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( e# Z8 g2 V8 g/ l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 k  G" f+ @) |! P, b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# c+ n4 k$ b! i, f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 }$ Z6 q0 k. I8 i; |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ x* D  y& n2 V. q7 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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" m) S& R' a9 |0 |' X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>