【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 f( [+ i4 x9 v& `. YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 A1 y2 g: n; G% n7 P- uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: H' N7 `. _8 E; Y4 |6 Y4 C7 _3 wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) [% K& P5 c; m8 Y* @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 Z/ v* I& P! zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% I% j+ C6 c0 W$ L/ {I really want to know just how much you love me
( F4 l. _. ?, b8 R; p7 V$ PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 T* G3 f( V  {( P$ A, R2 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 U8 `" G: p5 S/ x; k" S3 e3 E9 |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& o3 E7 p6 e* mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 n4 I9 E5 E7 q  ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 Z6 V; r" ?7 G. @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; M: P+ t$ S: x* I& H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 E. {7 Z/ r7 H( _# x  A0 [( l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: @$ Y. A, \9 c. }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 F* R% ^/ I6 ]3 r" D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- W+ D. c- }  [$ _1 ]( s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 u& u) F# S& ^) {4 V. v. m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: J3 {+ X& n7 Z: L( g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, b1 g& a0 e3 I: \1 |, U5 t# s' {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, ]# |4 `& K, Y/ i9 N9 }+ B% i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" Z5 R9 m  M" e9 b! N" P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 w$ K2 W5 i0 k; c; |# O" x/ K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 |+ @4 y4 g5 K& M/ I: u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 s  {+ b& |  B<P>你无需担心</P>
& @2 i: U3 b# }2 Q: p5 `6 M3 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, {3 X4 I% X9 z# Q; e$ B# l! X4 i' P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) [( ^3 t- _/ t; u% @- M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' Q  c1 y! T- k+ I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 |0 `4 ~! B: S7 [! ]; K/ `+ e$ V7 @$ A; v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' J# O9 S. T7 C' W: ]8 H, p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, {# o: ~7 m! k2 G3 e7 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 J: \* t3 p6 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, Q2 w; ~3 V) E5 P& @' P( E1 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
: O% j$ h; L8 o' X" h! K' i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ {2 h# B- ~; ?4 C7 l% G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 M: N4 ^- _, i- p: n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; u1 p: d" R. o" b4 ^  H/ v4 R' {6 _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" m: j% T" |0 B: j, e$ |% K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

  {" B! H6 H: N2 n: x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>