【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# P6 S6 f- S* A' Y2 _歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 E2 }( V- v& h  j0 b1 M4 ~7 q8 z8 S& _% RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( J* ^: n0 }* J3 N/ e/ iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 }8 i) a. }! q& wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' l' B' k8 o# U% e7 CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" ?- m: X) z8 t2 K' e0 B. QYou needn’t fear anything
7 V+ g8 u3 r1 W) nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  S( v$ Q. `6 _9 ~) Y7 ^6 vI love you I love you with all my heart
+ H+ E% z- W/ o; RNothing can compare to my love
+ R8 J2 A5 E" U" E2 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ W0 {5 V% R  `' R# E/ xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! o) f! e# Q: Y: d9 H& t1 [0 ^1 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 Y" }) ~8 Q2 N7 E. uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ G- |/ y$ |6 |5 p" n  T7 G- x2 I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; J+ b" g; X1 k6 f- K/ W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 l; @  c" ?9 s/ ^; [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 F3 w1 x1 L: p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! P/ c8 ]* V2 I8 {* \: J1 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ ^' a% f, d+ G1 N8 U. Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& C: ?+ e* w( @8 V: u$ l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! L2 O1 l) S9 k) H% Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 c! B' c/ @- n8 s9 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
3 G: U9 i0 F% Q: u! k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ O, B4 F) G) H7 b+ @4 ?: D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- @+ w) b# c4 H6 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  z8 g" a( ?# Z; y' l, G( I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 q2 E" {0 n3 A  V( d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: d. B4 i0 P3 k. S1 f; h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ i& v, V4 k% v) q5 O1 s! y9 f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! N* }0 N2 ?  _( K" p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 b/ z5 _: t- \9 h. z3 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 t. N7 f- y0 h% B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  u0 m0 ?5 |* N5 z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, E' l" n9 l# i% T1 L( |* P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 G& s% k4 W% X  d4 m$ f7 \6 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& ~6 i7 }8 N9 O/ W8 g' ^  X0 W5 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' n/ o- Q, M& C" h# ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 }+ p% \% ?; X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 f  i' k* d) Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ S8 r! l0 M" @3 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  Q4 K5 }' v' u: M; B) e7 o2 \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 {; J$ D* |8 m6 q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- G3 \& C" _$ ~% d+ J4 G我请你剖开它
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! A7 i1 T, B4 r  @% s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 t2 Q0 e4 i  r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>