【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
* e# ?7 x' S. a7 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! G" p1 G1 n* U& E) v6 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
% J8 J  l! A7 zWith the moon kissing it every night
5 n( s2 t1 n& h( A9 S% \Seeing the sky content with its love
0 l+ t$ G( Z2 H5 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. N0 D% Y7 E; ]! OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 W5 W: M& @5 tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" v- y  r9 a0 u! M  b% DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" e4 c( K8 [( o: q& J6 r0 ?9 EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! |8 c& i$ p% C: r% Q  H# n- mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: Q( X; J! x6 K, Z4 w, `% \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" l6 W7 W& X; U- X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, |& f- b' C& Q3 g5 ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; E7 z! K# `: Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; l+ s: e- [2 A( [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. ~; x8 q6 {+ T( M3 c4 J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: d& r* n/ O% T- F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) B/ z% H; l3 x, b. A6 w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 |2 [1 `' v2 c1 A* v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( S! K' M3 e( N; |! j5 F6 g& ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 [9 s7 {# s' J# u. y: F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 r! {$ v9 D6 B+ F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
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' K. @" `; C/ f) ^3 f& _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) ^& u- Q  r# z- i" \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 d8 A9 x5 j3 W8 J, a7 h. \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 G* r  s2 s" h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' ^) U! X% v/ f6 o, g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 i  `: e" h" G+ `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 A8 p5 V1 o' K9 \' e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. R5 @  ?" o0 w; `0 k, X8 u& g0 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  d$ I! I0 _2 I6 X$ ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) e* d4 O+ B% `3 |- T! Y2 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, {' d( q& @# ]2 c5 W6 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* f; k  s+ A  ^: v. f- q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" R4 ^  t; P! U% H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 S. o5 v% ~& S3 D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, K7 R7 A; ~9 z  E* C$ T4 t% `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" G. O$ N1 v$ l  i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 c( H. _* {6 m5 z; J- y# L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! v6 K6 C" Q; Z' q" C# v6 R) I1 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>