【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 M! I: z; f8 q6 b4 {+ j& z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 h1 f: A: ?4 k4 k! l9 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* V- X7 B, b* z/ NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. a2 }1 g9 }; m( AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- y9 h: Y) u) g* xSeeing the sky content with its love
3 F8 F* e* ^8 u3 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: F5 b. q: |7 v9 @$ E" rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: j1 t* u; f4 l2 s1 |) _# d5 WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 ]8 b- U: `- u& v2 m3 p* N9 T. II love you I love you with all my heart
7 ~) r0 l' J& UNothing can compare to my love
  u, J) @! N* u! _. h3 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 x9 F% _& y& U" nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: k3 A  B$ R1 W0 n% ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* c/ S/ m% V7 _7 }I’m still filled with fear
  h5 A) j2 D: \# q. MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: o" V* V% V; Y1 r& N$ Y; KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" Y1 o' p9 n  _6 ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. C6 @, i7 \( M3 E7 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" P, D4 y" N. B1 t$ ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 t# g) {" y& p/ {: O3 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ h/ P# R/ h2 l, E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: U: J: `* Y6 }5 I. [9 [( D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% U% i9 a3 D$ R2 ~  z: V9 I* R6 d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% {# J) g% @2 X" y2 j0 G6 b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, v) S/ ?& Q) _* @8 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 ?& y/ w2 L  \) r5 {5 x4 N: c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, C( Y7 e" s: a" a$ S% Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& a; Q5 r* T2 G$ W* c2 n% ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) E, C7 d6 x4 z/ y6 X+ h$ t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 a9 S3 x" [* v$ d/ S1 k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 |7 o$ S5 t+ ]. ~$ |8 S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& y3 L' b$ V. a4 V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! G! X# Q5 E% ^& j7 n4 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' @7 M# _; q: R7 x; O" i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- o" X: A  w0 |2 R) }) {4 p2 b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; @& h6 }4 w/ u, K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 F2 h0 V% ^5 H9 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& ?. |3 K8 @* W' D2 W/ i1 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) Z: _- c- i9 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 S1 i, q, l  T; i$ U% O- y# @* ?0 e3 i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 r5 T5 I3 B8 \/ x1 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ j. o7 a7 d& ^, @( u& H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 ^3 ~+ P6 M2 }3 x- n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) A& E' N  h3 `. n7 e: g. b5 r+ |8 m  E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" J3 k, @; Z- ?) b$ w4 j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: \6 V+ w  T$ s5 L" H" ?( @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 T- r, s7 r$ c* L" y4 @, O& R! S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

6 v2 R5 b% j0 U& ?% f1 A! S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ I; B* V+ }4 d" r% A0 D* O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>