【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ y# z6 h' O2 Z9 m7 `" OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- Q& Z6 v& J* O) fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& J) @& L, [2 J0 T6 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" ?' u) F- M* O; DSeeing the sky content with its love
! p; n& w- K) sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ m9 J' X2 j7 e7 s" zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% o" K; ^. j/ U" _* E5 aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  R- C& @2 F( [  uNothing can compare to my love
/ J, v8 S! X5 ]# ^6 M: E5 I' x4 h4 `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 J7 _* R: F8 C% i! RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. k% |6 D+ u9 t- w$ t4 e0 f9 MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  b7 \5 S! o8 f; II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 w8 Z* ], a1 C9 Z, TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- t3 P  L8 o$ f' T* j( ^1 @7 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. w. R$ _" @/ I  X+ Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ |; P& d5 B# `5 L4 Y3 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ o9 `5 z9 j; \7 b8 F4 X) d4 N; i" N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# i! s( O4 j  B+ F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- |, C* C- e" J9 j2 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ H1 @& u5 q" L/ M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& L- l! q: G+ O, x" e3 K) U, H- E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. c6 L) R) k3 K5 t3 t* L- x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ Q$ c+ H9 l  t. N  _9 g; x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 ~" y* R7 p4 u8 k) l+ o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 h9 i, N9 I9 V# V% V" P6 A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' }* k  c  w% t# Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 h3 W9 P: u% C6 C- f% Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  ?1 T- W" w# m+ k& ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 _3 v% d, b7 f& ^% J! k1 B5 w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 W. Z9 e% p0 ?1 ^; B0 R4 F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* L2 B: u2 ~! e! u, J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; F$ m+ h3 O3 j6 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 U8 S+ l. g, h+ a/ k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* f! C( D- n3 J, S% f7 K. y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 r& s- Y! a0 H# [5 x! g5 Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' N, Q9 S% N. C; T2 I% U7 J7 m+ ?7 K. M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ \8 \2 X  T* f* {  j8 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 ~, J. S" j) k( C0 _/ v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 {8 Z( {' Z: X( Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: [3 B- D4 S- y+ W- j; b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- m* n( m6 i& G, T7 y0 A! \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) w* s! T) r+ z' `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& L8 l' K9 ]  \: R+ k2 a6 _4 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% Q, l" y1 i4 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ o* @  F( C4 }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. j5 a3 @; K9 d8 J1 g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 _) K' K! `% {3 i8 r6 m& O+ J1 }我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ P3 a0 u/ f" V5 r- S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>