【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 u: b, {/ o) H( I2 t; H8 j$ wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& s* t: B8 X$ {1 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) v: V8 Q( N- w- o3 [) r- XWith the moon kissing it every night
  j7 W- \: W- s0 PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 ^- d, T7 z' LEvery other word you utter is love
- p1 Z5 z( J9 Q4 |! ?/ jI really want to know just how much you love me
# P; n; |2 i3 e6 c7 D0 E& g, vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" q, d. h9 {# uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' J& A) {5 U; D- t  V3 wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( h. M6 s1 t9 ?/ W0 z+ ]I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- }! D6 c* u; F+ o9 e, b2 nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 ~( f. d* z) ?( a5 e# PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ T* `3 [/ n1 I+ l6 Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! }' v: h: {4 [, o' N, e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ J- }- V8 c$ {6 I, M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ ?5 a4 \/ A' {3 ]0 U8 ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 N: R! J8 b* p" s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) S6 O3 Y8 r2 M2 ?1 `7 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 |$ |- I( P6 U, ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" f* _9 j7 h8 `; v<P>你无需担心</P>
, J+ @) r  Y  P5 J4 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& t/ g3 D- j8 f$ M2 X8 ^& k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 o( |: v5 e$ K  T1 T! U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 A4 N; D0 \! s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 O& [7 R0 c+ @; m9 d# q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# G7 r, d# ?" G+ O: z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 P5 ~+ v; ?* z6 u" O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ n5 v7 A8 k: p5 E1 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. r2 C  f- T8 Y$ w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 q9 K+ x" c+ N* W* r) @' h, {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 @7 f1 ^0 C5 U  F7 Y6 ?  g3 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 A5 i8 Y4 ~4 z+ G* W  X& k* |5 H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 u' {- h8 u$ c0 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# `: I2 i0 `9 z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  P  r" E6 t4 Q/ J+ `0 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- Z+ n; @1 L7 G& s4 v4 F0 S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 O* y0 F- z2 x4 p8 K4 O; P2 W3 X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& y! G" l5 n1 U, j4 Q* U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 V0 x' @! D& D+ c# s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 x7 e6 M8 \, w6 K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

9 b# ^8 L1 j' r: U1 |! b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>