【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ \! ^- y; q. nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! V5 q) _6 u6 L0 G  l1 b/ pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! t2 i& @9 i9 Q' O9 kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 K  i0 I# g0 {! D( U  m) SI really want to know just how much you love me
& d3 q' R* d1 M1 q: i0 l; OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! y$ b& b& ?" K3 a9 PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& S% q; E: R# g" }I want so much to see inside your heart
0 ]! S4 J" R* V' n7 KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 k( B- o2 T4 t1 ^: \% b, t& O$ ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 q" b$ k6 k- ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& m; _7 X- {* ?) H& ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: ^' {3 T2 v& V% V) W1 W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! B1 Z# e) N" w! _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' ]9 O# ~9 `; i! [% u: k/ e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 Y* [, }* J: e. z: @" ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: D- A4 ^3 m7 d9 w: Q& U( Q7 g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 G6 m. k6 {; ]: O# a* c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 N6 H9 a8 C4 c; |' E( l( a% ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 n' h8 ~/ S) _<P>你无需担心</P>
: T* r! x% I' E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- z7 S8 E; b' Q% K/ B1 k& ^+ c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 }) ~2 l3 a$ D2 {# S# Q  I, `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. t) d# R7 n0 F/ @" J4 h$ p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 R% l" M* _( g  F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 O4 e6 W( i4 }% W; E3 R) Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: z2 L4 e$ e' x* I3 C  h& x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& e+ C& i5 `% \, C: l) M) e: _% ~$ S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, F- v7 p* J' S( F8 s# Q( i! A& J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; x& d( a& J- F2 `/ {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- n. l* g6 M- n% ?4 t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% c% c9 y- V- n$ b/ t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" W' \: ~6 a. p4 }9 q% S1 f4 }  w7 H  y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. q1 t& x+ Z/ w: _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( M+ W$ Z5 S$ @# y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- Q3 y+ v+ i" [) \0 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% X1 q" b% x. H- D" ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! y% S6 Z& |' ?" W- {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 Z0 \- M' o! ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 A) @! T# d3 ~( Y4 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 x( J2 w+ J: L6 s( {我请你剖开它

% E/ l2 U9 @3 W/ t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>