【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 X7 x; T- E9 d9 b! J' bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 }( P9 T7 ^5 R# H0 e1 f1 H2 wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, O8 ]3 U- q" _3 U, C! UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, _' o) j' K+ ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; H5 ?$ k3 I% r/ f$ ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 V4 L$ D$ E) ]) SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, v, ?7 v" G. ^: p* |  GNothing can compare to my love
6 z+ ]! c5 p$ W4 [6 S  ^2 WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: q7 k; E; h! {I’m still filled with fear
. i3 J, q  c* Y. K/ h0 S6 ~1 c/ LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 L& e2 H$ x% g3 d8 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 |: \; I& z/ b4 ?6 ?With such a tongue as yours,
8 X5 j, l1 V+ C: `- |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 }; o( U9 K! i6 O9 `7 Q/ fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ t  w$ {6 x! f" z2 eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% `: g; R) y, d9 K4 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. D( p) W/ f1 ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; r; B4 l- K) }( K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 ^! O, P1 n: {8 v0 k* f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" C' j, B: |1 \9 W/ Y3 ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' M1 J$ ^7 p/ N( W6 T$ d$ f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" x/ Q1 |6 `. `; O4 q* O9 L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; r3 _& t0 |) o* j, k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 q5 G* P) g4 W6 r" S: t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 R8 X9 x$ {, L& q1 p& J# r4 Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) X7 r  i! t/ |5 D- O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ _# Z0 i5 Q; {1 e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 W2 a' B7 r( y# s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 \/ w9 t2 Y, G7 [! ?# b9 G9 a% v0 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 n/ U+ x! q  I8 O$ d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 d% Y- [8 M# |, G$ O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( Q8 F& W- n3 P# R. D! b) ]+ w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# I0 [. b: I- h( m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 ?$ J, N$ K: {2 E: `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 ?% G; c" L' i3 N0 U- L2 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( U- Y- j9 w! E/ p8 L# i<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 A# S  M* W2 x+ {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  k  Z! y# l7 G6 M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: I3 i" ~9 y+ G: u& z- f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 Z, r. i& ^/ ~2 z* k1 A! q, @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ ^- D/ P( d/ w# _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 u9 H- Y  g4 N$ M# n$ [) S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; H# w6 [5 {5 t; j3 S* L( T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>