【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* h6 a0 n9 I+ m( g3 m" DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 q  H' h# h, Y# q" c2 H) @5 E8 a9 ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 Q' c& {( d5 s0 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) w& }" J: o1 V* l$ ]The sky is happy down to its soul
5 i; @( @! l. N9 NWith the moon kissing it every night
% l7 e, \; D) Q- n# s! wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. h0 e2 u. R+ @7 i3 k5 ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' `- r$ c1 N, B6 II really want to know just how much you love me
( n$ Y+ Z! R  |" d2 J- Y9 j  cI love you I love you with all my heart
# Q9 J5 Q4 r7 ANothing can compare to my love
: J5 K0 Q1 Q* ?; s1 d$ p9 x& A* bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: c2 v. H, \' eI want so much to see inside your heart
! u( n  ?: T5 I. n( j9 cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% Z; D- q+ |, E9 ~% {# Q9 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 i; \$ S  |) h1 H5 c9 g" ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- M+ q, P6 F" b) y( @- R+ }- \" Z9 @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 w; I" R0 o; M0 ?1 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ G& t/ o& E3 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 k3 v4 X2 Q3 r* W) [' Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: ~; F9 p: m. N( J1 i: u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; V6 [& b  A3 P+ }! ^7 M* ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 w" U' }, |- x, g- F2 d' a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ v6 j# f8 f, _% X2 ?2 @/ ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' f/ }1 d/ a7 o; f% q. G) c  ~! U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: E7 g5 o0 W* E( O4 j5 Z9 A* C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ [  ?. K6 ^2 _0 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 ]- I" Q- S% o7 ^. d( s7 `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  t) r# z  H+ \& `% t: Q* i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, g0 }- _& Y+ c. O+ P3 g. l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& \. I3 C- m& D0 k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 O5 R/ G" F' l6 \+ L: n$ a0 w6 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 n) b1 w7 L, L% E( T1 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 C) ~# J* ?: s# U( h1 c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# X1 v. m# ~2 a# k, ~* \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ d: m6 }7 x/ J& S1 ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# `$ ]# |9 H$ v0 L* b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' a8 c1 _) w0 G0 }, e" |! v) E* Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* }& w" V5 ~) n; J5 m: g+ N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 S1 P  ~" f- x1 k* o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! m4 T. O' a4 ]4 ?9 O/ \  i% m  ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 z) j+ J' O4 V# X7 Z5 ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 b/ I  I1 L  ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 r# E1 l+ R7 I  R: q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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/ d. ~" D. N2 e  s2 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& @$ |8 R" [4 A) c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>