【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, I0 r) i3 N% b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& u3 A! B- E' s5 {! oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ v) `5 F; }7 F/ EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- q1 o2 _1 g, o% _3 q- EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 v7 [2 t" w4 ~" z, d  k$ fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* g9 ?8 q/ ~, |3 E% N( o: @I love you I love you with all my heart
2 p$ v. a9 w7 Y; \6 mNothing can compare to my love
3 ?7 g6 P# T4 f% wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. ^- V# V- v$ [& L, @( s: KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' V" Y( J' ?* }5 `' b1 {5 ^' EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 d8 U) H% Y( ]I regret not dying
7 _) J: {: a0 L2 Q- U- lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, P; i, w3 d! N& V# f, g. lWith such a tongue as yours,
# I6 U/ h& J1 c! e; F  NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- X/ e2 \: ^6 K# bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 T- W$ c/ _" _0 g3 i1 ?0 ~; f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" n+ v% W  U) J% l* c% O$ x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' X, z: s! i2 Q) @7 v$ q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; b2 f: C" P1 e, r( a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 x6 N6 V# B9 I6 _& U2 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! p; I7 b/ W" @6 i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- k+ j. I- \- ?  q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" u0 ]9 m7 w. {4 R8 k; S<P>你无需担心</P>
) }: M( c# I$ h! O' C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ p# t5 [# q/ |- ~8 O2 u+ m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( U7 J  N0 e" ?" S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- e$ b5 K1 w3 i; O" q3 `" U7 \& {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 N0 D# a' Q) ?+ p3 k$ |2 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  z8 {& L6 t, Q( ^' o% W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& A+ |0 l- D; C0 t7 [' c2 z) G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  K  y0 s" [( n* F; D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 m, p) x0 F8 H( z+ s! r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 x8 f0 `  `! ]! O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, _7 i% Z0 _4 g# {, S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 s, q) V0 A0 ^0 ^6 f5 s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" ~. P. K: s* b( s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 a1 {5 ]) y" r3 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 n5 C+ F; j1 f8 l" |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# M5 @# G4 o6 }7 r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 C" a6 T; w; ]  R5 i# S& o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 o. v$ w" D$ W* V4 g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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: i& z( R! _2 m5 B' r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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