【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 q+ D7 e. B  B1 \+ S- d歌词我附在后面。
, v$ m8 q7 D2 r& \* E6 A% O3 \1 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 a$ T! u6 \/ q5 @' U6 `& u5 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- e8 F9 e% c6 a! lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ I! v* T9 L# ]3 Z' p0 E) _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 l! L. s! X- p: \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( q6 O: f! e4 h4 B9 G; P3 D' mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% C. p2 Z1 ^+ L8 T9 v$ xI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 a. j* s' S# V- V) DNothing can compare to my love
. i" w9 A9 n! v" P, w2 D: FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; w3 b' _  v* fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ X0 J: }/ ?( B" [/ J  RI regret not dying
9 q; z) X- m, T9 kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* s  Y3 |& B0 d. l, d  ?! _With such a tongue as yours,
( f7 l+ m$ K" \6 I' V) PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 N( s0 o1 d# W3 w! ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% A; x- ~( ^2 s$ k$ K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 K! u$ N4 d" A; b) k: x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 [7 Y  j9 H4 b/ A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% w+ p5 N2 h: N* a2 w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& }1 q$ Z/ B' W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; t5 b5 M' {+ w& c" I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, \. h: r. k+ }" v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ x2 v3 c7 z% Q7 _% ^# @, M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) i/ F0 k+ ^% x6 }# u0 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# h9 y% |$ w8 o: h, c. \; {. _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- T% z( B8 d/ _% F! \+ ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 G1 X- P: @! v$ V7 }; x6 t% V+ f3 P+ W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* C! C, n; f: b  H1 m  Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% m* ?; ^: T1 F" [- F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' I( g2 W4 Q  [7 }- z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, Q9 i+ ]% J' b& Y# |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. m; l8 [9 B% q- O/ T  Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 r1 r: A/ |% Q$ x& W& U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 a, ^/ r* p  ]' [7 n9 Z  J1 r1 j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' ?8 M5 e# L7 y3 @( D7 p6 F& W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& U0 b' \$ p+ \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 k- S: Z8 M. r1 z- W: |2 ?, J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 ]6 p& c1 ~9 E: g8 S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ d; @' k$ a9 L2 ~! w- T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( T. q1 m, M" D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# m9 g: e3 X4 r) p& }- `; ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- F, ?% Q" I! G9 A2 Z9 v8 ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ ]0 o1 b! c# q% u4 R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' Z7 L, m5 j$ t- K- {8 u# z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ @0 y, b1 E6 n& L+ F' H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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