【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 f5 b3 E! Q! C$ k5 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- ~; @* ^% [' a5 q1 `+ cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ \* {, ?& B5 I+ [3 U9 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( q6 L9 `( n3 o. b2 y- M% b, A/ UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 A- V/ I5 L# D) b1 @; t- o6 tI love you I love you with all my heart
7 s/ m3 @( E$ q7 VNothing can compare to my love
6 w* b  C, |/ Q5 z$ a' z  e1 G. BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ i9 {; u4 E" i/ cI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 D* Q6 v& ^7 EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, `0 C+ N) a3 k- ?+ ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 t9 t2 l- r4 L, O, u7 a- J8 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 J7 u! _3 N% n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ ~, u3 |. f6 n' Z/ _) [5 X5 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: q' b1 t9 ^0 L# U9 ~. [% E3 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 t+ C- w, I+ g9 V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' |( R* C% @' a% _. G, M) y; y9 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% U1 K" z: d# l' t. x2 w- c2 ^% t, e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, S4 o: a) N$ k0 D8 v& _  R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" i! F1 g7 @+ E4 H# G: ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 h  U6 J" S9 f# X8 V8 x<P>你无需担心</P>
* E  l+ U% X, b! }" R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 `8 i5 G/ g6 D- e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- l8 ]! ]7 x* ^* A9 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 d, Y! H2 r2 i$ R) a6 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: i0 F+ g8 \; @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" `5 {. ]; {6 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 c/ p3 X; V6 V0 {* M% q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% S* H% ~. o0 w2 Z1 d2 B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 _  x! q' m& K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, |; ^# e; M9 T  B( q9 F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( P4 P+ D! \9 A' @4 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ O5 P# H* R& p' M' \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ B4 B9 I2 f, C6 z3 L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" q% x) ~1 Y: r4 s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 J" x9 R4 w, Z. K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 U& T" v5 I/ Q5 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 v+ V: j, i  R8 L5 w: ~1 i+ |4 g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 Z2 |; L7 D8 P  l6 J6 t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 o& I" a2 {+ r9 T* g) u" J" j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>