【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" v8 }, ?6 Z& B/ f- K) sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 Z3 m9 Z% Z1 j6 v7 EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ P2 \: M  V) g) m9 a7 ~( GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* x$ d9 M, u' F/ Q$ BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 g+ M4 b; L( Q( vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- S: G, J6 R' YNothing can compare to my love
( [5 E' r7 o" X1 c7 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 l* N% `* H1 Z0 g+ r! TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ F  r. U* `4 o: ^6 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  ?. _- a# ?0 ?/ W# f& [$ I- ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) S  X6 o5 M, y$ Q7 U7 |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ a* C% |5 q& d2 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 x# \4 K5 z# d9 t7 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 j5 z, l2 A4 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ \% w3 x6 a1 u! C) W* b. B4 K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ q1 H" K" u: \, G7 k3 L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 k& d9 b+ G& o, {2 @; d7 y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" N7 D6 |7 l# i$ q$ [2 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% b; M/ m: }' Z, h3 z  N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( l. p5 ?6 U& z% X% p" a' g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 {3 P; G' v- n& Y<P>你无需担心</P>
6 G/ x4 k$ i( K% ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ g5 K- _3 x( A' ?+ @5 d. V$ n: f0 z- H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: _1 x+ O' Z  O7 _( W) {3 P; a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  _- V% ?5 [! k4 ?+ P* B1 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ k9 P, c& e. K7 y0 \# E0 E: p) H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) \7 L7 P1 C* ]2 s7 D! {1 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ J6 w1 M( z; `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" N0 A$ `! }, Q  K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 E5 @$ h8 K. g% s& A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 g7 _- L& n- U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* ^+ R" D: B  ~* r3 P3 p3 `1 i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: |. B5 W/ n6 ^+ Q/ P. g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 z; Y3 ^7 Q$ B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" t8 D- w# u2 C2 S9 a+ J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: T0 {: S+ W- n9 F( x7 H. i0 F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>