【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: H/ I6 _0 O9 P- J7 p1 z6 }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% s9 `% f2 M3 \3 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 `  y) `, b9 U1 `7 W# R+ W0 S  nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 E: _$ i' ^+ l& bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 S0 f* T  F5 v% o6 \- \3 a3 TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# p9 ~9 {- {7 Y6 o8 c) t( jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- O5 _4 O/ d0 }$ JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 h: y/ g. v) [% }6 W  ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- w; U/ m6 \2 h: i6 AI’m still filled with fear
0 q$ w1 r3 V! oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ @! T) I& b; F  E' L, X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  K( K( |( q2 ]/ p3 b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; E" e: l+ \0 Q$ Y- ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 M3 [! f) Z+ G# Y3 M  O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 N" ^& R- W1 e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 X! c  U, r# X! K" K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- B/ G* l9 u  I1 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ i! ?5 l  |3 ?: |" M: n) W7 o- |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 n+ L' K6 j* Y5 O( B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 I+ }4 k& N4 T0 _  O+ ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  w! |- \6 ]  T6 I( u; @# ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; g- a6 X% F: S$ W4 a0 e3 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 z3 I& q& W1 n* w' B, @/ Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' ^) P  n/ t# O9 o; f& l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" [9 [/ C1 A$ i+ k; D0 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  @* F9 g) a* g  g, I4 n/ P$ ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 n9 v2 ~2 w$ G" V* t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% ^+ `! l$ \$ Z7 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( M: c0 \2 F- f" b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ L: s' d5 I# k) m/ ?) k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>