【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# u6 }3 l; ]4 l+ s歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, }  E9 U3 L( ?( i+ JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 _" U& {* [1 ?0 V3 L8 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 j- C- S0 F- c, D. u* n9 \" uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ i8 B( Q1 Y' \6 v" o$ XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 H+ {8 Y8 G5 X5 ^% R: f0 PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" k8 V6 P4 ?' u% e) XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. g! C+ T! ^9 F& v  GI really want to know just how much you love me
/ [+ c, J3 \9 j" FI love you I love you with all my heart
9 n( v+ w9 t; }8 _' B! _9 u7 O1 uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: y# C# {; Z/ S, |$ v5 k+ BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% Y0 ]) {9 M; b$ gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* e5 d* r* K) v# s" wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  k8 d; P& Y9 g- j6 |; e2 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 ?, i# U( m( o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( T7 ^- V4 J) q9 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ k' n/ B/ m/ q5 n( Y' y/ H' ~8 ]; ], `; W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' y' z" t8 r8 w4 I7 R0 o8 m( I! _1 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 G7 Q9 ^  e, ~7 Z$ ]: k" `" ^, g+ @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 |0 V6 Z% U( H$ C% R7 @6 k5 C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! L9 u; q8 d  k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! z1 B/ T# s2 j; _5 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& w0 A% l7 W, {7 T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 d! f. D" {" @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' |, H3 [+ [7 B7 z7 o" w2 d) ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 V- X7 R# A1 [% H& H. h' Q! l" E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& c5 S& W# v: I. e, b# e# T% Q: y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 Y* ~) G, L3 N$ g. S% j" u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) d$ D: b, [5 ]& B. a8 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& X2 f1 l0 m2 W5 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; [& w$ `. n$ e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ r6 o; F$ s; J# b! _  A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. r2 ]6 A# r$ _( j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: m' O9 Z/ x- O. |% u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 H: \/ e3 ^+ c; k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% L2 I" w- g0 p! n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* Q! k4 L5 ~3 p8 h& b$ F( e<P>I regret not dying</P>
: h2 S/ X1 N. y" n6 o9 b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 p& n. x' z- z  W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
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4 E% y, Z! ~) g4 ], w# C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" v$ b2 t) X9 n1 \2 E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>