【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; E: D6 q, A, S  _* YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! `+ ~0 g) u1 q. y% ^  `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ Q6 i, K1 h) V1 |3 t0 C5 I/ FSeeing the sky content with its love
  O0 i- {; U* |: }4 G' v" HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: P' V0 `9 i+ ^5 ^You needn’t fear anything
1 J3 h- y7 m! q9 |8 U0 [$ f5 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& ~$ T. g. k- I* |) {. `! ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& s# \. H  ^3 S0 R2 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! c4 h1 c6 W0 l& j+ n) JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* Y) D# O9 C3 q& C+ Q3 ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* {/ h7 `1 v0 iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& Q+ n. ]$ z( ]% x% m0 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ T7 q" z" ?9 Z. A6 j/ Z  M! wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! G! e$ N5 n& j, ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* m+ L. z  {8 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) q: V6 h( m, F# M: W, P. b3 m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ V3 k  H3 d! J5 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 a9 z# v4 o' ?  w' N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) y  e- w! A& t/ A; A% Y4 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& E8 M9 i  m3 Z6 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) j4 Z! X+ Y4 L1 ]$ u/ \) S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 o% m5 E) |3 a! X" ~  u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& d3 L7 ^! }) Z1 p% P# }5 w+ d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: G) d8 z, L1 n0 B. n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# U; e# [. g  C( p+ C/ D$ q/ `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% _& Z! X( y. E5 s+ ~9 o<P>你无需担心</P>
/ V7 v3 F5 x2 l$ C/ K( J4 B1 Z$ D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' M: n& a3 y0 F" g1 e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. S/ B* W2 `# g- m% q7 E+ I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 m0 l; L4 n' w. Y5 a1 _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 U9 P6 B" r5 k+ ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- M8 h: `8 H& ]" d# g. m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ C. S2 H4 U/ E: E. z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: K3 T1 ]5 g8 ~5 m( W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ o' ]/ Y9 Z. R' R/ o. j: L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! X" v* _1 d) k5 C. \3 T0 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 `% ^+ I/ M; d& V, K" O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 Y% r$ X7 F) ^: p8 t( _$ J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, y' `+ l  p5 ^1 S3 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; F" _% @+ U, l; d) O: x9 s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# E( c( h. n- g7 K7 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- H5 N" D- f/ g: Z5 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 i) l' @. u% Z; B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" W7 o5 P8 ?( v3 q2 l9 W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 G! f  j5 l8 _# I- K& r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) q5 v% w) ~  u/ y0 L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ O5 }- d/ a! F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>