【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 D* G1 `. l+ Z2 `# N歌词我附在后面。
7 f' }/ B$ x% AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ K  Y1 N5 e# ?' S+ kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 B; I  k/ X9 R6 A7 [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* i, t4 v0 R2 j! H) f8 E% ]& nEvery other word you utter is love
3 B3 N* _5 I4 {, GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) C6 ?. u! j1 e: z4 g: u) TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 n, {& p6 ?9 g0 g" e9 G$ s: `/ [$ ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 u0 m0 o2 E2 O- E/ U7 W" P' }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; n' G" Y; z, o2 BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 t+ [2 t/ \/ ?& z. e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. [4 k" w$ n0 J: d: {2 r. k3 \2 J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 u. G% J5 _. x/ L" j: v: {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" P* P1 `' D4 }; {+ F) \7 V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 U8 L+ ~8 e0 B$ _1 Y1 m# N0 k2 A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; |2 x5 ^' m$ R) x, B- M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  {+ i- S' H, X, |: y/ i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" `5 |6 N. S) b' r% }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ c: W; u6 x5 ?3 y* D& B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( V* S7 l8 u9 H4 t6 x7 c9 E, n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; g5 ?/ s! _" z. g/ r. w1 n, P* l6 r% {<P>你无需担心</P>
- Q% w' K( `% ^) T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 q# ~/ \/ h8 l- H# H9 f/ c& s, u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 W) T2 b, @3 C# {- p1 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& n9 t( o. |9 Q4 z# p$ o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% `6 |3 {  s& h! i- g' m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 m3 c4 ]# G& q/ a& H/ h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- |' j5 {2 j; K& t( q3 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* A8 }/ e8 M. a0 e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% E# h  {  {1 Y$ U0 ^% ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 q. A# Q* I2 f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, @+ ?$ w) C6 G( O2 l$ N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. e' v. V! H/ o. b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) N: b1 Y8 f2 f% ^. [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 Z- f3 {7 H% L<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 d6 L1 }, g% B! P! |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* Y0 f! g& R1 P" q( H! x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 o9 S4 F7 b& z: z0 m7 T6 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 Z6 L  h/ t! b5 e2 i( N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% ?$ _6 L& E0 ^  \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 a9 L4 O& ?+ i! n我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 v/ t: R% l' a- m9 p( M$ i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>