【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 I7 b+ o/ B. s! v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, J. C2 n3 s& p0 W4 EWith the moon kissing it every night
8 \, j0 q8 q/ ?Seeing the sky content with its love
, s0 W8 w3 T' ^& X! pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* r% y- k* N$ s/ X/ m0 \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ W/ N+ m3 v; Z9 j1 A) l5 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ t# a5 A, {* `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# e. G$ Y- @; B' UI want so much to see inside your heart
# C  f  R9 R0 V% ]7 EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; y# L6 }. N) L& L8 o+ SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ ?3 Q$ ?, Q, `! K/ T, S! f7 g# e, gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( ]( E' I; ~4 [0 V3 N$ {8 ^' DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# i4 ?: V  m; Y+ i7 O/ C' V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% h" J0 w1 p) T) z7 p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  o- i! m* ]2 S) D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& a" a/ }& D1 ]& M9 ?1 N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 @. l. D% c5 ?7 U/ a8 U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 m' k, D  u! P* ~1 A* f# `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% _- v! i- L9 J6 k3 R% E) I, a9 b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ Z& ]% `& z+ N: [0 H  L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. T7 p' y. h4 M- l& R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( i" \; y; K; ^4 Z" O4 }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 z2 [# Y8 y& B% a' R, @7 O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. X+ f+ D7 k& q$ y# Z) M) t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" i% y  V0 t% R* q1 d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ x: g% Z, r/ \3 a) d2 _0 l0 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" S/ V( ]5 U# l% t+ y. V% N5 H& v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, _9 f0 \1 O, C! t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( [0 [: L, x+ D/ x" Y1 k( D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 h' q$ x% e, e" r9 d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ F9 G) e1 E: ?5 S0 d8 ~( \- B( v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ U! y" q' h1 B: Z9 Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 l5 a+ U1 V# e& O! \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& `& L! s8 H5 `/ X# L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 d7 v/ o; ~5 P7 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 h1 ~# ?) @$ I5 z& l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' d- N# y  I" Z! _$ n' C- Z1 Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( A6 Y8 i/ f& o) |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" A" y% K. I& i/ U2 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 `9 Y) l; V3 G3 R; A, h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 g9 l  Z6 P9 x; ^+ W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% q7 w. i4 M% D: \! i  t- Y6 e9 j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 P& h, ]* f' N/ _' i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 \9 {, G+ P) a: T7 r6 P. W% P我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>