【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# \! }2 e8 k/ SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# @* ^% c! ^9 d. {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  A, d) ^0 s2 ?& n$ X( M! M3 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 y. C4 R& }1 Y$ z- gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& a2 `+ ]2 g9 W( z# M7 I+ NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ [' e$ b4 m% z: [4 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 j* p* g* Q# K4 U% cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ a) B6 A) B5 q7 X' u9 z/ ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 u. _# e9 _2 A: |+ s6 y) q; TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 B. P2 k  E% a6 z+ e0 O4 w% [- wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 V7 a6 o( W- ?5 d; a. f, e$ D6 UWith such a tongue as yours,
3 N; U; Y9 o9 |& P$ Q9 @  a8 F# YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* ^' Q- u8 w8 s" c) q. }* ~7 tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 v5 `! t1 N9 j2 l' F" y2 q, U- pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ T# T* I1 u% H" {0 @0 J5 ?% }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ S8 q3 d" L7 f& Y, E1 ]" e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 I: U9 m: o  y' ?$ K+ N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. C3 e# d: E3 }9 h1 s- T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' J! y0 `5 O, r" y; O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  P* k" b/ I' D& g0 Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: C$ w% P& g7 ?5 {9 m# y: m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 |6 [& ]% L: t- S# b% A, q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 N" Z. y' w* j  L1 ^( Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 H, H* L' Z: _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& r0 j5 D. y# P; [  S: U! f<P>你无需担心</P>
0 ?6 n3 M/ r/ e# t8 U3 {6 Y7 h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% t% Q/ a0 D3 f6 d- N( h" j; d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 u1 B6 W) f+ A4 ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 A1 v, Y2 \  t: ]$ _0 A3 |) V7 q" ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 \! x8 i6 `- L) y% V. ~5 y) U# t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) G# s% ]& k8 {$ v8 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' r. u) X. v4 t+ l3 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 Z5 M; t# I3 J2 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ i0 g, y& s! T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 A9 V$ N9 K7 \4 ?. h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& H. a' H/ R  X+ [% @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' x+ P$ x* j" R' ~' R2 Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 v, q. H+ i, J  N" S; ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 X9 r! h' x4 U. N: H9 r: K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 D1 x* V# ?8 _$ w2 D/ H9 i+ [4 J0 l, O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 p+ Y/ n$ j$ @* |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* [4 M2 n5 _1 A/ Z* u7 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  ?7 l' j) D1 |6 R: n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 h0 I+ }3 g4 x2 L. b& p) V) L! T4 \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ y7 d9 _5 Q% x  x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) _  [7 o; I5 G- i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 _8 I; R+ O4 t" i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 `1 h) G2 \% P- ?我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>