【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 w" ~: a1 Y/ q# SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 c$ a' P- s3 r: u9 F2 B% c6 oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& b# R+ ?+ \6 P8 `The sky is happy down to its soul
+ E% l- {) T: b( r& \1 q7 A6 iWith the moon kissing it every night
+ c6 r/ m/ o0 c. |- e7 b; `Seeing the sky content with its love
) L3 ~5 y  x/ Y1 }9 x$ H: I# k; EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ i$ L5 y- w- R, Q- c: j2 l! q) OYou needn’t fear anything
, i5 }2 v$ n" j: K) R/ zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" g9 z6 X3 x+ ^2 @7 W1 U. sEvery other word you utter is love
1 m. F: Z1 d$ L5 U  z) H5 z# y- FI really want to know just how much you love me
" N2 w$ T" _: J" L" uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! ~7 S- W: G& h. \- w: eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 B7 T" }$ j  s3 E3 }7 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( P8 F. T0 O; X( X$ [+ O$ EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; i! y6 w% s6 }' `- @1 T. @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! u" M! r( D( |: e/ _! }  UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% K8 ?" V, W( ]7 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ H' B3 }' t6 [: k5 @- f0 g3 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" _' ]  N7 b0 r# z4 k( F2 `8 S; i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- g1 U& a0 L* |( \% p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 y5 D1 I9 o! A8 t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 R; }9 M: c/ s0 o) a  H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: v- c# r" o0 L5 U1 A$ _  O  e/ S# Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 T6 B+ O) v* ^) ?+ \/ N. _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 T( `3 u" h6 Z7 h/ @6 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ z; ]; h7 [$ B9 Q( \2 W' X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 G  G& l& X$ N$ {. P! v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# \" {) f' \& [- P% @0 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 D/ n, [3 P* H: y8 v3 \! N$ g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# Y% [& E# v- ^& X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  B; }$ Z3 _, ~2 i& a! v% Z+ s( I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# ?- v; g% h" A1 _$ G+ k5 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 E( n% l, I; F( v( D, L- {2 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 ]6 \) z: L/ x; |0 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 ~& A2 w/ q$ _7 q, B; I9 k& b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) Z9 M8 K7 g2 _  V# O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 U7 Y  r/ g* |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- N% H- o2 P6 ^' @4 l" ?: ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 c' k0 o  s+ ]8 O( ~3 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 v( B1 t: B* `% o' U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 |" m+ @. c1 K  L( l$ o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" \% {( f, A7 N; R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 ?/ E2 N# p/ i/ `" B  ~我请你剖开它

3 {4 e  ]& z7 F/ G* d7 h5 h* X% W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( l6 Z+ H: d" R1 V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>