【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 F. [1 z8 O$ e' o, F7 z) G/ ^6 HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' A2 d6 B9 q: n! N: u, b% ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ |; b% p6 I( p2 v4 OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. s/ Y0 z5 V# ~& o) jSeeing the sky content with its love
+ c3 G0 E2 y; [4 o7 |; SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 ]. L* N2 P& |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 B& u. B" n( s* kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' Q/ ~7 ]/ E8 }/ _5 ^5 ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" W- p- Z  h% q3 G5 QI regret not dying
: b9 }+ f. I* W8 DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 k8 F% ~) |) I2 R0 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" W+ E; t* T% m- h( CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# y8 Y. l& v8 N0 c/ p9 k! l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# k- ~# ^; O. w# s+ d# o  m6 [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  t9 o: Z. U7 z* Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# }/ Z. J4 [4 e4 x) T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 P8 |* K3 B! ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 G8 m$ O# ]/ ^+ ^4 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% R, H! P% s- H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( r8 U1 X$ ]: N$ K8 ~5 F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 E: v% j# p) V% u% \5 g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  I5 p0 c$ m' E; B0 e1 X- b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" Z+ }( m% N& M& G" a$ y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ |$ g* e3 R- G: p% s3 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 a& g. C% X  }! M/ F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 g# V" w4 i' ^+ b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. m5 d, o3 x, O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 ?/ M1 A. i, g, X  e0 G# h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% q( Z# y* n" O/ Y, R, v3 c3 @5 C, c7 k<P>I regret not dying</P>
; @6 T. ]% A( h" b6 o0 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& d! ~8 Y+ R3 G. m4 f" S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 F* O7 B) z' U4 |% V8 r6 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. `# y0 k* }& i+ q$ Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 f4 K- u  f- I4 V3 }% v1 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! K# H( V4 m) m) A+ @8 y  Y- N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! Y( |2 _2 Y- S/ w) [) l1 ^7 K3 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, m! ]" Q/ k' Y9 G3 Q3 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>