【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! Z$ r5 P0 L6 p1 }/ L' cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 i. A5 L" n5 UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, @! ?; d9 U2 v+ |0 y/ g8 k3 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% K: P& w+ C  V8 X- mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 Z1 U6 L$ M4 j# {6 x( O  `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- u+ U- Q5 b" G0 [. J% nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! R' V0 \# _5 Y% S& f3 jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% V, c' V: G, |1 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 J# @! Q' |# I1 d) o5 o1 c6 DI’m still filled with fear
: B  n# E$ B( ^7 N* G$ C2 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- k; H- K2 n/ B5 |% m! q; x6 gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; z  \: ^) q" s  N% e! c8 `. J0 @- ]3 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. T; _( g- B# Y! b# Z5 ~& `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 c) B# ^9 j& H/ {  Z' P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: N9 j( f8 C5 g4 O$ U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! J/ v+ n4 J4 v, ?8 \3 d9 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! `5 K8 @7 B! `% @" S: z, p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# i% y' u# W; R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* M9 K7 i% |7 A6 F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( |0 o3 d% \! q+ S8 ^1 }% o/ p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* z0 d0 P; M& {5 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( y. v3 ?5 C0 I- g' @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 n  v- g" B& O1 [$ c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 L# S9 P! }) ?* E% x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" j- V1 T4 ^+ p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' @$ C3 R* h5 v7 l- W) ^. [, Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# ~, }' }$ X1 j- X+ W% |% I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% \( x( i. ^: I% f" l" T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, }+ H( K, Q4 v3 g$ e* e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 }4 x# ^( t4 w; f<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 \/ g: q! r2 F8 h% E! K4 b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 k' E' a0 X/ j+ S$ s. v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- R" N& ?9 _# `) c+ Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  Y4 `1 D" h/ ?* G9 `" }: {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 b. {, ]0 W3 E, @3 p8 R4 a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 _7 C' @2 h/ Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 h# n; L: {0 I: j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# z9 @6 `8 P' _" E/ E6 n3 g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, B9 d; F; C7 N9 `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 M& L- Q4 ~" x0 q+ J, M! K8 |# {6 t我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>