【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 c- h1 ]+ W' `6 T7 m- VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 ^* [+ E  V! X. wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# A, d8 q+ k! p# ^6 ?) DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! G1 W- {* O) K" NThe sky is happy down to its soul
( P6 F" L7 R3 p0 r0 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ A3 g( q) b7 ?7 G+ ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 T6 Z1 i7 Z9 VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 Y, s, p0 X0 k6 iI want so much to see inside your heart
/ R" S( J4 a+ u  v) E$ [4 |7 e6 h! dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' [: `& W- p1 {0 a% W- K5 WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 x5 X" p, Z' i$ B$ }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 p/ v3 g7 ~0 ?1 U, T; @9 {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; s2 C, h9 L1 M( \6 _9 FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! A% e% i1 H+ l0 T& v. M5 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% L8 T* u1 }, T) z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& x4 u! P$ ^' Q1 |' S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! ?  p. `- O0 p( e; A; b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  U, Z8 U6 m# q* p) A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% m' B/ T3 i3 d- d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, o. c0 k& [. b, ~2 N. c; v5 f8 }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 D" M6 ]& y# l" F$ X+ {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  q. j' h" ~6 K; J3 \  c( m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. `3 L2 W+ Y  x& t% V  `( k' Z3 v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) ?6 H1 m9 c7 ~7 u* i* y! c9 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) B# U: ?. e& H/ ]9 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 l% T- g, l) T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" g6 ~! i& c, @9 V/ B2 c& i0 Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ J6 F, G7 Z; k; M8 l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) O/ b5 o5 o& Z. u7 f$ u5 I' E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, _) I) C+ O! |5 d9 o' n* G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 V" D9 z7 H- t4 ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# P% G6 R7 Z& m7 J) K- X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 r, E) s5 H+ V, N: p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 }* f3 I; i& k6 O* j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; Z$ G* @% u3 O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ V& J" D$ q# E! {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( A: B' i9 Y3 T" _' [9 A  p6 T8 _; ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 m) A) d' X6 c" i2 E) B3 H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  _. O' }- ?# F$ H# v( _% K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" Y5 m* y( R( {1 o# T5 z! S* k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  z( P! g- D6 i6 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>