【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* Q% P( M" i1 @9 V+ ^/ b2 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# N( J5 g* ]% V$ B. O2 p0 f) \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  R* j- g1 [4 C4 Q4 V! RWith the moon kissing it every night
# a5 J' T3 p1 Z' ?Seeing the sky content with its love
; c; \; e! J4 G7 Y' E2 H  mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. c0 j& i+ F6 c! M1 [) b% G+ {! P% kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 z! c4 Z. t4 _8 s  F" AI really want to know just how much you love me
* s* ~5 `  p4 OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 ^# @# M( P  f  L1 e* [% c1 B, oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 G- J, w3 r! n' j7 P& nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 G& P- ~9 v* `3 H, iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( N5 r+ L" a0 c) |4 D* L3 W; XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' a2 b8 D$ }+ o8 M/ GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 S$ u! i/ ]. ^8 |% d. l+ n/ f% ~' t6 p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 k+ U3 z: z  r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 u( [! I' F. I' O1 I$ J9 E( e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) }8 B7 @) r0 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. M/ U1 ]; J+ e) }, g+ B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, j: v7 Y/ O8 v" d& Q$ b0 g3 c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 W  G+ z; d& [, }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 S, w6 d' H0 Y- S5 {) u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ ^: U- {( N) P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. w$ _4 ~! |! M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 o2 H0 g( \* P% T4 _. T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* ]) K$ l1 k% }* W3 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) i+ I, A  I% \* E/ H  k0 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 s2 {; R$ x1 c; D+ m9 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 k/ o2 E7 J, d2 |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 w, T$ R& O: p6 W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ i: f, s% h* E# P$ l. {, M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ z( D5 }8 H/ d* G) p. _& h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 l. m6 N6 {4 R& |: |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! p2 s/ ~( b; C! d+ O8 Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 C0 L1 l8 }9 v; d0 z8 a0 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 f: l. a1 G' C8 e2 n1 x1 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) J0 t0 ^3 l  }  i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# t  K  I+ G: v3 J3 w- L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 T6 S( A. u' V; v( a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; s+ t! H) N% ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& h) ]+ w( o% x8 U( p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 ]6 r& K4 J/ |% o% ?3 e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ t$ ~( s- l4 ?我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ p3 p  a1 p6 o. B  e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>