【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- Z/ P1 E2 z$ L1 H  F8 L/ iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# k- `4 T+ n# ?2 q9 d5 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 @1 \6 W7 D8 g1 a! B- I$ L" jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* K3 r$ C* }0 o, YThe sky is happy down to its soul
# d1 h( l" S; WWith the moon kissing it every night
4 q& z% m( l% h0 QSeeing the sky content with its love
" o0 R: [2 |. ?7 q; N( A. ~6 DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* e! X( B% o2 i2 L' y& K; `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" c4 o( h9 v6 M* \2 r  [' s  h! UEvery other word you utter is love
* p# W; @$ V1 {) }I really want to know just how much you love me
$ `1 J1 @  h! p$ C, {+ EI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ n3 l4 ^) ], w4 F" FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' k0 }" x; M6 m0 U' }; DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ J: C  ^8 k/ T; W% P+ L3 F3 L9 ]' z, J0 yI regret not dying
. q* p% z' r& X/ aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! J9 x  q, O% T4 d; ?0 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 r8 A1 B( b; r6 o5 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 n8 s* X- ^( F9 w: |% g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! i) u, x3 X: p# D' x3 \. j0 u0 k& Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 I  E( [' Z+ g: z3 P, {* C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 b) t& N9 c& |0 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 Y3 y; Z8 x, V) q. l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, T$ _3 I! G* m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ [- S1 a& L* s% |( J; ?, T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 k+ d7 _) `2 ^5 o; W& h; k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ m. {4 V& y+ e  K9 ~* `: b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 p5 d* p" Q) }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: T0 O  Z, P6 w% }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 J6 x4 E) B% R% V" ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 Y2 [2 K$ D5 _' Q, Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 U+ @( g% `+ n) T& A8 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; E* t8 T7 ]9 Q, P% m9 T: T1 n0 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# I7 m2 d' w: h$ r" E- ?/ I% R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. B8 U  @+ _- n. ?, p3 G/ r7 n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 _7 R/ [& T9 a# ?- N0 C* n, S2 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) O8 I- Q# m! u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) {% u  ^3 K& p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 ~& e; t+ u3 v7 ]8 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ j" i. Q+ A3 b- I4 Y$ B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 k( x7 l/ ]% Z$ z3 g1 y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ R9 W6 Q0 l; a( t; E/ b" @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ S0 R" U- z9 |5 G/ N! I1 ^! V4 B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! ~# s/ M0 O4 a我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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