【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! g$ L9 _/ C  ~% H' g9 NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) i& J* \6 K2 {: |0 s4 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ T% W, f& o8 wWith the moon kissing it every night
* Y3 T2 D6 y& ~1 {Seeing the sky content with its love
/ q0 @, j+ T6 P2 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 f" q" ~7 \" ]) i" HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% z  Y* t" S0 B/ t/ w! BEvery other word you utter is love
( f' z& [; X9 i( i5 V4 YI really want to know just how much you love me
0 m6 N! T# ~. G) FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 E! b- s; X/ q8 Z+ T% G9 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 L+ b( L' h0 _I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 Q( u9 }/ y- u. y5 _6 ]$ i5 _I’m still filled with fear
& G# v$ x2 d% ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ Y+ R( ]6 E% k# B, f: X) hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# z) P  i! Z5 m+ A# ?, U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ l6 e, i: T4 U2 G3 \! Z2 [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( J  s: L) t( z, }) H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. d# B3 b9 p$ _2 I; F1 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# _3 @+ c0 w) Q2 W1 }0 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 L5 X/ c  D3 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 Y6 B7 W! A3 V; T  m. E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 \# }6 _7 s: c, C: P9 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ O, @! e1 ~0 h* W& t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; G: N; I& [  i( ^- H- {0 J/ \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 b) e: a1 J8 F8 S9 h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" W4 q) ^9 Z. }3 ?/ j/ r1 X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ s* R/ z" o4 r7 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) ?0 N" M* u8 h- t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* s# X5 D# J; G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; b( K3 h4 u+ V1 ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 X0 \+ B; G! x2 t6 Q0 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ Z4 M; j- U! y5 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 o" r9 `% T  H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 \5 ]8 ~4 V& v  e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 F% X1 G( Q" |) K: X: u' Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 ~3 V) k2 p: j: i: |- _% v7 j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& V: G  k) v: v/ J/ p: b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' t; T% l  _9 [3 _' c  V( `6 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) h6 ^% L% E; A( d! p. v" j% c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; N  k$ J8 |* K+ O/ Q7 d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% x& M' `) w9 v, Y4 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>