【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' u* @, [- s  S! H, n) |& ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 _" a( h4 n0 e, e4 ?. e1 TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) k- q( W$ r( zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 L$ j9 ~: O2 P; g- W" gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 e! t) }& b% yYou needn’t fear anything
$ U0 E% f) b+ O( bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ z9 R. y9 O  Q. GI really want to know just how much you love me
# b1 |+ a. r& S$ o" O6 x  dI love you I love you with all my heart
( @2 ^+ _* b- L) U# w( d( YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 i; N, ?1 u8 T  C! ^: o" [! ~I want so much to see inside your heart
- s( Z2 k$ Z# \* j# \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- x8 P8 f6 q* {+ f; JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 J7 }) n! u# P. S; z+ lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 u. L$ ^; M- [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) Z' P  a8 l: t7 w* RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 B5 G* g0 ^) A* q) i/ c% JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ a. S  W/ {& i% a2 M: v% J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- ^" M' e9 `4 a6 V+ L) ^& b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 O  {+ Y2 B# L; B, i" f( a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" F1 v1 k) e. m* W' p* j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  m! D2 L& w& F8 P" l; d- G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# d& u" g/ a" t, m6 Q# G4 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% B" b" a. [1 f" ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 c5 S" y& X/ M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 p( @7 N# X. B* e8 ?, [$ v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! P7 c- N6 [+ Q+ S7 E4 d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 f  u! y6 ]5 i3 M3 E2 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ ]9 g7 h1 _7 _; ~( B7 j7 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 a$ c2 B2 W$ E0 k* W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. U4 ~1 f( {4 I. @$ S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  i9 S8 l) w: y8 X* Y- U% z2 {) i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! b6 l  U& I) r( ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! L( x& q5 S- ~+ [, _0 j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 T  G) u5 j" X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: H8 ?% q0 P* [+ z/ D# O2 T$ w  M9 Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 C7 Y7 ]* |0 J2 j% y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 G% z2 F- \' K7 `我请你剖开它
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7 X# `5 V# M+ A5 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>