【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# a0 ?* R3 g* V" I" ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 {4 r# a" j% j* m7 Q1 E8 R! ?; lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 H( w6 _+ J: \" |9 V3 cWith the moon kissing it every night
% V5 \+ G. D, ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 V% v! C9 r7 m" cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; `3 \% d0 ~- ~! HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 b' K! @6 i  D( i4 DI love you I love you with all my heart
( m! m; F) h5 V  ^Nothing can compare to my love
' E4 Y3 X5 R$ @6 `% |' [0 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 f( {5 y1 P5 r; S2 ]: h( t6 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% k" W; k! i( |: R- N& a5 S; |I want so much to see inside your heart
! J2 G3 p! @3 Q  B/ G4 @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 X' e0 @+ _5 S5 [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* k+ Z" B0 f1 [' G, R9 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% p' o7 Q4 Y9 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 n. [2 }* @- p  s3 ~+ G+ C2 v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 o1 q& M4 S, R/ o( ^* v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: G8 j5 g( p' c: K$ \% L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 u4 g. X, l) K1 o9 ^' f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( Y& c3 h% e7 b% X/ B$ s5 E1 P8 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( H' K" n- D. o1 H# m) H& a& k* n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' M& `. B& E" k! C8 X- v5 V2 }0 ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) \' k" U5 E8 @! ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 N( g+ Z" R9 c+ K0 a0 E0 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 ]0 |, r  z* S* Q  b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. _4 u1 ?+ z3 C& |& x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' J3 s3 W, v/ G* Q4 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, ?. I: o1 ?# E: u! v1 }+ P9 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- c6 `& Q# f5 u4 _$ R: {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- o' r% q7 r" f0 v- E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  M4 V5 W$ b3 G8 v$ K6 ]# ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 D, v2 f$ n6 O* W2 |) o+ F# d$ X5 P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% D; L6 v& u! f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ q2 a! [0 D# _: Y8 N+ z  v8 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ O6 a% a: y* h; D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 `/ Q9 s7 c- g0 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 ]7 k, T' l* L" z6 t( G1 @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; ?- Q, D. G0 \" J: b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 Y3 _4 u; Z" u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* o" n$ H  Q4 O7 }6 s6 v* K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! E2 U; w" a+ ~; `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* g) {0 t, G7 o- H/ u6 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# z/ P+ D3 T( I我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% p- l! ?% ?9 m/ d5 e( |) O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>