【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# g. T, s4 G% t2 y! x$ k6 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ B4 M+ g/ u# Q9 }* m& o' nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# E+ d* b: `* R9 y4 L2 ^You needn’t fear anything
" E9 a+ ]% X9 y+ z- H6 {. c3 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 c! b/ ]- m$ [& Y: e5 ?# j/ W  H5 r$ |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) H4 f  S; P/ i+ O6 wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 ~+ _/ a9 ~# K- M$ g3 l; J# \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' y+ [" I1 d; e* h! ?! C1 uI’m still filled with fear
* B  ]! @5 W& B! Y3 N6 ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* I6 u2 S: D4 ~. {9 A2 m$ [5 iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ O  J, g! H/ F* V3 E. G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 e" |- Y% ^$ |# u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 r3 y$ E1 \% h7 u. \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 p6 U& a' B' z( `  ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& @& g# h- n0 r/ f2 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 X, R* G5 h& P$ i4 U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ a8 a9 r- X1 }9 Y& ]0 c+ t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 f0 ?  a6 \2 O3 t, D- K# P* q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! R6 C7 B: b  y5 p5 V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( `1 J* Z: C: t& |: n3 I4 k" T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& ]5 r  n- d$ o2 z/ t: a9 o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 [8 j# v4 u! n) `* S9 \$ U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! r8 _$ E+ C% [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" K6 `, J/ N# x' ]- t<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ Q! v5 d, t6 r2 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* u) S/ Y& z2 J1 r1 v' h# K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 m  ?% p4 d+ C  k: w3 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 B- ~, s  S) ?# w1 ]( C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: V1 g* t5 s) c- m( k8 m我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>