【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ T8 t# C5 ?6 I8 G3 g/ i  |. }! WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 @$ Z6 {* e+ n5 |/ T) r2 j! hWith the moon kissing it every night
! Q, Q% [2 Q& ~9 CSeeing the sky content with its love
2 N2 U+ d. i8 C, ~2 W- I7 nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& d0 h: r2 H7 ^5 G3 UEvery other word you utter is love
- S% W: R2 V2 E# o8 II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ P+ n/ \5 b% W; Q7 h+ [/ Q' pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% g! q" [; }' [, n0 z% K6 R) gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 \) J8 y8 v( G& J1 v( \- c# F* AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ L' q5 }; _% l7 r+ aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ ^2 I9 o/ v  J, @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) D0 \& a" o0 I# g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ l3 i$ _; T& u' r: s8 O% e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 s8 Z: e/ v8 g: F+ F; L' O8 S, L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( f4 E3 E- T) [" @. ]5 p- y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  l8 R% A4 f! h) i- C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 Z# T( _7 W. e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, R/ R4 l! U: @" a' k% ~+ m4 ~9 k9 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- `" k$ \6 A# v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 }0 y. f3 m5 D+ R5 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 a8 Y- Z9 S+ i& G9 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: A# _/ {1 I$ j5 D: j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) b4 M0 O8 @7 j; ~( u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 {  Y  |5 m' b% u' l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( c9 Y) @0 w, _! U- m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* k( h4 I( Z! n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 W1 @  z8 O  V! T7 t: x0 p2 i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 E  h) A) k2 O3 K- f% N8 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ p( C; V, W. o# u' \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 K7 u1 J  e0 U+ o, d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  Z/ J8 D  o" r9 f1 _: ?! t) m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& g7 q1 e9 i/ ?% D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% _# e$ X) e; b6 S9 u4 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- t. \5 h4 Y; J8 g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 B9 K* }) [  e, V6 W* F- g2 Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: ?9 j  j, d2 Q9 Q我请你剖开它

9 D" \+ E; i3 M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 [, Z0 a; R/ O* J5 j- F/ g; ]. U1 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>