【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! y, c! l; A0 qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, _" @* S; H- X( c: t. A- V: A& OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, E, J9 @+ ^% N+ qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# M+ w4 C, b# G) nThe sky is happy down to its soul
  r3 C+ p2 }9 |/ X0 p% s/ ]* aWith the moon kissing it every night
. S( J( |4 u/ G- `9 {( Q' ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* O2 m8 n& \5 Q5 S: aYou needn’t fear anything
0 x7 A7 B3 m* _: m/ JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* Q/ y: K( w' D1 _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- ?6 Y3 G! W0 R& h6 ]- ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) S% ^: W, k2 s# v' _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" Y1 t( Y2 S  o( L; P5 HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ b! _  @* ~1 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: t3 X/ |8 G1 B* ]. T( W. \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 ~7 `# H; x) K) V+ R! K5 m. c) sWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ \' }) C" i* f9 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: x6 r5 r: f: Z6 R4 i, l" f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  O) {# t( H- z8 Q1 q6 K( B$ A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ D+ z6 J4 H1 Q2 q8 }; \: H0 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' x' V$ l6 o) h& B' @+ l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 ^2 F7 A7 D' p$ l" G! O$ d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: S+ P3 ^* v0 C0 ?% M( r/ d, ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 v4 T8 C! b3 d+ O% {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 ]* d/ j$ V9 S+ S5 n) ^* b( T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: x# w2 ]: T7 c) r/ z" v7 C) l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' f  w& D" t2 n7 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ F' F% M4 N* u: x; C) j- _! I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  @; h4 ]) ?: w% B) |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- d5 |& @$ l. }0 t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) b8 Z) _* e7 M( _3 [! l9 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, I+ d& Q, i' n. E" j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 {" }* S6 S, [- F8 f$ ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  Z$ ^% M9 X* c3 P/ a/ R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. \5 k$ ~+ H- x6 C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ {. y9 y& K) Z) J' z$ W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ }9 V9 G( \: f( C2 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" B0 B1 A! f* u; f: V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  u4 G2 k/ j) N: y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& ^( P; ~. U6 F( `: c# V9 l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# c% S4 A: N' h0 R8 O<P>I regret not dying</P>
% W+ a6 h$ l( l1 K' K& F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- J2 f+ T: r: _2 ?6 \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 f3 |* M" a! |/ B! x" h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* N/ q* L! [2 }6 U3 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. \8 n7 H- U# o& J# X- X$ P- N2 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) k: ?6 ?/ p' L  A% U3 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. B. i" C3 [4 Y6 v4 L4 P; c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) B3 T: g6 ^, q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 e6 F' `1 Q) u! n1 a' ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 e+ }2 ]* o* d: M6 H- Q  `我请你剖开它
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3 v. M8 B( P( C5 e6 ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>