【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 X' d* m* ^6 c  u3 \歌词我附在后面。
/ Q/ X8 S# f" sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 D/ h! c7 Q/ ?  v. f: iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 M. I. k" ?4 e3 a/ ZEvery other word you utter is love
# i% M* U1 q. i( b/ W3 ]$ uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 \$ Q; c0 i2 G/ W  D: r5 QNothing can compare to my love
6 {- C! ~4 R3 C# \/ VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* e' Q$ Q, s. q/ L8 s- [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' x# m( ^$ h7 ~* hI want so much to see inside your heart
7 x7 E( \: F" a2 _: K; H" XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 r) l3 G5 C6 vWith such a tongue as yours,
, P& d5 b' x) S5 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 Y$ B. o- q; ^; j! I$ [- W4 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ I* Q  |5 p0 }9 h( Q& B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. ^8 J: ]' P4 T% T- ^) J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. U4 R# p: N+ v/ u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 K1 V3 f& z" D8 w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 y4 H- }1 {& G2 O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 D1 N& [2 [' \/ V4 m* @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 e, L; f7 g2 J$ X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 s# R. u0 \, V* Z+ }( {: }<P>你无需担心</P>
& U" |7 j$ M- B- f" ^4 C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- e4 R" N$ u+ ]4 S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ g( {" B, a' T+ d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! m2 d" A# Y7 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& @) `. z, v7 v, p* v, f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, V8 ?& \0 X/ q9 U  u: r- h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 }4 x; N" [( @) p4 c9 p) X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: e) G) F+ D3 o& F' A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 J# Y1 a/ l. B; [7 ^1 x+ W8 [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 R. v' W& N% f6 G; D0 i$ q8 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& o) P  Y$ W+ M- E: r/ g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" u, R2 N, Y9 |' [1 s  v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 `1 }9 M, p4 d$ B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, M3 [. ~, A% ]# V, L% H& d. I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 m$ p: W( T8 o* U: d8 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 m, F6 C$ B6 e, S) C* Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 j% |0 U, a* D7 V: h" J% H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ `% M! W7 H. u  ]2 b3 V! A$ b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' R% f6 T' B$ h: z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: X# J- n- f# B$ D1 u5 K8 c! w我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. D3 X# z2 h* }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>