【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ [7 r2 P, H/ o; W# i2 |1 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' j& ?& R! j: mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 N& [+ E5 Q5 G+ S2 i2 ZYou needn’t fear anything
" B, R& d8 d: v" Y* iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 D* e- i" _; Y+ }1 s: N+ i7 y5 ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! }. N8 u% T, ^  JI love you I love you with all my heart
4 V. T/ m, P3 LNothing can compare to my love
% x: \" g6 S' X7 t! `) m' d7 Z% _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; w5 ~/ S- R9 b& d* GI regret not dying
$ T) ^5 U8 r2 u( I4 {5 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 `0 C& s' Y8 r! gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" O* I  V; O' [1 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! t* `- U; ]# i) [$ |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# q3 n+ M5 O3 p4 n: U: K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% ^3 x* d) H0 t) V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' L0 ]' k# g' S! G4 p8 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ e$ q0 L! n+ r" V( \7 t4 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 P* W+ w8 t* `, i+ {4 [$ a$ ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; V3 k8 o0 J' ^: r) `9 x: H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% A5 ]+ j7 g0 E. M2 \2 [. i( J  E% v<P>你无需担心</P>
1 \4 w0 f6 o2 E) U  @( u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* l* @+ j) w2 J# Z* G# t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ Q  J* W% _6 L8 {9 F# k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* {8 D9 J/ j% u; t! [5 N( p- R; @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 G3 v, e+ F: U/ `, R3 d( g' m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; @& z' [5 ?  |. t& {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: N7 L; ]# G8 e) h- T9 m" i" v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ ~( W( S* }, ~% N# W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  S( b; ?3 |2 Y& }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ r3 s) D& `$ k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ w0 i0 V' [  e1 }# C" f, d) F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  A- N  C- f7 E0 b" z" T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 H/ l8 h4 s8 i6 U0 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, I! O9 S5 n1 b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, a+ r' S' q- t3 d- F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  z8 K9 {  I% d8 Z# F. c% U) f/ B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) o* [" L! u$ y* j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 V2 D0 [/ `. x0 }: w& o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& j% Y0 O# {: }% q  B8 g& v. o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; Z5 \% D- r* b# p; C/ V$ |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ F/ [& u% m( h7 n6 T$ a我请你剖开它

- `, l6 B0 m! E1 J" L$ ^0 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" s0 D; a8 Z' W. K; W2 F1 h# I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>