【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) N! Y1 y, M6 e# ?( m3 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* f# j% D* P$ C, N- K9 g7 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% Q$ r3 n4 r# m4 P, F( ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* t, M- H/ v+ I( i/ Q" uYou needn’t fear anything
4 _6 }$ A" G" T7 h" DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) j+ M: p8 P) Y$ GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" }4 r+ M$ [6 i( i1 P" D! t  J1 l3 VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; e/ [) T3 A6 s  vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' y7 ]$ _8 J/ n) zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( ^4 k' }' W- b2 x, SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 I- {  E* B( [' @+ y9 c0 @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* j6 j# Z; }- c( N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. Y8 h' m5 l% g0 M5 q6 ?( s3 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* \% C' f- g9 _2 ]) f: c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  K; T+ \2 `% x* y# j" U" U0 ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 A8 {6 Z! c8 x% M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 b5 w, n+ A$ W, C! F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 _* q  D  X/ ^& G9 h9 G! l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* }3 X  W# q3 G4 D6 b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ e& @, [5 O$ t6 O. k) R  {& x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- ?, [! N' X3 A7 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  o' h+ R4 Y5 z  p& o+ F1 t! K0 i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, M8 r, l; ^; t1 A5 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) B% T6 }. `% r1 A5 |: u) _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 c, ]' }: i- k/ s& V4 A. l/ h2 ~9 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 S+ T2 o' g) C# U' a7 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. @+ m- m$ ]( M  u+ Z) {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 I0 _; X- U! Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% ^# i# D: e! ]* N- m. E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( o; i7 x9 A: y" x# f  t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* f7 u7 v0 {6 G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# b  i* B& \" p8 y# w1 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! j4 T% O) {6 X3 h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, e3 S: `- x0 j/ y6 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 O5 q- B6 R8 I  x5 K, ]0 ^8 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 r+ v  t$ E+ v6 e: y. u& z, R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. V& T2 c' u/ Q/ F8 G5 _+ s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& x& m; q* N% G. L* n" n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- m1 b/ k; d/ p2 g) e9 f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; z0 J2 [. W. W, U  i; I" e3 T, L3 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>