【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- V5 O6 c3 [) O) O3 L歌词我附在后面。
8 r8 s, ?+ k  Y, z5 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% \  _) a7 @* w; c1 M. T5 `Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ N% L/ ?% P2 i2 T% q  }& fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: X% H+ {% @1 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 ]) @! {% D6 H. t* @The sky is happy down to its soul
6 l0 Y$ T4 v% J% A7 T/ ^With the moon kissing it every night
6 ~8 d: E. g2 L: H: ]Seeing the sky content with its love
6 y, R/ w( Q+ H4 LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 l# q7 _" k# n1 z! X+ k& A5 TNothing can compare to my love
3 m$ B+ q9 Q# U) [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' ]& a) T! _* E5 ~- d/ e4 sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- _( J1 `' O; _8 w; hI want so much to see inside your heart
* J# `. D7 R6 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 j* [) r! [' j6 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 B% n9 I7 j7 }; H5 j! ~+ a' pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" m. o$ |* L4 F/ ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* d% _' h0 F6 W" t4 Y4 {4 i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 H5 c) ~8 k% t. k% }% F( G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& `6 @( ~( S, L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 N' T) \' Z$ J/ H7 z. e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ v; `& o5 Z$ H( d3 l1 W, K# e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 ]. A4 z5 N7 t' k; N6 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 \3 F9 T1 a+ S9 e7 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# D: N7 d' ]( b1 Y<P>你无需担心</P>
, y3 T0 s; |+ I* J5 M5 h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; B# p" t; a. x2 x$ p' T' p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 J) V, f' z. O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: y& T, _8 C% h$ r3 B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 T- Y+ s0 A9 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" K9 s; h7 M; G8 ?1 g: ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 K$ |' Q0 v, S, h8 p  |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 l( E7 t) k+ ]  X% ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( P! s, K8 }. h+ Q; e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 N1 R& `- [) {" @6 \! o8 M0 v9 ?# R<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 F4 u3 A6 t1 `: Q+ n+ R9 T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, K! N. \8 L; O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 s2 Q* V- x. J' H: P1 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) J! q! Z. c- w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- }% |% s* b8 j. E% o8 v3 l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) c; q# r4 J) T/ j/ a" A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% H8 l6 Q% M8 z& z% N/ e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>