【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' g$ ^9 u* m8 l! g5 d! p: v$ vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  k  r6 H0 _# i: |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& s5 T& B' E$ F8 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; t; l# j$ {5 J/ V4 H  pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- S8 k4 l+ w' k) xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  @( e4 M6 ?) vI want so much to see inside your heart
7 w" z9 x1 T- M8 _0 h- iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 q5 o& x6 n) P1 m! gI’m still filled with fear
* G; Y$ L6 k% w' A0 D' iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' ~  I3 ]  r, m* r+ S* \I regret not dying
# @- I, {1 T: g7 G+ C( LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* M6 l3 E5 a: s- Q0 m/ wWith such a tongue as yours,
0 |$ C# C  _0 H3 l: I' D0 zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( {; c0 m9 f$ I; i5 g4 O# ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 C% |+ _7 a) x6 ~) ]/ |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, {- }7 Z4 S5 r5 s( Q+ b8 X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" p6 R5 b4 i$ V1 E3 T" C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  c  [! o* ]2 @$ s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 M, u$ c) _* I3 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- F/ c  u7 I5 g4 j  D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& Y* J% @: A( y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, U$ X8 b. W+ `. Q: c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' [" X4 N) |2 f2 e6 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 \/ d  _3 r; a! G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 P8 e% V# k" j) c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* v; {4 J* U" g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, ~1 W+ |$ e3 j7 y- m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" U* D4 _1 h- K# R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  ]+ @3 X/ J0 r: Q# @7 j, W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 i. T) y+ Q7 P5 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* M9 r# ~; s) i" d: B" V9 z; r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; `) g( ]6 V2 d. H: k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: I9 D$ b* f% I- u) N3 C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- y9 @- C( T& c! G( y# z/ D% x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- k5 }5 F4 X) j7 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; Q% d2 ?' y8 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ \/ c! i# {# t: b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, `) O  W) s4 Z" n4 N6 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 ]  }' a1 D" b2 ~( J2 n; {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( c% P: O" H1 i) R! {5 J; {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>