【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' z/ Q' O! s1 _" R( P8 ?( [Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ t. Y( I/ Q* xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 q$ e2 L+ b2 d+ lThe sky is happy down to its soul
' x/ _' {+ D& k% E6 W( wWith the moon kissing it every night
9 [* `# S9 Q8 t2 qSeeing the sky content with its love
2 s* n  k8 e& V9 V/ N% uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ m+ u! O) p* jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! r' E6 y% I9 LI really want to know just how much you love me
' F3 P* h4 V5 gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- c& r! }  ?/ Q4 g; B/ UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  ]% |' y8 n+ B3 Y# \! zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 Z3 \/ I% P, _# WI want so much to see inside your heart
. W: p* W( i" `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 b- H' z. y3 v; ]3 uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' S, U& u# `+ B$ _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. m/ j! o& I3 X0 R: C5 g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) [% a2 _, d3 f2 C6 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) C" b  I5 }; Z# f1 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  u* Y' v9 y0 j. u% ?2 C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: P, @9 @; l+ o" a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. V& q7 {2 C9 u# e* Q$ j/ Y/ W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! b6 S* x+ i: ]2 i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 @) }" c, c5 |9 R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: W2 h% s0 N! G2 r' ~* O- h<P>你无需担心</P>
, {2 q3 C) q- F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& d1 D- u9 `% X6 {; A& V$ N! E5 L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! j2 S! }0 g- @$ Q, Z6 V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 l, Z" w$ J5 f- \6 `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ w$ `% K6 C, v# D& t9 G5 a- D; q: Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 F1 B) L6 ^: s8 C% F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ V! M% A$ z  m# S5 Q9 j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- D/ w$ U% M: ~  }! I  U, `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 e3 I0 a6 i! x% E" N: j# Z# @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 M( F: e5 q! _5 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* i! O$ i# `) b3 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! N: v5 |8 W- m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" F, [# c7 X3 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  u2 S# M. h4 i- \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 M. O+ {( j# h' N1 H9 U* y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 _3 W0 S1 F, i* U* L" E( N: D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 b) p6 Y& a- l, ]* U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% u6 E7 q, m) z* m/ v  k  b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% i  a5 i8 e# d9 s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 U3 I1 {& b/ B7 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: Q. ^% G/ _4 S  v/ T9 |( r1 m我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>