【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 U% Q: w9 ^5 y0 M! J* u3 H歌词我附在后面。
1 _2 U4 w  T- @6 K$ V. x! S/ MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 l: ~- m7 T  d( FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# a- w  ^+ ?9 Y$ O6 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 F& F$ R: ]9 T, D- v  V' }The sky is happy down to its soul
* X* C3 @) }2 S# U6 RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, \+ U# T8 @3 A2 t* N  H4 u- Y' VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  X' n  v* |9 rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ x: K% K! F% |* {! I9 y' O0 _/ h  \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 n) M' M6 ?- g. W: u( g4 TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ B& `$ K" p( cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! T% \: ]0 }5 Z- I3 }  VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- [0 I. ?2 z9 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 u0 g& g8 s& ^- `" ?2 _0 Y5 b' E2 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& ~+ U* [3 ^$ q- I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( W& n# R9 s5 _. X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 H! I- K0 k1 U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! E3 @) U; y6 g( i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ m7 h0 E) t  W0 o2 z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  }7 n6 q  i! f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 @7 d' J5 k8 u/ B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ P% }+ n6 V5 ~. P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  c9 X+ h" A6 P, B( x) x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# N2 N2 s! V6 a* @3 i  N) e. i4 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 L1 C9 O& j9 S' W- I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: n+ F; }; ~3 l; d& W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ q% x3 ]- k& Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' f* S5 ^: I& N2 O9 q, v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ n8 H- ]9 ~; \; H5 r7 l8 O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 p4 b5 c2 Z5 X- r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 @- e' z" I1 Y9 l9 u4 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( j* f" A  x3 a" ~7 P, I  A, S4 X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 i0 c+ W5 T/ s6 S2 a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. f7 P+ J  s' ]( e1 i. {2 T* p1 ]0 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- w% k# ?& f/ y) m& P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 c2 |& e2 T0 t# m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ ]% B- ]+ |5 |5 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ S) s$ Q: ^2 L' q" S9 M5 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' d& b7 ?5 q+ f# A* h( E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 q: r1 E- c' [! J6 u+ v  Z. P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* {/ r1 d6 h# E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 }, Q) l4 N$ x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 l3 W2 D$ ^& J+ z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>