【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ T. q6 i  w$ p( G5 ^8 G歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 G! y8 a. P! |$ I0 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ V  }" ?# g4 B5 @9 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' r- L; U; s* b9 |) R3 \With the moon kissing it every night
" ?/ d: i$ J+ CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* a# S  k. k0 t  I/ N: OEvery other word you utter is love
9 J7 s+ y7 c7 Q' tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 Y$ \. r! y9 y7 \0 T' z0 f5 LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ z% D7 \9 B0 {4 UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( p1 V' Y, n  G! e1 Q$ G  v* SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 y+ d' [% ?; I5 Y, II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) s8 _) R# N0 r" A; tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 q8 o; w; {/ W7 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% R4 m) ]( A# v# BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 ~# t8 P7 R) o( ]1 z$ t- j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ W- V' j. j8 ~) X7 M6 ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( Z; `$ _4 C+ a+ z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! o) E$ p$ t8 \& z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 M7 i" \* l: ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- a0 K; U: d9 |# k- G  ?8 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ M# Z! V+ W6 ^8 t) Q3 _& f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& p1 R) l6 t( G" V; A! j8 y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! ?7 S: Z( s( U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! A# F& F9 k& W# `( Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 ?: X5 \+ q/ ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# |4 t) `* }* d1 m  C* b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: S. U: J5 A$ X" n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 |2 r% I/ P3 [+ b: O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 s4 ~; M2 [8 u3 A9 O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& Y8 h+ S% I& H4 S1 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* B3 Z( r9 B' m( n& B7 r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( x( [- m# J1 }/ b" P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" e( A) G& a/ k& p" y# m4 k7 Z% ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- [0 N0 i: U: {  N/ X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 P' Z0 A+ r& h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ s4 I: b: L* q! s3 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>