【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 a. T: Y* I" c歌词我附在后面。
4 t- L( A# Y$ Z! ~$ a; C& [The moonlight is shining brightly,
. C; Y# ?; c; \" H0 ?/ m5 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: R* ~! E! W# V3 z' eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. L  b& n9 ?( cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" l# U* c8 Z8 Z- G% q. JSeeing the sky content with its love
$ K" J- b( y0 F+ q6 S8 m/ @' \! X& s# |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' [% d7 }3 Z( [# yYou needn’t fear anything
8 U. F' `2 p; f6 V. TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 ]% ?  I4 u' E1 L5 I( bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; G# S7 a7 d9 z% j5 O! H9 QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 J1 i. n- Q1 [  U, {2 \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# f3 D6 {" ?% x7 Q" U5 R$ @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 p/ N7 X- \9 z2 n. I! y- T# g/ HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# n- B6 F$ i% J0 T, m% M! lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' L! c8 g3 z3 V, v. E+ |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 i) A  s1 O- S7 M/ z+ V; f. w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( R" x* E6 F, Q3 Z7 Q3 K1 P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ l, W7 \( Q; I. U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 Z3 p* n( B' _5 o/ ]* d% |3 M. f7 k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) G, |6 L2 p# _6 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. t' J8 _4 A; \9 v2 h& p2 l2 E: ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) l8 Z9 _! f+ W* N; }8 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 I6 U$ u/ U+ j# C, S8 T2 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' T1 q; I& L6 d$ g7 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. g( k, t' [6 {- w6 ^1 c, g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& G# B% j- k& p$ k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* A7 K, Q# h* I: J) H: u, k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  U+ ~9 `5 V5 \+ ?: \, U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% Z" Z0 f/ E; z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" r5 q0 Q) ~4 |- N* m# @, o  ^7 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ s) \# b+ `. [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; H! C. \- h3 |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% P( k0 D% N' f! m: W* c2 z- O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 w9 Q) Z$ f# M. F9 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- b3 b4 |" _: B2 z4 _( k! b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 z+ p5 A4 ]9 m* u: G! T2 M+ T4 N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; g+ I, l/ X7 i4 K, V- e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# q7 s+ C- f  n2 J% d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 k/ ^( O1 R6 i$ l7 @; U- N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>