【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 t$ O, {) h* ?' S+ W) t( ^6 NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 d* u1 U) h1 }* \2 \4 Q/ XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 g. I" D! j: t1 LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 y  d2 J6 @# h0 H2 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# g* a- k( K0 N5 Y$ o  B! ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; k" u; C: H# gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# ^' n  _; s7 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ o- y$ ^. U8 S/ ^9 a0 ~( PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' ~9 e2 Y# C( d% u% `; ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ Z& K1 v0 N; w9 }6 G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! z% }( o$ y8 z! \/ G' X  e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 a1 x3 J2 E3 E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' n* a8 P; G* w8 U0 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! ~2 _% _- z0 `% t$ s, P$ l; P! R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" X# _& u! L0 b% _<P>你无需担心</P>
: a$ ^/ @9 N0 V% I" K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! [: O) B+ S) O& B* H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 |) A2 |7 a2 O! A( K' X$ g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) @8 `; O7 _9 {% y2 e2 c9 V) ]8 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" U( _, D( F; p0 y) n5 _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ U( C( u7 m% K! V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  ]9 @3 {/ ?$ @. U, b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ k# y+ E! |9 v" [6 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" j1 m. z+ |# ]% o* S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- H5 Q: A' j  ?0 T0 `2 a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* F4 R! ~- ^0 _  p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) G  O" ^9 c6 h2 y. G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 @7 V! j  ]# O) D3 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* o3 Y- U/ ^- S; u, ]& P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ ^4 O4 M0 ?; {% R: W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 F2 Y. c" K- K+ Z% k  f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' V$ U* p7 Q9 I& Q8 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 j  Y1 K; ]8 B3 U- q8 \- O5 u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 g6 C& o) M4 d. R- L/ ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ Q& g% C4 }4 x/ |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# r0 P3 Z: q8 H. n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ R  Z8 T. P3 h. e5 j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( ?$ D; n4 A, F- N我请你剖开它

, P9 r4 O# ~1 t5 ~- X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 ^: |4 Q$ ]  m; U. @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>