【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 b, ^2 G) y4 _& ^3 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  h9 f6 `7 F) n. e" YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, H: f. d& v2 p. TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 j/ u  c$ c" k/ R4 _7 [% BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- O* M# c. ]& p3 r$ {3 XYou needn’t fear anything
* B3 b1 v& T9 M6 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 u# G8 q* ^! X% e4 C' iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" }% t! Q" x8 \  |' t0 Z/ uNothing can compare to my love
# N) L$ c/ v8 ~9 {6 jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. Y# w% z" r- R' L6 |) QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ A! I" H$ r6 p+ CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 j; T- d4 v6 n, v0 s/ [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& C4 X) G) _- d2 U4 ?$ RWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" A" o# E3 D+ F* C( D  \, hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ q+ r7 X5 R9 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 G# G% d: g6 Z* `( p, h) r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ X6 c7 ^# L4 v6 {& k; r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* h7 w' K) g0 m2 M: G% L; P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* J; a. B% H+ N4 `/ P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 R6 w2 I4 B* U/ I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# J+ h9 }# K) l0 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* `" r- g- d( L: x* x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  v! \  ]7 s8 m! R, @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 I+ o, a+ L* k1 l( P% X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: z: G0 s+ r3 t! t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 y" p8 h: F2 S( j% T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 N' P$ W0 Y. n& f* _0 p4 C. C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* F1 J4 I/ N1 Z* R% f! x8 W# }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ w. u! c* h* ]( a' f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# i( ?) l! \) |2 m# `. g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% E* Y7 T2 N7 O, v9 g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; W8 h& [+ Q% u6 T0 I$ _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 h- d5 G9 W6 b  @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' U* m* I) [0 j4 C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 j/ v4 y( m1 r; G9 q( ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  F% `+ m9 @! W# S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; [3 p! W% a+ t<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 l. G3 G4 [! k$ v; i& ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' u" i9 q. R, D+ m7 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 {# o7 F9 A/ H- Y1 C, j0 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* S! X* r% v2 H% ]7 |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ ?' G4 l/ k' T" N9 c; M6 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 ~. `, z2 R6 a' k9 i) b* t3 g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- k- A. w+ _; j6 p& ~6 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* m/ }0 v1 z2 \( z& z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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" J9 t, @% C3 N4 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 @( X, ^& f) f' N2 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>