【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- l8 U* ?+ j' G9 ]( d& |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' s1 p( H! \# I. CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! z9 F4 c" u+ z. ~4 t7 m8 vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; r: W( p- x8 p2 x9 q5 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 g# c# \: x6 V! eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 [4 u0 X$ W6 Y0 j+ k7 x% R0 _: ASeeing the sky content with its love
( ]( {" Y) k' _+ w1 m5 kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 ?( \( n( g! NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 K; Q, t  `, P: L* D" cI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 G) u4 v# i1 r5 YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, m& B& \! A3 X# p% L! G& I: _I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ v7 P. j9 z! A1 `% fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, @  [" S" p4 X' m5 F5 j1 R) XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 _- s) H/ F, _1 }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; R3 Q' y2 \5 D2 Q* VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  ?+ Y: }) Y. X+ R1 F0 GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 o1 p. E* e7 J- m- j( W$ T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 T9 S) |: A! v/ J3 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 b$ I1 m$ r, Q! b  C! K* H+ x- |" x  X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. H. U( U' b  |+ T- b+ p# g" k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 E/ t; ^" j& N# s/ v+ `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) a$ ^! K& R- y' {$ G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% A1 f/ c3 k! ?0 K& i) b/ j- j+ I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  R4 F( Q* K7 w/ V' J; u' G4 }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 L& P% s( o% a( U6 K( k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( f# S8 I* W# u( ]% u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ ^6 F9 |" G6 m3 u3 k% g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) ^: n1 P0 L4 B( e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( r7 ]$ k. S% L3 q' X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 G- H+ e9 N- J3 B* T3 X% M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. _0 f" h: p( a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" e. M( u4 F4 l6 J! q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) X+ d# K7 C7 g5 w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- ]5 }  C0 M. |+ `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: z' H5 m9 F/ e* X& L$ z: c  E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( [% z8 w* l. }8 U  v" N; b% Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% q; h1 [5 T3 i6 I( D) G+ x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 O# r, h; K2 p7 T! p; N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( F- F. `8 D1 R* r# z+ q5 H, _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& l1 }, v( s- _" b3 z$ d/ ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" x* J' Y0 V# I; p% ?* G  ~8 y5 c. w' f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 P- n+ e' t. W1 y* j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 i0 L% j% y( D" ^/ f/ |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ ?  W' s9 F5 Q$ ~+ L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# U# i+ E6 y$ e& \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 g" H! L  l5 _4 `( h; c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ R0 R; C9 k9 U0 O: Q& g/ o  b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& W; B2 k& C) S: [% \# y3 I7 p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. p% |( K, H- N* P( u2 W- o! p我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>