【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. M, b3 N/ C7 WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 h9 C3 ~9 ~& IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# u/ @/ `5 m. |$ t! ]& uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: I; n; }/ t# q% y- UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# V8 K! x4 p5 p) h  fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, v, U% {+ n$ E2 |4 g3 kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 [' P3 B6 t" q- G$ jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 W' P9 v* M6 ^" I! BI want so much to see inside your heart
# Q2 F) ~8 |$ UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  R0 ?! p: |3 R, k8 ~0 |  LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% q- X2 B! {0 T- T2 B- s# |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, o& O' @- f( v5 \3 z# A' GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) e5 a1 A3 v- ^7 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% q5 h0 m; Z* A! [8 u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! e! T# p& k3 g: s) G! g8 d7 T2 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 k. |" [- @; o$ a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 `4 X5 I' J9 Z2 _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- x5 G  b4 z) {! b; v) o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 `) q  p% b- W! z: B: ?0 L<P>你无需担心</P>
, V6 h+ ^/ t8 L7 ^1 P  @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% d/ P9 D6 n8 ?0 t* H* ~0 k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) t+ e" V4 L; w2 ~, Q1 q1 p% {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. M1 i0 W# k3 r2 m7 H2 \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 k  r+ W3 {. c1 P8 |6 X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 y! n0 [2 v% }$ X1 U- g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: D4 \/ G. D0 N. }& y# L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' m) P4 b: }$ W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' s4 y- k2 s9 c7 C1 B/ J# D6 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' h  }3 }- z' @3 l1 b" P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, M; c: g) {, K' Q$ J& c6 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 B( c; g2 Y! i* \# W4 V+ @1 o; N3 D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& N9 g' T) V* i/ l& j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 ?' b) j; H" {7 e我请你剖开它
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$ o$ k' x: W; B' h/ a- q# v  h9 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>