【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ T$ s! J0 N* K) h3 E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& u+ U. z! @5 w# r7 H7 M$ n4 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; j! H& D+ o+ [0 kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( T# X: c# W' {; {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 ^1 _/ L$ J! `& ]# [: \# xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& h6 P' t. w" ~Every other word you utter is love
5 Z1 h! `# s5 RI really want to know just how much you love me
8 q2 m* q1 |" Q- T! oI love you I love you with all my heart
/ x8 P! q$ w5 i; _& p0 oNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, ?* b" E# H) L. ~' \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; B. S2 W& [; \/ RI’m still filled with fear
/ M& Z9 e! a# X8 |% {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' `# s4 R( a2 rI regret not dying
1 \* v" p; U7 y8 @3 @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; b0 V- O/ N$ k4 cWith such a tongue as yours,
8 P0 D% [" p# _' [- rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) _" n( l2 ~7 p7 F3 E, m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 C. S4 Z' p% P8 t( v( c6 r0 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 p! M1 v: E& |$ l) ?+ Y( T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 H% Y6 E& L; P. O8 W3 U9 @0 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# o) r1 T7 B- A# h9 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ q$ O2 _0 B" p; I3 }. y  y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- a* E" m- _9 e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! X" B( C6 W2 p1 d9 E3 Q2 K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  v/ M2 M+ r4 F9 ?4 R  t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( W) Z1 R+ S- W- H% ^7 C6 K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ R  |' P" C' x+ f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ b4 u7 H. [4 `1 Y( @/ o9 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 y* I8 R+ l% T9 F& o' k, x8 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# H( w8 P+ J" Y; g6 D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ M9 j, e* j/ b1 U( w! A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( a2 @' d% H1 N  B2 Y5 I: v: Q5 M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& |' y: r8 M/ x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; g0 S, G: {; o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 F* @1 w- ]' e+ g3 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; ?' G- p* H) W7 w6 r) ^5 @2 s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 g5 |1 N: r/ ?* n4 r( P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 @; n" Z6 }7 A7 Z$ N5 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 b9 u% P6 F& c. W4 K6 x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, {; s& k- s! O+ I  _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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  \" s% k: Q" Z" w6 ~6 ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>