【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 s% v- l8 ?8 XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 }0 h2 B0 y6 u; YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# y9 Q# E9 N$ p$ ]# OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) M1 t4 p4 j) T, z. eThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 \  R% {7 d/ m& i+ A9 TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: O' z2 Q3 c  C' l5 F  qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 B9 c& S( S! O! L9 F' nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ M0 h! `) I( Z  bI really want to know just how much you love me
3 g4 l7 M' }# i! ]% ~! bI love you I love you with all my heart
. E0 f. g( b4 R  Q$ b, TNothing can compare to my love
" [. G9 M/ w3 p  ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 B+ F; Z7 h- s8 wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 j6 y) L' J% e* T9 A2 iI want so much to see inside your heart
7 L; l- F  B0 L. Z* OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) L# O# x( @) FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: G, K8 ]" K2 Q& D. S2 sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  {3 U6 R9 b* U4 ~3 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# F6 r) g: G% L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) E) d* L$ C; P+ Y# N6 E2 A' |3 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 m: \  z* ?7 S% T: O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# g' z. M- J( T6 j! q& c" L$ @! x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ s- D7 e9 |/ Q0 m- U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 F9 \& z" q+ B6 Z3 s) }3 O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 ]4 N6 T, k7 l: }, s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ @& B- z* Q5 c# o. S/ B1 K, Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; i$ G* Y+ J" x6 _/ `. j! }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. \9 U- A- O9 v5 ?! @# M5 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ r9 b( {" S2 B9 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 N8 I4 U9 E! ^2 e! H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! l$ g* m2 C" \# Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) U6 {3 O. w0 E/ H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ V* \- s$ N0 A  Q) W  l6 p4 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( U3 g9 q8 Y, N+ U9 b( |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* C3 p( b2 w$ o) ^8 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ k. V- {' Q9 E" ]$ r: W) m9 E1 l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 k$ n5 m  c( }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) k1 u( M0 L* H1 v/ C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* v/ o1 n6 P, d7 S0 X0 l7 S7 I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 y( @0 a  q' b* x1 ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 R: f+ @. e2 ~+ v! b# X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 t4 u" `" w. q$ i6 B- g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 }/ \2 m4 o6 c+ i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  t$ _0 P  e- g1 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 S* z- S% r5 C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( {  N  i+ A6 X; F/ u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, u9 h$ z1 g: F  I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# X- l7 `$ r' s# B! X" Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* c6 U. ?9 |: N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

# J2 W( e1 ^* [$ o1 ?9 t  `  n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>