【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ B0 f8 |4 b1 d* V) yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ E% Y: k2 w8 x7 t( ^& g- b9 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ D5 s9 f5 F( L$ e( M5 M# DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 u" b* N; G7 ~/ R  F* x- VThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ X8 e) L4 N& r- RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 n2 A9 i+ p  O$ f# f" DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# x0 n0 [+ A( mI really want to know just how much you love me
# ]4 v8 T# x4 C4 H2 m/ S; a/ _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: F: x% a: z1 @3 N* _! ~5 bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: i  U; \9 i* MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. y% P8 p6 M6 L3 t9 D0 n% y0 f) b5 R' PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 L& X7 R- f& g. x# h: |- _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, m$ i9 a8 J2 J- C8 PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 O& O! N- B9 N  ^3 ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; s/ F- l# A5 D* ~/ `7 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; n2 g5 \8 p* H, S; _' m4 O5 q2 D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( m1 ^* {2 H; `5 {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( @8 I; i9 t6 h$ O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 C2 x. C: N5 ~+ b* o, ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 v; u" v$ @2 |. s% U8 t3 ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. \9 r2 J$ T  F- y3 v7 o5 @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ S  q4 A6 p% f, j" r/ [3 `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 _# u* r! L& w) L, D9 l4 z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) ^$ C( B( P# X% [* B0 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  Y% W- z6 e. L& f6 `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ e. E7 K6 L1 A6 P9 c3 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 S& A8 ~( @, [1 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) i) G  a8 D5 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 ~; e, s0 f. U3 h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 a& |, Y2 j/ T. V* o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 Z7 Z: t6 y4 e7 H% b+ b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 G+ L( s7 `4 z6 _) A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" i6 R- J# m7 t# j6 d/ l; O2 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; h5 J0 O' W. {7 C9 W! P9 v/ J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ R, Y: j; [$ E: ^+ u我请你剖开它
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% J' ]3 R0 O: i0 V& i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: K5 q, j! G  b, H: S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>