【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 v4 t9 W" Y, h* K' ~5 v2 T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' O( X4 a6 A; aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- s' B/ v0 [* UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ T2 e  V* p+ R/ u6 C' \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 b9 R/ p; x! D2 r& J- f* Q3 P6 B  HSeeing the sky content with its love
5 _( Z+ m  U. b$ jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ @; `5 \( m) I4 v7 w$ Z# Q" tYou needn’t fear anything
5 b8 x) Q7 f* P9 ^' n; SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* z  Z, p: L- ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 ~4 c- H/ j! v  P8 SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; [1 ?/ F# s3 }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 M+ ]0 u1 {! D8 r7 _3 g9 kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ _8 K% g$ }) J% oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ [6 f6 r' u) B  D+ sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. w9 Q- X( T! Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 r. _% T% Y6 V4 _0 k; d9 K/ @: J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 |  [. v& C; r+ S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 l. ]% Q) N4 c/ c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: y4 I0 X& `: B0 z+ z) o3 N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ K8 M/ ]$ i7 i- M2 H. G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ Y1 ]- r& [' M  v! E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) P8 K$ ]+ C2 u% c' i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 P& l5 L- s8 y  E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ z, i) d1 _; ]5 z3 z5 q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- e! ?7 V4 `# w7 e0 [' |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, ^9 g8 e/ c( R: j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 m' ?' w/ X/ E8 @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# }4 O& \+ d. Y8 P$ V6 b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 p) Y6 R% E% c  L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 p7 i4 F! V, ?. x6 N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* \7 b7 Q2 [- ^) F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( r2 Z7 K7 q% a% ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 q+ T7 Z) I) }4 k- f9 \" c# M) ?& V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ a+ N1 V" l# Z2 A3 T1 z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% c+ J# l( v3 @4 o& t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) m; N" r& r7 l<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ c( h( B" ^8 Q& F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 {* I5 w$ R! s; n: t) l4 Q0 y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, S3 G( E6 m& r% q- _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 n; R; c3 k+ q6 s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: y$ l  B( B* i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( S- ~5 d- l! [7 W6 j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ [8 |: `+ e: K/ |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

7 ]9 U4 n4 C' N8 E. Y& R+ t- F& o  F% _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>