【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  E. M- d8 y! m: S5 X$ O! ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) Z" t6 }3 o& ^2 @8 f9 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& [9 b4 k( N: K8 RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* c# U* @" ^2 i" q4 w- T5 e0 U, G$ ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 I8 H" s+ u& z0 jEvery other word you utter is love
' s4 M9 ^4 ~. Q$ S5 y+ LI really want to know just how much you love me
( _- c; D' ~8 v! P4 c9 I, T- p, D' OI love you I love you with all my heart
& z, c  Z8 o+ cNothing can compare to my love
3 w+ b/ N/ l+ v" l2 |/ }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: O) w9 c" T) {9 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 g3 u% ]2 x) d0 {+ lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 s+ ?2 C) c0 {% t. MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 _$ g( `/ [7 f. R0 F( x6 CI regret not dying
3 Y3 ~# t# {7 l6 A' S$ jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" A$ r: |0 k5 V1 T( |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; L( T. H  E$ p% r. C- T* MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! L) U' I( }( z3 L' k. {' K: aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 D) m; i# V  f5 d- G. U3 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 R) c! r1 o% n& I7 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ n4 G: X% n, C7 f' ^7 k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: m& ]1 p* z: k& M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" T) O2 P# [3 B4 G5 _% v9 v6 M1 f4 U9 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ k$ {  f7 @5 S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  ?. N1 A, j7 s1 Q. E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; D: a: I% v3 ^. T+ k* C* f! m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ _0 i; m' H+ j& t" J+ R  j: \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( d! J- c& [  y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: E+ ~. u4 _1 i5 R! v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& d/ ]3 \9 x7 x  ?( y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 Z' I( E4 U0 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* y% B# e! }, p9 D* i) b# n% c7 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% [- D" I7 k) B$ H5 G: o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 X0 P* u% _0 J. L$ a' T4 w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 f. ^. S$ l! \' g2 V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% f: n7 `4 w7 b) S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# S" _* B3 R& h- ^" J, G) a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 |/ c% q% ]( _' c# P  `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" ]; A5 q3 u8 `7 W# e  l" ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 {, R  |" ]9 A" }5 ^. M& {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( B/ D/ p& y. o5 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 @9 h" U$ q$ l4 S# {3 a# d1 ?; M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# ]- V+ @( K- a5 r5 K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# D" ?' N. T0 X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 v0 @4 {4 G0 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% g' L+ B( b, @/ e8 ~! ?* ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 V6 m$ F+ J3 N+ ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; P( g6 j0 N# U3 m' s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! B' H4 B) x1 i# Y8 u' J2 V( W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( {2 V) x: ]% `; a- U* | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 c* |3 U% e' h/ s& ]1 d' j. F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>