【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# q8 L3 E* H" w0 _$ ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 x) x. a! S6 y+ HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) l! [% Q" U' z: TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 U9 D8 j: R4 V6 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" [% z6 `% s$ u" ~! O1 f4 i7 x9 nWith the moon kissing it every night
6 a& A# o& m- g4 a* s1 n1 D+ p2 eSeeing the sky content with its love
8 G* T6 ~9 e8 |# N, ?5 L' ]: TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: x$ k) a+ q$ o* E1 e# f5 eYou needn’t fear anything
. N, E8 z* u1 O7 i% r. }' ], \3 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 Q1 u: W3 w0 O0 cI really want to know just how much you love me
6 W9 w2 J6 W1 zI love you I love you with all my heart
: |$ s: N! u# x/ ?Nothing can compare to my love
& h6 }0 |) T) W. ^" f! b# z9 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. m+ Z. F! ^/ `$ ]  t& uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: c; Z4 ^" w' F" X# r) b% `3 q' KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' q! b; P  s! t' y/ ?4 t: J: r" [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 V, H# }& _! B" sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- A0 E- O4 ?6 X6 ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 E  I$ f7 C7 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" j! I3 A! L& c0 |& V) q# D+ b! x. [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 \2 G- O, Z# {' c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# A( q4 P* N) S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ I5 @* _4 Q4 S) [% h2 e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: `+ k; W8 X7 S2 W4 S2 c& o6 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  Y: F# G0 Z0 ]% p4 c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 r6 Y+ t% ?# b, ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 v! v& H# |" ^$ c/ q1 O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  Z$ z4 t% Y. T! T3 n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 \( @; J/ Z# o7 O( p5 w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# I& X( u/ C. x  [% O. B) L  z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. Z$ P( b* G$ W3 X9 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" L# p5 ~; C/ \( M3 z6 r+ B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ h/ q7 n2 J! q, x3 \0 o7 q) t0 q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  N4 m% `  H- f+ \" ~2 W4 V1 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* C- t" b  F7 m. [4 [; Y* U% G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ d$ u) C; s5 W! q  N# k9 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) J0 {3 t$ P/ m4 ?3 j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 ]- Z/ }( G% e- \4 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, i. Y. H6 _2 N; k, W' U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 r" Y3 |0 t7 c: _( A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# S; l* @+ M( R7 I; _7 z( w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 [0 B. e5 |1 P! m) c2 }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ `" }9 Z( z9 y0 }& m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ t4 }* {# O* o$ C/ L$ ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( p$ B6 d; F- `4 }4 i  @. @, v* Y: N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 }# `  s6 F2 p9 y7 d# j9 v. A; T. j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' N: m6 K2 u5 Y, ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 m2 d0 f' ?/ f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 j8 }  x( [. q( Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 [( u/ E$ H  o; l我请你剖开它

3 F, y2 j) D7 }4 Z+ E% ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 k0 k" j8 F) R! ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>