【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ a0 S, L% G8 F3 c7 u8 L歌词我附在后面。
2 r' K( d$ E% v) u3 p. \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( |) \/ u, ~+ a) F! bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 O( Y5 Y/ K6 W7 l4 k% ]" y4 OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 j  o' Y* n7 ?2 P( {% u' V& @' WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& L2 S. N8 Z  ]: [5 |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* `) i6 ?/ F5 U/ UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 U0 J" T# u" I* ]  s7 EI’m still filled with fear
. K5 S- F1 q# K7 s& E% GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! ^- D( ?, t7 k- N) E( r: `! kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ ~$ K  I0 h1 n5 bWith such a tongue as yours,
! ^- G% i9 j$ X2 [8 T% hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% A* c( ]/ n  }" A8 Z2 `) mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 f$ K5 V; g( V* X' B: @8 \3 o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& p8 s9 a1 o& b* X8 O9 m! x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ V1 ^" B3 E. V0 X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 }4 s( I: o& F' m7 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: |# {' v, I. g! f; W! U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 ^) J: e' k+ H! D, P" {  ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. V) n9 B& ^! `<P>你无需担心</P>
9 g& D3 N1 k0 a5 D- ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 C/ g' t2 o1 h4 ]+ a$ y8 \4 l% W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' W( D7 i1 g  X/ S4 {' `) K( x; L$ ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 A6 v3 i4 S# u2 P/ _  C9 w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* D- y" b7 `3 i$ J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; M1 G: Y; y; c7 W0 x8 ]* N, q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' }. a6 T) Y# H1 d4 u9 ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: P/ h* M0 R/ }4 i8 M0 K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 O. i  j! Y1 ~0 J6 i) a& ]% L" e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' {+ C( j: I: \' }, j- o: d/ Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; R6 Y5 @6 k0 W1 \! a6 v* A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ D" e. h; T- }2 j0 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 \9 s/ Z8 s5 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 Z, `! J1 o/ s# g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 g/ m0 @8 @9 p  V, h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( [( [" `( @: }5 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; V9 n6 \7 g7 D! B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 U& L. M) D- B# n" J8 r. O. q我请你剖开它

* ~; n# x6 I" z5 h( _0 V7 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* O; M$ |9 U$ W+ A# B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>