【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ H. h$ F$ @4 W( f, EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# c: Z  N% f2 N/ IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' j3 j* r% R6 ^; A4 l* p  FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 j* X2 }5 i& o5 o" `; `: P6 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 A5 D6 f* A. ~# K8 ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. t+ Q* y3 T& G8 F* i" zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( |+ ?4 ]8 b) K( M8 ~/ _4 e7 \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ v7 c8 i5 `: y" QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" ^! J. P* r" N5 ^) V, ?I regret not dying
- \! t% S& G; |8 A1 F+ j8 ^( h2 BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ k5 ?2 A, c+ y! LWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 E4 ~; K1 ?! \: \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 @' O5 f3 B  x& I' @4 U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 O- U0 Y+ W5 G- N. G; M( N. l9 d+ A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& a3 n& ~- C( E8 j- G$ ?) k& P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 U; D, L8 }4 z3 Q1 _" \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% P) ~1 Z+ I! O. @6 S1 x5 |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; T3 X4 r/ C0 y3 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( ^4 m0 M" |2 X& |) L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ a# e, Q: M) y; C1 k- S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; c$ h+ a& y  y& h: M) r; q9 j  c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ j1 l3 |) \: C! g* v  x7 J' E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& l' A/ v  [8 Y  Q9 T( n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* q% M8 ^6 o0 U# q% l. r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 \$ s9 _/ L  M5 r4 @3 s* d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- d- N- [0 @8 b7 r! m6 w" n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 Z0 |+ U& _# B& B& P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 s5 T+ w& k5 J6 u3 B' |3 n1 ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( e5 T; {( Y! ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, j$ Q0 D! V$ S  c/ l( e! `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' R" K9 ^' M% _2 S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- N& _2 [) }: T+ _  E9 k( `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" k/ Z) @5 X3 r' j! Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# T' }- q' r8 h3 @% I  s/ z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 X8 d) l5 W' F& Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' h. N5 U, z% i! M$ B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ |: f9 ^: E/ j! f+ f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% V0 B: H, K: V' Y- X5 w, l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- F; g9 Q" I; Q& V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ M. e1 F3 C) n! l: t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ l. J, B% p: G5 G' p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 S( f3 Z# r6 E+ r' s+ W( N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 A0 e$ T0 f+ x) f我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ U7 _- V5 C8 Y9 ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>