【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, W9 V( X! f- t! r歌词我附在后面。
3 B) u: W) D) g7 P1 J5 @& Q8 yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 T; g1 y* `" P: dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. ]/ H, z4 P; o' q0 b2 cWith the moon kissing it every night
% W) @0 C9 x/ h+ }$ SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* j# n! M/ r# p/ {& g" X2 P, i1 fYou needn’t fear anything
9 P7 _' N! U8 i$ BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 n9 L$ R- B! t! i& F0 ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; x  g& j- `2 \) ^$ p) pI love you I love you with all my heart
5 p" t5 J+ `8 J- p) S7 eNothing can compare to my love
% D/ B) P+ J3 P1 B' e- fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( d) I8 z; ~7 ^' Z5 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* d* s4 y3 n! e6 k; @) eI’m still filled with fear
, z" k2 Y) m9 Q6 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ Y: h3 i4 m! p  J4 m4 ^I regret not dying
6 P% ]1 @8 s  j1 y' ~7 vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# w& E2 y0 J6 ?: s8 u3 h) oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* Y: [, g1 Y* ~7 T/ a8 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  q* ~$ R9 P: y0 @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' T: R1 i: y; m( d! r5 w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) ?5 _3 A% P, z3 d& q) ?4 m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" S# C+ d6 U& T, Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- O* {  T4 p' `4 B3 s) x; K+ P) l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 o( p$ p9 p+ w3 S7 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 [8 Z5 T2 [3 F$ {! Q; r) G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- `$ H8 F' Q" Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 x) i, v' S3 @  _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- @" v' _8 n, \% _  ~4 l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! y& e" S8 _; ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- }1 B' i1 D: N; k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, R* L2 m1 t. P+ R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! G- T+ t+ z0 J% J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& P4 n) \, O% I/ ^6 z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: S; @# x2 ^: F; c. h+ \9 u0 j4 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" q6 T) c7 o- b9 G  I) {2 g% i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% m! Q# e; W/ a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  J- X6 Z9 f& E8 @: G4 D8 h7 Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# {! ^; f1 P, S* L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 o4 W; `2 s$ N- U$ i$ @( E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( a+ m  H1 D% h( L0 ?  _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" L6 G/ u) |) W- B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 s) U, B/ u! V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% C2 k9 O) h4 _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" q/ y. g% B  ?# t* l' |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! J! y) c' }% D$ Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& e5 m" I3 b) G6 A9 z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( ]# i: ~; d3 Y9 z9 ]: K8 z+ w' P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: T# h6 I( e% ^! |' p+ w& x: |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& o8 d. f6 ?7 x  h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>