【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 z& c& S6 }: m" i' {: k1 z: ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, w! r; D% O$ g- e6 _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' m8 Z" a5 z% ?- v& z0 e; v" FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 ?* C1 I: @" }( R) Y( E- q. N" rSeeing the sky content with its love
0 r9 W  f* ?( S* n4 LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 [' w1 \; z$ K; i2 u; s) QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 l* \+ H1 m* a4 E9 j7 y1 G! h7 HEvery other word you utter is love
7 X0 v* D( u7 k+ hI really want to know just how much you love me
3 C( E9 g/ P: [, r7 s0 FI love you I love you with all my heart
9 y1 D' v" N3 K! I9 p- mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& {* h- `# f$ e3 \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# {- K5 `0 R3 Q* a3 [0 V9 c. |5 cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& Y% R% i6 V6 g, _7 jI’m still filled with fear
1 {: T/ P  W- d$ W% o; v3 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 ^; K  t3 m! O4 W1 D" S1 MI regret not dying
3 k6 w+ y  B& b* Q% GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( h' S/ z5 A6 v, q" B, k" eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* R0 _9 U, Y& z5 ?# d7 b: XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- ^, r. s  Z& y' n( T( ?  h! \$ l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 `, ?& O7 Z3 W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; D5 R% Y  D0 x2 }- C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ [- h6 @/ r% ?/ Z* W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  q3 E8 P1 {/ Y, I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& A1 x3 l  D6 W, z" `1 O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- [" F4 l8 T( k7 d  J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 Y0 I4 g2 }; d+ J* K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) I5 Z. G) J% p( D; S  s" z6 x+ b5 W<P>你无需担心</P>
5 ^1 T8 }( G. F1 m! S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% h! ?  m) }: R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ L4 l2 P" G" C$ }; E8 G; m1 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 d/ B, f3 y7 ^- Q5 o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 `; A! l: i. t  H- A: ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: x& _4 x7 S! [( o6 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 ]# u& J$ h2 t, X1 W9 k! i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 {1 n0 W$ D4 o( V. O& q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 x6 x! R) p% B, g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ k( @1 H  y0 T, N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% ^% J( K- X. D* P+ k) r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- _% R$ ?& X1 `* A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, s" m$ m+ G/ U, N" `4 T) U- [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 I3 v4 b( z0 G, M7 [3 l# y. R' b: V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" e3 O3 T3 B; [1 }/ e- X( k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 m( N8 @2 Y) ]# X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& }+ i1 c3 r' m- J6 m0 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 \* e$ ?( z$ h6 X6 ]6 H; ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) N9 v* r* A6 t0 ?! t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 d% @. v: u# O- r+ @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ v& G) L5 o. \3 [- {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 A; s  e9 ^8 U# g( B" }% J5 K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 N. B  N8 ?8 E6 A/ K: \; [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 \8 r4 v8 w( f- z2 f3 Y8 c4 s我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' h& F" ~' n+ O- K( I2 {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>