【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) o$ a8 _& a0 M2 V9 }: O. {8 ^+ W5 J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& |8 {8 k- d4 ^# ~7 S: ]. v, bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 j7 X/ `6 y; }8 H0 H  S) OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# f% P. U. C0 H) oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. U" |" n( a& A: ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, s3 @2 Q* L2 R& }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) C5 C0 T2 \) U9 N" Y1 P; UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. g( I/ _, g" T3 jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* u9 f. ^  T6 T* E- ]# }( dI want so much to see inside your heart
7 Z1 H' E: ~. t( o! f/ a4 Y$ F* X; LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% G. g. l! i4 W/ t' e$ E0 m% lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ K2 w: f1 D% o( ~* hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; n/ H$ y! a$ d: ~. }! }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 S8 n. A& y0 }! A2 G- u* [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ N# v5 v0 q. u! G- R/ K+ C0 n; V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. H( @5 J# t# T* v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- |9 C6 V6 o  }  y  }3 [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) l8 k: y) T( [( M1 z* I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 Y5 `7 x- C7 ~% P/ A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ U4 N  l& y% U1 K/ f8 k: M, B' u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, m+ \& A- X$ c5 H3 v' P7 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) s9 a/ q3 ]! ~0 p; k2 Y3 D' O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 F/ G# P5 X  H: f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 a7 N) t# o4 l" [5 h% {$ o, U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 j7 e# {, [6 Y2 k& N; x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 P4 U+ n3 t- ?& m" X. F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( o0 n- c+ L( F$ Y+ Y. [  u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ h6 X0 H0 t: x) f8 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 t/ V( K( Y- {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ o$ i7 Y7 b1 ^& c* V9 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; t6 x7 Q0 w% W0 H) i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ G+ Y; e& K5 Z5 J& P) x<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 R0 `  x* J  b; `( }( G5 Y4 [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! q. T0 v! \* i# ^/ ~, j- L: }% S! l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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# a7 G  y9 m+ b5 V8 }6 L: a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& u+ Z+ W+ o1 ?2 v8 L( W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 @  I( @( k4 `5 k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* n1 c. j! u3 ?/ Q/ V" q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. B& L# s3 P4 {/ m5 H5 ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>