【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 K4 d8 D. H7 z* JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- X" M- c" }/ bSeeing the sky content with its love
5 [: q+ ]6 J" h- M) g' ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& p4 n1 g; Q$ mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ {% G3 ^) H. l+ e: {: cI love you I love you with all my heart
" Z5 M* `) V9 e. gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ p4 E5 ~4 {5 z' \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  ~1 P  }/ t8 {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ |  @+ d% p  Z% [; j9 MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 U5 R2 m! L/ @1 H+ H" x, sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" _( v' M0 o/ {) {- }( TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, R8 C0 c, Y3 y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 Y  ]6 ~) D- ]$ ^: n" o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 u8 `# j$ p. a+ Y* a, F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ V; T, H6 n: Q6 }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, e7 Z; e+ m4 I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' X3 J; p$ G2 q- L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 S2 ]  X1 p, c& [$ x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ I; _* g1 Y2 g; Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' v, [9 g1 c- t, Q" I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. r$ D7 i/ m  g( d5 Y' u7 ~/ i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  {7 L' ]( n. _* U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 b- v6 P( @3 o$ p' x) \. T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: P5 Y0 p- A" S5 e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# T! |9 \6 Z3 w" T  L! G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. z9 d  W) J. c( ^: U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 p  ~/ M3 m6 O4 t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* G9 e  x1 H1 U( N5 C/ t4 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ _9 P  _7 {" g9 K/ m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 o4 t5 @  V; b2 t- _<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 V7 Y9 l( s* ^& M1 F. f' Z0 i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ h5 \9 A  ~- t3 H' t' \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 K& t" I) q# ^. Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 @& C  e8 f/ L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ J/ l2 w$ e0 w( H0 p. k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 z7 b; H. B4 L4 ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 C' ^; A3 o8 ?$ i% I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ C. Q! I$ P2 Y2 r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& n6 ^; B! P0 e; a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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% v# `; Q4 y! c/ y3 g1 y% f6 k* Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 G. x9 b5 s# m3 q* p7 M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>