【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
( ~+ i9 O' N' z, c9 ~( NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 O) N9 f8 M9 U% M5 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" ?7 C; m8 p2 x( cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" z6 p0 D. u+ f3 ]% v+ ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& B  y" X, D" Q. }0 t9 ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( f8 j8 a" o6 H! F# a( |* p9 K8 xI love you I love you with all my heart
& ^) \! m! R+ u  X8 Q  o: YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 h1 C  T8 s6 l) D! m( ]* JI want so much to see inside your heart
8 N: \+ M$ _# Z& hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 K& Q4 f) A7 T( U) ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 d& O( k3 m! _8 F, wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; J+ A; J; R% W1 L7 E3 BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, j1 l1 d0 M/ Y; W1 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 h; G6 e# Y7 L6 u" V% L1 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% u1 [0 Y. V3 x  U  a) U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' w0 z9 N9 d1 {: `8 M; `: o7 i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 b9 H7 C/ \( I+ a& R% C5 K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 n. z1 i: L' q) e# D$ g+ H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 M, f/ M' h2 S, l8 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 t9 V+ f8 s+ C( r3 d1 @0 b7 i& a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! n1 a  N  b  u0 c7 j( G) y8 T  m' J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# U4 A! c6 S" x4 N& Y* t: O) h& S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 G% Y; d6 `3 b' J, i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 h* b! M0 C8 o2 |0 c/ Z2 U$ _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* |! K* L/ L: E6 Z( g, R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 n6 L2 K/ J; r0 `5 d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ I6 R' p8 F. h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" q& S  y4 A, s- E5 e  _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- [& g4 Q: a% T2 P. z* q# m- |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 A: W* O7 a7 R/ m3 f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 u. Q! Y' N+ L. u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% d9 E: j3 ]& ^+ {5 ^. I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. u6 f5 b1 D& q8 q6 \; q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& r# V# T/ F! I- U9 N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) h6 [. z( j4 V0 A' E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 C# E4 n( g  m6 {1 T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" U1 X0 z, r4 F5 z! Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- [+ r6 ^+ ?% F1 \( @, o+ `% u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' X) v$ N: _* S+ l* C; h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& M) J  s  A6 g1 r5 C  z7 M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 f- ~9 ]8 H' K4 D! m3 d& m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. O* s! I# K7 P; E8 n1 }" X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. G1 {4 n7 X( e6 p1 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>