【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 ]! @0 I. N+ T- p; fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' I$ o+ _+ }4 U* L  \4 r" W8 l6 OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. q' \# ~$ S. l" kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 J/ @4 v8 A8 ~& x( n; BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# m  {6 E1 |! H+ b: [, uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- e+ u$ S4 y" O9 D; Z- R% jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' y0 k1 ]% U, Y# O2 C+ dNothing can compare to my love
2 O4 y( ]6 f) x1 ?7 a6 m3 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 `% R' C: y7 g4 Z1 L# _: _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& a: o3 U0 ^- a/ |" w: t; @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 z$ s2 P" |; f7 G) ?( lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 J: o: c# c9 D" [3 t8 SI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( y( }  ?# A: P. b$ }+ ?With such a tongue as yours,
0 r0 F& Y9 r- ]" A0 f& b% xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& R0 q/ L, a1 QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% B0 ?7 q6 P2 W( ?0 `/ O7 }  P. z2 X: Q! VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 z+ F5 D3 E6 a; R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& B+ t$ H+ d+ ^; N3 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( \# M2 M, a- N6 A8 u6 Q; h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 X" w" u0 \0 O; x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* A3 `5 j% n4 c5 a0 A- P0 Y4 P/ G. d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 u, N$ k/ Q, ?  n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) N5 v: L; V$ Q; u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) A# ]4 V3 b  N1 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- d/ \! n2 B( {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) c, C1 G0 x5 g+ j, u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  g5 t, G2 N$ Q0 H+ q$ B/ b. R$ D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. M1 m  z# L: o( V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 k# i" ~5 B( _" d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ \9 b0 ~' {: @9 Q; ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 J+ o/ j- V# W- d: N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, n6 j- @" b* h9 g9 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 s% l, Y/ y: q8 s* d3 ]5 j' ~; q; ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 {$ b; g9 t; J: f/ r2 T) ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 b' L3 E9 \# o3 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% }  Z# A0 f) U7 c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ m4 v; c" p# d5 t6 v8 ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  |4 ~7 ?- I5 l) A& M1 [  ]# @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. n1 D. D) `' E0 s7 a- J! w/ Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: G0 z; i3 L8 T$ |( K# s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% f! w" O$ t* S. u' ^8 O1 ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 I) V0 O; I/ d5 n+ r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. q: E  ]6 S, U7 [% s% t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: [) |; W4 R; Z) q3 k% y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# w$ C+ _8 D$ {6 [# ?" Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 c0 h& T( x# q) Q9 R我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ G+ ~) u- h6 P% h- d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>