【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" n, N9 m# b% `! H1 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! J% t, J- ~' U% PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. A' V3 g& N9 e2 s: m- f. [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; C" L0 A: E/ c- z6 v1 J# E; N& TYou needn’t fear anything
+ k2 B2 U4 W1 L- m' V0 j* D0 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 a1 o6 J0 y9 U7 v' w5 o, mEvery other word you utter is love
4 w9 U( c% S/ |7 }: `, aI really want to know just how much you love me
# g' Z9 p% `2 BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 F$ x, t$ R- r2 Z# h0 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, n% \. f4 D" x$ y$ V4 q9 fI want so much to see inside your heart
1 `- \1 X3 |4 G; ?9 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& S- x# _2 s5 b; E+ |$ dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' k4 K5 @$ q6 C2 d5 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ }7 f' f: B# e! b& M. n7 iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) E2 Q, N+ X# c" Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. w4 k. E3 h% R6 B) @' l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 @) }5 v  u! w* G' N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ E6 p) A* k0 _4 M1 v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 h5 F$ Z$ q  {: ]" X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ x0 a, i. M  G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* ~( A& C/ W/ J2 j' G9 `9 b9 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; s" [$ I$ y' M$ e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: o7 }$ L) w; r0 k  E( J4 E: f! f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; e7 @7 c' f  r. k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* [- P2 D; R0 K2 B: N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. P: A! t, V4 i2 S6 |6 y9 h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% F& n8 q  ?+ B+ _3 g6 c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ `4 `. p: m' c: ?8 H4 p4 \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 r: v' |1 I) f8 q; N- G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 D- }# E" F& ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 M1 S! [4 v+ |3 Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 l% B' o+ R- Z5 ?0 v5 W3 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ S& }  d+ N  F; G$ c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" v' E$ I6 _# l5 G& ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ i5 b8 b1 y9 b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, m, V( g, u# Z$ _2 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& Y. w" W+ {7 e: w; O) a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 d% M: P; [$ @8 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% m6 _4 |0 J8 m  j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. N8 L) v# d( q0 h" M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& W0 d% G3 x" I* D1 C2 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ U$ e5 G) A3 t+ a; U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' w, J9 Z  a# _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: a2 ^6 t7 a7 T# k  l: w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. L: a$ z+ ?+ Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% e3 q' n" U" x( T2 P$ n4 h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ `/ R1 r- V' `3 G$ L9 g/ p我请你剖开它

' k% K, b* j  Y- X: W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>