【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. {, V' F) ]1 d$ N- O; b2 Z- {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* i( {/ g& J' a% e6 H: wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! e$ L* n2 S5 k- X* y$ bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; `  T- C0 j/ k# Z0 W3 PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, I( c, L4 S' yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. o- X0 a( K% S+ n( T: tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) B4 V6 A5 @( G0 [8 AI love you I love you with all my heart
% S9 P4 H' k# ?; Z2 ~/ \Nothing can compare to my love
# Y' K( o0 M# d% ]; K, A$ p9 p& Q. @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& h3 i' e0 X: e: w( C1 AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. `4 L- O+ F$ GI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 e5 r8 t* z/ V9 p9 |( q7 @) fWith such a tongue as yours,
/ P" B* W( C. J8 [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  c+ W: ]" x$ B& M) {1 [9 tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 L% k) t: ]% x/ U1 e- ^9 X+ x( o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' p9 q) H7 m5 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! E, c" V! k7 e7 P/ s! _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) Z, x0 \6 f- X5 n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 K4 S% M# [  u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 h; S& A' B3 |3 d$ a8 a1 O& V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ d( H3 Q+ N' Y/ f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; C. ~8 r1 z/ y  f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* V" X* O* ~% e$ l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) W( i, [8 k4 r6 S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% F6 u  t/ A+ \, j3 R4 {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) M$ v1 c; {2 ]- h/ s; D$ c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! l5 h2 H9 [1 d. ]. A' p$ ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 n2 A) k7 B! o0 s1 b9 l% ^& m5 l1 a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ F& D0 K( D$ C% d9 U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& r, t" k6 B- j3 f, s5 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  U& ?) n7 ^( b5 g5 Z& b! |" u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 ~; u7 a5 T8 k# }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 @8 K* Q# H- M0 t' J* x9 P8 s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. t( U9 K4 f8 z6 l, ~# O" v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" k, W+ M7 v' w! _! c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 h) J7 `$ o# F$ i! f: C3 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 X, s1 C9 K: H! L1 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 _2 ^4 R9 _) j9 ~4 Z3 F+ w% ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) p  G; X$ u8 _% C- T) H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% K5 }, m8 |/ l/ A* G  T) R) ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! I5 I- ~0 m. N/ n$ w4 K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. a3 y% q$ ]& e% S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- q5 O& U8 B! k& ]% d- m/ D; _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 {' S( P1 C; t- }2 I3 U; r$ I  _3 M6 I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 @" f7 `" v0 H" I# ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

7 K5 O6 V. A3 E9 r! g4 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& i) v9 Q  S1 `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>