【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( J* k' P$ B* c9 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! N  U- p: V' N- f3 T9 ?' tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& w  i1 N; P. \, V, }3 H6 Z8 PYou needn’t fear anything
' y" ]3 P* d5 ]9 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 b4 ~( V  P9 K2 a% a2 u$ ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ ~& a! {  `0 w  K7 R' [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: I: p: K4 l% }4 b$ QI want so much to see inside your heart
$ ~0 O: V6 p4 w+ LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 F0 K5 t4 h, e! H& dI’m still filled with fear
4 I+ j5 d5 I: j- e" V5 V0 OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 }6 @" f! u$ Q4 A% TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 D: g( i( g; R8 H3 }1 CWith such a tongue as yours,
' X/ D" L1 W8 l! m- J. zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ V1 B, n0 X; o) z$ \6 ?  z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  a4 f# c8 x; D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" @' E7 \  G) a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& X/ v0 k+ r9 |' s( ~2 Y. F. m, a2 {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! z/ G$ u# L( X4 q  ?  E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( p, }% q/ ?$ w, |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% E4 P& g: R3 ^1 u+ }* L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; _# i) g; n9 W0 A% z* [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 e7 V9 \& m# n4 r3 z) d7 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 G/ J- p+ ]) D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 W( f3 b5 m) t! P5 e/ i& v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 x9 N. h$ ]; D# t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: }  A1 ]/ r1 ^2 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 M& E0 q+ y, @' \- l/ K) V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) t* {$ e/ a6 c3 l+ A3 w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ d9 W# l* o" o! l& X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* k( d0 O& G& S' M# C7 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ u1 t  X( i1 l' K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, Z6 ]5 z$ q4 [* ?3 ^0 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 g# ?) @3 u* f2 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( ?' F. i3 u2 b6 e' I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 z7 b3 I% O4 K" b/ Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: ^  f1 E# y- B& S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 `0 n9 S: B% f/ {7 D- a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! H" {; V7 g- r" x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 w( J( e, o" g; p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

2 u* k$ {, v. ]& I$ n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>