【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- T$ d5 J/ b2 j! X8 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 |. {8 H) K( o0 [, j( u& BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ T* x" X# C7 h& S+ F: T8 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 |" Z# D! H+ jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 j) l/ z. W4 P$ _: BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: I0 f/ M& b& {) j/ ^8 BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 p  s% [/ ~# L$ D% f) a2 R/ HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: e2 H' }# Q2 f. w3 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! S2 U6 u- m# FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 Y3 I0 a+ U9 c8 }2 BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  N3 S, Q/ H) I9 |' Y' o$ V9 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: e3 e: y* W3 ?3 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ m3 |: u, }( f$ ], A& [+ P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 h( H" i& ?: |% W+ Z/ N! h! x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' W5 T" e* p- [  |* e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ [( J# q' Z( q# Z0 ], }3 U4 `4 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 I* G; C' H5 _' v" ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) T2 h+ ^8 Y' ?: m  {" h' i) \  C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& \) r5 m$ {) [1 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 g; E: H* z" i. i4 B# L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& X! S& f) a4 `7 x2 [; o1 y% h* o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ B& h2 L2 i' s' A8 i+ u" \  ^' j4 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: @3 K" {! `7 `( e" X2 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 C$ Q6 j1 G* ]3 w' g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 J- N. d- a- e* Q8 @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) ]/ e, @, r& ], y7 P' @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! A$ O2 Q  U' U! @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  @1 g* B; Q8 f$ O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( T7 K% Y# Z& s0 r" @0 K: I0 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. K; `9 o( d* g! q% M9 v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& w. x" r( i# m' c- x/ B- N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 ?5 @/ V" u* ~$ M" ~1 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 K+ g  Z2 B9 y/ S9 ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" S/ S& P& b3 A8 D4 O$ G8 z! T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  y: f4 X5 i1 `! k, j# d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- u: C' H3 l' T( Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# i! [8 L; G! z( M7 B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! {) h, i0 N9 t2 m$ A7 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. m# R& }9 J# p/ c7 o1 @: }( ~& r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

: g" j+ D) T; X9 x! Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 ~" D, @# T+ H: ^: c+ e, ~0 u$ P& K4 Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>