【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ P9 S- D5 q  }7 `歌词我附在后面。
7 d4 ?9 E9 w6 S2 X+ F. lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  [" _% R! S- F4 {. TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, Z* p# C( s' b5 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* C# d( n4 y# f( ]5 I/ w& Q7 H- OThe sky is happy down to its soul
; j' G9 ^  ^5 b# L5 sWith the moon kissing it every night
' F  `4 H" ?/ t0 `# L, F- t% wSeeing the sky content with its love
. l( }- m8 S8 H0 u) @8 QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 M, `/ D; @/ m* y' ]; k3 BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 e3 z# j1 j, o/ f8 W, H, _Every other word you utter is love
+ s; |$ o8 F/ j+ Z: r% D- aI really want to know just how much you love me
% A0 l' q  A8 k" \5 RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 h- c/ i9 m2 b7 RI want so much to see inside your heart
) D5 m) x0 r0 G$ n' d$ XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: ~6 }: }9 O5 x  h/ x  {7 w3 ?+ E7 ]I’m still filled with fear
) B# z: [! U9 T+ PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 B8 L+ f2 `1 J0 r+ l. UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ F. ~8 b2 i# T1 A" B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- L% k/ _% u8 i" g6 T3 X+ D& P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 o1 c" d4 V# ~* N# G1 G5 o7 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ v" B' B+ A0 ^2 w* F& T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# k* `* g! `+ u: ?: R3 T9 d7 W# f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 i# o5 J; }& L# {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 g. Q  M* B; t* i, T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 C, A" e+ h4 W+ \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 H) ^$ a$ }. O3 Y! f' I0 W0 F<P>你无需担心</P>
0 Q; C' A6 f7 v) Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 I6 D1 u: z  @! t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 N" G. r0 X" ~4 p- Z9 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 w" I1 C5 A' M9 \7 j, C. [) o$ ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" k  D# X/ K5 x$ C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 [/ N% S" a! G4 n5 R" X' l& S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 Q% G& _5 h) _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( f* B: }1 t6 l0 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 v5 _4 u  Q) A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; [3 R+ y: \! |* H1 a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ q+ X( w! Q- {1 ~& d) o' P1 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, X2 V6 }7 i8 g2 t+ ~1 P7 [* \" g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 _- X1 T3 g3 f$ g( v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 i! y  q% M+ p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* x8 `7 b& I3 k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. z) X9 G8 [  l' J9 t! z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 H' \) C4 Q4 U. h) r5 ]; K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  L5 j3 |! I1 f& `- g8 b/ S" x) {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ v+ J- O/ u8 l3 x$ T( H: v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% B* O2 j& o! _$ |0 f: W' U) `0 }% N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 I7 k9 a$ |5 M. u9 d+ p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 d0 B$ B' F- f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 A( ]+ z% {7 o' X+ |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; f" N6 t0 b3 j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>