【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ c% m' ~, ~% n2 N" Y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& ^0 m8 w" s3 P1 zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ X  @8 o- M9 ^2 S1 X+ YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 x5 F9 Y' q3 a) p) U  z* GI love you I love you with all my heart
/ }5 h0 D  P! GNothing can compare to my love
3 E/ i9 ~. g& ^4 X$ J( |, j6 }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- q7 j$ u* Q) K8 w0 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ |3 B4 G. o% k0 b. P, UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 s0 D0 ?0 B6 G8 h# B7 Y1 ~/ k$ n& [I regret not dying
' J; g, o: ?0 X. p! XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% H! F7 ]: U' L8 GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 c% S9 j. L6 u5 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  B+ L8 k& K% |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 a; S9 t3 H0 m$ F# m' P' P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 q# y  S  a, H) L, W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: }1 O, O- Z- X+ f% P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- U' m, J+ K3 N& U+ I* a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 U# @' O. r1 e) W! b3 C. m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 A; G) Z. t2 v+ \4 y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  o5 T! I1 V2 I3 V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; L( _7 i) t* u! N& j6 F' w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( `! _6 M0 E  I2 I* E" `. [. A9 f1 D$ b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* V. J' x, p4 k1 U3 D4 t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  }! E$ o' {  h" w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 W  E7 c7 W" r. b# b; J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 v* \5 m  z8 B: c( |) @7 b. T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 t7 n+ p2 ]. }4 I8 b% K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, K  O/ J# o& `7 ^* h# I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! f' y  R# j. a/ g, `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& F) d, I7 {: s: T/ t; p" {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% P9 }* m3 X, W  X9 b: P) t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 a2 f. S! c7 K3 J! w- r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 }) K# j2 j$ F1 B* ?$ g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% r) z) B3 p1 @" [# J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 y  h% t3 g) S* {6 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. d, l* Q; i) L" k8 ^' V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& z1 P: [, \: Q; A: E, x2 }6 x; D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& S6 V1 R0 M4 B8 x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ v& |9 q9 W4 M& ]我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 R* }. b1 ^' d  T, A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>