【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. j5 }  @, B: j# K/ tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) \: b9 T$ H& k5 ]6 t! b" yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% B- E) B. \( c0 r; ]2 g( vSeeing the sky content with its love
+ }6 k* k1 P9 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" D8 B+ E: M  T  U$ I7 q7 [5 D: EYou needn’t fear anything
' b( C0 X7 O" M7 x$ Z5 SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- w$ b- R% X& p1 }0 iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 Y8 y6 ~8 o; i+ r2 t3 G/ M! jNothing can compare to my love
, `& l0 z% |) j& G; F! z8 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 |, a3 g4 H* g) u& g3 h' }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 o1 ~; g! a" D+ d3 z& ]) cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 }6 }, w& {& ~, i$ \2 lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- f! M! P- l3 i4 M; N' w7 _) w  RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 i( \) |# W( Q$ R: K8 M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) w- k! M1 M+ G3 ?* P/ F/ H+ G% m4 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% b( u- D3 m$ ]6 i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% i4 z- {9 r: D( F- {3 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 V' w9 }) Y( b! G7 A; A9 d/ i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 h0 E5 m; u" G: u/ w3 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# K( N2 b* i2 S* C$ t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 F7 o! X  ^3 g9 E' {6 m3 v+ }6 ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' f% \1 E4 F& G& E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! L! r. O, A: z( _  |- g% _7 P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 j9 |% Y4 T  @* t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 [4 [8 S! R. X2 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 B/ v# Z. }7 f' |, C* n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: z. j( @, ]2 g  o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# ^  K3 I( i/ @1 S' }: _- V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 T6 [5 O$ M3 e3 ^- V* p5 g7 B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% q9 t5 E  c7 T' ^( K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# O- k9 q/ u0 T. z) H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 {; w) j- B& c3 v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" p8 ~$ Z, ~" f: x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* e4 L, ^- g. ]( J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* O" f7 n& }4 P$ l6 [3 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' J/ u. K  O8 K' y6 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! o* w7 G" h" u4 P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' `* Z* u/ P9 {, \! K+ d% i; K7 j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- O( K. }) `0 |) M, V1 \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ W7 ?* y" Q' E. I! _7 A, p( {) r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 ]( J2 B( L( }* v5 |7 c: n: G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. k5 k0 c% \3 b4 u<P>I regret not dying</P>
. E  N+ O" ]& c! a2 I5 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, ^- A7 T7 y8 ]1 x8 E0 Y( j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% j* |! P6 n% B) ^) ^+ q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 f) f% g# \& u- {( ?( {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 B1 Q8 v) k: D/ A: E0 h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ w( b2 b/ X' J' H0 D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ X+ c7 N. B; y% {! {  ]+ x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% N  q$ Y3 `0 `1 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  ?6 H2 i  }* F& d) v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 b5 g1 z# F% y: ?0 F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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" `- L9 t8 q" T4 p" B7 B9 U* j8 ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* X" a& b+ N: n. c" {$ n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>