【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' K$ |$ z) Z8 L1 C9 l6 SWith the moon kissing it every night
/ _* [5 S' h5 C$ z0 h1 R& Z# O3 NSeeing the sky content with its love
- ~9 u- u  n( Y! `  x7 j. w( WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! ], y# ~8 w& aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: M! \$ I& j- ~& [* {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& C8 _7 s8 H' X: P' ^+ y( ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. Y3 F1 [$ \1 s9 GI regret not dying
) }; ]; Y# R0 S6 D& y. TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ ~% G8 J- C" A) |6 \% A( G0 d( vWith such a tongue as yours,
% P: i9 n  v) p8 Z% }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, s* T; [) C) ]8 fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- k& y9 x8 p' e: l* Q& n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( n6 G8 w8 G8 t+ r: a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& O" n1 Z. Y% W+ j5 N/ J7 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 k  @2 o; n" A6 i: P$ @) l/ P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( w5 V) j% l' {/ a) s3 r2 Y, a4 Y: w9 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ z7 ~# U2 E' u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 S' e' K4 o  g) Q; p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 H# s7 }+ R! H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 T+ M# w' [) }$ N0 v$ Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ y( t( |; Q: S2 d! H2 D( j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 _' q# x" }2 _% _# D# m; |- K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) W) N3 X! q( j5 ]) ~) n( t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 N8 C# ]! }# i* N* L7 W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 S3 K' X" R! ^( \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 {' t5 K) k$ H/ p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 o6 a0 z$ |0 W5 W( r) Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- t" P$ A. j: R, P5 R+ T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 ~" F/ ^2 j# p" P+ x: Z& u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ ]% w# @& B8 L! x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" o3 \! u0 i+ t+ |$ v7 u' ?6 j7 F0 d9 ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: ?+ G. g( F2 ^" w+ \( _$ a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" S% |9 A; E2 P! p. L4 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: |4 b: ]; [- ~6 d- F4 e! q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- Z' |* n, V$ u7 f7 }0 d6 s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 @  `7 \2 f9 T, n  B$ A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 O( q7 e5 u2 H$ i- x8 ]我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>