【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 ^+ y, {4 ^8 V- D5 X歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; z$ V1 J; l; X) h: e8 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; H2 w8 k  Z" Y& v. ^1 O( fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, ^. F; {( h* z2 o( o: m7 ]5 u! SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) V$ v2 j# N* R6 G0 Y: Z. r& L, ]+ X5 HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 g4 I1 Z$ e2 N' T  t; XI really want to know just how much you love me
# d; @- V3 R* X! {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ o6 |# V5 p4 d4 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 i, |) U. ~) X6 vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 U( u0 Y( {9 V+ pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" {0 E$ k+ e- ^) IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; {1 g  m6 B4 ^- e- I$ J: eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 O; U  |5 o7 t0 `9 VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 ]1 H) t- O/ q. l2 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 J! B) f3 }; R+ w, N4 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; L& X8 ^6 o" U. x/ e3 _. U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 e1 k; D. N6 ?1 g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: i4 e2 B+ S  v1 V, ]# Z* M" H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 z6 Z' ^3 I& x& _* Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: x) s% @6 d8 X' W! o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) {6 O1 Z$ p  f* t) T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, R, a: k% _  y0 P$ ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# ?, c' v- S, i$ a2 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 z+ M/ n0 B  ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 F+ \1 L) P# l2 O. i( x" I* `) o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 K; R) C/ Y; T) g  C/ H9 }" Q6 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! c3 n6 S" y& V0 T! g" {  \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ ~' q$ |8 u9 b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- ]- I) D( h- d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 p) }. g' ]2 h7 J' O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 A  a( B) U' O: {. T1 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 Q: C7 ?* b; J4 L* \0 K$ n' z2 u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 y8 |. _" S" @9 r) K, b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! L+ G0 o+ ~& m" D. Z# y/ }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& D5 z) ]: L* Y+ M- O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% N& [, T  M9 D5 L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 N0 B) O( J, Y* ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; t- ?  h& L7 y  u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 C( N; Y2 D2 ~# @' g; h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; t, Y% @9 S2 J% ^. K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) u- h( }! I3 q3 s; ^: _' e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" x8 ?% a7 ?. ?1 j) ?我请你剖开它

, P* s+ U$ ~" L4 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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