【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# x+ X4 _+ M) S# |% `5 z! ?' BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; i( r) Q& u$ I% XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 p/ n: {, }" n8 i9 [) V* C! n6 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 ]+ h7 M9 B; e7 Q+ I7 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 j+ Z" a4 G& S; @With the moon kissing it every night
; X" l( p7 g) e! ^) MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: ^+ _8 l6 |& {9 XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# {9 r9 B2 V. i4 H6 y, B' G* H: iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, Z+ Y& o5 x: _# v8 J; KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 F! N3 {; |0 mI want so much to see inside your heart
/ [# K' j& w" P. JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- g( a' \% ^; [% |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 M3 {# z  U& ?  FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 @/ {% I0 j0 p8 Y3 m, t( O( xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  h& [' w) e% [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, o6 s# ]6 Z' ^# `$ TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 y0 T& a# S. h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- q" T2 W9 Z, L5 ~" g# K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 Q+ v7 p" H$ U) ^8 r1 m# m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  r  T3 m5 E( d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; F% I4 ~7 z. a+ w  g  W4 ^& `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% F+ |: o4 `6 J& Y( E7 t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& e6 V! t) D" |) @& A* f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% k- m3 J3 _8 `<P>你无需担心</P>
& [1 e5 I9 i" n4 R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% x, V6 H8 c" Y! [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 H9 m6 l. v6 z) ]! t: X3 a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) P% `4 r; `* {' {" H6 g" B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  l* ]7 m5 a: K8 m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( z, C# t1 m; o! v8 a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ ~' s+ h. Q" R) \6 D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 w7 I7 R& }+ a/ A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 `/ [# n! C' F) o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" k* `  b' @7 J1 I1 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ K9 O0 W$ c( h6 x& K% X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: {2 D9 I2 Z" x! V$ N+ a, y' G! Y3 g& F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" F* J* v9 D3 L" C7 V! @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& ~! k/ q& D+ O0 u8 I3 T9 f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  l- U& L. b( G: \+ I' R$ W  w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- B/ z' h7 ^' g( J7 F% S! L" i" T; Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! x) c5 G/ w0 _" J" ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 w5 M% P$ k* i+ ^- n7 o, }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- N3 R# I8 c5 E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 S: n' X3 ]5 C* S& p* t4 C! i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>