【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# P+ n( L2 [' z( BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 N8 w3 @* B$ U3 W& @: @Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 k, L2 T& U" F2 {, BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ A, N. Z- q1 d3 c; q1 s9 h9 IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 [% ^' o; W' J2 c! J8 ^! L' YYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: S9 _) @$ f; B- \: j% HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# ^6 t& x# ^& Q2 {& ?5 WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# N* _& ?$ |; E; WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' ^3 e/ ?# Y0 ^: l* {I’m still filled with fear
9 u+ C$ k9 j! ?' iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* M9 A- ~! f0 _- U& J) L9 \I regret not dying
, ^4 a  f) l: d# U( dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, `; L4 f2 n7 k% W3 e6 I0 b' f) rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 `+ v% g% ?" fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ \* b, o8 D8 T6 c$ V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 ~4 V% f8 w. F* i# ]1 S2 H! u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  P9 u; Y! m! g# l+ p0 s& p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# }3 I- S0 A, z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) k3 U: r2 [, Y6 W9 [<P>你无需担心</P>
9 D" H/ B, s5 W5 P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 A/ x1 ~6 x0 v$ X9 Q3 K$ p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( Z. t5 f* P1 L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  R; ~- {" s1 J) W  q. ?; p# g3 X/ z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 _! ?  e0 C% d! |) {* K) A" V9 M/ r1 p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 t3 W0 R. ~- O: r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 T) l, V5 p' t) p, R, B& Z* z& @3 d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' ~- N! n- T4 e& V6 p: V- G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 F2 l& H. O5 ~- q. ^& H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, B% ?: P+ i0 e" T& D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 I2 I. G; T* z- s6 d* |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# Z% Q8 y( y# k" O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 w7 N) J+ x& {$ S) g7 U/ C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% D# c) \4 K9 b: ?2 |8 h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ i  k  A0 N# s. ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( c' R! n1 s- w) ~, I9 i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) l/ l# y* h/ l& e7 V8 |# p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& d* C2 A$ x5 ~6 z1 w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, I/ p" s% @. @' C9 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, m1 e& ^! r6 R- x  F: [; M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. W* O0 k( o6 M5 ]0 \8 }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- A: O& y! F. G8 A! U8 }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
( j& D; {- E. J; _. O& \# U! c
8 P7 z) l  r6 H8 q/ I. t1 O+ {我请你剖开它
2 `6 X- U0 Q; I+ s# O
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>