【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  p7 x0 z; j+ b3 O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& ^3 c# @( v; _2 P/ f, p* M2 t# vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 ~8 b& E. M7 C4 v: s3 \* H' w' |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 ^. {) I- P+ d, @1 }/ hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- }0 j! k$ v, Y& ~/ V: g# Z: kSeeing the sky content with its love
3 ~. K8 O: V( C* R  k( sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 p  i; W; @. K3 @/ h. c4 R# O; AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; {# b2 a% x( XI really want to know just how much you love me
2 @2 d% Y7 V# Q1 ~! r  Z6 s1 \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  f: t4 G( b2 z  x1 ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 p; \0 W+ Z* fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 _  t1 R! n; e# iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, @& b% c) u: r# GWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 e$ X  S5 B) R1 ]; i% xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 T% h4 R7 V+ C: ]9 l' MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% T& {. o5 p7 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; i! k8 D) ~( t; I4 O& I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 @  F/ _! r4 E4 U& T4 D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" j4 X- l3 C. U) w$ ~. L7 d' J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! A$ b: E# |& e7 ^2 k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 b. g& w; @6 W! _3 e% o! F, [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ K, R6 i+ q0 y0 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( j- j' X3 ?: e* g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  C  `+ c% f- a' N) Z3 N$ K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ `$ R: T' f- j5 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 K& U4 i  R5 Q7 {7 ?9 K: N7 n" f8 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ e( I. Z  \4 l% m6 i) V! H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  j- r2 b# X/ `% `" v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ I; f4 X& ~  _1 ]: O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 u) e' A' h. v$ T0 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( E9 r% L7 ?8 W7 Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" _! F: H1 `6 g, W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 S& \' ]( I/ u* C6 {5 e: b0 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' p" o' J& O' [3 b0 j. u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# b6 t: \9 b. K* U* x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 |/ j; \6 T( p! h) E% J6 u2 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; T- F) @& X2 W+ @: l2 d; T) h8 K9 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ x5 _/ _7 D. C! q. G) T3 ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( l" p) i1 H1 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  Y% z( ~( l" Q- Z7 r1 Z! S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ `& {0 Y7 k+ O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- @* p! S5 F& p; Q  e: O( r4 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 V+ s& K5 h6 G5 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 p1 d, t# b! a$ O4 r; Z9 ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) ~) d1 _, K5 D5 x6 a  N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  b' x3 v8 B% b( U) F& }0 Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>