【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 A& o+ t) ?  P' f0 S) x/ s5 y. TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 I9 @5 j* }( M- H" U/ ?Seeing the sky content with its love
6 ^) U4 _0 `  p- T  U7 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% l* T* ~% C4 e: x& a8 p6 LYou needn’t fear anything
3 B& z" c  A* z# |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ b9 j* H- D9 |! BI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! O( @* ~: s! i( BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 a1 f! r+ x  b9 f2 nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. Q9 t" n3 y6 @1 LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 _9 {7 P6 r2 T+ i& t/ |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; H- {7 p% S) e! ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 l/ r2 R' S* l6 ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" ~: s. R) k! }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 R! r8 b4 r1 |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: U! G! L( j* u$ q. t8 O+ s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 H9 [2 G# e  o+ o$ u8 I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 _5 [# ?" I, g: D3 }2 _. O) b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) C9 k* j8 r  J5 ^2 S. B8 s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 i2 r9 }8 ?! j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" }! X5 ^: u! V$ ~2 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ |8 R8 c9 ^' T, B2 x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 g$ i+ H& J6 J; g8 H2 c) E) ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* V6 [4 x8 @( l/ ^* A/ j$ A- [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- V0 T( F8 y: m* k9 ^! M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 v0 z: k4 |, P5 l0 U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. t% }8 g, f  V3 }  }: E! [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! E7 F  r; n* @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 ]* d* H6 T; D" N' Q1 c5 p$ t- v0 M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 \* Y3 ^5 W& i' M0 [( }: A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  p" g: l) ?1 C. A8 S  q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! d( U1 O2 x# E5 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 i7 ?* N$ |! g) w1 N& `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# U5 Z: K6 X+ c5 x) ^# `  G% A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 c9 r6 |4 {; t% }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ S( Y3 s$ X. `4 Z0 F4 r% I4 _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 y5 E: @' l: e( E" |2 Z, d- @2 h4 b& f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ \0 r+ H7 j& y& r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

0 c: L7 D0 T) s- F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>