【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& a- ~+ z3 b' [The moonlight is shining brightly,
: H: N* U4 u' O; s, a2 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" w3 q9 q) Y" [" g7 W0 D+ |, m$ WThe sky is happy down to its soul
% z: F. m5 F( _) C2 zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 H- q' {# }. R3 U6 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 m- c3 C0 H# Q! L1 ?* QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 _, l( N) K7 F( F) c( d2 M, HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 x" q& G1 Q- s6 _6 N0 \% [2 q- bI want so much to see inside your heart
# L4 Q" y* A8 I# ^' w4 yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' {/ A- J( M/ C" \- z9 XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& \5 R' G* `3 D: C3 w3 ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 w0 f1 T: A9 ?2 lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 N8 z6 [6 p6 X: d' w2 ?7 NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 M! g6 \* f4 l  o0 ]1 w6 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 O' H. Q9 U4 Z% }& |3 }! e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* V1 V" m& }; D& A. |- O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ S1 e1 |1 X! ^2 U. _. q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 @# n* G# G4 E) W2 J2 n% {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 D+ V; j# o( r$ ~  f0 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# p/ W+ U& L) C& v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; n# ]+ b3 t0 s( O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 {% T& P1 }' Y9 G! P) A# Z( R0 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 H) a8 c# v6 C) ?  r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 n( q0 E& K6 W8 o) a3 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" ^5 Z$ i8 [$ {6 \( ^) H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: H. t" U0 F  Y6 \; E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 \' X) i! q2 O; N& d6 s* t% U4 I6 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 A! C. T$ N* z4 x( N' K- z! j. f8 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 E' E5 `' ^/ U5 m, ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- ]- Z5 c4 Q5 v4 R8 E8 o# N+ w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! n3 E; x% D7 a5 ~  C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) H( D* ^3 Z: [! S* U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# e& L5 Q2 y- M$ q% K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: Y( U# x" h% M4 P0 |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" b* p2 b" Q4 W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 Q) A4 f% K1 y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) h& G! N+ r4 M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- D2 J- ~% L" w( \; O7 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( B* ^" O5 w5 B9 _& K9 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! `# U. ~1 V% w+ |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' G, M& o' E0 ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 B. H9 l; n  e1 K9 H; h' w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; h: X# V5 L  D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" t; h4 d9 \. E& a我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>