【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% U7 g9 `# H: W( p7 u5 }  }. RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% K' q: @/ ~% ^% V& g, Q5 D2 PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ O6 |# _9 a) RThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 e$ w$ k4 b+ O$ ]( l" l9 TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# L" N- F# D7 c$ m0 vYou needn’t fear anything
* s9 _, t5 X9 R( j, O' sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 R6 @  g/ v$ P! j1 H% n3 jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 e+ j) q( V' K% A$ h. y% }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 }3 p' o& @( D; e" _( fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! S; I+ z; `  q% z" K( PI’m still filled with fear
+ F$ n! F' w- o! C7 sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 y% P4 ?- e; K( X) W# m4 VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 U0 X5 G- k/ w4 ~4 _/ rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 {0 |" v* t; fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# L3 i! E2 g1 t7 _4 G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 |6 C- L0 f6 l# X4 C1 t. \! U6 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! f" T8 i( t9 i9 Y- j$ h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 \- W0 g$ Z' z, ~  x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  Q8 I7 M$ s0 G. M9 a# t- z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. c0 Y2 U) j. S* N# [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 R$ P& G4 x4 z+ K% H' W: e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 b1 N2 g9 K% S% Q( n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ M! }5 \( J; n1 ]! A4 a( _<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 H% K: N" p; c  O. F. n* }3 n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 U# p  M1 k1 Z' u  q7 Q2 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 S, E: S8 O1 N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, }1 u* C9 H% E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, `) N  t1 n) I) n5 \% _9 t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: E& E/ D8 j) Q, N3 g# V8 C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! ^) K* L1 P) V0 Q( J. {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% i5 j1 k( f3 C5 Y/ S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 b- N1 _- \! Y1 i# A3 y  Y1 _; p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 {. |" ]8 i  P: S$ _0 u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 U( a9 @8 l8 p# T6 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ V# E; X  L( @) e8 m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- E; t4 c5 D& `0 x$ q! E' q5 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 q  W% x  I& P: K, |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; x5 |) j% o, y/ _% f<P>I regret not dying</P>
* x. `% m% F, b8 W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ z$ _8 v) h( ?3 r' a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* }* ~2 m4 E2 Z/ }  A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 e. j) J$ f+ t( N" ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 D1 }1 W; c) t5 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 D6 V. C# R- ^6 u9 G6 U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, y& V; t3 b6 x3 h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# Z7 [% h$ G3 w0 |7 S; F' H* M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! X" w- y  x/ e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 r7 k* [. v' \; Q: q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>