【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 ?  S4 ~7 R- z- `Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: f6 S( t) K& p! U1 ^# W3 mWith the moon kissing it every night
* W8 \% k& m( y% u, `: {4 [Seeing the sky content with its love
) Y/ O* x, p6 `# s2 x, E2 {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! w/ S: T* J1 v# b) [2 S$ kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# V- x, }0 h7 ^4 Z5 nEvery other word you utter is love
7 R& r% }, B9 fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 b( U& k5 m. jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- H& J3 [; L; E, w# H) D6 xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% P; F& g$ a" A! y+ H8 zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( x& U) F+ Z. u' W; G" [3 p, GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 B8 v8 q' }! X3 y  ^# G9 q1 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ r9 T% Y# M$ l0 g: I3 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& O- N" W9 N# O) P2 e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% w2 D0 z$ \' \2 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) S: T: n, L- O( W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ K% ]( C+ p, i" V6 S0 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& g) n* v# V/ e3 O8 j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ U& V4 }+ o( F, ]) t  W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 J# m$ s3 \5 t3 L% {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" r* p7 {6 @( z# t6 g" ~, A' s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" ^/ U! p, ~% R$ [5 q4 ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( @$ x4 C# Y! H( T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 J7 z% X; q- v3 ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& v4 p- j9 R7 q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 h2 O" P3 d4 \! f0 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 S$ I7 I2 H; U5 i8 N! [6 A- ]3 i5 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) J% I/ D4 `4 d6 S8 Q) i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) c; L% D& {% L$ e( G" g0 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# }$ Z% T# B7 y3 J; D! J) H5 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" s! @& \8 t! D0 [1 T- j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 H: K4 n! j8 T' W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( s! A$ Y+ B8 ]$ v! @- ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  S$ o1 n/ C& _% C6 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* w; a& I8 B4 a3 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 ^2 @# v) L# z; p% l* W! F; P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>