【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, d. b6 q/ W3 t, P$ D/ hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 M6 j6 _0 ^% J3 DThe sky is happy down to its soul
* {- u7 \/ n5 OWith the moon kissing it every night
! u! A5 l3 G9 r, z* V# O  ~! J8 OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" \: W$ d  J# [- y! b. K% {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 z9 W0 g& _" z1 N+ f" s- v/ T$ y, T" @4 jEvery other word you utter is love
) y4 p' a( m& n4 n5 C  B5 zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 ]. X0 ~0 O: y# ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* V1 g8 _. X/ M8 qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 Q- A+ a8 `1 V7 }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 L5 q/ `+ q6 K9 \4 v2 l( Z4 lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" C/ v2 f6 m5 [; `$ Z) j; I2 [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; h" `0 o# v% g. D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 D# ]; e( |! s0 f) o" n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# X0 T. W3 c( V& _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ A) _' }  N5 Y# N9 R& P% @/ v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 S$ S  ^) C. y! \, ?3 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 x2 R$ s  m2 a$ U* A0 E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 E" E; i0 O( B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ J6 @8 `) U: Z( G& V/ M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 r- N. }5 e: d3 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, k7 R  e6 t9 F# p6 ^$ v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- J$ Z( W, e0 m" @1 q8 ?- u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 ^! {, n5 `% T9 o; H. Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 B7 Z3 Q: ^# p/ {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) d# n- U4 T3 B1 v6 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, }  I3 Y( h' f5 k+ w- g8 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 y# i" g$ v; i( F6 R/ e" X6 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" N/ f  K  H' I4 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# C- t* q0 F1 z5 Z2 p: |& D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% Y2 T6 g' ?0 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ A' J; k/ U1 C  p<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 S0 @% G! b4 S, K! A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; L3 M) H, I' z( {$ |" z) t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ C7 C- g+ F! n8 a$ p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 w! G2 o: S0 K" B$ H$ X. Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  |& z% `7 C* @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ y, d' U& \+ ?% l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 R% Q! j. a6 \6 E$ V* d& A+ \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 J/ y4 ^5 ^! K( \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) a6 M9 w# A1 ?5 M* @) y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* s& y1 s  n4 u: Z) j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# G4 x1 H/ ^# _  ]. g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>