【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 X3 y+ |- ^( M1 j9 h0 {歌词我附在后面。
: t/ O4 F/ r) x& |/ K8 Y5 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 G' z) r' v6 q$ _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: X( v, i$ i6 y, o# g' hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 M+ D+ P% r/ jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( d; t1 @2 ?4 [) b7 A2 rYou needn’t fear anything
! ]; X- Z3 D6 P* N3 I! _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 y% l3 k/ w% M, vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 T" w+ A( W" u& c0 y1 ?Nothing can compare to my love
6 F  b) U/ Q) ^, xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ Y; K7 l  w! D) X  [# j# ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 V! {3 M0 W% Q) p$ C  A% ZI want so much to see inside your heart
" g3 R' Z8 ~, O+ M9 Z( cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ P; K6 l/ p8 ^7 y. D5 vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 V/ X! B. r9 D' `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 N" p2 k* x; Z0 gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, g4 g1 ?7 d4 k1 B  pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 S, O' m! C# Y5 ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ G! c' U) @6 D: J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& l% v' J; m/ X: B4 p: Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( {7 n3 n8 N- U) Q" O! C" X& {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ S) r% }9 J8 ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 W. x$ o9 f0 L; u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. n8 B& @/ q4 v- D, k8 c8 t* E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% B4 ^2 n% A5 W. q* T% V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- P. g" Q: V9 t) E: Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 s, H. l  L5 h! z7 P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 [2 `1 z% _5 c! U, A8 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 N+ `1 N; Y( n) E1 e<P>你无需担心</P>
1 b' M7 w6 K* y. [+ P7 Y4 p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 I2 T% b* ^' n9 }! q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ Y# v. g$ b2 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' V/ \! j3 D0 |( ]; |& Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 o4 d) A+ R2 w4 ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" w' b) z9 ?9 r' s* w2 T2 A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' S2 I1 l- u, @' c" \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! @1 S: V/ L- \  S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. U" M8 j, f1 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; {* B* |  e' h1 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 H- s$ C9 _6 ~$ f1 L  n% J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ z, H9 V; G1 v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' _; ?" w) J' C" P; n3 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ w- q( G! h1 B" q5 s. K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 j2 A! u) `& E$ h7 w( _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 `3 R+ H! L; w5 \* s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 k) {4 f4 i0 A' w: C+ ?7 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 N1 u" d4 Z5 l5 P3 z8 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' B0 p0 ^1 S( D& q' M: d; D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 W+ _6 d- A3 j$ I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' s) F- T, E4 ]+ y/ @- m  {' ?& S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; G* \4 B% D! [& k4 y+ G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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- v+ L# B# ?( |+ ~) S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) T6 F* I# m( R( i6 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>