【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) B' v1 Q/ D8 u5 W* Z, d* mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: D5 ~7 p9 a- S0 ^) h3 P( o  S/ K: K6 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" K- G: v6 O' ?9 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 A2 b- w% x3 ?9 J% bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 V) p2 m- {% {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* ]+ N; G$ x  b8 k/ QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 K1 B9 O7 [( o/ T) mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* C  J. [6 B) D) J8 g, ^5 b  a2 l* i7 eNothing can compare to my love
* n' r& A0 @% v$ g( ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 b4 X/ c8 _6 y) @* [$ ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 u7 C/ ]2 j/ RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ P) M( z* I  T9 N$ ?3 fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! _+ u1 @1 C) p$ n5 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 m/ w, ~9 y# g, }* i5 u3 x5 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: ?7 V" g2 g% u2 K  G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) t& T& b- P" u/ @* s) M. k7 K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' |& T# }2 @: s. Q# B5 R  r5 i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 l& ^% E( u' N; a. e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( s& a6 p4 o* G1 L' a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, v- y) w5 a3 N. B8 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  [7 f& r& Y+ G" f; W& w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ H- \2 x$ f8 Q& r5 h4 I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) ~/ z. @+ x' m# i) ?! s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& T! Q3 N/ v$ E7 X7 b7 ], m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! I4 s# ^/ t9 |4 v0 K) B& R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% P, a1 Y3 ?+ D3 u# K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 s5 k3 C6 ?0 p; J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ M4 T! d/ Z2 o7 Q1 o* v( ^9 n0 O2 r+ r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 J& D5 R- t% l/ v, n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  |8 @9 M" J- R- v. P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. U( D9 X3 p2 g/ J+ B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 E$ S* w% s: D3 |; F% D( _<P>I regret not dying</P>
# t% ~) V6 L$ {& s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) U& T4 L% d* d- V1 y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 q% x1 R: d2 C0 u/ s1 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& e& L5 f. q1 X7 |4 _7 N1 Z% c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 W1 j& ]: O, y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 Z2 C9 X% g, \7 t' N7 R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 D- l0 F  F# [' `2 }, a& A/ G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>