【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
. C4 \3 j0 Q  A5 k" dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) X* s. \+ I3 {- ~: `5 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 m, D; `" C# f, IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" {: u: t0 K1 E: M& B1 dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 t0 M  J0 S# P9 `' l$ `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 x$ ~1 k' h2 S/ h& dEvery other word you utter is love
+ Q$ n8 C  V6 s2 G, a3 L& s# B4 aI really want to know just how much you love me
7 F' A0 @6 X* r& A3 U& `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- d, z, n/ t- X& X) v' R" G3 g& PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& k. S* N" g0 y5 m  fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 C. g( j3 W7 G% Z9 {6 y; D$ o8 SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  Z- u1 X0 x% s* L# u+ x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 u% h! b; ^. u1 z4 ?" p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& @/ ^, r5 C5 |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* w' Q7 u' z$ H+ c6 J9 b. Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: ]3 _' \- z2 E4 ^" y* s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- B. j# j, I% G2 ^" P! u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, f8 w; ?% e! I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; h  q3 a" L7 p! f8 A- V1 E6 Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 K! y- d! G0 Z! C. C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 w- C- `- g0 y9 V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 y' l! h$ w: {' P/ W3 _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& ?( r* X/ _0 P% q1 f) V5 y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 h. _" a% Y" a! E) e, s5 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, z/ A1 N7 ^+ U" V! f; `8 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ d& Q- i$ d. F' z8 a! _2 w% E2 o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 b: l, ~; j5 }5 \- Q! {3 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' z9 w+ H! a& Z, Z" X% ~* ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) H1 [4 ?. K  s$ {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: |" F( M* i+ j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ h2 H; b9 }) z: R7 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
* b. A" Q! p/ K4 j8 P* V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% H: p* X8 @3 b. n' V1 H; T  C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" r' Q$ Q  y' J: x# Y) w7 t/ W6 j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# O. _5 h: W1 c! z0 L: D/ z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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, D9 m, m6 B3 h' n' F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( T+ X& U, g) T* W# k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>