【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; M8 s* Y- @: H0 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* ?  w' g8 H1 N) _" X6 s3 @With the moon kissing it every night
! s1 z$ ?8 L5 H( I8 \8 R+ }' R$ r& aSeeing the sky content with its love
; A1 H: Q2 K( u% oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ b- X; c0 J9 E" g& i$ o, v& OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  J0 h  ^  I( v( g1 u# j- wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! x- @. R  M# t, _! I8 k  iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ m# w5 p7 }( ~4 aI want so much to see inside your heart
4 G% _$ m2 Y2 p% V; mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% a: ?4 `- r* M. y$ MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% K) t) y4 V7 y! c8 o, IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 Z: Q2 m; f2 E) ~" RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% Q2 }- m/ q0 n1 M9 }. m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& ^, f0 l' Q: R7 a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' B( N0 i5 r3 q, e! ]: I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! _$ L& Q6 X% g# h: U; E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 i, T: j/ K8 J. u) P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: q8 A% d" k: r8 O% ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 ^! s% Q4 Q' x; q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' V0 G0 b6 u9 i3 X6 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; B+ C* Q% q! a0 K9 ]. Q) C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& r' j/ O  F% ?9 ~  b7 ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" r9 S8 _0 z* o, s7 Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 i0 z5 E5 U- n1 F9 \# w  b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! W& T2 m' h1 L% N& K7 x1 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. [  O. ]2 l3 c: Y# J) \; p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  ]3 L- c5 i% D3 L6 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 x. ^) }: {; O) ?! |8 R* n8 _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 D3 t% F1 {+ F/ e! {4 z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ h$ e0 M  z% r! o5 T+ s7 I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 L7 g) I! v, x" {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 u" U1 Z# }/ j% y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' @$ K* r" |. D; {  l& H$ Y( S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. K( j8 c/ H- o: h+ K+ L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 u8 W! ^2 l7 T3 E$ |4 ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- w, s* p" Y4 s' C0 U" ]+ h/ y9 n2 X* B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 I% R+ e) w$ O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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, ~; U4 x, D. B5 k4 F2 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>