【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 V; n7 f& c: O# e0 ~/ k% j歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 U2 f' j% b, B1 ~& FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- I4 r7 w: p; V* T, Y) A6 }2 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) o2 d: i$ i/ K1 U  _8 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
, X* y+ `* i+ p5 n8 rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 `) a$ ?' A& O) v/ r$ BYou needn’t fear anything
3 I! u- |/ {/ U3 EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& g* T: [3 h& I0 u; A3 i7 q% K) i0 GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( J+ ~" o9 Z+ f0 l9 S. xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 R$ k5 |' ~5 C9 i2 I2 BI regret not dying
* a  z4 O4 |! F: C# Q" _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  P, i: i' I! O8 c1 X! KWith such a tongue as yours,
/ G5 n; {, Q- k; W1 {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 ?' B- Q/ q1 @0 N: a% U, aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 g/ [$ l3 G: hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 W) L3 }* s: n+ c) Y+ E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 ^& B9 W+ c: _0 E. q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; F- P8 }+ Q- x8 ], |& G# Q8 e9 m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* s7 r& F+ m; h! [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. W4 U5 N/ I  G0 B, [- v* H. s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' |, i) o4 n6 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, `8 R+ ~" {. ~# h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! X7 p+ d& ^3 N, m9 K& Q3 u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; B; u3 z0 h9 _: C7 v- r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- }1 n4 `! b7 l' Q6 @$ h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) g, H3 v2 {0 \3 [  b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 F0 f6 c4 A* @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 c% H& y7 A& t# f; w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 r5 W7 V9 V" F6 [, L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ r$ [( i7 ^* N) f, ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 h: {! f# M5 u! W* A/ X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# G9 t* X5 r, v+ R4 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ @2 z, _8 n1 ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 Y5 L4 ^& q! q6 E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% F% b9 q3 @+ W9 i  k* Z  C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. J/ e& i6 V7 r/ y  }: v# B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 Y% P; ]5 K' a' V. U) t' n& k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ i( P  N- Q4 d; a: R; q' ^7 l' E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ j, s; n( r6 Y4 i, C9 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 {/ o, n$ ^, E" r+ O! _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 i9 v; \. j9 Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 b; t- ~- a5 ]1 p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 s3 t% c9 n6 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, Y+ \! a. O% q% k0 D1 A4 I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

4 b: b" E9 h& o3 ^# `0 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>