【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ L2 G! Q! |: b+ zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. X/ G9 h( G- \8 o5 Y1 J  j5 r) oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" L( x, _4 c5 S& U8 f' AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, ^( R. H7 q% y7 Z9 H/ |The sky is happy down to its soul
! }. g: s" {, Q  ?( M' \$ IWith the moon kissing it every night
; x1 x/ f  k* ]' v) Q* U; u( X' [Seeing the sky content with its love
5 i# j$ G/ Z# u4 `! M' Z4 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( o, E8 z8 L0 v! t/ G: QEvery other word you utter is love
3 ^6 F$ W6 L! ?# H1 W% YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ Y5 R; U, L4 U/ E  C3 QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' p4 Y( m/ l, f" T9 P7 Z2 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# @7 v) u* |  g/ S" |9 c. b1 ?- a* YI want so much to see inside your heart
+ I9 I& e/ G' X  SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 I& K3 }  @; MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) O: U+ ^1 Z8 Z( {2 RI regret not dying
: s' M( v( h; f; z6 r0 l3 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# K+ r/ B& C5 K3 O. y4 DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 O; s1 |2 s, W" m5 p- TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 o; M3 T' c9 o' d$ X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 s6 T. @- ?- j! L( y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( F+ G$ Q* ^8 Q; |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 D1 e$ F7 I( [, P$ y9 q0 m% D& o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 O/ T! v# A* t- M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 q5 u4 |# f9 h, c$ M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- ?7 z* b9 d8 p! f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ e6 G3 P- u1 t0 t" R. F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. F/ n! f. T( J0 {( ?7 I% e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ Q2 Z( z/ [' H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* N" S5 z7 H" D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 D/ b" A' R( K- _5 x/ y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ z# H( X+ d. K5 w+ ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" v: i% z. D, B- n4 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ t- a; A' ?/ n# U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 `3 }$ t& N9 e4 X! B0 i' h" P$ d1 l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 f5 Z  `- R, i( h* n3 i% F% D' e5 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& G9 L/ u" \: @' J( A- I' {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 N; A# @, {: L$ `8 w1 w* T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( p0 k% D! L, e4 W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 K# F5 F4 D# H<P>I regret not dying</P>
! ]: q) |' B# b# S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ s0 J; X2 v, r- e+ A7 ]5 L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 o* L. J7 o) g. P) L" }) ~9 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: F) [! [4 ?0 C" `3 n# J4 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# S* r& |' Y8 m1 Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 g% x- G2 ~5 e+ F1 }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 n1 I4 p) Y. S6 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 Y! a5 Y# X0 p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 i% p9 |2 i5 Y% d# U0 u- v我请你剖开它
/ p- L/ q+ R. h# j4 {; w
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ v. V9 u9 P& H; ]2 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>