【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ x3 n% T- W3 p& I' O歌词我附在后面。
- s1 s6 r' d; K! z# q0 e5 D1 i! gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ p. X9 t5 h) k+ a9 z9 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- N4 [2 n1 j' f" _2 x8 p: UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 i5 T4 E  x) e7 ?$ _$ d7 a: e1 u+ sSeeing the sky content with its love
! I. z6 \" U0 p  g: H) g0 F' BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ j1 \9 G8 N" |" B: fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; h: N1 k5 g8 }" h( X8 g$ aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ C% [) c$ N) v) y7 c" U7 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. Y7 T- D5 @/ DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' b, w. V9 a% i3 h! O5 \, A, cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% A' D' ~+ s2 V* T" T7 J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ u2 G2 n6 c1 t/ V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 M. v" v8 p% @$ W/ B, W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! k0 f: h  h& t# k& m) x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- G! X+ W5 J) t8 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 {- I5 {& N% P8 w3 v7 {5 {+ k: e$ U: s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' X. g$ p) o% ^$ E! T; ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" N1 A: W+ Q- x! d5 Y, l% T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ @' u1 c. b* j6 L& I* h- c! D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 u6 a( h% M" E1 C8 z$ v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" [0 f3 _; _( ]5 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& ]* r5 ]6 C& n" J. {7 c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  {$ |2 Z% Y. h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- ^/ o  g, b. M3 R, M5 W4 O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 `/ D) U2 t8 p+ s' ?6 i2 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 p8 F& n7 m' J. a& Z/ a3 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 I  |6 |: A/ S% t/ @" {6 B, y/ J- b6 i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! u# l, Q, p$ z1 r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 Y( K9 [: K, B1 [1 q! F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; E2 M! h+ {; E3 B5 M8 U4 F( X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. z7 Q6 @* F2 o( E6 m4 @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 I. D" l' l6 z. i9 L% d5 C& {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# A0 H, V- c/ |# J# ?1 W) B( T$ Q7 J/ j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 P& n; E# ~* K6 U/ ~; s! V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 @# H8 z8 e  E+ B- N: Y2 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>