【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! G6 g. K7 X! h$ ]9 h) OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ ~5 P6 t6 f6 U$ o8 }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 p# O7 S* ]. Q, x3 |1 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, Y  t6 T/ r# ]0 H( |6 f* `With the moon kissing it every night
: `& @& @: ^& s# gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 V/ L0 A4 y. B- p+ @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& N: S# y( U( F$ A7 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
4 x. H# u2 F1 l' z+ e  e# \+ hI love you I love you with all my heart
2 e* b* s! N$ L" k/ V6 @Nothing can compare to my love
7 _% U8 U/ D% H& R9 }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: o/ h: m$ s2 {0 Y3 [1 WI want so much to see inside your heart
6 U& [; ]( X  \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 o# z, _% O1 Q# [9 {, R- mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ [2 F! k: k% ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# S. C( C3 Z- R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 N/ o* @# Y7 P% A; ^! q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, B1 H  |  I6 M6 _( r/ |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ j; S! J/ X% N; v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 R) N) n) k( m+ {$ _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# z: V' `6 k, G6 m: R  L1 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 I9 h" I! B/ p% ?% b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; x$ m" M7 B3 w- B2 C+ H7 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) x) R0 o" p+ A! l) f" G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ |/ q: X0 P1 t, f( R1 l4 r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( ^" Q9 b& L8 l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 A  K6 T  |. Q* _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. c% b; R. u% V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. \6 T2 S# k$ h4 g' X& R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( A9 [' Y& d, n; F' s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 G$ c' ]! Y4 u7 O  c/ }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 w* X: S) d* I6 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 n7 Z+ u5 e0 l0 r, w, }. I3 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  r$ ~8 H/ g5 S5 H2 v5 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; _- @$ L$ m# {; E5 @' C# t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! U. T2 N4 k2 W( _, R* J! T. D$ I7 a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) b; m) [) s3 g, o3 K5 O% a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; V; j- f/ f: N, ~$ _2 z, H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& [1 D: v$ e. g, g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* }: W& a5 k+ H4 [7 ?+ Q2 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& P2 w) F7 b" L" P0 d) Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: x& {6 L5 V. l$ ]) ~; {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; J4 S5 n# J; }% y# }5 `我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>