【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- M; E  A# _2 g9 P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* w6 d6 E( @$ R5 V! X5 _$ `Making the sky glitter like gold,
) k% j& `5 Q/ h! d8 }5 j" R9 p. m3 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 m+ }# S$ i- v! f* ^- a/ L+ gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  b! Z5 I0 m9 D; TThe sky is happy down to its soul
: o! e* P* b7 f' A* D1 u" AWith the moon kissing it every night
( Q2 x  p/ b% e$ |/ J! j  l. aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; D5 o( _' l, O" Z  Q& T! iI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- E) S- W4 a3 V) I/ vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! ~) Y0 D/ _' T  v; FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, c5 E8 N- h; R* o( i+ s+ j' FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' h4 `0 r* e& m" i) r" V# I! e% J% xI regret not dying
+ A5 `7 p- A& t# P7 l: oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' L; A& Q: ?/ j) ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ w1 g) d, @+ B0 R- W: J# q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& ^/ J5 P, d, {' f# o* D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' \5 @; F- b. z2 h. C! D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* S2 n4 e, o7 l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. `* H9 @/ J) ]8 Z. I2 u3 v' k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  L3 p" x  H2 N- P% z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" \" U5 S1 s- ^6 t$ S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& B' H& E( T- B7 I2 ]& y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 l2 ?) n5 U6 _3 D5 U$ l- t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: I, h* e% Z+ O$ l- A, N' i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. d- M, \1 F& F& d# W1 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 V& Y- p+ q8 b0 k$ o4 P) }2 a) b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 f% @4 E. G# w4 b5 W5 Z. h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! Z- h& P5 H, P: e( h! f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 s, G- ~" K" e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" v* h/ r4 h' k' W0 V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 ]% ~0 o, A: a; p# D5 [( e<P>I regret not dying</P>
' V5 I* o  L3 C: M, `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 |/ _2 F1 b7 A, D! E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" v  b# X% g4 y6 _  j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 B! @2 ]; I" n* @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ s/ x: r2 y9 X- q- F2 j" a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. c" J8 x4 x+ y' k2 F6 w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. v4 W" w% y3 g  I- f, ~& }  R2 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 s: [, F. Q5 L8 q( U) `7 ?* _我请你剖开它
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4 J) t3 _8 L1 v/ A6 |1 S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>