【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( u$ i2 c: x* Q) B- hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. @: o) J% e" x+ U. i3 F) h, L* \2 M9 ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 F% u+ Q& l# H: M: c: I. xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ C' E9 Q/ z# N/ }. R+ ^# ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. b. U! g" c9 C; DI love you I love you with all my heart
, I; _. q: }8 g3 {- a9 ]$ DNothing can compare to my love
3 V% e  c) v0 i- z& c- G1 A1 V2 PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 }' F  \1 \% q! }1 J* `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 f( U- y' A0 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: R; f" G. y4 x! j3 @5 \' r( BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) ^3 ~4 o# ]/ W  {. ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ j# B% h9 c; HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& y( c% U4 a; T$ [9 @& E1 Z  ^8 k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- k' U0 ~( _' C& z4 U* u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 Q, D6 ^2 R7 N3 p# L7 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: A; D+ n4 N) q6 T' ~- u. g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. F" n5 x* y! j3 h* _& [: g6 }% }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  j4 \+ _" w' A' n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 @" S8 k# F# G9 L2 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ e1 `2 @$ K9 v& B0 h# f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. c$ y# j7 s& E+ h! N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: u1 W7 V0 P* q6 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 K+ S. @+ b2 @/ g  |* F! b. B# Z( w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% ?3 l  m4 r5 }7 l: c4 h) G; c<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ x* \( y# B& g/ ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 Q' J' E& T! g  m; i# Y1 {  X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 o( b8 s' j' \2 q* i- h: L4 s6 D! a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: D3 g% q9 \% Z6 K1 X. M, k5 m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 j; ~6 S& z: z& p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ H& Z* ?0 W9 ?3 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 {! F' R9 [4 W1 T. d% z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- q5 A8 T8 W: c- r4 Z) Z+ m5 h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, U5 Y9 B* N. R4 _% _3 q! W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 k$ a, g+ n# N# H: O+ A8 f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 u/ o& R  \% I/ {, V7 i$ p; g. Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% b2 l$ K" O+ y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& G/ f$ @/ d2 s4 o# k' c. d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 C4 f: M$ Q& M  ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ t6 y8 H/ \+ J* V) f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' ]5 f2 }/ d* U. o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 {2 N3 t8 v0 h0 Q- {  K+ c' G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 w  v. z4 w4 j9 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 F/ [9 q/ w7 t& o- `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 [" R" n1 E0 K5 d我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>