【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 x( p* n5 B, |; {4 G* J. H) R- W: NWith the moon kissing it every night
- K7 i$ e2 E" H! H2 n' K7 KSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 N+ }+ J6 j& O2 eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ J! e; J3 y0 _* v: P6 Y- DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" z, p3 m3 d! ?% R9 v% mNothing can compare to my love
0 d& ^5 s+ m+ M  U7 cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 _8 [. w  j2 h7 cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 v2 V' L; L# ]) II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 ~7 u' o& f/ o$ K2 P9 F2 K" s$ H5 @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, B0 ^6 D4 X1 P# ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% a3 c5 K; f  a. U$ f( p7 q: }/ y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: n* E7 W4 u! t' x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 ^6 i# e2 [' n5 g, f) X/ h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( t5 i5 @4 D8 v. ?6 i6 |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 ~6 G: D! u9 A" {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ m' x* `! b- V1 ^" ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 y8 k+ y! U: J$ G" h2 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 Q: Y$ o$ a/ ~4 f/ B! W' J- Q" S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, N% U* C( h0 `. ~* s1 M1 r! p( [; k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, m* k& y) x7 C' _  W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" ]: Z7 W1 v% ~: F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 h6 p  ]$ J: \, c' d. v, I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" [% g( {" a2 j4 V! Z' z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 d: m! G1 U. e- M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ R; \7 o) M3 j  K6 Z( R2 z) f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 d  }. x! P/ }1 s& {8 }) B! X  P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 Q% `+ V9 m3 _$ W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  z9 b* s5 j6 a4 |% R# i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' u3 J. c% G9 K# O' O" o8 R, D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! G4 u( \; g5 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% J3 I$ \( s3 Z8 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ T) F  }1 l% L2 d# O: c+ \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- ^% j$ `! y) t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, K! z2 P7 a  I9 I4 |8 i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) j7 q. N4 w% a3 Y+ X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" ]) O2 q6 g* K; d3 X* Y& d我请你剖开它

9 i+ U6 M, _( s) X2 Z& q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>