【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ t" ]. M) ]. F( x' ^( g5 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, [5 X6 \2 T9 @8 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& }* B' Y& Y, p$ Z' ]" NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 f+ c: k, w! O+ yThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 |; k: l+ u) n, e, C) vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 J7 C5 D! W3 b4 [% ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 @, Y5 d! V" `; \6 R( sNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ [6 s' B/ Q" T5 A/ d: kI want so much to see inside your heart
) {( W9 W+ F* N. u* T& J, vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 h' V) I0 y  o) S; W2 n. Y; Q9 m1 W7 O; JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. g# C! X+ L! z- p6 DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& l! M* L- T' o; {! W* T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 m4 G: E! I! V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, C  U8 B6 [+ y) A4 V4 h, @  F7 G, R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" @3 i2 u2 e+ t6 i- `' A  W' b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- H/ \! N6 T4 p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 O7 f) r" A  d3 Y$ }! f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 L2 v$ e) u* N8 A+ u7 M/ f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* T% K0 @4 U+ B5 p, }: s3 Q% X9 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. W" c( l/ I/ N7 C& V! _; a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  T9 q  J. ^0 W" r' h4 c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 l3 }% N- d7 m3 n+ E" N( k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 Q% m+ Q6 n7 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 J# d8 ]( R7 O( ~2 x" E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 u) q; `+ i5 q! |. U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' u& b  H, D& ~1 i5 O6 Y0 Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' Z8 S2 r: N# M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% ]. g3 [. E: ^8 D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% A: c! c- A6 j1 p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 I3 C9 F, M$ R3 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 R, A% d8 C. r6 @0 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ G% ?" H; Z3 R* q, H  w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 ?( g3 O0 e5 Y" ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 j3 {( l) c/ e9 Z9 r  k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 S: [' ], Z9 Q: u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 a3 ^. ^) u& j4 E- Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 g( |/ B" d! j0 g1 U7 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( D( M: e+ h: G& @5 i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) x/ G& ]1 j6 p' v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* X: e! q5 g! X+ R, n/ K  q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ s. _, |% n* x* z! f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 v6 [% \' d$ C& G我请你剖开它

& q7 k& o; d9 g* G, e3 J* U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) _' ]8 C5 }, Y/ l# U5 @1 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>