【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& U" d# X  M) y' jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 H/ O* R' v. h8 q& x9 _8 }- kWith the moon kissing it every night
! |; ^( R1 j. k" B5 K' ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% t) C0 j) ~; C" IEvery other word you utter is love
  A1 b2 p( w3 w7 zI really want to know just how much you love me
; S0 M- r( a. M% b: m$ K8 L! ZI love you I love you with all my heart
8 f/ }! K6 @! p! dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 e4 D% g: F7 L8 X+ aI want so much to see inside your heart
; Z% e1 b6 P. |9 T/ `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! e- h4 W" m4 H1 @3 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% c, ~% U$ r. a  Q4 N+ B; J0 v) lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ t& L. v/ i) U. I* u8 N+ l' E: VWith such a tongue as yours,
; m# n: C  c7 Y8 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 k1 R* A; N& g* N% W' QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 R0 G5 Z/ Q% |5 R0 c. qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 B. M- y7 _2 K8 e9 e9 d( K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 m! p+ j" E: n' y$ X+ H) Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: o8 {( n& T3 \* g  d( _' {4 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 |6 R  D/ D! t" T0 ^1 [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! P- P) r: S7 n9 p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 N' D: ]1 J$ P6 @, x; R" Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  u8 N3 x# }6 b9 x8 W# H* B( x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' b2 O  Z7 ^  R7 Q1 h; g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' ?, b/ m; j' T" T  U2 q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ T3 g9 m. j* U+ z+ M! M( k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' i% y5 Z/ \8 \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' U; x) g$ e# A! c, S/ p. i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, X5 A. I8 `  I0 s2 b7 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 s" T  Y* f- @. W7 B4 q5 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( K9 r6 U$ Y# L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% C  k7 T5 \' k( g. j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ E" \7 x: y/ s1 L1 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) M# g( n; C/ L8 ^0 \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 r/ g: J8 d( z: N* a5 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 i" l% Q" i. x. o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" R5 G0 i6 w9 a9 Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' \* c7 z+ V9 S6 ~. G* A& s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: l' {2 t0 C# E  H- g5 E- D$ E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 s: B. S9 V) B9 t6 x. o2 L$ X: Q2 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  {# i+ U: m5 {) m/ C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, V/ x3 o* b5 O& ?: I  @我请你剖开它

4 f) p7 d7 j7 F3 {6 f& V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>