【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. v$ `; _0 e) }  ?3 G7 T/ cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 S# @1 F" D+ V' sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( h! f2 F* S$ ?% p' b" Y" CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! ?9 z8 ?+ N5 R8 d) y. A: SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( r5 E0 E* z4 I0 BI love you I love you with all my heart
) I; Q9 D+ ^2 R# v1 NNothing can compare to my love
* _$ o7 \/ j/ V8 x9 h4 k! o, CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* ^, p' l  \$ J7 f8 XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  X+ U) l" Y/ {9 M2 Q1 j7 I; HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 j* O( E+ h8 |5 Z5 P  SI’m still filled with fear
5 U) _5 Q) |7 F( QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) W, W8 q' n% l1 O; s: XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 r, t, s9 P9 r. m2 R3 a% Q- m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# G6 n9 ^' ^/ e, {3 j! v4 _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 u8 L5 v$ |! g, l, s2 J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ t! f; |2 N% X) V5 H' a2 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. Y9 k* o: \# _6 k: j, u; c. o9 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: S/ |5 h( v) o9 e, `5 A/ F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 K" ]7 b2 j( Q6 ?& ~0 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ s- I  [) v4 B; d0 N, O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, y- ]0 z  C: `% F% f8 T' O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! z, E$ J' U( w* r" G0 \<P>你无需担心</P>
/ E0 y- c( P) ^4 w9 Q( ]: l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 D3 [3 A0 d! b1 j9 e. x1 Y1 [. u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- O) g+ V& V' k. f7 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 j8 ]4 x  ]4 W9 D* I8 H6 L" y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* N9 a, Z! W6 f: ^7 \$ `" V3 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; o8 w0 V( ^" p* h3 t5 C' i- v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* A2 i$ I8 j" M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; A# v% w+ L/ m  g. ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! k. }) J$ i2 k" B4 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! V! K9 ?1 t% }+ G( n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 k; A2 w6 J$ A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) U1 Z- c% _2 s+ E5 ^0 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ S' {3 u- Y# N3 |7 g* w9 V# X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ X- M0 `$ l# k4 N% W: W. H9 O: P& k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" V+ S7 e7 Z) D) R! f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# A& t* H  P0 H5 ]$ I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 ?0 m- s# x; K- a8 j) l; _/ S& t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 W8 L* L; s: d% l, l9 @. D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, r2 c8 y8 D9 a; Y6 y4 J4 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& t1 ]- ]+ k2 Z. C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 G4 _4 n/ a* _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& p! H4 M6 B1 |+ j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ w4 ^+ n) Q( C我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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