【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# b) _  D5 L& W8 XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: t9 M) M; `) R! X  l* \) N7 }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 r( B4 q& y, G1 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" i! d5 D6 `% a+ f) \+ ^) pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 ~2 Y. A4 |  h* s9 YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 [$ f% z5 @$ x" v& ]6 W% C+ KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ H5 g0 z1 S* Q' YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) s" A. @( i) p' oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- J' ^/ n: i! Q: QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" v- ?4 R, X2 F/ E# G- |I’m still filled with fear
7 {. G5 U% x4 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ d' }1 ^* B- G7 W4 e. q5 oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" v* \- l. J8 @' ~5 k- v: Z; nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 Y  c, }0 B" C: k  S* ]6 u- m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; a+ k: n! \$ l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ Y& ?/ k: R8 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# s0 w. n$ ]* i; D5 g7 f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' e) ]. G8 X0 Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 C+ L# x5 p2 B2 K' }. W, [; z/ c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) N5 ~: x) m" R2 l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 i0 R% |7 X, J' n6 h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 |$ R6 h; W  ^7 u4 K" e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 X+ F" G5 h+ ]4 {5 @* z<P>你无需担心</P>
% I$ O" f9 B4 w8 H# v* A" u# O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: T8 ^+ k; L0 E& s1 O) p/ ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) x) o5 E0 X+ d6 r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 S5 M/ Z1 z* J) t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ ^5 J. M3 h1 _6 b2 u0 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: |1 v' X4 i1 g. ]+ B) j4 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; E/ `2 _, L' }( G% X) x" `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 F5 S, |' o7 J1 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; i$ M- y/ h, Y; Y6 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 |& [! ]9 N8 @* n/ E; l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. ^1 ?9 u2 h; X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# j# A" O$ `* p. |) e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% G% m" T8 X# p( ?. Z  |6 [& d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 p+ u3 \; p, v7 ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ }) e' `& o( M0 y( @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. T6 C; Z9 K( d% D0 M3 X4 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' y' w& j0 ~7 W$ t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>