【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
; Q9 x. k- a) c2 X( ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
. x( v% t* J* ^3 PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 L/ c8 I6 d% t# [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 j2 a- @- B3 E& KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; k. [) n$ r+ O* C2 IEvery other word you utter is love
! x- z! P+ s4 U/ DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 d& K4 D8 A! _; o; F0 J7 WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' [3 Y) i( P* S) j/ V  MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# b7 F' N$ {& ]0 A$ C- S- W' OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* y" z. @$ ^. @I’m still filled with fear
! [( [5 {% ~9 D; Y. E( kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; e) U- X- N7 g0 o) p* U) @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! M+ I7 ^1 p: q1 `1 EWith such a tongue as yours,
2 y  w) j+ e$ E6 H4 a0 mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 E. m+ P3 [2 O" ]% Y; X7 ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: P- v7 A3 J; V7 H' [( V4 ^# dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ S) b* l+ i$ y1 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" E1 e0 C/ }* V4 z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' y1 N8 `! k/ ~1 L" \% g, Z/ b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# a0 |3 {- q, O2 p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' k# \  z/ a& Q5 ]5 a* W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* n: T6 Z* U7 U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# `* ]( g# a- ~2 V: E1 b5 n# x8 c1 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: D' ^+ `6 U9 X3 U& Q! G2 E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. E* a* f" {0 F+ v# U6 a% |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: @" l! R' _) x; F9 {; O4 C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( V$ T0 a. m0 ^( P, }9 T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" N4 O4 Z% c- W4 L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ A) L7 j$ b7 _7 G! ?' m7 |) q* @0 I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& i' P8 Y  S: V( t0 D. ]1 i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" B  t3 z4 W6 Q5 Z+ d* T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. d1 `0 y4 U/ A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; i: c- J% ?; o7 P+ Z2 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 p8 j0 o+ C8 [) D) [2 x# r2 `1 \0 U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 ^) J$ M- M; a! ]- ]2 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; L1 m# V: `. o: R6 D+ p: A- b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# v5 n9 L, {1 Y# [4 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 w$ Y% T. F, y5 o  ?$ N& U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 H) p  q6 q. P( i5 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! Y8 n5 h# M  _0 h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 {# f, q# [2 |, T+ T% C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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7 u% k( h9 O) ?5 L% A' w& K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>