【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" N! O' n$ t2 I/ N" ]( n9 ?0 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( k, S1 U8 {2 I: y. a0 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 N4 c* W1 S, q' V& B: A& j. \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; c% w7 m8 O" e4 [7 ?' M; JWith the moon kissing it every night
8 i0 a( z' q1 c9 g1 Y3 P& i+ W* qSeeing the sky content with its love
; P7 x: K4 f! _. z  w- nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- y8 R3 a, g4 t, L/ }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 N/ c" e7 q+ f- m- S. [I love you I love you with all my heart
/ ?. f& a9 {* P: d; f5 H) CNothing can compare to my love
; F9 W' M' U  {% J5 D' e  S7 x' ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* v- i! r5 i# M$ z% NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 T+ ]8 c$ A! v0 j# Q9 oI want so much to see inside your heart
3 K( Q" F6 m1 t5 {" zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 {( G  q9 S8 f  v! ]) `$ z! d! cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( P4 k- @4 i; ]With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 M! F8 F. j4 X0 A9 Z) r1 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, y3 Z1 l/ q' b2 o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ \8 U+ {4 l8 \' b9 |  s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 e+ F9 `  b) R  o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! t* c7 X  x3 y6 P' \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 h9 l8 d# ?  w; t$ d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 u! R7 K. G$ t3 c3 j4 R$ N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- r3 \, S; i! F6 l, V+ |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 Y2 h& f( r, ?* N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& B5 G+ y( v5 {2 j+ _' T# W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- @2 a0 c+ P% F. x; ~4 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( U2 U8 P' S1 s5 \$ s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ ]; t9 c3 ~" P) s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ C/ t# h; t2 M3 G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ q2 O! Y6 `4 E$ j8 v* v- Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 F" e+ {! ~0 B0 y! K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 s1 D  }" F+ n% b9 I! z1 W3 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 ^% `0 L( y# m, }1 E; x' g+ @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 v: M4 Y4 a6 q0 g% n  j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! r3 a1 w9 b+ `* D* i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 @- {6 ^% l9 {: _( N3 C" H/ i9 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( f/ l$ f' w3 v( u9 n9 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 R+ G5 y. K1 }! q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- m+ a9 m8 R1 }3 T. `- R0 h1 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 F( `% M9 s( c, L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! M6 L, w9 G0 t3 W" f' a/ ?, d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( G9 l5 j8 l# H* a3 p+ y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: E- D1 I# ~; {5 ~6 G% {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 d' e. }3 s7 h& C8 o5 x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& W& O2 H. d" s2 G& Y; d. ]+ e8 v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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