【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 z- ]% i/ u9 C/ {8 l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ B8 w: V" v1 ~4 Q+ jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" _% X9 Y' z: w1 _With the moon kissing it every night
/ p- a4 I) H. {; b. ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* ?# q5 n( b4 k2 ?9 S: Q1 T% iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 f, Y' |; |3 p9 A3 fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, k" H: A2 Q+ W% CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 T8 p7 l! l# v" k' QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# O1 W3 b* d) o( b  N9 BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 v% ]/ t9 K' @0 q, ?9 P5 C& kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  `: L' a( b3 g( f+ D1 BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 b* G/ ?7 @, y/ T. A4 e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 }% O8 \) D7 P6 w+ J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ n8 u' P4 s  B" z0 F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& _$ ?4 j, g# C5 V0 Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 M5 s. [  r' y. E" T. Q1 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 b6 J  U, T6 |/ D3 F$ a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 t9 z) a) I  X7 Y+ w; S( `8 C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- {% m" A0 f7 w) w- ^  b3 I+ H( W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ |& m( w) \, Y- S/ A9 I8 n7 i( E5 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ v% J2 c2 {$ s. ]8 J$ Q; m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: C7 L- [5 ~) i% X# i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- [, A3 U( ?. p; A3 V3 b, Z& {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% c4 [( G- Y9 l! {& p8 T+ n6 E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 @, k( T9 c. @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* b3 y& L% W$ O0 J" U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* h3 w3 M" ^1 j  }  p) K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! }2 {: |3 A/ s, f2 h$ _; [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( S, d+ v8 h7 D6 ]( V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" v3 [: a+ X3 `6 c' a3 r$ F" b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 U3 [$ ]2 l" w) D0 r% z; {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 ^; l' A2 R( q- E- x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- Z  D5 w0 H; \% `& {/ J3 u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 N; G0 O0 Y: w2 C( B  n! J' i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 H3 @8 K2 a0 u( Z# {7 [2 [+ ]8 M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 ^' D" v/ t# k: v! a% e+ l6 j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; n( t6 [9 ]& S& G1 E% [6 v3 W( d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 [, e2 V/ W1 p* l" }  S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 b8 {3 N% X0 A( i  t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 B: k* n# Z9 w2 q. O* }8 h* F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' p5 j3 n5 w, p, s( I  S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 ~+ m/ l" E* B* F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ `4 K) ]* A) \) G/ N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 v' r" }$ q5 b我请你剖开它

6 ?" o+ b! B$ _* a* ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>