【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" p# w9 E4 R2 v% E& z歌词我附在后面。
# e, ?. Q3 C  ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
# i7 W, n6 W2 @7 B' uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& J( F% |. c4 L! L) G2 yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 E1 u5 W- m9 N& v. |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" V7 v# h+ @5 t; {I really want to know just how much you love me
/ _, ^( h! |  v6 mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ h( D! T4 U, v6 P$ f8 Z4 N+ `0 KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ h8 ]5 }3 B1 ^& k+ r, |: HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" T  M, @$ h" B+ W- aI want so much to see inside your heart
9 A3 c, p: H0 E! ]' S$ x# FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* ]0 M  S8 K( A# u5 f2 T8 n4 s/ SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ q. T/ U. g/ e; W1 O" ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& e+ N% R0 h! M1 i$ W/ @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 @% i7 H) I. b& J4 yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; `4 x9 O5 T2 @1 h9 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ k* h, K% ?9 Y2 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: M. v" @8 Z5 H9 j- |; j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ L1 l- s$ G! O9 Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* E' Z, J0 ?- T: ?2 W: V5 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 I4 l8 ^: L0 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 T, U9 f6 L/ h/ f/ a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) {7 |+ I# ]; o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  I) r8 D1 Y8 \/ B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 H  }$ \  i7 b8 o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ O% G6 k7 @3 K. w. B/ s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 o: I: l! ?+ g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# G! E* r! t' X! Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 U, l0 w) o3 K2 y( w- N! N8 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; l7 o/ @/ T, n  j8 _# `/ r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 T& U; X+ b  ]+ k& I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( H  |9 I. L! U$ M. }1 Q5 N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' \  ?1 y+ w9 o" u) u4 S! ^" y6 b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 W- ^9 Y+ O! Y9 D- [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" g0 ?! L  f9 e" \- r) q$ G% W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 q0 N5 ~% y) @! c. D8 J  j2 A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, h9 f$ ]8 C# `7 R7 Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: H( Q# R; a9 H$ d  R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ I% y( C0 e, S. S" {) D! N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

; |$ l) @1 F' q3 O9 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>