【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 a, A% Q" k- [, F* F' g5 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' j8 ?! c7 ^7 s1 m  ]4 o7 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, {, ^! }0 h/ D9 O1 ~: |( S( oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. t* E1 Z. ]8 Q' f. t+ `1 E$ oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 Z# M- l) D3 bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- ]5 V8 K; C! A$ PNothing can compare to my love
  s# |5 w7 r2 ^. |0 D$ xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 q# h/ M& Y* \- G! T- rI’m still filled with fear
' }7 `/ I6 @4 t6 w9 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( D8 n9 x  x+ A9 JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 o/ M  k0 G" ?% S2 \9 o/ R. bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& G. q5 p5 w! y  D) `7 I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 K+ e' J. K  h! k; I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 s$ S* [' j5 ]1 A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 F3 ^3 e" i- l) [* b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 @" h1 W& X9 V2 K3 A( y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. x% n, O- d$ s& V! C2 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% x6 w% e( g' L( M- i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# V  S( }3 r; s! f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: r' g; b5 w/ J6 E5 X8 l. H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 b/ n& d7 S$ `6 |( R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. x$ l* S& \3 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ s& M/ |: g/ `% h  r9 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 u4 P% [; v% u* s! V) T; Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& q6 o' t4 o0 ^- @5 p$ ^<P>你无需担心</P>
5 m) E# U7 i" Y) D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ ^4 B% D' M8 I5 ?' p8 O: y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  B- S# Z  r& h  W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 p) l( B. G  l1 N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! G  A, {/ c' u8 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. w# t" Z3 _1 P+ ?5 w( i. G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 {: ?" F6 d6 y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 T9 y4 ~7 L, m" e5 q, E: E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% Q/ N7 W, k- Q. {" L% y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; @2 M: S8 i1 ]( P" S* X: l1 ^+ w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 S  u" J  d' v2 i# ]# k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% x1 K! L/ q; E3 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* S8 y3 Q: c, T) h: J8 w2 N; l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! N9 A4 V% I: J9 X* {2 ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# T4 h" ~$ w& B' i3 C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 D& P2 o8 V* L& ^* x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- _6 J) U  Y& r1 {  @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: h0 Z0 c! r1 x' ]1 {我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>