【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 i; G, C' a# V  H  b* xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  E- B* Y* l2 ]) ?" Y5 r) B9 j  QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! M' T5 Y% @$ }9 B' rWith the moon kissing it every night
- X, [% X0 G" z2 T7 w0 G- Y" fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ h& e* j* j: t, H' I' D* A5 rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 l% I, l3 y  VEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 c8 `5 [6 W' W8 ^# ?9 x5 k. EI love you I love you with all my heart
, U: S8 |# Z# p* j& sNothing can compare to my love
/ ~8 c0 A4 k: M: w. z# n' m& rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 A6 H* U- R4 ^8 r7 k# n9 \( F9 w' AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 J$ K6 _! R# t' g4 I+ NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& m8 K; |- y, ^1 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 W. i2 G  |5 N. o4 ?  e% q; [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 y( b* N( Y, D* Y3 p! ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- f) w1 V" U$ ^) \+ F: S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% o# q% O) s. d% G. _! D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 t. D* P0 d' u" Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  o8 [5 G  K( H! [/ v* R# ~9 {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ Q: e( f, g3 p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 Q+ i# y4 B& N8 a4 S# U1 q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 q" e) g( q  z: F/ o6 r3 N' p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; M! v- l' h/ O9 C! V3 w/ H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 Z$ w* h4 G3 a8 Y. V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# ~" X) X, P( u2 `( k8 t, D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 M/ J4 \1 }8 ]2 x1 ]' c4 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 e( x. `& W7 m- R; Y7 k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 L2 `; R6 s( X6 Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  G3 ~/ O  S9 Z# z/ X' P6 _7 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 r$ Y% \  C" |+ Z/ t& ?3 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; D6 x$ L4 E$ Z2 D% F9 h' I! H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. u0 C; _2 V0 f) l0 b+ @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& X* u& ]+ g* M/ w) D3 d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 W8 Y+ c' T  Q* m" y. e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( ?5 K  \0 A& \1 T, Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- P* i7 |( b+ M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. l. K( W' [1 D4 \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 H. D+ p# o) i6 `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) P$ N$ E" x; J& s& i- ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' ^9 k! |; ~2 m+ \9 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 J! B* {! w" c+ l! ~% @9 c5 a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

6 \9 }1 N8 T' w5 } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>