【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" [/ X5 D  Z* B/ _3 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 w! R, ?8 w) aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ z# E8 {% q1 X+ j2 j% H* TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 }) ?. {4 ^8 L" ^" \7 X' sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ D2 s, Y* v) |* f9 M' s3 m9 QEvery other word you utter is love
7 y; ?1 t; U0 p/ q$ q3 rI really want to know just how much you love me
: G) L5 Z- ?( `8 e1 b3 |+ \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ X0 q7 A, k8 |) Z2 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" {! H5 q$ I6 o  L! |+ c- YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ Q/ _/ T; e9 n* gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 ^" ^6 h2 y) E& DI regret not dying
( q, X+ b( e' L# i# q' CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, n4 k  Y) ~* ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; {5 R+ }( ?/ `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: H! I! d0 z) `/ D5 L- q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 i* E: h5 r- u$ r1 n  J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 h* v3 T3 m8 K7 W- G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ y: {! C# l  Z0 n0 J% ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: d9 R+ P) n7 z9 d8 O$ I. @3 Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 u7 E6 \$ m& v+ m: W2 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  U1 z3 R; [4 p0 c9 s$ a+ F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! p$ Q1 c' K) z" r8 F; O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ Y2 n/ w! b4 F, @% d. A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 `% T8 Y5 Y6 H- J6 S, d6 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. i6 N! V9 Z8 x* M1 V<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 Q  y- e* e2 W1 U; Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 R. p# }% O2 w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& H8 v4 F+ d* o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! C- @2 S9 Y3 Q# Y! f/ N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  F0 c$ w, Q2 `, ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ |+ O7 H4 }# E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' k; d3 c* n' D( ]( B+ w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 b* v: P) K+ A+ v1 P0 L! v' N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# |! r* E* v. `3 q, ]/ i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; \2 C8 t% G. U- d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) t* d  B* j& n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 n) W$ X; L$ j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; z) I# V& Y; v. o; Y) P) S: z! b% h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 R% K9 a0 ?$ c; t' M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 j$ K+ Z/ @3 O0 I& i+ p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ R! |8 P7 m) |6 e2 k/ z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 s, o( M% e* Q$ y( K# |; d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 K# t- R. c1 ^# z2 _) k. N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- Q. T$ Z) r. F- V( }# {  i, m( S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! d3 Q7 `2 Q) R+ t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# t5 c8 n+ c4 U  @( E' ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
  [* _2 n2 ~5 l  Y( G( V# g  @2 E
我请你剖开它

! ]5 s7 h" ?- ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>