【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( J! k' {" m: j  t# wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 R7 ~. ?4 `# BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ E! I  S. h( j, W; h2 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 i4 \+ q( A6 t  V* e+ lYou needn’t fear anything
9 x: }  }. h6 X9 ]+ B( hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ \5 N* ?1 `8 NI love you I love you with all my heart
" H' Z- c" u& v7 n6 Q( GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 h; H1 M7 C, {) L# x/ T4 bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. a$ E+ m( B1 ?( A9 k. Q% e9 k$ T* ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ N( |$ X% f& n% RI’m still filled with fear
6 v3 ^3 G( U% ?( ~6 K. @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" F: q1 f9 ^; u. [I regret not dying
: \- p+ l. d+ zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' w6 M0 S8 b1 }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: d- y& i* I% L- y5 u6 J1 QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' b: C! {' H2 _, P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ w  W' ?6 f+ D* q' O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; g3 v; Y) W( c% r3 R& w4 I; g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ O7 e) p  W. T3 [# N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ Z; |& [/ `* e# o4 g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' B2 R( J& ~1 ~2 ?$ _5 v/ Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ O! x0 m; u8 F2 i& d' t4 P# k! i; {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 k* B+ X2 g  K4 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! P7 y9 K: O. e! N$ t& n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. Z6 q* L" h6 p9 [  S7 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 k, Q! t- M5 e8 I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( z5 U, ^9 g7 c% S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! x% x8 S1 m0 D) ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ m; |: y* m: f7 b7 y# R6 ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 ]( n, l+ H& w9 |& ~1 d* q3 S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& n( Q# f9 ]  T( o! T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: [9 b' j! v$ B' i) N: z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 T  B4 ?' U' ~" _0 z9 d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ w1 F; E' ]: g9 C* X9 F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% V- b; D. m" k  ~( d) t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& v8 ^7 P) N$ U; u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% C2 }. `" H0 B: }" t: _9 b6 q7 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ G0 s( ?4 O7 O+ F7 S4 s( u5 f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 |) p) W* b2 G* V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ N+ `( S/ }# t+ N' K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 E6 I' U" K% g5 E) q% n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 W0 A4 X8 `$ Q3 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* n+ Z! X# Q6 c# j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; S. ~1 I0 t' D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& Y( u7 y2 {6 P  F1 H6 q: J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 @$ b. M7 L+ X# e  w/ `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 N* L' K  {) D2 e7 r我请你剖开它
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- c9 F6 Z6 c' Z; c9 B  g5 G1 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, w# Z  C8 j+ R4 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>