【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# [( j) l! \6 u# Z  s, U& G" L+ U6 ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  s1 J1 n5 L8 J6 h2 gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 l7 H" d3 `2 }% M% h  N1 `The sky is happy down to its soul
  g2 r8 m; h$ m3 _+ vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# e. m: |! h, z% h/ |1 |Every other word you utter is love
. q; z0 \3 P- JI really want to know just how much you love me
- i/ G& w, D- d% n' l; yI love you I love you with all my heart
0 D* Q! a. }/ R& s' S, dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 Z! J8 y: A: _. H. n" e1 TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ B4 w# B6 R( G& l( ?. }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ f8 x* ?, \) V& d9 k9 mI’m still filled with fear
& ?1 M- o& [" _: g& [! S3 uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 n5 O  f) }- S! ?; Z, V) }With such a tongue as yours,
" p, \- k4 f( z* YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ Z! B: l- l9 W* b; {, NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 d# a6 p1 ]7 X* G& W7 f8 p4 Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ y$ i6 X. x8 ^3 p3 ~3 d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# J* D, U# l3 P, ?7 g" k) L" W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ ~3 o  E: a, y2 v0 R* a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% J6 K# N# g( @4 I& e: x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( l) l. r6 W$ q; N8 G9 a# @2 F1 x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  o% D( e( F. b; v- e, b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" U3 m3 U0 j  W, w! Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' c: D* f$ w( A7 e0 r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 B5 P  ?( U1 h2 {4 Q$ @3 L+ |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- X) _* `) ~9 y/ H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# P- \6 ]- J# m7 H& @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; s( A4 {# i$ i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# ^6 ~  p2 m. _. \( J8 H+ ~/ [% i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ y' \: T9 o: a: U# s# k. o0 m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 Y  L; x$ l; u5 v4 H0 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' y: K5 }0 A; u) b, H7 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 ?/ ]9 P$ S, [  d" Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. N% ^4 r1 \- N8 J" m+ P# `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 P% ?9 D+ A& H- d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, T( u3 @' l6 @1 {# D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ q0 J4 j6 t9 A# {2 e. N  I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* l. d7 ~! [# k0 t7 V4 L0 ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ j9 C* {4 [/ O5 ^4 q% R# b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 J0 G# ]+ [' ~5 `8 x8 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; B1 o; v0 v1 Q4 V: P7 x1 ^) n. ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" r$ h5 g) u3 a; V. Y: q. }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 x' k$ G0 Y+ G1 M8 l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' G; ~6 H4 A  L2 u- k6 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% R6 q7 z! C1 g% P8 L2 k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

! S) R( q7 C, H8 O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>