【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
5 @$ z1 }8 J# \6 ?/ z. ]( d
<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>


% C& v$ y" G% c9 Y+ G歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- T% b! m. A0 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# V2 j* m! ^! T' m, RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ ]+ l1 v$ S2 e3 p, t; bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" {8 n& d' [* H" H+ ENothing can compare to my love
# o4 {+ I$ v/ e5 H- ^9 e6 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. y; K& t$ a0 \0 p  a8 T0 C4 ?* f6 @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 r  _% b0 ]! K7 G; GI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" E  `) t, N9 n0 \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( r2 A) C2 ~; P6 H& }+ lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' b- m/ p; L" e4 G8 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 C/ m" Q. D0 G
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 V$ a0 m+ h+ h! n: ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ f2 ?5 S2 k( |; b; a: O$ D* F4 B  s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  ~, U; Y' ~4 y6 P& G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* \; Y; z0 p  e# f3 e- a, h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# e" J- [! p+ H8 j' ?2 c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# P: s, G/ j8 h- C5 F3 f- ^' e1 ]0 P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 t! S7 t4 D2 A  q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* S! m+ X/ U8 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( r( }( o( I. W! O' G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 q3 A( I  W" F9 D7 d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 ?( y! I  q4 v4 g, k4 c2 c- E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 J0 f( V) N+ e  m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, c+ ~  p8 t- A* ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- t3 R+ f$ ~# A6 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 Y3 H3 v7 T4 N) ]' |! P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ n/ m" c* V: p- F$ F' w: T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% e4 m/ k7 {$ J, S1 u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, z! B# l( K4 a5 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& {7 U1 s1 f9 f5 W  O" e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; t3 k6 T2 B* `6 H$ N8 ^! o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' M) w/ o/ R8 c: D; {" r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 V. t$ |6 x( O9 ]$ l" d- n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 R: Y' S4 r- k1 K  J/ p! x/ C2 I  P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
9 L/ [$ o0 w6 ~  P2 @* ]& W4 x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>