【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. n% J8 g8 _& t% l2 x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. X( I6 ~+ D2 H5 O# e& dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 k2 l. j* [* z% P' FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 G; e7 s3 u: M. ?1 y/ c. P5 E8 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 n2 B1 o! S5 D3 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ [8 Y; q1 ]. o2 \3 r, ^5 \You needn’t fear anything
* m2 K0 h  U+ vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 _/ S+ @0 c2 t- K6 K# XI really want to know just how much you love me
* m0 ]$ I5 U. j, L6 c1 SI love you I love you with all my heart
+ d6 w0 c* Y' GNothing can compare to my love
8 x: ]+ p: C* F: `8 ]4 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 r8 L$ b0 N/ PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ c, l  b# J% `% F: FWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, u3 d" E2 C2 ]  Q  e  ?, N& c9 LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' A& h- R, i' ~" M0 pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ c* L, T5 w2 v, R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ [' `# Y# }; [' n) L8 I1 K5 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 A+ R# I* r: q3 I" Y, Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( L. n: ~% M, a- E8 `, `5 o  J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) S' r  |( ~/ e$ k0 d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( o. x$ d; b3 x+ f& n3 b9 o1 ?" m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; H% E, F, G$ m/ [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" G0 E4 |1 f7 D* F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 G  s& }, w- p! V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 j$ I6 t/ F+ c: a. P% C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 \+ S  @  m2 M9 r7 y& M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; D$ q* M9 E  M2 `6 y( r7 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ J) l, w7 H% Q0 V$ o6 U) G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' b- s* y0 |. I6 K' a! u<P>你无需担心</P>
1 k9 X& ~* \+ w% I& u6 q4 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ j/ d4 |) b7 N; }! B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 V! H6 g+ u: z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 @) J' X, P  E. W2 z2 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 B7 q, l* f0 Q$ W2 V- k+ z4 ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! Z7 @/ T, e) p% N- A. @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 @& J" e0 r, U) C( c: f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( ]$ g, }! _$ p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 A* @$ f  |& _7 Q5 X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: U, ]% A+ ]8 ~0 q( ]6 t! {( Y9 ~$ k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) n) _: U( A1 V/ N" p1 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 S: h' J  g6 U# k% y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  j( W- d" D2 E, ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- k7 K8 ?0 H& _- R! ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- g" p3 M  H' f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 p) l2 ?. U/ `2 O0 F8 g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  p* ?& \% z4 f: x+ \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 [* a' T+ V! m$ A+ j, p- d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ V0 J5 f8 |2 x( V3 s% u: H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- R- n$ f# i# {' i0 k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>