【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* p6 c5 @; C# }The moonlight is shining brightly,
- {+ a9 I1 Q3 a) [( K% F( S* VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, k$ L) T5 W) `* B' K, qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ {) L$ D- K% C1 N* yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 ]6 X1 Q; S2 s7 A: y  r# mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ ^* a& V& \0 b" x; k8 F$ ~+ F1 gYou needn’t fear anything
! F4 v7 H5 C! ?* _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- s; v4 m" I1 k( N/ f* nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 m% q  [; A, y7 |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% H, w8 c5 O. s& u" OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 {! j, j- X" _$ H2 P2 c9 U5 ?" K: r# UI’m still filled with fear
# ?9 `* R- o2 IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% l, ~$ L- l2 y7 n, [I regret not dying
# f9 I7 O$ U" K& mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! [4 O. G+ j8 `0 E" Y8 \$ VWith such a tongue as yours,
+ _5 `$ J) S4 W+ f8 [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- h& m- y, ]1 i% HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 M8 U! I+ ^# n4 F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ B" j% S. G6 N: h- h8 P! |  b% [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. n- p1 V2 ^; }8 G& M8 {% W. P$ A6 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' n1 `: _. [; `" q  f6 j4 }1 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ Q& M9 x) T5 E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 l7 ~# @6 _" A% R+ D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 @9 t7 t  L! r, |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 j( w( O; D) v/ I: Q7 A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 G3 q5 ~( r, R' t& s7 S  y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 J: A! P1 u# ?$ M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ n( x: F6 @- N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ t9 T! v: ^- \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 F4 K2 ]1 E7 t; E+ e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: q( @( `9 ]' ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! x" a% G4 d1 f9 l) @+ T" }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, c6 [! h$ D6 l$ {) p. g7 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 x; |  h7 z4 e/ x& n+ j8 e1 m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 z- I/ p- Z$ S7 x% B7 b% D1 Z, |! \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 W3 W  \' d/ }: }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" Q% P, g# X7 t" T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) A7 Z. A, H( v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>