【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ y5 p- U& o4 g% I; ?1 Y# {; HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 ^7 I$ r9 c- V: U, WThe sky is happy down to its soul
( S  g) I1 w6 U8 |  G! _- QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 Z4 `+ I; ]! T* L$ ~# X; _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 W2 D$ U# i5 |9 F% J9 v. OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; x4 V' y" ^) e+ w4 a/ lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ D6 k  v# \" k: p3 L8 ZI regret not dying
* ]% V, A2 T' T8 k1 DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! S% s9 O* b5 n7 z" u; N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" q1 G8 ~4 x& Z: ?) {- Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ ?! ?3 X) Q, Y0 e4 o! H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* ]% {2 E! d4 `# g/ [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- d! a8 \8 k' P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 i# ?' U+ v1 G3 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, ~9 y$ C! ^* X  c! n( p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- J1 B4 n+ v' T: l% [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, j5 ?# ?* `$ m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% Z5 _. c! v* C% x; F! I; O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 K6 N* J6 ~3 S5 m9 _6 |; D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ E5 [7 N3 P- y4 {/ S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ O' R: k+ O) b1 g% P. @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; H; d& u$ p: C& d( d* E/ s0 X- \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; v: l; Z. ]9 u! l7 ~2 V" [0 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 V3 J! }7 R& o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: Q) O) N" h6 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: k, {$ i8 [) o; f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 ~5 H& w7 m# ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 \! E# r) @6 Y  ]# G! h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ h5 D" B8 b& E" b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# N5 T2 }3 w. V+ W, s0 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. W0 m" v7 k: Z4 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# K7 P& G+ G4 G% J# E1 s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. P+ J1 u( }5 R1 a+ [7 K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* U/ U. _- F, q; B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" ]2 z" P: b. I% u" N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 }9 S- h" p! {& J) A8 A我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ X2 w  m1 E& p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>