【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, ^' q8 r! u4 ]2 SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" C) g6 y( V  |Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 j2 X9 Z! q! }# b" X! Q: [$ PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; X5 z7 {/ S$ C3 z8 \0 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
# ^0 L8 w$ T, H. SWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) s: k! P, L3 H" ^# T' B5 C9 b% s$ fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 M: n- M" s  w6 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 T2 @7 s; x! e2 m' k+ {* IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 H- Y# g1 z& ]* G5 v2 k! E+ CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) X4 a7 o9 L( b: R$ Y4 L9 TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 S6 N/ q5 O: i- N: YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) P/ Q: ]( \& DI’m still filled with fear
' G& \  D  j/ P8 _0 u  h6 }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 s6 N/ E0 B, z+ g2 j% KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 U5 I, U$ h2 s8 hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) T/ G3 y) r. l8 i; T; d: z3 q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 I2 i& K) p+ c2 W: c1 b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& l+ r5 D8 D8 r7 g# ^% ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# J- m1 l2 A+ U$ C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& O" q- [: p6 \+ y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ R* _! z& O  r5 _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: b1 M: Q- |" f; T, |7 A, J# y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 Z! w+ a% S4 {0 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 d. Q2 C0 z( z6 N6 S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% m( W6 C; d' F# J7 k, k0 Z! k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# R% _5 }. v* D0 ^3 _, S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ h# ^! m2 }( _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ |" a1 `3 f4 w% s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& }/ y! x% x, n7 y9 P( v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  M  G" l" q( T4 B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 ]5 Z& l1 n& f% M) M$ o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- H! \- B" F* N4 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# G; w* Y  ?0 L5 _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, t1 F& ?0 ]# O6 D' `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 `: N' y- n2 T: \  m0 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* F  s$ q5 l7 ~8 J4 s0 L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 k6 b6 K5 ^3 A% A2 {<P>I regret not dying</P>
- M6 q) V4 i4 O7 X' ^6 X1 g9 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 V7 x3 U' V) N  K9 f. d# J* G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 k" C; |1 u; Z* [) r- Y! v! O3 q( N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 ^$ H; r: p0 u$ m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. ~7 l: W3 @6 ?0 z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% }# A, S) E3 _$ z8 E' t& E. B% @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" \: u5 }/ t; g# E: m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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: s9 s8 q; y/ w, }- p4 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>