【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 X6 ]% }8 C4 X1 A& V" ~: FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; p: }% E$ L- r  N% m& \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' r) [7 a$ g" q  p% _7 Y% RThe sky is happy down to its soul
, r3 G# |4 j3 t) h' gWith the moon kissing it every night
; Z# ^$ Q" V. H' oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 E  H5 H2 ]& d3 MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ D" M4 {5 r% V+ k- T- wNothing can compare to my love
3 m) @7 k7 \* H) q, PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' {+ c6 S! f' [7 u. lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 j% y) m  Q9 f7 |1 K5 @/ _I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. R5 v9 d) y3 p9 j! K- AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 o; z) B6 `9 `7 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  ]1 E1 M% l# h4 F! }( z4 t8 FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: L, M8 E% w+ i- G! n9 QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" y3 d/ u% F5 D9 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# B7 K6 D. \, b9 D5 h3 f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# s7 w. c1 O5 r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 N! u+ g6 }* V+ l/ N+ O0 x* {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 @- W8 i$ |0 T. b1 w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 }: d( ?1 v' L  R: k+ l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, D; @; D; Y/ u# A' ~# h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  C  f6 K8 F) p  y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" y2 z$ O. U- z+ O/ a0 r* s  x/ W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: c* N5 n0 l# g1 Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, ~" }, i) c6 E# d& o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 }- t! F$ g. K0 |% F9 o1 d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 C$ |+ m8 E6 Z) d$ O8 K6 H: u$ X6 C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 r8 g$ o* a% N$ c& _# m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) D5 R! z* n% M; Y  b/ Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) Y) T$ G! X' y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) D+ G, T5 Z5 R  b' t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ ^3 e) y; ?6 R  W1 C7 {' c# h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* V' C$ E& G' @" |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! J! }/ i) }' j7 Z) Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: [8 `" m- S8 w! M: @0 K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. w4 o" n/ G& W2 C: F6 e+ }& T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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