【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  T5 P7 }7 v4 R% f8 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 w1 y/ @! L; BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 G) P' E; d* R7 R& t' [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# \5 l7 U! @! ^/ e! u  Y& b% J! gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 x- b- e) ^. U$ s- P! w0 a" d" AI love you I love you with all my heart
3 I6 B; H! i  o: C' f3 YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' i. c3 z* p3 K# FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ ~3 M$ Y$ c' D" V0 {) s, ]& eI regret not dying
7 G" v) V( r9 [1 h0 N3 B! D1 J4 x2 }! OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% y. {6 _6 ]/ q- t4 Q: j/ f! L1 }) ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 j; I6 S5 A8 I4 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 x. W: I1 s6 r0 b% v' I& i, R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' N! i) u$ [' `  x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 x3 n/ c, D  s1 B  q3 b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ ?/ Q9 n/ Y' r! i5 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( M: ^2 x/ h8 w% [4 q  p( Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* u% z/ {3 e+ N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) J* k6 l* n! I1 I# `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& p# l/ f9 Y8 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  }2 S. B; z4 {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& C, @; x+ E' U: f+ b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( {' d* f& U" a# N4 J5 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# x2 K; D: M' S: g+ d( x4 H- k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; I' b3 ]! A" @# K3 e  ~4 K" `1 ?% X6 h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. R3 N: I  B( G! V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 Z8 M/ |2 e3 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- ]3 f5 _! R. @2 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ K! f/ ^& T8 H8 A8 n! U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ Q" v9 _! `; b0 q7 l+ ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! M1 L3 ~) J6 W) O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- Y2 O: i, N  l+ a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! q4 {* d- K% s0 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! c+ |; g$ A* {; M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. L1 P7 J0 N. b( P% Q5 U2 }, j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 f0 X$ i; `7 l7 f$ }% K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 E3 ~" ^9 U) y0 s" z6 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 A2 }  Q' i9 R% j' d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 ~) a" H9 J9 R$ s$ q, y; x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ ~' c$ [3 Y& U! i8 r' E7 Z7 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- q8 u; j7 H2 i: D9 g7 E. @4 `0 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 ~1 T: N% x- A/ H! K5 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 M7 }5 s/ T, Z4 B/ C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% R: f8 F5 b2 W2 s$ Q; W3 v1 {7 r; U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, _6 L( E: K% ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 J  K* T6 D4 B) P. w* l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 O2 t$ q( B. _: _0 Q我请你剖开它

  K: F! @1 ?( M( b9 m4 G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 B, E/ d" J* j1 u" I, A- j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>