【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
3 z/ A8 ~0 |* _2 M7 `+ O$ r
<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
/ V% z; V; Z" B7 L: u
5 h1 W  W6 v/ r: j! M
) {* I4 \& Q1 b歌词我附在后面。
; u  X5 S0 H& T% OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: a, K" z: j  @7 y  I" PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ \# o1 g: O, x* s" ]9 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& p; D" r: l! q* AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ D  k0 R4 Y9 yWith the moon kissing it every night
& x1 I) ]4 p6 [, OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" A) A3 U: T% z+ o5 y; E3 FI love you I love you with all my heart
, f3 Q7 S0 Z7 l0 x+ k1 l; wNothing can compare to my love
2 c) ]$ z9 D2 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. W$ z- A; Y4 N3 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 X4 ]: a* c7 u" L- n8 AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 F( N  C( o3 y" zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# d. C* Y/ a; l2 m. PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 G- L/ W# ?6 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 u, j+ @# N# n( KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 S0 d2 t& z2 u& |' x/ R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ A) @5 o- m9 V2 D( {$ E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 g* Q/ w% |9 e2 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 n/ A. G* u5 U4 v/ M  `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ z8 t' C+ _0 k2 i3 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  b* F, c& P% I! s& \7 s- y1 N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" X" e  |  y5 k1 _! k/ n" o& T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) s  D6 P; `3 b# z& ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& ^0 b* h7 F' i" R( L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, \9 E- a: k) U; H, c6 g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' ~# E$ X' J' O3 b' F: C9 n) t) H( N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. B+ V& A% \# ?1 F6 S; n4 Z! o5 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* ?" i: n; ^( e$ A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. l/ I, d  {) I; t+ W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 m0 }& j7 s& N% Q; o$ y& s( M" B3 J& i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! L" M: k! s5 [- ]7 Y/ r, R9 H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; J$ N+ s0 Z! \# r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: e: R- L$ s% I) y% r& e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  O8 t9 g, D/ t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 S0 C2 M2 D: g/ j# k" U( h3 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 k. f! x" ~$ x2 N7 C: o3 w- L" P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 o- E, R! b# L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( G- l  H* o: E9 Z' [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 T6 O: ^3 O3 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 V7 C: A! i% u) K- Y5 g$ S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* j+ j" W- u" |5 k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 U- m5 e( J* f. x- a7 }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, n, S" }0 S8 e2 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" e4 j6 E% _8 ]: u( A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) t6 O7 b5 l' }" P7 Q) X6 U% R; @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ u# b7 h7 j3 ?) Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" Q' B/ n+ r$ e9 X; x: t6 ]% g8 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( c! P' ]: @% V% e* K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; K0 A2 V2 J1 M$ X- F我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>