【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ I0 s( r" B' \5 {! z! lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* N/ ?* j# K8 L6 z4 _, d4 pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, t2 y1 K/ F& E6 ?  j$ EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ s$ S' ?/ d- C) e& dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ U- X- X  l: hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ p6 U- b: V+ e: L1 q/ _Every other word you utter is love
, l6 m% H. D! m4 uI really want to know just how much you love me
! B7 E3 [  z8 o2 V) Z/ _% UI love you I love you with all my heart
$ B, R$ l1 \: I  l& KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  A8 w/ ]* K/ x; WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- o2 f2 n8 a+ \" T2 z* I; H+ A  k+ jWith such a tongue as yours,
3 k: M4 ?: }2 y1 Z! k4 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. q+ Q2 w. c' `  L; W5 X! ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" t) O% P: n3 n- [! m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- `7 c9 e5 D# T# Y" Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 i- J) D" q! L/ y1 @7 }. D2 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* k: u4 \% R; p0 u# w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# w7 ~/ i  f3 I# x' Q& z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 L! I" Y. A+ G; r7 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 S$ {: K% u/ w- x- H; X9 I' q! b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 {9 M8 K4 G8 G3 T: X( l+ N6 G( T0 y$ F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 a+ m7 s% g5 C) H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, V" f1 v- O4 j  I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 A, Y/ `0 Z# c. O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 g4 r4 z4 v; k; J. A% w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 g6 D/ w0 ~0 ?' `. E3 E6 f2 O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' w  G: I. {: a/ h" Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 s) i( [% g4 d1 T. \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" {+ x3 P: X) i- M9 d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 y5 |5 J9 V+ D' P* p+ |( r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" c. ?' H' c0 L2 f, r  P. E% [7 X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 a! K# w3 f5 S! h6 `7 \- n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ M, G2 k$ j: B* N! k2 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. V  `" O  o9 c0 L( i3 q3 p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& I8 x4 O: T' a2 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, F+ N+ P8 B4 e5 ^- T+ g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* V5 C# B$ s- D1 U/ A& x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 L1 e& P& O) I6 x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ D+ K$ J5 R/ b1 ~- D& B7 \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 m: C! ~7 A% o: I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- }' q0 z5 L9 r+ P0 P, t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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+ h. v7 L! h1 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>