【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 i: G3 O$ y3 p: Y+ qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ p- X: B1 }0 X# V; cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# n' p2 s  _% o8 iWith the moon kissing it every night
7 k1 Q3 S% f; V: [" q1 vSeeing the sky content with its love
! m3 ^9 D, |% }$ c+ \+ I7 rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" W6 @7 j. _8 P5 lEvery other word you utter is love
9 T4 e1 b3 U0 t1 m2 I2 t/ Q" xI really want to know just how much you love me
! i3 A" @- s/ W: g8 T! W: S9 q; xI love you I love you with all my heart
8 [2 Q+ M; ~# v4 O$ m2 JNothing can compare to my love
2 L& P0 V) }7 n0 [& Y) gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! f# q* z  N" |+ `9 e9 RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: J9 U  g6 v; r' Z) V: \  g9 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ f% U2 }* |* t. G1 y; y: `( b  c2 @) MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 m9 k; f4 B+ z: n  P, u& w! GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 m- a/ v9 V% a# n# m+ S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 `0 u: ]! a/ ^9 w8 s/ `- ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% }: U# A5 E" d8 M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 w# O" S3 ^8 G5 M& P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 O. d' [, G8 T& g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. |# g" Y9 g+ h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 r. H% B$ d7 _% q/ A) M2 @/ \: i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* k; h6 }5 V* p' Q! ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* R' h0 X4 _4 a) w1 i& o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 i0 w- ]+ y+ Q6 Y/ y* O& ^; R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: {9 Y, g  q, K+ X5 G* l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, g& u4 T0 T$ c" b! I5 u: M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. z3 T$ V1 Y6 Q6 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! X: s1 d  M: p- @" ]$ D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 |4 ~4 O. g% Z5 n9 q7 U$ E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' c5 j' d" Y. f2 n/ z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ n0 p* ^# S( X; B3 O$ `$ m. U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 ]5 n/ P7 e! g! |4 j2 H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 `* W; {" ?5 N. G* P8 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; t" x; e6 A% Z- A: y0 K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ W' u# ^- k" z6 o8 i8 k2 j; ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 m2 E# a/ c+ g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( {1 [; w, p$ ?7 P* J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# B' W8 r7 x4 U6 a& }2 J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# G$ s1 v0 V) n: F- ^/ ^5 s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( [  A6 @# _* F5 t3 }+ b; e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 l. X' d/ k! U& u9 u. M6 n1 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 z9 ^) F. i7 R3 I) y' _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, v9 m3 b. y: @0 s  n# H$ x+ H% U我请你剖开它

5 l' N8 F. R5 u; Q! H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 Q  J3 L" S9 ]- D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>