【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# K* H  U- o/ y( l1 K" j歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 T, v- \4 q* P1 F$ P) n/ EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. o5 n! R* J9 ~9 K- h! q4 O2 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 j+ L* M4 e) l. G& @The sky is happy down to its soul
$ `" X% ?# G9 x! N$ l( TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, A# R5 w% _0 R1 y5 pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ i' V2 {8 A$ K, u% }# v9 ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 h) N+ ?# y" O8 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 s+ Q+ B' f% k0 m- C3 p* aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 v( e' ?1 g3 d; Q- |3 Z; h7 bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" [) T9 v$ m5 z, a- O& wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 J7 R5 S: w: `, T& Y  A! G" vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ s9 J4 W) ^& q* G3 R' G/ W, f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( y! e8 g( }% Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 q) X8 Q: k8 K( T! X0 W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' {' |! ]8 `6 r4 x) D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; `: Z4 b) e/ H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 |: D6 j7 c1 `: b+ Q, W- u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* j  r3 h* v( \" M: t: }" g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- b3 m% T! ~5 p  g( h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( S6 h: `& h' @" ~# u0 X- d7 T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. s1 B5 p/ I! R+ \! R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 o* T. i5 g! O8 D4 p* z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ A& L( @% Y, r% e' x; F5 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 Z6 i% W6 S; G$ W8 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 m5 Z  A- M+ u6 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 c" I" Y, V2 ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* c, t6 Y; y9 \  U, I; `$ w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 `$ Z. d. O+ C0 B7 ?. i4 ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ D8 y9 a9 I: x  ?1 B* l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 E# I; }+ }* N- Q: V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' C/ y" I' _- C6 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: [9 C+ Q$ j- P' E" n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- d# z7 t7 E5 c7 A3 i4 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 F# U/ ]/ U7 U0 ]1 Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 a! M; [; K* t) h0 O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 c3 W9 g' x3 D- l" ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; B. ^$ Q" O2 ?7 {* D; ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' D; M' i8 Y' {, i3 {9 `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" u3 b' U# K" t2 b% i我请你剖开它
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& f/ @( z5 m9 D. b% k6 h2 i( b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>