【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* ~3 \; B2 M: r* [( t6 k6 ?. m2 {歌词我附在后面。
6 S5 i6 g9 X- L4 \# b% }& GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( A& ?" ?2 X) S# d* D( x. dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 r, X' l9 t# N" cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ C5 c% N2 f; V# @* _0 BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ q/ Z0 @8 ]" N) W: U7 i5 Z+ WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 C7 R, e4 q1 o) U0 jI really want to know just how much you love me
$ A; K" q  G. e- n: @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" `9 G2 }/ z  sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; |0 P8 l) z& V5 @' p. V9 b* @  ~& [- X; vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 P- s. l; ^2 }# ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 R4 R8 r( R/ q% LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% z. `7 K; ^' M  O4 y6 t% j# W4 pWith such a tongue as yours,
/ x" K6 Z2 R: V, a3 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; m5 t3 [+ l+ W/ K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 m: c  K9 u6 [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! m  t1 m( S) C1 u3 E& {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. C* o# d0 ?5 f1 D8 E1 N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' h  @  ^; `! H9 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, e) u8 g9 h2 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% m. X% E  h; W4 j% ?3 [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 \' b% x$ X" y! }7 |! @4 [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* h: ?* G. S8 U1 n5 k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 K! H& S6 M) |7 Z# j6 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 }, A5 w8 T& ~( Y: p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  d; J. P4 Z+ v1 W6 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  ~, [9 `8 _9 B1 w! K! B( W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* ?# ~1 w, B# H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; W  g- ^( l1 L- h% N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 }7 X! \. ~3 Z6 U- {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- H6 d2 _: A* }- i! l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  K" z) f" F) m4 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% [4 v3 C3 {+ f4 b0 T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& Z# t# R4 y8 A3 L' y# ?! F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 L2 z; A6 u( `2 Z" |) M9 R5 g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- j4 [/ l% q6 Y5 {3 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
, y# n4 _, O: T' t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 K; Q& U+ r0 `6 Y/ ]$ l5 M# \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  b9 j: u* j7 v) k$ A% ~& W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# f3 Q+ t9 k8 q, `9 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 ?8 [& R3 `) m! R1 ?7 w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, ?9 M) l, H. _& o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 }, u: ?" W: J( \) u1 a& k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ K5 r1 p/ i8 V0 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# y6 C2 n4 [) |; _我请你剖开它

7 O+ m7 l4 u! Q  L' q4 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>