【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
: R8 n9 B4 v- m# p  H* aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% E- j. R% t3 r# m4 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 m0 t3 y( v% u+ P  dWith the moon kissing it every night
4 b, o7 u  `7 H' y1 qSeeing the sky content with its love
* ?8 c' n- C: K4 ?9 x; ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- Q/ g0 U; _2 b6 M2 Z' l$ |, EYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) ]. O2 j! ^9 }) Q9 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 z" q7 \8 ?  ]3 ?; JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- O4 C) E% w: B& UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ D, A; A, i% W& i- t0 |4 b. yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& a% y+ t& O, n% ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 S9 S) S* R8 u! f4 `/ z8 ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ v1 e. J( U2 v* h, O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 s1 b! K5 v2 u. w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 s! \- j% Y1 A- b$ B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 \7 y  O5 }3 g, s* P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ c) @" b& j% W! s$ G9 m5 Z' h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- T( L! ?& h" A8 b. Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 `, ^) d+ u& V( j$ ^+ ~2 l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' k  o( q) C! u2 t! H; m4 L3 e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ N, U$ k* Y, ]3 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- s; D  s% H8 l9 R! N; U2 o<P>你无需担心</P>
0 R0 i, @+ m" x$ h2 a5 v% R9 i8 x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. ?" X1 F3 P1 f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& T. |: H3 K  j: v2 M: P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ L" N, P! Q7 c! v- Q' |4 h8 Y, O1 m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* @2 M5 o" `" T, U$ C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 `6 N5 M9 H5 G* k* K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) x. t2 ]- x  l& ]  W% Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 \2 W9 [" C0 ~2 K3 {+ h" G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 l$ g0 Y+ h" X; A, x- c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  n4 p6 I' W( a3 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) O$ Q: _  Z, \! M' h- Z1 |' N3 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 x& m3 \5 H+ k" T2 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 K1 r% S8 G+ {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; B& |, T# h/ J% s7 K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, L" U$ w* L, q" z+ N# j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. m" t$ ^: S' R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* @' }# W1 B' G( x) w2 x5 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' P! X1 H' S6 E" z1 X, Z( c; e<P>I regret not dying</P>
" a% e' Y4 g& y% {0 i% @5 S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 K4 z9 }; ^% ?* L6 o* W. p& |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% ^5 k9 F( K. H  c3 j) Z5 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: ?. I% x) }9 o* P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ B% D( ^* g9 K' Q& f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ Q4 D6 b6 }( ~* x9 w我请你剖开它

. H% C5 d: \$ G2 b! u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' d4 |3 P5 C7 n/ _1 Z5 ]' i$ Y& Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>