【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" |% j, X8 T  K! O. @- k- L; GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, h  P- c( F4 D3 }3 A/ Q7 V+ c5 e% fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 }) ~& u" t4 V0 ?* iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ \4 x, [# c/ W6 S: |" `: A. gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% m5 D4 b1 a& ?7 |, q! p- WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) e7 f: z6 F7 P' L' A" PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 V/ p8 g: c, cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" {: U) D% z% u4 \% K* u' lI’m still filled with fear
, v, w" z2 z. W% I# s6 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  u, ~' c- o+ k) q& S- gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" G8 g6 K3 J9 F' t+ ^# AWith such a tongue as yours,
, B# J; Y* S4 n" k  e1 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 p( t2 o) E; R' K. A; J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# H* P/ e$ ?% w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, o# i$ G+ j! A' ?/ _$ r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  m2 a5 ]) G  r" C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 p0 U5 N# j$ t/ ~( J3 m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) E3 x% N  ^+ I+ v! J2 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% ?! R* i# J7 x; R" [1 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  P3 {: d% V4 }! h9 a! c8 ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% w- _5 {% Y* N) m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( y; k8 n% N( s2 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 S1 ?, `' z- i! A+ U) `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, N8 Z. w' W" D9 t7 ]# P8 u" [. j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 z7 t. |  o  ]/ T* w) w  _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' f$ d' N- |9 ^7 z, {7 u0 l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( L1 e6 C( Q$ d& c/ T7 B0 Z* S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 E% E6 O* v( l% B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 t* S6 B8 k2 O, I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! q; A1 R6 ~: N  o: f. ?- Q7 Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
; a) l8 M. G8 J1 s0 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( K: c. S% O9 d* B5 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# |9 C5 y" `, Q' }, Y9 N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 [9 r# a$ }" ~- H" n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( m8 X6 l  j( J0 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 J: a  F) b: b6 l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
7 z5 z1 ?6 s; m' R5 {9 o7 _9 ^
' C! d% D; y) v7 ~我请你剖开它
+ R- t, B9 M- P; R* g
( b4 J; }& K, q# M" T" s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>