【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- i2 j4 ~9 A: J% z- eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 `6 C- L9 f- |( X  V5 c+ t! E8 OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ g0 V' o- t* r5 WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! d5 l' M' U7 p3 V  M  cSeeing the sky content with its love
+ ]6 F6 L6 @$ RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 z- {  P) E9 HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& x# k; ?2 h0 b% _  ~Nothing can compare to my love
! o0 C1 P, |0 c- t4 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 `1 b9 H# g" c1 w% J7 HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 E6 [- S% G7 a) i4 }5 nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. U1 Q) b6 {1 T+ l8 rWith such a tongue as yours,
& A( {* s% Y( `) R& CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. Q6 b3 t8 B: Y* Z3 o) o+ oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 |( ?; W& G1 Y* B0 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 b* ^) A, f% S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. Q+ g5 Z  w* ]; e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# w8 B) ]1 b5 k+ X: q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; Z" X# V; b! i8 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: f' f: e* Z) u' G" M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# R, I8 ~7 v. t8 e  r- U8 h: j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ X0 ?( ]7 `$ h0 o- E& R6 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# @. X/ o2 Y3 Z! r1 R. m3 m+ g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ C" {! ]( F* i5 n. O8 J. e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 B! f! t2 s9 t5 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
  _& q5 y0 S+ e- c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( j2 O5 w5 U+ ?+ n- p( K7 f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
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<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 b  f2 z5 Q) V" @  _  I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ A+ H! I# c1 |- Y: Y4 n* l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- l  [# B- Y0 H: G  R, h& W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, |2 V% K1 T  u; T' u( K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) B8 U- c  w5 h" ?7 v4 S' u7 f$ p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( f- A: d! p) b# b& K% L! m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ P3 p0 [4 [; l4 Q& y% v$ t1 Y0 H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 U, P: F* g; o5 n5 y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ J1 u: r# Y; B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ C( u3 X8 G% D# z2 b) i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 Q; @) N- [/ M- G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) y7 ~+ M- H! \4 F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' O4 i5 H. p$ D; y- B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, Y) Z- z& N5 f3 g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. O$ r. q5 {6 D) F( k6 B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" n, ^0 J. y% s& P2 ]$ z7 t* L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% f# j( h; y* {3 L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>