【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 P3 _6 ]+ G0 JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- F/ |$ {( o9 P" ?The sky is happy down to its soul
  t/ G' o$ `+ wWith the moon kissing it every night
/ O& h8 ]) Z, @9 ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" Z7 H. j0 h5 @0 ]2 x! DYou needn’t fear anything
, U0 h" Y  a9 r0 Z6 K5 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 C2 L* ^7 J" v! Q9 m$ dEvery other word you utter is love
3 X; Q! H5 b# L1 ]9 U0 F, ?* UI really want to know just how much you love me
7 Y; O( g8 x9 n' V; ]I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: v) S8 A  Z4 C0 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 V) W/ v4 N+ i9 p, K/ e7 ~0 @) kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 n8 H- D+ _4 i3 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ L) w1 C8 f5 w6 g. AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# V5 ^* U# [! S2 V. D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 {6 o5 \6 _4 u+ y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) y. z: {) K2 e$ ?7 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% U) V8 Y- [0 E5 Z. E. a. c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 j/ G; `4 X' D; h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" R; n' M+ K( [1 L" E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ D! ~8 \" I! [* y- m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- M. y5 }4 q: m0 R6 v- r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 B6 q$ V% d" d6 g& j/ A! j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 H" v* o  j$ o( I( T# y4 a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 G  U$ M. t# y. n  x5 D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' X, C' }% o; O& [1 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; F7 U) A( X! [$ ~7 h+ x# s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- @! D$ @; o' v3 n! j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" V$ M1 F0 ?: M* c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- M8 R3 Z0 b2 J7 X0 E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- d: _. }9 E9 B! V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! z) P' s0 p( B1 L" G/ ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* X* x# p5 I$ e; i! P# K6 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; H; J" k5 |9 y- V$ o' n3 q/ L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& L2 o# W1 k/ @: ~6 m1 Y! a  V& L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" ~% i3 u* J0 A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 G$ M5 ]- {+ O3 u/ m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 U* w# Z( ]6 S5 _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* x' ]* D9 P' Z1 U9 ^, R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 X5 Y" |0 V% Q7 k, O% s; r2 E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ H& u! ?# T, R$ Y0 @0 g: l! E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# L  g. c5 I, o) F# ]" y, z: R8 u' O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ @; w2 n2 r5 W! X' q3 U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- r+ H; t2 j, x( |3 k- V# Y9 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>