【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- P# L6 I. D( I  j歌词我附在后面。
- ^. s& j5 p$ y. E' ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
( h* H: @1 n, `+ A* w6 s( aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" T: m! F5 g. x7 D# R) RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& d  \7 B5 I* X" r7 T+ M7 ^% p$ cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: d' e; ^- B, l- o9 y) BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 }1 I& n1 h' J5 T( CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 `! B. v7 u  ?2 l) lI really want to know just how much you love me
/ I" L1 ]6 r3 g3 v3 }9 DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% n9 v4 e' V, vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. [1 n1 T9 ^5 a& s# _. Z9 r5 ]7 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 }+ R3 r! Y/ ^3 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; ^4 N# q5 H4 x3 s" `5 ]. _/ qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 m! h% w2 U% i' P7 f* h- W* oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: l2 _. c' Y% ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! N; a2 I  z2 R- h( P" p% N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& P% k6 P* v) N; O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! j. y1 b* [8 p) s) h) A6 m! T3 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% _( V6 ?8 j" T5 N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# @6 R% T; @0 K" {% M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ k: L- G' U4 b# z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 ]" E2 a; }% ~4 u  h2 d8 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, N. W% b- L0 I3 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, I. h3 {: U7 R1 I7 i& e$ t<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 `% ^; o' A9 z) T. T7 Y4 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 t$ R7 I$ Q  {' R5 B7 o0 |7 B2 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& n9 V  K8 k" N  q, \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 O1 E  m7 ~' P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* a' E5 w4 v9 W! u6 P8 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: q) U  G* O& X# Z6 }$ F/ B1 T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 N" [" _$ e5 O# z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" m& H- K( Y- W- g- U, D% `! |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  f; l' q: o/ u1 ~& A, A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 }, s6 H/ [1 A/ ?+ M/ B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 V# A) k+ k/ i4 f, w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 q$ p' }8 S) e: `# O' {$ ~& Z: P% D3 @! N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# v7 _4 z, u' D- {. \- R- Q+ o: L! G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& e" T1 b* g9 u2 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! x  A3 J1 G- B# ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
) k5 t5 T: k* d7 y6 ^! D2 _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! C; q8 b% ^/ _9 f4 A4 Z1 N# j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 n! l: \1 d0 r5 X3 i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) u: q0 m' R) z9 m  L5 T* ?  Q6 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 s+ B7 t, B) e6 J# Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& }/ M8 k) s: N8 r4 C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ C6 c" l4 t! \7 p; ~) a* N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" A2 F8 V$ a" R; P$ G1 l# ]3 r* f我请你剖开它
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6 Y: ]' P0 Q1 g6 c, B) o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 [& M1 o: u8 B4 `6 Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>