【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" h& H# ]2 O* W& ~. Y. U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ u) A: z& i% T4 g9 D6 \4 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* A4 u  L2 ?$ v/ _9 ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 K! ~+ @  d: c7 S. R% pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 |' y" E& G9 S, K4 c: k5 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
# i% X9 [. O0 a2 C- x2 cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: C  I+ [( ~7 S1 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 d0 r# t$ |: W8 D( {5 bYou needn’t fear anything
2 @+ k! m8 S- tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ i" Z0 ?" C1 w+ O& {* ?Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" F% \0 c0 a, R+ y! e2 L# a' O& ?I love you I love you with all my heart
/ a& @) m  I$ ^: k8 A0 uNothing can compare to my love
; t) h" k4 ]) R* \9 p( xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 R9 C3 M/ f  ?( vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ ]% ]4 e+ S$ r6 UI want so much to see inside your heart
* R+ Y( M3 B/ g- h7 g% RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 j$ a  X. ]5 F9 `I’m still filled with fear
/ @  [1 g# I; Y! O4 o4 P8 q6 RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. x" @8 H4 \+ \, Q( Z: s$ ~' }' VI regret not dying
( T0 x7 E/ O" E3 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& X) ?2 [# T  g' r: d6 _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" }& ?+ B2 w+ ~9 w- p8 T0 FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: S; ?  T# Q0 b' T" Q! |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ v9 B' N. A: O, a& L3 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 I: H' }" m+ J0 D; q! R1 o; K9 X+ [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* o2 a$ F/ H8 @% D$ S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; x. n) x6 t# y5 X+ V. A. B( y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% K) A3 s$ J1 G/ a7 z( |  b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& Y' _. q, z' i+ _# s: ?3 N9 [. E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; b; E" o& H0 @# G* a/ T2 E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& m& L# F8 V' U. ?8 h9 m3 D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. K, C* n6 r/ H* ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 a& a$ A2 W) j1 Q- {2 a( W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' w! U3 T: g, }% d, k# e: I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 |9 g8 [# R" N8 F+ A  k7 t% ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 ~: P# J$ N- d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, B1 k9 T  r5 b+ y; o' [. P* D4 }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 E1 V4 k" ?  g9 Q" r% w5 \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- S. S. I  k3 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 r9 m9 r6 S0 p3 J8 w7 `+ J0 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 O. ?2 H/ d8 U% _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 J8 O3 D% Q9 E9 Q% E7 D- Y# T4 m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ ]9 r2 A  t( s% G; m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' }4 V/ a6 K: o9 W9 _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! Q3 y$ C/ s" Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& m9 U% v8 ?  z# ?+ Q8 M( t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. {; Q; Z. v' `: e) _. ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ ?& J1 c+ ?' A  y1 I) ^! ?( o; f- _7 X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- [3 [1 F8 g0 J# j" D' x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ y; X; ]2 n/ g: F$ K9 I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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6 C' u7 K8 S; J& O$ s# G! \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>