【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' [, w# s, J0 [歌词我附在后面。
" Y1 W* i0 F( `4 gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 I* _, @. x9 f9 z9 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 j& z/ ?- _: |# E- V0 B% gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) x7 v9 a# |' ~: F- z* z7 QYou needn’t fear anything
$ ?, _! ^( M6 t9 gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- H5 E$ q6 r- O% cEvery other word you utter is love
) X% F3 G2 J% B) G+ {- c5 M& kI really want to know just how much you love me
: Z, E+ J# S, N' s9 v' ]I love you I love you with all my heart
) q# V+ i, f: D- ^4 C) u# v0 INothing can compare to my love
4 K* ~3 H$ v9 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ M8 ]% h/ o" U1 B2 d- b; j6 tI want so much to see inside your heart
+ a) O6 z( F2 x9 T3 D4 J* ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 J& j, f6 }% q! RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: O) K1 a+ }% EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 C, I% i5 k7 `6 Z2 b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! g( E2 N8 s* _+ v6 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, V9 V4 F% y) y/ K2 n4 I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, x1 W$ N9 D9 P7 E0 g9 g, y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* z2 a$ b2 X9 l) a$ [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  t( P# l5 k9 X( ~+ E2 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 x, |& d+ z9 S, s$ r+ x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 F2 _2 g5 x; I* b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% s! @+ O# |3 V/ p3 O+ _  L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' k- Y% F0 F2 r" ^* W7 }& ~5 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* S! o/ b/ Q/ d8 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 i' j) T" s; k4 z5 ^; U( d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 z+ q5 W! T3 h8 j+ Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ i/ ~6 R$ d2 w# K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 Q4 N$ S5 ^! g" k( L# A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; S3 b+ A2 x, \  r! I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# F. L# a* i3 w9 i; P  \5 T& f" s' G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: C+ @; O7 N% f4 Z, Y- O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 ^- c7 ~: X9 y/ J3 ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# h: V+ L9 X* ?6 n& f0 d& _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. z  N! T6 q* Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 q/ j! O, h8 u+ A  |( o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' B) `) S9 L: E) t, e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 k' ~7 r6 Z! p* x4 v我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>