【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. f2 x# O7 ^9 K; c9 [* KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% z& T9 q" H8 u& R" YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; H3 b0 ?* t% x6 ^$ {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ W5 `% z5 W0 a: I0 iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% @) [. ~; W) P3 C5 K  ~, DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- N# p; b9 t& _  r9 uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% b- O. N+ i/ x9 a! O& n; ]I want so much to see inside your heart
7 G2 D# w0 S$ \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ \" R' [# F) T* |  m+ e+ NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. V4 z( S/ \" q  l- rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 m/ `, c/ J+ J' d$ FWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- r3 s9 a7 r; E8 QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* L, s2 G$ T/ |, g7 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: x" n( U4 m8 _2 I4 O+ G" u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% [/ A* o4 F7 i/ n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ G1 g, B+ a9 x, C) T3 U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 M) O# d, o9 i% q5 O& T6 I+ c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. D) i( K. O" d3 H7 I6 s1 H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 u6 b) {& P7 y/ X. U1 j& W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; t6 W7 K* @4 m. g( l6 W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 t/ p& n) A8 h& p<P>你无需担心</P>
) P# M2 x  j1 W" }1 t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 @8 V0 l; ~: b- v# c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 g! d! A7 C, _) E9 h+ T- [0 u# U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 G' T6 ]# W4 p# ]5 Z4 {2 \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 R& Y( Z  p2 h* R* `3 ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 N0 Y. A/ R/ [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 i9 _0 Q) U- N1 r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. }5 g  m# k& o  t* Q% \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 b+ Q- X0 ^0 z$ c1 a' y% f* s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 A$ }# }2 a' }- _+ m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 |) G7 _7 i+ i4 V5 l, C/ v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 \- x1 A0 e, b3 ?( G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 g0 _4 b" I- }$ `- S; F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ ?! o5 J4 M  M- U1 @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ N" B1 m4 |& u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  ?- S$ c# S, H7 @8 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
( j: G5 k' Z: H5 f0 H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 q( u2 l& G3 K* `) u5 m4 h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 h% m" P5 ]/ p( p8 H! [. L4 K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, l: T3 W# ~3 b/ l" o5 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 x, c/ B( P( u9 H* C: e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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' a6 w+ H* \0 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 R5 q# U/ i- D0 U. W* o# o; P: q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>