【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& _8 c* n3 v. t& h# e% h/ ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; Q( I0 ?0 J( t0 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. v$ K. q! e( c# Q+ Y: s6 z0 |The sky is happy down to its soul
0 N* k0 [  V) D4 r) l# `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& ]4 e2 T2 q) x' T) t( H3 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 q0 w- n0 ]9 `9 \Every other word you utter is love
" l4 T$ P1 ?6 |( p5 ]# h7 c+ HI really want to know just how much you love me
  w; }! H- O, \, rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' p0 N- m# \' [7 X0 z! y5 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, z; M' H' z5 |4 P7 }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 {8 r" B4 e1 o9 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, n" R' O1 D# T5 y: {: AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* Q6 E( G# G! l* mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; G4 J9 z" X8 D% o( }  w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# w$ l" b0 y. n: z+ K3 k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& G) J% |, B0 _# y- N/ s2 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 t' \7 s# z. W* R) _# C/ Q# O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 F; x2 q) V- g6 b+ e2 i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 Z$ t8 w) V) q3 c8 r; _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ V4 p1 C4 v- `8 j9 [& K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, `. I: b5 M" j! d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' I$ ~0 E" g2 ~5 I8 S% v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. V' Q3 g3 q1 y/ @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 {, ^* _% ?# I  v; e0 ^$ d8 {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 ^# a2 ?& ^) z5 |+ c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, y, p# D; N3 p5 R8 [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' E' D6 P5 |( x1 f( c( `. k6 L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: P' R4 ?" K/ u* S- ?2 y" X& t: l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 f5 B8 I; t9 W% p* q9 U* ^. k$ L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 X, {1 Z9 S3 [/ A1 H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 c% o/ S2 q( a# g3 R; y5 }) L" A+ c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 ?/ V5 C6 P6 M8 E: `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 ]: A# B  O- J% x& c; K) }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 J2 ~, \" c" |' W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, O0 B# G: w" f0 U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& [# J6 b) ^6 s3 a' i! p% I' ^/ \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 D% W9 U% ^# D  I8 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; |# z8 p, Q+ i8 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! N) O& {0 t3 g" |3 @( F0 T& A. P6 q# v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ d& ]  S3 c( z) F# s( C1 y8 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% a9 W6 N( Y+ v" w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

! T$ s' ~! s: ?. N: M( {8 T* f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 F0 b6 o1 e5 f. ~* k; \) q8 G  S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>