【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 J; A8 h- T: Q# v( gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) V% E1 g$ [) ^( j9 L5 d6 G! LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( D; R  e9 [/ D& lSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! c4 S9 ~! y- b9 G# l' b% @You needn’t fear anything
% l# o& a+ Y7 I$ r) ]; h- lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ E% C( o; Y6 `Every other word you utter is love
" _) D6 }; c) {4 f) \. tI really want to know just how much you love me
9 \- B  w' F( t* N+ l1 qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  e+ t8 E- }' X1 p1 MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 _; N- D7 H# |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- P, R; \4 Q+ Z, eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% {7 ]2 c7 F  n0 A# pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 A8 J- ]; n% a) _' C8 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 K# M$ {, g  C# a2 }) X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ Q$ P0 C6 M* z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; {; W/ [! o( C" e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ ?: ]: d& W) x( U. P* X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 r$ e, g: M3 S7 A( z) \* |- r9 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 w" ~3 x- q$ _4 j& K5 C6 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  ^. ?! \, F3 V. J1 ]. n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& m8 i9 h( W/ o& c  b* P' c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- l9 ]9 Q5 T# P* e( N9 R" R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ a5 ?2 s  W  s6 ^2 ]- y4 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 A. z- W' U1 w5 Z6 _" _4 k5 E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 N' T! x9 u7 u( G7 S9 c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 i2 `" |( Q/ A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 x% C: t0 |) w' t, O" |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 e, P+ |- \* @' ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 {8 i# Y3 C- {+ T3 t- d8 y+ x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; Z3 a! ^' p& ~9 U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 Q( {" G( z* V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. u$ a* ~4 F% J$ I6 [/ B! M9 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* I- e: [0 C% t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 r2 z3 E; Z9 c, n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- v- j6 p/ D2 `- O1 K- P. `0 {: p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 F0 G% C: c8 l<P>I regret not dying</P>
& f5 ]1 |- O& h4 V/ E' d& L# r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 g! Q5 u- A' P- P/ r9 d3 D8 T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( X# v% j' V9 k0 d  A, P! `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, F0 v+ e- ~. v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ s6 z; y' P' M  `5 c) j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 i' ^+ h6 }3 @3 j5 _6 d0 Q% g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 [; X* W, K2 u0 o' L8 f9 s. O8 I* o% A我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>