【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 `; H8 |; N% r7 n歌词我附在后面。
' K% [, _& U  \0 t# ~$ sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ \" v# N. m* Y: H4 f5 x. PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 y, p5 B! ~0 U, U! ]9 R2 LWith the moon kissing it every night
" e: S2 b+ ]0 n5 F0 kSeeing the sky content with its love
0 |5 w0 @! |7 N: [) hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, H' Q3 v' O; n9 `0 }You needn’t fear anything
6 D" m; |, F& |' v: l0 t; aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' p7 x! n& S( w7 S$ u4 N* i8 PNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; o  k2 @' I: g% p, F$ \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 Z/ c' E8 n1 h; J  O; `3 I5 b* T' iI want so much to see inside your heart
7 u& J- ]- r5 pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; W; H6 s# f& W' bI’m still filled with fear
/ Q" H0 c# r8 q: S4 M' e$ KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ L$ i7 ~; h8 E$ t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, f1 u  e" p/ K" Q0 ?% U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- ]& y. Q* [% w! W+ {8 V6 E/ m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, o$ [/ n: O4 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. q6 }4 `+ Z# D: J* R* W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ z4 @3 p1 L& _4 z6 i# }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* ?% Q6 d* J# [7 Q1 C% D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ a  C& h- x! ]; B; b, W1 C2 u$ a  y9 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; C; X0 c7 c9 E: Y. \( z. y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' ~+ S- L' P' W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 D/ |: x/ s, X8 b# O# \; G# Y& z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) G( e6 B0 b1 q4 ?, A9 x6 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ C9 k' p5 ?9 R$ W9 k& a# q2 @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 P( D( u+ o, k2 \4 h' N: X7 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) }; u" _4 n" Y% I9 R# w3 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 _; H+ b# j3 z# z+ s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- f* E1 Q3 u7 p2 V# A+ i5 t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 q" K' q0 x0 s% B) l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ a! d- j3 k7 Z4 m! {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. Z8 M5 x: `8 X, C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 C$ n, e# Z/ k5 C0 n/ @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 w! p( k! u1 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 g3 k  b3 i/ ~  C1 Q4 i8 ~( v& z  {3 {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& }- l" N  J: _$ }+ N( O) a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, [4 _# p8 ^( D$ `  Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' Y: p6 J( P1 N  [. I! Q7 `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 O" ]# w/ b! ]1 e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" f! C; r. [( C* H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  y& J& Z' y, S$ s2 U8 i" Y- @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 Z# \1 ?, f7 s% @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>