【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' p2 }2 L* g1 o8 z歌词我附在后面。
( f/ Y5 D* ?( _The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' v1 s+ r6 P: f- c' ]+ t/ |4 N0 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ G3 @& c5 M& X  N" S+ pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- I: G9 h. J. x" S2 y8 F# J" TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. _( f- `% S& c$ a0 W% lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 K8 r2 b% Y6 H  FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( l0 u5 p/ r. z" F+ R4 `8 zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ ^# j$ o" i9 X, vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 O2 @5 V8 c8 Y" U8 FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( d! a) `" Y) ~3 \I want so much to see inside your heart
- {8 ^, v+ J& _$ a% j7 W# [# N. ]; nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 H+ J& P0 c- B$ b4 ^. G8 p' ]& OI’m still filled with fear
+ P- H4 S% T! e9 R: ^$ wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  U) i( G  U+ m+ II regret not dying
4 r: W( ^, g8 ]3 ]& [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! @2 v: w, l' UWith such a tongue as yours,
5 w; ?  B6 f* R$ Z9 d9 H+ @! KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ D; C/ l9 ~  _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  \9 i8 o( ^2 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& B" s' \8 d$ G2 }  S- ^; o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ X0 H$ H# y  f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 L% H# a7 G( z- w( |; s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 f+ A: {* A( P* X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* X# p7 ~& B1 ]6 f$ s( V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& e9 h& |+ b  g# H9 k! N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) g5 V5 d; R  i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" X* J' [2 I. c, y$ o. |! V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: }' c$ X/ d7 F# E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 a4 Q  Y- p+ A: D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& J9 [" E( `  L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# s) T5 x2 l) e0 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 @$ v  v0 ]# |3 c& h; H+ ~. v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ m* r) l+ \* I5 ]) Q* Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 A& Q" W3 N* n5 V. H7 J9 B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 M/ A8 x2 O4 a6 A+ }, p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: C5 K# |2 V. N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 \9 I  L, p7 Q8 x/ J( i  ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 H! r2 `, w% F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 I$ l5 H: p/ l3 _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 O5 t4 b# h3 H- Q( |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* D& D/ e% o$ P! g1 Y# h! U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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3 ?# t; a% [3 r  ^% G% q  G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>