【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 ~- j. Y' t( }4 Q% HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' q& Y8 X0 m* J1 ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* \4 Y( E/ i9 U  K* ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% |3 ]& ]+ k6 B( q$ mThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 [% o. C% i2 l- ^" O$ zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) ~# c; W  }7 L: E" kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ d& T3 w" C: M5 c$ {; jEvery other word you utter is love
! H# }( r$ b4 ~8 `* r. yI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: @. p& X' y- g  {: Q% Y9 nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ ~/ p( [( S# hI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# L  m3 }" S, w4 U- ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; g1 n# g% f) g0 pWith such a tongue as yours,
# H' W0 Q4 A1 M6 M. s+ u' R) w2 kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 M2 v/ {6 w& F( {  [3 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 }5 E; ^5 P* w$ O5 n$ P8 Z2 R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- M1 b, n+ a( n: c5 X4 b! u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 a  S# w! ~9 B1 _0 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; J' L; ]0 `- P' p3 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. ?( e. F6 j7 d2 V# w) d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% v& o- m. x* w/ b. C  R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! A% f& F6 }6 s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 p$ S! R+ \% m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- Y9 D8 e, Q" T; t; U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: \( ~6 R/ R! T. P, c* \4 [% ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# e+ b4 _7 D. A% h8 V+ C: S6 _7 H+ ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ r" W4 |4 G) T" L& P) u; n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# Z! ?7 l; A* ?% ?3 n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& P  I- i& l# j: G; K- W& m5 r( }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, p- ~9 H6 h! x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ y& q7 x/ \9 d" C& S. ]9 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ W$ \6 _3 ?, A2 S5 D* K0 {" ]% U3 m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 P: E( K/ v# V' S- Y. R4 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' j) n9 Q$ j5 `' F: t' N& r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) |8 v& W# ?0 @* I, R; o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, e3 Q; w( n  y9 K( y5 ~# D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! S1 R0 c& V  b6 E  t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! U: Z( P5 Q8 Y: w/ C2 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ @7 M4 x+ ]  g2 V( F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# n  e4 b4 O/ t( V% E2 T4 h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& R- i- {3 [- f, K. f% J2 A1 N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  c& ^; [- P$ B# e* Y4 ]& g! ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 ]8 a  ~  F6 }+ r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; t" a% Y# ~8 Q# i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 c8 q/ B9 c5 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 u  y7 `' a( }; {( k( V, B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* t% P1 ^. y' B( h2 U6 k% {' S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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0 C: q/ m5 g: }0 m* Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 Q( y2 ^% x/ z( x* i! w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>