【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 N' w; w* I) N& [0 S- W* `歌词我附在后面。
' G$ u  D% W. lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. n- p7 Y  K2 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 ~% L9 r4 |' d" J7 ZSeeing the sky content with its love
; E( P. P! y( P: x( h3 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 }) E1 O* B' r0 }6 v) ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 Q9 {4 H8 B! P1 I# s+ f! c4 ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. p2 |% N, r, I( n" L/ Y5 sNothing can compare to my love
# F- n3 |/ q# U5 E5 F  U6 p7 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ l: m* `! p: X% c/ {- k$ qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* f; A7 {3 Z3 w7 y" II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 M( z, [& g# H- |, f6 s1 }I regret not dying
1 [1 }8 f9 B5 a2 m+ v; \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 O) n9 l' H; n+ B2 dWith such a tongue as yours,
4 z. s3 T0 A* @! ~6 J7 @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 Q5 \$ A; ]2 B$ \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; \  O( f3 m8 V6 g( z2 K/ O2 pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  B2 V( A4 j7 M$ H9 I3 u6 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" m& l4 s/ t+ s1 P7 z+ L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' _8 F2 w, V8 h; Y1 K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 m; M, C( r7 |' U! S, L  s/ @5 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 W( ]  l( z$ g; r6 [$ O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  T# r9 h8 p+ F6 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; X6 J) Y" W$ u7 A- r* `* ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% I4 _' s& l9 s. A1 T% l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  Z$ [$ u  b! y. z1 J  h7 g( B' H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; {* y' V7 [' ^+ L3 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 a% ^8 m. }/ t- R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 l0 t" _1 t9 B0 y! j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 J6 _( d4 D& ~2 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 n  i. V+ E9 i5 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; e, o+ T( w9 l) t  o1 j4 m2 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 K# e5 ]" G+ E4 Z0 Z  n1 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ c; a. y/ e0 D- G* i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ i- a$ A6 d( g5 |" ~9 v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! |7 }  l. P9 N: L5 [6 y; l' Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 s" Z+ q: j5 \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 B9 H9 `3 d$ l- C6 r" X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 V! A- H4 z# w  n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 B# K% \* C) H6 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: O+ {! O+ A$ U2 B4 I) W5 _$ o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 L; |5 q( B- d! H/ j我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! m. X9 [: n" \6 c' u* ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>