【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 W8 F0 E7 Y. o; M  o  _7 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 F5 ?5 j" W1 B/ A6 t0 B& n/ KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; B  f0 n% w0 N- W4 IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 Q* `! C1 e) M, q0 A4 PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 p' J+ T; V* x& v& vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. {7 Y$ a. l1 z$ S! Q% K+ MEvery other word you utter is love
7 Q, i( a8 L) u2 J  YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# n, Q3 D2 ^+ }. GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 O- G# V3 x' \0 f2 `I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' `. ~* r7 y9 w2 t6 vI regret not dying
, s. U0 c/ n0 v7 kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 z0 s4 |6 C+ l0 E. [9 gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 T; n% I; B6 w- G) vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ h% t1 R# \& e! Y, z: Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& i' q& x, g& W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ W( S/ j0 z0 o5 S6 Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ B! p$ y7 p4 {  K5 T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- p0 [: K) w' i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ [. h) w, |4 W+ F# k6 k1 E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; [8 a: r! e) s& g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: o9 T( x/ h7 u; h1 ?5 m/ O6 w2 ^4 B: l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 f0 T+ L) V, G  E5 Q" n<P>你无需担心</P>
3 ^3 D+ F% m+ _6 W; A5 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 o9 s7 U% C/ K1 x6 ^3 X; b3 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 s8 w; P- Y$ ?  E3 C8 p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 i( g+ }0 `8 [5 m* }- A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 J6 t& t+ |8 i( Q/ m( V% |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ ^" _; g/ K6 M! X- u' L; Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, z2 U, P" t! q: y  `$ T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ [' z3 F- n% w' l& j% g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 y5 {% l& o" n; R& h& `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 `) e: Z1 y2 y4 F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 @; g* x. _3 e' l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: R6 r+ Q8 F9 P& d7 t+ e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( z- K; W! ^  j! p# N# U" x& G* o0 i, S<P>I regret not dying</P>
; w% _$ v, I  n0 }( J+ ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* L0 j! X6 |& C6 t2 {  D6 `* p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& _% B& \; F) o2 R6 y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 N4 \5 n9 M% u8 e6 M9 C4 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 L" b; @+ v2 D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' P. d) v, R, \( Q& p& W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) O/ y$ |+ S2 \2 c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ r4 ?0 {4 V) D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>