【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ }+ Y  {/ Z7 A6 f. G- P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ C7 v' p- ^- j5 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) v8 M% j5 [) ^  ^  h8 Q. {7 ^. UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& b5 @4 l: D% \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( Y1 }8 L2 V7 k7 f" e1 gYou needn’t fear anything
! k6 r  x+ x% sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  Q( W- `( P" L8 U0 {' M1 \+ WEvery other word you utter is love
! q* w$ Y4 }9 Q. }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 }- Z4 l9 O: P7 [; [8 g8 TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% b$ @5 _) E( H, LI want so much to see inside your heart
/ i# n9 I8 G3 ?. @+ c* g0 MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# W. V1 |" [$ `, c  f7 M9 d% B/ aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 [; x! d( ]. E) a) p( nI regret not dying
! L7 s7 b& V) }4 b7 A& f( FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 o9 O' k) M: |* ]With such a tongue as yours,
  Q0 ~% K4 |. y5 `7 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( O+ G& h8 N4 D/ |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, g8 k' ~% ^, R: D' n) O7 O3 m, q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! [  q6 N7 u: d( N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 I/ w$ h9 p1 R; ?8 z% f* A9 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 o+ j7 e3 v: ^) I# C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# u* k0 s3 B+ }$ o3 F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- V$ j2 O* o$ r9 M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 d( r2 i& G2 W) Q$ K2 ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) s/ c$ Q* M) j! x8 I1 _1 @$ K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 N7 m) a6 V4 ~/ z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! y9 V! Z$ @; D/ F- O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 ]! t! J5 U0 k/ K<P>你无需担心</P>
0 x& c7 D+ z! b1 e9 b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 T6 w/ S! a* q! g8 l  B  e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 N  C% D' ]" N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" E7 Z1 f& P( p5 h$ _5 U% ?) J9 z# c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 L# I3 Z* _; t: [8 i; [$ k: @. Y4 ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 k, K+ W# s0 B* |8 k) |' Q1 d; p4 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& O5 o* D$ d4 Q% p/ @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 L; u5 S, S( Y2 X+ ^  ?0 F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. i; ]$ ^0 _- l- m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( U$ x6 |% Y+ p0 k3 U/ u' y" m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. h) R# Y7 Y7 O, n; I$ ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- E  v! n6 d5 l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# u/ N& H! K$ k& o0 c/ Z! _/ e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" f0 ~5 |+ ~% M1 u4 e% M' @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 f' C6 U( S% r) @! \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" g3 h# l6 D$ i# D! a; n$ c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 `" W7 U7 a' V' \: x8 g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 N- A2 w( g1 ~2 `0 Y2 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 x( m6 }, e1 v) I$ u( Y" U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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+ d- q# W* q! v2 r: M; h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 o7 O+ B9 J2 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>