【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) V  X- k! X* |2 @" S歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 \6 k8 F1 p' I- s% Z4 r) BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" [( V2 O& @8 f; C$ V5 ?3 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# u3 M5 [& w5 i% c4 V* LWith the moon kissing it every night
, m) H  P/ U- A# v1 T- L; LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ K* R' ~, _2 b- S$ `/ @4 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- s% ~8 d$ k; P" y  eI really want to know just how much you love me
0 [' I8 |; U, A- _: hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) s% M8 a( A  n, mI regret not dying
6 C5 `. |: J+ v3 y; k8 M5 b" @% T$ x3 [$ BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) _% M! Y; N( E# a6 mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# S+ ?3 p8 |% q" g9 \9 q  VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ [$ _5 f0 @/ h% G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 S2 [. |5 ]" R0 S4 E9 w: r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 _# E! j* `# o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 m! a6 M% S7 Y: g' |1 B1 R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. e$ w5 J: _* y7 p, M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) \$ S0 a( t. }5 F" d: J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 \( u' \  i. l+ P9 w8 R* g, c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 [! d% [  K( v$ S# |8 H, d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" t0 P( ^, X- ]7 Y4 M: |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 D* ]! G4 l2 S6 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 B; {6 U- N) h. [+ H+ {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 K5 @8 {1 k& x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 x9 T# B' S$ M6 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% I8 e0 ?9 w4 g$ G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' C; t5 o+ V# j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 |% y. E: n/ E6 F# A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- p: u* f5 T' ?3 Y' ^% D; X5 f- T% N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( u+ q0 \5 d6 v/ H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 A# F, A& C( _  S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 B4 T; G  m7 ?6 A# k0 j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 J0 m7 ]- P% P' f( [, }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% n( U" U$ R3 O( p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( O) R$ U$ l0 v: l0 x: q# n1 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ d' k8 U( t( d) a0 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( F) D' J  i: x& d* P$ }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ Y) s& {# X' f1 k! b, [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' c$ l: Y* f1 H( A# p8 u7 t5 `: f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 \) c5 ~7 c: }- s6 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- h( h* w9 V" X4 i" S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 N- H+ }( Q( A0 w' L4 h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ r( Z; s- m3 Z+ j4 _; r' Q9 W9 }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  E; T' y' t: ~6 k; h) z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>