【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: l: w* Z# R. a0 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% O1 ], `* x# RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  h6 @' b( R: V% R1 ]$ AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 o9 t1 ^# V( x: y. o% q2 xSeeing the sky content with its love
6 }$ F$ Y; J0 Z: g# m3 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% W" s$ ~4 S6 o; {2 X. ?$ OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( o, e. n2 [, S/ {1 [4 F% HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 O0 Z3 f7 w3 b  F8 YNothing can compare to my love
/ _8 q* U' ~( j2 _2 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& i) G& \: R& U2 E" rI want so much to see inside your heart
% B# h! j4 i" g: m; ^6 Q6 y$ fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  B6 K5 q  `2 K3 e3 WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% K- O1 B+ e# @# n& a# y7 ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, ^  L% _! n" C9 Q" jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 |8 d" n- S, j/ Y1 v# \3 G) ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ V8 Z8 v7 S# W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' }7 J0 Z4 U$ H& m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) I) Q! l- v. `0 [5 j% A4 Z: ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 j# k6 k4 f8 V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ k9 S$ \7 D7 w. M* ?! k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( n: T3 D  z3 l0 k& g8 T0 I<P>你无需担心</P>
; A% j9 x7 p5 P& j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& m+ s- v1 h0 p) F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ p4 r8 T3 M: s+ g( W* j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 R) z0 F4 K* @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" H0 x+ ^& Y( O/ L2 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: s2 J0 i9 F, i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) ~0 C5 H0 D6 z5 o9 V( {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 w; S8 M( a  W, L1 x/ S8 O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: ~$ X& {8 A3 s  ?/ u: S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% E. u% R* z7 X- x8 {6 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( ]7 B% M2 g; X) {% f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 _; u5 k% ~) l: p& E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 Y" p' x: M  d7 c: E6 t$ v6 P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; m2 R1 J6 `! s; _+ ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 ^0 p4 t5 H$ q( C' e6 D- i. r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

5 N6 `" t2 x6 W" Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>