【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 N4 t( N# ?# E* N4 N, ]2 t& c歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 P2 }! S- k9 ?0 X2 ^4 }Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ o3 ^9 H# g) Q8 b/ FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ K: V  z1 n  m/ `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: {0 _5 H4 n/ i' `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 c# m5 @; C" Y6 c% e- ~9 T! USeeing the sky content with its love
1 F$ P. ~% v8 C* l: vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 ^! A& l4 ~4 G& ?4 RYou needn’t fear anything
6 N* t0 g- Q7 l9 E( L: mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 |/ a" m0 q. V+ N; N# B( F9 wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* ]7 v9 }. ~( y/ ~$ e9 i9 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
7 i: Q3 M7 X2 u7 dNothing can compare to my love
5 S- F, q" p( m& oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 ~4 l& R, `1 @4 T9 c/ }6 }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 M" i* V1 |% r# W5 d% W/ D9 }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: i4 c! R5 K8 F& I+ iI regret not dying
1 Q8 m* m6 A* h9 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! S' k2 b& x' L& f. P! i& SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 P& N% M1 I% ?. Y* P* M% lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 v* Y: u) D/ l- f# V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 o- W- w$ d4 S  @2 w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! F5 c! ~9 Y/ X9 c/ j1 A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. e4 D: _/ {* @7 Q9 ]3 W- f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 I3 Z" f& i* S& V0 h" F9 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* w9 }" P* n7 W; {9 f% a. K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. _7 p5 R6 ?% V: Q! w5 k  |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: x% n% P/ T  [8 Z4 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& e# u+ P+ f- E8 d4 g6 ]3 S8 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- X  U7 Y& G: ^4 T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, K% \9 `2 _, E( n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% H" M  W! T% e1 s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; B7 X8 t  ^6 B9 A( X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# M! X$ G+ w. I; ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# P, P" T: |+ s3 A8 b7 M0 k7 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: \5 b% a5 v! v% y( x- w% @0 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% B+ j  H( C0 s0 c3 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 |( K6 m& Z! Y9 k: O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. D2 o! M0 d9 G, f) W# r2 r% Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% A9 c7 I. P3 G. q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 W. a$ r. A$ O) p& Y1 y1 u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! f: Y& ~/ Q# y4 \- x) K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 p7 z- A$ h. }2 Y' r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 ?/ |, W4 [. e$ E1 |% D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- _  v$ p6 u' I6 l! N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* ]/ }5 d; R' t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 g' _, j, _, I+ P+ y" T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 o( r) V" e2 @- Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>