【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ P5 z! F: |- B* E4 Q: tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: F; _  W; k; u7 y* l1 o1 |, lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 m& p* O0 t& SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' U/ e) d3 T( H! V% uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 l, P4 ?" Y: g. w& [' OEvery other word you utter is love
. V" z% b5 r5 \5 S' H3 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
8 g9 j% Z* r1 X  Y: Q% D1 K. KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; M2 U( _9 ^, y3 i, G* d6 yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( @2 y7 P+ Z/ V$ J4 t6 a6 x6 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 q- G& h. o0 @. T0 l3 lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) T6 |' B! f' pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! C0 Z3 A& c1 [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 z  m- [$ T+ nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 A  B' h7 }4 i. ?1 E3 o2 o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 R+ Y' o4 f  L: P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 V, x4 l# r/ f! L; W5 |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( v( b6 S, t- o% r4 I$ f! b, }( h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 \+ S  D8 v2 _1 [: e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 Z* j6 T' c2 `* f% T1 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& s% h4 V/ g% o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 j1 R! n+ I1 v* M( f, y& L# f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  C" D5 y1 G) X: ?/ r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 M, n) R" _8 ]2 g  `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 B2 F" h9 y7 W* x% f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- ?" _4 S; ~& _" p- _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ C9 m3 j- R7 _4 g/ v, F/ u+ A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' d; q* e1 m% b9 z1 T& i! Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 P2 {. P1 m1 N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 H- |, Y+ l0 J3 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) S/ ?2 O; ~) i& F5 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% i3 h  t% R  R! ]8 ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! m' N5 u2 A1 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 B! ]# N+ ?. P$ Y/ o" W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 p+ O4 W/ {& ?! c% r; b( S' o我请你剖开它
  P1 m5 u) z# l9 D1 I0 F; g
+ O7 K: d: G( U4 [# j- ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 D$ z) U$ n6 g% |' \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>