【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
. y5 p# W8 h, \/ LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 H2 v) r' t5 K* D5 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& b) r& d7 \  }$ x+ H% u! kSeeing the sky content with its love
, {$ ~: o4 {* N9 P( q; |4 L) b. j8 l0 tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* E) [. M+ v2 f. c4 q5 b0 b, m" t. vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ V; D$ Y2 [: @' ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 V3 G' O1 e5 ]' @# eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ B. o/ b3 D: I* N& j! `# EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 o6 \! e/ d- M7 T" k; T2 oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 H5 ~! e7 V# R5 kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ J, |: M6 _7 W9 y9 U1 p0 k& tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 L& V6 H! d5 D; x! }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 r' ^. s9 y9 V8 k& o* @# T3 u. Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. f3 g7 b; X& r4 Y8 s2 i5 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) v2 ^9 {9 C1 t1 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" L) v& o2 q8 j# ~$ u) Z  U1 x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ |% C# F, q( J9 r: Y) r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- Y2 r' p% p; w: U& }& q) K- X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& Z2 G; Y$ Y2 T9 i* Y* I" ~* I' U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 C. M! ]/ _2 [6 b5 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 ^& U$ ]: s' K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 D8 s; ?) g, s) _& j5 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* M4 y2 h) C  f) E* F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 |  H, @" ?  g+ ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 P6 N$ H7 n1 e" \2 T( M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  s$ t& b7 _3 Z/ a: M' @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( H% G! \0 |1 _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 t1 v' _& x# e* t2 J! `* l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ X8 i$ {( o, o9 |8 `9 O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* }9 s6 L1 z* M0 S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 o: J4 S' D* j- s  P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. f$ v! j2 ^, @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& `( M+ X: K6 F- q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, t/ K2 I7 w/ }* r$ `3 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 W! r/ @$ ?( W; h- r5 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) {0 I! L4 o1 x- R# b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ X* F/ ^" w7 f: a" r4 P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' t3 P  E4 k- Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>