【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- |: D( L& d1 I6 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! }% U5 r* p& _+ ~6 p6 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 X4 h) }- [. B. L3 M+ ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. J- L' N- c* K! d9 YWith the moon kissing it every night
  p. v# d; J% V5 M5 nSeeing the sky content with its love
  K- S+ y+ H" {( {  P" PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  c) n( |& X5 e9 M( c! D, k2 aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 g: T; T5 B) p3 N% J/ cI really want to know just how much you love me
$ y8 m8 {6 d: t5 n& {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, x$ @* r, P6 f, JI want so much to see inside your heart
6 c# l4 H2 c& |: LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 s9 Q6 r% @/ n3 b, a, Z* {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% a% r" N$ ~6 A( N+ V0 T+ VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ N( y) [1 T) `. `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 d) B# R3 g, Y0 Y0 S4 k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( F9 w9 A5 {: ~: V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 V) _; u/ H$ u  k8 W0 P3 F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 Q7 [9 `+ Z4 q" D9 N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# J* K0 R% B( }/ U1 l7 [% P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! S2 c! f6 v. \/ d! o; ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( h% t# H( @! t( Q* c  g<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- x. O4 k8 x) Z( D) w. @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. F* i$ Q' N8 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! ]3 L) u* j8 S5 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: t* Y2 v/ o5 ^  S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 [) Y4 N7 {1 [% s8 w" B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# I2 k. ~" I- y3 f! L4 n) S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% Z; h7 x+ h) ~. L1 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 o; T4 T9 o. s- v* X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& G  s$ e5 X  f0 [; M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 P2 H& \7 o  U/ d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. A( o% j: X5 l3 S<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ O- M: _7 f' k: m; N. I. a. o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 a, _5 E: H5 y: R- H' W* X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! }  N; y  x* G" q) q" n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ M6 f7 k/ y4 b# \1 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ L8 p# _. ~; a1 A. R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, _( O2 `& o, T. i& D# T8 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: i$ t  W3 ?' V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>