【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! p& {. @7 T5 S& B! p  G* W& @; \The moonlight is shining brightly,
: n) C/ V& Z4 M8 t' f5 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( A5 g1 U% C& |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ [% v- S5 R( qThe sky is happy down to its soul
- K) Y. E& ~1 \8 Q* F! qWith the moon kissing it every night
/ \. e9 B8 L$ q% \% {# H4 SSeeing the sky content with its love
" ~3 g% D1 [+ G: U. E% u( BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 M6 _. y& {, a8 }8 @) ^. _, fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* X: j, i$ V$ @% i$ G- T1 BI want so much to see inside your heart
8 b0 k) v9 b/ p4 V: y. [& g: i/ c5 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  k% w9 @, X& s5 p$ z% Q' k7 _I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 U2 I0 R: C% }6 _I regret not dying
# R$ E2 d2 Y+ g* C0 n, C& |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 N" ?" M: |  z9 E- o, bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* c6 G. @) I- T8 g0 Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: p- {/ A% ^5 ~- D/ J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( E, f/ |8 R, F9 B5 E4 L: B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 y5 L4 ]$ e: q9 z: Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% n- L+ ~+ b- p" a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; o. z# [; ]+ x0 `  ^# _% b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; K% P4 E* K5 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 d, E' u; p7 }/ d. T, D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 e" |# ~" b2 a/ n- \" r- Z% j7 X<P>你无需担心</P>
7 C( L4 t" j% K& s  e8 B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ }  `% e" d" l) {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 ]* d- J' n) c3 C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ p' g+ ~  q/ r3 |% p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 G8 q7 l9 a- H% @& c7 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. ]2 j6 H5 b  R* Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- U3 Z9 ~2 N, _/ |7 B/ W. Q5 E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 F3 t/ r' M/ y! E0 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 s1 x& F$ K8 v$ M: o+ J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ J  I4 ^; p4 u+ G2 }/ S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# G+ p& c) u- }! W- }* I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" B* a5 W* }9 B$ O& X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 d- e: Q4 m7 o8 V5 K' w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 \. b7 N- h- z% B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 R, w( A0 z* v! O& B6 `. @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ Y. g/ C+ V0 r* ?6 |  K8 q7 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: x1 d3 j+ H8 t: D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ p; F" j1 e7 `) j0 V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' O8 s1 J! |/ S$ h% S, D& M- J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; O; B  f6 @4 N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ z5 f* H) J* Q7 l7 f* ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 H6 ]5 t9 P0 s& a/ U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 E' @) [3 d% G6 y: w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! H4 ]6 [& L. g  }* C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* ^4 S8 C# M  L; p我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  k. K& {8 _  B; s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>