【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
; x. l5 ^( l: A7 g8 G$ Y9 f' WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ R& a. |( I. dThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ `) ]& Z  u9 Y, OWith the moon kissing it every night
! O8 }) e' N$ |* Z6 {: F# _4 k& _8 XSeeing the sky content with its love
& {! b1 l# t+ y/ r, eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& q) v* C" A& H3 J- SI really want to know just how much you love me
8 k, H  `8 K& X2 b1 qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 T+ t, U% y: @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& C& `6 H5 E) Z  ~4 p$ AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 B2 [$ V) _# D/ w( g; v" y1 r  D  OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; ^7 s8 s0 f& n: [' c) w3 lI regret not dying
* \4 e# E' [8 _6 i& ?' vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" H  I# |; t* |+ o3 `5 B/ gWith such a tongue as yours,
8 H# |0 m+ ~# B) M8 J9 }: qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# r8 D% n/ {3 G, O: j. EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- _' `$ j5 V  t1 `' PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 n- S, C8 S, f0 E; c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& Q6 ?& N4 t- R* z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 x) B( d. x5 `2 v4 h- x7 n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 k! |  v( W  a" Y1 c) x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. @) f1 q7 W0 v0 a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 V9 p  G; H- i- T7 X( O* o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 A% S; y6 A/ K) O' m* H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 Y0 v7 U* f& P6 L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ c5 |$ A8 p1 S4 E2 W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 E* m* G6 ]1 U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 s" j3 T9 Y. ]5 v3 S8 T1 C+ i* e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" s3 u" ~  u7 l7 N, h: X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 X  b2 w7 |; u) R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  |2 j: D8 a1 {) r8 f- x" t8 `7 S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, s. P( P( Y$ V/ T8 l0 N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 c% v! M5 o& k8 }/ u% a  `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) l( [& A, d+ n7 N2 |1 T- ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ w# l- U5 k6 U2 r2 h! \. E% }/ N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 e& \5 Z# n- ~6 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' w$ D" m9 ]% y' j2 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( ~9 n- U: V) b. o; e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 i# n9 @0 a1 |5 n/ S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* B2 k0 n0 G9 V2 J( Z9 ]. x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 R. K- D0 ~, n0 y9 T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 p* k8 J6 r2 U; T* D( p- @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% O, p0 A& p7 y7 K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- u# }1 E- B/ b5 p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! ?0 E6 ~$ K9 ^, B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% ~8 m( W, f8 `* a. a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
$ u: S8 c8 F5 v7 V( }8 F% T
$ j+ W! R' H9 C我请你剖开它
  Y! D+ p& I+ V  x% A; Q3 v& G
7 b/ d& w) P8 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! W% j" O: _4 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>