【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  Q2 o$ T( E; c* v; k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& F8 |$ w1 a& C; `5 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) i$ K& G. J9 s) BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 T7 h& e. e/ |# @' e) _+ j3 }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 l; p, G. L# g$ d' H2 kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 l; n+ A) k7 l( w1 c" bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. S. |+ k  B0 F  O$ c* `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ T, t% `9 Z- {6 `- B. wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 G- N8 e! x$ j4 }" F: u: mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 t% X/ ^6 i- z+ R6 R% O% ^! {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 J* S# c& B* \2 x5 H1 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 {1 v6 K8 D6 g: v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% S. [# ~; m' d' s, E3 o8 w1 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( R9 l# J0 v, w- T, M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ J, m. X0 k7 H5 m  ]" S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- Y% y# K$ ?/ y# I- C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 R" T* X! ~6 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 \4 A1 t5 I& n( C; f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# V: s+ f7 ]1 G8 ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 a* b% K' y7 a3 E! N2 w/ N0 q: A$ w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 B. ~% L5 i7 \4 e2 a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 A& x' h4 Z( T  V! ~1 {& a7 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) z$ t' S/ m" a- k3 A7 s+ r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 m; F$ E  t4 O' ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 _9 N# T7 m4 O7 s2 ?9 i7 \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 y& c( ^: k+ m7 r# }6 w% Q! H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% O2 T( Q  A7 l9 y' B# b: U3 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- p  o3 y  f8 K' ]9 H4 @1 D3 _" u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( X% a) Q, H% t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# B5 o8 {. \; [0 \4 y2 Y# j8 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( j( D& j" d" V6 O- g" h9 Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 b/ @" e/ ]5 H* ^% d) y* ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* A: Z$ S5 u* Q- H+ o9 j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, Y$ g9 q2 h- P- Q7 _' A) r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. q: ]  L( O( x# e! b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 i5 r$ Y& U. m' O$ d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* J: P6 x5 @, e( P2 {0 h+ Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  {& Z4 n7 H. W- b4 }我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>