【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: A5 D# o8 r! \, r! _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# B- R0 V" V) F) {( d$ @The sky is happy down to its soul
9 E9 q" O* @7 Q5 B" |1 q7 {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 r% d$ d( d( E% |0 l& NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  m! M/ y7 W0 n) e3 _2 A: h' P* i* wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# |2 K3 @6 E5 \: MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 ?+ r( C# `: u) Z- \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( U& c. z8 s, @6 z' n4 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  Y' a9 G$ q2 D8 rWith such a tongue as yours,
) C8 ~4 K0 ?! \' n9 KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ |: W( s  S+ v6 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. h# U7 z" ]" m& u1 k' `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; |& `! X  s9 V, F3 s( ~. ^% \! j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! D/ G; _( [4 P$ @$ u- M& W4 R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 `% m1 z4 h2 x8 N+ R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ l5 i/ _! C  A. U- p4 p( q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ T5 X: a" K' Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. w  b; O# T0 J: {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! g$ S& V$ k- {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 }2 e& _3 [( r( h0 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& M& v1 f& \' V1 t<P>你无需担心</P>
0 _  q7 ^/ ]- H0 ]1 N- X0 c. @; f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 D+ i. {. E4 R5 R+ q; Z2 {/ @2 o5 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 s4 C% w; O# U7 Z, ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ ?7 f( G8 `  e! E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 }: I3 |; H: k" ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  ~, x8 _6 {4 J* k: L! S: X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 U1 c) R! m5 _% Z7 j, s; }# D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: b- N; e0 g3 [5 a1 P+ L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& G: i& _7 A9 g* _6 f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: n2 `  ^  t( W' U; N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ m$ e- c8 T$ Z% S3 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* S8 x% b! c- r5 F3 I5 M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# n0 Y# L5 t( {; q( v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 L; X5 u. \# P# f& O* w& U$ q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, B  X/ f7 m5 `- x9 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; P! w3 R, L* r8 U4 J/ h. T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 ^2 n$ ^  o+ _* |* I7 ?  i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, [0 Z1 y; Y3 ]8 i3 V/ B; f) U1 U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* h6 T: k) m! O6 X$ q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 K. u9 }  }, e: t# C1 }. S我请你剖开它

# ?# T% c9 i* X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" e: ^, t. T/ R8 J+ Y* @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>