【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 k* G5 t7 A" IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: j& D3 H7 p! Z0 F& vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ L  k+ n$ u* p; }9 eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 H9 N3 r; b9 ~0 E: r' oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( W4 f" Y6 a# E& D% v8 IEvery other word you utter is love
( i: B5 x- v% |( {+ Y6 a: NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 R9 u4 f4 `% x8 _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ I1 w6 t8 h: hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, o  @: g6 T' \; E, |I want so much to see inside your heart
4 o3 s2 y) \8 J6 [! j6 H% QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' D8 L- S: f, j/ \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 D1 R; V' o; ?5 h8 w1 ^( q$ ]6 i' vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, e/ b) N: j" D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, y/ J/ v" }: i- W2 O0 i+ z. v) w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' O* F* C6 C( E* `# ~2 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ m8 l3 M% O/ B1 z; A: s. ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" @' B4 s! Z  _8 C# r$ [% g6 w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, A# m$ s+ t( I( [# e( O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 Z) c* h1 ]  [! N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# a5 c8 K& W8 d& r, _: t( ?+ M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. `  k8 K/ P: ]. f7 Q4 Q( V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ C7 ?; w9 @# X0 R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# W) P/ \  ]4 N. I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" V2 O  C' _& q7 m. |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" P* n' B3 r2 ~$ o9 A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. b5 f% z- f& M$ w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 |( _9 T* n  ]6 [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" T$ e3 d4 p* [/ M3 {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# l$ S+ G, c- b4 |/ Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  N3 A/ E  x$ b7 n% ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* B$ ]( R/ v3 \3 O+ `; X& @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 z5 V& E0 o( S2 m% b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* l; ?2 [, L& R  u7 a% `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 P8 r. ~* P- u! i! f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 o7 z9 d3 b# U/ J. f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  r" G+ Q3 }' r" D2 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' p! G! F: {/ l% d" H8 C- p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" c4 D! S: `6 E. p  Z' E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) h! ^* u+ H+ K$ ?2 o6 I) k5 y& W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# s: {6 T6 _2 T. b) ]/ q4 b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 a) w( F$ b: i% Q# u) H* N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ T& e8 d, q3 e" v2 D* E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 R* Y7 C! o0 J# d" {' u$ y; X. ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 g: C( `+ E1 c. O- a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# O- H  q4 ^$ B/ [! Z: x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 H) o! B5 J% M  f  ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>