【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>


9 r' _' D, C$ G+ e' j# A0 w; p歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% q+ v6 Y! V: ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ L1 R8 y- _. X7 h: xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 r- b4 E) j1 E) K6 @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! L6 u5 I  J. o+ r& x+ h) DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; k) T2 `  {( u% d% [- E" I9 ?Every other word you utter is love
7 B( m; e, G1 N8 g' `+ {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 r8 ^6 r# i# T/ ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 K7 S, W5 n1 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, ~: a6 y0 c) r" ^9 ]+ p" Q# zI want so much to see inside your heart
' O  u, P* j9 M( e; tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  Y9 i1 T  y0 e$ O7 g2 E2 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, U6 m2 \; n& Z: E9 N  }, a/ v7 CWith such a tongue as yours,
: Q- x7 s1 a: IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  U1 z& Z# L& u4 FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( G1 A! f, i4 r/ C7 u9 q1 ]6 \; IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# n: D6 X2 P0 w  C" ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& `4 e; l/ z( h+ S0 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! B7 `# {& S4 @: u" Z+ ^& e9 Z: |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) n# D0 F& u% |: }6 D1 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 T& d) g7 a1 G7 c$ P( W/ u. r9 X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: R5 R3 ?( C% _6 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! ~$ V* S- m+ X- P9 V! r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# m" f, V/ p& S5 D! ~0 m% m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# [  }5 g8 ]3 @6 Z/ o% H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# ~1 _3 V5 Y% N+ J<P>你无需担心</P>
3 S0 c. F% H& `2 C# j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 g0 ], x3 C, G! D5 b' L5 {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: \3 Y! v* M) x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* V& }, \1 ]" e) _4 u/ f" S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( B2 v! k  ^/ D- q: p# X3 v* G  O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, Z6 v/ R# V& f6 N# F4 J; O! s( L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 `3 n! E0 K4 t$ R: j/ c) y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 y* Z& `* ~$ ^2 D4 X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 e1 X% l3 N  l7 H( `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 C3 d/ X0 E$ T5 @$ [& P5 L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  S' M. H2 P, `2 |& D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! _- Z8 |% z# _. c1 @4 x9 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 C2 b3 j% u' B$ b; D/ m- n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 Q; i3 w& S7 r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; z- Y. w/ W* ^  |9 {+ i* z' Q) C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) U9 B" O0 @$ P0 s2 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 j8 C3 [$ L: b! g1 ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- L. c: K$ C: Q! A( |; K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* o7 D# M9 h1 _% L- b. J; u- S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- a- H+ l& z' r' Y. U( `+ Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- m1 E. f2 x. u4 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 A% Z5 e" {$ ]6 e3 @0 B% R, m$ O: \3 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, j( n' P) b/ K0 r; O9 q2 N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  @3 y- m' \2 E) G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ l: k! J% ~  A9 [- s$ v6 k- s$ G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
* Q" M2 k/ K, W
/ N; n1 ~8 {9 a* i: [我请你剖开它

; O9 K) d! z% K1 c1 H7 ~2 C0 M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>