【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! ^% @6 `4 r6 {* g9 _4 `9 J% N0 B. F歌词我附在后面。
) r% Y% u1 w! j3 A( K. |# Z# fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 m. K4 l: ~5 L6 X6 i0 d# z+ D" JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" \. Q" c; s2 C( T# B- LWith the moon kissing it every night
/ \# s/ Q8 ^& y1 g/ ^1 a! |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 f$ B& o& e6 i$ S+ ?0 mYou needn’t fear anything
4 z, L, n% y0 D8 z3 M1 y3 Z% kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" Q2 _- B% C# e- sEvery other word you utter is love
; {2 I$ K, e9 |+ r2 vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 y9 ?) x. K0 j% r: R/ SNothing can compare to my love
7 g8 d3 p) [8 V/ OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, X/ ?) y4 `- ?" R! d" OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' q5 h! E. {, O' y. ~. PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; R" N, Z8 `# a! l; R& k' U9 tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 P; t8 \6 Y1 U: _0 ^9 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ f' G1 k! p  s' l/ E& URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' W2 m3 t- F( F8 x) ]' r3 ^" b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 c8 O6 B5 y: C  x6 P3 q8 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 A$ _6 i  J$ k1 F' L# P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. K' L9 q- L& `* K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: ]/ S: z  D3 r; y0 V" W4 N# r+ C& E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ }' w( ^3 U' X7 s' J2 I: C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( b, @$ V$ ?) j. }! k; t% c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 Y! u9 o2 `6 q+ P3 o$ j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. {" Q2 {2 B& O. u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' W" M# e1 x# x1 Z% @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* v* @- @0 q' R0 f3 ~. K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: q& P  D4 W4 n0 C3 N$ q& I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. y, `- t* S1 `& P8 i$ Z1 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* R. M5 N% l) x$ u% a1 U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ U2 h0 f& \, }6 X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( l) M7 ]# a9 r, S# ]  M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! w, H; Z# f9 R* B$ O1 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 L7 V3 R) ^8 y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, |5 O) P' G& g8 Q" a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 o9 ~* M: J; g0 C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ w- E" O1 n. i) L1 \9 Y6 |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 W9 Y* s2 B1 r3 k2 D0 N) t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 i7 {' N3 w( I  f7 `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* p3 C. Z- `" I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 U6 Q: r2 I" w: _+ e6 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( U& ?8 L% i, n6 a# ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' Y4 @/ H+ E6 X  U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 {! S* e; c1 A0 I3 d  \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! E& F& ^, Q4 K# y; W" W% |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

$ U* n( }2 r3 E3 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>