【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. J7 o; b  c# B0 K( P  \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% n- z( b7 j' X- S3 f4 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' V! z, {% j( XSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 f- S& ^  D) u8 E/ B5 BYou needn’t fear anything
) t6 t; d5 V& x2 W# `* ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ z. Q5 |7 ]4 U( L) Z7 o5 V9 HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 P) U" P; v( h4 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 s! k7 Q+ s6 {/ _, W7 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 L6 a* U, [% SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 [! l9 K. {. L2 l% R8 M& z- GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% X7 O6 F% r, \) |- z  _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! B- b5 X- O5 {' b, b5 @/ d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; k( w6 o3 j2 O4 D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 A; e7 H1 d* S' Q& g% [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 z/ k; X% |. Y! p6 P6 ?* _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& m2 j% ^$ J' }# \& y) K+ Y! j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 D4 z9 _/ M( V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 T  `/ A0 x$ ]3 E0 ]; @5 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: x  k" C7 K# D% n4 k<P>你无需担心</P>
) l, m- i; f* }8 g$ T9 P8 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 x% Z  c, p9 q* H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 Z3 Z6 t4 ]9 q9 U7 ]2 w2 z' E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) v# H. L  U, M5 U, T  @/ S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: X4 D- r  u" \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ ~- M' p$ f% x% X. B* N8 \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; @* [: z  {2 Q2 x0 x: D. `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! @6 }. j9 ~1 w; v5 p* [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 Z) h4 R+ @( c% u. O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! Y- ]. g% T, X) }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. I) F; m/ J2 S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ U" J  @; Z/ L# [8 @' q+ b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 e  u  f" e1 o! t" g/ Y7 D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, c2 E% o3 _( Q3 u, e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" x; \& {! S$ h9 ~* L: k  Y' v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 T; r. n/ Q& y1 ~8 {% E, n0 c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! B, o. J1 ]; j1 ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>