【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 Q0 d) S6 E( y9 Y8 L% w6 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! z/ I0 l3 N; J8 ^5 z; `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: R/ Z  M) _5 _; g* Y0 B0 }The sky is happy down to its soul
/ m! |3 y) |$ l8 c% LWith the moon kissing it every night
: W/ Q4 f% _/ P3 HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- ~0 S  A8 o7 @3 p0 q. G. Y# h- d9 JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ C- |% l4 x$ L# |$ Z$ {Every other word you utter is love
$ |# |! U& n. p" |I really want to know just how much you love me
2 y7 O  ^  s, L. ^) s" m2 PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 A$ }+ ~- y8 {$ R% E$ NI want so much to see inside your heart
7 J& A' \9 N+ Y4 i0 wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ z. r* z: U$ x( z# QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" ?- a9 N+ L" {; x* [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 W5 e- V5 Q' A% m3 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: j. |+ e# ?) k, L* |8 [% H* ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 A. X+ S) u4 x4 ~$ g5 A. A6 [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 X' K4 F! |  w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ N' M3 B2 T, v7 U; M# A! i% ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& |+ F% [" x% e" L# U( T7 s' b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 Q9 C: t+ E( ~1 S& u6 i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ D" |  W% i$ T, j' T9 ?2 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 k2 [6 E  g% I+ q3 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' k6 u5 O( R9 @; m5 @# g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 [6 O) P8 G. y1 z" ^<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# f3 n9 p7 ^4 d( {, X  U4 W7 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 P. C% w4 t6 [5 \* u& I1 e$ ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' \1 f" {5 V! j* j" k5 D  W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* d0 n7 J3 d: `& g/ n& t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 R+ h. D5 b- s2 J1 Z4 P: [% E/ {( m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- K3 _& U- b% \# q# j$ Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& x! A& _' k1 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: D: G; L$ x/ z. {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* c& y) O% `, X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 D( |6 u* r3 i& ^$ i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 p! u6 f" S) |& P- x4 ~1 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 E- F+ k* ?0 p. ]% l" e4 W4 \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" \0 t' E: ^2 [1 _. A$ |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>