【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 ~& K/ A3 J9 S+ M6 }  {% kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" @9 X: @: l% H" U6 }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 s6 U+ O/ [6 y! ~; V& BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% r4 A. Y9 C+ r7 J, XYou needn’t fear anything
# f9 S+ \' O- ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% S  t: V( Q& z# u. T2 I. LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) v/ X" e6 R& Q% u1 NI love you I love you with all my heart
0 [9 P' A3 C6 \$ T9 h2 KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! z' K% o# H2 K  X$ w4 [* y6 b* FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 y1 _' u8 ?0 b& }; L  D% nI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, _, E, V% p3 h+ Y% I9 l# W; N7 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% r8 J2 k* w/ M) W& BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 V. {% j. m* h8 ~" X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& h0 e6 h/ U# `- Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 Q4 x) T4 p) r) S0 m9 T1 W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* j) h  Y0 m1 B6 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 D$ }$ a+ c8 }0 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' r9 `$ y$ m% U1 f# w0 I3 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( \; P' ?1 i7 ~7 ~5 ~  |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 m9 h" l9 l6 S: w4 Y" i3 f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' W( U; B5 @* u/ M3 G1 @" J/ Y5 z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, `$ \$ r: R) S: c+ ~' ?6 T0 a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- _& Z5 x. h( B. i( I! S; H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 I3 B# j6 [; u  Y& u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) K! o0 D  B. F, f+ `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 Q; p$ ~+ X! Y/ [9 g" c* r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 m  @( V) J; k2 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 m5 i' k9 g9 l( W- J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& `$ X; t; L- N$ q: M( x% v. {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 K3 t& o2 W7 x* K1 R9 y9 t' p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 A2 s7 F7 b, T2 ]- v) Z6 Z; \6 p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. V+ V7 G5 \% t: C' h- y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( ^$ r" I2 Z6 ]! J  ~0 c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% R" X) }+ x8 q- I) S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  ^6 K* C! R) s# o& Q( C1 A2 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>