【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 `7 E) q% U! p0 a8 X( y# l2 `歌词我附在后面。
$ A# |* ?; O( i0 K7 v6 ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  N+ G( ]8 H' A3 H8 l9 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 \: m& ^/ h/ \$ d( z2 n: p- IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& h( U' _1 g  }The sky is happy down to its soul
5 [0 ~, d0 G- UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 q7 r3 M" Q2 Z: J* x' WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& k/ B8 _9 _8 ^) YYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 Q1 ^& u4 Y9 jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# S6 Q5 `. W% \- q) H6 GI love you I love you with all my heart
. ^! S5 Q# q6 u9 E9 U( MNothing can compare to my love
0 m" E# |/ f9 j3 s5 Y" sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 t2 g8 G' l4 Q# r) \, f3 P! n# _I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" a! }. x8 {8 u3 |! @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, g; U; C0 [& y/ ]' m4 x% s' ?! f# `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 X( L: m: H2 H# N' J+ U; x$ C) oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# |5 R2 P9 V- {5 D0 W. a3 Q& D% s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 [) j4 u( K4 k. c5 N1 Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, o; M- b4 M4 B4 Y1 `4 i; K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; ^' a- ~; j  y' [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 D4 X7 j( \1 Y0 U0 ]$ `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& n/ D5 [+ Z: h  L; b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 v# ^! B, J. }- u: h& Y: Z" k8 G& L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' t" O3 t+ k  V. ^- @" X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- Y7 f; m; L# h. C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 Y0 T8 y2 q4 l% e" L8 r+ l  p' F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 V! |4 w! B: S: S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ O' x( a$ [3 r6 M4 D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 K. X7 \3 H" F  h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 @  @- ~) b9 K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: u! Q; K. [) }* |5 G" ?* A* V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" q0 C* S% h8 }7 n  d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ l0 f$ H1 H* n6 [( J( y* S* |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" x0 F4 h+ J, `; Z6 k7 k/ x3 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 w: n4 m% A$ f$ m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 b. F1 D% l, R6 l1 F* W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 p# D  R' r  d  B+ r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: \4 f3 u9 S, `' P- c! u* w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 g( E8 Y$ k; w- P% r8 P<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 w6 F; g, R% L9 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; K3 b6 ^+ ~; s( D$ C0 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ T5 {( [/ l. y8 |1 F8 u1 j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ o9 y  v1 b8 H$ w8 ~7 X2 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" j7 e( J6 ~$ l5 s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& F7 s6 g1 L( [9 Z0 i0 C2 P( H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  c* O/ ^6 n" E4 ~( Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ V" q7 V* V8 {/ a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" \% P7 S  t. G# I# c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ N( |+ Q( N. b9 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>