【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ y. S; E2 M% u- \6 P9 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& h& i( l$ [) I7 l% VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ M( }% P  ^; l$ ~0 z: j  ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 y$ c( i8 y. O7 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ p5 u5 _% \# G( h! f- F0 X5 VEvery other word you utter is love
0 Q/ j+ `+ l- w  m' s9 G. KI really want to know just how much you love me
: G# X5 D' ~, [9 X. i. vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 G% T5 }: `. J2 i& PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 ]1 R* Y+ j& M: i" H. z, bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; w7 x$ L- b, t0 d# l0 c+ nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# Z( F: [, q0 j" ?. g( d9 f1 _$ a& @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 p2 B1 e, o) _& K2 ~* b6 DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 e  b2 ]1 T' K- X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ ^7 q. @, N  t- J9 d5 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 B- T; l5 n6 j+ M! g% b0 o+ |& T5 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 [0 }. B' o# J( V! S5 p! j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 m) s: \2 O' N) X$ u. N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ z# P2 z2 w8 x9 a2 d2 Y8 _0 B' {, u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! t6 e' M) o# K: e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! h3 S) B# G5 l- }) m6 z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 t7 ?/ _- C$ i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 v1 s& Q- n8 V, |* i! [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 G% v2 W* L8 [5 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( D" [6 j6 t& X- F7 J8 Z6 Z0 g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! h+ @) p9 [' |# u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ L  K/ G$ \) W  o# z3 J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ b1 [+ s5 B5 H* s4 T6 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  i) q1 ?6 ^2 N! \+ [# M! @" Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# f9 X) N5 b0 O9 F3 Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# x% N3 B4 ]! O9 @8 F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. A9 G$ x8 ~% w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 j. V/ L0 t- f0 F- J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' H; ~! g0 A8 M" w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 W+ q2 Q: e% ^$ ~% S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 I  L7 ^! \! g* [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" |# X  y7 D) W9 b1 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  G  s8 P; d' n' ~* _/ _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) C6 ?. Q- M. W& [/ p+ L2 K1 g% [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. w2 |6 u9 G1 i' K6 P3 b* G" M* w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) V! I& C" R! N. [, C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>