【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; Y2 y$ r5 z* {3 ^) E$ p% e4 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' V) x* k" _4 }" lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# c3 G$ E. K$ l' ?2 L# GYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, R  X% n* _# c/ O* @) @/ w# W1 @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- d' a3 a1 o; p: N3 f# uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) Z' m# p+ K( R0 O( v# \6 ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( |2 f% ^# m$ Z/ }- H4 j! eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 {! F: p7 Z- d4 e( V6 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: e, S6 N9 V, P$ F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ B4 o5 N( z5 ?4 C" b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  v8 d1 i$ G& S: `3 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& X7 r1 K' B/ Z; C! R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ A/ o$ U6 r6 e8 ~7 b8 o' W% B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- ^9 T6 Z: [) n% A5 E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ v4 g" t' [( o, _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# `3 R6 _2 t7 Q: z. H: g7 U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ f' H  `( H+ u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 N  M1 E5 r2 \: d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ l$ H1 X& p8 C9 z; r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ i! E6 @( J4 V3 S$ ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, P' O: J  G* _+ E8 k% K# x2 k  l( M9 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; h4 H0 o2 x8 E! v) Q- S; _6 {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( g$ e* U0 l  X! Y2 x, Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, y0 P( S# M2 j/ a2 x7 c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 y& Z" s" ?. O) U! Q7 {) Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 E; U9 `+ K9 V/ w$ X7 ~" a6 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ H; s* m' l0 f7 {6 M" w- X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# t, n' M8 {; H" f  E/ }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 b9 j3 S9 d/ O* S) ?3 }* c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ p7 q* R1 r4 T+ R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& U& R6 T- E1 x" C7 e  F8 ~$ w: `" J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% F8 p4 r' _+ e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' f) V; B! o2 p0 T, R7 D/ G* c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 }: _+ ]- W/ ~! L9 q2 i3 v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 ^+ s1 [6 A& o( w8 G/ c2 O$ j; }% Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* f1 n* J3 y: n) a0 @& f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& H6 H9 S% z& [" |+ v: C% g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( P: R$ A+ B, o7 B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, f: I. j% V2 {: u# {我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>