【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; X3 g3 k! u* i' fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! z5 x) s. g4 s9 I7 [* W9 e( d5 [9 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* e! m! _# D* gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( T& e# \% e6 T7 Y' OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% t1 R+ ?: J! V8 b/ V( MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 `4 m) U+ p, P' {# e/ J- N# X7 UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, U& E& U- P( D3 a/ o$ h* nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. T+ d" l- C! Z6 D, ]' {) n4 XWith such a tongue as yours,
* j9 n; B- e4 H* V, [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( Q6 O! }7 ~& W; \: w! }8 @7 C0 WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 C; c+ G; j9 E6 f. c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ {' W8 [. j2 ^' C, S7 ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 b5 o, C  G; r* f$ Q% Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ t+ w& y, v* P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( A. J+ _1 m: U2 \/ R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 p9 [& Q. {* K1 I! y, F' ^  Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ E4 l2 R: b( r' o+ R  N7 @1 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* I3 [2 o$ B. }& X2 W2 Y1 K4 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 [2 T( V$ F* k) k7 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# A  u5 X* F. G4 G; Z8 `1 }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 \& r, [2 e% y6 e' M* O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& }) m' y6 V0 f+ l8 X) R8 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: D) Y- P9 a: K$ w( ]0 T$ x; p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 B( x; q( D9 m( ~' t# `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 @" Z/ p" t/ f3 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ C3 X0 _+ _% R, b6 }, w" f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( v: [* O0 }, _# T! i  k9 P3 ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% Z* ]9 s4 {4 t. j) N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 _. I* w* H) T9 w1 [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! y( z8 I# b) e, X+ O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 b( D2 g% A# `7 t) f5 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* d& u9 e0 @, a/ m$ L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ y& }; a, x" S* A4 U; K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 J; j" A8 Q% B% z1 E: r<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 V7 A2 t' A, Q% X1 B' y. V7 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: O! `( ~, U7 }# [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% n7 E8 y0 H6 u$ O! L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* a% Y7 I( k" S: W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& O; ?2 L7 q6 g1 a# x: S1 J  @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ y# F; y( b" G! ^1 s/ C7 ^  V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: k) {5 E- K1 [$ y- G- X: P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ A  \4 S. ]4 o) x# S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

/ l# R# f9 v9 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>