【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 D7 Q- c" ~# m. ]7 t歌词我附在后面。
0 l: V, [8 a, L$ k, Z/ JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 s; w; F/ A5 a+ O5 c& u# J3 _Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ j6 t1 ~# C: Q5 r( h, V( V7 @4 S4 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 x( H$ q+ {& }1 n" k- j. ^2 tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' I1 Y/ |7 h. W# hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- q+ e  j: y" \& I0 K- s! k- ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* F0 z, S3 O4 z4 v( j' h; U# @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 V9 a' j" I5 e. ^& o( G0 R, WI love you I love you with all my heart
3 {  A  h! C* l5 s+ U: VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ `) H$ v/ y7 C  @6 Z  L4 _. UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 V0 U% u' `3 x/ II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 B- j6 d5 s; _( N0 vWith such a tongue as yours,
7 J3 @$ b+ Y2 K$ V) |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: P" _3 g5 W: l3 f; MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) x5 Q/ a% Y8 z* G& w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 {/ g% \# C) V0 u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; Z# X% X4 |4 G; }6 u3 L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# m5 }# c6 [* C/ T' E  _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& w, W* b4 r' a# V3 b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" ]. o8 E4 U& \; T0 t" y4 ^' S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: _1 h( |# I) e. v( k1 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: M9 @3 z/ t/ C( }9 G0 b' U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 I, |9 a& z' X8 q) C<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 e% P! p# ?6 M4 S# A; [: x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* K; r3 J6 D4 Q3 |1 x- f3 M# ]+ O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# L& E; E+ p0 \( w: j5 ^7 y4 F; J1 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% |+ F/ t6 p0 f) F' ~: O( t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& }4 ^8 W! X9 M. T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! j# I3 X3 x! T5 T5 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ J% a* h$ q8 I/ y( @! q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; H! v' t% {6 Z) s! t8 {; Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 i% O/ W2 J& G( b8 q0 r0 {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 M/ y4 ^$ i& G& w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  L/ @9 g( X. A1 Q; A# h9 R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 D# z* A+ ]1 A; N: F0 K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' ^; ]! c) \6 x7 A) }% V" e$ [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# P& x  \" f3 N$ o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# Q+ A6 t! g, m) S# Q" o6 O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# k4 G4 {4 I$ @% }! ]6 M5 s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" Z9 s, K, V$ Z% D! i" w2 v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 X4 w( ?0 S% k' {. B5 d8 I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- _4 K1 Q* J* e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>