【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% d$ y' Q2 F! H9 q7 O0 _The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 t$ B' m/ Q8 X7 [2 j! A8 v- eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& c7 S5 a% {5 q. zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( Q. C) E* j' _% ]1 K) \3 O2 aWith the moon kissing it every night
; t* }9 g: s( F" h% RSeeing the sky content with its love
8 L4 q7 A  V( X) Y/ s, ^9 K; X& uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 o& `) t4 _$ b6 ]+ ~  R# J5 z. ~Every other word you utter is love
! P/ U& I  z9 p' g; _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: f  q3 e- p8 v  U0 [7 O6 lNothing can compare to my love
1 D; j  {% e7 ^9 U- C3 ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 e5 n% U! A% C8 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 G8 J! |7 e$ EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# R2 ^4 `/ t6 v% V" V: NI regret not dying
7 J# S+ O9 X( g& H* g# S+ k+ fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
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/ Y5 i/ ^" z* I" T7 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 B6 D$ a0 \7 h8 TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* _! N7 M& r0 O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( j. X) p6 @# n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' G! x) ~$ W1 C& t/ n4 t0 F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 O9 }' t  e' _* H6 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# k1 d; F4 m! ^; @6 _# x7 H5 p& {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 V2 D& L0 |! u$ ?4 y, y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% d' k6 i9 f( E" S0 S1 f; _$ d/ g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& L/ x/ r! C4 |5 ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% G: R9 d- _, P& m0 L/ n. G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  \# v! E' V6 P) z% P  h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" _& e6 O0 W' ^9 H6 V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; ?' z/ ?4 a, z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 _7 c5 K: i2 U# ?6 d3 g8 I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 J; H% u. N1 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 g) n9 Z7 \) `( |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 s. J; y9 A& s& ^, `+ B3 F3 v' Q6 N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 [. O# A2 q; D, p/ ]. T& m6 A$ U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) u6 ~9 N* f, |9 X) x; C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 [: |4 C, \: O7 ^$ Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 @0 \! D5 J1 \& c, H0 H3 x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* m; l& F( O# w7 _" o2 N& n' m* T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* x2 R' ]8 J9 x2 W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 w# ~1 N' z4 l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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% _" @9 Z6 G) r. Q: E5 S7 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>