【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( A/ M$ \8 A/ u  N$ ?% |  y; xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 l- V+ L' b8 e, ]The sky is happy down to its soul
$ V/ t+ u% R/ v* y) YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% Y* u$ i3 ]8 A* sYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 Y; ?# s. J  J8 S* z# `Every other word you utter is love
& q' V8 g1 Y$ I7 K% e7 w% KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" ?/ W* ]& a  hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ i) S' f6 e9 T7 q2 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 O2 {' b! h9 b& Q% yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' k* F0 i. _9 k4 [I regret not dying
( P& G6 Z; h3 u5 x* I/ m" gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# D& q/ w2 S/ [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 C5 b% y( u" x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( Y, v# f" R7 @& f# Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, @' U- B9 \/ p) _3 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* h7 u! h' {1 R  i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; _9 V' U0 u5 R5 |& P# Z) I5 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) ^5 e7 ^7 Z, w% t8 P7 O' I, Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 n: ?) m/ l; j& y* ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* @. d% {/ a# s4 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 r% g. m. A; @) \. p' O' \+ J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ u% z. s6 K8 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ \/ ]! O/ b/ ?* O. I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 s! B, H1 Y  W! x! D( Q' D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- ~- i2 s: X$ ~" X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 h$ T$ l/ f* y% T. u5 @+ N( g4 W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" H3 E9 Q+ ^, t* |. K: b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 ]; S3 {' y) i: C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ z. u% N) C& w) ^) p$ h6 q$ g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 ]4 {  m, K0 ~$ d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ a" D# {- y2 \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: U8 w  \9 P+ h2 n" o% j<P>I regret not dying</P>
  O+ w4 _1 X3 Z# Q/ u5 a1 T5 N0 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ Y( v  j1 w% o( `9 S% Q& P% F$ H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 T" g3 S3 K3 a! c  z/ e0 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 ?  k1 ?! l0 ]  H; T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 ?' d! ]# |4 P* D7 x, P7 s) M我请你剖开它

+ c  N7 J/ D2 J, ]( h! [7 O  b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' V# d5 B' d, ], t% e) J* U7 d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>