【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  z- O& G+ @; S( ~/ E歌词我附在后面。
! }# I+ K7 V, o0 x) x/ @" P* yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) B9 y, \8 g4 {, [Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 M+ C+ J+ P9 @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" G$ A" U" S" D' nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% ?, l5 d6 g% s# vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 P6 t0 y  K- R, x% p* q" A- GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* g& F; Y! c& P2 t6 E9 [3 }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ a2 O$ D4 @5 r2 oEvery other word you utter is love
% J# Q" Q& K; c! pI really want to know just how much you love me
8 f6 w( \6 |# y. W  ?: xI love you I love you with all my heart
/ R! |8 U+ h( D6 l8 ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: ^9 X& a3 Y- z$ k9 ~( r: gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, Z4 r& R. C# Q7 UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& l2 p+ \9 @" r9 ]) k, WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: g+ _* T1 Y3 P( y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 t3 r. d# A6 o+ o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 _  a$ `( ]3 V; S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 w+ R4 k" g9 V. q' y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* k# ^5 [0 C1 K$ ]" z; i# M1 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! O1 i2 V+ ?8 [, ?" O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) P* w; Y: t: u- H. f) B# n, m4 C$ \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( B" J/ K- I  ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' z# c) d1 V! x4 g+ Z4 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% E; Y; q8 Y. P- d% \9 G) a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& ^8 w* |+ M8 h<P>你无需担心</P>
6 b- T0 f6 k1 u" }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 T# d: E5 S0 a+ Q: f& n0 K: R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 |- w. Z8 }- Q6 z# O, G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 U4 Y. B" `0 d/ t& O0 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 n$ A% b' E2 g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. Y" f! t/ n$ Q) Q# }; {( J5 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 K5 J5 t5 c" ?. F+ h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" [/ R1 f! i$ s4 @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: ?" E( K' ?# g7 T* p. R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ e: w% I. A6 A; H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 @3 D0 Y! _5 k& f. x8 a6 ~; z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ z, W4 b% r. r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. l. L# O( _, p1 X6 E* ?2 R8 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- c5 e- L- s/ ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 V6 m; T" Z' F5 ]0 t0 M4 |6 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ f; U9 X/ D/ Q( l( `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ Q5 O# S8 t1 O' r: A; T( i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 B9 ]5 A- c% b0 ~1 D8 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# Y: m! O0 z- }2 D" X8 g2 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. k6 |. u+ b& e# T! X. a1 O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: J, b0 t! ^# v; Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

1 r1 X) a& G9 v  A0 b( b( h' y1 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( _: W- G7 ?! C$ n) l0 Z' F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>