【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# U5 G( D6 o% g0 w& j2 r+ oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ l( |" O) U+ UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) G) [5 o/ \' xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ L' }6 z; G  K3 K, w7 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ \' i" }1 T& H* v, h. \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 F6 q% }  H8 G% b( nYou needn’t fear anything
* C; y. A9 |8 [2 r4 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 w4 i! I8 @( M$ C6 G. Q- uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; Y$ d/ J( q( S0 Y! p2 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; v( s6 B" [# f( O  hI’m still filled with fear
. A' s% i' o; Z; F5 }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- K. @9 @) n$ z( L% Q$ M* q5 x9 Z8 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# ?( ~+ R/ C# R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( z9 v2 j  Y$ C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: Y. ?# f* P+ v2 Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  I) z% _. Q7 n2 U* C; A2 ~* o4 p) C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) I$ S; C/ r( |3 O: R+ q8 ^6 O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  s2 g# A5 [0 a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- R6 W! F# a8 e; V1 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" {! H) p: C+ |, H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 }" Q% c5 c" y" V# z6 ~9 }5 ~& Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* f; `  d! X# w, l0 g7 Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: f- p' Q/ }& T. k1 e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 |! y0 B1 z1 n2 @5 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 {2 t/ M& z7 s: v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 k0 R3 D& c, O+ {' Q& i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 M3 J$ z/ r: r  |6 W6 {0 k' O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* h* Z/ S6 `' `+ A$ g1 M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. x4 C/ y" t4 i- F) W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* U' x% U( u, n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; T. D) m* @8 o1 E- N0 o! _4 d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* W. N: n) h2 H5 K" V# @& R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 U+ l! T! I6 P+ ]* m8 d# `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ R2 _. O2 n" `# Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 I: r( d' J1 H* Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: N6 P* ~1 Z1 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- ?3 i! `4 v) }4 D$ g6 X* W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& W$ J# ~! h' P5 F- b8 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 ?+ T5 L3 {* U2 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) v% \/ ?/ X& y/ G6 u/ h我请你剖开它
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' Y) t- X% n0 W( _5 i8 Q* [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; R6 V! Y. o% t# ~3 c) l4 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>