【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! S; [  ~. k, q+ z3 c' v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" U3 u# Z4 z: T+ }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 E! X: K! g9 \) W/ u4 `( a. pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- }/ ]/ o  q. `) U! ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 J  M2 n8 }. @8 OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% p1 o6 x$ v5 [- F' YI love you I love you with all my heart
! U  a7 e) u0 L3 E4 iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* D8 P/ i0 c' i7 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% B5 l' c( N- C! z! K$ TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 |6 C; D7 r9 I' e! S  J. g% G+ oI regret not dying
# Y3 m, T! N2 y% v7 M2 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 p! d, {' m6 i0 N9 \. e0 uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 u) u: k, w: R/ u0 W" M: [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 i1 z0 S: u+ [- T% h) n' l* J- ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' l6 G6 p! w  v+ ^7 m4 x+ D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. j8 Z" u5 p) Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 N2 x0 h9 i! v* I$ |. H6 {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& o1 v" {! i  l3 K! m6 A; p; t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 \+ ~# D" T1 c# n) }6 w; K' N0 O# J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 f/ l( ]& v9 g4 T) q- u, z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# \  @8 D' R6 m$ O2 ^' F1 k9 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 g  d# j: i  c1 L+ A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 |; q* N  B/ I( N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 u. @1 Q! d' R7 H; i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 x9 w6 q( o5 r  }/ \" J& E; q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' j" G+ p) ?, ]3 M, x0 K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# z2 y3 S9 I3 h6 D) }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! C% a7 h/ c) l  u+ s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: O( ]1 J. U( k( k! d: n  F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  j) h" n* r5 |; [* w; c4 `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( y6 F# o. P/ n6 g+ l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 B, {, K# d- K* [" z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# w- N" L  X. t/ o' J$ d+ [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 U5 A( _4 O; E- M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# Q8 q7 ]3 M7 G9 |7 n6 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- y# l* ^; s: ^, W% o) m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 d! t6 l1 n  A; K$ F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. g% n( L4 G, O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( r6 c% }! Y1 B+ t我请你剖开它
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/ e2 B, n, b, p8 Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" s$ D* r$ x- h: }- N; E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>