【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
. x3 [2 ^9 J, @) ]  _# E  y- V) ^; o$ j: ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
( L0 S) f1 d( E8 R3 I- aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 S0 q* T0 H# I/ P0 R& F$ q3 N) wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! d4 ^2 D2 C5 O' @+ oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 }3 g3 G3 P1 g0 I0 v' P! ?# q) DThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ F8 I6 c+ X- J2 j4 `% J0 zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. M% N9 h; I: s6 ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ ~7 ~! d/ g3 t8 E6 LYou needn’t fear anything
# D4 I  c( }0 b# BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( b" ?' O$ L% C' \' d/ l- {Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& H- l, i5 K, ^9 bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 u% A$ @7 b6 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 I3 `4 b! n. z  G6 bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 ]: B  J5 P  T9 o' V8 q. tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, ]" n0 C6 C: w1 A0 W9 E8 i6 o* |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 d7 s9 ]* S) }1 Q5 C0 h% GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ A3 p7 i! v! a$ z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 d: \$ y; l/ n' D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 @4 T0 a0 m5 ~% s, ?( h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ ?; y8 N2 O. Z) A9 o: I. X3 e: S: Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% e1 c/ ^  t, g. i) m$ d7 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; d  }2 `; r% c! {8 v6 F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ `$ M% c# t8 F, e, ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 m3 T- f& G5 f" q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( }! Q+ ~. C, O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 ^( E+ y/ B- H5 o1 |- ~  T<P>你无需担心</P>
0 {  }6 X, x* O1 q2 a8 M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ ?+ {( Y7 U( F/ k0 h* F" C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! f6 v! R' P) z% C3 [! \" Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: z, S! k* `# G7 o+ i: M8 Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: a$ ^: K- R, Q' `6 G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" g: l2 {" @( c& L! f- c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' f8 q  T' R2 d& Q* P- G" R$ N/ d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 D# I* o( q5 P5 \$ q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) V% y5 t2 L$ T# @! h, W( _1 {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* K  h8 j$ x. V, n* U8 M/ r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! K: T1 p; H9 |1 D1 }. C( @: ]* E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ W% R+ f3 E: [; D) q* d# r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) e& P5 ^' ?) A: ~6 G0 i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 X% K( |5 }# ]6 v, K$ B+ q7 y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" N- q+ n$ m6 ~3 I' y& h( p7 i<P>I regret not dying</P>
; A( \4 X5 ~0 h$ q4 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! @8 I" H( X9 V( L9 m3 N  |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. A+ b& A( Q8 N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 h9 r/ ]2 g9 M, h2 J& x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" ^7 \( p1 a" u9 l* k* C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 P! m7 r) F' M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. e1 P* G+ J  b. C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" u, A- r* A1 F0 v* Q- S1 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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1 C; h4 N4 ^8 O' E+ V# V, H. k$ h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>