【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 P$ `* l( c& h; R3 f0 m' SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, k$ P2 T& w4 C6 i0 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' V! U: c' q  P1 w0 J" x5 ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 o* t6 |' o: M+ _0 [4 a* eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. i7 [" M! M3 i/ h! c$ ]The sky is happy down to its soul
& ?. h) B3 J& G# W7 oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 x' k) \! g2 V- kYou needn’t fear anything
, |" V* o# s, q+ Y3 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ o; |/ a/ z0 p% {6 @. cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 M, @1 x- o1 y9 v: V; yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; G$ p- v0 s, e- iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* @! L- X" X: p2 v, RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 R4 ^2 {  g2 B4 `: T5 {- LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 k2 H% u; N( w" mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  {, ^( P4 H- b9 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- `4 _. m8 _3 q: M1 QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 G. ^, v+ {. ?+ }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 G! I% M" B7 I, S! ]! q" _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 `$ @& b8 X$ b4 p% h" u. F1 j" ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" w$ `, @) J2 a9 k# \5 m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' Q; R4 A( x$ X* m! l' a8 b( Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 ]" ^2 ~/ Q5 T( A4 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 e+ u! E- e# A# S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) X( q$ S) n: i/ R/ f<P>你无需担心</P>
/ T& U& u, z2 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 e) S5 ?9 z2 e5 x" W$ w# R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  d5 U( r4 [1 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 Q) k, U! h( k1 R* F7 u& J8 j: u8 V! h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 ]  @- Q) w) x. s# f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 f3 I7 Z  t9 q% x9 e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, P( j9 I4 g6 }% A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  _% n0 g, s& O, O3 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 C4 y8 \& w" z: ~* w8 H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 z5 z* l+ [1 p& O8 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ M- Q7 e9 M: P2 q' j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) i) `9 M$ U2 t( n! \, r1 K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% R! y3 L3 h5 b. E8 J' p5 z/ ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, m) b# x& W' ~! P4 P$ x7 @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" o; y- Z2 s0 A6 j( O! b) W" A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; O# ]" s1 A7 T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( P# F$ m: C0 [, e5 l& G1 U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  y7 ~& R" f* U$ z% N4 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! q; W1 w6 E5 V1 h% A6 A$ k我请你剖开它

& Z' S0 `3 N( B- y' t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: I( c$ `* P8 ^! V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>