【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# i. y8 o" t% e/ j& P( s1 c1 v5 i2 lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 P# H1 f6 ?( h% `. f7 F1 ^! _6 V5 i3 JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. a7 Y  s' [- @) ]7 [/ qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 p; u1 [, A! \  \  NEvery other word you utter is love
, v; p, @2 `6 C- S. A4 SI really want to know just how much you love me
  z; P' L& J" J+ L% q0 ]4 Z! ^& \I love you I love you with all my heart
. }: l+ A9 |! X2 A$ s  S( r+ X5 RNothing can compare to my love
/ m# I! s: {# J; ]. ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" [! o* n" {" b/ V" [: O! rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ b+ b9 T! o2 b- a& VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 [9 Q& w5 G! k7 }3 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 I7 K& U& C: K) z, @! U& UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: F* O4 ~% ~6 Q1 B9 _' c$ ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ |. X4 b: ^& c- c0 v1 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ d( @/ i% i$ Z3 i4 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 F6 t# M, p8 n( ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) T' q. C3 k) g9 g% B  p# o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' ~) y' I5 i. B2 x  q, T% V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 b" B$ o5 |6 g, e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ b$ c: ]/ I7 S5 @/ C6 [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( Y# I# z. q& q8 c) @( X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: L, H; y3 ~* K; Y6 y) z9 n1 l4 Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ S  c: v+ i, W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. \2 M& n) p% p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. K8 z" B. \: |& `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 {( ~$ ?4 a; i% i& T. l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( p6 Y( A7 L3 V  d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, z, S) _( T1 Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* h3 v- d2 @" J0 J# J* W# H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ F& v9 m9 }3 K6 F( G6 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ X1 C, s; b/ v$ n; O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- ~& {* W% F, I: Y) r* r) X/ M2 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 b; T" c+ B: i1 r1 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 b9 ?- M; `% U, v( s0 w7 O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 U9 m1 p, t9 M: r, N& y. H4 ^, u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ z8 F* c) @/ \$ R  G" E9 `# a6 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  y/ h& v. P# X1 w3 R0 F" a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. o2 k, }: X3 o  u2 K+ S$ @2 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ O& M) S$ C* k: k0 S/ |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ e! G3 D, d& U4 B我请你剖开它

5 c* M, N/ Y6 W! C0 U+ e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# [! ], ^7 f1 c, I' u& `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>