【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 \! L# R( m8 H! H1 [The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 B' J9 Q* Q" a& GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" ~  d- V( j$ _7 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ J3 J% _4 R0 _- Q  a& pSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  \+ m2 D5 W( [$ o/ t+ J1 R0 DYou needn’t fear anything
9 `* h8 i! o/ ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 K' N6 `: S3 j5 i3 N/ p$ ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( ^1 a: l- o, Q) s9 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  a9 c  {2 p2 {; a- N; p8 C. pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: c! h" k$ @4 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. a. ^: M# U2 Q9 CWith such a tongue as yours,
3 T: c5 v$ ?  J& k) qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 j2 P: N& [1 ?7 [( H( n* P) `% ~! mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, e: f; M( |  G7 g7 w; MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  ~: }7 m& N6 z% V. d( J2 P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& ^0 o" g! E/ S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, }! W$ ?$ r- c( g6 j; o6 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. h  W8 o$ H) b! F4 J5 }5 y3 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 l7 h9 j4 [6 s+ K) O7 @# E: Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 ~- [" a9 f: t7 G/ G# j; C  _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  [9 E% O% A* V8 V" N7 \* Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 Z7 d& t' `+ E& L: o2 |) Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 t+ P: Y" Y: q( V: O& ^8 j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* y& R1 x  J! i5 F5 P5 ?5 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: I9 K  I% r8 R" ]1 t6 \( l) g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 h& @+ f1 L7 e0 V) ^6 D1 P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* |6 t/ X+ j. r% ?  h7 a* }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, C0 Y- ?; S. v3 k( H' [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 a8 i8 A+ O; k8 I3 F/ P+ T; N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, L3 l! _% _5 e; r& r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! b4 l- x4 o1 K$ q0 D8 }0 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 h: c1 M% j6 N: O& ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" K0 p# [; d! V. G$ a+ W0 ?# c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- |; }, i  M8 t/ R( I# T4 P+ N% H. {$ N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 y3 \! i5 C( l1 U3 I3 z2 U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 u% R4 C) T7 V# A* D8 v2 N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ S1 U8 q$ Y  C5 t" Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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6 @( ^2 S( F! U6 P' \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>