【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ M, v. F  b0 K% _' u" O6 ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 b% \" G" w) bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 W0 P) `. ?7 j1 NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 q; k3 S' p( j" n  L. t' o* Y" XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* W, T/ E% V  d4 J; B* g5 d! w# J8 sSeeing the sky content with its love
/ ~5 j+ A, Y4 }3 o8 C. sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 t7 X) m* @0 S0 u7 W) OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' a) e9 `% Z6 t: z. o8 uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& p7 A* g6 A/ N' T+ P. }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! X# V# H( F+ B2 N0 P  X' ]% @I want so much to see inside your heart
: P7 ^7 N: V- E8 m; b8 HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- Q8 C% |& w5 y  H, d% _/ bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( R4 e* n- G+ p4 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 n( p+ O" V, D( [' G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( u; ?3 }/ l. a+ Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' H* G, j1 G$ Y; |. H% H3 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 ?* d9 x; l6 Z  d2 z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 m4 [5 B7 m% V5 \1 Q: [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ V' C$ m# c7 Q* m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 a  X0 V' O( L) u7 n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) p2 y/ Z7 R3 E. X0 \- I, f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 W% U* X# _3 `7 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% J$ X  Z" @! \, \( O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 f: n' x+ X% J* _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ i% N+ y; Z) P8 [, Y# e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 {# r( x7 m- [# t1 U4 U7 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; b( l$ r& S2 i; W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( C, P/ h; R& y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 M6 i9 u% w' P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& ~; C! K" ]4 ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 Q3 ]! T9 p, l7 {! m: A( O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ i/ K& Z$ P. o- s2 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ U5 A% ?4 _. E1 S: ^% Y! k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 o1 u' ?' S- n: s) X, _3 z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& j$ z) }9 s4 ?+ F) I2 n$ q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 g% g$ y+ ~8 j3 m4 `9 A  u0 O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% W: e0 `7 B' a' S# }# w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( y3 E7 q: s8 U, E! O, w+ V& X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 q  D, J" h7 h6 m' V4 G; X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 V/ ~$ a& m8 Q* q3 ~4 b& @3 b- {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 E7 R" ~$ P2 M* p/ @9 b7 ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 \6 p/ j: @( U- c9 T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>