【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* E( q3 R6 F+ X& i- r歌词我附在后面。
2 a  n' [( B% E. m+ j9 f% pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* {8 l7 R* u- w4 N) {3 [  O. |6 z: \4 ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 b# [8 x! k: N! `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. e0 W) q/ p* n: |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 t1 h$ W/ a7 S5 _+ U7 m1 p; i; a7 EEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 B2 k. }. ~$ K5 y0 _$ T# SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* {3 r% h4 u6 vI want so much to see inside your heart
! i" O4 s# M! `* I& x9 gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 c/ G/ V6 _6 s: pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 j# l; v- P1 a4 PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) q# G- @1 W- B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  j& _! \$ o' k8 Y' m" A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ ^8 d# u: }9 M1 F- k; s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, ]3 ^) c& S) C( \$ l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; j/ B" q, S! Z  \/ |( m* U9 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 a' b" t! x5 I5 k2 g6 \& N5 R6 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 Z& k4 M1 q! W0 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) |- [1 l, {) o6 Y$ p) I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; p! m; L6 d& p3 L<P>你无需担心</P>
. Z7 X) c, P- z8 U/ h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 t! t$ W1 Z2 V& ]  U$ m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& t1 g6 t4 q) ]/ y  m3 V. s8 A8 h( {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& C" [4 }  X- u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ w! s# z, `0 Y, w) I; v% ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' U2 }0 A& C$ j8 a: t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 J6 p4 T" V/ F: X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! Z/ h4 v+ B& ^/ b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* x# v7 c2 d9 q1 y' y" F# U7 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& e: {) x% Y6 I9 e  g# b4 c% Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# C4 P* Y4 h5 D, A: c. ?9 b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. P5 ^+ f& j- ]+ w5 {' [& Y' O  a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 x6 K1 h. a" E6 A& u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# N$ r# N# w+ u1 y7 c' m4 m, r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, D3 t8 A8 O# j; _# k: c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. n! ^! ]; o) ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: [4 d* \" [3 Y* X' I6 b% x$ F+ y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>