【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 [7 O$ Z- H4 ?歌词我附在后面。
( \5 l4 Z& `# k$ E0 m) w# W: R# iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& w* w) L+ L/ h8 z2 v" eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% V, S* ]) D- ^0 ~9 }/ MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' B' a/ [1 u/ |6 x: }2 h+ \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. J3 g! O% h; x$ v8 oSeeing the sky content with its love
  W9 c* ^: a" Q; g8 y. g1 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- F0 {: Y! x" p- ~+ BI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 H& c. E: Y! p/ I% f2 GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ v) W( M# ^( y5 `# B4 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, ?8 I% q) W! A+ [( D+ D* MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 ^/ P! D4 u; D/ N9 f+ WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* K+ K- {) B# D& ^2 S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ ?" I) y, W) b$ V! w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; Z  T; p0 w8 C+ W# {# V" k1 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 ?% v& k# `8 d7 j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 K1 @- ?. _/ ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 j! x( X5 m# K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% G- ~0 o6 c7 L; l<P>你无需担心</P>
1 l* Y$ ~  u4 k: P. r' D" _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! B% T  n& J; N) ~; X* R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ t" [" S  O4 {' y0 c; S- \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; E' B. \' ?# S7 {8 @- _' ~: @# W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# g  \! s" R; Z. w/ }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 o+ Z; s" V2 }. T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 J  y- G' h1 P  {$ G- R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& p! g' `( x* U. r' W1 {! \- u. K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. W1 ?; P% H" {" e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 d1 {$ H3 F1 H0 c% }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- O, g5 U8 R/ Q" q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 {. n% o) t8 g7 P& P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 W, ]' L+ p$ G8 H) T9 |" X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
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<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: p+ C) ~4 h/ x+ r5 g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% ~6 Y4 Y5 ~8 q# ^$ M# j  J: l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ o* U$ N3 \9 |; `0 I7 Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# s% f8 w9 J/ W+ ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% Z' k8 @8 |9 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) {! A; S; g% j+ B+ |( n: S  {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- V4 L6 m2 K. ~7 }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 Y5 d; _3 j# ?) w; X# W# m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 R. z" `1 h1 G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

) S; Q2 l0 L5 i$ ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>