【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( G6 l% g4 N! B& ?歌词我附在后面。
7 |) H  F% {) w# g1 n! CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 P: E% y  a0 p' z/ [. l8 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 A+ L9 `" R: E! ]% E& tWith the moon kissing it every night
, ?' ?  o) b: F1 ?. c+ ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( _9 X6 u, a$ I8 qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 x( ^! G. s6 A' G/ tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ @) O; l9 h/ ^# V* HNothing can compare to my love
4 k7 `1 G. R, g0 O) j: L' E) s' wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ O' f& P# U5 t2 B( _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; |3 {% w! M: p2 h' o- bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ b" J0 _# j$ Y4 {0 wI regret not dying
8 v7 p6 f/ ~/ X2 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 _. b5 j& x; b5 |. K6 DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% G2 C/ s: o# p7 d" Q% n1 m  ^( h  u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& |$ n/ K+ }. P: @; L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 f) M/ M) b3 H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% n1 F$ M  `. _5 r/ y& z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& z& }4 E0 N# z( K; T' c3 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 [; [9 Y7 D8 O! W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ `- M9 ~1 T$ b5 t# B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 ]7 B, |8 ^. T* f6 K* m* B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& k- H7 O; t5 ]% C* n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, W3 @3 G2 v9 ]0 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ y# B, u6 y% z& [4 Y7 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ f% i6 R) s" C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( B# g. S  K! w- H4 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 a; I. S3 F; P) B4 S/ l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( ?* H  i3 Y+ F8 o0 i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( u! R  W8 ^6 U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* Y  E+ X0 R: U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% ?# v5 i7 X9 g+ y5 q; L6 ?* h4 T6 m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 S9 `/ |6 l9 X# h' ~) t. P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; g; _* _, P& p1 c; p% ?2 F7 K$ o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 W' q& C! \  p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 N" R0 f$ T! j/ R& A. S: F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) J$ r- Y1 F- }" h1 \5 m; z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" I. u; m3 R' _& f, D: ?" [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, [, @% y" p8 _5 F+ Y9 \2 Z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. S* j* D7 f* C% Q7 {8 i5 h3 v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>