【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ Q9 Y! W" a( @. n! r9 e/ }) q5 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! }) ^' a( n/ B7 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 ~9 L1 s( B! h) w* ?( u( n4 c/ iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* n2 l4 b, |7 g; @* Z/ SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& n3 h7 P$ o6 y7 X+ h# }8 eYou needn’t fear anything
6 m( K; x( N& x8 _+ uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) `& e7 d  W/ P! h. `Every other word you utter is love
" X% W  s- i5 n3 w2 r" d( q% AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. p; p% f  Q: \2 D, k7 {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! ^  ~9 n/ q" ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! d* d; G4 y% hI’m still filled with fear
: i8 y$ n+ o- E% C  M. PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. s$ V' x' z$ O# oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* ^7 B7 P  W. x$ I! T/ _" o: dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' d" y# g% h& h/ K+ EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 A+ S5 ~0 Y9 K$ sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* \9 c$ e% b% ^# ^$ y; d& U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 w  ~  P% I4 N, C7 z; G9 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 j0 a" ]8 Q: N5 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% \  M4 |, H+ B8 |$ K4 [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 f& {4 h% M. n1 z1 V1 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 L6 P  e& i2 r0 m: Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  o3 r: F* R+ l8 r: ]1 G* x/ h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 n. |$ h. l" {% n: W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  P/ {' J  ^: W1 n# _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 ~, r) g: w+ Y* z' A: e! q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) {: R5 A! N' I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" Q* e0 o% g9 h7 a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& o9 j% f2 z+ C& b: p9 @3 R2 H  |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! V5 a6 i4 f0 X  j1 a! Z* T! ]. B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# F8 X4 z3 a5 w9 s/ ]+ b( N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; Y* R7 L% b* G! ?! l" J/ O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* V$ V) i6 v: |0 m0 N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. G, ~' l& q. r1 z% }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 y, G: T( g# g% N0 M  F4 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) v: W) t6 {  H( I$ O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# t8 v, k: P* [* A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 b, q6 A* ^2 v+ f4 ~3 L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' {4 e1 Q! v: j4 P. s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& K0 K. c2 p0 V8 j' j( ?" [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 ]  p4 k3 i$ P' a& _" F$ ^2 n+ M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 L, r4 U, f' {" }7 |0 Y1 O9 V. D% D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' J  R8 p' a: f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>