【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* j8 u: U# U: ]歌词我附在后面。
4 V+ B* N  |4 p3 z! ]& {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 M* o9 A; y0 {1 \( o; o( \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( K8 y8 y7 G6 p. x! g7 e& `6 p. p) KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 |8 B6 M) a- x0 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' |/ X2 R& x' C4 Q1 _Seeing the sky content with its love
! T, m" D# M4 A  h3 J/ kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: P# t9 K( G# N+ a5 n  D& sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, [) d* e+ A( g$ q3 tI love you I love you with all my heart
4 i9 A+ [( i! V9 nNothing can compare to my love
) M/ Z3 v+ T" tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! q5 u. A" W% M$ `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 v* W/ ~, x) ?. u9 o% x, sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, E9 y4 s1 v8 z1 KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 D# J: P6 |  ?  Y& u2 f3 ~( PI regret not dying
% x3 b: `6 E1 I1 W1 Q) [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: y1 `4 L  N: f+ ]5 R) RWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 a3 v/ y5 T# T6 t2 c5 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 y& L: L$ }/ j' X) x" I7 J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- |6 M0 C3 A" G! j! b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 d; u% a8 G4 @& X$ H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 ~* {4 A/ {, ~3 q8 `4 W: Z* B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' J) T2 P$ J+ e( j' K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: C% m; z$ T$ D# C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 l. ]. r8 o1 c8 `1 I9 a2 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 Z% G4 _0 _, D4 {" W3 z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: d% v- k2 T  v  L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 `1 }& n( O5 P, Q. K  a6 t7 W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 d3 r8 O' F5 ?( B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' q& Z: ^% W6 A9 u5 ?& F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& F9 x% F7 @) ^5 c$ d' `7 @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* g" X% u  p! ]- g, z5 r% M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) Q& P7 h% l# a; w/ b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ G5 \5 g6 t+ I# @" ^+ D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 u" a/ ~6 y, L: C2 U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! H( K( w3 F; G9 @0 f8 ~! b0 D; b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 u! D9 s' A. ^* Z2 M' m) Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
% h: ~4 l! W$ X  }1 u. U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 q7 c! _9 l$ ~: t* k1 u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 b% s5 q+ L. \, s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, {# Z  m2 K# }9 t6 N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. ~6 f" A, u, Q) D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: _; h! H- ~7 ~, b. }! X. W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* n$ D) C8 D0 B& T. X# d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 H( q2 U4 L' A# x8 @, s9 G' f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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/ N/ ~5 ~' n& x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>