【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
; `8 ]3 X/ l1 A' r( YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 x  K' K; Y+ @3 ~3 F2 hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 \& p0 Y5 D3 l* O* K8 Z0 U6 y2 K6 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 j: R2 g% H1 n* Q( A# RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 @( u& C" m1 l1 r# h( d6 fNothing can compare to my love
0 h; K- v. ^+ ]$ l$ @+ TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ {, F; ]2 V4 C( o+ S2 Q  H* M; X7 B! \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 `9 N/ r  |! h' E0 NI want so much to see inside your heart
: z1 j. J1 s; |% ?7 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; D% G) b; ^* V# B. r+ t7 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  A7 r. Q) K9 `0 H; F5 k! @4 r8 yI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 y& v: Z  c! S8 s9 Z. hWith such a tongue as yours,
4 V2 }/ i" k. OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& b* j0 [9 w7 h; E- [. L! W& rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( J8 `$ D7 y& gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ O2 q% _$ S7 L" T- Z+ [3 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ ]4 K+ X5 b" V3 G- w. ^% q. w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) s$ P  W2 e! @& ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! n7 j2 b9 d1 e  y7 R7 }  V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 a2 L6 d1 n9 M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) `8 u8 P2 A! ?2 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! w1 E5 ~8 e3 B1 n' E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' }( ^5 t0 @, [9 K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ z9 o+ Z( W4 J" D' @$ z/ x8 i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ G3 V8 [# i+ f. |6 `0 i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 S. J7 ^0 Y& M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ G7 ~! ]0 E) R* @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 T3 @# S  d/ `7 O: O1 Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' e& @% ?, T, v' m: |6 D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; R. J! U" E: u) Q5 ]% c" ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 _7 N. n5 v: v& E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 v1 m: l4 z& F3 Z: j* _  F; d8 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- o% ]6 u* W" l; O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 C& c- ?/ f0 ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 g- A9 K) v/ J. t" {; @( {" B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 [8 j/ a) R: T/ \1 y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  A- j( G3 R6 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 L& h3 r" c4 l  O- g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" f  j2 r1 m7 J3 I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 F' {! H2 E8 |, P# n$ `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 P: H6 Z8 E0 K7 [3 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ f4 B+ c' e5 V% J  }& N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, l( ?1 a8 G2 }( f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 x# H; q$ x8 N, p6 ^" P1 g3 A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 l* G, ~# `$ x: _, Q7 W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ ~5 s2 \" ~6 u( f0 J8 D; R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 p3 `3 x* d7 W" p) m/ B/ v, P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' i) n0 K4 P) W' P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  ~4 @6 u/ R' o' p) ?5 `, K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 x: t3 s- ]. L9 Q6 D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 X' s6 q3 R& |. p' z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>