【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 r3 }4 k6 L  j0 o9 k# U) X1 `! jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 [! L: c7 l% A- C% QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# z7 H: B& _: \" |6 W9 sWith the moon kissing it every night
8 j6 \" v7 C: ~  `  `+ Q7 [6 O8 aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 x" G( _( V! T% MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 ]8 U' |0 z' ^( JI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ A$ D2 m; N1 e' Q$ cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 g9 |  P* J, F& g. [" I) bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' o6 D  e) x( X( p$ X3 w, FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, u) m- H( @, s- MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; Y4 n# f' n4 n7 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# x; u( M7 _5 I2 ]& V) t, QWith such a tongue as yours,
+ W- J9 U1 @$ H* d  F/ tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ q1 c( ?. U% u& Y- W7 P3 D0 DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" U" V. B4 j+ V* l  B3 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 N8 N/ V; T: a) t( c8 _: P5 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 @- V  T4 ]) U( y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* s+ R# C5 Z7 A5 v% v8 C+ b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& d/ m- v: u% e5 s. m5 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 v6 d# i) T/ ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; m0 s: m( q3 A) U# K( o" c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% J2 V, O: o! q# E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 C9 o, I) l1 Z1 o; H0 T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ M% g. r7 q3 g- p<P>你无需担心</P>
4 y' }% Z4 Y9 \! w3 ~3 K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" V- Y- `: F$ l! N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# R& j2 a4 @0 Z" ^4 W# H4 s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 N' P8 h6 x0 B3 J+ Z4 `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ G! \" a+ o: _% r! t7 O. J' L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 H% D/ X2 i3 V% ~& j* i) A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! X0 D" s: V& c' V" f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 k, _0 ~( [: \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ T5 L& I5 p) p4 z+ Q% M: R1 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 v6 v' ?6 l, |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! ?% q0 f1 n7 @8 F: A( d/ W3 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' c9 D' o" q  I4 I/ L7 E4 f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 u2 j* h) e) k3 P" v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 j, X- W3 j, Z3 l, r0 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ a, t$ `7 E! Y; `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* h- |; H9 D8 z6 j1 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 q- @7 m5 F0 M* e( P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' n+ N0 j4 c. O$ J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 _* f4 g. [8 b# r# K0 N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. m- u# B7 M8 x% o4 R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ S/ x, W7 }( S% A8 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) j- g+ R9 q& R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 g- J/ i1 r6 M& ~' v0 B. N我请你剖开它
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' v3 A+ G+ y. \8 e7 M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>