【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ t) [+ [8 ?1 w% i/ x歌词我附在后面。
) e* Q* D3 H( GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! @* y4 }. [6 S# J) Y4 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  ~" h2 X4 P$ F/ X  T4 j. \4 r* ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 v6 d5 i$ c' Q& f" [I really want to know just how much you love me
2 o+ n, |" \% d+ iI love you I love you with all my heart
. U0 W, ]* C4 w6 M9 s  M' N4 BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 X: h! @: L2 C" \1 J6 U8 M& D; iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, ~; s; K/ q8 o% iI regret not dying
0 o9 G3 ~# l, b3 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) Z# a5 @) g3 I9 n7 X( [7 m6 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 l3 j  X  h- _! W: C: m& lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ y/ J$ S7 {' S6 D6 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: ?/ C# M8 ~1 w& x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 ?% r  a! G3 M1 ~; m. e+ l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* K, `2 [6 ~! e1 g' A7 p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! |' r! J$ }. m" t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 b! ]0 a! ~1 H+ J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( Q' G" }* B5 f( {% P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, z+ F* o' P9 |& p/ f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 I% m" V  k7 d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- x- R" q! D( s$ j7 ~* M9 v) J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 V8 l8 ~  B3 L  y, t6 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 Q4 L- B6 `: ]9 y& H- l, J" r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ }$ C* T) R% @& ?! a5 y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( N* J' e# {8 D' Z+ l. j+ ?5 m& a$ t' }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: x' h2 E( a; a0 N/ G0 t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 a: \$ {& M& s" D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ Q$ N$ W1 Y6 \  ?2 _- i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ P5 P. o5 A1 \8 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- i8 z! v. N+ B/ }1 c( m, `% E, h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% m! I+ x- g& _4 h& O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 V! W/ g3 Z7 z* V9 A( q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 P: {1 [9 v  q+ _, H) r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ `+ O. ]' O* j* X- I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 ^2 W% {6 ?0 f$ ], ^4 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% C$ y! I- D8 \$ p: V1 K, P+ X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: c2 i" [1 @" E  ?! |2 j<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 b" l- M) x& @7 k8 i3 z1 a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- F2 k9 q0 P5 q' o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# `- h- I( Z+ N# ^& |" B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 q' M2 Q2 S7 t" j4 V: ?5 ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 }; q! m4 n4 ^; Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: C8 _8 d; N& I& \  J6 M# f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>