【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ P- v. e6 l6 x# i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ P3 H$ O% f4 S. rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" w2 T6 ]3 i$ O) l1 d* H3 ^$ ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% i: {* j& [& A2 @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 a% R; P5 ?: v7 M. ?1 F! C# NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 ?: `8 V1 @/ j5 AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- z3 s+ q8 P* `( n& J7 h, k* c! gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( b: A& J" s# GWith such a tongue as yours,
0 C' I9 U8 ?8 _7 b8 }% P- yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& j) Y+ w- i. s- ]9 lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! \" d! W8 V1 s) [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ h. \$ h; B4 i) _4 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" H/ y' g: b/ ^- H; H1 R: X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 n4 O  A  ~, \% A/ Z1 p6 s: {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% R6 t6 R( m( J6 ]. w; X. H+ R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! L- j8 r9 N  O3 @- E6 c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( A8 ?3 }2 ~5 F8 f6 X* c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 k& m) v% l6 A; g* G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( h2 A; n. h$ l0 y; t+ A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' _( V& [; Z' k& b9 s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' |' n/ y+ z2 _! G% j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* T% ^, s2 U, p  z5 h, _3 }/ n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 D- C4 x7 t! t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 I9 N" G! u2 G! d$ ^6 Y  F- ~+ t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 L+ G$ Q" k! ^" y7 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 v4 |4 I6 x# H& F& y: ~2 v) q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, t+ ^/ {! ^$ K. K2 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) ?$ p, l/ S0 r) c8 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: C' O4 v) e$ r8 J$ B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 ?' j$ T: j7 a2 y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! K: R8 U. e$ h: ?+ j2 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" u8 G5 K2 O0 I7 p% X. m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* Q4 o9 n  \" n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& O9 \) N* P3 w( u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" N  S) h5 ^* j) }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 d" M. X8 }( i( j& I+ h7 b3 [9 H7 ~, {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 w# H. j7 H9 N3 t6 o" ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( U5 ]3 `! r, b* d$ \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 @2 C+ X9 B1 R. x. w9 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 P6 r& e% g- V# k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 K6 g  G. I9 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>