【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 C; ^& ~" P7 H歌词我附在后面。
7 J3 z2 y- l5 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 ?0 J3 D  f) W& _0 Z) {- y6 wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' }9 j( i8 u8 L# ^) e1 o2 E6 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 Z9 i4 q6 y: q# SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; H; N: |( |3 y' MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ M) k( X- J/ l8 z7 JEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 V( [: o/ H) K* YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 l+ W& ?' o5 {& ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* ]8 Y1 L7 U% c9 {" b) m4 r# UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ d% _4 L$ ?/ T1 ^0 v+ jWith such a tongue as yours,
: o+ }" p. e! H  G; n5 B4 t# @1 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 T* R) h: j( U% m, m4 h& e3 YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: j4 H3 j5 A0 T; L" G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, ?; S( c* M4 p' P8 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% l7 k# h- M- |/ _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" w. O4 A$ s  G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  u; v* ?2 |2 o6 W* h; _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% r9 {" t+ [7 i# `0 y5 n( k* o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 R4 }! ?8 {. C% c7 A7 W! u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 S) L4 j- K3 v1 _8 H& Z  K- ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# ^# G# O$ P2 ^( p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 a2 j5 {0 j6 _1 S9 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 \/ G0 f$ X+ z( T. V4 O0 K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; v! H6 O# r! R; A/ R4 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 D: L/ L; K  N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 D$ `* A- ]( F/ L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  h3 d, L9 N( w9 l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 T0 l& C4 X( A9 N. n; v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- K8 B: o$ r% k! w- C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; T. c: i# m8 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( m* e3 T* @- k' W1 x7 S2 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 n, h$ m$ f% p! j% S, m7 i1 q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 z* h/ t" g# I& @9 ^, n9 B9 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; T4 |: K% m2 A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' r) y' ?# q, N) c/ `% D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. A- [1 E; [6 p  M" p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* v; }1 x- D2 r; g, y4 O2 v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ H5 i" `1 O) H8 n- P8 |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 U: t" v% K: w7 J  {. K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 U# N- N7 i& l* {, g; A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( d+ J- R) a& |% @4 v& t) L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 Z8 U2 ?) Z, c8 y我请你剖开它
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. m( G& b, g$ i1 h  }8 U* [" l! l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ o' C! |. O' O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>