【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( M3 Z* Y9 V% g' t# sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& G9 n$ F% ^* @4 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& X5 _( v$ [/ X% N; s+ m0 X2 DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; |. t2 }0 Y4 v3 q; @1 XSeeing the sky content with its love
0 h* Z8 E; ^4 v) g' GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ u4 n6 U6 b1 D8 L) A# G3 U) M  oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! f# l) S6 A7 V' J4 gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 Q" F( W" m! U/ a' }8 i! }! [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! U/ O' i' L5 g! @I want so much to see inside your heart
2 |  w$ @& G+ ~8 P- c* ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 X4 C7 D- G1 LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! v- D" {6 b, R" OI regret not dying
' M: C4 T8 j, |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" P7 g$ J: }+ K7 e* f) [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& Z/ E2 U* d! R2 ?" }% X- a/ p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! r+ j+ j! x0 `& C( ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 i2 ~# i5 o; F. Z3 a, w' M! K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ J; N  ?" G8 A, @2 L8 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 `) x. }! f# l% J0 _' v% Z0 F  ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 S& L1 o9 [3 L3 g: O3 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 Y$ q3 i/ |* Z8 U. w' y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 a3 p/ n  |* o6 X7 ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* r& x4 |7 o( [5 r6 W. E/ f<P>你无需担心</P>
5 b1 ~, R; |1 Q" ~8 j: h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 h" t- j& T4 p8 p+ E( ]4 z1 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 W: l( ?# x$ B* F7 q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  a. n8 i) i# `7 G- M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% ?0 G( k7 I2 y4 s2 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ O+ @# Q7 E. I# H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; c, V2 y( y* ]8 i6 Z7 G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( l& W. r( c1 z9 `* \* [- I4 \: ^, N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 Y  B' f2 B5 v, S5 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  N" x5 C! z4 A$ v2 |$ V' c' o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 `* F) ?  ~% o* Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* }) _% R) j1 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# J; Z# w7 R# b; D7 l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 }) C. N6 \& `/ k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 T& K3 e4 c  u( @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( Z5 L/ d1 J; F7 `3 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 P+ O  Z5 |/ U0 y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 O# H  S9 e5 W, W) Y! P6 Y我请你剖开它
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; E4 Z: S1 X0 J: N7 P9 x' r* m3 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>