【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; L  V* c9 B/ K+ u/ M7 a  o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. {3 g: q3 x, N) s$ R# `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 \- {, B" {/ N* n/ g7 r  MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 l  y( o" h8 `8 D* fThe sky is happy down to its soul
" s' o9 X: ?8 }8 nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 s  t: `8 \+ p9 _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 _. j: j7 m+ v7 l. Z% S  FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 h% t% O. y* @8 l' pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& E2 P( E5 c1 X; L. C& V- vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- R& k0 h4 e4 V0 ^: ~7 q, K: DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ z* X2 A2 p0 H9 G7 PI regret not dying
# Y# {7 I2 V0 i, A7 BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- j4 u  z7 d$ NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* f* y6 _8 t6 h9 ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 p4 z5 f7 t  B1 B, r8 c; ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 V, Z% _; r0 T+ T. K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- L6 x- N# ~( _9 g" D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% k8 }9 }3 z3 _: |: U) |3 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, ?- Z# i1 R' [$ E5 }0 j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' S1 \7 U1 o& H% ?3 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 i' p7 z) {# X/ i. _9 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 [# ?3 o- M, N1 D. u0 v" M1 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ N. J2 J9 M# [  m4 {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ h( C4 S, c2 B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, R& a$ m+ O1 ?7 O9 n2 c5 I! S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: n3 I7 R3 S1 Z6 a9 b7 `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 O( x! b9 \: x5 Y7 n5 C- y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# \- ^. c  M3 Q; s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 J$ I) @1 i+ Z( r' n3 b9 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" I0 m" d5 k# ^* H) u  Y- C4 K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  E" R+ e' X1 V0 q% X2 Q6 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 Q# Z1 o0 p" J7 b1 Y* i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 X8 f! Y/ [( s! D: }- }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 y2 \7 U* U0 R$ N# i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 a& M8 N0 S; H5 F. `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% P% }1 M% j( i+ A! p0 E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 U) g1 B  m0 \3 S' e5 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 [+ v5 J2 R6 A! v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' }2 L& H9 E+ N: D& R/ Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) O; v' Z1 G5 A4 N- ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, c+ A  T7 ^$ g, h. L+ H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>