【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, u, v3 O- j0 J3 |8 e) n; o' Z0 S! i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! e8 L+ ?4 ?- |. yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, M/ F3 e; f; M$ R6 h% iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  F3 `' E# Q  w. F- mThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 P% Z0 F0 P4 e. O, cWith the moon kissing it every night
; I4 }* R6 C( S, @; y& jSeeing the sky content with its love
% F! P2 \% H/ p/ z) n1 W0 S$ GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* y' `" r2 o& \( n9 e* nYou needn’t fear anything
* b' b+ L% Q* w+ r' zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" A% }8 B* v2 zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% [( V- m5 ?7 Y& [6 X$ @3 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) n$ m1 l8 N6 H. j& \8 oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% X( V* d$ \; ]( V8 n3 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* o9 y- S# X: _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 g7 d2 S# p7 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 C# u! @/ Q7 L  e8 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# B* q/ e0 M% t6 t1 G) b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; V( w7 v5 K& F* _6 D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& D9 O0 x$ l! ^% E6 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 c( Z- e3 r8 Z1 C6 h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 V# e8 K. i; o+ _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ {( E/ f* L1 q4 `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- r( T/ U5 H+ ^! t1 M& {8 _- ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 T3 y0 g2 ^$ F; W& W, E) V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' x+ @' l5 K9 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 i. A( J' U4 k! W- q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- J3 s0 g$ k/ n. Q5 P" D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 _+ k6 p4 e3 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( W! _4 U! P% A7 v: X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 y* D! y- ^* n$ k' V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( l2 Z( u- H% ^; p6 W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; V% f8 z- H1 ?  |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 I/ O! d! t1 M! c$ z/ r+ O) S8 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ p. X4 N3 w% t0 e8 T# W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ X0 R2 H+ u  k: a* h9 _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 g9 r# \% k9 D# m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 ^& k! w. p  H' _* R9 O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& `. w1 T0 e$ a( l- @7 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 c0 ?; W  s1 o1 A0 }: D0 A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% S! \: z2 C! R  ]+ v" t2 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* X8 V3 W- d" }: g/ L- e% O我请你剖开它

  H' n) v. T+ I! z3 j, `2 N! b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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