【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' R- X0 _+ t/ k" D2 u" j歌词我附在后面。
" Z$ S- _& ?3 \+ T: a5 g% s4 dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( d* L: O1 e% Q6 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
% y8 p% c& u5 k) w) k7 i8 BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 b+ V3 r# Q. Z) a" FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% U# B8 M6 K$ sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; R7 r0 {. f! f- hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 [! c4 w+ b4 ]3 h6 S7 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' s; }+ {$ i) vWith such a tongue as yours,
" F2 w- ?, {& D8 }1 z: EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% ~2 q9 k" b; G  DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; M- j3 ~* M) f9 M4 f$ C; x6 W) V7 M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 a9 D8 p( I1 A9 ~; |6 ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, _$ F) O. H, \/ t$ E7 H0 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 G% _  k+ X; B- [7 M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 H. j' o# o) d3 B: X5 A" i  p" C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( T( X  _" N( i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 Q* ]; Y1 y6 c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 C& [2 S, g% e2 Y* R) t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. V+ M( V' f2 D2 z$ S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. e1 O* k* U) S$ x3 E0 [3 W' Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 o0 @: G7 @/ @& U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" `' ~3 x4 u& L& J7 @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) p* X5 L5 ?* N% U% d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 [) N3 C) z4 t( c' b% X8 T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& }1 f2 S% H; ^1 ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 o; {$ \5 Y$ i; m+ Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ f& G: G, _" ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 `0 _2 }1 o! s: l7 }3 }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 j& s' T( `5 L- |1 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" Y* ~/ f/ n( x0 C' ~- r/ i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% B! F/ R& H& \0 N* t2 O, _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 v5 F( [; ?/ D5 ]0 r% r% W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# m+ i6 U% g0 c$ t! Y) v6 G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' f! Q- o% L2 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 v" i% l" q7 ?' w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! M: G) c$ U6 ?+ M% r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) f) Z2 v' {) ~# C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- P* A8 y& u0 L" w: ?8 y4 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; |4 ?( \+ @: F9 S4 k2 v% ^我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 ]/ c/ Q" ~& O0 t7 i7 W( E2 u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>