【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) A6 B5 U( k; J2 o4 C, F+ e2 @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  |  T- d$ @1 R0 wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 s6 S5 a. S, S, t' hWith the moon kissing it every night
0 a: d1 L( |3 s; }. ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 o+ T) c  C' ?; hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 x1 t' Y: X: ?( ]( V6 ~2 e" T  o) jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, J% l. C, F. m' YI want so much to see inside your heart
4 j0 q6 }; q) i* v0 _% T, C( r; GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 d# b' t" Z8 U6 w3 EI’m still filled with fear
! R6 K* S* h! K5 ^4 G' CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 D1 n2 F1 p  o3 v9 V- |I regret not dying
7 H2 f# J+ W* K: ^( SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 R$ |- `2 T  D8 M6 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; ^% k0 N  E* J% }3 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. j$ `/ U9 G, ]: i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% H! s: r; r. F# \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 V- @" E' H) p+ c. ?3 S0 g# O. N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, B+ k$ Z$ x$ W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 L8 m4 _; }3 K) p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 E0 g- d( Y* g5 z5 e" F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( O! r& J$ X/ Q6 E( P# i6 U% P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 M' c4 D$ T/ |# w$ h1 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* D* Q& o. R& N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 C5 \0 Q! L' y) n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 B. E# ]# F' o$ m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ q* C7 ?3 Y: x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" K' t8 A% [1 u) p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: A& `9 |" Z8 l) D0 q$ {. Q! l8 S( Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( p1 K3 r* S3 J% k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  a$ {8 S. w* G' r6 ^4 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 n: ]8 T  x, I( R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( Z5 u. }5 k5 _. }7 c) |  d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ O7 ~8 Q8 h; o: t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ p( C7 R. y! X% y" C, q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. m! [6 a6 s' M% P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, ?; T0 c, P4 z/ y2 W1 M+ v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 g) m* l- h- D; C0 F0 j5 z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 l" Q4 E/ a3 I+ Z5 m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. V& L( f  t' S5 T8 x5 ]5 Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
  s: e+ u7 k6 W$ b  |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% R( @  p% g/ j6 p* x5 X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 {, \/ r$ Y  y# g' V' t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ U" ]  {! o% i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 U4 O8 Z1 C5 D! n, W/ v% ?7 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 Y5 @* ]  e; M! j# q: O1 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: l& V; J2 \0 q* n5 W) \4 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 g% x2 E( m, `* o2 x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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5 o9 g1 G# y9 S) y) l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: O4 D& T, i' b+ x4 {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>