【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 o9 U: y+ C4 y  S! {0 ~$ {# x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; T0 K4 E" P8 m( ?$ X1 m* I  }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  c* @4 G+ \( QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' c0 R1 j1 Y* o8 w' PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' Z9 k4 T8 u1 I0 |& [/ g+ I. Q/ l  UYou needn’t fear anything
2 `) `& m& a0 K1 ], BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 D0 u2 c% J" {( F2 {I love you I love you with all my heart
$ q$ @$ D8 {& S1 L1 s; w" mNothing can compare to my love
1 k. R5 a7 J6 E1 H& lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- g) w5 k, ]0 N8 H. [: E9 r6 vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 u" u' j. }  R& lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) |  z# ^# ?7 F8 X; W) B! rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% p& l) H* x: q4 Z) Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 v0 i' n: l+ i6 d4 [4 I" I$ _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! i- x! o% \  U* M; r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" ?! _/ N) ?: ]% t3 @* m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& u, F& Z0 g, E% _' D6 B1 G, A3 q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ ~4 l: e- R" _3 B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; X5 k+ \* f/ L' x* j5 i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& P- \7 c6 W$ O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 F9 s6 [0 [: q- r$ g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* b" X$ y* x) i( B* Y<P>你无需担心</P>
9 q8 N4 q" h$ z0 j0 }  J8 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" {% i% E1 _2 [( S4 b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 H' W: G" b. T: T' C# }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: U& |+ e+ z6 ]6 D0 @# B0 o* n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ \. U  F7 S+ \+ k% a0 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( k- U; d$ x: D' u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ {9 W9 l1 i" F* k: N( t6 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( S( _/ s1 h& M4 @& a8 f$ j. T+ X' I- q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 I; {/ D& ?# Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 G5 a! Q0 d+ _; u& @! g. U9 h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 h3 x% e7 s; x2 H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ `  H( d- O! s" G- m+ _  K' n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 |5 O/ @, t( \' U* c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* b& ]( `  w% D) m" x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 S0 L6 L' q, `% g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; C- n2 {2 h$ G* {8 u) a+ K' v6 {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 i6 ?8 c7 O& M; r; _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* h% x& `: E2 s& U0 {& s% B$ u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# y# V# n3 T! a  B) v8 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" C+ w& n/ D/ I  A" a% ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ [9 ]! F% E. R7 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ N  T+ `- w" J) l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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, v5 D0 V" d2 {! W9 r; e+ h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  w2 E/ K& D1 ?9 J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>