【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 o1 `! ]0 w" T- \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; A% T" J0 t3 H" {( s% ^" JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 J2 w1 \3 {% J, b( w& D4 JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 ~1 K4 X  E" Z; D2 [6 l2 F+ j/ eYou needn’t fear anything
3 c$ d  Q' }8 F, M9 g5 A7 A6 ~4 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 _, o$ |% }- ^* ~2 GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ ?1 m: Y2 {5 o8 q8 r3 N- aI love you I love you with all my heart
  Z1 U  P, l1 o3 mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" w6 b4 h0 U; b7 {8 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. m7 `7 S% f% s1 D: }$ iI want so much to see inside your heart
4 F/ w4 Y0 _1 H7 T3 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 r& o% b0 N/ L% u5 \With such a tongue as yours,
0 G/ I" e! Q% _4 ^6 s& _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 v' P# b4 a" I- z" MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) l7 ~6 C1 H+ B$ Y: _/ ]" kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' C, J9 d$ \8 P/ \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( B) M9 m& U, ?. n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 U+ z8 t: l! t, F& O7 q% l  d) u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 |: R% }- |0 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' p$ }4 l! W; O8 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 P4 o$ w4 ]$ L+ E: S# e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 K  Z( s* j5 b6 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, O1 G( o. ]# u8 p<P>你无需担心</P>
! p' S4 U* m; b$ f! W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' H: q8 Z. e* F* F, y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ q4 x9 n; `  }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* p( }; `+ k- V) F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% N  z% ^) L" a' e" r0 H- ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 e! t4 @5 M% m1 Q: I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ g, G: X0 C  D9 {) o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ y' y# Q7 L( r) ~. f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: b: Z1 Q: H+ R9 J% i9 C  [# ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, g  }" m9 d1 T( ]2 C; s* t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! J! F0 S& z* d4 U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ _* G( |+ V7 W+ J3 y8 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  Y2 d9 n8 X( Z+ a1 z$ I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! U7 R7 }- Y; P& j- T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 k9 G* M7 t; H  X" ^; [9 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, c3 x- e5 b' k6 E- j! c/ ]- ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 b8 r! D- Q, s+ k" m3 P: m, l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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& G+ o0 _. b$ A% }, R% c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- s! b9 z3 N$ y! D+ S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>