【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; N# k. g. D* B/ U) w! p1 f4 F2 `Making the sky glitter like gold,
% n# Z# b# J: L; y9 ~4 NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; l' {5 u) M' k1 Q8 O- p( V: Q; _3 EWith the moon kissing it every night
3 v' u# c/ O. g! C5 ?- qSeeing the sky content with its love
# J  w3 K- q5 E' [1 U  `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 I) k8 B9 Y5 M8 ~; a- }1 [5 V+ M2 n- I7 ?You needn’t fear anything
' @" e! `; ^$ E4 L4 @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% s  V2 E5 `& i4 Z8 i- eI really want to know just how much you love me
, \# C3 I6 f( }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 c  M; d, k) x: S" [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; s8 Y% `" J/ W, [) j& gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* W* Y4 H) a9 f! e9 sI’m still filled with fear
8 C2 D7 k% E; {) B5 T( QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; O2 {7 V: r4 G: ]9 Q* \I regret not dying
3 H9 T7 _- T5 D9 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. m5 |3 T+ u' N) m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 w) q0 G" Z7 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! b$ E) A" v2 C; O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- P; b# ^$ b/ b, s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' r8 a% Q2 j2 s% e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: \3 x5 y# b" k( t5 K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- B8 A) t7 s0 {7 a% J2 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 J  a9 j+ \- x9 V* P& \& p6 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) q$ {5 b, x3 I* q/ M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& U# ~9 F- ~6 ~3 p/ E2 `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ `  m8 [- ^/ z. W  b; q1 ^& S5 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# ]# W  o! {7 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 T' J( D$ O% M0 o+ m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ ]  ~7 |  V! R5 {: h. z, ]* C, l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% H4 u) F) T, n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 I. e! U6 Z; t  g! L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 R! ?0 a8 h* V- s9 t9 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 m+ ?( v* ~" @! {  }. m) L7 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# w8 \# U& G, c0 [3 ]: m' L% X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% b2 E7 b) c9 C' Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) {2 m6 ^" R, n) C% F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 [4 B1 Q$ j- `1 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- r' Y, [' t; ~, j7 l" V. D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; Z2 h* G' ^3 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( @) G2 R) _, V+ V" F9 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ c7 W$ l# ]5 [+ S; k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) t% j- B% p' Y% _# @6 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>