【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 `9 @$ D3 O/ GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 y; R. X; c( q- `+ q: M/ a( _: hWith the moon kissing it every night
, g* e' [9 D) E7 @' l& s* m4 u* z/ {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! L0 k! i- R+ s+ JI really want to know just how much you love me
- |3 D; W# A. K( Q9 S% g% b9 K  Q/ [I love you I love you with all my heart
5 p, {  c0 L: \( INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) i4 y- J6 {$ g8 qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 H4 s+ O0 L; HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ E9 P  I  z. G2 c4 I! F' t0 Z/ KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, v& u$ X* j# D/ L$ G' M) N0 ~9 s- WI regret not dying
1 p  P; E0 Z5 V% Q7 t5 OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& B- K3 Y3 G; aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 o( y) B8 V& i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 n. a5 F0 n: P& m: r+ x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 V, Z9 i9 m# V. c* I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* `" B* k9 u/ l; ]  h4 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ Q- A) L8 ^* ^# m7 e, `) j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# c! a1 T+ i4 b; ^% B; n' o" {$ t$ m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 k9 y4 a8 f7 W1 _* M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' Q: ~3 q# D/ n& h( M* [: z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' r/ c, f" M  f$ Y# U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 V; l' V2 V; T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ [7 n( o9 P3 _% Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; ~. e& W3 f7 U2 a2 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 {+ c( z( U  t7 K& x- X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 E  C8 Z8 E: {9 ^& t& w' |* G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  x; R8 e: v) C8 `& J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! K  K# a" F( |1 {2 h1 K$ d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 m# [9 j0 b1 z* N2 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) l) o! W' d# T% [& p6 C5 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, S' v$ u  h, |) \6 A. j! x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 i$ q! R( G- L$ \% {% j: ?) R- H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 o+ v* C! R( r% t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 I& u( J. T6 }. T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 J7 v$ [' s- v1 N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ h+ i. n3 d, X. _/ _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>