【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ \8 `9 s7 B8 i3 pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) i0 t0 c* T8 T* Z# C- q3 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 p) i+ f. h; i0 n& r9 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 q5 u& }* \. L% Y9 A- A6 Y; LWith the moon kissing it every night
. I1 R7 v6 ]& D* A8 m2 TSeeing the sky content with its love
; C! d0 F. x  TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 d" J# J- O& i  T$ KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, ]+ e0 Q% A$ V! g+ \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( G# g& r/ |; l+ L2 @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  h2 N0 ~9 K2 @* @! O8 \: pI want so much to see inside your heart
+ j1 {, d6 J' z/ r0 p2 G3 H; J1 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" H$ P' l  ^$ o6 j% nI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 z3 R3 s) @: w  E2 S, HI regret not dying
. X- y$ W2 [. `3 }. x, n1 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% U( J1 Q/ v. h4 C8 Y- q) \, VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 n. k1 Y0 U) X; @! `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% a$ @: I5 Z. N7 R" R. m* g/ S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 {; @" z8 \8 }1 S0 P/ M+ D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 Z: r3 T- L8 Y% D/ T' G2 ]: [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, \" h1 m7 D, L0 d/ Y7 S8 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# V$ Z/ H# N/ ^& k1 s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 G, n) H6 x' h6 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 }/ l3 ?' [8 _3 f! }% f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# V9 L( |, Z1 }8 |# D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ L% t8 X" e8 A. z; j7 {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ ~3 P6 v5 ]* I( @  \! W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) B4 k+ e1 B' Y7 U1 w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 `8 [$ v6 n, g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 ~" z+ t) }6 a3 L$ _7 d9 G4 ?6 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' j+ q4 a% ^4 M) a3 J, ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. y- Q4 k' @1 [) v$ ^9 h; d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 b+ A+ l; j$ B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 O) A5 Y0 T' u7 u; M9 X/ s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( S+ c2 P9 F# t3 I; }: [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ |- `. B8 H/ O5 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 Q2 E; C) M/ W7 _  _- A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" b8 Z+ I. L7 v& I( ^% |1 d0 |# f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# K5 B6 B, d4 a/ z' V3 ^1 H2 _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* f6 C3 N  d, X) p5 b+ b' \, y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* |8 p* \2 G$ G6 C9 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; y; v; t$ G+ a$ m, p5 c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>