【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- G1 H  F# p3 k# h歌词我附在后面。
8 Z) M! r" L6 t+ L" \3 @( VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 H0 d, Q* r" H+ d0 ]9 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' a1 I! N/ Y! r  j8 C0 v' iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ e$ D- h) |" S! QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 T) y  P. ?- q! U& R1 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 l  R( j: C, x. ~6 \' l' ZEvery other word you utter is love
6 ~8 z. K" _, L$ r" C& x% X9 v3 ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( M' i; W- M% I  T  U/ H7 o0 aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( u/ V* ?/ \5 F# }# ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: T- c% {9 `: {7 _: C6 NWith such a tongue as yours,
/ i8 y1 i  R% `  s$ [# ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 ]3 D* N2 U/ p# A: o& I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 T- ~  z: }' _. l3 t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. ]& d8 d( ?4 m' J# {2 N" B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ r  f  s4 ~) w- q& f7 F. O  T! ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, K/ m+ T/ w  m0 j0 c, Z* `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ P, i9 Q% z4 j! n/ s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 K# ]6 J; m. }  s, x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% ^, w& e5 V% E  |4 m! o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 U3 m: L6 f1 e$ Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ J4 ]& V6 m1 ~* u' \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: G+ U; N! q: F+ o, Y) t: e& U+ j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ a4 ], }& T  \' d* ^<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% F( a/ w( c& Q# Q* N- a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ ]6 ~% D! r. X9 F& J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( y/ _- t$ l* Q8 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- Q( m3 |; v: U% D2 U, K1 T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 k) f; {; t- {6 ]5 b5 M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' K8 _4 b! I1 q: Z# H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' G+ a( D" h% a, K. Q% Z2 Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, F, f( `- e. q, P7 i% Y2 m2 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 a$ O7 b( ]/ K1 p5 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' J9 u5 `5 b9 Y7 _' `  @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 M: a- u  ~" d" H# d- R8 N5 b9 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! x8 X, l' ^2 r% ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 _3 S6 I( i+ g4 k7 m, Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 i* y+ x) y% k, |4 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& Q4 V: w2 Q  s3 Y8 Q; L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# I7 v0 o8 n1 _6 o0 E7 p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ D' @4 L" S  M7 \2 g! W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! N& ?2 J0 H  S! J7 J& V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 }# M# C1 B) P( Q" L) [3 m- Q" d0 a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* z' L# k, a7 }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: G5 ?* X# ~) ~: X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! N% q) A! O% l, h+ f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ [" V/ G( B/ O! F# G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>