【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: S' ]" H* P  iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 d+ Q0 s) A8 C+ Y$ G/ XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 B) ^" w+ n, H0 ~, Q* oWith the moon kissing it every night
+ z2 Z- V, l7 E% s% }/ ]Seeing the sky content with its love
" i. `& a" E, M8 ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 I% G0 f9 l5 h! UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ \' o3 o/ p: a9 I( p$ {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 G6 l% h4 O: v* LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  q9 g6 i5 l, q" U# f' bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: H7 ^* a4 Q' \9 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: C& z% ^, N- a( F; j# x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. H1 n3 ^6 \5 M( W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  x1 G9 G; B4 w: P* K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 u+ r, f5 ?3 N3 _3 K3 s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; A  @$ [! s# u; t  h7 M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  j: v8 Y; C9 y+ j, J, W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' Y, @8 @8 X/ ?$ Y' T' W- Z$ m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: d; W$ y$ m# j' N. E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; |2 j4 A/ b0 v  Y0 k5 w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- V. b: R" v: l! w# a/ ]/ ~1 s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 C0 z1 i& C' L( E; [! t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% c4 x+ F; ~- g  f0 S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 Z& G* s! |5 J! I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) L1 Z- ?5 i  A4 H- G7 I+ Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( x) C' j4 O; I% _+ m3 L  b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: i/ S+ D- p/ i, A: I' W, b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- T5 i4 h5 D7 {$ V& h2 n$ Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; H& P. Q7 N* s  S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% C9 A6 y7 d6 I1 C. r9 {( i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ _8 d3 C4 K% D2 H" V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ Q' j6 h! ]. w8 W$ p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: }. T/ \8 F' g- ?2 s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 S( j$ b& ~  L# w6 `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# ~" o) V  z8 p; N. t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  ?5 Y2 Z' {8 [; m7 s  B9 F4 q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 K3 N% D. S7 v, A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 z1 R  t& d# u( C' Q) j, Z5 [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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- ]* V1 B0 u; q- l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>