【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 C8 S5 y8 U7 V! G. f* P' X$ UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 d0 \7 Z  G4 ?. Q, t# @3 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 P$ Z  ?1 J! _! y& H! BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: K2 j- E( q! p" u) J. f0 ySeeing the sky content with its love
; J# D9 X% e$ Y1 o5 vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" v* T* B4 O+ v0 J0 t1 V$ T/ pYou needn’t fear anything
0 j* F0 V  u0 l: l1 J  T& DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 R) v7 o% k& q; b1 z% C9 {' IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 K- ^. ~& ?8 ]5 Z  a3 {Nothing can compare to my love
* I! f% R) S5 [- G# _, {+ V' r7 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: y+ v9 y2 q5 p5 CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ z/ E, M4 i8 Y1 S3 w9 [' \I’m still filled with fear
1 Z4 |( r+ ~) I3 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 F5 }) {% P' c. T- R. `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( t; w" h# X& o2 Y% H3 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
1 y( C1 M' _% @0 f3 o0 O8 |: sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ w" j5 w& i8 F( m' Y8 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& |' Y: {  r" A" C8 q4 T9 @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ _& ?& Z: E  U4 ^8 @2 ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 T5 p! G, E% I" o0 s, K6 F& N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# N) |+ G$ h  A; G2 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 e& D% R. f  w6 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ P) r  I+ {- ~# o4 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 N( X: u( g# p) I- `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' Q$ q) p5 N8 H" M/ A& F& P' R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 L$ b! R; W7 z; o( h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, j! P6 c9 Y; s) J, e, J, s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 ~  d9 J* M- Y+ c3 w0 g) _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ R9 f0 B" p8 j2 {. v" G, _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% L9 N$ i' m7 W8 @9 r& l% b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! m& q. r$ e9 X+ Z! W, |9 O# f3 `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% \. n" U! O) x/ ^+ v4 c6 O$ K& ?( N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ U* }" @+ D" Z  C) N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 W+ V- e& R* ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, y1 o5 [' S, Y! e3 R! U$ W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& c# I; E0 X9 i) Y% v% L9 R1 O" v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: v' p. m2 W  w0 a+ l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 X  L  S& E" O" I" W  k. B1 d: Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! v$ {' u. s* Y8 j7 C" n* G5 ^4 P1 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" Y  |( n: }  A" K  A* G' w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& U* ?1 ?4 n2 a  k% c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 f- m6 X, S" t2 k7 N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% A! a4 n5 e; }7 b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 r) T. H% u7 a9 t! Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, l4 \3 M; W4 m  O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 ]0 E* s/ m$ X7 i/ Z我请你剖开它

2 E+ H. V4 \5 c/ Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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