【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
7 x( ]2 p0 X2 B
% e# P: K6 l6 C5 j8 {3 w* D<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
3 z* j0 J+ B: a7 j9 v$ X$ t, x

歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 j2 ?% \( q. ]2 ~. ^, }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: m7 W1 d) s7 M  R2 a# dSeeing the sky content with its love
2 z# I: V+ r- Z3 g! ?. @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* G$ ]# ^" z' l8 M( k" y" W, nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  u; h) @, S" ?. A! u, AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 ~# ^: A* p* b: K; ~I regret not dying
3 \5 P2 o; d, D' A& K2 Y5 s8 FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! d8 s9 i( m" n& g
+ h. j3 A2 @, [4 F- Y7 R$ E% A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  L, M  H4 |! w* T! r# T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- I( k0 C4 _( i2 e3 _, ?1 A* y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( A( P0 e! r3 x. a5 y4 `$ f5 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ W5 `( Q+ q. a5 {) C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' G7 t9 C  s' q( c$ o" `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* u' Y8 t- W9 U$ B8 `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 D/ b" }* |' Q# L- A3 y( W" B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& g. H  L: \+ T) O/ Y$ Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. C& P& \) ^( g1 f  C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ e5 w8 e3 q! i/ z/ U4 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  Q: ]3 t; [+ a0 E0 k* O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( ^2 w0 V% x8 b8 H9 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( V: {, l/ [( X1 Y* n% G; S, W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 t, o9 X  P4 \: p2 k( k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# a0 j) P( ?9 D+ C$ G% K- ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 N5 F- V1 a% P+ m* v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ T/ c/ Y* e7 V$ b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ e3 w: G& m$ ^0 D: W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ D2 ~7 x" |# k% u+ O0 x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; N. Y5 k1 K6 R7 V$ i  M1 j4 i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& l) l8 G) K  P. X, _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( }6 y* A2 j, {+ J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) ~, U7 f/ L% F- d; h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: Y3 Q6 ?" s2 N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 ~+ e$ M7 |0 @" r8 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( g- N0 x& X# I" x: n4 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

- p, ~/ A& A1 } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>