【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ u, }) a- X+ _. z6 C5 ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! S3 R: k, O( X7 x+ wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! @$ p+ u; _" FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ i  B) A0 _) R( S; y. F9 T+ UThe sky is happy down to its soul
# P# }  ^3 d8 w( Z( A# v. k9 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
( x. d$ F" {1 N. dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ ^- C* A7 P/ vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 o* r* K7 ~% g2 q. _3 G% \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- S1 d* i  R, p6 M3 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( D! P$ [5 D  _* \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& q$ C3 ?6 C  m' MI’m still filled with fear
, b" W6 V+ T, f' c3 zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, k& W! l7 n- s! k9 [5 a% QI regret not dying
& s+ @5 O' u; J4 @' vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! z3 ^9 {  _! Q2 H! H, @With such a tongue as yours,
0 r2 H. g& f. R% M" |& r/ a: vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. f- F1 q( T6 K# gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& r6 `& f& e: s4 W5 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 [4 v# d. ^6 ^# k* R6 D3 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 p. K+ x: a# c! r' Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 ]. n1 @. `" s9 k6 K7 g" E' S& ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ |0 v- A3 x" \6 p$ D7 @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 g9 @% U5 `9 X$ s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  E/ t. u  I9 q& i1 c( D: L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- o7 Q) X# d! `9 {. N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- Q: c/ p5 V/ K$ N  ^  Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' A" Z! [% n1 j- a2 O) _3 P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 {+ [8 G" J. u. {* O4 i' U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ x) b/ I: u/ H7 G3 j: `% N, H: M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 x& ~. F* [, w! T# m, \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 _8 n: @1 O& y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" ?0 g# _4 Z7 x0 ^- c9 L' l7 C& Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 x3 R6 j; }- `# [7 I! n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" ]) {+ O0 w2 p- f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' s" }& f3 h0 y4 e. r4 l+ O% s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 B7 o% p" p2 ]) F, I8 X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) S9 C2 A) l& Q# R* w1 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. }  P8 z$ C8 y! O/ E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% Z1 z* {3 J/ E  x& F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: g3 f7 ]! q! ~7 z4 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ l# T7 G- R1 n) Z& k/ {- S; A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, u* Z4 R% }% |- c2 b9 ^) v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  E2 W% d  J- I  Z5 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ ~+ l  C5 O4 f8 `% ?0 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ r2 `6 i0 R* F# J/ W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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/ _; [. X+ ^6 k8 N4 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 x5 z6 R. T" Z( T4 F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>