【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
% N' P0 e# k" W* ]% gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& u+ b2 K7 L, p% NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' v+ ^5 k  a% E3 FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. S' t/ g4 g  f+ T7 d8 j7 ?; rNothing can compare to my love
9 \, `+ ~) i: H: bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, I+ t/ w5 e+ Z2 W# T1 T8 A, }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: i8 J/ e+ r- k7 S+ M/ _) TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 z( _( w' c/ t) m8 o; P! aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; T, U: X$ ?- Z! ^9 [& nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ E) b% X/ {7 R( i& N/ L* R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& i3 A6 t; {  a5 G; E$ h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 P+ x6 K$ B  g' `3 _1 [' \+ [6 V+ V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) r% w0 r* N) u6 \, b# C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ ]0 }  |/ j6 n1 [6 u/ U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ r) `1 ]  s" |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 s7 M* v" w# Z6 X( o( C, S0 Q" R" G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) H" l" Q9 k8 O/ j) e8 e<P>你无需担心</P>
1 W5 A) e5 h$ j. n( w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- m3 o3 K/ v5 {; P7 `) T+ T" w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, p5 y& r$ z' e; D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 `* ?8 P) x1 a6 ]! U+ W5 P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  Y6 g! |- e- ?( ?* _8 m: s! v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 y7 y% L) H5 _& Y4 c% h9 P0 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 r$ W& X, @. j5 r" H; S5 a  e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 o# L5 p2 n& R7 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) k( m+ ?* {* {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! o. K0 w' y3 U1 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 L  m" q. @$ n; e8 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( B0 c3 p9 z5 k, ~' x5 X$ W8 J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 \5 ^$ F0 e2 U. ~) `7 C% D8 o, ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
: Y6 `. g+ Y$ X7 @3 t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% j' L" a, V; q! K6 \4 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) Y0 A+ v9 Q% G. q. G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 ^4 \& ]  E' P9 D* r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" j: r7 U. \4 \' _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! ?' U9 ]* g9 o  P4 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' j$ I8 T. t$ R; a/ K) m3 e- G+ A$ D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>