【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" o6 p+ e# {2 s  IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ `+ ^+ ^7 ~* p0 Q0 v6 k0 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 ]' Y) ^7 K& C5 a. R3 y0 WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: Y+ Z7 b. F7 G3 ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. J$ M; s! q7 Y& d4 g$ m( jI really want to know just how much you love me
+ u5 e4 e& _) `; A" z5 AI love you I love you with all my heart
5 `7 x1 |; Y% E8 Z7 yNothing can compare to my love
3 r+ Q4 U7 d$ y3 vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 v, H7 ^$ U; N1 ?2 V2 H) B* p7 yI want so much to see inside your heart
+ H' O+ ^$ b  w+ U2 f9 pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" N8 \  l2 [" z+ p2 P$ vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  |' W. s# L1 Y1 \9 gWith such a tongue as yours,
) D& O9 u; H2 D4 zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 b% e& x$ `0 G7 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 n6 w8 J7 p2 \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ I5 z" x4 x' E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, Q+ f! n$ s& l- C7 K/ F* g/ ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; {! ^8 y* ~2 n& w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ U  I8 a2 y+ ?0 H7 q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 Z) H8 s" I! C& s7 G1 g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. }3 R. U. G6 E% z) S9 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# v6 _7 G! y5 {% [0 M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 I; V# n" U3 @% E8 c8 z; K) k1 k' r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* o4 j! S) J+ B+ N2 y$ ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 ^* O$ y! v9 W, G8 m+ F/ B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  l% j' F7 t+ Y. |& ~( K# o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 T, }  `& [" n! s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  u: L8 F6 g6 x7 w+ z0 e( F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 f% w, x% g1 o( \2 [4 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 }, ?3 S: S+ H- L, j, |2 [# o7 J% T) L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( Q, J7 A2 Q2 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 ]0 P  b" l4 f7 ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 Q. K3 y8 U( X2 h9 D" M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 U( l* \0 q6 S4 L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 o- ?+ e, Q( Z# Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# W* }& f- {$ t5 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  d/ T$ o9 a' A& {* e* O! B  _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, K; b) d: k  A2 n- @! k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" X. m7 U0 Z$ z  g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. f' F! J( {# q+ D) @" y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ R7 g7 F* l3 R$ w4 @" C7 `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ k: v6 Y  V2 s2 Q7 l/ ?% B* N3 `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 E' u4 p* d/ f# k& }9 k) c5 j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>