【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>


7 z- S. z3 H! N6 @歌词我附在后面。
# ?/ B5 f3 S* k  x! ^  QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- Y- |0 P' I" m' N8 b& fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! J- ]+ ]4 y) {8 G' l! CThe sky is happy down to its soul
" e, o% U& w9 i1 ~2 qWith the moon kissing it every night
' T+ Z, K' r6 k$ |' a# I2 HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 h! M/ a6 g) E2 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 G: s# k) t: r% @( S& kEvery other word you utter is love
. U4 C5 o% ~5 \4 D4 l4 O- GI really want to know just how much you love me
+ a: T$ U4 f0 ]9 l4 s# jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 C2 X! ^  }( m, o9 qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ u) }/ }2 t2 z; r; YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' o+ d9 E7 v+ d! t- KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# b( u( J$ I) d4 p/ z- W, d( jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 ]7 ~" _2 [( f2 e, M7 Y% f0 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% P: D, U, p9 u  r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 W: z0 a) s5 L* F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 Y! g3 `& X: ?; F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) s3 N2 J; z: \8 i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; B: z# O4 p4 P. e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' l% R% @; E* B/ O0 y* f3 g/ L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) L- v+ y% l0 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! _/ D( ^( ]8 G2 u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: M# u/ P' n3 f6 R/ G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ ~6 z: s6 ]  @8 r4 w* A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 n2 a4 B8 m! k, X. C; b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ X; g9 G* Q3 [8 E9 ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ [7 S: i, s3 w9 b$ D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 p$ B+ }' j6 w9 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. I7 F# W: ~0 K+ f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ j$ p1 ]/ g1 C5 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 X+ q/ c2 g1 y8 Y* q: B( |* _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, ^' l/ K/ W, g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, J# M8 M3 ?. V  N0 {" x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ {: v1 c1 a2 v* d5 B6 f" f# y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( j  c" ?) }% q8 o1 P& w% d  e4 g; c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( W5 J2 ?, u0 F% g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 {! w3 l6 ?6 f% {; G2 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  I" M/ v2 b  h( {: R( p; [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 ~1 s% ~. S$ M- {( g, W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 y3 W8 e! u8 ~! @9 Y$ l' D: {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( E4 M4 M3 Q6 m9 a3 w- E) ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 X+ y1 F' d6 w0 F$ ?+ q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& f, V( M" J& j5 R4 [& o! Q+ j7 z: V1 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 K$ D4 O+ x7 {8 h1 G- M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
  `' t4 U( `3 V1 P
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
! L" \$ y2 _) ~% s$ ~% j) a+ W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>