【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ q# X% c! q% f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* I& k# T9 Z) s3 Q: NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- E" h& q: t. X1 V; N% u' Z% L9 m: n1 kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ w5 A5 C0 P) l% F& QThe sky is happy down to its soul
  p7 P! o6 @4 K4 P5 Z* ]4 f8 wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 }) z) j) l" g  N# e% ~9 ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 P6 W* R$ o  t5 v& B% {6 jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 d$ X5 e( L( F5 fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% x( b$ X9 R9 M; i3 O. K! j( tI love you I love you with all my heart
, I% g2 W; ?( g0 v3 b! t9 aNothing can compare to my love
6 a# S6 z! @6 s+ wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% m( A, D  c+ p9 lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( Z% e, U# j6 N) k8 a, NI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  I5 d5 i/ b6 [) j  K" O/ ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 d, J4 O4 Z$ S2 T* C, hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) \+ l7 |' C# ~' g! AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- r. `' a; |( [5 u# SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# m5 a; u* V$ W1 l" W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# R) C! u4 O7 t" \: h9 F3 r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# l& R& y8 p- O' ?' T+ S( s, K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 }5 G. W. |# {8 u" Y+ v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* _& ?- d: I! g' ~* D  t" Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( Y. l1 @* p. l+ A2 j5 [7 C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 y2 j7 H5 w& b" |8 j) m0 g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 t. o6 s: p! ^; x* m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 k/ t5 r  f' m$ ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; z- M: e2 L7 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 W1 R) U; t9 u/ v8 h+ N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: k3 `, X& T( c$ v$ u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& e# b$ P+ T# F" ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" B7 P' V2 e6 r& E' q! Z8 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 w" o$ \" B: O$ Q8 Q8 W4 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& |; n7 e5 n, |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! d* }" [% A4 A9 z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 t4 H3 F3 s% H, m* L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' a! W" Z2 L6 U( z5 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 R/ w2 Y. y) Q$ N, J/ ^2 m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! ]4 ~( r  Q* n! h8 ^, Q: G4 _+ Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 c2 H! Z8 |$ i7 E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 O% ]6 G1 L3 G  [8 v! ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( _- S: ^; }0 \) L9 n. H1 ?$ h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' R+ U$ D% h2 F$ I& q* Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 |' U! ]+ ?5 K3 t6 b: Z( Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' F- P/ g# o2 T; ^: g* J" x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* n2 {& K" {' W. e: p- t( i1 M/ N' K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ |8 W$ z/ V4 T$ D7 s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ Y4 n$ i! K* F  ]1 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% q, e* T$ F# j1 a2 Y, c+ _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ ]- ~1 n! W  V5 g: w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! w1 |/ B' ~: X+ o4 w; @2 Q( x& g& t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 j; w( g- W; l8 i" R# |8 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# _/ I2 m& v# r; I我请你剖开它

: O0 _" k6 }5 L3 [" U1 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 g3 T5 h' m9 U& i" I2 Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>