【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 {0 Z( x5 g0 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 ?) X! L) N! |( AThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 g( J$ J6 H% w8 l* W" E1 i/ UWith the moon kissing it every night
4 k( k* b8 q# |  z, o* @1 ySeeing the sky content with its love
$ T8 q( q8 Y( ]2 j9 f! fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  K! I$ n& G+ v2 _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- ]  ~% v) @0 b/ _/ b( oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 w' _) |# `( O* N7 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 L9 [+ k. n: r# W7 s2 I* k  ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: c$ k3 q0 b& s* nI regret not dying
0 A2 H4 A1 z  @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 I4 ]$ J  ~5 m. A% g/ i/ lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( T( ?/ Y6 ^1 t; q" G& [3 R7 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  Y; E( e( Q# e) {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, K, x: P4 c% g% R! K2 {' a8 \+ e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; s5 W  [  B( _# S/ Y' f# G: e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  e/ W% ~1 N4 V# {, X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 h* G. h9 {9 K' x. ]2 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 l6 K: c0 ?8 d, }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, K5 A! ~! T3 i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ H8 h6 D! H* M3 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; f, X  K/ [/ b0 R: \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 \# P3 m4 t* z, z<P>你无需担心</P>
- O( g5 H, H) a0 h1 z# {8 F3 P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 V( V# H2 `1 W# K6 Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' c4 m, o4 E0 Y8 e/ O* _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
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<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# P" K  K" S, g0 s8 f' T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" {; e& y$ u( _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( A, N/ S) j6 p9 F; ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' G0 D0 a; Y' d0 D" s) t) ^, d+ K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 v1 U$ k8 o+ _& ?1 V3 {( [4 G, l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: {' h# _& w2 N( K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" z! ]  T6 D0 O3 d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! b4 |* t* z" v5 h( e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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" Q' @" N; D0 p. N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) Q% `: i2 D, X- }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ Y% ?% Z# I8 e. K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! T% T9 b5 c2 S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! |, `8 k' E& ?" p0 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

) ~- B. a1 h- D2 f# ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>