【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 ~' |9 ^2 c5 m# R2 L4 \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 i! ^8 ]$ O3 a1 o7 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
  E9 i# S9 j4 L# i- |1 UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 X& b+ \+ u5 n; kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' F% i  g1 J/ r6 Q6 S0 @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; d7 c5 C" S5 j5 }; i7 C) JEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! z2 M/ N# A- O3 kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 g( W  H7 y$ j; aI want so much to see inside your heart
" _6 n9 O* s& a6 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* U9 i6 G. j' r4 I0 X( UI’m still filled with fear
0 T. I0 o* z# a; V* [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 M/ B" U: `. F5 t) |" EI regret not dying
9 D9 _9 W# ^, B; I. rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, R0 h1 w, A/ V5 c! }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ b/ Q: I1 L# v& B: o4 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# D3 _' ^: u& v9 Y0 e4 i! ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 Q5 @& V* I( m: i" @4 I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( @% X' q' _% @3 l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  x3 o, b+ {! h$ F6 Y7 `* d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! \! a& q0 D# m1 N$ k: x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( A3 v( @2 j2 O" J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) d1 n, A  N. C  A' C* J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 @( V  e1 X- G6 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: v3 c# h' l$ `& }, ?$ V2 A% s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" q( N3 x+ s* @) }) @" i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, @7 O; x' L: g! ^" Y  n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 f+ j% t0 V! _  P: f4 w6 O: i: \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% W9 m( L- L, k; @' H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% B, E) ]: q% Z: s1 m6 w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* M& y1 t$ D  J. U/ \% d6 L. E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. Q0 S7 |# R0 H9 ~' A" H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- g, j$ z" H3 a- z' y) ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: @, x, B* f2 N& s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- x0 e' D* ~& E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>