【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 D9 L! t4 h6 t! b. Y. eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  r/ [: k* P! O) M- cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 X" b2 U0 z7 h: H+ {The sky is happy down to its soul
, I0 A$ k9 X  u1 U3 ]With the moon kissing it every night
4 o" P8 D1 u, A4 tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  }9 r4 L8 T, _( t; Y7 |/ Q6 {You needn’t fear anything
0 |$ X7 W4 x0 H4 C! z9 c: }. hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* C( I1 K3 y* w$ S. @1 N& `2 s: u, gEvery other word you utter is love
9 f" i' S& E! d: n) p+ x& Z4 h( P$ H) BI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 t0 y& i- x7 `# AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) |8 ]$ g! j# X/ w8 c: |0 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; t! L( `& }# q: G9 q6 u& a  YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 t$ t1 P! }0 h8 GWith such a tongue as yours,
7 y( F3 H( F5 \- IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 V2 x* s5 o) J7 x5 M: dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 r; V! B/ c6 {/ e7 R8 BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, g& `& S/ f! J9 M$ e! i! w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ B: K1 O' c& q) g& h0 ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" q$ M, c% R, t! |; l1 d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& _: Q' O: I( F, z* h' A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  ~8 N7 h" ?8 l0 p1 G8 R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) T' w( S  o' D. O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ {' B* k( T4 j1 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 h- B# v8 @- _+ e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ H. ~4 f8 B/ V' k. Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  M# j, @/ j& |. H+ K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( J; s3 H" @% o7 [- |, ^* M<P>你无需担心</P>
5 z4 C6 Q: `9 z7 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! T' a$ s, [. h1 H+ Z8 W6 u! D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* L- @4 d, N# v( [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  b2 i: w. }5 v4 P+ Q* C- h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 t1 [/ ]! H6 Z* I% D/ H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 x7 a1 l4 n5 g+ L" n8 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* ^: w$ R. r: d1 o; J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 u4 I* {0 {8 e  ^  `! d) b+ }; P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 v8 b' T+ Q8 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 q- g, ?+ G- \' B8 |& g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, E, I5 \# k) Y6 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 `5 O$ m, W% Z& \+ d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ _9 t' j* d  T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, Q4 l* D: \& G% V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 ~; k- S3 P. y6 R$ l. [6 C% l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& w0 f8 O8 j. i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 P5 h7 l1 t& A( a7 k2 p5 a* Q( P/ }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 H  c0 t/ X$ k0 ^. ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! m* U9 K9 {$ @) F; z; u3 `! r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 J7 K- @: n+ B+ D6 M' f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& q2 w9 J7 P5 l7 Y: }- c我请你剖开它
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8 \* C& o6 D% s4 x3 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>