【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 Q! u6 h7 K% q8 J' D. i2 H5 _( QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 K+ }7 G, Y  X( @4 ^/ X( B/ uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, N1 h# v$ S( N* ~( t0 U. uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ }1 e( G* L3 A" k! J. T" YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) Y/ m* M1 w+ G' TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ \- H' p3 Y6 s2 LI really want to know just how much you love me
/ T, _1 N; H: i6 K% |! P8 I6 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, b$ R4 o! k- @5 r' cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  o! E) \  [' i4 pI want so much to see inside your heart
7 C4 g6 |+ i4 V2 `8 O+ F4 q0 c+ B3 ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 J4 \9 Q4 @  h( }, D+ ?/ nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) U4 d1 n6 c* Y4 c4 TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 E) x! _5 J9 P+ A. l( KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! M* M- y' v( N9 z* P( r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" @+ e4 b% A5 t8 z4 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 p0 |7 ?& b" L/ Y  A: S% {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 u5 n  l0 N# I6 \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; g5 I& w4 @; M3 K7 ~; U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' A6 `2 _1 P; U/ X0 m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- U6 W& q; Y# s0 p- Q& C! k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 y5 l+ ]4 [# N; M/ a+ `1 }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. h7 \* f$ a! n* B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% N) ~' X# k9 X( @: n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 l* J1 @# O! V! C7 J& N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: [$ T! m" |! r  d' x<P>你无需担心</P>
* ^+ p; C3 U) z+ g" O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 l' o1 R# _9 U2 I$ J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% x: h; C  ?  R7 F7 e+ E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! w: B% Y* n" |" f) m/ R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, t0 j- D& u; a. ?" D& \' Z$ Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 i- S( k* X2 P' }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 P! P5 L6 D# f2 O% V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; z! g3 V% t: [. ^+ u9 u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% @& j! a2 Q% l4 u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- \, d. s9 L( n1 p5 Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
: u' e$ i1 F# z& G, g+ I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 h! O" i- |" j  \! O& D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) J& o( E6 _7 H9 v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 s# k* w: r4 C% ^& B6 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: s: o% L' ]6 \) V1 ^' G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( G0 c1 k  H0 g! p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 C# u5 g9 F( O7 N% O8 O# k我请你剖开它

1 d4 E  y% P- f! \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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