【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 W! D4 a. _3 k歌词我附在后面。
2 m/ |; b8 V9 H4 u$ UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, I* `& |  D' v& ?' ^0 C2 J9 k9 iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* Z( K7 X2 u# l& N2 r' X; _5 _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( O* W8 O0 K7 F# k8 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 e# Q( g, ?( v7 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& r8 E" E) F& V9 }( KYou needn’t fear anything
# }2 ^1 Q0 ~) j- S7 o* k$ i: S' F1 @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% j" a3 P+ k/ G* V) Q- w) u/ E; |I love you I love you with all my heart
0 L: \" ~2 [1 ^+ E0 ?) y) SNothing can compare to my love
* U3 x4 K' C3 j* @! [# ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# n. b" M8 e& bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 b- R: p% L$ EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 `2 {7 X7 e- I# |' \/ N$ Q* W- FWith such a tongue as yours,
% t7 q5 ^: s! j6 C! RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) X1 s0 V* R' a& E' y+ b# AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 i5 C7 K+ y  b/ g5 @( i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 _9 |: l& X. w- u/ K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  W* b/ P0 D& E  U" {2 _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 f( |0 d! d4 l9 E% Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 P8 W) Q& A% z4 Q' C2 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: n# \- m5 q3 N+ }7 z( r2 U/ v3 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( C4 F' p) }5 Z# b9 ~4 s+ o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 ~/ P* ?' J( k: q& t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 A0 \+ `% \9 `& ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 l6 S+ g* f1 C. e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* [2 D% n" R, F6 n# d) M( z# c; p' K( J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 K" E8 |( }3 |. d<P>你无需担心</P>
6 o' L6 M2 \: r8 `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ r; ]: h- ]" n/ x  f* c- G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, v  E, t+ g1 m3 V2 m: b+ k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 o9 {7 Z+ g+ z4 |' {3 O- g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 r5 r9 J% x2 y# S9 A& _0 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  {, i6 U) s+ G# c' R6 B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  B% I9 H  K# [# P2 d, r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 }7 e! X+ s! T$ p6 e( J# M4 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 W+ s; w* b1 X8 K/ N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 B( w9 \7 c4 Z* l! ^1 {' e: c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 |/ z; J: W& F2 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ `( X( q- ~6 g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  H2 r' k! j) S& x7 D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* I/ L0 U( w! r0 o. K! @$ i9 x% v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 [4 ^+ p5 o. \) f# u* l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* |2 P1 {6 Y3 U* X: B9 V  ~+ E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 r! W) {4 ?4 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! n7 t! O( T% c, w- n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' `# L0 D) N, M" Z1 m9 U$ f  o我请你剖开它
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; R% P! a* f! z; p1 j8 a) m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 J, R& y: l0 U' n( S6 e/ {1 Y' U8 W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>