【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: w6 i9 k1 m! g6 _& a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' p! j# X7 C& d' EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 b: u" ]% r. [# s. ~2 D2 _9 p) r  ?The sky is happy down to its soul
, R' J  X1 R3 i$ \With the moon kissing it every night
5 M. x" u1 T8 M- T) m  ^% ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) d& c2 j) O) n7 n0 pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ a+ p+ |. b/ O& nEvery other word you utter is love
% R! z$ A) U4 VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 Y  z/ ~3 O, p) jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ U) h, Z0 ^* }+ S5 ?0 d8 ?/ gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ ]5 T1 x, j3 u# i: {' vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ ]! b" H# V! oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 O# f0 x) h% z  W; Z, g# z  oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( O, v+ _1 t$ }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& @# j  j' J* ~& S' l* W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 ^' k& n# P! f& A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ u) p. b6 z4 q( b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 a+ q5 _2 s/ |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 m/ z4 [6 [1 }% o. q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' `. Z  x6 Q$ x- W% R. P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 a. `0 U) S: L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 z0 z1 e" F$ Q. R# x  y& h8 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 [7 \  W8 ?9 t( J$ {0 h$ t4 V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; y* O  K  N* e, }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 s& t( C( n' A7 y, X- o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 V. r, @* S( i+ I9 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& e3 q  |! P8 n. C  r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 b/ Q; r: @. @* N, L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 {- J" G6 `( q* [( Y; D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& j+ B& R! v2 p, d. b' D# y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: z" E: C: Y( P  J5 B% f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 D9 g) s, o1 }0 i. L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 l: |, e6 n$ x- S8 ?! |/ D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# K+ X8 \* @; c' Q5 g0 R7 `9 T( T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 G( F- l4 C2 [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 l# B4 d& e3 n5 N7 h4 c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 c1 U0 Q1 r: b$ T; d4 Z我请你剖开它

( L4 K$ i2 Q" h& a  V5 V4 M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>