【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
& C* q7 x" h; r: r2 s: h, y2 ^袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: g$ }7 C) ]; v1 A- r9 m, w- gThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
, z0 c% E. f5 @0 [8 X+ b深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  
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From the first moment we met,
; O+ j: l+ j, d) x% n$ m; ~I already loved you with all my heart
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, d+ K7 D2 [! K; M- c3 Y在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
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7 \7 w+ T/ q2 I* O& y' j% uIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 c9 w& n4 f% \; gI would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
; X8 j, z) [" N% r. c你的心情

Love… just the word love
) F! U2 D" r( Y  VWhy is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
& B" Y( i1 C  I) Y* R+ x8 j如此難以表白?
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6 f5 h0 h. e4 Q5 `# t1 sI want to confess that I love you,
3 k) D0 V5 N/ k5 N; Q, J; oBut I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

' M# U, }7 L0 d$ E4 eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
" I5 d0 W# E, h: ]! ~$ M9 E+ E) mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

4 D% q  Q; ^6 K& a$ Q希望今天還不會太晚
0 z# w' n4 J, R) G讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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; Q# i) q) E6 ~' R) w不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
, w: @4 d' H5 c& o% }Entrust my love within your heart
7 x4 q& _( @& [3 Z. y& f# P可否讓我托付給你?
0 @  u  R% s& _* x& b. Z4 j0 x! A托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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- h; ^/ f. S, V& g( xLove… just the word love
3 Y+ k9 m: {! [! F9 `6 c6 QWhy is it so difficult to express?
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2 E) `& Q, k9 @& e愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
3 u: I9 {$ s# ^+ F! x8 o, M. N8 XBut I never did
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! f" j) i7 Y% G4 ~9 D愛你 我想要告訴你
1 c. j$ l0 A! f0 ?$ q0 o卻還是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

4 @1 u$ q0 ?. Y3 _' s+ k也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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; y3 x9 l, X" v) d! GIf today isn’t too late,
$ b. q$ S. ]2 s/ U5 fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

+ @' x9 [5 r4 R6 `( _- }7 c希望今天還不會太晚
' p1 e* i3 n/ v4 k: n- v讓我向你表白
4 D, C% m7 {! ?我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

8 D9 ^# M3 k* W9 Q3 @/ @不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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2 I; t: B$ r: pCan I entrust it to you?
5 |3 O* n0 }# n( z! \5 M/ I  c1 EEntrust my love within your heart
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; E) o7 q$ _1 _& W2 q: I+ c8 ~可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
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可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡


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对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. }; v/ [# G$ E) `% o; ~( SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

# W% G8 x3 B  e4 ]7 s+ d皎潔月光下
! E0 C$ }# G3 i& j天空金銀閃爍
" T- o: p3 x: J0 _" |* }凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂

6 I% w& U/ a9 e9 A' s7 h$ |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 @3 ]/ o6 z2 T; }. A# J8 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 x& ?; s# i/ [Seeing the sky content with its love

月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
9 _% P/ g( P, k& x. n% k: \月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂

3 `' H6 }& ~7 b2 z. KIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
! G( `+ b# V* pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
& L2 a( [5 _4 N- W$ A1 A6 T& j我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝
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5 H, F4 d: P5 D, D: e# `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me

( L& ]9 l! F: A你的一言一語都是愛
1 ?, o2 e2 V8 [/ L- x  B我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

/ c: f/ U5 L7 P) T  e, ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
. p7 S/ }6 B2 z9 b3 e' [$ |你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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3 o$ D( h# t% x能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

8 M3 k( j& G- F4 G6 Z/ c0 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

" M9 c# W& ~% X7 S7 L' P; uI want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
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我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
+ ], J" S! K  H) B# ^) w% }9 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
9 e0 _# C+ L0 ], `8 a2 {& zI only have one tongue
1 o1 r0 L7 Z0 ]It’s nothing close to 100,000

4 \6 f6 G; ]3 p' K% U0 M6 h可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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With such a tongue as yours,
% h4 ?" ]0 n+ A9 WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
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這樣一張巧舌
: |& j, I) b$ T- I你的言語都跟不上
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4 H* ]" S* ^& R4 \. wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! |+ q- z8 p9 b3 N3 f; _如果我真有千百張口
, Q5 v  e& F( K/ @$ K: d1 m! i我將對你訴說
% m+ L4 [" p# N3 I# X& S千萬個心思
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$ T& B$ U/ h" l) l0 R& yRambling on about a thousand words of love

0 a+ r# d: `* \9 H- H7 q& e. I訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
8 f! h* E& T1 r' |+ W  Z7 b- kxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

9 ^0 F  y8 @' N2 g4 F1 z8 B1 S5 G是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒