【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
/ h: z0 n+ s$ o; A& R; ]/ N1 }袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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0 S7 z. }  ]& ^6 e+ Q! c6 iThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
& o; w) J! Q( \- p7 V' I我愛你  

From the first moment we met,
2 x- b3 l, d  O- R) oI already loved you with all my heart

4 ~7 }! k7 M% |$ A" V1 Q3 S在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

$ @  c2 T- K  Q% n- zWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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0 y) j) U/ y  g縱然朝夕相處
, ~: T7 {. d. P還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* \3 F" H# W( O9 C4 j. VI would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
- z/ Q2 `# \- t- t; B: }8 k你的心情
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Love… just the word love
" [( h+ d; x$ X9 lWhy is it so difficult to express?
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. O1 h, h$ ]. ?! r9 Y6 Z9 c愛  簡單的一句愛
$ m( f$ w" @7 t! }7 h% Y; |為什麼
2 H3 ?1 u# q: [; `  D  g, E如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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* m8 ?. B% F7 Q. K7 i  u! t愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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/ M; S9 H( N: ]1 y3 BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- z+ q% }/ X5 n1 I* g也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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0 |7 o( T; O) b2 J5 o: _If today isn’t too late,
9 \! i4 ]& ?" [9 U9 B) G$ c/ iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

6 E0 g/ n! A4 Y  p希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
- N2 F( i, {0 L* @) x% M我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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9 p& A% ~& s' I+ e不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

7 \8 S& Q, Y% x' h+ [6 i/ ]2 yCan I entrust it to you?
2 d3 z8 a$ L) p( jEntrust my love within your heart
4 v" r% ?5 e/ \可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
: @$ T  v/ k9 F4 k/ j收在你心裡

+ j5 C2 P' h2 G! _- J0 _Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
6 Y' j/ E1 U+ d! hBut I never did

! L. `. O0 O. z1 t9 f. {" x愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

  m. a4 i* M* zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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& i2 k3 s+ ?7 x$ [+ ~$ Q5 n也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
% D' q+ Z) V4 T2 b. |. q1 _& t# _0 CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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5 i5 }+ r, t) W! k/ {9 ^2 Q. ?4 ^希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
0 ~' s" F8 M3 m4 R7 k. r3 z我心底的秘密
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/ Y; }7 u6 H8 L' VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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) V  I, I: d% U, {( DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

/ \+ _( `. [# q3 \$ R' c1 [! R9 gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
( I+ h+ J8 k4 Y0 s* C. D6 e托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 u" Z8 A; y# c* NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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皎潔月光下
+ h% ~8 o9 A% x- ~) Y7 ?3 {天空金銀閃爍
4 F# ]! ~7 C( u( d7 V' I- C& g凝視著星空
# R# U/ X0 c. R8 R1 Z, f  [) p我心充滿快樂
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The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 @# \2 Y' i+ r% E. LWith the moon kissing it every night
1 _: i6 @) c5 |+ DSeeing the sky content with its love
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3 h1 v2 ]; u; D7 D$ @; J) x. t月光映在我的眼底
/ H9 X+ F6 x" x- r# s月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂

It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

我心卻充斥著憂鬱
1 J% X" W$ V% _害怕我們的愛
- d- `; O: y* U終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
4 H$ Y0 w7 A% H; I# b$ kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

) y* ~8 C( V' b- h& t你勿須擔心憂鬱
  A  A& x/ F+ g# o' N/ G3 v我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
% H0 [& |/ V& m; s" a/ s; n堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
4 j9 r5 P  X5 `' D; C7 y# r3 }3 KI really want to know just how much you love me

% P, |( o( D* v8 s你的一言一語都是愛
- L8 J- |  C5 q/ ^3 x  Y! l7 H) E% X- N我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

7 I& [! y+ W0 V* p6 \I love you I love you with all my heart
1 L1 I0 |/ O! }+ b3 L2 m% N. PNothing can compare to my love

我的愛 全心全意
8 B8 E  \( Q5 T  i: J" B你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 O, ~! s# C. n+ J, G6 J整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

! a& I3 l# `& |& O% BI want so much to see inside your heart
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5 y$ D+ I5 l% e  i) A% ?我想看透你的心

# `" \1 p( |( ]0 OI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die

我歡迎你將它打開
8 e0 i' C1 u) I, G) P8 b4 U2 c7 p我願意用生命
* _# _- ?/ B1 c% D6 w4 Z來證明我的愛

! ~8 R/ w9 L5 a0 x3 u2 T* V8 jI’m still filled with fear
- M2 c; ?# X2 g& {3 {* DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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; R, Q. J" r. ~$ E9 |1 ~可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
1 `7 c: y0 w* R6 e: H, aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
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這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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訴說千萬個
% N/ r  w6 i4 T/ c' s3 p1 t# u愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

2 t: M0 M( d0 e. A" Y4 b是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒