【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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/ n% }/ T+ c# m( B* Q8 O$ D我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
+ T) V/ m9 x" j# r$ C我愛你  
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From the first moment we met,
2 Y: X+ ~7 V: K7 \' P* pI already loved you with all my heart
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/ }' z! P$ }) y) m9 A在遇見你的第一刻
% Q8 L5 V% Z+ F) M9 D. b( p你已經深深的佔領了
( ~/ Q' M. M) K2 a7 |我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

/ J+ A" l- V! s& S  v9 R! a縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意

  w' G. {4 W3 R' L9 L7 f6 [9 H5 n: C% l9 w" }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& W0 j+ l# P# r& U6 |- RI would probably know how you feel
0 z& t' ^$ N, L% K  }凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
% L5 |% c3 h. {- I3 Q" V1 t我也許就能了解
  d3 W# \  z* I. e" n, ~. U你的心情
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8 F9 s: N  D4 l6 ELove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

0 g$ u6 l3 p$ c8 l, B) J/ [愛你 想要告訴你
; c) K! O; Q- y4 B& K& J卻總是說不出來
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! Y2 I' j$ _4 K4 L! I* ^6 J5 @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: L9 L  T1 |  J  I3 ^( x也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

2 J0 Y3 e5 ~% |/ LIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

7 D8 T; ^$ K9 C2 s; \3 g( Z希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
, \" k' @  p" P5 n5 _' y3 K我心底的秘密

5 H6 m- B/ j# ?! g0 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

& Z# a0 \! |. y0 ~% B不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

& f/ k, ^3 I0 W7 G5 @! yCan I entrust it to you?
" D$ B$ s$ d8 D% xEntrust my love within your heart
0 ~8 L& l, e# r4 j$ }& k8 h可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
* k  y- ?  z/ Y- D: \$ |) ZWhy is it so difficult to express?

' Q0 z% \9 `9 Q: I& d0 T4 ?( C# r, [愛  簡單一句愛
. T% Y2 ^9 n: n7 j: @2 S+ \0 A為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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* C8 i( B! f0 t; z' a愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

" q; s' A  X7 H6 V# [' e6 F2 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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+ Q1 @* A9 a6 ^% C3 q+ K, ?也許有一天
2 P3 V8 \0 |" m5 r你將從我指間滑漏
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9 @5 H8 K- f. c: R# e( P) a4 ^( ?If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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/ v, t1 X/ @. l2 L- _5 h7 I希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
: f6 g$ i& v5 D, R我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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+ E: E" w" w7 ]不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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; _: z1 c4 t9 A3 z! PCan I entrust it to you?
+ y3 b7 x7 W3 m; B# l9 }Entrust my love within your heart
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( C& [7 f7 o: o% e  c4 @可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
& X) g- E( F6 }6 k) I! ^收在你心裡

, J6 P1 @, Z6 [" k5 cCan I entrust it to you?
) r# ^" S& U" X; J3 W3 aEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
: C9 c5 i6 @8 [- T/ `: T' Q. o托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 ~' O/ t! O; k9 a) F+ p0 o3 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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皎潔月光下
  k2 b0 J/ J+ w$ N; h1 S天空金銀閃爍
# m* x, X7 j8 N% b# M7 r/ ?5 s0 o凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂
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The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
* O8 P+ G( b4 T+ e; R月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂

/ X5 p( K4 T6 \1 ]2 n& D+ I  WIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
9 Y* r9 H4 o' w) ~  `2 d害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
1 v' F% C2 b- ^! l+ z* @+ J8 @( aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
  m: T& Z1 A3 b7 v我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝
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5 f+ v8 |# s+ z. s( r! kEvery other word you utter is love
0 |/ v* O$ c% d) x/ ^! C4 R  K1 \I really want to know just how much you love me
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2 v# v. y2 O, p) C1 R, N你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
9 j( a. w3 l3 ?6 w* Y你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

, ^' u" G' m2 ~# m3 r* }9 f( |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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+ b. p; b1 f7 `: w/ ~4 x: S# c能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart

3 q6 q. L! \: i# k3 K2 S) k我想看透你的心

$ ]+ J& L( {' l- l2 g7 c) V. zI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die

我歡迎你將它打開
' Z' c4 \) _7 Y+ y7 @我願意用生命
) |0 c& c" M+ T* N來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
9 p- R  w; v; ^1 l' E5 g/ [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

2 R' V0 X# H, |2 M* y我依然滿心憂鬱
% @& r7 G: T; a6 C你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

1 H/ n4 Y: _+ s$ b% {9 z( {5 lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000

可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
; v: u- ~4 F4 L' |遠遠不及千萬
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With such a tongue as yours,
$ s+ r; O) x  m+ ]- T4 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it

/ Z9 J/ }( j+ j. V! ?這樣一張巧舌
# S, b0 r) T6 c) s; |你的言語都跟不上
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
8 N0 ~2 U1 Q& W9 B: L我將對你訴說
- U3 R1 [* I8 T$ S; @千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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: I7 p4 H9 s0 L0 v" I* {) ~7 y訴說千萬個
7 V. x7 C: Y4 _愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
3 J$ O9 ?/ P. Q$ f  Q5 exxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

  x% {! o# ]  `# y" q3 H' r是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒