【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
. ?% u, x+ }1 P! yxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

: ]- v% X6 V  ?1 E, r一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

- Y1 ]/ U8 F/ }0 v- A再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ ^! f/ X# j! Y+ P3 A; v皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
' l; ?: A1 y. C% GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# z( p- A! ]0 k& q- ?! ^4 w月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
* c0 o5 S3 [# [8 J: G- I, O一片丹心 照耀夜空
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0 W3 ]) v9 X! J; ~1 H  ZWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
9 U6 ?6 n/ L7 @, I# V6 NSeeing the sky content with its love
: O! N# F! K$ K( c; g+ A: X5 ?4 C/ h夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
; _% ]  B' p% `9 G) Y我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
9 p' G( m1 q4 }# M; fYou needn’t fear anything
: }0 u+ e3 s+ E- ~1 {+ O. v- ^怕这怕那 又是何苦
# H/ _" I* m9 kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 i3 _1 z( i9 N( y3 P1 G7 s  t我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
3 v& O& X" P5 q2 x! M4 R0 MEvery other word you utter is love
8 }9 ?8 m, C9 {; T8 i& ]口口声声 说你爱我
5 N9 T7 H1 v. d8 `1 [I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
+ u; U! F8 @$ w1 A6 ~  g0 OI love you I love you with all my heart
6 Q5 S! i% Q# X6 X0 t爱你爱你 全心全意
  `, X, i( x2 D: w1 |. HNothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

' N( P$ M" J. gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
: i# `7 N+ R4 n2 D; j: r  W# `: oI want so much to see inside your heart
" P/ I; F1 i/ Y8 d4 ^0 `4 y" |( i( ?我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
1 @: L4 B5 c, l; _# L& Q你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 Q( t0 x+ a2 g若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
* O3 N, Q0 [. T2 Q- g可我依然满心忧虑
; M/ q# N: v4 B* _  WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
+ k0 n' S! K0 h. N. [I regret not dying
$ e% q5 B. w  l/ Q; N: |" M真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
% N1 @& N' |. Y+ h1 e我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
% V# \) n) u1 }6 I+ P3 eIt’s nothing close to 100,000
3 Q* N$ P* H3 ?" w! X0 I0 c  |也恨不得  多如千万
& M% T4 R( C1 v- P: y9 vWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
1 I  D4 v& \+ Q/ E+ A! dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
- Q" u( j& m! {. sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  k. [7 p; b+ L7 B& t  L. ~5 N若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

+ }8 }6 c3 S/ |' c: nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ v; g$ l/ r/ F从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 Y  |; q/ I9 X5 g6 W爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
0 N$ ^( |. ~+ v& ]From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
' g0 E; g% c- ?" r2 k; ?* q你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
; y; q! x# h9 cIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 {- t4 O) ~. O* ?1 U/ D* }若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
, T* {' C- ?  r1 ]! c. \; I或能知你心意
* o5 A& F+ n: A$ cLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
+ e/ E( M, V- U' O: b5 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
: P- |* P3 ^# C7 x: c6 A9 L我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
. J( i. j. B  o1 J/ wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
3 f* s+ ?* h: YIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- Q& P1 {+ S1 S5 e6 I4 E& U  W今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
+ {) M) ?% g% C  m- YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
  O4 n' N2 ~" K: U& ^. cCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
* @" r7 z$ g. A3 l  T从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

8 D, E! @* {) U- Y' ELove… just the word love
% b& H  G. O$ O' X( e. A爱呀，爱就一个字
4 i. u; f% i% ]% v1 D/ N4 G! xWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
8 @# ~( z2 L3 v6 G- @/ X7 t6 gI want to confess that I love you,
5 Y+ |" Q# j$ X" G我多想向你表白
! t* e  w2 p- {/ Z- NBut I never did
7 \- Y3 l8 J$ k$ O却始终未曾出口
9 F+ [' z, O( v0 i4 R( sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 i2 K( {5 \: r' O3 a  U只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
; h0 n0 q% t/ {9 ]If today isn’t too late,
, |3 H. K& j0 }; _$ I1 i假如还不太迟
" ^/ y  O: d& y% TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! m' v$ h4 W* X7 O) J. M. ^9 Q不愿这份爱 逝如流水
9 U4 Z2 X; _/ d* D$ B9 vCan I entrust it to you?
) b) F: ?# c* ^4 k, j5 }可否将它 托付于你？
* x' W6 u2 i2 s  X' K+ gEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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; U1 e4 A) |) x. h$ K! ]2 jCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
" a( s  s3 @# x* N+ I5 i  b8 k0 |Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
# @# J7 I! i+ o9 @+ o$ D# N  ?老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
' A5 a; J9 G9 x" z5 }! L( q刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
  ]2 M2 k( b- q9 Z# ]  [老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
/ S5 g$ Z) e, b/ p( G刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
/ }$ V* T* k( e7 A9 C* B: jvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

+ V$ [  b: _( y- K! v2 W$ J不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。